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LIBBY, B.A. English Master in the Parkdale Collegiate Institute, Toronto. TORONTO : THE COPP, CLARK COMPANY, LIMITED. 1894. .< "■■V ir-t^.ttJi Entered according to Act of the Parliament of Canada, in the year one thousand eight hundred and ninety-fonr, by TiiK Coi'P, Clakk Company, Limited, Toronto, Ontario, in the Office of thti Minister of Agriculture. PREFACE. This volume is intended to give skill in composition rather than rhetorical or grammatical acumen. The valuable books on the subject of composition and rhetoric, already existing, rather enable the beginner to criticise what has been written, than to write. Their help is generally least availal>lo at that very stage when it is most needed,— when the student is vaguely feeling after thought and expression. He requires hints as to what has been, or may be, said on the subject in hand, and as to the form in which his thoughts are to be cast. This initial inertia must always remain a difficulty, but it is hojjed that this treatise may do something to overcome it. The practical aim of the work hav determined its form. The sub- divisions are neither logical nor exhaustive ; they have been selected as suggestive of available topics, and as covering the commonest and most conspicuous themes of actual literature. The models quoted and the subjects suggested are very numerous, in order that, in a study where stimulus is so essential, every sort of mind may dis- cover something to suit its peculiar tastes and aptitudes. It" is not, therefore, contemi)lated that any student should be taken con- secutively through the book. Here is abundant material; the judicious teacher will employ it as he sees it best fitted for the capacities of his pupils. It may, however, be said that the three parts of the book represent three stages of difficulty. In Narration, the models are mostly simi)lo, and the attention of the student is directed mainly to the broad outlines of the composition. In Description, where actual literature is apt to be more elabomte, the analyses are usually fuller, and attention is frequently drawn to the i IV PREFACE. more minute characteristics of structure and style. In Exposition, while some simple models are introduced, a number of extracts are to be found of greater length than those in the earlier divisions, and requiring riper mental development. In this part there is, however, one chapter, that on Interpretation, which treats of the most useful of"all exercises in the elementary stages of writing. In addition to being a help towards original composition, this book is intended to afford material for the study of prose literature. To neglect this, while poetry is being diligently studied in our schools, would be both illogical and unpractical. But poetry has one great advantage for school work, — it affords in abundance, short pieces, each a unity in itself. Prose works are usually of such length that the mere reading of one of them consumes much time. It is impos- sible to get sufficient variety within moderate compass ; unity and structure, — the most essential characteristics of literary art, — are, in consequence, less pronounced and apparent. This stumbling-block to the study of prose literature has at least to some extent been removed by the following selections, — varied in their character, and each possessing a unity of its own. Such a book as the present is a more convenient source of models in composition and literature than a whole library, and will save much labour to the teacher. The treatment of the selections in the examinations of models is purposely varied, — sometimes the analysis is very brief, sometimes comparatively full, but never designedly exhaustive. The teacher may stop short in the investigation or continue it as the needs and capacity of each particular class demand. The work is inductive in its general plan, all theory being based upon, and exemplified in, extracts from good writers. But induction has not been made a hobby. A school-boy is not competent to draw for himself the generalizations of rhetoric and criticism j he may be led up to them by a skilful teac!ier, PREFACE. V As indicated before, this volume does not attempt to teach syste- matic rhetoric; that is always made subordinate to the practical purpose of opening the student's eyes to the art of writing, for the practical ptirpose of enabling him to write. The teacher may find it expedient to supplement the work in rhetoric and in the correction of errors (see Appendix) by iwcirfento^ teaching; Genung, Bain, and Barrett Wendell will be found useful for this purpose; but the systematic teaching should be compositional. This book owes much to the copyright extracts which it contains ; the editors have much pleasure in acknowledging their indebtedness to the various writers and publbhers who have generously permitted these extracts to be employed. I i ^ : J I - r^ "'.^ * \% vi CONTKNTS dJiAPTER. ^**"' 1. General Introduction 5 Part I.— Narrative Compositions. II. Narration ^^ III. Personal Incidents 21 IV. Historical Narratives 33 V. Stories 45 VI. Dialogues ^ VII. Narrative Letters ^7 VIII. Narrative Compositions by Pupils 109 \ Part II.— Descriptive Compositions. i TX. Description H^ ) X. Natural Objects 129 I XI. Nature in Movement 137 \ XII. Exteriors of Buildings 147 \ ■ XIII. Interiors of Buildings 167 \ XIV. Towns and Cities 165 \ XV. Pen-Portraits 173 \ XVI. Character Sketches 185 XVII. Animals 201 XVIII. Assemblages 207 / XIX. Works of Art 225 \ XX. Moods . . 233 XXI. Complex Descriptions 241 I XXII. Narrative Descriptions 240 I XXin. Descriptive Letters 277 I XXIV. Descriptive Compositions by PttpUd 285 V". CONTENTS. t»AGli. 295 Part III.— Expository Compositions. ClIAPTXR. XXV. Exposition XXVI. Interpretation :—Pnmphmses, Abstracts^ Expansion 301 XXVII. Terms and Propositions Expounded 319 XXVIIl. Argumentative Expositions 349 XXIX. Speeches 397 XXX. Debates 419 XXXI. Expository Letters 447 Appendix. ._. Punctuation 459 B. Grammar 465 C. Diction 472 D. Arrangement , 480 E. Paragraphing 483 Index of Authors 493 COMPOSITION FROM MODELS. CHAPTER T. QKNKUAL IMRODUCTION. ] Many persons are vory sceptic:il with regard to tho practical results of composition as it is actually tauylit in most schools. Soiiie few assert that the art of writing cannot he taught at all; they think this power a heaven-sent gift, and point to tho great masters of English style, who for tho most part had no direct training in comi)osition, and certainly in no case owed thoir skill to such training. It may at once bo admitted that the old-fashioned methods in composition are very inefiective. It may further be granted that if tho aim of composition be the attainment of style, of literary charm, such residt is beyond the sccjpo of teaching. Artistic excellence is tho outcome of special aptitudes and special advan- tages. But if the aim be the cultivation of tho power of putting one's thoughts on paper, in a clojir, concise and correct manner, so that the reader may readily understand what the writer wishes to say, it seems no less umpiestionable that composition may be successfully taught. And this aim is the only reasonable one. Very few pupils of the secondary schools enter a literary career, and it is no more the business of the schools to make any of them authors than to make them sculptors. But every one of them, whatever his calling, will often re(iuire the power of expressing his ideas .; 'tingly. Every student who writes an examination paper requires it. Few things wh.ich can be taught at school are of more practical service in after life. Further, composition, properly taught, has another reconnnendation as a school subject ; it affords excellent mental discipline. If it has not done so hitherto, the methods in vogue are to blame. The old-fashioned method was to assign as an exercise some vague general theme. No hint, no instruction, no stimulus was given ; the pupil was left to his own resources. In some fashion or other he was, perhaps, able to cover the reciuisite amount of paper ; the teacher tlien 6 COMPOSITION^ ^BOM MODELS. pointed out obvious mistakes in grammar, spelling, sentence-structure and diction ; and that was all. This method gave some practice ; and when skill in doing a thing is the object, practice is essential. The result may- have been a certain amount of facility. But the system gave no real discipline ; it did not teach the pupil to write effectively ; it almost cer- tainly cultivated verbosity and slovenly habits of thought and expressitm. The later method furnishes tlie pupil with the theory of composition, tells him what to avoid, what to strive after. It shows him that his composition should have a plan, and— a very important matter— selects themes for which the student has, or may obtain, material. The criticism of the written essay, in such cases, is much broader and more helpful than in the older method, and the student learns the all-important lesson that he must systematize his thought. But there has been at least one great lack. The doing of a thing is best taught not by theory but by example. A man can scarcely be made a skilful mechanic by oral lectures, even if he is set at putting his rules in practice. He must see the thing that is to be made, and see it, also, in process of manufacture. Imitation is the natural method in every art, and not least in the art of writing. All literary skill is based on imitation. Every young author begins by imitating others. How great is the indebtedness of tlio modern writer to models it is ditticult to realize, but the student of tlie development of literature gets some conception of the importance of imitation. Read the stumbling and awkward verses of Wyatt and Surrey, Jind compare them with the smooth easy lines written nowadays by very moderately ondtjwed young persons. Why the striking disparity ? It is simply tluit the earlier poets had to find out for themselves the w.ay to write, while the later profit to an extent they little realize, by the abundant literature with which they are familiar. Note the blundering attempts at perspective of early masters, endowed with genius for their art, and the excellence in this respect of the works of the most commonplace modern painter. The student of early stages of literary development knows how long and how awkwardly gynerationa of writers strove after a prose stylo which would convey their thoughts clearly and easily. This is strikingly illustrated in our ov/n literature, and that, too, although the writers of the Renascence had models before them in foreign tongues both classic and modern. In the present day, every fairly educated person who takes pen in hand, can express himself with a clearness, correctness and lirevity not to be found in the work of the great literary geniuses of earlier times ; and these are the fundamental requirements of good prosu. GENERAL INTRODUCTION. : In truth, the methods of teaching composition described, could not attain even the limited success which attends them — could not, in fact, attain any success at all, were it not that this element of imitation is actually present. The pupil is continually hearing the conversation of those about him, is reading more or less ; from these sources his mind is being stored, not merely with words, but with turns of expression, sentence-forms, methods of arrangement. When he writes, he is uncon- sciously imibiting ; without models of some kind he would be absolutely helpless. But the imitation is unconscious, vague, ill-directed, perhaps based on altogetlier inadequate or unsuitable exemplars. The beginner in the art of writing ought to have before him models resembling as closely as may be the work wliich he seeks to produce, — models suitable in style, of a compass such that they may be grasped, not merely in detail, but as organic wholes. And it is not enough that he should have the finished product before him, his attention must be directed to the way in which that product is put together. He must learn inductively the methods which he is himself to employ. It may be objected that conscious analysis and conscious synthesis have had no place in the works of the great masters of the art of writing, nor in the actual production of literature of any order. Such an assertion is probal)ly a great overstatement of the facts. But accepting it as true, it simply means that imitation has been carried on in a round-about and clumsy fashion for whose defects innate aptitude has made amends. One may learn a complicated figure in skating by vague attempts at imitat- ing the whole, but a speedier method is to analyse that whole into a series of movements, and then to attempt to combine these. In the matter of writing, such a procedure is the only one for the ordinary begirnier who has no inborn genius for the art. To the skilled author, devices and methods are second nature ; he is not conscious of them. When we learn penmanship, we consider every stroke, and painfully join strokes into letters and words ; but, in process of time, we think merely of the word to be set down, and the hand writes it, not from a series of efforts, as at first, but from the one cttnscious impulse. The highest skill is always larg'-ly unconscious, but tlie readiest way of ac({uiring that skill is by the conscious application of method. Doubtless, the higliest literary effects evade analysis ; they are the pro- duct of endlessly complicated and subtle causes. From them arises the literary flavour, an indescribable charm and power. Tliese qualities are indeed beyond the range of teaching ; l)iit f(»r ordinary men under f)rdinary circumstances they are liy no means necessary. Whereas the more essential s COMPOHITWN FROM MODELS. qualities of pioso — the oflbotive anaiigeiiu'iit of ideas jind so forth — are matters very o{)t'ii to analysis, aiul capable of lieiiij,' ac(£uirecl by persons of average powers and education. The great geniuses themselves would, most of them, have been improved by some training of this khid. Many fine -writfirs of English whoso charm and force wo all acknowledge, whose skill is altogether beyond us, would have greatly increased the effectiveness of their work by a little more attention to principles of arrangement to be found in every good modern treatise on rhetoric. Taking for granted then that the art of composition can be acquired, let us consider more in detail tlio method to be pursued. It nmst be noted, first of all, that in this subject the student, though in a very humble way, must be creative. In the case of most school work, he finds his material ready to his hand ; here he must be productive. If he will not, or cannot, write at all, he certainly cannot be taught to write correctly. Before the child can learn to walk he must have the spontaneous impulse to use his limbs, — at first, of course, in an irregular and inefl'ective manner. The first necessity then is that the student should write something, and, if i)ossible, write freely. Encouragement rather than criticism is requisite at this stage. The subject selected should be one of which the student either has knowledge, or may be a])le with ease to acipiire it — narratives of his own experience, accovnits of his sports, descriptions of familiar scenes and objects, reproductions of what he has read. The beginner is often unwilling to use the material at his connuand. He usually has a great idea of the dignity of writing ; what is familiar to him, what he really knows and therefore can best describe, seems too ordinary, too ' ' silly " to be put on paper ; and he strives continually to get out of the range of familiar thoughts and details, to sul)jects and ideas which are beyond him. He should be made to understand that nothing is too insignificant to be employed in writing. It is minuteness of detail that gives vivid- ness and freshness to much of Liter literature. As a further help towards fluency, the idiosyncrasies of the individual student should be con- sulted ; he should be allowed to write on those subjects and in those ways which suit him best. Overwrouglit language, theatrical sentiment, sensationalism, and other sins against good taste, should not, in the case of immature minds, be severely dealt with. But neatness, careful pen- manship, good spelling, grammatical correctness should be demanded from the very first. Students will often find more stimulus, and write more easily when attempting forms of composition wherein success is, at their stage, quite out of reach, than in those which might bo regarded as really within their a EN EH A L INTIIODUCTWN. 9 powers. A story, ;in .anil)iti()us piece of description, a dialogue, will often stimulate minds which would bo absolutely inert before the task of writing a simple narrative. It is for this reason that many of the models introduced in this volume are sucli as might be condemned at first sight as of an altogether too ambitious cliaractei'. Some are sensational in tone, some v/ritton in a style which is scarcely pleasing to the finest taste. But bold and striking ett'ects, overwrought and mannered styles are naturally the first to connnend themselves to nascent literary taste, just as bright and gaudy colours please the aesthetic sense of children and savages. The race and the individual develop, and at each stage they receive their training for higher things through those lower things which they are then capable of ai)preciating. It is only needful to take care that the proper growth is not prematurely checked, — that we do not rest satisfied with anything l)ut the highest. Further, the models are taken from such a wide field that the objectionable mannerisms of any one writer are not likely to imi)ress themselves on the imitator ; and in any case a large number of the following extracts are simple and direct, afibi-ding examples of the kind of writing which is most generally useful, and to which every one may with practice attain. The subjects suggested in the Practice Lists have a general resemblance to the subjects of the selections inunediately preceding ; and it will often prove advantageous to make the theme very exactly parallel to some one of the models. After studying, for example, Irving's description of Christmas Eve at Bracebridgo Hall (chap, xviii.), or Mrs. Carlyle's narra- tive of her Journey in a Mail Coach (chap, vii.), the student might with advantage describe similar experiences of his own. The more prominent effects attained in Miss Duncan's account of a Snow-storm at Tokio (chap, xi.), might be imitated by a pupil in describing a late snow-fall in his own country, or a hail-storm suddenly invading a picnic party clad in their light summer costumes. Even a certain slavishness in imitation is not to be reprehended in the earlier stages of the inunature writer's j)ractice. Another method of overcoming the difficulties arising from the poverty of ideas with which beginners are afflicted, is to resort to those forma in which the matter is supplied, as paraphrasing, the making of abstracts, and Bo forth. The student may reproduce narratives, descriptions, arguments, which he has heard read aloud. He need not in such cases avoid using the language and phraseology of the original, in as far as he can use them appropriately ; by employing them he stores his mind with new forma and vocabulary. This reading aloud of suitable passages for reproduction, 10 mMro^moN from models. besides its use in tlie curlier stages of writing, tlisciplines tlie powers of attention, and, if skilfully emi)l<)ye(l, is an adniirablo instrument of literary culture. ^\g;iin, the making of an abstract of a piece of good prose with tlie book before his eyes, is an excellent exercise. This, even in agreater degree, increases the hnguistic stores ; while it tests and cultivates the judgment through the necessity of determining what points in the original are to bo retained, what omitted. It serves also to instil the fe ling for orderly development and connection in thought. The repro- duction in good prose of the arguments of poetical pieces like the Deserted Villwje or Gi-m/s Eletpj is a similar but more difficult exercise ; for poetry pas""s over links in thought which must be expressed in prose, whereas it dwells ui)on matters which should be touched lightly or omitted in a prose rendering. A certain sjjontaneity, a certain amount of fluency is the essential pro- recpiisito of all training in composition ; but this existing, or having been <level()[)ed, the real training begins. When in the actual business of life we have to make use of cnu' skill in composition, the proldem is not to Hnd sometliing to say (<nir very writing implies that) nor to cover a given amount of paper (for as a lule the more we condense the better), but to say accurately and concisely and clearly what we wish to say. To ac(|uire this power is a far harder task than to aetjuire fluency. Every [)eison of accurate mind has felt the great dithculty of presenting his ideas so that the reader shall understand exactly and easily just what he means to convey ; great masters of the art of writing confess it. In the old- fashioned teaching of composition this difficulty was not imposed. The boy who wrote on such vague subjects as " Winter " or " Perseverance," Avas under no necessity of expressing anything exadhj, had usually no thought in his own mind which he was anxious to put accurately into words. Any thought answered ; whether the language gave this shade of meaning or that, made no ditference. The only re(juirements to be met wore that there should be ideas in some way connected with the theme, and that the paper should be idled. Something is Licking in such prac- tice, if it is to be any adcnjuate prtjparation for the needs of subsecpient life. If the lacking conditi(m can be imj)osed, it is evident that conipositi<m instead of tending to cultivate verbosity and slovenly thinking, will afford an excellent discipline in clearness and accuracy of thought and expression. It has been observed over and over again that nothing so conduces to perspicuity in our own views as the necessity of expres.sing them for others. Now, this necessity of expressing something definite, instead of merely oxpressing anything at all,— this necessity of accurately adapting words to tlionght may be imposed in school compo.sition in various ways. GENERAL INTRODUCTION. 11 It is imposed, for example, in the re[)ro(lucing of the substance of a poetical passage in prose form. Here the pupil is forced to embody not any idea, but certain definite ideas ; and, what is more, the teacher knows exactly what these ideas are, and can, therefore, judge accurately of the success of the attempt, and point out definitely the defects. It need scarcely bo added that the whole force and meaning of the poetical passage cannot be reproduced in prose ; but there is a certain intellectual basis in the original passage, which can be so expressed. The paraphrase will be the parallel prose expression of the same thought, and will difier from the original as pi >etry in general diflurs from prose. Paraphrasing is a most useful exercise, though it seems to have fallen into disrepute, owing no doubt to its having been abused by those who did not understand the differences between prose and poetry. In original composition, provided the theme be properly defined, the same disci{)line in accuracy may be given and the same tests may be applied by the teacher. The subject of the essay, the aim with which it is written, the audience to whi>m it is supposed to be addressed, should be definitely fixed. ^Vith these three objects clearly in view, it is not diflicult to discriminate between vague generalities, superfluous details, meaningless epithets, on the one hand, and clear effective writing on the other. Let some scene in the neigh l)ourhood, for example, Ijo selected as the subject of a descriptive essay, and let the person for whom the description is intended, the object which the description is to attain, be definitely fixed. It is easy then to determine how far any part of the description accurately represents the facts, is adai)ted to the persons addressed, attains the aim in view. The necessity of such definition is apparent when wo consider how the nature of the details will vary, for example, according as the supposed reader is familiar with the scene, or totally iniacquainted with it ; according as the chief aim is to impart a clear conception of t!ie general character of the country, or the impression which it produces on the mind of the beholder. It is the commonest mistake to write without clearly defining any of these things. This sentence will then be fitted for one reader and one end; that, for another reader and another end. What wonder if the whole is inert"ective ! We feel it to be so, yet cainiot tell where to l)egin our criticism. On tlie other hand, when those things are defined, it 's easy to test and make apparent truth of observation, accuracy of expression, aptness of language, effective selection and arrangement of details, and the success of the i)iece as a whole. So in the case of an argument, exposition, or narrative ; if subject, pers<m addressed, ^im, be defined, similar tests piay be applied. Composition ceases to be 12 COMPOHJTION FUOM MODELS. a mere exercise in correct ancl smooth writing; it comes to be an exercise in clear and effective use of ideas and in the power of expressing them. The lists of subjects for composition in this text book are intended to suggest proper themes to teacher or student. In the bocjk they are necessarily more or less vague; before being used they ought to be defined. If the subject suggested be a storm, let it l)e defined as some par- ticular storm in the writer's experience. Tliore is room also, no doubt, for themes of a less definite character ; the student may describe a storm with tlie liberty of drawing on his imagination, or, to speak more clearly, of drawing on his experience of many storms, to produce an effective picture of an imagin.ary one. But here, again, the particular effect ho aims at in this picture must be laid down, and the merits of the essay judged by his success in attaining it. It should be understood that while it is essential that the subject, aim, etc., should be clearly fixed before the composition ia written, the definition need not always be imposed by the teacher. The student should often shape the theme to suit what is in his mind. In any case, it is always advisable to draw up a plan of the composition, and to submit it to criticism before beginning the actual writing. The present volume is designed for the secondary schools mainly, and not for use in the most elementary stages of composititm. But it may not be out of place to say that exercises in putting their own thoughts on paper should be prescribed for children as soon as they are at all capable of doinw this. They will write more readily than older pupils, because they are less self-conscious. Early and continued practice might prevent that helplussness in expressing themselves and barrenness of ideas which are so often observed in ])oys and girls, for these are usually the result of a sort of shyness and intellectual stiffness. Writing like dancing will be best accjuired if the practice is begun early ; neither mind nor limbs should be aUowed to stiffen into awkwardness. Of cour.se, in the case of these earliest attempts, there should be no criticism of the composition as such. Nothing should bo looked for except neatness, correct spelling, grammar, and the proper use of words. It woidd l)e absurd to find fault with the sentences because they are short and al)rupt, much more to object to the lack of close and logical corinection in thought. By and by, tlie pupil should be led on to the writing of more elaborate sentence forms, and taught to do so without violating the laws of unity and clearness. Therewith will go some instriictiim in elementary punctuation. Next, attention mudt be drawn to the relation of successive sentences to one another. This, in turn, will natui'ally lead to paragraphing. Finally, the learner's attention must be centred on the arrangement of the composition, so as to form an GENERAL INTRODUCTION. 13 ) effective whole. There is no mechanical division hetwecn these stages and subjects, they pass into one another ; but it is advantageous that the chief stress of the teaching should be directed in succession upon these various asj)ects of written language. Of course, elementary matters are not to be neglected in the later stages ; the elementary virtues of writing ought always to be practised, and should gradually becomo second nature. The final and jjcrsistent problem tor the writer is to say exactly what he wishes to say, so that his reader may easily grasp it. If there is such a thing as the pursuit of style apart from this end, such pursuit should be zealously eschewed. No style which exists for itself, i.e. apart from its power of reinforcuig the meaning in some way or other, is a good style. Style tliat is worth anything is individual — the result of character ; it gives a jiower to the written word, similar to that which tlio personality of the man gives to his spoken words. If it ever comes, ifc will best come tlirough keeping the mental eye steadily fixed upon the thought. Let the student strike out all passages which have been elaborated through the conscious attempt to be fine — to make a striking or pretty sentence rather than to give clear and adu(juate expressi(jn to an idea. Although style is not a thing to be taught, there are certain tendencies in style which the immature writer ought to be warned against. There is the poetical style — ^'tlie tendency to vse figures, ornament, picturesque nouns and adjectives out of place, the attempt to touch the feelings by tawdry sentiment and so forth. Akin to this and ec^ually to be avoided is the pompous style which employs long and unusual words, when simple ordinary ones would suit as well, or better, — which sacrifices clearness and the natural order f(jr the sake of rhytlim, and uses for a similar reason inappropriate words or more words than are necessary. Finally, and perhaps commonest of all in our day and country, is the burles(pie style which employs pompous language, not seriously as in the last case, but jocularly; which consciously and continually exaggerates for humorous effect, and commonly interlards the whole with abundant slang. Such writing is supposed to be lively and vivacious. It is in truth most depressing, and further, has the great dtsfect for the beginner that it serves as a cloak for all sorts of inaccuracies of expression. For a vp.^ue, or inaccurate or exaggerated term, the writer has always the plea that ifc was employed purposely for humorous effect. Each of these styles has been employed by great writers, sometimes Avith very considerable effect. But none of them is the style of standard i)rose ; all of them are extremely difficult to employ successfully, and all of them lead the young u COMPOSITION FROM MODELS. writer away from that which lie ouglit zealously to be seeking, — sincerity, accuracy, clearness, conciseness. It is, however, unwise in most casea at least, to speak of his stylo as such to a school-boy, until the very latest part of his course ; criticism of his language slioultl not l)e general but specific, and should be made from the jjoint of view of the thought. This caveat is entered because one is apt to make a standard in compositi(m suited for authors rather than school-ltoys, and because it is s(j easy to discourage the pupil in a subject in which his spontaneous and ready co- operation is essential. ty, ost ery but hi.s ion to CO- PART I. NARRATIVE COMPOSITIONS. CHAPTER II. NARRATION. Niirnition is usually crmsidercd to be tho eusiost kind of composition ; inasmuch as tho natural sc'<(uoncu of events givos the plan of the narrative, theie is not the same necessity as in description, exposition, and ai-gument, that the writer should frame a plan for himself. Yet even in the simplest narrative there is room for the exercise of skill. Everyone has, in real life, observed how awkwardly and tediously the vulgar and uneducated tell a story ; fiction avails itself of this peculiarity as a means of characteiization or as a s<nu"ce of anuxsement. The untrained mind in narrating an experience, naturally mentions every circumstance interven- ing ])etween the point of time when the story opens and the point when it ends. To avoid this vulgar error is the first essential of a properly constituted narrative. Every series of connected events is inter- twined with other series of events which have little or nothing to do with it ; to mention these associated but irrelevant circumstances is to obscure the real theme and make the narrative long-winded and uninteresting. We nmst select those events which really pertain to the story in hand ; and from tliese, when they are numerous, we must reject the less important. Even should every circumstance be included, we must still decide which are of more consecpience in order to give them a corresponding prominence in our narrative. Selection and judgment, then, are always necessary. But selection implies an end — a purpose which directs our choice. It is a matter of the first liKmient, then, in composing a narrative to determine the definite end to which we are addressing ourselves. Upon this end will depend the character of the narration. The simplest conceivable end is the statement of facts for their own sake — as when a scientific man narrates some series of phenomena which he 15 . 16 JV. I nil A TI I K i '( >MI 'OS I Tl 0.\S. ill tlcerns worthy of buiiig rogistorcd, iiltliougli ho doos lu.t hnnself percoivo their signiticiuico; t>r us wlioii a hiogniphor sots down tho facts of a man's lifo without ulterior purpose. But, hi truth, cases of this jierfectly simple and unbiassed statement of facts are r.ot connnon. There ia usually an ulterior purpose. Tho witness in tho box tells the truth, and the whole truth ; but still it is tho truth which bears on tho case in court, and he selects it from otiier truth with that end in view. Tho scientific man almost inevitably has some vaguo idea that tho phenomena have a bearing on this or that subject, and will, perhaps unconsciously, shape his narra- tive accordingly. Tho bicjgraijher cannot toll all tho events of a man's life ; he must choose tho more important, and important imi)lies important for something. He may, for example, select those incidents of childish lifo which illustrate subsequent developments of character. The purpose of the narrative having been determined by the writer, each detail ought to bo tested by its bearing on that end. Every circumstance, every epithet which does not in some way contribute to that end ought to be excluded. Tho details thus selected will in general be narrated in their natural chronological order. The grouping of tho matter into sentences and ])aragra[)lis, is freer in narrative than in other forms of composition. Cir- cumstances which might have been mentioned in independent sentences are often grcjuped more or less arbitrarily in single sentences in order to avoid a disagreeable and confusing series of short assertions. The prin- ciple of this grouping into sentences is tha^. the more important circum- stances should be expressed in tho principal clauses, and the less important ones in dependent clauses introduced by "after," "when," etc. Para- graphs are not at all essential, in short narratives at least ; nor are they constructed according to any very strict rule. But the breaking up of a long narrative into paragraphs is advisal)lo in order to mark the main stages in the jjrogress of events. It is well that these breaks should be made either where there are natural jiauses in the course of events, or (as novelists frecpiently close their chapters) after some very striking or important incident in the series. If all the preceding events narrated in tho paragraph have a direct bearing upon this final circumstance so much the better. We have spoken thus far of simple narratives, that is, narratives of events which happen successively, f(jrming a single chain ; but very often several series of events lead up to tho same final catastrophe, as in a battle various movements taking place sinmltjineously contribute to the result. ifl NARTiATTOn. \1 Language is in such cases loss H(lo([njite for its task ; it necessarily l)iiiij4.s facts before tlio mind successively and not siiiiultaneously. The narrator can no longer follow the order of nature exactly : he must fall Jiack on a more or less artificial plan. The usual method is to jjursuo some one series of events until a natural pause or striking crisis is reached, then to turn back and, in the same manner, take up the remaining threads, indicatiuif the connection between the various series by such links as "meanwhile," etc. The difficulty of narrative, however, does not depend so much cm the character of the events narrated, as on the purpose which the narrator has in view ; and in accordance with this also he must determine the details which are to be mentioned, or emphasized. If the purpose is to explain the final event, e.r/., the running away of a horse, the selection is easy, and the narrative needs only to be clear and to the point. If there is an ulterior object — to teach a lesson or illustrate the character of the Jictor — the task will scarcely bo more difticult, though the narrative will certainly not be the same. For example in the special case suggested, if the story of the runaway be told to illustrate the timidity of the driver, other cir- cumstances or other aspects of the same circumstances will be dwelt upon. The character of the narrative will be still more changed, and its difficulty much increased, if the aim bo to touch the feelings of the reader — his sympathies, his sense of the ridiculous, or his sense of beauty. Many details will now be perfectly admissible which would ])e excluded from simple and direct narratives, and there will probably be a larger admixture of description than in the previous cases. The most complex and most difficult aim which the narrator can set before himself ig to produce in his reader in some degree the same effects which Avould have been pro- duced by actual presence in the midst of the events narrated. The breadth of this aim allows great freedom as to the insertion of details ; but real success is vastly more difficult of attainment than in the case of simpler narratives where the writer confines himself to a more definite purpose. Even when the main aim of a narrative is one of those simpler aims already mentioned, the skilled writer will give attenti<m to those more complex ones just referred to, because whatever makes the events vivid, increases our grasp of, and interest in them, and diminishes the tedium which we are apt to feel in following a prolonged series of incitlents. Bits of description will be inserted to bring the subject vividly before the mind's eye. The characters of persons concerned will be brought out, because our feelings aie more easily aroused in regard fco persons about whom we know something than about those who are little more than 18 NARRATIVE COMPOSITIONS. names to us. Dialogues may bo inserted, because in no way can literature bring an individual so a»lj3(iuately before us as through his conversation. Literature can only suggest the man's appearance, but it can accurately reproduce his words. Another very important factor in intensifying our enjoyment of a narrative is snspeme. To awaken this feeling the writer must, at the outset, indicate some end to which events lead— some object to be attained. Each subsequent detail nuist be narrated so that its bear- ing on this object may be apparent ; but whether the object is ultimately attained, or liow it is attained, or what is the exact character of the final catastrophe, is kept concealed until the close. It often happens that for the understanding of a series of ents certain conditions or Burroundings must be mentioned, which fori, as it were, the background of the real subject of the narrative. As, for example, in the case of the running away of a horse, it miglit be necessary to explain that the streets were uptorn and dangerous, or that it was dark, or that the pavement was covered with ice. A description of siich conditions comes naturally at the beginning of the nan-ative. So, if it is exi)edient to men- tion the season, or the weather, or the time of day, or the place, these particulars form a natural and easy introduction. But neither introduc- tion nor conclusion should ever be added merely for its own sake. It is better to plunge abruptly into the narrative and to close with the climax than to weaken the force of the story by extraneous a»l<litioi\s; imleed, in many narratives an abrupt climax is the most efiectivo way of closing. Especif'iUy is it a capital mistake to begin with suuli phrases as " A very interesting story is told," etc. ; "I heard an extremely amusing anecdote," — phrases which raise expectations which axo hard to fulfil. The general principle has been laid down, that the natural order of events should also be the order of the narnitive, but in long narratives especially, this rule is often violated. The naiTativo is made to begin, not with the first of the series of incidents, but at some later point, and the earlier incidents aro inserted eulxsequently. By tliis device the writer is enabled at once to introduce the rejuler to some striking situation ; and is not under the necessity of overwhelming him at the outset with details not attractive in themselves and whose bearing on more intere.sting matters is not yet visible. When, however, the reader's curiosity or sympathies have been once excited, he will readily give attention to the earUer part of the subject, the purport of whicli he can now grasp. In Paradise Lost, for example, the initial part of the story is not introduced until the fifth book, where the "amial)le archangel" narrates it to gratify Adam's curiosity. The poem actually opens at a nuich later st«ge, — at an n NA RRA TION. 10 event, 1)nth striking in it.sflf, find intori'stinj^ to the reiidur hecanse of its close bearing upcm the fall of man. The writing of cluar narratives witli a simple definite end in view serves not merely to give the learner facility but to devel(jp liis judgment and taste ; and there is no reason whj he should not attain considerable excel- lence in this sort of narration. Similar success in the more ambitious forms of narrative is not attainable at this stage, but these forms are not on that account to l)o esclmwud. Tin ir more striking etlects, their breadth of aim, and the conseipKint freedom they give the narrator, are stimulating to young writers who find themselves hampered by poverty of matter and language. Such attempts, however inade<piate when tried by literary standards, will improve the .stores of diction and phraseology and give readiness of expression. mmm i I J 'RliSoyA L 1 Xt'Il >i:.\ 7 w. 21 CHAPTER III. PERSONAL INCIDENTS. MODELS. I.__jeannie Welsh (Mrs. Carlyle) and the Turkey-cock. - — On her road to school, when a vciy small child, she had to pass a gate where a horrid lurke^'-cock was generally standing. He always ran up to her, gobhling, and looking very hideous and alarming. It frightened her at first a good deal, and she di'eaded having to pass the plac(i ; hut after a little time she hated the thought of living in 5 fear. The next time she passed the gate, several lahorers and boys were near, who seemed to enjoy the thought of the turkey running at her. She gathered herself together, and made up her mind. The turkey ran at her as usual, gobbling and swt-Uing; she suddenly darted at him, and seizcnl him by the thi-oat, and swung him round. 10 The men clapped their hands, and shouted, "Well done, little Jeaiinie Welsh ! " and the Bubbly Jock nev(H' mol(>sted her again. Carlylo'it " Reminiscences." — By permission of the puhUshers. IT.— The Mysterious Visitor.— Mrs. Scott's curiosity was strongly excited one autumn by the regular appearance, at a certain hour every evening, of a sedan chaii-, to deposit a person carefully muffled up in a mantle, who was immediately ushered into her husband's private room, and commonly remained with him there 6 until long after the usual bed-time of this orderly family. Mr. Scott answered her repeated encjuiries with a vagueness which irritated the lady's feelings more and more ; until, at last, she could bear the thing no longer ; but one evening, just as she heard the bell ring as for th(3 stranger's chair to carry him off, she madeio her appearance within the foi-bidden i>arlour with a salver in her hand, observing, that she thought the gentlemen had sat so long they would be the better of a dish of tea, and had ventured accord- *i2 NAkRATlVK GOMPOSlTtONS. \ ' ingly to bring some for their acceptance. The stranger, a person of 15 distinguished appearance, and richly dressed, bowed to the lady, and accepted a cup ; but her husband knit his brows and refused very coldly to partake the refreshment. A moment afterwards the visitor withdrew — and Mr. Scott, lifting up the window-sash, took the cup, which he had left empty on the tal)le, and tossed it out 20 upon the pavement. The lady exclaimed lor lier china, but was put to silence by her husband's saying, " I can forgive your little curiosity, madam, but you must pay the penaltj\ I may admit into my h(juse, on a piece of business, pers(ms wholly unworthy to be treated as guests by my wife. Neither lip of me nor of mine comes afUn- Mr. 26 Murray of Broughton's." This was the unhappy man who, after attending Prince Charles Stuart as his secretary throughout the greater part of his expedition, condescended to redeem his own life and fortune by bearing evidence against the noblest of his late master's adherents, when 8» " Pitied by gentle hearts Kilmarnock died — The brave, Balmerino, were on thy side." Lockhart's "Life of t>vott." III. — A Boyish Battle. — The author's fatlier, residing in George's Square, in the southern side of Edinburgh, the boys belong- ing to that family, with others in the square, were arranged into a sort of company, to which a lady oi distinction presented a handsome 6 set of colours. Now, this company or regiment, as a matter of course, was engaged in weekly warfare with the boys inhabiting the Crosscauseway, Bristo-Street, the Potterrow, — in short, the neigh- bouring suburbs. These last were chiefly of the lower rank, but hardy loons, who threw stones to a hair's-breadth, and were very 10 rugg(!d antagonists at close quarters. The skirmish sometimes lasted for a whole evening, until one party or the other was victorious, when, if ours were successful, we drove the enemy to their (juarters, and were usually chased back by the reinforcement of ])igg(>r lads who came to their assistance. If, on the contrary, we were pursued, 10 as was often the case, into the precincts of our square, we were in our turn supported by our elder brothers, domestic servants, and similar 9) ■^ ti •■■§ ■i I pmmmA l mawENrs. 23 auxiliaries. It followod, from our fr(MT[u<Mit opposition to each other, that, though not knowing tlie names of our enemies, we were yet well acquainted with their appearance, and liad nick-names for the most remarkable of them. One very active and spirited hoy might 20 be considered as the principal leader in the cohort of the sul)urbs. He was, I suppose, thirteen or fourteen years old, finely made, tall, blue-eyed, with long fair haii-, the very picture of a youthful Goth. This lad was always first in the charge, and last in the retreat — the Achilles at once and Ajax of the Crosscauseway. He was too 25 foi'Miidable to us not to have a cognomen, and, like that of a knight of old, it was taken from the most remark.able part of his dr(!ss, being a pair of old gyean livery breeches, which was the pi-incipal part of his clothing ; for, like Pentapolin, according to Don Quixote's account, Green-breeks, as we called him, always entered the battle with baresc arms, legs, and feet. It fell, that once upon a time when the combat was at the thickest, this plebeian champion headed a charge so rapid and furious, that all fled before him. He was several paces befijre his comrades, and had actually laid his hands upon the patrician standard, 35 when one of our party, whom some misjudging friend had intrusted with a couteaii de chasse, or hanger, inspired with a zeal for the honour of the corps, worthy of Major Sturgeon himself, struck poor Green-breeks over the head, with strength sufficient to cut him down. When this was seen, the casualty was so far beyond what had ever 40 taken place before, that both parties fled different ways, leaving poor Green-breeks, with his bright hair plentifully dabbled in blood, to the care of the watchman, who (honest man) took care not to know who had done the mischief. The l)loody hanger was thrown into one of the mefulow ditches, cand solemn secrecy was sworn on all 45 hands; but the remorse and terror of the actor were beyond all bounds, and his apprehensions of the most dreadful character. The wounded hero was for a few days in the Infirmary, the case being only a trifling one. But though enquiry was strongly pressed on him, no argument could make him indicate the person from whom he 50 had received the wound, though he must have been perfectly well known to him. When he recovered, and was dismissed, the author 24 A'.i nuATivE coMrosnioxs. !uul his In'ollicr.s opriif*! ;i (•..iiiiiiiiiii.;iii«.ti svilli him, Uirough the iiKHliuin of a p<»pul;ir yinucrljicul l)iikt;r, of wlioiii both parties were 66 customers, in order to tender a subsidy in the name of smart-money. The sum would excite ridicule were I to name it ; but sure I am, that the pockets of the noted Green-breeks never held as much money of his own. He declined the remittance, saying that he would not sell his blood ; but at the same time repi-obated the idea 60 of beini,' an informer, which he said was clam, i.e. base or mean. With miuh urtjency, he accepted a pound of snufT for the use of some old woman -aunt, grandmother, or the like — with whom he lived. We did not become friends, for the biclxrs were more agree- able to both pai-ties than any more pacific anuisement ; but we 65 conducted them ev(!r after under mutual assurances of the highest consideration for each other. Scott's " Introduction to the Waverley Novels." IV.— The Capture of Waverley. — [Waverley is being con- ducted as a prisoner by a small l)iind of sikliors, under command of a zealot njiuiod Giltillan. The party uro joined on the road by a stranger, apparently a podlar.] The rays of the sun were lingering on the very verge of the horizon, as the party ascended a hollow and somewhat steep path, which led to the sunnnitof a rising ground. The country was unenclosed, being })art of a wry extensive heath or common ; but 5 it was far from level, (exhibiting in many plaocvs hollows filled with furze and broom ; in others, little dingle>i (»f stunted brushwood. A thicket of the latter description crowned the hill up wViich the party ascended. The foremost of the band, being the stcmtest and most active, had ])nshed on, and, having surmountcnl the ascent, were out 10 of ken for the present. Gilfillan, with the pedlar, and the small party who were Wav(!rley's more imm(>diiite guard, were near the top of the ascent, and the remaindtu' straggled after them at a con- siderable interval. Huch was the situation of matters, when the pedlar, missing, as he 15 said, a little doggie which belonged to him, ])egan to halt and whistle for the aniniid. This signal, repeated more than once, gave t)frence to the rigour of his companion, the ratiier because it appeared to indicate inattention to th(» trcvisures of theolo'dcal and controversial dou PERSONA L IN( 7 DENTS. 25 we knowledge which was pouring out for liis cdificjition. Hi', therefore signified gruffly, that he could not waste his time in waiting for an 20 useless cur. "But if your honour wad consider tlu; case of Tobit" "Tobit!" exclaimed Cilfillan, with great heat; " Tohit and his dog baith are altogetlier heathenish and a|)nciy})ha], and none l)ut a prelatist or a pa})ist would draw them into question. I doubt I -25 hae been mista'en in you, friend." " Very likely," answered the pedlai", witn great composure ; " but ne'ertheless, I shall take leave to whistU; again upon |)uir Bawty." This last signal was answered in an unexpected manner ; for six or eight stout Highlanders, who lurked among the copse and brush- 30 wood, sprung into tlu; hollow way, and began to lay about them with their claymores. Gilfillan, unapi)all(,'d at this undesirable apparitiim, cried out manfully, " The swoixl of the Lord and of Gideon !" and, drawing his broadsword, would prol)ably have done as nuich cn-dit to the good old cause as any of its doughty champions at Drumclog, 35 when, behold ! the pcMJlar, snatching a musket from the person who was next him, bestowed the butt of it with such emphasis on the head of his late instructor in the Cameronian creed, that he was forthwith levelled to the ground. In tlie confusion which ensued, the horse which bore our hei'o was shot by one of Gilfillan's party, as 40 he discharged his firelock at random. Wavei'ley Ml with, and indeed under, the animal, and sustained some severe contusions. But he was almost instantly (extricated from tiie fallen steed by two Highlandeirs, who, each sei/iiig him by the arm, hurried him away from the scuffle and from the high-road. ^5 Scotfa "Waverley." v.— The Forbidding" of the Marriagre. — And now I can recall the picture <»f the grey old housi; of God rising calm before me, of a rook wh(!(>ling round the steeple, of a ruddy morning sky beyond. I rememl)er something, too, of tlu^ green grave-mounds; and I have not forgott»m, eitluM-, two figures of strangers, straying 5 amongst the low hillocks, and reading the mementoes graven on the few mossy head-stones. 1 notici'd I hem, because, as they saw us, they passed round t(» the back of the church ; and I doubted not w Itllllllltl 2« NAlillA TIVE COMPOSITIONS. \ ' 1 tlicy were going to enter by the side-aisle door, and witness the 10 ceremony. By Mr. Ilochoster they were not observed ; he was earn- estly looking at my face, from which the blood had, I daresay, ni(»mentarily iled : for I felt my forehead dewy, and my cheeks and lips cold. "VVlien I rallied, which I soon did, he walked gently with me up tlie path to the porch. We entered the quiet and humble 15 temple; the priest waited in his white surplice at the lowly altar, the clerk beside him. All was still: two shadows only moved in the remote coi-ner. My conjecture had been correct: the strangers had slipped in before us, and they now st(»od by the vault of the i lochesters, their backs towards us, viewing througli the rails the 20old time-stained marble tomb, where a kneeling angel guarded the remains of Darner de Rochester, slain at Marston Moor in the time of the civil wars ; and of Elizabeth, his wife. Our place was taken at the communion rails. Hearing a cautious step l)ohind me, I glanced over my shoulde : one of the strangers — 25a gentleman, evidently — was afhancing up the chancel. The service began. The explanation of the intent of matrimony was gone through ; and tlu'n the clergyman came a step further forward, and bending slightly towards Mr. llochester, went on. " I require and charge you both (as ye will answer at the dreadful 30 day of judgment, when the secrets of all hearts shall be disclosed), that if either of you know any impediiiKMit why ye may not lawfully l)e joined together in matrimony, y(Mlo now confess it; for be ye well assured that so many as are coupled together otherwise than G«»d's word doth allow, are not joined together by God, neither is 35 their matrimony lawful." He paused, as the custom is. When is the pause after that sen- tence ever broken by reply ? Not, perhaps, once in a hundred years. And the clergyman, who had not lifted his eyes from his book, and had held his breath but for a moment, was proceeding : his hand 40 was already stretched towards Mr. llochester, as his lips unclosed to ask, "AVilt thou have this woman for thy wedded wife?" when a distinct and near voice said : — "The marriage cannot go on I declare the existence of an. impediment." PERSONAL INCIDENTS. 27 The clergyman looked up at the speaker, and stood mute : the 45 clerk did the same ; Mr. Rochester moved slightly, as if an earth- quake had rolled under his feet : taking a firmer footing, and nob turning his head or eyes, he said, " Proceed." Profound silence fell when he had uttered that word, with deep but low intonation. Presently Mr. Wood said : — so " I cannot proceed without some investigation into what has been asserted, and evidence of its truth or falsehood." " The ceremony is quite broken oflf," subjoined the voice behind us. " I am in a condition to prove my allegation : an insuperable impedi- ment to this marriage exists." 56 Mr. Rochester heard, but heeded not : he stood stubborn and rigid : making no movement, but to possess himself of my hand. What a hot and strong grasp he had ! — and how like quarried marble was his pale, firm, massive front at this moment ! How his eye shone, still, watchful, and yet wild beneath! 6o Mr. Wood seemed at a loss. " What is the nature of the impedi- ment ?" he asked. " Perhaps it may be got over — explained away T' " Hardly," was the answer : "I have called it insuperable, and I speak advisedly." The speaker came forward, and leaned on the rails. He continued, C5 uttering each word distinctly, calmly, steadily, but not loudly. " It simply consists in the existence of a previous marriage. Mr, Rochester has a wife now living." Charlotte Bronti's "Jane Eyre."— By perminsion of the publishers. EXAMINATION OF MODELS. 1. The purpose of this anecdote is to illustrate a prominent trait of Mrs. Carlyle's character throughout life — the high spirit and determination which enabled her to overcome difficulties with which she was by nature little fitted to cope. Every detail mentioned contributes to this purpose. We note, for example, that the turkey is represented from the child's point 28 NAUHA TIVE COMroSITlOXS. ii! of viow fis !iu (>l)joct of torroiv— gol'l'l'ii^^ 'nx^ swulliiig, horrid, liidoous and alarniiiig. Tho cliild 'w.is voiy siii.il!,' ami, as wa gather from tlio third and liftli sentences, timid also ; so tliat the eiiroiuitur seemed to her no trifling matter. The facts contained, at tho opening, in tho words ' on her road to school,' 'she had to pass,' etc., servo to make lis understand the in- evitableiiess of the encounter. Then a characteristic which tho story is designed to ilhistrate comes out-- 'she hated tlie thought of living in fear.' Anda further motive for action is added in the fourtli sentence. The short fifth sentence emi)liasizes tlie magnitude of tho internal struggle; and tho sixth gives tlio cuhninating action to wliich tlio whole nai-rativo leads. The final senteu'-o is an example of an unforced and fitting conclusion ; it gratifies tlio natinal feeling of interest awakened l»y a story, - an interest which may extend beyond tho limits of the story itself. This conclusion is parallel t() the 'and they lived happy ever after ' of childish tales, and to those concluding paragraphs to bo found in many novels which give a glance at the future life of the characters. This anecdote is retold by a biographer of Mrs. Carlylo in practically the same words, apart from the following variants. The fir.st sentence stands: — "Very amusing is tho account of her attack on a horrid and alarming turkey-cock she was apt to encounter at a gate through which she passed on her Avay to school." To the sentence preceding the last in tl'<.i model, is appended "no small feat for a little lady of her age ;" and the last sentence is omitted altogether. Compare the excellence of the two versions. Tho eflect of the cdm upon a narrative may bo illustrated by considering what ch;uigc's might bo ma.le, and what details a'hled in order to make the scene with the turkey-cock as ridiculous as possible. 2. Like the former, this narrative is intended to illustrate character,— in this case that of Mr. Scott, tho father of Sir Walter ; but here the incident is in itself more striking, and hence lends itself to skilful treat- ment. Lockhart uses his materials to advantage, and besides illustrating character, makes what we call a good story. The special peculiarity of the incident itself was its mysteriou.«ness ; note how the narrator emphasizes this in tho opening sentence, makes every subsequent detail intensify it, and maintains the suspense to the vety last phrase which Mr. Scott utters, 'Mr. Murray of Broughton's.' This name solves the enigma for Mrs. Scott ; but, as the reader may be unaaiuainted with the person so named, a paragraph is added which explains her lHisl)and's abhorrence of the traitor. Even the final (juotation is ottective in enabling us to enter into the feelings of Mr. Scott. 1 'EliSONA L INCIDENTS. 29 3. What end liaa tho Avritcr in view in his narrative ? Are there any details wliich mij^ht be spared, and, if so, Avliy are tliey introduced ? What is the relation t)f the first paragraph to the second? Point out reasons for the introduction of the various details contained in the third sentence. What is tho main source of interest in this story ? Observe tho nature of the conclusion. 4. An important event in the history of Waverley is his being carried off by Highlanders ; the novelist deems tiie incident worthy of more than bare mention, he lets us understand Ikjw it came about, and this is the object of the narrative (quoted. Here, then, is an example of a narrative without idterior end ; tho details are there because they lead up to, and explain, the abduction. The passage should bo carefully examined to ascertain in how f;ir they conform to this end. It is to bo noted that this is an incident interesting in itself, as well as for its bearing on the rest of Waverley's history ; and such should be, in general, the character of .ho sevei'al parts which make up a woi'k of fiction. Observe the nature of the intrf)duction, tho division into paragraj)hs, and the transitions between them. What is tho eflect of tho insertion of tho scrap of dialogue? Why is ^hchuld!' (1. 30) introduced? Observe the manner in which Scott deals with the simultaneous incidents in the last paragraj)h. 5. Here we have a narrative of a decidedly literary and artistic kind. The writer's aim is evidently to make the reader grasp the scene and events with something of the same vividness and something of the same feelings as the imaginary narrator. An object so complex allows the insertion of many details which have no direct bearing on the course of events, merely to give vividness and reality to the story. Tho only justi- fication for these details is the success of tho narrative as a whole. Point out some of these extraneous details. What purpose is served by the first sentence ? The early mention of the strangers, and the repeated references to them rouse our expectations, and stimulate the feeling of suspense. Note tho eflectiveness, for this purpose, of the reference to them in the second sentence of the second paragraph. Why are these actual wt)rds of the marriage-service quoted at length ? What is the effect of the first three sentences of the next paragraph ? Point out the reasons for tho divisions into paragraphs. Note how suspense is maintained, and observe the effective denouement. II 30 I NAliliA TIVE WMl'OSI TIONS. PRACTICE. Practice List: Write a composition of Jibout half a dozon paragraphs on ono of the following subjects : — 1. A Fire. 2. Learning to Ride a Bicycle. 3. A Runaway. 4. My First Day at a New School. 5. An Adventure. 6. A Fi^dit after School. 7. A Narrow Escape. 8. A Burglai-y. 9. A Journey. 10. A Picnic. Before proceeding to write, make a composition plan consisting of the chief topics you intend to deal with, arrayed in the most natural order. Of course no two persons working independently would be likely to hit upon the same plan for dealing with a subject ; there might be many equally good plans for one subject. Example of one plan for the first subject on the list : A Fire. 1. How we had just gone to bed and got to sleep. 2. The alarm. 3. Going to the fire. 4. The scene— building— crowd— firemen. 5. The destruction caused by the fire. 6. The cause of the fire discovered afterwards. ■li h Practical Suggestions for Writing Compositions : 1. Before writhig your cc.mposition the fir.st time (a) collect all the material you can on the subject, (b) srlecr such material from your collec- tion as you can use, (c) arrange the material selected in the most suitable order. •.i~nr the llec- able PEIIHONAL INCIDENTS. 31 the the •der. 3 hit lany 2. Note ;ill tlio poiiit.s of your composition on tickets, and arrange them in tho l)u.st order. o. Never begin a sentence without having a clear idea of what you are going to siiy. 4. It is a good [)Iiin to write directly for the ear of some person of good sense and taste : the prospuct of reading your work aloud to such a person is a guard against an affected, mawkish way of thinking and writing. 5. Always write your composition twice, at least ; in the first writing think only of your sul)ject, in the second think chieHy of your expression, and wherever you can, take the opportunity to correct and improve it. (5. Before rewriting the composition read each sentence carefully (aloud preferably), as you would read a sentence given to be corrected. 7. The composition when finished should be so written that it might be sent without change to a newspaper for publication ; this requires careful punctuation, correct use of capitals, and the avoidance of abbreviations that are not recognized as allowable in literary English. 8. Write on white foolscap, on the first page of the leaf, not on the back. 9. On the first leaf write the subject of the composition, your name, the date, and the name of the school. If you recall a quotation suitable to the composition, it may be used as a motto. 10. On the second leaf write the subject of the composition again on the 'irst line. Begin the composition on the third line ; leavT a margin of ibout two inches down the left side. 11. Fasten the leaves with a paper-binder through the upper left corner. 12. Avoid creasing and soiling, blots and careless penmanship. fl < i I .•* 1 J 1J*.W«V»*>' nis'iuHur.iL i\.ii!i!.iTiri':s. da CHAPTER TV. HISTORICAL NAIIRATIVBS. MODELS. n ■;| 3 I.— The Discovery of America. Next mominp;, being Friday the tliird day of Au<^-us(,, in tiui year 1 492, Coluinlms sot sail, a little before sunrise, in presence of a vast crowd of spectators, who sent up their supplications to Heaven for the prosperous issue of the voyage, which they wished rather than expected. Columbus steered 6 directly for the Canary Islands, and arrived there without any occurrence that would have deserved notice on any other occasion. But in a voyage of such expectation and importance, every circum- stance was the object (»f attention. As they proceeded, the indications of approaching land seemed to to be more certain, and excited hope in proportion. The ])irds began to appear in flocks, making towards the south-west. Columbus, in imitatictn of the Portuguese navigators, who had ))een guided in several of their discoveries by the motion <tf birds, aUeriid his course from due west towards that (quarter whither they pointed 15 their flight. r>ut, after holding on for sevei-al days in this new direction, without any better success than forni(M-ly, having seen no object during thirty days but the sea and the sky, the hopes of his companions subsided faster than they had risen ; their fears revived with additional force; impati<;nce, rage, and despair appeaiod in 20 every countenance. All sense of subordination was lost. The officers, who had hitherto concurred with Columbus in opinion, and supported his authority, now took part with the private men ; they assembled tumultuouslj'^ on the deck, exi)ostulated with their commander, mingled threats with their expostulations, and lecjuired 25 him instantly to tack alK)ut and return to Europe. Columbus perceived that it would be of no avail to have recourse to any of his former arts, which, having been tried so often, had lost their 34 rV NABliA TIVE COMIVSITK h\H. I ■ I |^[ effect, ; Jiud that it was impossible to ickiii«ll(; any /cal for the sosuccess of clie expedition among men in wlioso l.ivasts feai- had extinguished ovciy generous sentiment. H(5 saw tliat it was no less vain to think of employing either gentle or s«nei'e measures to (|uell a mutiny so general and so violent. Tt was necessary, on all these acctmnts, to soothe passions which he c<iuld no longei- com- t.imand, and to give way to a torrent too impetuous to he checked. He promised solemnly to his men that he would c(nn[)Iy with their recpiest, provided they would accomi)any him and olxy his com- mand for three days longer, and if, during that time, land were not discovered, lie would then a,l)and(m tlx^ <'nteri)rise, and diivct his 40 course tow<ards Spain. Enraged as the sailors were, and impatient to turn their faces again towards their native country, this proposition did not appear to them unreasonable ; nor did Columbus hazard much in con- fining himself to a terra so short. The presages of discovering *5lfind were now so numerous and promising that he deemed them infallible. For some days the sounding line reached the bottom, and the soil which it brought up indicated land to be at no gieat distance. The flocks of birds increased, and wei'o composed not only of sea-fowl, but of such land-birds as could not ])e supposed to 50 fly far from the shore. The crew of the Plnta obsei-ved a cane floating, which seemed to have been newly cut, and likewise a piece of tim))er artificially carved. The sjiilors abojird tlu^ Xvput took up, the branch of a tree with I'ed bei-ries perf(-ctly fresh. The clouds around the setting sun assumed a new ap}»('a ranee; the air 55 was more mikl and warm, .and <luring night the wind became unecjual and variable. From aii these symptonv,, Columbus was so confident of being near land, that on the (vening of the 11th of October, after public prayers for success, he ordered the sails to be furled, and the ships to lie to, keeping sti-ict watch lest thoy should (iobe driven ashore in the night. During this intei'\al of snspense and expectation, no man shut his eyes, all kept upon deck, gazing intently towards that quarter where they ex])ected to discover tlie land, which had so long been the object of their wishes. About two hours before midnight, Columbus, standing on the ^ illHTOUIVA L ^\l HllA TTVES. 3B forecastle, observed a lii;) it at a distance, and privately pointed it 65 out to Pedro Guttiere/, a jKigi! of the queen's wardrobe. Guttierez perceived it, and calling to Salcedo, comptroller of the fleet, all three saw it in motion, as if it were carried from place to place. A little after midnight, the jo^'ful sound of Land! Land! was heard from the P'tnta, which k(^})t always ahead of tlie other ships. But 70 having been so often deceived by fallacious apj)earanc(?s, every man was now liecome slow of belief, and waited in all the anguish of uncertainty and impatience for the return of day. As soon as morning dawnt^l, all diiu])ts and fe.u'S wei'o disj^elled. From every ship an island was seen al)out t wo leagues to the north, whose flat 75 and verdant fields, well stored with w(tod, and watered with many rivulets, presented the aspect of a delightful countr3\ The crew of the Pbita instantly began the Tn Dcum, as a hymn of thanksgiving to God, and were joined l)y those of the other ships with tears of joy and transports t»f congratulation. This oflice of gratitude to 80 Heaven was followed by an act of justice to their commander. They threw themsehes at the feet of Columl)us, with feelings of self-condemnation, mingled with reverence. They implored him to pai'don their ignorance^, inci'edulity, and insolence, which had created him • » niueli ainiecessary dis<}uiet, and had so often 85 obstructed the j^rosecution of his well-concerted plan ; iuid passing, in the warj)ith of their adniiration, from one extreme to another, they now pronounced tin* man whom they had so lately reviled and threatened, to be; a jierson inspii-ed by Heaven with sagacity and fortitude more than human, in order to accomplish a design so 90 far beyond the ideas and conception of all former ages. JtiilicrtKoii'K " Ilhtitri/ (if Anu'fica." he II.— The Taking" of Linlithgow Castle.— There was a strong castle near Linlithgow, oi" Lithgow, as the word is more generally pronounced, where an Mnglisli goxcrnoi', with a powerful garrison, lay in readiness to support the English cause, and used to exercise much severity upon the Scots in the neighbourhood. There lived at s no great dis< i.m'^ from this stioiighold, a farmer, a bold stout man, whose name was Binnock, or as it is now pronounced, Binning. This man saw with grciat joy the; progress which the Scots were making 3a AM /.7M 27 TA; roM I'OSITlo.XS. it ill vofovciiti.-- (lieir cniiidy tVoiii iho EugJisli, iui.l resolved to do 10 something to lielp his couiitiyinen, \)y getting possession, if it were possililc, of tlie castle of Lilhgow. But the place was v.-ry strong, situated by tlie side of a lake, defended not only by gates, which were usually kept shut against strangers, but also l)y a portcullis. A portcullis is a sort of door formed of cross-bars of iron, like a grate, ir, lb has not hinges hke a door, but is drawn up by pulleys, and let down when any danger approaches. It may be let go in a iiio,,H!nt ; and then falls down into the doorway; and as it has grcir ,i--ju spikes at the bottom, it crushes all that it lights u})on ; thus in case of a sudden alarm, a portcullis may be let suddenly fall to defend •20 the entrance, when it is nob possible to shut the gates. Binnock knew this very well, but he resolved to ])e provided against this risk also when he atteini)ted to s''r})rise the castle. So he spoke with some bold courageous countrymen, and engaged them in his enter- prise, which he accomplished thus : — ■ oj Binnock had been accustomed to supply the garrison of Linlithgow with hay, and ho had been ordered by the English governor to fur- nish some cart-loads, (jf which they were in want. He promised to bring it accordingly ; bub the nighb before lie drove the hay to the castle, he stationed a party of his friends, as well armed as possilile, :«) near the entrance, where they could nob be seen by the garrison, and gave tluiin directions that they should come to his assistance .as soon as they should hear him cry a signal, which was to be, — "Call all, call all!" Then ho loaded a great waggon with hay. But in the waggon he placed eight strong men, well armed, lying flab on their 35 breasts, and covered over with hay, so that th<'y could nob be seen. He himself walked carelessly l)eside thi^ v-iggon; and he chose the stoutest and bravest of his servants to be the dri\er, v \\o carried at his belt a strong axe or hatchet. In this way Binnock a))proaclied the castle early in the morning; and the watchman, who only saw 40 two men, Binnock being one of theui, with a ci" ' of hay, which they expected, ojiened '.lu^ gates, and raiscnl up the portcullis, to ])eruiit them to enier tiie eastle. Piut as soon as liu-. ^ art ha(^ v,!.* en under the gnteway. I'innock made a sign •<) his servient, who with his axe suddenly cut asunder the .s-,/r(///. that is, tlu^ yoke which fastiiiis the mSTOIilCAL NARRATIVES. 37 horses to the cart, and the horses finding themselves free, naturally 45 started forward, the cart remaining behind under the arch of the gate. At the same moment, Binnock cried ao loud as he could, "Call all, call all ! " and drawing the sword which he had under his country hal)it, he killed the porter. The armed men then jumped up from under the hay where they lay concealed, and rushed on the 50 English gu<ard. The Englishmen tried to shut the gates, but they could not because the cart of hay remained in the gateway, and prevented the folding doors from being closed. The portcullis was also let ffill, but the grating was caught on the cart, ami so could not drop to the ground. The men who were in ambush near the gate, 55 hearing the cry, " Call all, call all ! " ran to assist those who had leaped out from amongst the hay ; the castle was taken, and all the Englishmen killed or made prisoners. King Robert rewarded Binnock ])y bestowing on him an estate, which his posterity long afterwards enjoyed. • 60 Scott's " Tales of a Orandfather." III. — The Death of Wolfe. — it was t<nvards ten o'clock when, from the high ground on the right of the line, Wolfe saw that the crisis was near. The French on the ridge had formed themselves into three bodies, regulars in the centre, regulars and Canadians on ri,<i'ht and left. Two field-pieces, which had been dragged up the 5 heights at Anse du Foulon, fii-ed on them with grape-shot, and the troops, rising from the ground, prepared to receive them. In a few moments more they were in motion. They came on rapidly, uttering loud shouts, and firing as soon as they were within range. Their ranks, ill ordered at the best, were further confused by a number of 10 Canadians who had been nuxed among tlie regulars, and who, after hastily firing, threw themselves on the ground to reload. The British advanced a few rods; then halted and stood still. When thi» French were within forty pac(vs the word of conunand rang out, and a crash of musketry answered all along the line. J The volley 15 was delivered with remarkable pi-ecision. In the battalions of the centre, which had suffered least from the enemy's bullets, the simul- taneous exj)losion was afterwards said by French otticers to have sounded like a cannon-shot. Another volley followed, and then a 38 NARRATIVE COMPOSITIONS. I ' I ! 20 furious clattering fire that lasted but a minute or two. When the smoke rose, a miserable sight was revealed : the ground cumbered with dead and wounded, the ad' ^.I'^ing masses stopped short and turned into a frantic mob, sb -uting, cursing, gesticulating. The order was givpn to charge. Then over the field rose the British 25 cheer, mixv^d >v " ' ' he fierce yell of the Highland slogan. Some of the corps pusht /ith the bayonet ; some advanced firing. The clansmen drew their broadswords and dashed on, keen and swift as bloodhounds. At the English right, though the attacking column was broken to pieces, a fire was still kept up, chiefly, it seems, by 30 sharpshooters from the bushes and cornfields, where they had lain for an hour or more. Here Wolfe himself led the charge, at the head of the Louisbourg grenadiers. A shot shattered his wrist. He wrapt iiis handkerchief about it and kept on. Another shot struck him, and he still advanced, when a third lodged in his 35 breast. He staggered, and sat on the ground. Lieutenant Brown, of the grenadiers, one Henderson, a volunteer in the same company, and a private soldier, aided by an officer of artillery who ran to join thcni, carried him in their arms to the rear. He l)egged them to lay him down. They did so, and asked if he would like a surgeon. 40 " There's no need," he answered ; " it's all over with me." A moment after, one of them cried out: "They run; see how they run!" "Who run?" Wolfe demanded, like a man roused from sleep. "The enemy, sir. Egad, they give way ever)rwhere!" "Go, one of you, to Colonel Burton," returned the dying man ; " tell him 45 to march Webb's regiment down to Charles River, to cut off their retreat from the bridge." Then, turning on his side, he murmured, " Now, God be praised, I will die in peace ! " and in a few moments his gallant soul had fled. Parkman'a " Montcalm and Wolfe." IV.— Incidents from the Battle of the Nile.— The two first ships of the French line had been dismasted within a quarter of an hour after the commencement of the action ; and the others had in that time suffered so severely that victory was already certain. The 5 third, fourth, and fifth were taken possession of at half past eight. Meantime Nelson received a severe wound on the hejul from a piece HISTORICAL NARRATIVES. 89 at of langridge shot, Capt, Berry caught him in his arms as he was falhng. The great effusion of blood occasioned an apprehension that the wound was mortal : Nelson himself thought so : a large flap of the skin of the forehead, cut from the bone, had fallen over lo one eye : and the other being blind, he was in total darkness. When he was carried down, the surgeon, — in the midst of a scene scarcely to be conceived by those who have never seen a cf>ckpit in time of action, and the heroism which is displayed amid its horrors, — with a natural and pardonable eagerness, quitted the poor fellow then under 15 his hands, that he might instantly attend the admiral. " No ! " said Nelson, *' I will take my turn with my brave fellows." Nor would he suffer his own wound to be examined till every man who had been previously wounded was properly attended to. Fully believing that the wound was mortal, and that he was about to die, as he had ever 20 desired, in battle and in victory, he called the chaplain, and desired him to deliver what he supposed to be his dying remembrance to Lady Nelson : he then sent for Capt. Louis on board from the Minotaur, that he might thank him personally for the great assist- ance which he had rendered to the Vanguard : and ever mindful of 25 those who deserved to be his friends, appointed Capt. Hardy from the brig to the command of his own ship, Capt. Berry having to go home with the news of the victory. When the surgeon came in due time to examine his wound (for it was in vain to entreat him to let it be examined sooner), the most anxious silence prevailed ; and the 30 joy of the wounded men, and of the whole crew, when they heard that the hurt was merely superficial, gave Nelson deeper pleasure than the unexpected assurance that his life was ir no danger. The surgeon requested, and as far as he could, ordered him to remain quiet ; but Nelson could not rest. He called for his secretary, Mr. 35 Canjpbell, to write the despatches. Campbell had himself been wounded ; and was so affected at the blind and suffering state of the admiral, that he was unable to write. The chaplain was then sent for ; but, before he came, Nelson, with his characteristic eagerness, took the pen, and contrived to trace a few words, mai'king his 40 devout sense of the success already obtained. He was now left alone ; when suddenly a cry was heard on tlie deck, that the Orient ■ I s 1 1 j ." i ' 'l . i iij . 40 NARRATIVE COMPOSITIONS. was on fire. In the confusion he found his way up, unassisted and unnoticed ; and, to the astonishment of every one, appeared on the 45 quarter-deck, where he immediately gave order that the boats should be sent to the relief of the enemy. It was soon after nine; that the fire on board the Orient broke out. Brueys was dead: he had received three wounds, yet would not leave his post : a fourth cut him almost in two. He desired not to be 50 carried below, but to be left to die upon deck. The flames soon mastered his ship. Her sides had just been painted; and the oil jars, and paint-buckets, were lying on the poop. By the prodigious light of this conflagration, the situation of the two fleets could now be perceived, the colours of both being clearly distinguishable. About 65 ten o'clock the ship blew up, with a shock which was felt to the ver}'' bottom of every vessel. Many of her officers and men jumped overboard, some clinging to the spars and pieces of wreck with which the sea was strewn, otliers swimming to escape from the destruction which they momently di'eaded. Some were picked up by our boats ; 60 and some even in th(; heat and fury of the action were drairured into the lower poits of the nearest British ships by the British sailors. The greater part of her crew, however, stood the danger till the last, and continued to fire from the lower deck. This tremendous explosion was followed by a silence not less awful : the firing 65 innnediately ceased on both sides ; and the first sound which broke the silence was the dash of her shattered masts and yards falling into the water from the vast height to which they ha 1 l)een exploded It is upon recoi'd, that a battle between two «,rmies was once broken off by an earthquake : — such an event would be felt like a miracle ; 70 but no incident in war, produced by human means, has ever equalled the sublimity of this co-instantaneous pause, and all its circum- stances. Sout key's " Li/e. of Nelson.' mSTOliWA L NAliUA TIVES. 41 EXAMINATION OF MODELS. The division between Personal Incidents and Historical Narratives is made not on any innate diflFerences in the Models, but from the fact that the pupil is working under dili'event conditions in the two cases. In the former case the writer is sui)p<>sed to b.ase his work on his own actual experience, in the latter his material is obtained second-hand from the lips or writings of others, as usually happens in historical narratives. Somewhat diflFerent mental qualities are called into action in the two cases. In historical narratives, real facts are the subject, and these real facts are usually connected with important persons or events, and have, there- fore, a certain value in themselves. Hence details are included for their own sake which miglit more properly be excluded as far as the unity of the narrative is concerned. In other words, historicjil narratives may be somewhat loose in their artistic structure. Still, such miscellaneous details should not be so numerous as to destroy the interest or clearness of the main story. In devising exercises in historical narration any work, prose or poetry, history or fiction with Avhich the pupil is familiar may be taken as the basis to furnish the facts. On tliis foundation, he may then proceed to con- struct an historicjil narrative, just as the real historian does on the basis of ascertained facts. 1. Till is a good model of a plain, straight-forward narrative. Note how the feeling of suspense and interest is awakened by describing the voyage from the point of view of the voyagers. Many minor details, of no great consequence in bringing about the result, are set down, partly because every thing in regard to so important a matter has some interest, partly because in this way some reflex of the feelings of the discoverer is produced in the mind of the reader. 2. This narrative deals with a more complicated subject than the former, and hence recjuires more art in structure. The narrative proper does not begin before the second paragraph. To enter into it fully, certain condi- tions have to be explained, and these are given first. Observe how this is done. The two main factors in the event, — the existence of the Castle garrisoned by the English, and the i)resence of a Scottish patriot in the neighbourhood, — are contained in the opening sentences. The student will examine for himself how each minor detail in these two sentences conduces to the main purpose of the story. The third sentence serves to kindle the reader's sympathy with the chief actor, and indicates his object, — the plot of the story, as it were. Knowing this, we can now read with 42 NARRATIVE COMPOSITIONS. f ! 3 1 patience the various details in regard to the castle ; these are the obstacles to be overcome. Had these been inserted at what would seem to be the natural place, — immediately after the first mention of the castle, — we would have passed them over with impatience, not seeing any par- ticular pertinence in them. Note the way in which the somewhat compli- cated events towards the close are narrated, and the natural and satisfying conclusion. Contrast the general styles of Models I. and II. 3. Point out the appropriateness of beginning with the assertions con- tained in the first sentence. In the earlier part of the narrative (before the incidents with regard to Wolfe are told), what purpose has the writer other than the conmiunicating of certain facts to the reader ? Point out instances of this purpose influencing the diction, — the sentence structure. What eflects does the writer aim at in the remainder of the narrative 1 What devices does he employ to attain these effects ] 4. We have here narratives of two series of incidents which are to some extent ontemporiineous, and related to one another ; notice how the junction of the two narratives is eflected. The paragraphs quoted are part of a longer account of the battle of the Nile. The writer being about to turn to some personal incidents affecting Nelson, gives, in the oj)ening sentences quoted above, a summary of the condition of the contending fleets ; and the reader's curiosity is for the time l)eing satisfied by the statement that 'victory ivas already certain.' The mind is thus ready to yield ftill attention to the account of Nelson's experiences. Note the effect of the short disconnected clauses (11. 6-10) which follow : no statement is subordinate to another ; every detail in a case so critical with regard to the hero of the fight is of prime moment. The abrupt clauses are in keeping with the sense of anxiety and tension. Contrast these with u»e complex sentences which follow. Later on we meet with a group of short sentences in keeping with the impatience and activity depicted. The second paragraph opens with a statement as to the hour ; references to time are almost indispensable for holding together in the reader's mind the framework of a long and complicated narrative. Note how climax is attained by delaying the mention of the silence and the crash of the falUng masts. The strikingness of the efl'ect is further emphasized by the writer's comment. This is a masterpiece of description— and none the less ho, because in reading it in an ordinary way we are quite unconscious that the writer is using art. AH seems to be told natuially, without eff-ort, ,* t, effectively. Contrast this passage in these respects with No. III. HISTORICAL NARRATIVES. 43 PRACTICE. Practice List : Write a composition on one of the following subjects :— 1. The Taking of Troy. 2. The Death of Caesar. 3. The Overthrow of Macbeth. 4. The Capture of Quebec. 5. The Life of Marmion. 6. The Expulsion of the Acadians. 7. How Horatius Kept the Bridge. 8. The Last Fight of the Revenge. 9. The Combat between Fitz-James and Roderick. 10. The Assassination of Lincoln. Plan for a composition on the first subject : The Taking of Troy. 1. How the war began. 2. How the siege had prospered. 3. The stratagem. 4. The execution of the stratagem. 5. The results to Trojan and Greek. 1 a n STORIES. 46 CHAPTER V. STOKIKS. MODELS. I.— The Squire's Story, by Mrs. Gaskell.— In the year 1769, the littlo town of Bar-ford was thrown into a state of great excite- ment by the intelhgence tliat a gentleman (and *' quite the gentle- man," said the landlord of the " George Inn " ) had been looking at Mr. Clavcring's old house. This house was neither in the town nor in 5 the count ly. It stood on tlie outskirts of Barford, on the roadside leachng to Derl)y. The last occupant had been a Mr. Clavering — a Northumlu'rlaiid gentleman of good family — who had come to live in liarford Avliilo Ik^ was but a younger son; but when some elder brauclu^s of the family died, he had returned to take possession of lo the family estate. The house of which I speak was called the White House, from its being covered with a greyish kind of stucco. It had a good garden to the back, and Mr. Clavering had built capital stables with what were then considered the latest improve- ments. The point of good stabling was expected to y )'^ "ihe house, 16 as it was in a hunting county ; otherwise it had few recommenda- tions. There were many bedrooms ; some entered through others, even to the number of five, leading one beyond the other ; several sitting-rooms of the small and poky kind, wainscotted round with wood, and then painted a heavy slate colour ; one good dining-room, 20 and a drawing-room over it, both looking into the garden, with pleasant bow-windows. Such was the accommodation offered by the White House. It did not seem to be very tempting to strangers, though the good people of Barford rather piqued themselves on it as the largest house in the 25 town, and as a house in which " townspeople " and " county people " had often met at Mr. Clavering's friendly dinners. To appreciate this circumstance of pleasant recollection, you should have lived some pp I ■ 46 NARRATIVE COMPOSITIONS. : i I ! years in a little country town, surrounded by gentlemen's seats. so You would then understand how a bow or a courtesy from a member of a county family elevates the individuals who receive it almost as much, in tlicir own t^yes, as the pair of blue garters fringed with silver did Mi-. Bickerstaffs ward. They trip lightly on air for a whole day afterwards. Now Mr. Olavering was gone, where could 35 town and county mingle 1 I mention these things that you may have an idea of the desira- bility of t}ie letting of the White House in the Barfordites' imagi- nation ; and to make the mixture thick and slab, you must add for yourselves the bustle, the mystery, and the importance which every 40 little event either causes or assumes in a small town, and then per- haps it will be no wonder to you that twenty ragged little urchins accompanied the " gentleman " aforesaid to the door of the White Hot^se; and that, although h*^ was above an hour inspecting it, und( r the auspices of Mr. Jones, the agent's clerk, thirty more had 45 join' ;d themselves on to the wondering crowd before his exit, and awaited such crumbs of intelligence as they could gather before they were threatened or whipped out of hearing distance. Presently, out came the "gentleman" and the lawyer's cierk. The latter was speaking as he followed the former over the threshold. The gentle- 60 man was tall, well-dressed, handsome ; but there was a sinister cold look in his quick-glancing, light blue eye, which a keen observer might not have liked. There were no keen observers among the boys r nd ill-conditioned gaping girls. But they stood too near, inconveniently close ; and the gentleman, lifting up his right 66 hand, in which he carried a short riding- whip, dealt one or two sharp blows to the nearest, with a look of savage enjoyment on his face as they moved away whimpering and crying. An instant after his expression of countenance had changed. " Here ! " said he, drawing out a handful of money, partly 60 silver, partly copper, and throwing it into the midst of them. " Scramble for it ! fight it out, my lads ! come this afternoon, at three, to the ' George,' and I'll throw you out some more." So the boys hurrahed for him as ho walked off with the agent's clerk. He chuckled to himself, as over a pleasant thought. " I'll have some STORTES. 47 fun with those hids," ho said ; •' I'll teach 'em to coiuo prowling and 65 prying about me. I'll tell you what I'll do. I'll make the money so hot in the fire-shovel that it shall bum their fingers. You come and see the faces and the howling. I shall be very glad if you will dine w ith mo at two, and by that time I may have made up my mind respecting the house." 70 ISIr. Jones, the agent's clerk, agreed to come to the "Geor,<^o" at two, but sonieh<»w ho had a distaste f<»r his entertainer. Mr. Jones would not like to have said, even to nimself, that a man with a ])urse full of money, who kept many horses, and spoke familiarly (tf nobk'men — above all, who thought of taking the White House — 75 could be anything but a gentleman; but still the uneasy wonder as to who this Mr. Robinson Higgins could be, filled the clerk's mind long uft(>r Mr. Higgins, Mr. Higgins's servants, and Mr. Higgins's stud had taken possession of the White House. The White House was re-stuccoed (this time of a pale yellow so colour) and put into thorough repair by the accommodating and deliglitod landlord, while his tenant seemed inclined to spend any amount of money on internal decorations, which were showy and effective in their character, enough to make the W^hite House a nine days' wonder to the go<jd people of Barford. The slate-coloured 86 paints became pink, and were picked out with gold; the old-fashioned banisters were replaced by newly gilt ones; but, above all, the sta])les wei'e a sight to be seen. Since the days of the Roman Emperor, never was there such provision made for the care, the comfort, and the health of horses. Bui", every one said it was no 90 wonder, when they wore led through Barford, covered up to their ('3^es, l)ut curving their arched and delicate necks, and prancing with short, high steps in repressed eagerness. Only one groom came with them ; yet they required the care of three men. Mr. Higgins, lioweA'or, preferred engaging two lads out of Barford ; and Barford 05 highly approved of his preference. Not only was it kind and thoughtful to give employment to the lounging lads themselves, but they wei-e receiving such a training in Mr. Higgins's stables a^i night fit them for Doncaster or Newmarket. The district of Derby.shire in which Barford was situated was too close to Leicestershire not to lOO 3 48 NAIiliA riVE COMPOSITIONS. support ii liiiut and a pack of lumnds. The master of the liounds was a certaii) 8ir Harry Mauley, wlio was aut a huntsman aut nullus. He measur< I a niun hy the "length of his fork," not by the expression of his countenance, or the shape of his head. But, as Sir 105 Harry was wont to obser\e, there was such a thing as too long a ftirk, s(» his apj)robation was withheld until he had seen a man on horse) lack; and if his s(>at there was square and easy, his hand light, and his courage good, Sir Harry hailed him as a brother. Mr. Higgins attended the first meet of the season, not as a sub- no scriber, but v... an amateur. The Barford huntsmen piqued themselves on their bold riding; and their knowledge of the country came by nature; yet this new strange man, whom nobody knew, was in at the death, sitting on his horse, both well breathed and calm, without a hair turned on the sleek skin of the latter, supremely addressing 115 the old huntsman as he hacked off the tail of the f<»x; and he, the old man, who was testy even under Sir Plarry's slighteso rebuke, and flew out on aiiy other member of the hurt that dared to utter a word against his sixty years' experience as "-^table-boy, groom, poacher, and what not — he, old Isaac Wormeley, was meekly listening to the 120 wisdom of this stranger, only now and then giving one (jf l."s quick, up-turning, cunning glances, not unlike the sharp, o'er-canny hjoks of the poor deceased Reynard, round whom the hfnuids were Intwling, unadnionished by the short whip which Avas now tucked into Wornieley's well-worn pocket. "When Sir Harry rode into the copse 125 — full of dead brushwood and wet tangh'd grass — and was followed l)y the members of the hunt, as one by one they cantered past, Mr. Higgins took off liis cap and bowed — half-deferentially, half-inso- lently— with a luiking smile in the corner of his eye at the discomfited looks of one or two of the laggards. "A famous run, 130 sii'," said Sir Harry. "The first time you have hunted in our county, but 1 hope w(j shall see you often." " I hope to become a member of the hunt, sir," said Mr. Higgins. "Most happy— proud, I am sure, to receive so daring a rider among us. You took the Cropper-gate, I fancy, while some of our i;i5 friends here " — scowling at one or two cowards by way of finishing STORIES. 40 his speech. "Allow ine to introduce myself — master of the hounds." He fumbled in his waistcoat pock(>t for the card on which his name was formally inscribed. "Some of our friends here are kind enough to come home with me to dinner ; might I ask for the honour ? " " My name is Higgins," replied the stranger, bowing low. " 1 140 am only lately come to occupy the White House at Barford, and I have not as yet presented my letters of introduction." " Hang it ! " replied Sir Harry ; " a man with a seat like yours, and that good brush in your hand, might ride up to any door in the county (I'm a Leicestershire man ! ), and be a welcome guest. INIr. 145 Higgins, I shall be proud to become better acquainted with you over my dinnei-table." Mr. Higgins knew pretty well how to improve the acquaintance thus begun. He could sing a good song, tell a good story, and was well up in practical jokes ; with plenty of that keen, worldl}'^ sense, IBO which seems like an instinct in some men, and which in this case taught him on whom he might play off such jokes, with impunity fnm their resentment, and with a security of applause from the more boisterous, vehement, or pi-osperous. At the end of twelve months Mr. Kol^inson Higgins was, out-and-out, the most popular 155 menber of the ]3ai'ford hunt ; had beaten all the others l)y a couple of Itngths, as his first patron. Sir Harry, o])served one evening, when they we' e just leaving the dinner-table of an old hunting squire in the neighbourliood. "Because, you know," said Squire Ptrrsi, holding Sir Harry by 160 the button — "I mean, you see, this youiig spark is looking sweet upon Catherine ; and she's a good girl, and will have ten thousand pounds down the day she's married by ]u>r mother's will ; and, excuse me. Sir Harry, but T should not like my girl to throw herself away." 105 Though Sir Harry had a long ride before him, and but the early and short light of a new moon to take it in, his kind heart was so nmch touched by S(juire Hearn's trembling, tearful anxiety, that he stopped and turned back into the dining-room to say, with more asseverations than I care to give : no i i I 60 NARRATIVE COMPOSITIONS. i. I " My good squire, I may say, I know that man pretty well by this time ; and a better fellow never existed. If I had twenty daughters he should have the pick of them." Squire Hearn never thought of asking the grounds for his old 175 friend's opinion of Mr. Higgins ; it had been given with too much eanipstness for any doubts to cross the old man's mind as to the possIMlityof its not being well-founded. Mr. Hearn was not a doubter, or a thinker, or suspicious by nature ; it was simply his love for Catherine, his only child, that prompted his anxiety in this case ; 180 and, after what Sir Harry had said, the old man could totter with an easy mind, though not with very steady legs, into the drawing- room, where his bonny, blushing daughter Catherine and Mr. Higgins stood close together on the hearth-rug ; he whispering, she listening with downcast eyes. She looked so happy, so like her dcuid mother 185 had looked when the squire was a young man, that all his thought was how to please her most. His son and heir was about to be married, and bring his wife to live with the squire ; Barford and the White House were not distant an hour's ride ; and, even as these thoughts passed through his mind, he asked Mr. Higgins if he could 190 not stay all night — the young moon was already set— the roads would be dark — and Catherine looked up with a pretty anxiety, which, how- ever, had not much doubt in it, for the answer. With every encouragement of this kind from the old squire, it took everybody rather by surprise when, one morning, it was discovered 195 that Miss Catherine Hearn was missing; and when, according to the usual fashion in such cases, a note was found, saying that she had eloped with "the man of her heart," and gone to Gretna Green, no one could imagine why she could not quietly have stopped at home and been married in the parish church. She had always been 200 a romantic, sentimental girl ; very pretty and very affectionate, and very much spoilt, and very nmch wanting in common sense. Her indulgent father was deeply hurt at this want of confideiicci in his never-varying affection ; but when his son came, hot with indigna- tion, from the baronet's (his future father-in-law's house, where every 205 form of law and of ceremony was to acompany his own impending marriage"), Sciuire Hearn pleaded the cause of the young couple with u J STORIES. 61 imploring cogency, and protested that it was a piece of spirit in his daughter, which he admired and was proud of. However, it ended with Mr. Nathaniel Hearn's declaring that he and his wife would have nothing to do with his sister and her husband. " Wait till 210 you've Keen him, Nat ! " said the old squire, trembling with his distressful anticipations of family discord. " He's an excuse for any girl. Only ask Sir Harry's opinion of him." "Confound Sir Harry ! So that a man sits his horse well Sir Harry cares nothing about any- thing else. Who is this man — this fellow ! Where does he come 215 from 1 What are his means? Who are his family?" "He comes from the south — Surrey or Somersetshire, I forget which ; and he pays his way well and liberally. There's not a trades- man in Barf ord but says he cares no more for money than for water . He spends like a prince, Nat. I don't know who his family are ; 220 but he seals with a coat of arms, which may tell you if you want to know ; and he goes regularly to collect his rents from his estates in the south. Oh Nat ! if you would but be friendly, I should he as well pleased with Kitty's marriage as anj father in the county." Mr. Nathaniel Hearn gloomed and muttered an oath or two to 285 himself. The poor old father was reaping the c« "usequences of liis weak indulgence to his two children. Mr. and Mrs. Nathaniel Hearn kept apart from Catharine and her husband ; and Squire Hearn durst never ask them to Levison Hall, though it was bis own house. Indeed, he stole away as if he were a culprit whenever he 230 went to visit the White House ; and if he passed a night there he was fain to equivocate when he returned home the next day ; t\n equivocation which was well interpreted by the surly, proud Nath- aniel. But the younger Mr. and Mrs. Hearn were the only people who did not vhit at the White House. Mr. and Mrs. Higgins were 236 decidedly more popular than their brother and sister-in-law. She made a very pretty, sweet-tempered ho«<tess, and her education had not been such as to make her intolerant of any want of refinement in the associates who gathered round her husband. She had gentle smiles for towns-people as well as county people, and unconsciously 240 played an admirable second in her husband's project of making him- self universally popular. !i I i !! I: 5^ NARRATIVE COMPOSITIONS. ii! But there is some one to make ill-natured remarks, and draw ill- natured conclusions from very simple premises, in every place ; and 245 in Barford this bird of ill-omen was a Miss Pratt. She did not hunt — so Mr. Higgins's admirable riding did not call out her admiration. She did not drink — so the well-selected wines, so lavishly dispensed among his guests, could never mollify Miss Pratt. She coidd not bear comic songs, or buffo stories — so, in that wa}', her appi-obation 250 was impregnable. And these three secrets of popularity constituted Mr. Higgins's great charm. Miss Pratt sat and watclicd. Her face looked immovably grave at the end of any of JMr. Higgins's best stories ; but there was a keen, needle-like glance of her unwinking little eyes, which Mr. Higgins felt rather than saw, and which made 256 him shiver, even on a hot day, when it fell upon him. ]\Hss Pratt was a Dissenter, and to propitiate this female Mf)rdecai, Mr. Higgins asked the Dissenting minister whose services she attended to dinner; kept himself and his company in good order; gave a handsome dona- tion to the poor of the chapel. All in vain — INIiss Pi-att stiiicd not a 26C muscle more of her face towards graciousness; and ^Ir. Higgins was conscious tlu'% in spite of all his open effoi-ts to captivatf^ JMr. Davis, there was a secret influence on the other side, tliiowing in doubts and suspicions, and evil interpretations of all he said or did. Miss Pratt, the little, plain old maid, living on eighty ]>ouii(ls a 3'ear, 265 was the thorn in the popular Mr. Higgins's s'ulo, although she luxd never spoken one uncivil word to him; indeed, on the contrary, had treated him with a stiff and elaborate civility. The thorn — the grief to Mrs. Higgins was this. They liad no children! Oh! how she would stand and envy tlie careless, busy 270 motion of half-a-dozen children, and then, wlien o])served, move on with a deep, deep sigh of yearning regret. But it was as well. It was noticed that Mr. Higgins was remarkalily e;ii'efnl of his liealth. He ate, drank, took exercise, rested by some secict rulej^ of his own; occasionally bursting into an excess, it is true, but only on 275 rare occasions — such as when he returned from visiting his estates in the south, and collecting his rents. That unusual exei'tion and fatigue — for there were no stage coaches within f(»ity miles of Bar- ford, and he, like most country gentlemen of that day, world have : i STORIES. 5^ 1 t preferred riding if tliere had been — seemed to require some strange excess to compensate for it ; and rumours went through the town 28o that he shut himself up, and drank enormously for some days after his return. But no one was admitted to these orgies. One day — they remembered it well afterwards — the hounds met not far from the town ; and the fox was found in a part of the wild heath, which was beginning to be enclosed by a few of the more 285 wealthy townspeople, who were desirous of building themselves houses rather more in the country than those they had hitherto lived in. Among these, the principal was a Mr. Dudgeon, the attorney of Barfoi'd, and the agent for all the county families about. The firm of Dudgeon had managed the leases, the marriage settle- 290 ments, and the wills of the neighbourhood for generations. Mr. Dudgeon's father had the responsibility of collecting the land- owners' rents just as the present Mr. Dudgeon had at the time of which I speak ; and as his son and his son's son have done since. Their business was an hereditary estate to them ; and with some- 295 thing of the old feudal feeling was mixed a kind of proud humility at their position towards the squires whose family secrets they had mastered, and the mysteries of whose fortunes and estates were better known to the Messrs. Dudgeon than to themselves. Mr. John Dudgeon had built himself a house on Wildbury Heath 3oo — a mere cottage, as he called it; but though only two storeys high it spread out far and wide, and work-people from Derby had been sent for on pui'pose to make the inside as complete as possible. The gardens, too, were exquisite in arrangement, if not very extensive ; and not a flower was grown in them but of the rarest species. It 305 must have been somewhat of a mortification to the owner of this dainty place when, on the day of which I speak, the fox, after a long race, during which he had described a circle of many miles, took refuge in the giirden ; but Mr. Dudgeon put a good face on the matter when a gentleman hunter, with the careless insolence of the 310 scjuires of those days and that place, rode across the velvet lawn, and tapping at the window of the dining-room with his whip-handle, asked permission — no, that is not it ! — rather, informed Mr. Dudgeon of their intention — to enter his garden in a body and have the fox m I u NARRATIVE COMPOSITIONS. 316 unearthed. Mr. Dudgeon compelled liimselt' to smile assent, with the grace of a masculine Griselda ; and then he hastily gave orders to liiive all that the house afforded of provision set out for luncheon, guessing rightly enough that a six hours' run would give even homely faro an acceptable welcome. He bore without wincing the 320 entrance of the dirty boots into his exquisitely clean rooms ; he only felt gi-ateful for the care with which Mr. Higgins strode about laboriously and noiselessly moving on the tip of his toes, as he re- connoitered the rooms with a curious eye, " I'm going to build a house myself, Dudgeon ; and, upon my 325 word, I don't think I could take a l)etter model than yours." " Oh ! my poor cottage would be too small to afford any hints for such a house as you would wish to build, Mr. Higgins," replied Mr. Dudgeon, gently rubbing his hands ne\ertheless at the compliment. ** Not at all ! not at all ! Let me see. You have dining-room, 330 drawing-room — " he hesitated, and Mr. Dudgeon filled up the blank as he expected. " Four sitting-rooms and the bedrooms. But allow me to show you over the house. I confess I took some pains in arranging it, and, though far smaller than what you would require, it may, never- 836 theless, afford you some hints." Sc they left the eating gentlemen with their mouths and their plates quite full, and the scent of the fox overpowering that of the hasty rashers of ham, and they carefully inspected all the ground- floor rooms. Then Mr. Dudgeon said : 340 " If you are not tired, Mr. Higgins — it is rather my hobby, so you must pull me up if you are — we will go upstairs, and I will show you my sanctum." Mr. Dudgeon's sanctum was the centre room over the porch which formed a balcony, and which was carefully filled with choice 346 flowers in ptjts. Inside there were all kinds of elegant contrivances for hiding the real strength of all the boxes and chests required by the particular nature of Mr. Dudgeon's business ; for although his office was in Barford, he kept (as he informed Mr. Higgins) what was the most valuable hei'e, as being safer than an office which was 1 STonim 65 locked up and left every night. But, as ]\tr. Higgius icniinded him 35o with a sly poke in the side, when next thoy met, his own housi* was not over secure. A fortnight after the gentlemen of the liarford hunt lunched there, Mr. Dudgeon's strong box — in his sanctum up- stairs, with the mysterious Rpring-bf)lt to the window invented by himself, and the secret of which was only known to the inventor 355 and a few of his most intimate friends, to whom he had proudly shown it — this strong box, containing the collected Christmas rents of half-a-dozen landlords (there was then no bank neai-er than Derby), was rifled, and the secretly rich IVIr. l)udgeon had to stop his agent in his purchases of paintings by F'lcmish artists, because sco the money was required to make good the missing rents. The Dogberries and Verges of those days were quite incapable of obtaining any clue to the robber or robbers ; and though one or two vagrants were taken up and brought before Mr. Dunover and Mr. Higgins, tlie magistrates who usually attended in the court-room at 365 Barford, there was no evidence brought against them, and after a couple of nights' duiance in the lock-ups they were set at liberty. But it became a standing joke with ]\[r. Higgins to ask Mr. Dudgeon, from time to time, whether he could recommend him a place of safety for his valuables, or if he had made any more inven-370 tions lately for securing houses from robbers. About two years after this time — about seven years after Mr. Higgins had been married — one Tuesday evening, Mr. Davis was sitting reading the news in the coffee-room of the " George Inn." He belonged to a club of gentlemen who met there occasionally to 375 play at whist, to read wliat few newspapers and magazines were published in those days, to chat about the market at Dei-by, and prices all over the country. This Tuesday night it was a black frost, and few people were in the room. Mr. I>avis was anxious to finish an article in the " Gentleman's Magazine ; " indeed, he was making aso extracts from it, intending to answer it, and yet unable with his small income to purchase a copy. So he stayed late ; it was past nine, and at ten o'clock the room was closed. ]iut while he wrote, Mr. Higgins came in. He was pale and haggard with cold. Mr. Davis, who had had for st)me time solo possession of the fire, moved 385 m 66 NA RRATIVE COMl'OSfTJONS. J" politely on ono side, und liiiiidcd t<> (lu^ new coinor tlio solo London newspaper which the room afl'orded. Mr. 1 1 iggins accepted it, and made some remark on the intense coldness of the weather ; but Mr. Davis was too full of his article and intended reply to fall into conversa- 390 tion readily, Mr. Higgins hitched his chair nearer to the fire, and put his feet on the fender, giving an audible shudder. He put the newspaper on one end of the table near him, and sat gazing into the red embers of the fire, crouching down over them as if his very marrow were chilled. At length he said : 395 '* There is no account of the murder at Bath in that paper?" Mr. Davis, who had finished taking his notes, and was preparing to go, stopped short, and asked — " Has there been a murder at Bath ? No ! I have not seen any- thing of it — who has been murden d 1 " 400 " Oh ! it was a shocking, terrible murder ! " said Mr. Higgins, not raising his look from the fire, but gazing on with eyes dilated till the whites were seen all round them. " A terrible, terrible murder ! I wonder what will become of the murderer? I can fancy the red glowing centre of that fire — look and see how infinitely distant it 405 seems, and how the distance magnifies it into something awful and unquenchable." " My dear sir, you are feverish ; how you shake and shiver ! " said Mr. Davis, thinking, privately, that his companion had symptoms of fever, and that he was wandering in his mind. 410 " Oh, no ! " said Mr. Higgins. " I am not feverish. It is the night which is so cold." And for a time he talked with Mr. Davis about the article in the " Gentleman's Magazine," for he was rather a reader himself, and could take more interest in Mr. Davis's pur- suits than most of the people at Barford, At length it drew near 415 to ten, and Mr. Davis rose up to go home to his lodgings. " No, Davis, don't go. I want you here. We will have a bottle of port together, and that will put Saunders into good humour. I want to tell you about this murder," he continued, dropping his voice, and speaking hoarse and low. " She was an old woman, and 4to he killed her, sitting reading her Bible by her own fireside ! " He so STORIES. 57 looked at Mr. Davis with a strange, searching gaze, as if trying to find some sympathy in the horror which the idea presented to him. "Whom do you mean, my dear sir '? What is this murder you are so full of? No one has been murdered here." " No, you fool ! I tell you it was in Bath ! " said Mr. Higgins, 425 with sudden passion; and then, calming himself to most velvet- smoothness of manmsr, he laid his hand on Mr. Davis's knee, there, as they sat by the fire, and gently detaining him, began the narra- tion of the crime ho was so full of; but his voice and manner were constrained to a stony quietudt; : he never looked at Mr. Davis's 430 face ; once or twice, as Mr. Davis rememliered afterwards, his grip tightened like a compressing vice. "She lived in a small house in a quiet, old-fashioned street, she and her maid. People said she was a good old woman; but for all that she hoarded and hoarded, and never gave to the poor. Mr. 435 Davis, it is wicked not to give to the poor — wicked — wicked, is it not? I always give to tlie poor, for once I read in the Bible that ' Charity covereth a multitude of sins.' The wicked old woman never gave, but hoarded her money, and saved and saved. Some one heard of it ; I say she threw a temptation in his way, and God 440 will punish her for it. And this man — or it might be a woman, who knows — and this person also heard that she went to church in the mornings and her maid in the afternoons ; and so, while the maid was at church, and the street and the house quite still, and the darkness of a winter afternoon coming on, she was nodding over her 445 Bible — and that, mark you ! is a sin, and one that God will avenge sooner or later — and a step came, in the dusk, up the stair, and that person I told you of i.tood in the room. At first he — no ! At first, it is supposed — for, you understand, all this is mere guess-work — it is supposed that he asked her civilly enough to give him her money, 450 or to tell him where it was ; but the old miser defied h m, and would not ask for mercy and give up her keys, even when he threatened her, but looked him in the face as if he had been a baby. Oh, God ! Mr. Davis, T once dreamt, when I was a little, innocent boy, that I should commit a crime like this, and I waked up crying ; and my 455 68 NAIiliA TIVE COMPOSITIONS. IS 1: mother coinfoitcd mo — tluit is tlio r(!usoii I tremble so now — that and th(! cold, for it is vci-y, very cold." "liut did ho murder the old hidy?"Hskod Mr. Davis; "T beg your pardon, sii', but I am intorostod l)y your story." ^(10 "Yes, lie cut her throat; and there she lio.s yet, in lier quiet little i)arlour, with her face uptunnid and all ghastly white, in the nuddle of a pool of blood. Mr. Davis, this wine is no better than water; 1 must have some brandy." Mr, Davis was horror-struck by the story, which seemed to have ^♦'^fasciiiatiid him as much as it had done his companion. "Have they got any clue to the murderer?" said he. Mr. Hig- giiis drank down half a tumbhir of raw brandy before he answered. "No; no clue whatever. They will never be able to discover him ; and I should not W(mder, Mr. Davis — I should not wonder ^'■" if he repented after all, and did bitter peiuinco for his crime ; and if so — will there be mercy for him at the last day 1 " "God knows ! " said Mr. Davis, with solemnity. " It is an awful story," continued he, rousing himself; "I hardly like to leave this warm, light room and go out into the darkness after heai-ing it. ••"s But it must be done" — buttoning on his great coat — '■'• 1 can only say I hope and trust they will find out the murderer and hang him. If you'll take my advice, Mr. Higgins, you'll have your btnl warmed and drink a treacle posset just the last thing; and, if j'ou'll allow me, I'll send you my answer to Philologus before it goes up to old Urban." 480 The next morning Mr. Davis went to call on Miss Pratt, who was not very well, and, by way of being agreeable and entei-taining, he related to her all he had heard the night before about the murder at Bath ; and really he m«.de a pretty connected story out of it, and interested Miss Pratt very much in the fate of the old lady — ps rtly !85 because of a similarity in their situations; for she also privately hoarded money, and had but one servant, and stopped at home alone on Sunday afternoons to allow her servant to go to church. "And when did all this happen?" she said. "I don't know if Mr. Higgins named the day ; and yet I think 490 it must have been on thi^s very last Sunday." STORIES. 59 " And to-day is Wednesday. Ill news travels fast." " Yes, Mr. Higgins thought it might have been in the London newspaper." "That it could never be. Where did Mr. Higgins learn all about it 1" *9» " I don't know ; I did not ask. I think he only came home yester- day ; he had been south to collect his rents, somebody said." Miss Pratt grunted. She used to vent lier dislike and suspicions of Mr. Higgins in a grunt whenever his name was mentioned. "Well, I shan't see you for some days. Godfrey Merton asked 600 me to go and stay with him and his sister; and I think it will do me good. Besides," added she, "these winter evenings — and these murderers at large in the country— I don't quite like living with only Peggy to caU to in case of need." Miss Pratt went to stay with her cousin, Mr. Merton. He was 505 an active magistrate, and enjoyed his reputation as such. One day he came in, having just received his letters. " Bad account of the morals of your little town here, Jessy ! " said he, touching one of his letters. " You've either a murderer among you, or some friend of a murderer. Here's a poor old lady 510 at Bath had her throat cut last Sunday week ; and I've a letter from the Home Office, asking to lend them ' my very efficient aid,' as they are pleased to call it, towards finding out the culprit. It seems he must have been thirsty, and of a comfortable jolly turn ; for before going to his horrid work he tapped a barrel of ginger wine the old 515 lady had set by to work ; and he wrapped the spigot round with a piece of a letter taken out of his pocket, as may be supposed ; and this piece of a letter was found afterwards ; there are only these letters on the outside, *w«, Esq., -ar/ord, -egworth' which some one has ingeniously made out to mean Barford, near Kegworth. On the 520 other side, there is some allusion to a race-horse, I conjecture, though the name is singular enough — * Church-and-King-and-down-with-the Rump.' " Miss Pratt caught at this name inuuediately. It had hurt her CO NARRATIVE COMPOSITIONS. 025 feelings as a Dissenter only a few months ago, and she remembered it well. '* Mr. Nat Hearn has, or had (as I am speaking in the witness- Vhjx, as it were, I must take care of my tenses), a horse with that ridiculous name." 630 " Mr. Nat Hearn," repeated Mr. Merton, making a note of the intelligence ; then he recurred to his letter from the Home Office o li again. " There is also a piece of a small key, broken in the futile attempt to open a desk — well, well. Nothing more of consequence. The 636 letter is what we must rely upon." " Mr. Davis said that Mr. Higgins told him — " Miss Pratt began. " Higgins ! " exclaimed Mr. Merton, •' m. Is it Higgins, the blustering fellow that ran away with Nat Hearn's sister T' " Yes ! " said Miss Pratt. " But though he has never V)een a f.40 favourite of mine — " " ns," repeated Mr. Merton. ** It is too horrible to think of ; a member of the hunt — kind old Squire Hearn's son-in-law ! Who else have you in Barford with names that end in ns?" "There's Jackson, and Higginson, and Blenkinsop, and Davis, and 545 Jones. Cousin ! one thing strikes me — how did Mr. Higgins know all al)ouu it to tell Mr. Davis on Tuesday what had happened on Sunday afternoon 1 " There is no need to add much more. Those curious in lives of the highwayman may find the name of Higgins as conspicuous among 650 those annals as that of Claude Duval. Kate Hearn's husband col- lected his rents on the highway, like many another " gentleman " of the day ; but having been unlucky in one or two of his adventures» and hearing exaggerated accounts of the hoarded wealth of the old lady at Bath, he was led on from robbery to murder, and was hung 655 for his crime at Derby, in 1775. He had not been an unkind husband, and his poor wife took lodgings in Derby to be near him in his last moments — his awful last moments. Her old father went with her everywhere but into her husband's cell, and wrung her heart by constantly accusing himself STORIES. 61 of having promotod Iht inarriagci with a man of whom ho knew soneo httle. H« al)(licat«'(l his HcjuireHhip in favour of liis son Nathaniel. Nat was pr-nsperous, and the helpless, silly father could 1x3 of no use to him ; hut to his widowed daughter the foolish, fcmd old man was all in all — her knight, her protector, her cf)rapanion, her most faith- ful, loving companion. Only he ever declined assuming the office of 566 her counsellor, shaking his head sadly, and saying, "Ah! Kate, Kate ! if I had had more wisdom to have advised thee }j(!tter, tlum need'st not have })een an exile here in Brussels, shrinking from the sight of every English person as if they knew thy story." 57o 1 saw the White House not a month ago ; it was to let, perhapo for the twentieth time since Mr. Higgins occupied it; l)ut still the tradition go(^s ir Barford that, once upon a time, a highwayman lived there, and amassed untold treasures, and that tin; ill-gotten wealth yet remains walled up in some unknown, concealed chamber, but in STr. what part of the house no one knows. Will any of you become tenants, and try to find out this mysterious closet ? I can furnish the exact address to any applicant who wishes for it. " Cranford and Other Tales."— By permission of the publishers. II.— Two Old Lovers, by Miss M. E. Wilkins.— Leyden was emphatically a village of cottages, and each of them built after one of two patterns ; either the front door was on the right side, in the corner of a little piazza extending a third of the length of the house, with the main roof jutting over it, or the piazza stretched across 5 the front, and the door was in the centre. The cottages were painted uniformly white, and had blinds oi a bright spring-green colour. There was a little flower-garden in front of each ; the beds were laid out artistically in triangles, hearts, and rounds, and edged with box ; boy's-love, sweet-williams, and pinks lo were the fashionable and prevailing flowers. There was a general air of cheerful though humble prosperity about the place, which it owed, and indeed its very existence also, to the three old weather-beaten boot-and-shoe-factories which arose 62 NARRATIVE COMPOSITION'! \ I ift staunchly ana importantly in the very niif^:jC of the natty little white cottages. Years before, when one Hiram Strong put up his three factories for the manufacture of the rough shoe which the working-man of America wears, he hardly thought he was also gaining for himself 20 the honour of founding Leyden. He chose the site for his buildings mainly because they Avould be easily accessible to the railway which stretched to the city, sixty miles distant. At first the workmen came on the cars from the neighbouring towns, but after a while they bewime tired of that, and one after another built for himself a 25 cottage, and established his family and his household belongings near the scene of his daily labours. So gradually Leyden grew. A built his cottage like C, and B built his like D. They painted them white, and hung the green blinds, and laid out their flower-beds in front and their vegetable-beds at the back. JJy and 30 by came a church and a store and a post-office to pass, and Leyden was a full-fledged town. That was a long time ago. The shoe-factories had long passed out of the hands of Hiram Strong's heirs ; he himself was only a memory on the earth. The business was not quite as wide-awake 36 and vigorous as when in its first youth ; it droned a little now ; there was not quite so much bustle and hurry as formerly. The factories were never lighted up of an evening on account of over- work, and the workmen found plenty of time for pleasant and salutary gossip over their cutting and pegging. But this did not 40 detract in the least from th^ general cheertuliiess ;.. d prosperity of Leyden. The inhabitants still had all the work they needed to sup- ply the means necessary for their small corafoits, and they were con- tented. They too had begun to drone a little like the factories. " As slow as Leyden" was the saying among the faster-going towns 45 adjoining theirs. Every morning at seven the old men, young men, and boys, in their calico shirt-sleeves, their faces a little pale — perhaps from their indoor life--filetl umiuestioningi^' out of the back doors of the white ct)ttages, treading still deeper the well-worn foot-paths stretching around the sides of the ho' (js, and entered the factories. wThey were great, ugly wooden builditxg. with wings which they had STORIES. 63 ^rown in their youtli jutting clumsily from their lumbering shuul- ders. Their outer walls w«-re black and grimy, streaked and splashed and patclu'd with red paint in every variety of shade, accordingly as the original hue was tempered with smoke or the beatings of the storms of many years. 65 The men worked peacefully and evenly in the shoe-shops all day ; and the women stayed at home and kept the little white ct)ttages tidy, cooked the meals, and washed the clothes, and did the sewing. For recreation the men sat on the piazza in front of Barker's store of an evening, and gossiped or discussed politics; and theeo women talked over their neighbours' fences, or took their sewing int<^) their neighbours' of an afternoon. Peoi)le died in Leyden as elsewhere ; and here and there was a little white cottage whose narrow foot-path leading round to its back door its master would never tread again. 65 In one of these lived Widow Martha Brewster and her daughter Maria. Their cottage was one of those wh'ch had its piazza across the front. Eveiy summer they trained morning-glories over it, and planted their little garden with the llower-seeds popular in Leyden. There was not a cottage in the whole place whose surroundings were7o neater ami gayer than theirs, for all they were only two women and two old wctmen at that ; for Widow Martha Brewster was in the neighbourhood of eighty, and her daughter, Maria Brewster, near sixty. The two had lived alcjne since J.acob Brewster died and stopped g(ting to the factory, some fifteen years ago. He had left them this 75 particular white cottage, and a snug little sum in the savings-bank besides, for the whole Brewster family had worked and economised all their long lives. The women luid corded boots at home, while the man had worked in the shop, and never spent a cent without thinking of it over-night. bo Leyden folks all thought that David Emmons would marry Maria Brewster when her father died. *' David can rent his house, and go to live with Maria and her mother," said they, with an affv!ction- ate readiness U> arrange matters for them. Ilut he did not. Ev(Ty Sunday night at eight o'clock punctually, the form of David 80 Emmons, arrayed in liis best clothes, with his stitt" white dickey, and 11 titfcg -^m; :;'»-.r'.T'-v3s.i: i 1 64 NAEi: \TIVE COMPOSITIONS. a nosegay in his button-hole, was seen to advance up the road towards Maria Brewster's, as he had been seen to advance every Sunday night for tlie last twenty-five years, l)ut that was all. He 90 manifested not the slightest intention of carrying out people's judi- cious plans for his welfare and Maria's. She did not seem to pine with hope deferred ; people could rot honestly think there was any occasion to pity her for her lover's tardiness. A cheerier woman never lived. She was literally bub- i)5 bling over with jollity, llound-faced and black-eyed, with a funny little bounce of her whole body when she walked, she was the merry feature of the whole place. Her mother was now too feeble, but Maria still corded boots for the facto»-ies as of old. David Einmrtns, who was quite sixty, worked loo in tlicin, us he had from his youth. He was a. slerider, mild-faced old man, with a fringe of gray yellow l)eard around his chin ; his head was quite ]>ald. Years ago he had been handsome, they said, but somehow people had always laughed at him a little, although they all liked him. " The slowest of all the slow Leydenites " outsiders 105 called him, and even the " slow Leydenites " poked fun at this exaggeration of themselves. It was an old and well-worn remark that it took David Emmons an hour to go courting, and that he was always obliged to leave his own home at seven in order to reach Maria's at eight, and there was a standing joke that the meeting- no house passed him one morning on his way to the shop. David heard the chatting of course — there is very little delicacy in niatteis of this kind among country people — but he took it all in g<»od part. He would laugh at himself with tlu; rest, but there was something touching in his deprecatory way of saying .sometimes, 115 " Well, 1 don't know how 'tis, but it don't seem to be my nature to do any other way. T suppose I was born without the faculty of gettin' along fjuick in this world. You'll have to get behind and push nie a leetle, I reckon." He owned his little cottage, whicli was one of the kind which had mo the iiiazza on the right side. He lived entirely alone. There was a half-acH' or so of land Insside his house, which he used for a ve^e- table garden. After and before shop hours, in the dewy evenings a r a ( STOniES. 66 and mornings, he dug and weeded assiduously between the green ranks of corn and beans. If David Emmons was slow, his vegetables v, ^re not. None of the gardens in Leyden surpassed his in luxuriant 125 growtlj. His corn tasselled out and his potato patch was white with blossoms as soon as anybody's. He was almost a vegetarian in his diet ; the products of his garden spot were his staple articles of food. Early in the morning would the gentle old bachelor set his pot of green things boiling, and dine 130 gratefully at noon, like mild Robert Herrick, on pulse and herbs. His garden supplied also his sweetheart and her mother with all the vegetaV)les they could use. Many times in the course of a week could David have been seen slowly moving towards the Brewster cottage with a basket on his arm well stocked with the materials for 136 an innocent and delicious repast. But Maria was not to be outdone by her old lover in kindly deeds. Not a Saturday but a goodly share of her weekly baking was de- posited, neatly covered with a white crash towel, on David's little kitchen table. The surreptitious air with which the back-door key 140 was taken from its hiding-place (which she well knew) under the kitchen blind, the door unlocked and entered, and the good things deposited, was charming, although highly ineffectual. " There goes Maria with David's baking," said the women, peering out of their windows as she Ijounced, rather more gently and cautiously than 145 usual, down th(^ street. And David himself knew well the minister- ing angi^l t<t whom theses benefits were due when he lifted the towel and discovered witli tearful eyc^s t\ui brown loaves and the flaky pies — the proofs of his Maria's Ic-ve and culinary skill. Among t\w younger and more irreverent portions of the commu- 150 nity there was consideral)le sp((culation as to the mode of courtship of these old lovers of twenty-five years' standing. Was there ever a kiss, a t(!nder clasp of the hand, those usual expressions of affection lietween sweethearts? Some of the more daring spirits had even gone so far as to commit 155 the manifest impropriety of peeping into Maria's parlour windows ; but they had only seen David sitting quiet and prim on the little slippery horse-hair sofa, and Maiia by the table, rocking slowly in I «6 NARRATIVE COMPostTWNS. I her little cane-seated rocker. Did Maria ever leave her rocker and 160 sit on that slippery horse-hair sofa by David's side? They never knew ; but she never did. There was s(>n^ethin;^' laughable, and at the same time rather pathetic, about ]\Iaria and David's coi^i'ting. All the outward appurtenances of "keeping company" wei-e as rigidly observed as they had been twenty-five j'ears ago, wluui David los Emmons first cast his mild blue eyes shyly and lovingly on red- cheeked, quick-spoken Maria Brewster. Every Sunday evening, in the winter, there was a fire kindled in the parlour, the parlour lamp was lit at dusk all the year round, and Maria's mother retired early, that the young people might "sit up." This "sitting up" was no 170 very form.'dable affair now, whatever it might have been in the first stages of the courtship. The need of sleep overbalanced sentiment in those old lovers, and by ten o'clock at the latest Maria's lamp was out, and David had wended his solitary way to his own home. Leyden people had a great curiosity to know if David had ever 175 actually poppe<l the question to Maria, or if his naturnl slowness was at fault in this as in other things. Their curiosity had been long exercised in vain, but Widow Brewster, as she waxed older, grew loquacious, and one day told a neighbour, who had called in her daughter's absence, that " David had never reely come to the p'int. 180 She supposed he would some time; for her part, she thought he had better ; l)ut then, after all, she knowed Maria didn't care, and may be 'twas jest as well as 'twas, only sometimes she was afeared she should never live to see the weddin' if they wasn't spry." Then there had been hints concerning a certain pearl-colour-ed silk which Maria, 186 having a gcxni chance tt) get at a bargain, had purchased ;-,ome twenty years ago, when she thought, from sundry remarks, that David was coming to the point ; and it was further intimated that the silk had been privately nuide up ten years since, when Maria had again sur- mised that the point was alnrnt being reached. The neighbour went i9oliome in a state of great delight, having by skilful maiueuvring actu- ally obtained a glimpse of the pearl-c(iloured silk. Tt was perfectly true that Maria did not lay David's tardiness in putting the impoi'tant (juestion very much t(j heart. She was too cheerful, too l)usy, and too much interested in her daily duties to .t('i ISTORim. 67 fret much about anjrthing. There was never at any time much of i'.)5 the sentimental element in her composition, and her feeling for David was eminently practical in its nature. She, although the woman, had the stronger character of the two, and there was some- thing rather mother-like than lover-like in her affection for him. It was through the prt)tecting care which chiefly characterized her love 200 that the only pain to her came from the long courtship and post- ponement of marriage. It was true that, years ago, when David had led her to think, from certain hesitating words spoken at part- ing one Sunday night, that he would certainly ask the momentous question soon, her heart had gone into a happy flutter. She had 205 bought the pearl-coloured silk then. Years after, her heart had fluttered again, but a little less wildly this time. David almost asked her another Sunday night. Then she had made up the pearl-coloured silk. She used to go and look at it fondly and admiringly from time to time ; once in a while she 210 would try it on and survey herself in the glass, and imagine herself David's bride — a faded bride, but a happy and a beloved one. She looked at the dress occasionally now, but a little sadly as the conviction that she should never wear it was forcing itself upon her more and more. But the sadness was always more for David's sake 215 than her own. She saw him growing an old man, and the lonely, uncared-for life that he led filled her heart with tender pity and sor- row for him. She did not confine her kind offices to the Saturday baking. Every week his little house was tidied and set to rights, and his mending looked after. 220 Once on a Sunday night, when she spied a rip in his coat, that had grown long from the want of womanly fingers constantly at hand, she had a good cry after he had left and she had gone into her room. There was something more pitiful to her, something that touched her heart more deeply, in that rip in her lover's Sunday coat than in all 226 her long years of waiting. As the years went on, it was sometimes with a sad heart that Maria sto<xl and watche<l the poor lonely old figure moving slower than ever down the street to his lonely home ; but tlu^ heart was sad for him always, and never for herself. She used to wonder at him 230 I- i ill I >}f\ M 08 NAUR A TIVK VOMFOSITIONS. a litdo soiiK'timos, though always with the most loyal tenderness, that he should choose to lead the solitary, cheei'less life that he did, to go back to his dark, voiceless lK)me, when he niigh* be so sheltered and cared for in his old age. She firmly l)elieved that it was only 235 owing to her lover's incorrigible slowness, in this as in everything else. She never doubted for an instant that he loved her. Some women might have tried hastening matters a little themselves, but Maria, with the delicacy which is sometimes more inherent in a steady, practical nature like liers than in a more ardent one, would 240 have htst her self-respect for ever if she had done such a thing. So she lived cheerfully along, corded her boots, though her fingers were getting stiff, humoured her mother, who was getting feebler and moi-e childish every year, and did the Ijest she could for her poor, foolish old lover. 246 When David was seventy, and she sixty-eight, she gave away the pearl-coloured silk to a cousin's daughter who was going to be mar- ried. The girl was young and pretty and happy, but she was poor, and the silk would make over into a grander wedding dress for her than slui could hope to obtain in any other way. 260 Poor (»ld Maria smoothed the lustrous folds fondly with her witiiered hands before sending it away, and cried a little, with a patient pity for David and herself. But when a tear splashed directly on to the shining surface of the silk, she stepped crying at once, and her sorrowful expression changed into one of careful 255 scrutiny as she wiped the salt drop away with her handkerchief, and held th(! dress up to the light to be sure that it was not spotted. A practical nature like Maria's is sometimes :i g»*';at l)oon to its possessor. It is doubtful if anything else can dry a tear as quickly. Somehow Maria always felt a little differently towards David after 200 she had givtMi away her wtnlding dress. There had always been a little tinge of consciousness in her manner towards him, a little reserve and caution before people. But after the wedding dress luul gone, all (juestion of marriage had disappeared so entirely from her mind, that the delicate considerations born of it vanished. She wjus 206 uncommonly hah' and hearty for a woman of her age; tlu'i-e was ap- parently much more than two years' difference between her and her B!romES. 61) lover. It was not only the Saturday's bread and pie that she carried now and deposited on David's little kitchen table, but, openly and boldly, not caring who should see her, many a warm dinner. Every day, after her own house- work was done, David's house was 270 set to rights. He should have all the comforts he needed in his last years, she determined. That they were his last years was evident. He coughed, and now walked so slowly from feebleness and weak- ness that it was a matter of doubt to observers whether he could reach Maria Brewster's before Monday evening. 275 One Sunday night he stayed a little longer than usual — the clock struck ten before he started. Then he rose, and said, as he had done every Sunday evening for so many years, " Well, Maria, I guess it's about time for me to be goin'." She helped him on with his coat, and tied on his tippet. Con-28o trary to his usual habit he stood in the door, and hesitated a minute — there seemed to be something he wanted to say. « Maria." "Well, David r " I'm gittin' to be an old man, you know, an' I've allers been 285 slow-goin' ; I couldn't seem to help it. Tliere has been a good many things I haven't got around to." The old cracked voice quavered painfully. " Yes, I know, David, all about it ; you couldn't help it. I wouldn't worry a bit about it if I were you." 290 " You don't lay up anything agin me, Maria?" "No, David." " Good-night, Maria." " Good night, David. I will fetch you over some boiled dinner to- morrow." %5 She held the lamp at the door till the patient, tottering old figure was out of sight. She had to wipe the teais from her spectacles in order to see to read her Bible when she went in. Next morning she was hurrying up her housework in go over to David's — somehow she felt a little anxious about him this morning 300 — when there came a loud knock at her door* When she opened NARRATIVE COMPOSITIONS. it, a boy stood there panting for breath ; he was David's next neigh- bour's son. " Mr. Emmons is sick," he said, " an' wants you. I was goix^' for 305 milk, when he rapped on the window. Father an' mother's in thar, an' the doctor. Motlier said, tell you to hurry." The news had spread rapidly ; people knew what it meant when they saw Maria hurrying down the street, without her bonnet, her grey hair flying. One woman cried when she saw her. " Poor 810 thing ! " she sobbed, " poor thing ! " A crowd was around David's cottage when Maria reached it. She went straight in through the kitchen to his little bedroom, and up to his side. The doctor was in the room, and several neighbours When he saw Maria, poor old David held out his hand to her and 316 smiled feebly. Then he looked imploringly at the doctor, then at the others in the room. The doctor understood, and said a word to them, and they filed silently out. Then he turned to Maria. ** Be quick," he whispered. She leaned over him. " Dear David," she said, her wrinkled face 820 quivering, her grey hairs straying over her cheeks. He looked up at her with a strange wonder in his glazing eyes. " Maria " — a thin, husky voice, that was more like a wind through dry corn-stalks, said — " Maria, I'm — dyin', an' — I allers meant to — have asked you — to — marry me," From Douglas American Authon.— « A Humble Romance and Other Stories." III.— The Story of Muhammad Din, by Rudyard Kipling*. Who is the happy man? He that sees in his own house at home little children crowned with dust, leaping and falling and crying. Munichandra, translated by Professor Peterson. The polo-ball was an old one, scarred, chipped, and dinted. It stood on the mantel-piece among the pipe-stems which Imam Din khitmatgar, was cleaning for me. " Does the Heaven-born want this ball 1 " said Imam Din, deferen- 5 tially. The Heaven-bor 1 set no particular store by it ; but of what use was a polo-ball to a hhitmatgar 1 STORIES. n " By 3'our Honour's favour, I have a little sou. He has seen this ball, and desires it to play with. I do not want it for myself." No one would for an instant accuse portly old Imam Din ofio wanting to play with polo-balls. He carried out the battered thing into the veranda ; and th(;re followed a hurricane of joyful squeaks, a patter of small feet, and the thud-thud-thud of the ball rolling along the ground. Evidently' the little son had been waiting outside the door to secure his treasure. But how had he managed to see 16 that polo-ball 1 Next day, coming back from office half an hour earlier than usual, I was aware of a small figure in the dining-room — a tiny, plump figure in a ridiculously imidequate shirt which came, perhaps, half- way down the tubby stomach. It wandered round the room, thumb 20 in mouth, crooning to itself as it took stock of the pictures. Un- doubtedly this was the " little son." He had no business in my room, of course ; but was so deeply absorbed in his discoveries that he never noticed me in the door-way. I stepped into the room and startled him nearly into a fit. He sat 26 down on the ground with a gasp. His eyes opened, and his mouth followed suit. I knew what was coming, and fled, followed by a long, dry howl which reached the servants' quarters far more quickly than any command of mine had ever doi.o. In ten seconds Imam Din was in the dining-room. Then despairing sobs arose, and I returned 30 to find Imam Din admonishing the small sinner who was using most of his shirt as a handkerchief. "This boy," said Imam Din, judicially, "is a budmash, a big btid- niash. He will, without doubt, go to the jailkhana for his behavior." Rciuewcd yells from the penitent, and an elaborate apology to myself 26 from Imam Din. " Tell the baby," said I, " that the sahib is not angry, and take him away." Imam Din conveyed my forgiveness to the offender, who had now gathered all his shirt round his neck, stringwise, and the yell subsided into a sob. The two set off for the door. " His 40 name," said Imam Din, as though the name was part of the crime, "is Muhammad Din, and he is a budmash. Freed from present danger, Muhammad Din turned round, in his father's arms, and said 72 NARRATIVE COMPcmTIONS. gravely : " It is true that my naine is Muhaimniul Din, tahib, but I 45 am not a budmash. I am a man ! " From that day dated my acquaintance with Muhammad Din. Never again did he come into my dinin<f-room, but on the neutral ground of the compound we greeted each other with much state, though our conversation was confined to " Talaam, tahib " from his 50 side, and "Salaam, Muhammad Bin" from mine. Daily on my return from office, the little white shirt, and the fat little body used to rise from the shade of the creeper-covereil trellis where they had been hid ; and daily I checked my horse here, that my salutation might not be slurred over or given unseemly. 56 Muhammad Din never had any companions. He used to trot about the compound, in and out of the castor-oil bushes, on mysterious errands of his own One day I stumbled upon some of his handiwork far down the ground. He had half buried the polo- ball in dust, and stuck six shriveled old marigold flowers in a circle 60 round it. Outside that circle again was a rude sijuarc^, traced out in bits of red brick alternating with fragments of brokcm china ; the whole bounded by a little bank of dust. The bhistie from the well- curb put in a plea for the small architect, saying that it was only the play of a baby and did not much disfigure my garden. ^ 66 Heaven knows that I had no intention of touching the child's work then or later ; but that evening a stnjll through the garden brought me unawares full on it ; so that I trampled, before I knew, marigold-heads, dust-bank, and fragments of broken soap-dish into confusion past all hope of mending. Next morning I came upon 70 Muhammad Din crying softly to himself over the ruin I had wrought. Some one had cruelly told him that the sahib was very angry with him for spoiling the gardfsn, and had scattered his rubbish, using bad language the while. Muhammad Din labored for an hour at eflfacing every trace of the dust-bank and pottery frag- 76 ments, and it was with a tearful and apologetic face that he said " TaUmm, tahib" when I came home from the office. A hasty inquiry resulted in Imam Din informing Muhammad Din that by my singular favour he was permitted to disport himself as he pleased. STonrES. n Wheroat thn child took lu^irt and fell to iniciug the gnmnd-plan of an edifice which wus to ecHpse the inai-igold pulo-ball creation. to For some months thii cliiihl)y little eccentricity revolved in his humble orbit among the castor-<»il bushes and in the dust, always fashioning magnificent palaces from stale flowers thrown away by the bearer, sin<»(>lh wat('r-w<»rn jx-hblcs, bits of br«»ken glass, and feathers jjulled, 1 fancy, from my fowls — always alone and always 86 crooning to himself. A gayly spott<Ml sea-shell was dnippcd one day close to the last of his little buildings; and I looked that Muluunmad Din should build something more than ordinarily splendid on the strength of it. Nor was I disappointed. Jte meditated for the bc^tter part of an hour, 90 and his crooning rose to a jubilant song. Then he began tracing in dust. It would certainly be a wondrous palace, this one, for it was two yards long and a yard broad in ground-plan. But the palace was never completed. Next day thci-e was no Muhammad Din at the head of the 95 carriage-drive, and no " Talaiwi, tahib " to welcome my return. I had grown accustomed to the greeting, and its omission troubled me. Next day Imam Din told me that the child was suffering slightly from fev(!r and needed quinine. He got the medicine and an English doctor. loo " They have no stamina, these brats," said the doctor, as ho left Imam Din's quarters. A week lat(ir, though I would have given much to have avoided it, I met on the road to the Mussalman burying-ground Imam Din, accompanied by one other friend, carrying in his arms, wrapped in los white cloth, all that was left of little Muhammad Din. " Plain Talcs from the IIUls"—By permission of the publishers. ■ 1 T 1 'I I IV.— Whangr, the Miller, by Oliver Goldsmith.— If you would nit'ike Fortune your friend, or, to personize her no longer, if you desire, my son, to be rich, and have money, be more eager to save than ac(iuire : when people say. Money is to be got here, and money is to be got there, take no notice ; mind your own business ; stay where you are, and secure all you can get without stirring. 74 NARRATIVE COMPOSfTfON. When you horn' tliat your ii«'i^'lil)our has i»ick<'d up a purso of J,'<»1(1 ill tho street, never run out int(» the; same strciet, hiokin^' about you in order to pick up such anothei- ; or when ytm are informed that h(! 10 has nuuhi a fortune in one braiu-li of business, never chaii^'e your own in order to b<( his rival. Do not desirt! to be rich all at once; Imt patiently add farthing' to faithing. Perhaps you despise the petty sum? and yet they who want a farthing, and have no friend that will lend them it, think farthings very good things. Whang, 15 the foolish miller, when ho wanted a farthing in his distress, found that no friend would lend, because they knew he wanted. Did you ever rejid the story of Whang in our books of ChirK^sii learning? he who, despising small sums, and grasping at all, lost even what he hiid. 20 Whang, the miller, was naturally avaricious; nobody loved money better than he, or more respected those that had it. When people would talk of a rich man in company. Whang would say, I know hira very well ; he and 1 have been long acquainted ; he and I are intimate ; he stood for a child of mine ; but if ever a poor 26 man was mentioned, he had not the least knowledge of the man ; he might be very well for aught he knew ; but he was not fond of many acquaintances, and loved to choose his own company. Whang, however, with all his eagerness for riches, was in reality poor; he had nothing but the profits of his mill to support him; 30 but though these were small, they were certain ; while his mill stood and went, he was sure of eating ; and his frugality wa.: such, that he every day laid some money by, which he would at intervals count and contemplate with much satisfaction. Yet still his acquisitions were not equal to his desires ; he only foufid himself above want, 36 whereas he desired to be possessed of affluence. One day, as he was indulging these wishes, he was informed that a neighbour of his had found a pan of money under ground, having dreamed of it three nights running before. These tidings were daggers to the heart of poor Whang. " Here am I," s.iys he, " toil- 40 ing and moiling from morning to night for a few pjiltry farthings, while neighbour Hunks only goes quietly to bed, and dreams himself Into thousands before morning. Oh that I could dream like him ! STORIES. 76 with what pleasure would I di^' r(»und the pan; how slily would T (lariy it home ; not even my wife should see me ; and then, oh, the i)leasure of thrustin{i( one's arm into a heap of g(»l(l up to the elbow ! " 45 Such retlecti(»iis only served to make the miller unhappy ; he dis- continued his f(»rmer assiduity ; he was <juite disf,'usted with small gains, and his customers hegan to forsake him. Every day Ik; repeated the wish, and (^very night laid himself df>wn in order to dream. Fortune, that was tor a long time unkind, at last, howevei', 5i) seemed to smile upon his distresses, and indulged him with the wished-for vision, lie dreamed that under a certain part of the foundation of his mill there was concealed a monstrous pan of gold and diamcrnds, buried deep in the ground, and covered with a large flat stone. He rose up, thanked the stars that were at last j)l(!ased fis to tak<jpityon his sutlerings, and conceahul his good luck from (!very perscm, as is usual in money dreams, in order to liave the vision repeated the two succeeding nights, by which he should be certain of its veracity. His wish(\s in this also were answered; he still dreamed of the same* ])an of mon«y, in the very same place. eo Now, therefore, it was past a doubt; so, getting up early the third morning, he repairs alone, with a mattock in his hand, to the mill, and began to undermine that part of the wall which the vision directiid. The first omen of succ(\ss that he met was a broken mug ; digging still deej)er, he turns up a house tile <juite new and entire. 65 At last, after much digging, he came to the broad flat stone, Ijut then so large, that it was beyond one man's strength to remove it. "Here," cried he in raptures, to himself, "here itisi under this stone there is room for a very large pan of diamonds indeed ! I nmst e'en go h<jme to my wiiv, and tell her the whole affair, and get her7o to assist me in tui-ning it up." Away therefore he goes, and acquaints his wife; with every ciicumstance of their good fortune. Her raj)tures on this occasictn may easily bo imagined ; she ilew njund his neck, and embraced hinx in an ag(my of joy; but those transports, however, did not delay their eagerness to know the exact 75 sum ; returning, therefore, sj)eedily together to the place where Whang had been digging, there they found — not indeed the expected treasure, but the mill, their only support, undermined and fallen. •' The Citizen o/ the World." 76 NA HRA Tl VE CVl^i i OSl TION. EXAMINATION OF MODELS. i: In litoraturo one of tho commonest kinds of narrative is the story, whetlier it bo in tlie form of a short tjvle, or long novel or romance. The lino between stories and other narratives is not very definitely drawn. Perhaps the main characteristic of tlie story lies iii the fact that whether it be ti'ue or not. a story is told mainly l)ec;iuse it pleases, not because it is true, nor for any other reason. The story-teller 's therefore free to invent, or add, or take away, as he deems proper, provided that by so doing ho increases the reader's enjoyment. As the maxinmm amount of pleasure can scarcely be ^^iveu by a narrative of evjmts as they actually happen, a story practically means a fictitious narrative. Here, at any rate, where tho divisions are made with a view to exercises in composition, a story is a narrative leased to a greater or less extent on imagination. As the story-teller, then, has complete ct)ntrol over tho matter of his work, all the laws of good narration are doubly incumbent upon him. The first essential of an interesting narrative in that all the incidents should lead uji to a final event, — that every detail should bear upon that event, and should carry the reader a step nearer to its realization, that is, there slntnld be unity and development. The interest will bo further increased by introducing the element of siispcmu'; curiosi*'y should be roused by indicating the nature of the "nd, and yet concealing its exact character until the close. In I'oe's story of the (fold liinj, wo learn at tho beginning that there is a very valuable treasure probably coicealed in a certain neighbourhood. Tho hero has a vague chie to the spot. Each detail leads him step by step towards a solution. Wo see the bearing of these details, but v.'e do not know until the close what success will follow his eflforts. So in most novels, we are made ac([uainted with the hero ; he is pursuing some aim, — success in life, success in love ; wo per- ceive that each chapter carries him nearer to his object, but whether he will grasp it ir not, is carefully concealed. Tliese sources of inti rest lie in. the structure of tho narrative, — its j)l()t ; but the st<)ry-teller is also free to select or create his matter, and the pleasure afi'orded to tho reader will de[)end also on the character of this material. Now, the matter will bo int< i-es^ing provided the incidents are marvellous or novel, as in Fairy Tales, tlie Anibian Ni(jM.\ and romances; or, again, when the incidents ard perscms, though counnon- ])lace, aeem real and natural, sf) that we fully i nderstand them, and enter into them. In this way our pity, or sor.io other feeling may bo touched. STORIES. 77 lliis sort, of interest is exemplified in many of the best novels — the works of .liiue Austen, Thackeray, W. D. Howells and others, where the events are by lio means extraordinary. These two sources '^f interest may be combined ; yet extreme marvellousnesa of events or chaii:''uers is unfavourable to the development </ the ot'ier form of interest, inasmuch as we are taken far from the spliere of oui i>wn exjierience. The oliann of faithful character painting, and ex<juisite reproduction of scenes and situations in real life is much relished by mature and thought- ful minds ; whereas plot interest and the marvellous are apt to be more attractive to the cruder taste. Accordingly, in our own time especially, a great num])er of short stories, or sketches (as they might be more properly called) have been written which lack almost wholly vrliat seems the main essential of the story, — plot. Sueli stories are rather descriptions than narratives. 1. The interest in the Sqmrc'ii Tale is mainly a plot interest, and accordingly, the events are of a somewhat extraordinary and romantic type. The fundamental interest lies in the fact that the hero is able for some time to play a doid)le part, that of a robber and of a country gentle- man ; the story properly opens at the point where this double life may be imagined as commencing. The author docs not at once let the reader into the secret, but reserves it until the close in order to develop the feelings of suspense and surprisr-. At tirst the reader sees the man as he apjjeared in the eyes of his new lijighbourSc But the author, at the same time, is aireful to ij^sfjrt various touches by which our curiosity is awakened and our minds prej)ared for extraordinary devet )pments. Note, for example, the remark in lin' s 50-52, the otherwise trifling incident with the children, the suspicions of Mr. Jones. If a totally unexpected event to which nothing leads up, happens in the course of a story, the eflect is un- pleasmg ; the event seems to be arbitrarily introduced by the writer, and pr ibability is violated. While surprise, therefore, is very effective in a flfe)ry, there nuist K; preparation even for a surprise. Tlie most artistic method is to introduce a ninnber of d')tail8 which really lead up to the sjHjret, l)ut whose i)urport and connection is unsuspected until the proper moment. In such a case, the reader is indeed surprised, yet at the same time sees that the circumstiince is natural, — in organic uni(jn wicii nmch which had hitherto seemed to have no special signiticjince. To return to the particular story under examination, note the various points inserted in order to make the reader feel that the hero's success in gaining admittance into society is i:<t improbuible. The main element in this success is Sir Harry. This personage is iiitroduced and his char- 1 < •'vJi» ' if 78 NA RRA TIVE COMPOSITION. •Miter shaped for no other rmrjMtso than to make the stranger's admission into the social circle of Harford the more likely. Sir Harry's iiiHueuco is afiparent in the crowning evidence of the impostor's success- his marriage with the daughter of one of the county geiitli'iiion. This event has an artistic purpose ; it intensities our interest in the fortunes of the unattractive hero by linking therewith the fate of an innocent woiiiivn. Meanwhile, the reader's suspicions are kept cm the alert even l>y the circumstances of the marriage itself, and they are confirmed by the para- graph which narrates the attitude of Miss Pratt (11. 24:J-()7). The extreme slininess of the basis of the hero's popidarity is cleverly indicated in the earlier part of this paragraph. Our suspicions and our curiosity are further excited by the mysterious facts in lines 272-282. Note how the reader's attention is roused by the parenthetical remark in line 28.'{ ; this remark is enough to warn us of a close connection between this robbery and tlie hero. The central scene of the stoiy is undoubtedly that in which M:*, Higgins relates the nmrder, and the writer employs all her art in making us feel the horror of it. She does not tell us about it, but narrates the very words ; in this way alone can full vividness be attained. The reader is not informed in so many words that Higgins is the niin-derer, but ho has no doubt of it, nor does the winter intend that he should have any. The remainder oi the narrative corresponds to the 4th and 5th acts of a drama ; it reveals the results of this central scene to which all that precedes, leads ui). Interest is sustained by indicating the steps by which the guilt is fixed upon the criminal. The fate of the hero is briefly nar- rated, and the few remaining sentences serve to satisfy the interest which has been awakened in the other chief personages of the tale. The art of this story is somewhat crude, the devices rather manifest ; for that reason it may be the more useful to the beginner. The student should gather for himself the various cases of the employment of devices ior an evident purpose. 2. This story is of a m«»re modern typo than the former. There is nothing particularly interesting in the characters, or romantic in the inci- tlents. It is one of those nineteenth century stories which unfold the poetry and pathos lying hidden in ordinary life. The writer's object is to awaken rather our sympathies than our curiosity. So she employs all her resources in making tho scenes and persons extrenudy real and life-like ; there is nothing in thorn incom])atible with tho ovory-day New England village. I' STORIES. 70 Whilo engaged in this realistic description, she strikes the key note. There is a unity of tone in tlie story,- a harmony between the easy-going slowness of tlie place and the central theme, which is an extreme illustra- tion of this (piality. Tlie subject has its ridiculous side, of which the writer makes use lo introduce an element of humour, but her main object is not laughter, and she carefully subordinates humour to jtathos. She aims at <• inching our hearts, - at making us feel the poetry and pathos in this lifi^-long constancy, and this gradi .d fading of youthful hopes. Note th«> combination of humour and tenderness in the history of the wedding dress ; here, as elsewhere, there are touches oi nature such as nuike the whole worhl kin. Note, too, the admirable climax of the close. There is at bottom pi-rhaps a certain improbability in the central fact, but the writer veils it behind the realism of the detjiils. 3. Which of the two preceding sttjries does this most resnnble in general character / Wherein does the charm of the story niandy lie? How do the descriptions of the child's various buildings contribute to the general «,ffect ? What is the ett'ect of the peculiar style of the father's speeches and of the various details referring to Indican life 1 4. This is a story to illustrate a moral — a common jteculiarity of Fables. The moral or lesson may be placed first, as here, or at the end. Why is a full description of Whang's character given at the outset } llow is the interest maintained '{ Note the satire. PRACTICE. Practice List: Write a story .)n one of the following themes : — 1. Tlio JJioo^raphy of a Stn.'et I^mp 2. How I Spent One ( 'hi-istnuiK-Eve. 3. "^riie Hintor}' of Our Dog. 4. Tlio Story of Sliylcjck and the Merchant of Venice. 5. The Story of My Favorite Novel. Write an original story by amplifying one of the following plots : 1. ( hi i.he rocky headland of Southern Corsica, near I'onifacio, lived <i poor widow and her only son, a youth approaching manhood. The son, 80 NARRA TIVE COM POSITION H. becoming obnoxious to a corfciin cobbler of tho islanil, was one night assassinated by his enemy and l)rouglit Immo dead to his mother's cabin. The murderer escaped to tlie neighbouring island, nor was the mother able to have hiiu punished through the regular course of law. Her heart, which had formerly been kind and charitable, became filled only with the desire for revenge. Brooding over her trouble, she devised a means of satisfying her desire. The one living creature which remained to her was a large and powerful dog. This dog she determined to train for her pur- l>ose. She tied him up, and refused him all fo(Kl until he was perfectly ravenous ; meanwhile she made tho eftigy of a man and attached some food to his neck. At the proper mcmient she loosed the dog, crying, *At him, good Leo ! ' wiiereupon tho dog scenting tho meat, tore tho ctHgy to pieces in order to satisfy his hunger. For mt)nths she continued this practice, so that tho dog, naturally good and gentle, wjis perfectly murderous at the utterance of those fatal words. Early one morning she took the famishing dog, securely muzzled, to the beach, a friend rowed them to tho Sardinian shore, they found their way to the village where the cobbler was working. As her eye fell ujton the assassin of her son, she loosened the dog's muzzle, crying fiercely, 'At him, good Leo ! ' and in a few moments her terrible desire for vengeance was sated. 2. In tho summer of 1284 the town of Hamelin on the river Weser, was sadly infested with rr-ts. All means used to rid the place of these vermin had proved ineffectual. One June morning, a piper named Bunting, on account of his gay costume, visited the town and offered to draw the rats away by his playing, on condition of receiving a certain sum of money for his services. He succeeded in leading the rats into the Weser, but in spite of liis success, the people refused to pay him what he had earned. The piper was enraged by their ingratitude. Ho began playing more enchant- ingly than ever, and all the children began to troop after him ; he led them to a cavern in the side of the Koffenberg, the cavern clt.sed upon them, and one hundred and thirty went down alive into the pit. The street through which the piper led the children is called Bungen,and to this day no umsic is aUowed to bo played in that street. .'i. Once upon a time there was a mason of Granada, who was very poor. One night ho was roused by a priest who asked him if he would undertfiko a job that very night. Tho j)riest promised to pay well if ho Would be blindfolded. Tho mason assented, and was led through devious ways to the j)ortal of a house. They entered, bolted the door and proceeded to tlu) interior of tho building. When th^ bandage \M^ STORIES. 81 was removed, the mason foimd liimsolf in a court dimly lighted by one lamp. In tlio centre was an old Moorish fountain, under which the mason was requested to form a small vault, bricks and mortar being at hand. He worked all night, the priest gave him a piece of gold and asked whether ho would return to complete the vaidt. After a similar experience the next night the vaidt was completed. Ho then hel|)ed the priest t > deposit three or four heavy jars therein, the vault was closed, the j«iveuient replaced, and all traces of work obliterated. The mascm was led blind- folded to a safe distance, given two pieces of gold, and told he would bo free to return homo when tho cathedral bells rang. He returned home and revelled with his family for a fortnight. As years went by his family grow up gaunt and ragged. One morning, an old curmudgeon who owned many houses, engaged him to work on one of his rookeries. In this old dwelling tho mason discovered the Moorish fountain. Ho asked tho landlonl who had owned the hotise, and was told that a priest reputed to be wealthy had dwelt there, and that ho had haunted the place since his death so that no person could be induced to live in it. The mason offered to live there himself. The landlord gladly con- sented, and very soon the clinkling of gold which had been heard in tho house of tho departed priest, was heard in reality in the pockets of the living mason. Ho lived in wealth, gave liberally to tho church, and revealed his secret (ndy at his death to his son and heir. 4. After tho trick which Haroun al Raschid had played upon him, Abou Hassan resolved to play a trick upon tho Caliph. He pretended to bo dead, and sent his young wife to tho Sultana t«) announce the sorrowful fact. Z»)beido expressed her grief and gave her favourite money for his fmioral expen.ses. When she came back Abou Hassan protended that she w.is dead, and went to the Caliph to tell him of his trouble. The Cali|ih exprt'ssed his sorrow and gave him money to pay the expenses of her fum-ral. The Caliph then went to Zobeido and told her of tho death of tho brid- <if Abou Has.san. "Tho Bride!" cried /obeidc, "you mean the Uridegrooni, Caliph ;" "No, I iiu'au the bride," answered Hiiroun, "for Aliou lliif<'<.in has ju.st left .lie." " That r;innot be, sire," retorted /obeide, "for not an hour ago tlu bride was here announcing his «li';ith." To settle this p(»int the chief eutnich w.»s sent to learn which was dead; Abtm, who wiw him ccmiing, got the bride to preti-nd to be dead, and sat ;it her head groaning, so that the tunuch returned and Sfiid timt the bride was dead. The incredulous Zobeidc sent her nurse to make sure. Upon her ai)proach, Abou Hassan pretended to be dwul, and lua ti I H2 NARRATIVE COMPOSITIONS. l>rido wuiled over her loss. Tlie inirse of coiu'so c-outiiulicted the I'oport of the eunuch. So Caliph, Sultana, eunuch, and nurse, all went to learn the facts. They found both apparently dead. The Caliph exclaimed '"l would give a tlioii- sand pieces of gold to know which died first;" whereupon Abou Hassan cried, "Commander of the faithful, it was T who died fix\st." The Calii)h, perceiving the trick, nearly died of laughter, and the jest proved a small fortune to Abou Hassjin. 5. Once tJiero was a semi-barbaric king who had a peculiar method of trying alleged criminals. He had a great arena round which the assembled pojtulace were seated, and on one sides of which was a throne. The accused entered the arena by a door. ( )pposite him were two other doors^ one of wliich ho niust open. From one of the doors would enter a hungry tiger certain to tear him to pieces, from the other, a ]>L'autiful lady who would at once become hia bride. Ho must either be di>omed or married, there was no other way. Now, the king had a daughter ; and a courtier by no means her e(|ual, had fallen in love with this princess. His majesty learned of this atl'air, and cast the youth into prison. A day was appointed for his trial in the arena. The worst of tigers and the faii-est of ladies, not the princess, were chosen to respond to the opening of the doors. The day arrives. All are expectant. The princess is near the throne. She has by secret intluencu learned which door will reveal the tiger, which the lady. The culprit appears in the arena. The princess makes a motion by which he alone learns which door she W(juld have him open. But wiiich door is it ^ 0. There was a young lieutenajiit in an Ekiglish regiment. His family had been rich but now his fatiier wiit, dejul ami they had hard work to keep uj) ap{»earances. At a great dinner given by the (^olonel t he young officer secreted in his pocket some tlelica«Mes for his mother. .\n honoured gurst lost a vahiable jewel. All l>ut tlie lieuleiiant con- sented to be searched. He was uiwcniced. TJie j*'Wel was afterwarda fiiund in a cup ot coffee. The iui. uumt n^ceived amcmis frnm his HUperior oHicers, and finally expiiuned hit^ pliglit coulidt iti.illy to thu Colnlttd. 7. An Austrian officer after a severe illness, to all api)earanc»'« died. He was buried in a cemetery wlmre many us«-d to resort on Sundays, Tlu: Siuiday after his liurial sounds wen- l>«>,»r»i tliniu'di the pomua eartli of the new grave. The officer was j"«»ture«l t" tlay light and linallv to Iiealth, th to th it! bi re vi In STORIES. 83 8. Two boys at boarding-school inufc at night in tho room of one of thoni to enjoy some cakes and confectionery. The visiting boy was passing to his room when he was horrified at seeing the heid-master coming down thu h.-.ll. Being desperate, he pretended to be walking in his sleep. The head-master waked him and gave him some kind advice. 9. A man invented a wire which when attached to any object reduced its weiglit to any desired degree. Tlie man became rich and powerful ; but his inventi<m ruined him and perished with him. 10. A negro bade his little girl shut the door— she did not obey ; after repeatedly commanding her he struck her. Then he slammed the door violently. The child was not startled. He learned that a recent fever had left her quite deaf. ■ ^1 DIALOGUES. 86 CHAPTER VI. DIALOGUES. MODELS. T — Shylock's Loss of his Daug-hter.— Skylark. How now, Tul)al ! wliat news from Genoa? hast thou found my dau<;ht(!r 1 Tubal. I often came where T did hear of her, but cannot find her. Shylock. Why, there, there, there, there ! a diamond gone, cost 5 me two thousand ducats in Frankfort ! The curse never fell upon our nation till now ; I never felt it till now ; two thousand ducats in that ; and other precious, precious jewels, I would my daughter were d(!ad at my foot, and the jewels in her ear ! would she were hearsed at my foot, and the ducats in her coffin ! No news of them?io Why, so : and I know not what's spent in the search : why, thou loss upon loss ! the thief gone with so much, and so much to find the thief ; and no satisfaction, no revonge : nor no ill luck stirring but what lights on my shoulders ; no sighs but of my breathing ; no tears but of my shedding. 15 Tubal, Yes, other men have ill luck too : Antonio, as I heard in Genoa — Shylock. What, what, what ? ill luck, ill luck ? Tubal. Hath an argosy cast away, coming from Tripolis. Shylock. I thank God, I thank God. Is't true, is't true ? ^o Tubal. I spoke with some of the sailors that escaped the wreck, Shylock. I thank thee, good Tubal : good news, good news 1 ha, ha! where? in Genoa? Tubal. Your daughter spent in Genoa, as I heard, in one night fourscore ducats, 25 Shylock. Thou stickest a dagger n me : I shall never see my gold again : fourscore ducats at a sittng ! fourscore ducats ! 66 ^AURAttVE COMPOSITIONS. Tubal. There came divers of Antonio's creditors in my company to Venice, tliat swear lie cannot choose l)ut ])reak. 30 Shylock. I am very glad of it : I'll plague him ; I'll torture him : I am glad of it. Tubal. One of them showed me a ring that he had of your daughter for a monkey. Shjlock. Out upon her ! Thou torturest ine, Tubal : it was ray Sfi tur<|Uoise ; I had it of Leah when I was a bachelor: I would not have given it for a wilderness of monkeys. Tubal. But Antonio is certainly undone. Shylock. Nay, that's true, that's very true. Go, Tubal, fee me an otKcer; bespeak him a fortnight before. I will have the heart of 40 him, if he forfeit ; for, were he out of Venice, I can make what merchandise I will. Go, go, Tubal, and meet me at our synagogue ; go, good Tubal ; at our synagogue. Tubal. [Exeunt. Shakenpearc's "Merchant of Venice." II.— The Return of Rip Van Winkle.— There was, as usual, a crowd of folk about the door, but none that Kip recollected. The very character of the people seemed changed. There was a busy, bustling, disputatious tone about it, instead of the accustomed 6 phlegm and drowsy tranquility. He looked in vain for the sage Nicholas Vedder, with his broad face, double chin, and fair long pipe, uttering clouds of tobacco smoke, instead of idle speeches ; or Van Buramel, the schoolmaster, doling forth the contents of an ancient newspaper. In place of these, a lean, bilious-looking fellow, with his pockets full of handbills, was haranguing vehemently about rights of citizens — election — members of Congress — liberty — Bun- ker's hill — heroes of seventy-six — and other words that were a perfect Babylonish jargon to the bewildered Van Winkle. The appearance of Rip, with his long, grizzled beard, his rusty fowling-piece, his uncouth dress, and the army of women and children that had gathered ai his heels, soon attracted the attention of the tavern politicians. They crowded round him, eyeing him from head to foot, with great curiosity. The orator bustled up to him, and drawing him partly aside, inquired "on which side he 10 15 DIALOGUES. 87 voted ?" Hip stared in vacant stupidity. Another short but busy 20 little fellow jmlled him by the unn, and rising on tipt(je, inquired in his ear, " whether ho was Federal or Democrat." Rip was equally at a loss to comprehend the question, when a knowing, self- important old gentleman, in a sharp cocked hat, made his way through the crowd, putting them to the right and left with his 26 elbows as he passed, and planting himself before Van Winkle, with one arm a-kimbo, the other resting on his cane, his keen eyes and sharp hat penetrating, as it were, into his very soul, demanded in an austere t(mp, "what l)rought him to the election with a gun on his shoulder, and a mob at his heels, and whether ho meant to breed so a riot in the village V •'Alas! gentlemen," cried Rip, somewhat dismayed, "I am a poor, quiet man, a native of the place, and a loyal subject of the King, God bless him !" Here a general shout burst from the bystanders — " a tory ! a 36 tory ! a spy ! a refugee ! hustle him ! away with him !" It was with great difficulty that the self-important man in the cocked hat restored order ; and having assumed a tenfold austerity of brow, demanded again of the unknown culprit, what ho came there for, and whom he was stieking. The poor man humbly assured 40 him that he meant no harm, but merely came there in searcli of some of his neigh))ours, who used to keep about th(^ tavern. "Well — who are they? — name them." Rip bethought himself a moment, and inquired, " Where's Nicholars Vedder V 45 There was a silence for a little while, when an old man replied, in a thin, piping voice, "Nicholas Vedder? why, he is dead and gone these eighteen years ! There was a wotxlen tomb-stone in the church-yard that used to tell all about him, but that's rotten and gone too." 60 " Wliore's Brom Dutcher ?" " Oh, he went off to the army in the beginning of the war ; some say he was killed at the storming of Stt)ny- Point — others say he was drowned in the scjuall, at the foot of Antony's Nose. I don't know , :'? -he never came back again." 66 ,.'^.. IMAGE EVALUATION TEST TARGET (MT-3) // # ,^ .*\ z % 1.0 |_U_ 11.25 150 ^^^ MI^^B ii£ Ui |2.2 •luu 1^ 1.4 — 6" ^ '^ ^ y: 7 Photograiiiic Sciences Corporalion ^ ^\ •SJ >^^^ ^.V' as WBT MAIN STRin WIUTW,N.Y. USM (716)»7a-4S03 ^ <^^ V 88 NA R RA TI VE CO M POSITIONS. "Where's Van Bumme], the schoohiiaster ?' " He went off to the wars, too ; was a great militia general, and is now in Congress." Rip's heart died away at hearing of these sad changes in his home 60 and friends, and finding himself thus alone in the world. Every answer puzzled him, too, by treating of such enormous lapses of time, and of matters which he could not understand : war — Con- gress — Stony-Point! — he had no courage to ask after any more friends, but cried out in despair, " Does nobody here know Rip 65 Van Winkle?" " Oh, Rip Van Winkle !" exclaimed two or three. " Oh to be sure ! that's Rip Van Winkle yonder, leaning against the tree." Rip looked, and beheld a precise counterpart of himself as he went up the mountain ; apparently as lazy, and certainly as ragged. 70 The poor felloe,' was now completely confounded. He doubted his own identity, and whether he was himself or another man. In the midst of his bewilderment, the man in the cocked hat demanded who he was, and what was his name ? " God knows," exclaimed he at his wit's end ; I'm not myself — 75 I'm somebody else — that's me yonder — no — that's somebody else got into my shoes — I was myself last night, but I fell asleep on the mountain, and they've changed my gun, and everything's changed, and I'm changed, and I can't tell what's my name, or who I am !" The bystanders began now to look at each other, nod, wink 80 significantly, and tap their fingers against their foreheads. There was a whisper, also, about securing the gun, and keeping the old fellow from doing mischief; at the very suggestion of which the self-important man with the cocked hat retired with some precipita- tion. At this critical moment a fresh, comely woman passed 86 through the throng to get a peep at the gray-bearded man. She had a chubby child in her arms, which, frightened at his looks, began to cry. " Hush, Rip," cried she, " hush, you little fool ; the old man won't hurt you. The name of the child, the air of the mother, the tone of her voice, all awakencid a train of recollections go in his mind. DIALOGUES. 89 " What is your iiamo, my good woman T asked he. "Judith Gardenier." " And your fatiier's name ?" " Ah, poor man, liis name was Rip Van Winkle ; it's twenty years since he went away from home with his gun, and never has been 96 heard of since — his dog came home without him ; but whether he shot himself, or was carried away by the Indians, nobody can tell. I was then but a little girl." Rip had but one question more to ask; but he put it with a faltering voice : 100 " Where's your mother ?" " Oh, she too had died but a short time since : she broke a blood- vessel in a fit of passion at a New-England pedlar." There was a drop of comfort, at least, in this intelligence. The honest man could contain himself no longer. He caught his 105 daughter and her child in his arms. " I am your father T cried he, — " Young Rip Van Winkle once — old Rip Van Winkle now ! — Does nobody know poor Rip Van Winkle !" All stood amazed, until an old woman, tottering out from among the crowd, put her hand to her brow, and peering under it in his no face for a moment, exclaimed, " Sure enough, it is Rip Van Winkle — it is himself. Welcome home again, old neighbour — Why, where have you been these twenty long years 1" Rip's story was soon told, for the whole twenty years had been to him but as one night. The neighbors stared when they heard it ; hb some were seen to wink at each other, and put their tongues in their cheeks ; and the self-important man in the cocked hat, who, when the alarm was over, had returned to the field, screwed down the corners of his mouth, and shook his head — upon which there was a general shaking of the head throughout the assemblage. ^20 Irving' » "Sketch Book." III.— Sir Fretful Plagriary and the Critics.— Dangle. Ah, my dear friend ! We were just speaking of your tragedy. Admirable, Sir Fretful, admirable! Sneer. You never did anything beyond it, Sir Fretful ; never in your life. 90 NA lilt A TIVE COMPOSITIONS. 6 Sir F. Sincerely, then, you do like the piece ? Sneer. Wonderfully ! Sir F. But, come, now, thei-e must be something that you think might be mended, eh 1 Mr. Dangle, has nothing struck you ? Dan. Why, faith, it is but an ungracious thing for the most part 10 to Sir F. With most authors it is just so, indeed ; they are in general strangely tenacious ; but, for my part, I am never so well pleased as when a judicious critic points out any defect to me ; for what is the purpose of shewing a work to a friend if you don't 16 mean to profit by his opinion ? Sneer. Very true. Why, then, though I seriously admire the piece upon the whole, yet there is one small objection which, if you'll give me leave, I'll mention. Sir F. Sir, you can't oblige me more. 20 Sneer. I think it wants incident. You surprise me ! Wants incident ? Yes ; I own I think the incidents are too few. Believe me, Mr. Sneer, there is no person for whose judgment I have a more implicit deference ; but I protest to you, 2 Mr. Sneer, I am only apprehensive that the incidents are too crowded. My desr Dangle, how does it strike you ? Ban. Really, I can't agree with my friend Sneer. I think the plot quite sufficient ; and the four first acts by many degrees the best I ever read or saw in my life. If I might venture to suggest 30 anything, it is that the interest rather falls off in the fifth. Sir F. Rises, I belie /e you mean, sir Dun. No ; I don't, upon my word. Sir F. Yes, yes, you do, upon my soul ; it certainly don't fall off, I assure you ; no, no, it don't fall off. 36 Dan. Well, Sir Fretful, I wish you may be able to get rid as easily of the newspaper criticisms as you do of ours. Sir F. The newspapers ! sir, they are the most villainous, licen- tious, abominable, infernal — not that 1 ever read them ; no, I make it a rule never to look into a newspaper. Sneer. Sir F. Sneer. Sir F. DIALOGUES. 91 Dan. You are quite right ; for it certainly must hurt an author 40 of delicate feelings to see tlie liberties they take. Sir F. No ; quite the contrary ; their abuse is, in fact, the best panegyric ; I like it of all things. An author's reputation is only in danger from their support. Sneer. Why, that's true ; and that attack, now, on you the other 45 day Sir F. What? where? Ban. Ay ! you mean in a paper of Thursday ; it was completely ill-natured, to be sure. Sir F. Oh ! so much the better ; ha, ha, ha ! I wouldn't have 50 it otherwise. Ban. Certainly, it is only to be laughed at, for Sir F. You don't happen to recollect what the fellow said, do you? Sneer. Pray, Dangle, Sir Fretful seems a little anxious ^^ Sir F. O no ! Anxious, not 1, not the least — I — but one may as well hear, you know. Ban. Sneer, do you recollect? [Aside to Sneer.] Make out something. Sneer. [Aside to Dangle.] I will. [Aloud.] Yes, yes, I re-eo member perfectly. Sir F. Well, and pray now — not that it signifies — what might the gentleman say ? Sneer. Why, he roundly asserts that you have not the slightest invention or original genius whatever, though you are the greatest 65 traducer of all other authors living. Sir F. Ha, ha, ha ! Very good ! Sneer. That as to comedy, you have not one idea of your own, he believes, even in your commonplace-book, where stray jokes and pilfered witticisms are kept with as much method as the ledger of 70 the Lost and Stolen Office. Sir F. Ha, ha, ha ! Very pleasant. Sneer. Nay, that you are so unlucky as not to have the skill even to steal with taste ; but that you glean from the refuse of obscure volumes, where more judicious plagiarists have been before 76 92 NA R RA TIVE COMPOSITIONS. you ; so that the body of }'Our work is a composition of (h-egs and sediments, like a bad tavern's worst wine. Sir F. Ha, lia ! Sneer. In your more serious efforts, he says, your bombast would 80 be less intolerable if the thoughts were ever suited to the expres- sions ; })ut the homeliness of the sentiment stares through the fantastic incumbrance of its fine language, like a clown in one of the new uniforms. Sir F. Ha, ha ! 85 Sneer. That your occasional tropes and flowers suit the general coarseness of your style, as tambour sprigs would a ground of linsey- woolsey ; while your imitations of Shakespeare resemble the mimicry of Falstaflfs page, and are about as near the standard of the 00 original. Sir F. Ha !- Sneer. In short, that even the finest passages you steal are of no service to you ; for the poverty of j'our own language prevents their assimilating, f-o that they lie on the surface like lumps of marl on a barren moor, incumbering what it is not in their power to fertilise. ^^ Sir F. [After great agifation.'\ Now, another person would be vexed at this. Sneer. Oh ! but I wouldn't have told you, only to divert you. Sir F. I know it. I (wi diverted — ha, ha, ha ! not the least in- vention ! ha, ha, ha ! — very good, very good ! 160 Sneer. Yes ; no genius ! ha, ha, ha ! Dan. A severe rogue, ha, ha, ha ! — but you are quite right. Sir Fretful, never to read such nonsense. Sir F. To be sure ; for if there's anything to one's praise, it is a foolish vanity to be gratified at it ; and if it is abuse, why one is 105 always sure to hear of it from some good-natured friend or other? ShciUlaii'n ''Clitic." DIALOGUES. 03 EXAMINATION OF MODELS. Conversations arc often duscriptive, argumentative, f»r expository ; but in novels and dramas they usually serve the purpose of developing tlio story, and in most instances conversations have the movement and method of narration. The importance of a careful study of this form of composition is founded upon two facts, first, that every boy and girl should learn to converse ; and second, that literature makes an extensive and wonderful use of colloquial or conversational English. Between the artificial dialect and wearisome slang of the vulgar story and the speeches of Brutus and Henry V., there is an immeasurable difference, yet both styles are conversational. There is perhaps no form of prose writing in which it is more difficult to excel than in this. The great test of excellence is the reality, the truthfulness, of the effect. The speeches should be just such as the persons to whom they are assigned would make use of in the circum- stances supposed. It retiuires much force of imagination and critical judgment to fulfil these requirements, therefore beginners should attempt to write only such conversations as they frequently hear, and in writing even these, they should exert constant vigilance if they would avoid an unnatural and impossible jargon. There are two contrasted faults common in badly written conversations ; one is the use of slang and buffoonery, the other the use of an affected and mawkish mode of speech. These styles are easy to write, but they are not pleasing to judicious readers. As in other forms of writing, the first thing is to have something worth saying, and the second to say it as clearly and sensibly as possible. But in this form there is the added difficulty of dividing what is to be said among several speakers, and the exact estimation of the manners of thought and expression of each of them. The exercise wisely pursued will cultivate the imagination, broaden the mind by enabling it to take different points of view, and lead to appreciation of important phases of literature. If a character speaks broken or dialectic English, it will be sufficient t) indicate the peculiarity clearly at the outset : after that it will be un- necessary to make use of more than an occasional word to keep fresh the im])ri'ssi(>n of that peculiarity. It will usually be best to begin these exercises by brief sketches of the persons conversing and of their surroundings. Much care must be used IL U4 NARRATIVE COMPOSITIONS. to acquire a Hkilful use of expressions, such as, "said he" and "she replied " : these and similar introductory expressions are needed con- tinually and, if a.vkwardly used, they may mar the jwissage a good deal. If more than two persona take part in the conversation the effect of each speech upon each person must be considered. The entrance of a new character into a conversation will usually have a considerable effect upon the tone of the speeches. The English used in conversation is generally easy and loose. Un- conunon words and carefully balanced or periodic sentences are usually avoided. Conciseness is nearly always a virtue in colloquial English. 1. What are the main characteristics of Shylock ? What are the occur- rences leading to this conversation ? What seems to be the purpose of Tubal in telling the news of Jessica as he does? Observe how the characteristics of Shylock are mirrored in his speeches. Observe the con- cise vigour of his language, and its fitness for the emotions expressed. Observe how markedly the style is conversational as distinguished from bookish. Is the long speech less passionate than the shorter ones 1 Is its structure less broken by passion ? 2. Observe the dexterity with which the author places before us the orator "a lean, bilious-looking fellow," Rip with his "long grizzled beard " and "uncouth dress," the "self-important old gentleman in a sharp cocked hat," the mob of bystanders, so impressionable, excitable, inter- ested in the stranger. It is easy to admire the tact with which Irving makes the speech suit the characters of the speaker, the motives which give rise to it, and the person to whom it is addressed, but this naturalness is the result of much imagination and knowledge of the world. The order in which Rip asks for his old friends and acquaintances is not accidental ; and there is a touch of humour when Rip asks for his wife last and receives a drop of comfort from the intelligence that she had died with complete poetic justice. Observe the terms used to introduce speeches; "Cried Rip," "a general shout burst," "Rip bethought himself a moment, and inquired," "an old man replied, in a thin, piping voice," "he cried out in despair," "exclaimed two or three " ; and so on : frequently no such ex- pression is used because none seems called for. The beginner is likely to use expression such as "said he " and " he replied " to excess. 3. What are the characteristics of Sir Fretful, Sneer and Dangle, respectively ? Observe the tact with which the conversation is distributed among the characters : Sir Fretful is the point of attack, each in turn addresses him, and he replies to each. Though the author gives several valuable lessons concerning envy, plagiarism, mischief- making, touchiness, DIALOGUES. 95 and other matters, he never seems to be didactic, but always keeps before him the idea of writing a natural and spirited conversation. This morlel is worthy of imitation in the points mentioned : in many conversations found in Ijooks, we find the faults of allowing the speaker to monopolize the conversation, of allowing the conversation to become a dull and didactic essay, or series of short essays. Of course the archaic diction and manners of Sheridan's characters are not to be imitated to-day. PRACTICE. Practice List : Write a conversation with one of the following as your topic : 1. Two Boys discuss Poetry. 2. Portia and Nerissa discuss their Adventures. 3. What I overheard in a Street Car. 4. Driving a Bargain. 5. Two Pupils discuss City and Country Life. 6. A Discussion about a Matter of Conduct. 7. Gratiano describes the Trial to a Friend. 8. A child of six enlightens a child of four about Santa Claus. 9. Two men meet after years of separation and dis- cuss their school-days. 10. A small boy makes a bargain with a lady con- cerning a season's contract for shovelling snow. Flan for the first subject : A Conversation on Poetry. 1. How the discussion arose. 2. Brief sketch of each boy. 3. The first boy ridicules poetry. 4. The second replies warmly. 5. The first supports his charges by mentioning worthless poems. 6. They continue the discussion, mentioning many different kinds of poems and poets, comparing poetry with other things, discussing its worth in education and in life. 7. Each makes some concession concerning the extravagance of the first opinions expressed. fe I i II I LETTERS. «7 CHAPTER VII. NARRATIVE LETTERS. MODELS. I.— Adventure of a Kitten and a Viper-.— Olney, August 3rd, 1782. My Dear Friend : It is a sort of paradox, but it is true ; we are never more in danger than when we think ourselves most secure j nor in reality more secure than when we seem to be most in danger. Both 5 sides of this apparent contradiction were lately verified in my experience. Passing from the greenhouse to the barn, I saw three kittens (for we have so many in our retinue) looking with fixed atten- tion on something which lay on the threshold of a door nailed u[). I took but little notice of them at first, but a loud hiss engaged me to lo attend more closely, when, behold — a viper ! the largest that I remem. ber to have seen, rearing itself, darting its forked tongue, and ejacu- lating the aforesaid hiss at the nose of a kitten, almost in contact with his lips. I ran into the hall for a hoe with a long handle, with which I intended to assail him, and returning in a few seconds missed is him ; he was gone, and I feared had escaped me. Still, however, the kitten sat watching immovably on the same spot. I concluded, there- fore, that, sliding between the door and the threshold, he had found his way out of the garden into the yard. I went round immediately, and there found him in close conversation with the old cat, whose 20 curiosity being excited by so novel an appearance, inclined her to pat his head repeatedly with her fore foot, with her claws, however, sheathed, and not in anger, buf in the way of philosophic inquiry and examination. To prevent her falling a victim to so laudable an exer- cise of her talents, I interposed in a moment with the hoe, and per- a formed upon him an act of decapitation, which, though not immediately 98 NARRATIVE COMPOSITIONS. raoiliil, |)iov(3(l so in tlie end. Had lio .sli<l into the passages wliore it in diirk, or had lie, wlien in the yard, met with no interruption from the cat, and secreted himself in any of the outhouses, it is hardly 30 possible but that some of the family must have been bitten; he might have been trodden upon without being perceived, and have slipped away before the sufferer could have distinguished what foe had wounded him. Three years ago we discovered one in the same j)lace, which the barber slew with a trowel. 35 Mr. Bull, a dissenting minister of Newport, a learned, ingenious, good-natured, pious friend of ours, who sometimes visits us, and whom we visited last week, has put into my hands three volumes of French poetry, composeu by Madame Guion. * A quietist,' say you, * and a fanatic ; I will have nothing to do with her.* 'Tis very well — you 40 are welcome to have nothing to do with her • but in the meantime her verse is the only French verse I ever read -hat I found agreeable; there is a neatness in it equal to that which we applaud with so much reason in the compositions of Prior. I have translated several of them, and shall proceed in my translations till I have filled a Lili- 45putian paper-book I happen to have by me, which, when filled, I shall present to Mr. Bull. He is her passionate admirer ; rode twenty miles to see her pictui*e in the house of a stranger, which stranger politely insisted on his acceptance of it, and it now hangs over his chimney. It is a striking portrait, too characteristic not to be a 60 strong resemblance, and, were it encompassed with a glory, instead of being dressed in a nun's hood, might pass for the face of an angel. Yours, W. C. Cowper's Letters. II.— A Journey in a Mail Coach.— Chelsea, Sejitember 5th, 1S36. My Dear Aunt: Now that I am fairly settled at home again, and can look back over my late travels with the coolness of a spectator, it seems to me 5 that I must have tired out all men, women, and children that have had to do with me by the road. The proverb says, " there is much LETTERS. 9d ado when cadgers ride." I do not know precisely what "cadger" means, but I imagine it to be a character like me, liable to headache, sea-sickness, to all the '* infirmities that the flesh is heir to," and a few others besides; the friends and relations of cadgers should there- 10 fore use all soft persuasions to induce them to remaui at home. I got into that Mail the other night with as mucVi repugnance and trepidation as if it had been a Phalaris' b-azen bull, instead of a Christian vehicle, invented for purposeo of mercy -not of cruelty. There were three besides myself when wr started, but 15 two dropped off at the end of the fir.^t stage, and the rest of the way I had, as usual, half of the coach to myself. My fellow- passenger had that highest of all terrestrial qualities, which for me a fellow-passenger can possess — he was silent. I think his name was Roscoe, and he read sundry long papers to himself, 20 with the pondering air of a lawyer. We breakfasted at Lichfield, at five in the morning, on muddy cofiee and scorched toast, which made me once more lyrically recog- nize in my heart (not without a sigh of regret) the very different coffee and toast with which you helped me out of my headache. At 26 two there was another stop of ten minutes, that might be employed in lunching or otherwise. Feeling myself more fevered than hungry, I determined on spending the time in combing my hair and washing my face and hands with vinegar. In the midst of this solacing operation I heard what seemed to be the Mail running its 30 rapid course, and quick as lightning it flashed on me, "There it goes ! and my luggage is on the top of it, and my purse is in the pocket of it, and here am I stranded on an unknown beach, without so much as a sixpence in my pocket to pay for the vinegar I have already consumed !" Without my bonnet, my hair hanging down 35 my back, my face half dried, and the towel, with which I was dry- ing it, firm grasped in my hand, I dashed out — along, down, opening wrong doors, stumbling over steps, cursing the day I was born, still more the day on which I took a notion to travel, and arrived finally at the bar of the Inn, in a state of excitement bordering on lunacy. 40 The barmaids looked at me with " weender and amazement." " Is the coach gone r I gasped out. "The coach? Yes!" "Oh land 100 NABUATIVE COMPOSITIONS. you have let it away without me ! Oh ! stop it, cannot you st(jp it?" and out I rushed into the street, with streaming hair and 45 streaming towel, and almost brained myself against — the Mail ! which was standing there in all stillness, without so much as horses in it ! "What I had heard was a heavy coach. And now, having descended like a maniac, I ascended again like a fool, and dried the other half of my face, and put on my bonnet, and came back " a sadder and a wiser " woman. I did not find my husband at the •' Swan with Two Necks," for we were in a quarter of an hour before the appointed time. So I had my luggage put on the backs of two porters, and walked on to Cheapside, where I presently found a Chelsea omnibus. Bye and 65 bye, however, the omnibus stopped, and amid cries of " No room, sir," "Can't get in," Carlyle's face, beautifully set off by a broad- brimmed white hat, gazed in at the door, like the Peri, who, " at the Gate of Heaven, stood disconsolate." In hurrying along the Strand, pretty sure of being too late, amidst all the imaginable and unim- 6 aginable phenomena which the immense thoroughfare of a street presents, his eye (Heaven bless the mark !) had lighted on my trunk perched on the top of the omnil)us, and had recognized it. This seems to me one of the most indubitable proofs of genius which he ever manifested. Happily, a passenger went out a little furtlier on, 65 and then he got in. My brother-in-law had gone two days before, so my arrival was most well-timed. I found all at home right and tight ; my maid seems to have conducted herself quite handsomely in my absence ; my best room looked really inviting. A bust of Shelley (a present 70 from Leigh Hunt), and a fine print of Albert Diirer, handsomely framed (also a present), had still further ornamented it d'lring my absence. I also found (for I wish to tell you all my satisfaction) every grate in the house furnished with a supply of coloured clip- pings, and the holes in the stair carpet all darned, so that it looks 75 like new. They gave me tea and fried bacon, and staved off my headache as well as might be. They were very kind to me, but, on my life, everybody is kind to me, and to a degree that fills me with admiration. I feel so strong a wish to make you all convinced how LETTERS. 101 very deeply I feel your kindness, and just the more I would say, the less able I am to say anything. • 80 God bless you all. Love to all, from the head of the house down to Johnny. Your affectionate Jane W. Carlyle. " Letters and Memorials of Jane Welsh Carlyle." By permission of the publishers^ III.— Life at Comely Bank.— Thomas Carlyle to Alexander Carlyle, Comely Bank : February 3. Our situation at Comely Bank continues to be unexceptionable nay, in many points truly enviable. Ill-health is not harder on us than usual, and all other things are about as one could wish them. It is strange, too, how one gets habituated to sickness. I bear my 5 pain as Christian did his pack in the ' Pilgrim's Progress,' strapped on too tightly for throwing off; but the straps do not gall as they once did ; in fact, I believe I am rather better, and certainly I have not been happier for many a year. Last week, too, I fairly began — a book. Heaven only knows what it will turn to, but I have 10 sworn to finish it. You shall hear about it as it proceeds, but as yet we are only got through the first chapter. You would wonder how much happier steady occupation makes us, and how smoothly we all get along. Directly after breakfast the good wife and the Doctor* retire upstairs to the drawing-room, a little place all fitted up like a 15 lady's work-box, where a spunk of fire is lit for the forenoon ; and I meanwhile sit scribbling and meditating and wrestling with the powers of dullness, till one or two o'clock, when I sally forth into the city or towardy the seashore, taking care only to be at home for the important purpose of consuming my mutton-chop at four. After 20 dinner we all read learned languages till coffee (which we now often take at night instead of tea), and so on till bedtime; only that Jane often sews ; and the Doctor goes up to the celestial globe, studying the fixed stars through an upshoved window, and generally "Carlyle'i brQthtr, 102 NARRATIVE COMPOSITIONS. 25 comes down to his porridge about ten with a nose dropping at the extremity. Thus pass our days in our trim little cottage, far from all the uproars and putrescences (material and spiritual) of the reeky town, the sound of which we hear not, and only see over the knowe the reflection of its gas-lights against the dusky sky, and 30 bless ourselves that we have neith(!r part nor lot in the matter. Many a time on a soft mild night I smoke my pipe in our little flower-garden, and look upon all this, and think of all absent and present friends, and feel that I have good reason * to be thankful that I am not in Purgatory.' 35 Of society we might have abundance. People come on foot, on horseback, and even in wheeled carriages to see us, most of whom Jane receives up-stairs, and despatches with assurance that the weather is good, bad, or indifferent, and hints that their friendship passes the love of women. We receive invitations to dinner also ; 40 but Jane has a circular— or rather two circulars — one for those she values, and one for those she does not value ; and one or the other of these she sends in excuse. Thus we give no dinners and take none, and by the blessing of Heaven design to persist in this course so long as we shall see it to be best. Only to some three or four 45 chosen people we give notice that on Wednesday nights we shall always be at home, and glad if they will call and talk for two hours with no other entertainment but a cordial welcome and a cup of innocent tea. Few Wednesday evenings pass accordingly when some decent soul or other does not step in and take his place among us ; BO and we converse, and really, I think, enjoy ourselves more than I have witnessed at any beef-eating and wine-bibbing convention which I have been trysted with attending. I had almost forgot to tell you that I have in my pocket a letter of introduction to Jeffrey of the Edinburgh Review. It was sent to 55 me from Procter of London. One of these days I design presenting it, and you shall hear the result. Fronde's " Thomas Oarlyle," By permission of the publisheri. I LETTEM. 103 IV.— Experience on a Jury. — lliomas Carlyle to his mother. Chelsea, February 18, 1841. I had been summoned again under unheard-of penalties to attend a jury trial about Patent India-rubl>er Cotton-cards. Two people from Manchester had a controversy whose was the invention of the said cards. It had cost them perhaps 10,000Z., this contro- 6 versy on a card suit. There were 1 50 witnesses summoned from all parts of England and Scotland. It had been left unfinished last term. That was the reason of the unheard-of penalties for us jury- men, that they might not be ol)liged to begin at the beginning again. The same twelve men did all assemble. We sat for two endless 10 days till dark night each day. About eight o'clock at night on the second day we imagined it was done, and we had only to speak our verdict. But, lo and behold ! one of the jury stood out. We were eleven for the plaintiff, and one the other way who would not yield. The judge told us we must withdraw, through passages and stairs 16 up and down into a little stone cell with twelve old chairs in it, one candle, and no meat, drink, or fire. Conceive our humor. Not a particle of dinner, nerves worn out, etc. The refractory man — a thick-set, flat-headed sack — erected himself in his chair and said, ' I am one of the firmest-minded men in England. I know this room 30 pretty well. I have starved out three juries here already.' Reason- ing, demonstration, was of no avail at all. They began to suspect he had been bribed. He looked really at one time as if he would keep us till half-past nine in the morning, and then get us dismissed, the whole trial to begin again. One really could not help laughing, 25 though one had a notion to kill the beast. ' Do not argue with him,' I said. * Flatter him. Don't you see he has the obstinacy of a boar, and little more sense in that head of his than in a Swedish turnip?' It was a head all cheeks, jaw, and no brow, of shape somewhat like a great ball of putty dropped from a height. I set 30 to work upon him ; we all set to work, and in about an hour after our * withdrawal ' the Hash, I, pulling him by the arm, was got stirred from ' ' ( chair — one of the gladdest moments I had seen for I 104 NARRATIVE COMPOSITIONS. a month — and in a few instants more we were all rejoicing on our road home. In my life I have seen nothing more absurd. I re- flected, however, that really perhaps I had contriljuted to get justice done ; that, had I not been there, it was very possible they would have quarrelled with their * firmest-minded man in England,' and cost somebody another 10,000Z. Froude's " Thomas Carli/le." By permission of the publishers. EXAMINATION OF MODELS. Narratives in letters may be, and usually are, of a freer and less formal type than elsewhere. Literary works are addressed to a number of persons, and, if they are to be successful, must be based on the common stock of mental characteristics. A letter is addressed to a single person, usually well known to the writer, and need only appeal to that indi- vidual — be addressed to his tastes and peculiarities. A letter, then, is not to be so certainly judged on the basis of artistic method. Accordingly, as in History many details are introduced simply because they are true ; so into a letter narratives with no special point, and details of no special significance may enter, because of particular interest in the person addressed. " Write to me everything about yourself," says the fond mother to her son when he leaves home ; all details with regard to him are made interesting through personal feeling ; considerations of artistic unity are here out of place. Yet even in such letters the enjoy- ment of the correspondent is enhanced by a little art in the telling, provided that art be not obtrusive, and be strictly subordinated to natural feeling and impulse. Not only the structure of any narrative in a letter is loose, still looser is the connection of topics. A letter is not a unity treating of a single theme ; the only unity which it has, is given by the relations existing between the writer and the person addressed. Yet there will be some link of association, however remote, in the topics of a letter, and the pleasing writer is likely in some measure to indicate them. Letters vary, as other forms of literature, with their purpose ; so a busi- ness letter should be simple and direct. Tlie friendly letter is the commonest and most typical form. This supplies the place of personal intercourse, and Hhould therefore approximate to conversation. Such LETTERS. 106 a letter may ontain important events of which the details are in them- selves of interest, and here the narrative will be direct and matter of fact. But more often the events will have no special significance ; they ^ill owe their interest to the vivacity of the story, or to the colouring of humor, pathos, etc., which is imparted to them. Such coloring demands literary skill. Everyone has received letters full of news, yet lacking charm ; this means that they were wanting in this purely literary element. As friendly letters take the place of personal intercourse, they should in some measure supjily the elements of such intercourse. Hence, exact details of locality, time, mood of the writer, are usually effective ; they enable the reader to conjure up the correspondent with some of the vividness of reality. Above all, the writer should keep in mind the person to whom he is writing, and write for him only ; the writer who, like Pope and some other distinguished personages, keeps one eye fixed on the general public, inevitably destroys the specific charm of a letter. 1. In composing the letter about the kitten and the snake, Cowper begins by giving utterance to a solemn aphorism in an impressive and epigrammatic style : what does this manner of beginning add to the de- scription of the incident that follows ? Observe how the fact that the description occurs in a friendly letter justifies an elaborate account of this trifling incident ; in no other form of composition could so great a man indulge this playful style with a result so charming. What continuity exists between the second and the first paragraphs? This extract is characterized by a quiet, easy, unpretentious humour. Show how the author's humorous bent has suggested certain phrases and words. Make an enumeration of tlie striking examples, explaining the special effect of each p' -e or word enumerated. Account for the formal construction of the first sentence. For what sort of incident would such an introduction naturally prepare the reader ? 2. Note how charming a letter this is even to us to whom it is not addressed ; yet the matter it contains is very commonplace. It owes its charm to its literary skill — to the vivacity and humour which Mrs. Carlyle throws into it. What is the relation of the first paragraph to the remainder of the letter? — of the second? What purpose gives tone to the narrative contained in the third paragraph ? This narrative is told with remarkable skill. Point out its merits. Note abruptness of transition from second to third paragraph. Note, too, that this abruptness is partly accounted for by special knowledge of circumstances on the part of the person to whom the letter is addressed. Observe at the close of the third paragraph, the graceful turn of feeling towards the person addressed. 106 NARRATIVE COMPOSITIONS. 3. This letter is devoted to one of the commonest themes of friendly correspondence — the manner of life of the writer — but rarely is the sub- ject so well treated as here. Note how easy and natural are the transitions from one point to another ; there is but one break, — at the beginning of the last paragraph. Can you gather anything of the mood and character of the man from the letter ? Examine these points in detail. 4. This is only part of a letter, and might perhaps have been placed more properly among the "Personal Incidents." It is perfectly natural, as a letter ought to be ; it was evidently written spontaneously, without conscious art, yet Carlyle's skill stands him in good stead, and the extract is a masterly piece of description. Observe that there is an introduction, a narrative exciting suspense and leading to a climax, and a conclusion. What is the effect of the introduction? — of the conclusion? In what mood is tlie letter written ? Point out any element which makes it picturesque — dramatic. PRACTICE. Practice List: Write a letter in which you dwell chiefly on one of the following topics : 1. An Average Day of my Life. 2. How I spent my Holidays. 3. A Visit to the City. 4. A Visit to the Country. 5. Trouble at School. 6. A Drive across the Country. 7. Illness and Convalescence. 8. A Visit from my Cousin. 9. An Experience at a Social Gathering, 10. On the sad Death of our old Dog. LETTERS. 107 Flan for the first letter: 1. When I usually rise. 2. A scramble to get to School. 3. Just before the nine o'clock bell rings. 4. Prayers. 5. Lessons. 6. Recess. 7. Noon. 8. Afternoon. 9. Sports. 10. Tasks. 11. The Evening Meal. 12. Home-work. 13. Bed-time. BY PUPILS. 109 CHAPTER VIII. NARRATIVE COMPOSITIONS BY PUPILS. I. — Jea.nne d' Arc- — in tho North-East of France, on the borders of Champagne and Lorraine lived a poor peasnnt girl, Jeanne d' Arc, who afterwards was the heroine of that wonderful rescue which has been made famous by song and story. The girl was only eighteen years of age, and spent her time in tending her father's sheep, and being so much alone, she 6 would often think with sorrow of the miserable state of her country. From this she came to beUeve that she saw the Archangel Michael in visions, commanding her to go to the Dauphin, promise to lead him to Orleans and then to the old crowning place at Rhiems and there to see him crowned king of France. She remembered the old prophecy that a lo maid from the borders of Lorraine should rescue France. In spite of the remonstrances of her friends she at last succeeded in reaching the Dauiihin. Chai-les, on hearing of her arrival determined to test her kjiowledge, so told one of his friends to pretend that he was the dauphin. This deception proved useless, however, for the maid went at 15 once to Charles who stood apart from the one who pretended to be the prince, though she had never seen him. This point was in her favor and partly convinced Charles of the truth of her story. After questioning her and satisfying himself of her honor he consented to allow her to lead ten thousand men-at-arms to the relief of Orleans. Jeanne placed herself at 20 their head and with the French banner waving over her head and clad in white armor she lead her men through the English troops. Although wounded herself in the action, she raised the siege of Orleans. The Eng- lish regarded her as a witch and could not think that a young girl could ac- complish that which an army had failed to do, while the French looked on 25 her as a messenger from Heaven. After taking Orleans she proceeded to Rheims, where Charles was crowned. Then Jeanne wished to return to her home but Charles would not consent, so she fought on, as bravely ag before, but without her former confidence of success. At Compeigne in 1430 she was captured by the Burgundians, who sold her to the English, 30 without Charles even offering a ransom for her. The English council gave up their prize to be tried at Rouen, charging her with heresy, and no NARHATrVE COMPOSITIONS. boforo ftu ecclesiastical court she was sentenced to be burned alive, on May 30th, 1431, 35 To the end Jeanne asserted that her visions were of God and that she was innocent of the crime with which slie was charged. As the flames leapt about her, her head fell forward, and with the name of Jesus on her lips, the maid died as bravely as she had lived. On the si)ot where she died, in the market place of Orleans, a statue 40 has been erected to her memory. II. — A True Story. — They were the sweetest pair of eyes I had ever seen. She sat opposite me in the coach from M to T talking to and smiling down upon a little boy whom I took to be her little son. I had thrown myself into the coach feeling very much depressed, my mind 5 filled with gloomy thoughts of Simpson and the two thousand I had lost by his failure. It would not aflfect my yearly income of fifteen thousand, it was true, and yet the loss of money always affects a man unpleasantly and tends to make him take a gloomy view of life and, if the fault of the loss lies with others, an uncharitable one of his fellow men. What right 10 has a man to risk another man's money and lose it as ho had lost mine. Indeed he should wait a long time before I would sign the certificate of the creditors thus enabling him to go on with his business. Such men are better out of business. When the coach reached T she got out with the little boy and I 15 heard her ask the driver how far it was to Fairfield and when the coach going there would start. He answered that it was eight miles and that there would be no coach till Monday morning. It was now Saturday afternoon. Then she would have to walk, she said. At this I stepped for- ward and offered to take her in my carriage. There woiUd be room 20 enough and I passed the gate of Fairfield on my way. And soon we were bowling along in the beauty of the June weather. Life seemed to lose, somewhat, its gloomy aspect for me as I rode along with that quiet, tender face beside me and the smiling, peaceful sky above. She ques- tioned me about the master of Fairfield, had never seen him, she said, 25 but had heard that he was a hard man. Did I know him ? Was what they said of him true ? To all her questions I muttered vague, indefinite answers which could enlighten her very little as to the character of this dreaded acquaintance she was about to make. After a while she sank into silence which was broken only by a gentle answer to some eager ques- 30 tion of the child who seemed lost in a sense of the vastness of the world. I let her down at the gate at Fairfield and watched her walk on up under BY PUPILS. Ill tho elma and firs towards the stately old house with its white walls and grceu shiittoi's. I then drove round to the side gate and entered the house just as the servant came to say there was a lady in the drawing room desiring to see me. When I entered the room she stjvrted up in 35 wondor and concern to find that I was the master of Fairfield to whom she liiul spoken so disrespectfully of himself. I quieted her fears and then she told me her business. She was Mrs. Simpson and had come all tho way from M to entreat me to sign the certificate which would enable her husband to continue his business. All the creditors had signed 40 but me. Need I say that I not only signed the certificate but advanced Simpson a few thousands to tide him over the present difficulty. But all that happened over twenty years ago and now when busincis calls mo to M 1 am always sure of a kind welcome at the Simpsons' princely home which is one of the brightest and happiest homes I have 45 ever seen. H- -, Tuesday 15th. III.— Flat Burglary. My Deak Jack : — I rather expected to have a note from you telling of your safe return to Toronto but of course you've been too busy to write. It was nearly two o'clock when 1 reached home after the party, but as you will learn it 5 was much later before I got to sleep. You have never seen the house we are living in now. Well it is at the top of Bell's hill about half a mile out of the town and is surrounded by what we call Green Bush. The gate is a hundred yards from the road, and altogether the house is very much cut off from civilization. The house is very large and rambling, with a 10 heavy porch in front. As I reached the porch that night I stood looking through the pines at the river gleaming in the moonlight a mile or two below and was impressed by the wierd beauty of the scene. The bushes on the lawn threw rather uncanny shadows on the grass and suggested hiding places for fawns or dance circles for fairies. What dancing we had I6 that night Jack ! My room is just at the head of the front stairs. I got to it quietly and shutting the door threw oflf my coat and sat in an easy chair at the open window looking at the sky and at a cemetery on a distant hillside. You know how a fellow feels after a dance, I was far from sleepy, as 20 Sir Walter says I was "analyzing my feelings," when suddenly I heard a most suspicious noise in the hall below. I thought of burglars immedi- ately. The doora and windows at the back of the liouse are far from 112 NA RRA Tl VE tVMPinSiriONS. being proof ngaiiiHt those gentry and as none of the liousohold slept down- 25 Ntairs 1 was not long in concluding that we were attacked by them. I crept to the door to listen. What was my horrer at hearing distinct thotigh muffled steps on the staircase ; step by step, step by step, the mis- creant was coming up towards the bend, which is within ten Kteps of the upper hall. I thought of my mother and my little sister : I was angry 30 when I thought how they might be terribly alarmed, possibly killed. I confess too that I was frightened somewhat— you can readily believe that a fellow doesn't view the prospect of being assassinated in the dead of the night with feelings of joy or even of equanimity. I was not at all anxious to earn fame in the newspapers by overcoming the scoun- 36 drel and delivering him to condign punishment. My chief thought was to get rid of him at the slightest cost of peril and disturbance. Some burg- lars will run the moment they know they are observed. Knowing this I coughed gently but significantly — the steps ceased : I coughed again a trifle louder — my heart was thumping violently: the footsteps began to descend 40 slowly and cautiously, step, step, step, till presently all was still. I moved softly back to the window considerably disturbed by what had occurred and still listening attentively. I had an impulse, but lacked the courage, to light the lamp and go down to investigate. In my hesitation I lit the lamp, a very heavy bronze one with a figure of Hercules support- 45 ing the bowl, and made a pretence of reading the G-rapMc. Hardly had I glanced at the first picture when I heard the steps reascending ; I went swiftly to the door — yes, the wretch was coming up and more quickly than before : evidently he was a desperate villain determined to succeed in his design whether by stealth or force. He was at the bend, another 60 step, another, — I made for the lamp, seized Hercules by the waist and with a wild notion of hurling it lighted at his head, I threw open the door. My mind was a whirl of fear, anger and reckless courage ; at first I could see nothing, then as the moon gleamed through the hall window I saw the rapidly vanishing legs — and tail — of an enormous gray cat ! You can im- 66 agine my subsequent feelings better than I can describe them. I don't believe I was cut out for a warrior, though I came near reversing the story of Alcides and Lichas. The next time you come to H-^^^ I shall expect you to stay longer than a few hours and to stay with me. Let me hear from you when you have 60 a few minutes to spare for writing to Your friend 0. S. BY PUPILS. 118 IV.— Overheard on a Street Car.— Tho King stroot cur stopped at Lee Avenue which runs to Kuw IJeiich. As this was tlio end of tho jine all tho passengers were getting otF and a host of more or less weary- louking people returning to the city from tho lake shore were waiting tho opportunity to scramble into their places. "Wjvit a moment till the 5 people get oS, there is no hurry, the car stops here," said tho conduct«)r. But in spite of tho advice of that superior person there was a general rush, and women and children crowded in from the o-nd of the car. *' Hero's a seat for you and Johnny, Grandma," said a little girl about nine years old wh(> had a large bunch of Howers and a small covered 10 basket in ono hand, and was leading a small boy by the other. " No, keep that f(jr your mother " said a comfortable-looking woman of about fifty years of age, armed among other things with a couple of umbrellas, a larg basket which seemed to contain ferns and " roots," instead of the dinner which had been brought in it. "Where's Johnny?" asked aiB young woman coming in with a baby in her arms. "We are all here," and at tho same moment the bell sounded twice and the car sttirted. " Now, have we everything?" said Grandma, " whore's the little basket, and the pail and the umbrellas." *' I have the little basket and tho flowers and Johnny has tho pail — Did you put in the cups and the knife. Grand- 20 ma ?" "Didn't I toll you to put them in ? " " But I forgot and you have them, haven't you grandma ?" " Oh ! look, grandma," says Johnny, " I wonder if I could hold the Baby on a bicycle like that," but the car which had stopped at tho sound of the ding, started again, and so grandma hadn't time to see just how the baby was held. 26 "I know why the bell says dhig twice, sometimes, do you? Johnny" *' Of course, ding la to stop the car and ding-ding means to go on again ; I guess you don't know what it means when it says that ever so many times> though, do you ? " " That's just to got up steam " " Well ! it isn't then, that means for the waggons and loads of hiiy and everybody to get off the 30 track or they'll bo run over." " I d<mt believe it." " Well it is, and you can ask (Jrandma if you dont like to believe me ! " **Sh ! Sh !" comes from Grandma, " I wont take you on the cars any more, if you can't behave better. Johnny, dont tease your sister, you ought to know bettor, now be quiet. " 35 The conversation was carried on in whispers for some time and the car was in a state of partial quietness when suddenly Grandma says ' ' Now you had better begin to get the things ready to get off for this is Yonge Street and we will soon be there. Johnny, you take this and this too. Now we are all ready : you have your bag of course," turning to the ^ woman with the Baby which was now sleeping soundly. 114 NARRATIVE COMPOSITIONS. The look of horror immediately pictured on her face m.ade quite un- necessary the accompanying "Oh ! dear me, I never thought of it and my purse, and what will I do ? Will we go back ?" "I told you to see you 45 liad everything — I dont see what makes people so car(»less about things like that." The young woman began to get the passengers to move for " perhaps some one is sitting on it." The Baby is now awake and adding its voico to the general confusion — "Charlotte Street," "Charlotte Street, 50 ma'am '' called the Conductor, id to save further disturbance grandma says "Look here, Jinny," and held up a black shopping bag. " I have it but I thought it would just be a good lesson to you to look after your things." The Conductor helps them down and the passengers smiled, looked 55 relieved and hope they now " have every thing ". V. — Mathi&S. — The house stands all alone. Around it the cold wind hurries and sweeps in fitful eddies, curling the snow into wierd figures, but the man inside, the sole occupant of the room, seems uncon- scious that the house trembles from time to time when a more powerful 5 gust strikes it. He is sitting by the blazing fireplace; his head bowed, and his eyes fixed on the flickering flames ; and as he gazes, in his fancy sees himself and family turned from their home upon the world. Mathius is in trouble. For a long time the kiln which Mathias owned had not been paying, 10 and though he had so far managed to support his wife and daughter, and provide a comfortable home for them, it seemed as though the time had at last come when he must yield up all. And now as he gazes, one form, more wierd and awful, seems to grin at him for a moment, flickers, and passes up the chimney, — but hark ! sleigh-bells in the distance ! Soon 15 they become more distinct, and in a moment more, the snow on the door- step creaks under the hurried footsteps of the new-comer. " Certainly sir, come in ! " The stranger — a tall dark man, wearing a long cloak enters on the invitation, and hurriedly throws off" his cloak, then a great belt, which as it strikes the table, rings of gold coins. Mathias 20 starts : is it not gold he needs most of all just now ? He gets the stranger what ho requires, gives hin; the directions about the way in a kind man- ner, but his mind is cairying on an awful contest. Could he not get possession of that gold? He could easily intercept the stranger on the road, but he might be armed ! A hurried exciise of going for firewood 26 gives him a moment to search the stranger's sleigh, — No' nothing with BY PUPILS. 115 ^ which he might defend himself ! Would he murder the man ! Oh dread- ful thought ! No ! Yet he must get that gold ! The stranger leaves, and now he must act soon or not at all. His eye falls upon his axe : would it do the deed ? Quickly throwing on his coat he seizes the axe and hurries out. 80 Yes, he is coming ; the bells sound in the distance, and Mathias pre- pares hinuself. Suddenly the horse appears on the clear snow : Mathias runs forth, reaches the sleigh and demarids the money. The stranger shouts to his horse but Mathias is too quick to be eluded, and pulling with all his strength, jerks the stranger from the sleigh, and the horse 35 dashes off. Did the heavens ever behold such a fight for life ? Mathias fights like a madman, and though his opponent is powerful, he throws him to the ground and now — his axe ! Where is his axe ! He finds it at his side, and as the stranger attempts to rise, he strikes him a crushing blow. His victim fidls, and the white snow is stained with the warm, jg flowing blood. Hiirriedly he loosens the cloak and with trembling hands unfastens the belt. At last he has got it ! Here surely is relief ! But his victim, what can he do with him ? A hurried glance and his fevered brain has an idea. He will bury the body in the kiln, which is near by ; the snow is falling fast and none of the tracks will ever be discovered. He 45 tivkes his axe, and straining himself, raised the body and carried it to the kiln. The firo was still burning, and adding some fuel, he raised the body and cast it into the blazing tire. Fifteen years, have passed now, and the mysterious murder of 'Kovesky* is seldom spoken of, except as an instance of the deepest cunning on the part 50 of the perpetrator, whoever he was, for as yet he has never been found. The only clue ever fouad was the cloak, which had fallen from the victim, and through this several had been arrested on suspicion, and one confined for fifteen mcmths, but never for a moment did the friends of Mathias think that it was he who did the deed. Mathias alone knew that, but oh 66 how well he knew it ! There was no sudden display of acquired wealth around the home of Mathias. Mathias wont on in much the sjime way as of old : the only dif- ference wiis in Mathias himself, and what a difference ! Conscience may be murdered by a slow process, but when only over- 60 come momentarily will arise again and assert hersulf ia all her awfulness : so it was with Mathias. In the midst of his sleep he would be wakened by the ringing of sleigh-bells in his ears. Even in the day-time he would often ask if others around did not hear the bells, ])ut they only rang in the ears of his conscience. As he grew oldur he became more terrified lest he ^ 116 NAHRATIVE COMPOSITIONS. might reveal his awful secret ; he took a separate room, but in vain did he try to shut out conscience ; she would conquer ! 70 There ! he carefully locks his door ; surely no one could hear him if he did speak. He lies down to sleep. How quickly his mind forms a pic- ture of the scene he drefvds and fears most of all ! There, he is on trial for murder. Under the influence of a mesmerist ho confesses all and is ccmdemned to de.ath. Confined for a short time, the day on which he must 75 die has come. They lead him out, the service is read : now ho feels the rope around his neck — he is choking ! An awful cry escapes him and his family rush to his aid. Now he is awake, his hand upon his throat to tear away that imaginary rope. He is choking ; he stumbles, and falls, — dead ! EXAMINATION OF COMPOSITIONS. 1. This composition is by a child in the lowest form of a High Scliool. Of course it follows the hi3tt)ry without any attenipt at originality. A good, clear plan would have done much to make the general effect better. The long second paragraph should have been divided into throe ; (1) the maid i)f(M'laims her mission; (2) the maid'is gici'n a commdud; (3) the maid is 'iinfjratcfidhj treated. Then would follow naturally, the maid's sad fate, and, finally, Iioio the maid is remembered. In some instances the sentences lack clearness of effect on account of a clumsy management of details ; observe for example the second and third sentences : the proportions intended are somewhat as follows : Uidil Jeanne ivas eighteen she was engaged in tending her fatlier's sheep, and in the leisure of this solitary employme}it the girl reelected much '\(pon the miser- able coiuiition of her native Umd. TJicse reflections had a remarkable effect upon her imaginative mind; she came to believe that she had visions in which the Archangel Michael appeared and commanded her to go to the Danphin, to promise to lead him victoriously into Orleans, ihetwe to Rheims, tJte ancient cronndng -place of the French Kin^s, ami there to croicn him King «/ Fnvnce. The lack of smooth continuity arises partly from the endeavour to men- tion all the details given by the history without a due sense of tlieir rela- tive importance. The second paragraph becomes clear after a few slight changes : In spite of the remonstrances of her friends, Jeanne at last reached the camp of the Dauphin. Charles ivas curious cm to the sincerity of her miasiou. He determirtied tQ teat tliie aoundmaa of her kmwlcdyef and to Utat BY PUPILS. 117 end he caused one of his nobles to personate himself. But Jeanne, though she had never seen the Dauphin, passed by the pretended Dauphin and ad- dressed herself to Charles, who was standing near. Neiarly every sentence needs rearranging for clearness or proportion. Her success in this trial partly cmivinced the prince of the truth of her story. After questioning her and satisfying himself of her honour, he consented to alloiv her to lead ten thousand men-at-arms to the relief of Orleans. Jeaitne, clad in ivhite armour, placed herself at tlieir head, and advancing under the folds of the French bann^er she led her men triumphantly through the English troops. Many of the errors wliich mar the effect of this composition would have been avoided if the writer had thoroughly digested, some time before writing, all the history says of Jeanne and had then written without looking at the authorities. The word Rheims is misspelt once ; also " lead " is written for led, after the analogy, doubtless, of read. There appears to be no notion of paragraphing ; this is usually the case where no definite plan is followed. There is no conscious arrangement of the parts of the piece, but the time-order has, as always in narration, preserved coherence, in a general way. 2. This amusing incident is told as a true story by a pupil, but as it is written in the first person and the narrator is a man of some business ex- perience, we may fairly conclude that the true story contains a large share of imagination. The chief merit of the story is the buoyancy in the parts where the writer pretends to be depressed and uncharitable, and a quiet humour which pervades the whole piece and makes the denouement a gratification of the judgment rather than a mere surprise. In this essay tliero is distinctly noticeable the air of the professional story-writer ; everything goes with a smoothness and certainty which shows familiarity with a fluent style of narration. There is none of the modern air of realistic veracity in choice of names, in touches of actual conversation, or in that conscientious phrasing which puts truth of im- pression above rhythm of language. The writer should study the stories of Henry James and William Dean Howells. Tlio word sweetest occurs in the first line. Shakespeare says : " Part- ing is such sweet sorrow," but in prose the word should rarely be used. 3. Young men who write in high literary style about dancing and moonliijht and ad venturer, with burglars should not spell weird and horror^ 118 NAPRATIVE COMPOSITIONS. "wierd" and "horrer." There is some skill displayed in the manage- ment of the mystery here, but the wliole incident is made too much of and protracted so tediously that even the freedom of the friendly letter can scarcely excuse it. 4. This composition needs punctuation. The conversation which occurs in it is fairly true to life, but it is uninteresting. The whole piece is flat and purposeless, except for the humour, and that is neither laugh- able enough nor novel enough to make it worth reading. Still, it is better that beginners should strive for truth to life than for literary effects, so that it may be regarded as a fairly satisfactory effort. Such expressions as " What will I do ? " may bo suited to the attain- ments of Johnny, but the abominable use of present and past tenses, especially toward the end, is the fault of the writer. 6. This story was written by a pupil after hearing the play, The Bells (founded on the story of the Polish Jew, by Erckmann-Chatrian), read through once by the teacher. The composition shows much judgment and fii'mness in the suppression of unnecessary details. However, it fails at times to reproduce the proportions of the original story, notal)ly in the comparatively hurried manner in which the part played by the mesmerist is told. More than once, too, so much has been left to the imagination of the reader that there is danger of obscurity ; for example, in the last passage, it is not made clear that Mathias is dreaming, or that he dies of apoplexy. There is a serious flaw in the second paragraph, where the writer speaks obscurely of "one form " (meaning the spirit of murder) which passes up the chimney : not only is this hoi)elessly obscure, but even when it is understood that murder is meant, we are in doubt as to how murder was suggested before the gold came to tempt Mathias. Near the end of the fourth paragraph (lines 45-48) the tenses are badly managed. PART II. DESCRIPTIVE COMPOSITIONS. CHAPTER IX. DESCRIPTION. Narration has to do with successions in time, description with co- existences. As language is itself successive, it is naturally adapted to narration, but lends itself less easily to description. Actual things make a single complex impression upon the mind ; at least, in so far as we are conscious, we see them as wholes, not as a succession of details ; in order to be described by language, these whole impressions must be broken up into a series of details, stated one after the other. But the aim of litera- ture is to reproduce, in as far as possible, in the reader the condition of mind of the writer. Hence it is the task of successful description to give these details in such a way that they may easily be re-combined into a whole in the mind of the reader. In order to attain this end, there must be, first of all, selection, for most objects of description are made up of a vast number of details ; pro- duce a multitude of simultaneous impressions. It is manifest that if the writer goos beyond a certain limit in the enumeration of these, the reader's memory will be unable to carry them ; the general effect will be lost ; the unity of the object will vanish in the multitude of minutise. If all details cannot be given, then those must be selected which will be most opera- tive in reproducing the original general effect. We see then the two main requirements in description, as in narration, are : first, a selection of details ; second, such an arrangement of them that they will easily combine into a whole. The selection will be determined by the particular end in view ; for we may have various ends in description ; on the one hand the predominant end may be to give the fullest possible information about the object, con- sistent with clearness ; or, on the other hand, not so much to bring the [119] 120 DESCRTFTTVE COMPOSITIONS. object in all its details before tlio rojuler, as to suggest as vividly as possible, the feelings which the appearance of tlio <)])ject awakened in the breast of the spectator. Between these two extremes, we may have an endless series of descriptions combining these two aims in various proportions. The simplest sort of description is that which aims at giving full informa- tion regarding the object itself. If there is no desire to make a concrete picture, such a description can scarcely be called literary. The police description of a criminal is merely an enumeration of details ; the reporter who sees the prisoner in the dock gives Tewi-r particulars, yet brings before the mind a nuich more vivid conception of tlie man. The non-literary character of tlu) former is evident from tlie fact that it is quite as effective in the form of a list of adjectives and nouns as if it we;^ framed into sentences. Scientific descriptions are of a similar character, except that their subject is not an individual but a class ; the botanical description of a plant is an example. Such descriptions need not detain us ; they do not belong to literature proper, and the only rule to be observed in making them is that the facts should be ascertained, and that they should be arranged in some logical order. There is, however, a kind of literary description which approxi^ .ates to these. For example, an historian wishes to make his reader understand the movements of the opposing armies in a battle. It may bo needful to give a number of details with regard to the ground on which the battle is fought. The historian's desire is to give information, Init information for a definite and limited purpose. This purpose serves to determine the description; numberless peculiarities of colouring, and so on, which present themselves to the eye of the spectator, will be of no conse- quence for the understanding of the battle. Tims the literary principle of selection is introduced. The principle of iniity nnist also be regarded. For it is not sufficient th.at there should be a mere enumerati(jn of par- ticulars, e.g. that there was a morass on the field of battle, a ridge of high ground, a thick wood. Wo must undei-stand the relative situation jf these ; they must be combined into a whole ; a plan is therefore fsential. Some comprehensive outline must bo brought before the mind, and a certain vividness imparted to this atul to the details with which it is filled out, in order that the whole may be stamped upon the reader's memory. Carlyle's description of Silesia (p. 123) should be examined as an illustration of these remarks. The qualities of most objects of description arc very numerous ; and to give an approximately complete picture of the object demands the mention of very many of them ; for the reader to piece them again into a whole, DEHCRIPTION. 121 ii even when arranged in the most skilful way, is very laborious. Hence it is a familiar fact that long descriptions are likely to be skipped in reading. Most authors recognize this, — recognize that to give a complete picture of an object is rather the work of the draftsman and painter. Accordingly, description in literature rarely exists for its own sake ; it is usually subordinate to some other purpose. As a rule, the writer instead of attempting a complete picture limits himself to giving a vivid impression of those aspects of the ol)ject which are essential to his purpose. Dover Cliff, in the famous passage in Lear, is not described fully, or with the idea of furnishing a complete picture. The course of the drama requires that one aspect of it, its height, should be made vivid to the auditor, and it will be observed that every detail in the passage is calculated for this effect. And so the following from Dickens does hot give a complete picture of a house, but brings out two aspects of it : — v " At length we stopped before a very old house bulging out over the road ; a house with long low lattice windows bulging out still farther, and beams with carved heads on the ends bulging out too, so that I fancied the wlujle house was leaning forward, trying to see what was passing on the narrow pavement below. It was quite spotless in its cleanliness. The old-fashioned brass knocker on the low arched door, ornamented with carved garlands of fruit and flowers, twinkled like a star ; the two stone steps descending to the door were as white as if they had been covered with fair linen ; and all the angles and corners, and carvings and mouldings, and quaint little panes of glass, and quainter little windows, though as old as the hills, were as pure as any snow that ever fell upon the hills." / So the character of a human being is endless in its aspects ; the historian will chietiy seize upon those traits wliich are effective in the historical transactions in which the personage is concerned. Though descrip- tions which aim at some cf)mpletene8s may not be frequent in literature, they form excellent practice for the student, and should often be presented especially in the earlier stages of his work. A description such as that quoted from Dickens forms a natural transi- tion to that species of description already mentioned, in which the aim is not so much to produce an image, complete or partial, of the thing described, as to excite certain feelings to which the thing itself might give rise. This is perhaps the special function of literary description, as con- trasted with the pictorial representations of the draftsman or painter. A ' 122 DEHiCIilPTI VE COMPOSITIONS. I, I I ' I 1 rude plan, or drawing, will give a clearer idea of a scene than an elaborate description. A photograph can furnish details which would be over- whelming in langiifigo. But the exact impression which the scene made on the sjjectator's feelings can perhaps be more adequately and definitely conveyed by words than even by the painting of a great artist. At any rate this element of feeling enters largely into most literary descriptions. They are usually n(jt mere reproductions of external facts, but of these facts as influencing the feelings of the spectator, — giving rise to the sense of beauty, repose, sublimity, etc. These feelings are not directly described, but through the choice of details, through the epithets em- ployed and the general character of the expression, they are conveyed indirectly to the reader. Tako for examjile the famous picture of Edin- burgh in Mannvni (Cant, iv., xxx.), and consider how it differs from an account that would give a clear view of the topography, — such an account as would be necessary for understanding the operations of a siege of the city. When sated with the martial show That peopled all the plain below, The wandering eye could o'er it go, And mark the distant city glow With gloomy splendour red ; For on the smoke-wreaths, huge and slow That round her sable turrets flow, The morning beams were shed, And tinged them with a lustre proud. Like that which streaks a thunder-cloud. Such dusky grandeur clothed the height. Where the huge Castle holds its state. And all the steep slope down. Whose ridgy back heaves to the sky, Piled deep and massy, close and high, Mine own romantic town ! But northward far, with purer blaze. On Ochil mountains fell the rays. And, as each heathy top they kiss'd, It gleamed a purple amethyst. Yonder the shores of Fife you saw ; Here Preston-Bay and Berwick-Law : And broad between them roU'd, The gallant Frith the eye might note, Whose islands on its bosom floot, Like emeralds chased in gold. DESCRIPTION. 123 Not only must the writer determine the eflfect he wishes to produce, he must, further, consider the person on wliom ho proposes to produce tlie effect. In descri{)tion, the personality of the reader is more important than in narrative. If one sots about describing a village in some part of America so as to bring it vividly before the mental vision, the number and cliaracter of the details will vary very much according as the reader is familiar with such villages in general or has seen only English villages. If a descrip- tion is intended for those who are already familiar with a scene, only one or two striking points will bo selected, which will suffice, through links of association, to re-creato the whole. If the reader knows nothing of the scene, some general outline must be laid down into which the details may be fitted, otherwise all will be confusion ; and again these details must be numerous, otherwise the picture will lack reality. The chief difficulty of description, however, lies in the grouping of details. The main principle is that these should be so arranged as to grow together into wholes ; the mind will then grasp a multitude of things as a single unit ; the memory will have one task to perform instead of several. Each portion of the description should afford a concrete picture to which additions will be made, '>r elaboration given at each stage of the description. The meaning of this principle will be made more apparent from the study of the following account of Silesia by Carlyle. " Schlesien,. what we call Silesia, lies in elliptic shape, spread on the top of Europe, pai-tly girt with mountains, like the crown or crest to that part of the Earth ; highest table land of Germany, or of the Cisalpine countries ; and sending rivers into all the seas. " The summit or highest level of it is in the south-west ; longest diameter is from north-west to south-east. From Crossen, whither Friedrich is now driving, to the Jablunka Pass, which issues upon Hungary, is above 250 miles ; the axis, therefore, or longest diameter, of our Ellipse we may call 250 English miles; — its shortest or conjugate diameter, from Friedland in Bohemia (Wallen- stein's old Friedland), by Breslau across the Oder to the Polish Frontier, is about 100. The total area of Schlesien is counted to be some 20,000 square miles, nearly the third of England proper. " Schlesien, — will the reader learn to call it by that name, on occasion ? for in those sad Manuscripts of ours the names alternate, — ifi a fine, fertile, useful and beautiful country. It leans sloping, as we hinted, to the East and to the North ; a long curved buttress of 124 DESCRIPTIVE COMPOSITIONS. I> Mountains (* liiessengebirye, Giant Mountains,' is their best-known name in foreign countries) holding it up on the South and West sides. This Giant-Mountain Range, — which is a kind of continua- tion of the Saxon-Bohemian 'Metal Mountains {Erzgebirgey and of^ the straggling Lausitz Mountains, to westward of these, — shapes itself like a bill-hook (or elliptically, as was said) : handle and hook together may be some 200 miles in length. The precipitous side of this is, in general, turned outwards, towards Bcihmen, Miihren, Ungarn (Bohemia, Moravia, Hungary, in our dialects) ; ai,d Schlesien lies inside, irregularly sloping down, towards the Baltic and towards the utmost East. " For the first thirty, or in parts fifty, miles from the Mountains, Silesia slopes somewhat rapidly; and is still to be called a Hill- country, rugged extensive elevations diversifying it ; but after that the slope is gentle, and at length insensible, or noticeable only by the way the waters run. From the central part of it, Schlesien pictures itself to you as a plain ; growing ever flatter, ever sandier, as it abuts on the monotonous endless sand-flats of Poland, and the Brandenburg territories ; nothing but Boundary Stones with their brass inscriptions marking where the transition is ; and only some Fortified Town, not far off, keeping the door of the country secure in that quarter. "On the other hand, the mountain part of Schlesien is very picturesque ; not of Alpine height anywhere (the Schnee-Koppe itself is under 5,000), so that verdure and forest wood fail almost nowhere among the Mountains ; and multiplex industry, besung by rushing torrents and the swift young rivers, nestles itself high up ; and from wheat-husbandry, madder and maize husbandry, to damask- weaving, metallurgy, charcoal-burning, tar-distillery, Schlesien has many trades, and has long been expert and busy at them to a high degree. A very pretty Ellipsis, or irregular Oval, on the summit of the European Continent; — 'like the palm of a left hand well stretched out, with the Riesengebirge for thumb !' said a certain Herr to me, stretching out his arm in that fashion towards the north-west. Palm, well stretched out, measuring 250 miles; and the cross ways 100."* * Qarhjle's " Fredei-ick the Great," Book XII., Chap. I.— By permismn of the publishers. DESClUPriON. 125 Carlylo having to describe a campaign in Silesia, wishes as a prelim- inary to give liis readers some general idea of the country. Many facts must 1)0 enumerattid, and it is no easy matter to give lit onco the general conception and the details. Note how Carlylo accomplishes his task. lie takes first the most general aspects of Silesia — its shape and its position. It is an elliptic, and a table-land raised above the rest of Europe. To combine these facts into a single concrete image is an easy matter. Then Cai'lylo j)roceeds, in the second paragraph, to define this ellipse by giving its size, and the directions of its axis. Thus far the reader has naturally conceived of the ellipse as lying flat ; in the third paragraph this notion is corrected. It is a sloping plain with its south and west sides tilted up, as it were, by supporting mountains ; the exact contour of this mountain I'ange is made clearer by the comparison with a bill-hook. (We may note, parenthetically, that in long descriptions figurative hmguage is ex- tremely otlbctive when it gives a concrete image to the mind ; for such images are always more vividly conceived, and hence more easily remem- l)erod than less picturesque generalities.) Carlylo has now fixed the main outlines of Silesia on the reader's mind ; in the following paragraphs he l»roceeds to till out this bare outline — to give some idea of the character of the interior. In the fourth paragraph he gives a general characteriza- tion of the surface, beginning at the uptilted side and gohig downwards. In the fifth paragraph he turns back and gives minuter details ; and finally stam]>s once more the general aspect by another very striking com- parison, which simply reiterates in a more vivid fashion the substance of the first two paragraphs. The thing specially to be noted in this passage is that at each stage the writer leaves a perfectly definite concrete jiicture on the mind of the careful reader, but that at each stage that picture is fuller of details than at the previous stjige. The following description from Parkman has a much simpler theme, but has the same merit of clearness. " The cliff called ' Starved Rock,' now pointed out to travellers as the cliief natural curiosity of the region, rises, steep on three sides as a castle wall, to the height of a hundred and twenty-five feet above the river. In front, it overhangs the water that washes its base ; its western brow looks down on the tops of the forest trees below ; and on the east lies a wide gorge or ravine, choked with the mingled foliage of oaks, walnuts and elms ; while in its rocky depths a little brook creeps down to mingle with the river. From the rugged trunk of the stunted qedar that leans forward from the V 126 DESCn I I'TJ I K COMPOS I TIONS. brink, you may drop a plunuimt into tlio river below, where the cat- fish and the turtles may j)hiinly be seen glidin;,' over the wrinkled sands of Uni clear and siialhtw current. The dill' is accessible only from hehind, wIkjh! a man may climb up, n(tt without difHculty, by a steep and i»arrow passage. The top is about an aero in extent." First, the cuntrul object of the scene is i)rosonted, a cliff with a sheer i)rcci2)ico on throo sides. The other elements are grouped about this, — a river in front, a forest on tlie west, a wooded goi'go on the east. The next sentence cniphusizes tho' steepness of the rock in front. The character of the fourth side is then indicated, and finally, the size of the elevation is given. Note that at the first stage the reader has a con- crete picture of a cliff, and thfit at the next stage when the three sides have been described, ho still has a single concrete picture ; and again at the close. When the main aim of a description is to give rather the impression, the feelings which the object arouses, than any definite complete picture of the object itself, the writer should select those details which are most effective in producing the predominant impression, and group the other details about these. The plan in such a case, will not then be determined by the shape or arrangement of the external object, but by the internal feelings of the spectator. As an example of this take Green's description of .^ames I. : — " In outer appearance no sovereign could have jai red more utterly aga^istthe conception of an English ruler v-lrch had grown up under Plantagenet or Tudor. His big head, his slobbering tongue, his quilted clothes, his rickety legs, stood out in as grotesque a con- trast with all that men recalled of Henry or Elizabeth as his gabble and rhodomontade, his want of personal dignity, his buffoonery, his coarseness of speech, his pedantry, his personal cowardice. Under this ridiculous exterior indeed lay no small amount of moral courage and of intellectual ability. James vras a ripe scholar, with a con- siderable fund of shrewdness, of mother-wit, and ready repartee. His canny humor lights up £he political and theological controversies of the time with quaint incisive phrases, with puns and epigrams and touches of irony which still retain their savor. His reading, especially in theological matters, was extensive ; and he was already a voluminous author on subjects which ranged from predestination 1 i DESCniPTION. 127 «> t<>l)iioco. lUit his shrewdness and learning only loft him, in the phrasiMif Hotiiy the F'ourth of France, 'the wisest fool in Cliristen- dom.' " Tho details hero are not orderly, from the oxtornal i)oint of view. The facts arc selected and grouped fnmi the internal point of view, in order to hring before the reader certain aspects of dames' pcrs(mality, which are the important ones for the historian. So tho poet Gray in the f<jllowing accouttt of a walk hy Derwentwater does not outline the :-'„one : hut the details are effectively selected and arranged for the purpose of indicating the predominant tone of the whole, the mood which it seemed to convey. " In the ev(ming walked alone down to the Lake by the side of Crow Park after .sunset, and saw the solemn colouring of light draw on, the last gleam of sunshine fading away on the hill-tops, the deep serene of the waters, and the long shadows of the mountains thi'own across them, till they nearly touched the hithermost shore. At dis- tance heard the murmur of many water-falls, not audible in the daytime, wished for the Moon, but she was dark to me and silent, hid in her vacant inter lunar cave." I IJ ! I NATURAL OBJECTS. 129 CHAPTER X. NATURAL OBJECTS. MODELS. I— The Nest of the Bullfinch.— Once I found a bullfinch's nest in a rosebush. It looked like a pink shell holding four blue pearls. No(l(lin<^ over it hung a rose heavy with dew-drops. The male bullliiich, motionless, stood guard on a neighbouring shrub, like a ilowcr of a/ure and purple. These objects were nnrrored in 5 a glassy pool, with the reflection of a walnut-tree for background, behind which was to be seen the light of dawn. God gave me in that little picture an idea of the loveliness with which He has clothed nature. Chateaubriand's " Ginie du Christianisme." II. — The Mullein in Winter. — Another very fine plant in winter, happily very common in many places, is the great mullein, which, though it does not ecjual the teazle in elegance, far surpasses it in the expression of melancholy ruin. Still it retains some rich, thick, pale, dusty, cottony leaves, between the earth and the black- 5 ened raceme where the pale y(>llow flowers once clustered so gaily in the sunshine, })ut the large outer leaves have faded and lost form, and beconu; n>('!';; Im-owu rags, like the tatters of miserable poverty, drenched by the i-aius t.^ winter, and draggled on the mud of the cold inhospitable eai't h. Of all the plants that grow, the mullein 10 in its decay coukvs nearest to that most terrible form of human poverty wlen the victim hay still, to his misfortune, vitality emtugli for mere existeiice, yet not enough to make existence either descent or endurable. Croups of them will be found together, still strong eij. "Hjii to b(;ar uj against the bitter wind that tears their rags into 15 more pitiable raggcuinc^ss, and flings foulness on their wet and withered leaves, to stick there, like contumely, until they die. Some freshness lingers yet within their folds, like hidden and tender recollections, some softness and a little warmtli, but their misery is like that awful destitution that stands ehjthea in the last shreds and 20 remnants of prospjM-it . lltiitivrtdii'ti " Siilmii Vcai:"—n>i permission of the jmblishers. 130 DESClilPTIVE COMPOSITIONS. i f! r III.— Description of Grasmere.— Just beyond Helen Crag opens one of the sweetest landscapes tliat art avvv attempted to imitate. The bosom of the mountains, spreading here into a broad basin, discovers in the midst Grasmere Water; its margin is 6 hollowed into small bays with bold eminences, some of them rocks, some of soft turf that half conceal and vary the figure of the little lake they command. From the shore a low promontory pushes itself far into the water, and on it stands a white village, with the parish church rising in the midst of it ; hanging enclosures, corn-fields, and 10 meadows green as an emerald, with their trees, hedges and cattle, fill up the whole space from the edge of the water. Just opposite to you is a large farm-house at the botton^ of a steep smooth lawn emb(jsomed in old woods, which climb half-way up tho mountain-side, and discover above them a broken line of crags, that crown the 15 scene. Not a single red tile, no flaring gentleman's house, or garden- walls, break in upon the repose of this little unsuspected paradise ; but all is peace, rusticity and happy poverty in its neatest and most becoming attire. Gray's " Journal of a Tour in the Lakct." IV.— Evenings on the Hudson.— The sun gradually wheeled liis broad disk down into the west. The wide bosom of the Tappan Zee lay motionless and glassy, excepting that here and there a gentle undulation waved and prolonged the blue shadow of the distant 6 mountain. A few amber clouds floated in the sky, without a breath of air to move them. The horizon was of a fine golden tint, changing gradually into a pure apple-green, and from that into the deep blue of the mid-heaven. A slanting ray lingcrcid on the woody crests of tho precipices that over-hung some parts of the ri\er, 10 giving greater depth to the dark -grey and purple of their rocky sides. A sloop was loiteri)ig in the distance, dropping slowly down with the tide, her sail hanging uselessly against th« mast ; and as the reflection of the sky gleamed along the still water, it se'vied as if tl)(^ vessel was suspended in t'.ie air. Irvinij'x " Lt'ijenit of Skt'ini H'l'trv." \ <W NATURAL OBJECTS. 131 v.— A Calm on a Scotch Loch.— Tlu- lake lies si illed in sleep, reliectiiig (^very isle and every tree al(jng the shore, its bright plain dinnned here and there by faint breezes, that remain each in its place with singular constancy, as if invisil)le angels hovered over the waters and breathed upon them here and there. And under the 5 dark mountain what a dark, unfathomable calm ! What utter repose and j)eace ! It is incredible that ever wind blew there, and though but yesterday this shining liquid plain was covered with ten thousani' ci'ested waves, and countless squalls struck it all over like swooping eagles flying from every quarter of the heavtnis, it lies so calmly i^ to-day in its dei'p bed, that on(^ cannot help bilieviag, in spite of all evidence, that thus it has heen from the foundation of the world, and thus it shall be forever and foi-ever ! The hills are clothed with purjjle, slashed with green. The sky is not cloudless, but the clouds move so languidly that their slowness 15 of movement is more expressive of indolence than the uttermost stony stillness. Like great ships on a rippling sea, with all their white sails spread, they float imperceptibly westwards, as though they had eternity to voyage in. Ar.d just under them, in blinding li'jbt, l>t']iold the shining crests of snow ! 20 II amert oil's " A Painter'n Camp." lly permission of tU<' pablishers, ^■■' \ -Outside DorlCOte Mill. — A wide plain, where the broad- vniu Fl< <.-^ hurries on b(^tween its green ])anks to the sea, and the loviOj,' tide, rushing to meet it, checks its passage with an impetuous emorace. On this mighty tide the black shii)s, laden with the fresh, scented flr planks, with rounded sacks of oil-bearing seed, or with the 5 dark glitter of coal, are borne along to the town of Ht. Ogg's, which shows its aged, fluted red roofs and the l)roa(I gables of its wjiai'ves between the low wooded hill and the river brink, tinging the water V it!i a soft pui'ple hue under the transient glajice of this Fcbiaiary sun. -iii away oii each hand stretch the rich pastures and the patch(!s of 10 <iiirk earth, made r(;ady for the seed of broad-levelled green cr-ops, or toucluMl already with tlu^ tint (tf tlu! ten(l(>r-bladed autu)nn-sown corn. There is a remnant still of the last year's golden clusters of beehive ricks rising at intervals beyond the liedger(»ws : and evervwliere tlie hedgerows are studded with trees: the distant ships seem to be 16 ' 132 DESCRIPTIVE COMPOSITIONS. liftiiij,' tlieir masts and stretching their red-brown sails close among the Ijfanches of the spreading asli. Just l)y the red-i'oofed town the tributaiy llij^ple flows with a lively current into the Floss. How lov(!ly the little river is, with its dark, changing v ..Nclets ! Tt seems 20 to me like a living companion while I wander .tlong the hank and listen to its low, placid voice, a,-^ to the voice of one who is deaf and loving. T rememb(;r those lar^ , ing willows. I remember the ston(! bi'idge. And this is Dorlcote Mill. I must stand a minute or two horn on 85 the bridge and look at it, though the clouds are threatening, and it is far oil in tlie afternoon. Even in this leafless tinu^ of departing February it is pleasant to look at it — pei'haps the chill damp season adds a charm to the trimly-kept, comfortable dwelling-house, as old as the elms and chestnuts that shelter it from the northern blast. 30 The stream is brimful now, and lies high in this little withy planta- tion, and half drowns the grassy fringe (tf the croft in front of the house. As I look at the full stream, the vivid grass, the dfdicate l)right green powder softening the outline of the gi-eat trunks and l)ranches that gleam from under the bare purj)!!! boughs, 1 am in love 36 with moistiKiss, and envy the white ducks that are dipping their heads far int(» the water here amtmg the withes, unmindful of the awkward apix'arancc; they make in tlie drier W(»i-ld abo\-e. (Jcurije Eliot's "The Mill un the Floss." — /Jj/i'f/'wiisio/i of the jinlilialicr.i. I EXAMINATION OF MODELS. 1. Make with a pencil a rude sketch of the scene described liy Chateau- briand in the tirst example ; indicate the position of each of the objects mentioned. Where do you imagine the spectator stands with reference to the pool and the rose-bush i Which of the tive senses are directly ajipoaled to hy this description '( Why does ho mention the flower rather than tho leaves of the I'ose-bush ? Even the most beautiful description seems to need some reason for heiny written lieyond mere ])icturesque eft'oct : how does Chateaubriand justify the description of the nest of tho bullfinch i In tho example NA T UIU L iitijnCTS. 13S indicato how the dominant thought or sentiment has selected the details mentioned, from the host of details tliat might have been mentioned, as a magnet would draw iron-filings out of a mixture of iron-filings and sand. Account for the order in which the author mentions the details selected. As the spectator's eye observes the nest, the l)ird, the shrubs, the pool, the trots the sky, he gets " an idea of the loveliness" of the scene ; how does tlie final object of his glance suggest the moral or lesson of the last sentence ? liy comparing the nest and the eggs to a shell and pearls, the authors give us the ideas of preciousness and beautiful tints. " Stood guard" (4) compare this expression with its nearest equivalent. "Like a flower of azure and purple " (5) ; the law of proximity would place this simile immediately after " bull-finch " (4) ; discuss this assertion: what are the points of likeness which justify this simile? The word "clothed" suggests the idea of a kind parent. What qualities, if any, give distinc- tion to this description ? 2. This treats of a very familiar object ; the writer, taking this famili- arity for granted, does not give a full description of the plant ; he only draws attention to certain peculiarities wherein the mullein in winter is unlike the mullein in sunnner. Nor is it his main object to bring the mullein as it is in winter before the reader's eyes ; it is the midlein as the source of certain impressions that is the subject of the description. Note how this is indicated in the very first sentence. Every detail men- tioned iu the second sentence is calculated to produce the intended impres- sion. The third sentence clearly states the moral parallel, and defines more accurately that which was merely indicated in the first sentence. The last two sentences develop the parallel through further picturesque details. 3. Tliis paragraph from Gray's Journal gives a clear general conception of the scene it describes. Note the method. First the introduccory or transitional sentence ; then the most general and characteristic aspect of the scene, — a lake among the mountains. Observe that l)y his method of saying this, lie dotines the scene more clearly ; (Jrasmere is not a tarn overhung by precipices, l>ut an outspread lake in the wide slope of the mountains. Next, the picture is made more definite by outlining the ' hike. Two or three prominent details are then inserted. The final sentence sums up the predominant quality of the scene. 4. Make with a pencil a rude sketch of the scone described by Irving in the second example. From what yuu read hi this i^xt mplu, wlmt do 134 DESCniPTlVB COMPOSITION. I i you gather concerning the following points : — The occasion,, the time, the weather, the colourn, the spectator's point of view and mood 1 Point out any details of description that harmonize with the main spirit of the scene. Is there an appeal to the sense of hearing in the passage ? In describing vast solitudes such as the prairies or the ocean it is sometimes effective to dwell upon the absence of sounds. Is the scene more or less solitary for the mention of the idle sloop ? The first sentence of this passage gives us the si»irit rather than the substance of the description ; is it a fault that the first sentence does not form an abstract of the paragraph ? "Broad disk," compare this expression with great globe; which corresponds most closely with the appearance ? with the fact ? Which expression is more poetical in method, which more prosaic ? Support your view by illustrations. Observe the pleasing rhythm produced by the variety of length in the first tl'ree sentences; also observe the diffuseness of the remainnig sentences. Is the word *' apple-green " true to nature? Ob- serve how the author, perhajis unconsciously, finishes this picture with a dignified periodic sentence. 5. Is it Hamerton's main intantit •^. to give a^ clear picture of the whole scene or certain aspects of it ? On what basis is the division into para- graphs made? What effect does the introduction of the idea of " invisible angels" have ? the introduction of the details in lines 8-10 i 6. This passage is the opening of George Eliot's novel, " The Mill on the Floss. " It does not stiind there mereljr on its own value as a beauti- ful piece of description ; it is intended to give the reader some necessary information with regard to the locality of the story. This purpose impresses a special character upon the description. The describer is supposed to be standing close to the Mill, which is the central scene of the novel. But the writer begins with the distant view first. Note how clearly the various detivils of the scene relate themselves to one another in conse- (^ueiice of the order and method of the writer. The fertile surrounding country, the river, the town, the sea, each of them has its connection with the fate of the main characters, and hence it is fitting that these local relations with the Mill should be understood. Finally the writer comes to the central point, the Mill and its surroundings; she naturally dwells • upon them at some length — a greater length than is indicated in the fragmentary passage quoted above. NATURAL OBJECTS. 135 PRACTICE. Practice List : On one of the following subjects write a composition similar to the examples in the first purt of the chapter : — Autumn Leaves. A Silver Frost. A Sunset Scene. Woods in Winter. The Corner of a Wood. Scene on a Country Road in Midsummer. A Walk in the Country in Spring. A Harvest Scene. Dandelions. A Shady Pool. 1. 2. 3. 4. 5. 6. 7. 8. 9. 10. Plan; A Stretch of the River. 1. The approac by canoe in the afternoon. 2. Sky and water. 3. Banks, hills ; resemblance to a lake. 4. Peace and serenity observed everywhere. 5. An ideal place for camping. Practical Suggestions : 1. In describing natural scenes a point of view should be selected, and the oliject described as seen from that point. 2. If from its extent, or for any other reason, it is advisable that the object should be described from various standpoints, the change of position should always be clearly indicated. 3. In either case the chief danger to be avoided is making the descrip- tion a mere jiiumeration of detsiils. 136 DESCRIPTIVE COMPOSITIONS. 4. To avoid this, bo sure to give the general impression, — the impres- sion which first presents itself to the mental vision when you call a scene to mind before sufficient time has elai)aed for the details to become distinct. In this general impression one of the main features will usually be (a) the general outlines, when the scene itself is the main object of your description ; or (h) a strctng impression of a quality (beauty, repose, colour, etc.) when the main object of your description is to im- part a certain feeling to your reader. 5. In both cases proceed from tlie general to the detailed ; the details, as they are mentioned, ought (<i) to be located in the general outline, or (b) have their relation to the general impression indicated. 6. The details may be mentioned in the order in which they actually stand in the scene, or, better, in the order of their importance, — the more striking points and elements of the scene being mentioned first. 7. Do not confuse the picture by too many details ; the strongest de- scriptions are those which suggest the most, while mentioning the least. 8. Whilst engaged ii: describing details, one has a constant tendency to exaggerate their importance ; correct this by thinking what image of the scene a stranger who had looked upon it, would carry away. 9. It is often convenient, especially in cases where much information about the scene must be given, to sketch tlie general scene from a fixed point of view, then the details whilst pursuing an imaginary walk amongst them. 10. Employ comparisons, and make use of the knowledge of your read- ers ; the most vivid image will often be given by comparing the scene with one known to your readers, and indicating the points of difference. NATURE IX MOVEMENT. 137 CHAPTEU XI. NATUUK IN MOVEMENT. MODELS. I. — A Thunder Storm. — Soon the stars are hidden. A light breeze seems rather to tremble and hang poised than to blow. The rolling clouds, the dark wilderness, and the watery waste shine out every moment in the wide gleam of lightnings still hidden by the wood, and are wrapped again in ever-thickening darkness over which 5 thunders roll and jar and answer one another across the sky. Then, like the charge of ten thousand lancers, come the wind and the rain, their onset covered by i Jl the artillery of heaven. The lightnings leap, hiss, and blaze; the thunders crack and roar; the rain lashes; the waters writhe; the wind smites and howls. For five, for ten, for 10 twenty minutes - for an hour, for two hours — the sky and the flood are never for an instant wholly dark, or the thunder for one moment silent; but while the universal roar sinks and swells, and the wi^e, vibrant illumination shows all things in ghostly half-concealment, fresh floods of lightning every moment rend the dim curtain and leap I6 forth; the glare of day falls upon the swaying wood, the reeling, bowing, tossing willows, the seething waters, the whirling rain, and in the midst the small form of the distressed steamer, her revolving paddle-wheels toiling behind to lighten the strain upon her anchor chains; then all are dim ghosts again, while a peal, as if the heavens 20 were rent, rolls off around the sky, comes back in shocks and throbs, and sinks in a long roar that before it can die is swallowed up in the next flash and peal. Georae (T. Cable's " Bonaventure. II. The Comingr of the Clouds.— At last we gained the sum- mit, I adjusted my telescope and looked around me. In the south, far beyond the remotest hills, the blue Lowland plain lifted itself to the sky. I saw the great expanse of Loch Awe glittering in the bright sunshine. There was not a detail hidden. TJie whole valjey 138 DESCRIPTIVE COMPOSITIONS. was burning and parching, as it luul done for three terrible months, except where the narrow lake lay wasting in its stony beel day by day. But the hour of deliverance was at hand. The isles of the sea 10 were darkened by a gloom of vapor that came heavily over the Atlantic. Shining clouds of silvery brilliance were built like glitter- ing domes on the peaks of the thirsting islands, ready to melt them- selves into numberless streams. The black masses of rain-cloud behind came fast over the sea-encircled mountains, summit after 15 summit was hidden, island after island was ingulfed in the advancing vapors. At last a shred of white mist came whirling over our heads within six feet of us, and was gone with the speed of an eagle in wild flight over the abyss. It was the pioneer of a great army of clouds that invaded the shores of Scothmd beneficently that day. 20 Five minutes afterwards came two other shreds of mist, whirling and tumbling till they dashed fairly against the sharp peak of the mountain, and then gathering themselves together, rushed on to the south. And then the glittering sea became dim, and the sun him- self was shorn of his dazzling rays, and looked through the mist with 26 a round, white face, like the moon's, and that was the last glimpse we had of him ; for in a few seconds the whole ocean of Atlantic vapor was upon us, tumbling and wreathing itself, and tearing and surging with mad velocity, till it overwhelmed the whole chain of tlie Grampians in one deluge of gray mist. Hamerton's "A Painter' g Camp " By permission •/ the publishers. »J* III.— A Snow-storm at Tokio in Japan.— The air had a familiar feeling that January night ; a familiar feeling paradoxically strange in this country I tell you of, where even the winds and the clouds are unfamiliar. The streets of Tokio, as we rode 6 through them from Kanda to Kudan, were very quiet. The paper doors were all shut, the gentle lights that shone delicately through the tiny white panes, and the wide eaves that hung over the little habitations protectingly low, expressed a thought of home, the first I had found in Japan. The sky was flat 10 and grey and furry, and it was softly cold. I carried a budding NATURE IN MOVEMENT. 139 ( Ml* camellia branch, with ono conscious red flower open-eyed. I mused upon it, thinking how curious it was that a flower could grow and blow to be just the decorative essence that it seemed, and nothing more — without soul of fragrance, or anything to give it kinship with the sweet companies of other countries. Suddenly 1 1^ saw my camellia through the darkness red and white. I looked up — the snow had come. It fell silently, lightly, with a sigh ; the streets were soon white with it, and the foolish little roofs by the wayside, and the shoulders of my jinrikisha man trotting hardily between his shaf ts. J 20 whispered among the twisted branches of the tall pine trees as we rode into the deeper shadows of a sacred grove, and made a soft crown about the head of Dai-Butz — the great grey-stone Dai-Butz that sits there on a little eminence all day under the sun, all night under the stars, and preaches to the people with folded hands. As '^ we rode over the moat into the Ginza, the flakes began to fall more thickly, became unfriendly, drove into our faces. The long wide avenue of tiny shops, each with its dainty swinging lanterns stretched out behind the storm in dazzled bewilderment ; the bare- headed little folk we met bent and shivered, and clattered along on 30 their high wooden getasy under great flat paper umbrellas, with all their graceful garments drawn tight about them. It was fairyland overtaken by a blizzard, in a state of uncomprehending collapse. Presently, as we turned into our own deserted choy through which our runners' footfalls sounded with soft dull pads and thuds ve36 saw the square lantern of Kudan, on its pyramid of stones, glowing high among the swirling flakes with a new eccentricity. Next morning a strange, white blight lay over our toy garden, and thick upon the camellia hedge, from behind which no sound of our little neighbor's samisen came at all that day ; and it seemed to us that 4o the heart of our beautiful Japan was chilled and silent, and that it was time to go. Mixs Duncan^4t " A Social Departure." By permission of the author. 140 DESCRIVTIVE COMrOSITIONi^. EXAMINATION OF MODELS. Natural scenes may be obsorvod not only at rest — affording a Binglo ninro or leas permanent picture, but also in motion, affording a aeries of l»icture8. In the latter case the description will have somewhat of the character of a narrative, yet <l<-:cript!on ia tlio more appropriate term, because it is not for the anke of the events that such passages as those in the Models just quoted are written, but for the sake of the serits of pictures which the events produce. This fact should be borne in mind in writing compositions of this character. Further, it should bo noted that these descriptions are rarely given for the sake of imparting informa- tion, but neai'ly always to awaken the feelings or impressions which tho scene produced upon the observer. 1. Tho aim of the writer here is not so much to make a distinct picture, as to give the reader some idea of the terror and grandeur of tho scene. Hence the heightened and picturesque language. (Point out specific examples of this). Besides, the scene itself being chaotic and indistinct, the writer does Ji)ot bring it before us in its outlines, but, by a series of suggestions, re tails to our minds the distinctive peculiarities of tliunder-storms, as known to everyone, and masses them all together so that we may understand how tremendous this (»no was. There are two distinct scenes in this panorama; what are they? Note tho device in lines 10-11 by which the suspense, the longing for the end of the storm is indicated. The introduction of the struggling steamer gives a touch of human interest very essential in literature, where the description of mere external nature soon palls. 2. The effect of the description of tho clouds is enhanced by the intro- ductory paragraph. The successive changes are clear'y and effectively pictured up to the climax of the close. What is the effect of the last sen- tence ot the second paragraph ? The use of picturestpjc and heightened language is again noticeable. Tlie description is realistic *nd clear, but its ])ower lies in tho fact that it suggests the beauty and grandeur of the scene. 3. In describing the Japanese snow-storm how does the writer con- vey the impression that she is writing of a foreign land V Account for the mention of the " red flower" in the first part. How does the descrip- tion appeal to the ear ? Point out any strokes of fancy occurring in the extract : what is the purpose of these ? The charm of this description lies in the author's fine appreciation of a weird and fantastic incongruity between the Japanese surroundings, never associated in her mind with NATURE IN MOVEMENT. 141 winter, .'iiul tlio hiiow storm fniu^ht an it was withii tluiUHund rcc(»llection8 of hor AiuorioHU hoinu. Every eHbrt is mado to bring out this incongruity, the tono is one of amused compassion touched with tender regret. The conchision is that the writer will leave the place before her earlier impres- sions of its beauty are further modified. What devii'o is employed to knit the first sentence together? "Paradoxically strange" (2), why "paradoxically"? '■'■Protv.dinijbj low" (8) '■'■ vonxcums red flower open-eyed" (11); contrast this manner of using mcHliliers with the vulgar style of using such words as nice-y loirlij, oirfiilbj, and similar common-places. Tlio author is thinking of Japan itself when she nuises upon the symbolic c.tiuellia which is artis- tic and decorative, but lacks the soul, the fragrance, of an English rose or violet. " I looked up — the snow had come " ; compare " wlu!U I looked up I saw that the snow had come." *^ Foolinh little roofs" (10) ; account for this bold use of the epithet. "Whispered," "twisted," (21) what value have these wordslieyondtheir denotation ? " As we rode .... sacred grove," improve the placing of this clause. "The great grey-st(mo Dai-Butz"; the effect of this childlike diction is to indicate the attitude of the people toward their idols. "It was fairy-land — collapse " (32, 33); what are the merits and the faults of the sentence? "Soft dull pads and thuds;" on what i)rinciple are these words used? "Our beautiful Japan"; that is, the Japan we had learned to admire. The second paragraph might well have been divided after the expression " new eccentricity." PRACTICE. Practice List 1. 2. 3. 4. 5. 6. 1. 8. 9. A Flood. A Storm on the Lake. Sunrise on the Water. The First Fall of Snow. The Apj>roach of Spring. Fire in the Woods. Rain and Hail at a Picnic Nightfall. A Wind-Storm in Autumn,. (Clearing Weather, 142 DESCRIPTIVE COM POSITIONS. ;j II Collection, Selection, and Arrangement of Material : After selecting a subjec which interests you, proceed to collect points of iniportiince connected ' ith it. Points about a subject are collected by ohsernng, by thinking, and by readiiuj. The best and most original work in descriptive writing is tbo result of acute oljsorvation. Moth, the clever juvenile character in Shakespeare's Loccs Lahour^s Lost, being asked how he had jjurchased his knowledge for a witty description, replied, "By my penny of observation;" and the greatest master of de- scriptit^n, Shakespeare himself, dei)uaded almost entirely on observation for the materials of his greatest pictures. Let us suppi>se that we h'-ve chosen for our essay the subject, A Storm on the Lake, from the list above. The very best method of collecting points on this subject would be to visit a lake during a storm, taking WiUi us awakened senses, imagination, a good memory, and a note-book, p'^^'haps, as an auxiliary to the memory. But some one may object that lie does not live near a lake ; then he should not attempt at present to de- scribe what ho camiot study f<jr himself : let hiu) choose some other subject, and pr«)ceed in a maimer analogous to that outlined here. Before beginning to observe we must choose a point ^f view, or station- point, from which to observe. Now we may choose \ point on the beach, or on a promontory, or on a pier ; or we may station ourselves on a yacht, or on a schooner, or on a steamer. The choice of the station-point<will depend upon a variety of considerations as, for example, where wo can see and hear best, where the scerio v. ill bo mt)st beautiful or i.Tii)osing. where the spectator whose character we assume would probably be. Let us suppose that we choose a particular spot on the beach as our station point. We must next consider the question of time. This is, for many reasons, an important question in landscape description. We must con- sider the time of year, and the time of day. Lot us suppose that we choose the time of late afternoon in the autumn. Wo may n<nv proceed to note down, all the points we can C(jllect through observing and correct imagining. Let us suppose that we collect the following points without much thought of selection or arrangement : 1. The colours in the water. 2. A vessel on the bay, its masts, sails, hull, 3. The sounds of winds and waves, 4. Birds. NATURE IN MOVEMENT. 143 5. Tradition of a similar storm on th<i same bay. 6. The danger and difficulty encountered by a ves.sel entering the harbour. 7. The sand on the beach. 8. The position of the sun. 9. The clouds in heavy masses. 10. The feelings of a person on the sailing-vessel. 11. The feelings of a person on land. 12. A railway train (M1 the shore of the lake. 13. The contour of the shore. 14. How the winds rose. 15. The increasing fury of the storm. 16. The continuance and final i^batement of the st(jrm. 17. What people said about the storm. 18. The colour of the foliage on the shore. It). At the beach next morning — broken boat-houses, etc. 20. The observer loses his hat. We now have a collection of twenty points bearing on one subject : let us make ^wenty small tickets of blank paper about one inch by two in size, and write one of these points on each of them. Let us place these tickets before us and study them attentively. We have already selected the point of vkio and made our collection oj material, our next concern is to determine quite clearly, the particular aim and tone of •)ur sketch ; these have been determined by us, or iuv us, more or less already. It now appears more disti);. ly that the aim or oul of the sketch is to depict nature in an a?:,;ry mood, and that the consecpient tone of the picture will be one of gir /■», fear, and danger, followed perhaps by happier feelings at the conclusion. It is not necessary that a writer should write in his own person or character ; he may assume that the description proceeds from some other l)er.son of a character ditFerent from his. For example, the storm may be described as it was seen by an old sailor, or by a child, or some other person. But to take the mental point of view of a person other than one's self is a difficult feat of imagination, and, like all ambitious writing, is sure to be flat if it is not really excellent. Hence at present wo shall suppose that the writer takes his own point of view — tliat of a young student. It follows that if the sketch is to have harmony and unity, we must 144 DESCRIPTIVE COMPOSITIONS. reject any points of our collection which are not in keeping with the motive and tone of the description. After due consideration wo reject the 18th and the 20th points. We decide also th.it the 10th and 11th points should be treated together on the principle of contrast, so we write both on one ticket. We have now dejilt with the point of view, the. collection of material^ the ■motim mill tow of the Work, and the selection^ of the material; it remains to arroiKjc the nnterial in the most effective order. When this stage in composing is reached, it is wise to fall back on certain well established principles of order, which have been sanctioned by the judgment and usage of the great writers whose works we take for models. Nearly all compositions in English literature are arranged on one or more than one of the following principles : 1. The details (points, facts, incidents,) are arranged in the order in which they occur in fact. 2. The details are arranged in the order of their importsince. 3. The details arc arranged in the order of logic — cause, course, conse(pience. 4. Tl>.3 details are arranged in the order oi a proof — enunciation, reasoning, conclusion. 5. The details are arranged in the order of a scientific induction — facts, inferences. 6. The details are arranged in the order ( if in n-easing interest — contour, principal objects, centre of interest. 7. The details are arranged in the order which will make the clearest impression upon the reader. (These laws have been stated with a view to usefulness to the young writer rather than with a view to logical exactness.) All these laws are subject to the higher law known as the principle of suspense, in accordance with which an unnatural order may be used to produce emphatic effect. The first, sec<jnd, sixth, and seventh of these principles are the most useful in descriptive writing. When descriptive writing has an element of narration in it, the first law is usually the underlying principle of arrangement. But few compositions fire so simple as to depend for their arrangement on only one principle. s NATURE m MOVEMENT. 145 i When in doubt concerning the best principle of arrangement, use the principle of climax as being the most artistic. Let us now return to our seventeen tickets which we had placed before us in tlie order in which they chanced to occur. Before beginning to arrange them let us write two more tickets, one the introdndiini, and the other the coiidaxidn. It may bo that in the seventeen we shall find suitable tickets for tlie, introduction and the conclusion,, but meanwhile let us keep these important points fixed by separate tickets. We put these at the two ends. Now let us consider whether any of our principles of arrangement are applicable to the points before us. It soon becomes manifest that there is an element of narration in the descrij)tion of a storm, and consequently thixt a number of the points may be arranged in accoi'dance with the first principle. We select points 14, 15, 16, 19, 17, and place them between the introduction and the conclusion, but not necessarily close to one another. It is clear that points 2, G, 10 (now including 11), should be arranged with respect to one another thus, 2, 10, 6, so that the feelings of a person in the vessel may be considered before the vessel readies harbour. In accordance with the sixth princii)le wo should describe the general cont ir of the scene before mentioning the vessel which is, <m account of its huuiau tirs;, the centre of interest ; hence points 8 and 13 must come near the beginning. Through these and similar considerations, we continue to place one point after another until we have the most natural and effective order we can contrive. We decide that point 17 offers scope for a broad and fitting conclusion, so we destroy the ticket marked the conclusion; but as none of the points seems fitted for the introducti(m we make a new point to take the first place, thus: Introduction. — How I came to mitness a great sforni: this gives an opportunity to strike the keynote of the sketch, to indicate its general purpose and tone clearly at the outset. We have now completed our outline and may proceed to elaborate the points into paragraphs, Home of them perhaps into more than one I)aragraph each. It seldom happens felwit we can follow even the most carefully con- structed outline without changing it somewhat, but we soon learn that an outline is indispensable to clear and stnmg compositicjn : it preserves due proportion, it gives continuity without an effort on the writer's part, and it prevents the senseless digressions and ir/olevancies that mat ao many works. 146 DESCRIPTIVE COMPOSITIONS. The result of our collection, selection, and arrangement of points is as follows : 1. Introduction. — How I came to witness tlie storm. 2. The position of the sun, 3. The clouds in heavy masscH. 4. The birds. 5. The sounds of winds and waves. 6. The contour of the shore. 7. The sand on the beach. 8. A vessel on the bay. 9. How the winds rose. 10. The feelings of persons on the vessel and on shore, 11. A railway train on the shore. 12. The increasing fury of the storm. 13. Legend of a similar storm on the same bay. 14. The dangers and difficulties encountered by the vessel in reaching the harbour. 15. The continuance and final abatement of the storm. 16. The colours in the water. 17. The beach next morning — broken boat-houses, etc. 18. What people said about the storm. Before writing a coi position the pupil should collect material, srUct the salient points with reference to some well-defined aim, and (irraiuja the points in the best order, not only for one subject, but for at least tive subjects ct>nnected with the general subject of the chapter ; he should then write his composition on his best plan. If the pupil finds it difficult to write with freedom on a scheme of many points, it is best for him to make a condensed scheme before proceeding to write. Many who would only be confused by endeavouring to write consecutively upon each of the eighteen points above, would write easily and even fluently upon the following condensation of them : 1. How T came to see the storm. 2. The storm rises, 3. The storm at its height. 4. Tho abatement of the storm. 5. The next day. But if the essay is to be rich and thoughtful this siuiple plan should fol- low the elaboration of the numerous points ; it should not l»o a moans »>t shirking close and careful study of the subject. BXTEUtom OF BUILDINGS. 147 CHAPTER XII. EXTERIORS OF BUILDINGS. y MODELS. I, — The Casa Grimani. — Of all the buildings in Venice later in date than the additions to the Ducal Palace, the noblest is, beyond all question, that which, having been con- demned by the proprietor, not many years ago, to be pulled down and sold for its materials, was rescued by the Austrian 6 government, and appropriated — the government officers having no other use for it — to the business of the post office ; though still known to the gondolier by its ancient name, the Casa Grimani. It is composed of three stories of the Corinthian order, at once simple delicate and sublime; but on so colossal a scale, that the three- lo storied palaces on its right and left only reach to the cornice which marks the level of its first floor. Yet it is not at first perceived to be so vast ; and it is only when some expedient is employed to hide it from the eye, that by the sudden dwarfing of the whole reach of the Grand Canal, which it commands, we become aware that it is to the '^ majesty of the Casa Grimani that the Rialto itself, and the whole group of neighboring buildings, owe the greater part of their impressiveuess. Nor is the finish of its details less notable than the grandeur of their scale. There is not an erring line, nor a mistaken proportion, throughout its noble front ; and the exceeding 20 firmness of its chiselling gives an appearance of lightness to the vast blocks of stone out of whose perfect union that front is com- posed. The decoration is sparing, but delicate ; the first story only simpler than the rest, in that it has pilasters instead of shafts, but all with Corinthian capitals, rich in leafage and fluted delicately • 26 the rest of the walls flat and smooth, and their mouldings sharp and shallow, so that the bold shafts look like crystals of beryl running through a rock of quartz. Jiuikin's "Stows 0/ Venice," By permiuion of the publishers 148 DESCRIPTIVE COMPOSITIONS. II. — St. Mark's. — We will push fast through them into th«3 shadow of the pillars at the end of the " Bocca di Piazza," and then we forget them all ; for between these pillars there openj a great light, and, in the midst of it, as we advance slowly, 5 the vast tower of St. Mark seems to lift itself visibly forth from the level field of chequered stones ; and, on each side, the countless arches prolong themselves into ranged symmetry, as if the ruggjod and irregular houses that pressed together above us in the dark alley had been struck back into sudden obedience and 10 lovely order and all their rude casements and broken walls had been transformed into arches charged with goodly sculpture, and fluted shafts of delicate stone. And well they may fall back, for beyond those troops of ordered arches there rises a vision out of the earth, and all the great s(iuare 15 seems to have opened from it in a kind of awe, that we may see it far away ; — a multitude of pillars and white domes, clustered into a long low pyramid of colored light ; a treasure-heap, it seems, partly of gold, and partly of opal and mother of-pearl, hollowed beneath into five great vaulted porches, ceiled with fair mosaic, and 20 beset with sculpture of alabaster, clear as amber and delicate as ivory, — sculpture fantastic and involved, of palm leaves and lilies and grapes and pomegranates, and birds clinging and fluttering among the branches, all twined together in an endless network of buds and plumes ; and, in the midst of it, the solemn forms of 25 angels, sceptred, and robed to the feet, and leaning to each otlier across the gates, their figures indistinct among the gleaming of the golden ground through the leaves beside them, interrupted and dim, like the morning light as it faded back among the branches of Eden when Hrst its gates were angel-guarded long ago. And round the 30 walls of the porches there are set pillars of variegated stones, jasper and porphyry, and deep-green serpentine spotted wiMi flakes of snow, and marbles, that half refuse and half yield to the sunshine, Cleo- patra-like, ** their bluest veins to kiss "—the shadow as it steals back from them, revealing line after line of azure undulation, as a 35 receding tide leaves the waved sand ; their capitals lich with inter- woven tracery, rooted knots of herbage, and drifting leaves of ) I EXTERIORS OF BUILDINGS. 141) acanthus and vine, and mystical signs, all beginning and ending in the Cross ; and above them, in the broad archivolts, a continuous chain of language and of life— angels and the signs of heaven, and the labors of men, each in its appointed season upon the earth ; aii(l4o above these, another range of glittering pinnacles, mixed with white arches edged with scarlet flowers, — a confusion of delight, amidst which the breasts of the Greek horses are seen blazing in their breadth of golden strength, and the St. Mark's Lion lifted on a blue field covered with stars, until at last, as if in ecstasy, the crests of 45 the arches break into a marble foam, and toss themselves far into the blue sky in flashes and wreaths of sculptured spray, as if the breakers on the Lido shore had been frost-bound before they fell, and the sea-nymphs had inlaid them with coral and amethyst. liuskin's "Stones of Venice." By pertnission 0/ the publishers. III. — ^The Ruined Lodge.— After leaving Halifax the road to Windsor winds for teii miles round the margin of Bedford Basin, which is connected with the harbour by a narrow passjige at the dockyard. It is an extensive and magnificent sheet of water, the shores of which are deeply indented with numerous coves, and well- 5 sheltered inlets of great beauty. At a distance of seven miles from the town is a ruined lodge, built by his Royal Highness the late Duke of Kent, when commander- in-chief of the forces in this colony, once his favoui'ite sumniei- resi- dence, and the scene of his munificent hospitalities. It is impossible in to visit this spot without the most melancholy feelings. The totter- ing fence, the prostrate gates, the ruined grottos, the long and wind- ing avenues, cut out of the forest, overgrown by rank grass and occasional shrubs, and the silence and desolation that pervaded everything around, all bespeak a rapid and premature decay, recall 15 to njind the untimely fate of its noble and lamented owner, and tell of fleeting pleasures, and the transitory nature of all earthly things. I stopped at a small inn in the neighbourhood for the purpose of strolling over it for the Last time ere I left the country, and for the indulgence of those moralizing musings which at times harmonize 20 with our nerves, and awaken what may be called the pleasurable sensations of melancholy. I 150 nSSClilPTI VE COMPOSITIONS. A modern wooden ruin is of itself the least interesting, and au the same time the most depressing, object imaginable. The massive 25 structures of antiquity that are everywhere to be met with in Europe, exhibit the remains of great strength, and, though injured and defaced by the slow and almost imperceptible agency of time, promise to continue thus nmtihited for ages to come. They awaken the images of departeil generations, and are sanctified by legend and 30 by tale. But i wooden ruin shows rank antl rapid decay, concen- trates its interest ""i one family, or one man, and resembles a mangled corpse, rather than the monument that covers it. It has no his- torical importance, no anct'stral record. It awakens not the imagin- ation. The poet finds no inspiration in it, and the antiquary no 35 interest. It speaks only of death and decay, of recent calamity, and vegetable decomposition. The very air about it is close, dank, and unwholesome. It has no grace, no strength, no beauty, but looks deformed, gross, and repulsive. Even the faded colour of a painted wooden house, the tarnished gilding of its decorations, the corroded 40 iron of its fastenings, and its crumbling materials, all indicate recent use and temporary habitation. It is but a short time since this mansion was tenanted by its royal master, and in that brief space how great has been the devastation of the elements! A few years more, and all trace of it will have disappeared forever. Its very 45 site will soon become a matter of doubt. The forest is fast reclaim- ing its own, and the lawns and ornamented gardens, annually sown with seeds scattered by the winds from the surrounding woods, are relapsing into a state of nature, and exhibiting in detached patches a young growth of such trees as are common to the country. 50 As I approached the house I noticed that the windows were broken out, or shut up with rough boards to exclude the rain and snow ; the doors supported by wooden props instead of hinges, which hung loosely on the panels ; and that long luxuriant clover grew in the eaves, which had l)een originplly designed to conduct the water 55 from the roof, but becoming choked up with dust and decayed leaves had afforded sufficient food for the nourishment of coarse grasses. The portico, like the house, had been formed of wood, and the flat surface of its top imbibing ind retaining moisture, presented a mass m EXTERIOTIH Op BlilLDWaS 151 of vegetable matter, from which liad sprung up a young and vigorous l)irch-tre(!, whusi! strength and freslnu^ss sccnit'd to mock the helpless 60 weakness tliat nourisluMl it. I hud no desire to enter the apart- ments ; and indecnl the aged ranger, whose occupation was to watch over its decay, and to prevent its premature destruction by the plunder of its lixturesand more dural»l(> materials, informed me that tlie floors were uns.afe. Altogether the scene was one of a most 65 depressing kind. A small brook, which had by a skilful hand ]>een led over several precipitous descc^nts, ])erfoi-m(Ml its feats alone and unobserved, and seemed to murmur out its c(tmplaints, as it hurried over its rocky channel to mingle with the sea ; Avhile the wind, sighing through the 70 umbrageous wood, appcifired to assume a louder and more melancholy wail, as it swept through the long vacant passages and deserted saloons, and escaped in plaintive tones from the )»roken casements. The offices, as well as the oi-namental ])uildings, had shared the same fate as the house. Tlio roofs of all h.id fallen in, and mouldered into 76 dust ; the doors, sashes and floors had disappeared ; and the walls only, which were in part l)uilt of stone, remained to attest their existence and use. The grounds exhibited similar effects of neglect, in a climate where the living wood grows so rapidly; and the dead decays so soon, as in Nova fScotia. An arbtmr, which had been con- 80 structed of lattice-work, for the support of a flowering vine, had fallen, and was covered with vegetation ; while its roof alone remained, supported aloft by limbs of trees that, growing up near it, had become entangled in its net-work. A Chinese temple, once a favourite retreat of its owner, as if in conscious pride of its prefer- 85 ence, had offered a more successful resistance to the weather, and appeared in tolerable preservation ; while one small surviving bell, of the numerous ones tliat once ornamented it, gave out its solitary and melancholy tinkling as it waved in the wind. How sad was its mimic knell over pleasures that were fled for ever. 90 The contemplation of this deserted house is not without its bene- flcial effect on the mind ; for it inculcates humility to the rich, and resignation to the poor. Ho\ve\'er elevated man may be, there is much in his condition that reminds him of the infirmities of his 152 DESCJifPTIVE COMPOSITloNi^. 96 nature, and reconciles him to the decrees of Providence. " May it please your Majesty," said Euclid to his royal pupil, "there is no regal road to science. You must travel in the same path with others, if you would attain the same end. " These forsaken grounds teach us in similar terms this consolatory truth, that there is no 100 exclusive way to happiness reserved even for those of the most exalted rank. The smiles of fortune are capricious, and sunshine and shade are unequally distributed; but though the surface of life is thus diversified, the end is uniform to all, and invariably terminates in the grave. " Pallida mors aequo pulsat pede pauperutn tabemas Regumque turres." Haliburton'a " The Cloekmaker". EXAMINATION OF MODELS. A very detailed deacription of the merely material aspects of a building is usually wearisome and confusing. If, however, the buildnig possesses artistic merits, such description may bo necessary, and may bo made suffi- ciently clear and interesting to those wlio have some familiarity with architecture ; but, in this case, the technical language of art is almost im- perative for the sake both of clearness and brevity. Usually in literature buildings are described, not in order that the reader may see them with the mind's eye, but that he may understand the impression of beauty which they make on the beholder, or that he may catch some particular character or sentiment, actually or by association, stamped upon them. Two of the buildings described in the models are works of art ; the third is made by the writer the vehicle of certain sentiments. Compare in this reg.-'rd the description of a commonplace house quoted from Dickens on p. 121. 1 . Ruskin describes only the exterior of the Casa Grimani, because it is used only as a government office. What partof the opening sentence does not aid the main purpose of the paragraph ? Account for the author's dwelling so much on the size of tlie building. What are the two contrasted char- acteristics that are ascribed to it ? Show where this contrast is developed. EXTElilOliS OF BXJlLDl^aS. 168 I Compare this extract with the others of this chapter. Note tho grace uf the concluding sentence. Attention is gained by placing tho name Casa Grimani at the end of the first sentence? Rewrite beginning "Tho Casa Grimani, which, having been condemned," etc., and compare with the present form. Improve tho unity of the opening sentence by omitting some of the details crowded into it. "Nor scale" (18-19); this simple balanced sentence eflFects a capital transition from the first to the second phase of the description. ♦'There composed " (19-23) ; how has the author given strength and rhythm to this sentence ? " Tho first story only simpler than the rest, in that " (23-24) ; improve the i)osition of " only." 2- The description of St. Mark's is a torrent of emotional eloquence. It is neither prose nor pootry. No clear picture of the building is attempted, but the author conveys to tho reader through the medium of long passionate sentences, and brilliant epithets, some idea of the impres- sion made upon himself by the front of this famous edifice. The references to Eden, Cleopatra, the Lido shore, suggest that in no age or land was there beauty surpassing that of the architecture. Notice the order of the nouns in the second sentence, — pillars, capitals, etc. Observe the descriptive words which contain metaphors, as, — "pyramid of coloured light," " treasure-heap," " net- work of buds and plumes." How does the language of this passage compare with that of conversa- tional prose 1 Rewrite the substance of the last sentence in such a style as would become a friendly letter. Observe the epithets in this passage, some picturesque, others sonorous, some full of significance. No begiimer should endeavour to imitate tliis style, as the result would certainly be an afiected jargon ; but a study of Ruskin's writing will indi- rectly promote the acquisition of some good qualities. 3. As if from sympathy with the subject, the description here is extremely slow and leisurely. In which of the six paragraphs is the par- ticular description given ? What part of the ruined lodge is described in each ? Note the concluding sentences of these paragraphs. What pur- pose is served by the first paragraph 1 Whair relation does the second bear to the third, fourth and fifth? The third paragraph is to some extent a digression. What is its value ? Note how gracefully the author returns to the subject in hand. Is the sixth paragraph a suitable one for a conclusion ? Why ? Does the opening sentence give a clear conception to one unacquainted with the locality ? This description of course iMssumes i^orance. Is an 154 DEHCniVTIVE ( 'OM POSITIONS, author always lioinul to treat liis suhjuct as thciigh it wcro completely uiikn(»wn to tlio iv.itler ^ IJeforo bcyiimiiiLf a description the writer should consider wlm are In be his readers and what is the extent of their know- ledge on tiie sul)ject treated. The yoinig writer might assume as his audience the reading public of his own country. "The tottering fence earthly things" (11-17); improve the use of tenses in this sentence. Criticize the English of lines 18-21. " They tale " (28-:{()) ; compare " they awaken images of departed generations and are sanctified by tale and legend." "And resendjles covers it" (31-32); this seems un- necessiirily horrible. "Its decay" (03); to what does "its" refer; "Altogether kind" ((»5-0t>); whrt bearing has this sentence on the foregoing contexts Su])stituto some other expression for "attest their existence and use" (77-78), so as to make the meaning more obvious. "The grounds Nova Scotia" (78-80) ; supply what is necessary to make this sentence comjjlete. "One small surviving bell, of the numer- ous ones" (87-88); correct this. However elevated man may bo" (93); would you insert "a" before "man?" "In similar terms" (99); compare "similarly." Contrast this extract with the previous one in reference to originality of thought and novelty of diction. The extract is faulty in style ; the student would do well to read it critically and find the faults for himself. PRACTICE. Practice List: Write a composition on one of the following subjects dealing only with the exterior : — 1. A Hovel. 2. A Shop. 3. An Empty House. 4. A Church. 5. A Mansion : Christmas Eva 6. An Old Home. 7. A Haunted House. 8. A Farm House. 9. An Old l\ivern. 10. A City Hall. \ EXTERIORH OF BUILDJNQS, Condensed Plan for a Composition : A Haunted HousCi 1. The tradition. 2. The circumstances of my seeing it. 3. Location. 4. The house. 6. Reflections on superstition. 155 ' ' INTEKIOliS OF BUILDINGS. 157 CHAPTER XIII. INTERIORS OF BUILDINGS. MODELS. I.— Cedric'S Dining-Hail. — in a hall, the height of which was greatly ilisproportioned to its extreme length and width, a long oaken table, formed of planks rough-hewn from the forest, and which had scai-cely i-eceived any ]»oli.sh, stood ready prepared for the evening meal of Cedric the Saxon. The rooi, com- ^ posed of beams and rafters, had nothing to divide the apartment from tlu5 sky except tiie planking and thatch ; there was a huge fire- place at either end of the hall, but as the chimneys were constructed in ii very clumsy manner, at least as much of the smoke found its way into the apartment as escaped by the proper vent. The con-io stant vap<tur which this occasioned had polished the rafters and beams of the low-browed hall, by encrusting them with a black varnish of soot. On the sides of the apartment hung injplements of war and of the chase, and there were at each corner folding-doors, which gave access to other parts of the extensive building. 15 The other appointments of the mansion partook of the rude sim- plicity of th(? Saxon pcM'iod, which ('(Mlric pi(|ued himseli upon main- taining. The floor was composed of earth mixed with lime, trodden into a hard substance, such as is often empli . ed in flooring our modern bai-ns. For about one quarter of the length of the apart- 2f. ment, the lloor was raised by a step, and this space, M'hich was called the dais, was occupied only by the principal members of the family* and visitoi's of distinction. Ft)r this purpose, a table richly covered with scarlt^t cloth was placed transversely across the platform, from the middle of which ran the longer and lower board, at which the ;>5 domestics and inferior persons fed, down towards the bottom of the hall. The whole resembled the form of the figure T, or some of those ancient diiiutir tables, which, arranged on the same principle, may 158 DESCRIPTIVE COMPOSITIONS. be still seen in the antique colleges of Oxford or Cambridge. Mas- 30 sive chairs and settles of carved oak were placed upon the dais, and over these seats and the more elevated table was placed a canopy of cloth, which served in some degree to protect the dignitaries who occupied that distinguished station from the weather, and especially from the rain, which in some places found its way through the ill- 35 constructed roof. The walls of this upper end of the hall, as far as the dais extended, were covered with hangings or curtains, and upon the floor was a cai'pet, both of which were adorned with some attempts at tapestry, or embroidery, executed with brilliant or rather gaudy colouring. 40 Over the lower range of table, the roof, as we have noticed, had no covering ; the rough plastered walls were left bare, and the rude earthen floor Avas uncarpeted ; the board was uncovered by a cloth, and rude massive benches supplied the place of chairs. In the centre of the upper table were placed two chairs more 45 elevated than the rest, for the master and mistress of the family, who presided over the scene of hospitality, and from doing so derived their Saxon title of honor, which signifies " the Dividers of Bread." To each of these chairs was added a footstool, curiously carved and inlaid with ivory, which maik of distinction was peculiar to 60 them. One of these seats was at present occupied by Cedric the Saxon, who, though but in rank .a thane, or, as the Normans called him, a franklin, felt, at the delay of his evening meal, an irritable impatience, wliich might have become an alderman, whether of ancient or of modern times. Scott's " luanhoe." II— Fagin'S Back Room.— Oliver, groping his way with one hand, and having the other firmly grasped by his companicm, ascenrled with much ditticulty the dark and broken stairs ; which his conductor mounted with an ease and expedition that showed 5 that he was well acquainted with them. He threw open the door ot a back room, and drew Oliver in after him. The walls and ceiling of the room wer«^ perfectly black with age and dirt. There was ;i deal table before the fire : upon which >vere » candle stuck in a ginger-L?er bottle, two or three pewter potti, •\ INTERIORS OF BUILDINGS. 159 loaf and butter, and a plate. In a frying-pan, which was on the lo lire, and which was s(!Ctircd to the mantelshelf by a string, some Siiusages were cooking ; and standing over them with a toasting-fork in h^!' (land, was a very old, shrivelled Jew, whose villainous-looking and repulsive face was obscured by a quantity of matted red hair. He was dressed in a greasy flannel gown, with his throat bare ; and is seemed to be dividing his attention biitween the frying-pan and a clothes-horse, over which a great number of silk handkerchiefs were hanging. Several rough l)eds, made of old sacks, were huddled side by side on the floor. Seated round the table were four or five boys, none older than the Dodger, smoking long clay pipes and drinking 20 spirits, with the air of middle-aged men. These all crowded about their associate as he whispered a few words to the Jew ; and then turned round and grinned at Oliver. So did the Jew himstdf, toasting-fork in hand. Dickens' " Oliver Twist." III.— A Bed-Chamber at Bracebridge Hall. -My chamber was in the old part of the mansion, the ponderous furniture of which might have been fabricated in the days of the giants. The room was panelled with cornices of heavy carved work, in which flowers and grotesque faces were strangely intermingled ; 5 and a row of black-looking portraits stared mournfully at me from the walls. The bed was of rich, though faded, damask, with a lofty tester, and stood in a niche opposite a bow-window. I had scarcely got into IxmI, when a strain of nmsic seemed to break forth in the air just below the window. I listened, and 10 found it proceeded from a band, which T concluded to be the waits from some neighboring village. They went round the house, playing under the windows. I drew aside the curtains to hear them more distinctly. The moonbeams fell through the upper part of the case- ment, partially lighting up the anticjuated apartment. The sounds, 15 as they receded, l)ecame more soft and .'icrial, and seemed to accord with lh(5 quiet Jind moonlight, I listened and listened— tlu^y l)e('anie mon'. and moyo. tender and remote, and, as they gradually died away, my liead sunk upon the pillow, and 1 fell asleep. Irvins/'s " The Sketch-Book," ifvnm^fi'^^9,^"^ ■ ■'•i'i'iu<ip^ppr»vww^^ 160 DESCRIPTIVE COMrOSITIONS. EXAMINATION OF MODELS. 1. Make a list of the points selected by Scott for the description of Cedric's dining-hall. Does he begin by describing tlie general or tne par- ticular ? Is there any sense in which this description may be termed a climax ? In wiiicli part of this description does the touch of human interest appear ? By associating it with the joys and sorrows of childhood even a barn may be made interesting. Carlylo says that the death-bed of a peasant is the last act of a tragedy. It is observal)le that buildings marked by scpialid indigence, or by pomp and display, are mf)re easily described than merely commonplace build- ings : the latter require imagination to make them interesting. "The height of which was greatly disproportioned to its extreme length and width " (I, 2) ; re-write more simply and without ambiguity. "Planks rough-hev.'n from the fc^rest, and which had scarcely received any polish " {[], 4) ; dot s the author mean rough planks, or planks cut from the forest, or is there a confusion of both ideas ^ "And wliich" (4) ; criticize the co-ordination effected by "and." " Scarcely received" (4) ; what does "scarcely" modify? "Ready prepared" (.">); what is the force of "ready" here? "The constant vapour .... varnish of soot" (10,13); what does " vapour" mean here ? " By a step " (21) ; does "by" denote measure or instrument; compare "was raised a step." "For this pur- pose " (23) ; for what purpose f Improve the exi)licit reference. " Trans- versely across" (24) ; what leads the author to use " transversely ?" Make a full stop at " platform " (24) ; and rewrite the remaining part of the sen- tence in one or two clear statements. "The roof.... had no covering" (40, 41) ; compare this statement with lines 5, 0, 7 ; what causes the am- biguity ? " Uncovered by a cloth " (42) ; compare not covered with a cloth • «3ee lino 23. " In the centre. .. .of bread" (44, 47); what is the meaning of "more elevated?" Does ho mean this scene of h< )Spitality or is the term general? "At present" (50); compare at that moment. "But in rank a thane "(51); discuss tlie collocation. 2- If you were making a drawing of a room would you begin with the outline or with the details ? Point out the expressions in the description by Dickens which give us the («) location, {b) outline, (c) details, of Fagin's room. Mentit)n details that the author might have mentioned but omits. Account for his selection of details. In a description of a room the details should be selected with a view of bringing out the character of its inhabitants, the nature of its uses, and the purpoao involv«;d in its mention. INTERTORS OF BUILDINGS. 161 "Clroping jind liaving" (1,2); reconstruct these two participial phrases so as to avoid the awkward co-ordination of *^ groping" and "having." "With much difficulty;" reconstruct the sentence so as to place this phrase in a ni«)ro emphatic contrast with " with an ease and ex- pedition " "A frying-pan, which was on the fire, and which was, etc. ....;" re- write this sentence so as to avoid the clumsy repetition of "which was." " Were cooking" (12); this weak ending is caused by the fact that the author is merely enumerating the objects in the room and has in reality nothing important to say about them ; perhaps the weakness might be concealed by a more artistic construction, or by a vivid touch of description, as, " steaming and sputtering" instead of "cooking." "And standing over them"; it would seem that the description of the Jew should naturally make the principal clause here, and the description of frying sausages a subordinate clause or phrase ; is there not a reason for the im- portance given to the first statement in the suggestion of smoke and con- fusion 1 In the sentence before the last the semi-colon is used to prevent our thinking that " turned " makes an assertion about " he " ; rewrite the sentence so that its clearness may not depend upon its punctuation. 3. In hia description of a bed-chamber Irving deals with the following topics : The location in the mansion, the character of the furniture, the walls, the bed, the relation to the world outside, music and moonlight from the window, sleep : does the author begin with general description or details? How does the author lend beauty to his description? To which of the senses does he appeal ? An author sometimes tells what is not to bo seen in a room. How might this device of negative description be used in the picture of a log school-house ? Make a list of all the points, such as locati(m, dimensions, sounds, atmosphere, that it might be well to study in collecting mater iiil for the description of a room. The order of the details in the description of a room may bo analogous to the favourite order in describing a landscape, — ground, trees, sky ; floor, walls, ceiling. Discuss the unity of the second sentence. Why is a rigid adherence to the law of unity not exacted in those parts of a description where details are being enumerated? " With a lofty tester ; " is this phrase clearly connected with the rest of the sentence. Observe how the pauses and the short sentences of lines (9-15) suggest the idea of listening. "The mo«mbeams. .. .apartment; " the repetition of the syllable part in this sentence s cacophonous. " As they receded ;' "they" probably refers to "sounds." Observe how the flow or rhythm of the last five lines is increased by tho use of coordinated words. There is something in ii I 162 DUSClilPTIVE COMPOSITIONS. the construction of tho last sentence which imitates the recession of tlu> sounds, aud tlie faihng of consciousness. Which of these descriptions offers the clearest directions for the drawing of tho room it describes ? PRACTICE. Practice List : Select a subject from the fijUowing list, or some similar subject, and describe the Interior of a Building : — 1. A Village store. A Log Scliool-house. A Church. A Railway Station. " A Blacksmith Shop. A Court of Law. A Trapper's Hut. A Woo(hiian's Shanty. A Theatre. The Student's Room suggested by The Raven. 2. 3. 4. 5. 6. 7. 8. 9. 10. Plans : A Log School-liouse. Expand tho following sentences into paragraphs in order to form a com- position on the foregoing subject : — 1. At a turn in the road we caught sight of tho old log school-house. 2. As we drew nearer, the well-remembered sounds of the class-room were carried to us on tho drowsy afternoon air. 3. A hushed curiosity greeted our entrance. 4. When the recitations were resumed I was able to make a more care- ful survey of the surroundings. 5. Of all the recitations the reading class proved tho most interesting. 6. Many boyhood scenes were recalled as we listened. 7. After a few farewell words with the master, we withdrew, but did not cease to meditate on this suggestive scone. iNTEEioEs OF EmiDim^. . 16d If the aim of the writer is to give some idea of the Log School-house to one totally unacquaintod with such a thing, say a visitor from the Old World, tiie following plan might be suggested 1. Difficulties of having schools in newly-settled parts of the country. 2. Brief description of external surroundings, 3. General impression on entrance. 4. The building itself as viewed from the inside. 5. The furniture. 6. The scholars. 7. The master. 8. Recitations. 9. Manii jst defects. 10. Tjnportance of the log school-house in the development of the country. TOWNS AND CITIES, 166 CHAPTER XIV. TOWNS AND CITIES. MODELS. I. — A Street in Quebec. — Quebec lay shining in the tender oblique light of the northern sun when they passed next morning through the Upper Town market-place and took their way towards Hope Gate, where they were to be met by the colonel a little later. It is easy for the alert tourist to lose his 6 course in Quebec, and they, who were neither hurried nor heedful went easily astray. But the street into which they had wandered if it did not lead straight to Hope Gate, had many merits, and was very characteristic of the city. Most of the houses on either hand were low structures of one story, built heavily of stone or stuccoed lo brick, with two dormer-windows, full of house-plants, in each roof ; the doers were each painted of a livelier colour than the rest of the house, and each glistened with a polished brass knob, a large brass knocker, or an intricate bell-pull of the same resplendent metal, and a plate bearing the owner's name and his professional title, which, if 16 not avocatf was sure to be notaire, so well is Quebec supplied with those ministers of the law. At the side of each house was a porte- cochere^ and in this a smaller door. The thresholds and doorsteps were covered with the neatest and brightest oil-cloth ; the wooden sidewalk was very clean, like the steep, roughly paved street itself ; 20 and at the foot of the hill down which it sloped was a breadth of the city wall, pierced for musketry, and, past the corner of one of the houses, the half-length of cannon showing. It had the charm of those ancient streets, dear to Old- World travel, in which the past and the present, decay and repair, peace and war, have made friends in an 26 effect that not only wins the eye, but, however illogically, touches the heart ; and over the top of the wall it had a stretch of such land- scape as I know not what Old-World street can command : the St, 166 DESCRIPTIVE COMPOSITIONS. Lawrence, blue and wide ; a bit of th«} white village of lieauport on 30 its bank ; then a vast breadth of pale-green, upward-sloping meadows; then the purple heights ; and the hazy heaven over them. IF. D. Howell*' "A Chance Acqnaintanee." II.— Grassdale.— In the tered hamlet, which I have county of there is a seques- often souglit occasion to pass, and which I have never left without a certain reluctance and regret. The place, indeed, is associated with the memory of events that 5 still retain a singular and fearful interest, — bub the scene needs not the charm of legend to arrest the attention of the traveller. In no part of the world which it has been my lot to visit, have I seen a landscape of more pastoral beauty. The hamlet, to which I shall here give the name of Grassdale, is situated in a valley, which, for 10 about the length of a mile, winds among gardens and orchards laden with fruit, between two chains of gentle and fertile hills. Here, singly or in pairs, are scattered cottages, which bespeak a comfort and a rural luxury less often than our poets have described the characteristics of the English peasantry. It has been observed, 15 that wherever you see a flower in a cottage garden, or a bird-cage at the cottage casement, you may feel sure that the inmates are better and wiser than their neighbours ; and such humble tokens of atten- tion to something beyond the sterile labour of life were (we must now revert to the past) to be remarked in almost every one of the 20 lowly abodes at Grassdale. The jasmine here, — there the rose or honeysuckle, clustered over the lattice and threshold, not so wildly as to testify negligence, but rather to sweeten the air than exclude the light. Each of the cottages possessed at its rear its plot of ground apportioned to the more useful and nutritious products of 25 nature, while the greater part of them fenced also from the unfre- quented road a little spot for the lupine, the sweet pea, the wall- flower or the stock. And it is not unworthy of remark, that the bees came in greater clusters to Grassdale than to any other part of that rich and cultivated district. A small piecQ of waste land 30 which was intersected by a brook, fringed with osier and dwarf and fantastic pollards, afforded pasture for a few cows and the only carrier's solitary horse. The stream itself was of no ignoble repute III TOWNS AND CITmS. 1C7 among tlin g(Mi(.l«! craft of th(^ Angle, the brotherhotxl whonj our asso- ciations (Ujfend in spite of our mercy ; and this repute drew welcome and periodical itinerants to the village, who furnished it with its 36 scanty news of the great wtuld without, and maintained in a decor- ous custom the little and single hostelry of the place. Bulwer Lytton'g " Eugene Aram." By permuiiiim of the iniblisheri. III. — Pisa in the Middle Ag^es. — Fancy what was the scene which presented itself, in his afternoon walk, to a designer of the Gothic school of Pisa — Nino Pissmo, or any of his men. On each side of a bright river he saw rise a line of brighter palaces, arched and pillared, and inlaid with deep red porphyry, and 8 with serpentine ; along the quays before their gates were riding troops of knights, n ble in face and form, dazzling in crest and shield ; horse and man one labyrinth of quaint color and gleaming light — the purple, and silver, and scarlet fringes flowing over the strong limbs and clashing mail, like sea-waves over rocks at sunset, lo Opening on each side from the river were gardens, courts, and cloisters ; long successions of white pillars among wreaths of vine ; leaping of fountains through buds of pomegranate and orange : and still along the garden-paths, and under and through the crimson of the pomegranate shadows, moving slowly, groups of the fairest women 15 that Italy ever saw — fairest, because purest and thoughtfuUest i trained in all high knowledge, as in all courteous art — in dance, in- song, in sweet wit, in lofty learning, in loftier courage, in loftiest, love — able alike to cheer, to enchant, or save, the souls of men. Above all this scenery of perfect human life, rose dome and bell- 20 tower, burning with white alabaster and gold; beyond dome and bell- tower the slopes of mighty hills, hoary with olive ; far in the north above a purple sea of peaks of solemn Apennine, the clear, sharp- cloven Carrara mountains sent up their stejidfast flames of marble summit into amber sky ; the great sea itself, scorching with expanse 26 of light, stretching from their feet to the Gorgonian isles ; and over all these, ever present, near or far — seen through the leaves of vine, or imaged with all its march of clouds in the Arno's stream, or set with its depth of blue close against the golden hair and burning cheek of lady and knight — that untroubled and sacred sky, which 30 !N>n i 168 DESCRIPTIVE CO Ml'i >S1 Tl ( >J\'.S'. was to all men, in those days of iiinotciil. faith, indcod the umiuoa- tioned abode of spirits, us th»5 earth was of men ; and which opened straight through its gates of cloud an<l veils of dew into the awful- ness of the eternal world; — a heaven in which every cloud that 35 passed was literally the chariot of an aiif^el, and every ray of its Evening and Morning streamed from the throne of (Jotl. litukin'a " Moilern Painters." Ily permwsion of the publishers. IV. — Birmingfham. — Birmingham T have now tried for a reason- able time, and I cannot complain of being tired t)f it. As a town it is pitiful enough — a mean congeries of bricks, including scarcely one or two large capitalists, some hundreds of minor ones, and, perhaps, a 6 hundred and twenty thousand sooty artizans in metal and chemical produce. The streets are ill-built, ill-paved, always flimsy in their aspect — often poor, sometimes miserable. Not above one or two of them are paved with flagstones at the sides ; and to walk upon the little egg-shaped, slippery flints that supply their places is something 10 like a penance. Yet withal it is interesting from some of the com- mons or la es that spot or intersect the green, wotxly, undulating en- virons to view this city of Tubal Cain. Torrents of thick smoke, with ever and anon a burst of dingy flame, are issuing fr<jm a thousand fun- nels. "A thousand hammers fall by turns on the red son of the fur- 15 nace." You hear the clank of innumerable steam-engines, the rumb- ling of cars and vans, and the hum of men interrupted by the sharper rattle of some canal-boat, loading or disloading ; or, perhaps, some fierce explosion when the cannon founders are pI•()^•ing their new- made wares. I have seen their rolling-mills, their polishing of 20 teapots, and buttons, and gun-barrels, and fire-shovels, and swords, and all manner of toys and tackle. I have looked into their iron works where 150,000 men are smelting the meital in a district a, few miles to the north j their coal mines, fit image of Avj^rnus; their tubs and vats, as large as country churches, fufl of copperas and 25 aqua fortis and oil of vitriol; and the whole is not without its attractions, as well as repulsions, of which, when we meet, I will preach to you at large. Carhjle qiintrd in Froude's " Thinnnn Carliih-." lUf pennimiion n/ the jnihUithfrs, TOWNS AND CITIES. .'o9 EXAMINATION OF MODELS. The same gunernl principles upply t«» tlio dcHcriptioii of Towns and Cities, as to the doscription of Niituriil Sconcry. ('Sec Practical Sugges- tions in Chap. X.). 1. What part does thu first Hcntt-nco play in tlio picture of the Quebec scene? What cliaracteristic of thu city is suggested in the second sen- tence ? Is it possible to give a better description of a city by describ- ing one average street in detail than by a more general description of the whole city ? Why ? After the three introductory sentences, the author describes the appearance of the houses, the sidewalks and the pavement ; his eye wanders naturally along the converging lines of these to the "breadth of the city wall" ; what is it at that point that suggests the sentiment of the concluding sentence and why does he couple with that sentiment the l>it of landscape whic)i finishes the picture? In this slight but vivid sketch of the scene "over the toj) of the wall," what principle governs the order of the details ? To judge from his choice and arrangement of words, to what class of readers does the author address himself? Convert the first sentence into the periodic form; observe how a periodic opening sentence raises great expectations of the descripti(»n to folh^w. Is the "if" of line eight used in the ordinary conditional sense ? " And the hazy heaven over them" (31) ; compare in euphony and connotation, and tfie cloiidy sky over them. 2. What expectations are aroused by the first sentence in the descrip- tion by Lytton ? How are these expectations modified and intensified in the second and third sentences ? After thus indicating the ruling tone and motive of the picture, the author proceeds to sketch its outline. How is this efiected ? How does this sketch harmonize with the introduction ? Does the descri{)tion seem to be written for people of the same class as the peasants of Grassdale ? Give reasons for your answer ? To what central idea does Lytton adapt his description of Grassdale ? The latter part of the first sentence, " which I have often .... regret," is conceived on the princi[)le of antithesis ; observe the balanced con- struction. The last sentence of the first paragraph is not improved by the second use of "which," because "the hamlet to which" and "in a valley which" make a parallel that is (|uite uncalled for. The first sentence of the second paragraph is hopelessly confused ; rewrite it, stating clearly what you suppose to be its meaning. "But FAtber to sw<3eten the air, etc...." (22); rewrite the sentenge in ii : ■ii I U 170 hESClUPTIVE COMI'OSITJONS. which this occtirs, so .-is to show nioro clearly ho rol.ation of tho List part to tho rest. "At its roar its plot" v j) ; rowrito for groator smoothness. " VVlii;!a our associi-.^ions defend in spite; of our mercy " (33, 34) ; simplify by expansion. How do you think tins sketch compares with tho j»reco(iing one in the following points : (<t) word-painting ; (/>) clearness of in»pression ; (c) correctness of lanirnago ; (d) l»eauty of thought and language ; {<) keenness of observation ? 3. Make a list of tho objects mentioned in tho dc8crii)tion of Pisa. From wliat point of view is tho scene sketched? WhatstAudsin the back- ground of the picture 1 What tills tho middle of tlie canvas I What is tho course of tho author's glance aa he sketches tho scone ? In what sense is tho arrangement of tho details a climax '/ Observe tho freciuent men- tion of bright colours. Rhetorically this sketch is composed of two paragraphs — tho first brief and introductory, tho second a climax of three sentences of increas- ing length and power. Tho introductory paragraph comprises twenty- eight words ; the first descriptive sentence, eighty v^ords ; the second, ninety-nine, and tho third, one hun<'red and ninety-nine. The descrip- tion shows great hannony of spirit and detail, vividne.sH of outline and colouring, richness of metaphor ;.nd imagination, intensity of ontliusiiism, and a penetrating and exalted conception of the meaning of tho material world, rarely met with except in tho great j..<ets. 15(it from a rhetorical (as distinguished fron> a literary) point of view, tho charm of the para- graph lies in the eloipient sonority of its periods. Tho wealtii of epithets and of tdaborating phrases employed by Ruskin in this pa.ssago contribute to the fulness of the sound and to tlie rhythmical cadeneo of tho accents. No metrical laws govern the following of accents in prose, yet in rliyth- mical prose there is a certain irregular regularity in tho rising and falling of the sound through stross and intermission, and this characteristic places rhythmical j'roso far above common collo<iuial language, though far below tho most i.iusical verse. Rhythmical proso seems to be tho natural expression of c;;iiviction, persuasion, eiitluisiasui and siutilar moods, as poetical rhytlun is the expression of passion and emotion. Outwardly it depends largely upon a few simple devices : (a) tho use of words in pairs; (h) the use of words in lists; (r) the use of jdirses in succession ; (il) the use of clauses in parallel cotistruction ; (r) tho balance of subject and predicate in length and in fulness of soun<l. These ellects are assisttul by placing tho longer forms last in successions, so as to avoid the flatness <»f weak endings. English proso makes frt'cpunt use of phrases beginning with a preposition and an article ; consotpiently t1i» accents fretpuMitlv TOWNS AND CITIES. 171 fall at intervals of two Hyllables. Symbolic monosyllables seldom take stress. Sometimes the rhythm is metrical for a line or two, e.g., "ahmg the quays before their flutes were ritlin*^ troops of knights " (7, 8) ; is the verb placed before its subject here in order to produce this effect '{ Point out the devices of diction and arranw;«mfnt 'ly which Ruskin achieves sonority in this passage. Mention words whicii. on accoimt of the nature and distribution of their vowels and consonants, contribute a full or orotund quality of sound. The spiritual jioint of view which gives unity to the details of this picture is indicated in the opening paragraph ; it is that of an artist alive to all bright lights and colours, to all beautiful sounds and forms, and to the *mman and imaginative associations and interpretaticms of what he sees. 4. Here Carlylo docs not attempt to give any complete picture of Birmingham. In it8 main features, he seems to imply, it is like othur large cities. But two aspects of the place strike him, and these he depicts. What are these two aspects? Is there any effectiveness in placing them side by side ? What is the mood of the writer as he depicts each of them ? PRACTICE. Practice List: Write a composition < ! about sixty lines on one of the following subjects : — 1. My Native Town. 2. A Country Village. :i Tlu' Capitivl. 4. An Indian Settlement. " 5. A LuuiImt (yanip. (5. A Suiniiier Ui'Hort. 7. A Weattaii City. «. A Villa^re Street. 9. A City Square. 10. A Bird's-eye View. 172 DESClilPTIV E COMPOSITIONS. Flans : My Native Town. First Plan. — Described for one who had never seen it. 1. General viow from some elevated point. 2. (leneral cl>aracter. 3. Entorinjj; from railway station. 4. Main street. 5. Side streets. H. Chief buildings. 7. Natural surroundings. Second Plan. — Described for one who had been long absent. 1. Cleneral description of what the town used to be. 2. CJeneral change in popidation, institutions. 3. Particular changes in buildings, stores, roads, railways. 4. Educational changes, schools, teachers. 5. Particulars about persons. 6. Much remains unchanged. 7. Comparison of past and present. 8. (j lance at the prospect. Practical Suggestions : 1. A duscripti«m if» not a mere catalogue of details, luit a picture with purpose and harmony. 2. Do not dwell hmg on what your reader kn»)W8 thonjughly well ; suggest what is well known, and dwell upon the novel and interesting features. 3. Consider the ol)ject to be (lescribed initil the s<ilient features of it stand «>ut prominently ; grasp these, and arrange them in the order most helpful to the reader. , 4. Well-chosen epithets, well-chosen similitudes, and the use of a.sHociated stories and tratlitions, are powerful aids in description. I'EN roHTUAITS. 173 CHAPTER XV. I'KN- PORTRAITS. MODELS. I. — William the Third. — He wiis now in his thirty-seventh year, l)ut both in body and niiiul lie wiis okler tlian other men of jTts age, indeed it may bo said that he liad never been young. His oxtornal apjieaiance is almost as well known to lis as '.o his own caittains and couiicillors. Scul|)t()rs, painters, and medallists 5 exerted their utmost skill in the work of transmitting his features to posterity, and his teaturcis were such as no artist could fail to seize, and such as, once seen, could never be forgotten. His nami! at once cal's up Iwrfore us a slender and feeble frame, a lofty and am[>lt! foidicad, a iio.si! curved like the beak of an eagle, an lo eyo rivalling that of an eagle in brightness and keenness, a thoughtful and somewhat sullen brow, a firm and somewhat peevish mouth, a chef^k jiale, tliiii, and deeply furrowcMl by sickness and by care. That pensive, s<'vere, and solemn aspect could scarcely have belonged to a liappy or good humoriul man. But it indicates in a is manner not to be mistaktM. capacity (!(jual to the most arduous ent<'r- prises, and fortiLu«le not to lio shaken by reverses or dangers. Aiu.':tiuaij's " History of Kiujlami." Jl>i ;>cr/;iiwio« uf the publishers. IT.— The Duke of Wellinpfton.- By far the most inten^sting figun^ present was the old Duke of Wdliti/tofi, who appeared between Iwehcaml one, and slowly glided (liroui;li the rooms trulv a beaulit'ul old man ; i had never seen till now li4>w beautiful, and what an expression <»f graceful simjdicity, veracity, and nobleness •> there is about the old hero when you Hee him close at hand. His v<My si/o had hitherto deceived me. He is a shortish, Hligbtish figure, alxtut five fe(!t eight, of good breadth, however, and all muscle or bone. Jlis h'gs, r think, Uiusl, be the short y\,rt of him, for certainly on 174 DESCRIPTIVE COMPOSITIONS. I I •<' liorsoback I have always taken him to be tall. Eyes, ])eautiful light 1)1 uo, full t)f mild valor, with infinitely more faculty and geniality than T had fancied before : the face wholly gentle, wise, valiant, and venerable. The voice, too, as I again heard, is "atjuiline" ch^ar, f)erfectly ecjuable — uncracked, that is — and perhaps almost musical, 15 but essentially tenor or almost treVjlo voice — eighty-two, I under- stand. He glid(^d slowly along, slightly saluting this and that other, clear, clean, fr(>sh as this June evening itself, till the silver buckle of his stock vanish(Kl into the door of the next nwnn, and I saw him no more. E.xcept Dr. Chalmers, I have not for many years se<!n so 20 beautiful an old man. Carlyle ijuoted in Frniide's " Thnina» Carlyle." By 2>ennuiiion of the inif/linhcrs. Ill — Carlyle and His Wife. — He was then fifty-four years old ; tall (about five feet eleven), thin, but at that time upright, with no signs of the later stoop. His body was angular, his face beardless, such as it is represented in W(K»lner's medallion, which is 6 by far the best likeness of him in the days of his strength. His head was extremely long, with the chin thrust forward ; tli<! neck was thin; the mouth firiidy closed, the under lip slightly projecting; the hair grizzled and thick and bushy. His eyes, whirh gi'«'W lighter with age, were then of a deep violet, with fire burning at the i(il>ottomof them, which Hashed out at the least excitement. The face was altogether most striking, most impressive ev<'ry way. And T did not .idmin; him tlu! less because he treated uw — I cjinnot .say unkindly, but shortly and sternly. I saw then what T .saw ever after — that no one need look for conventional politeness from IB Carlyle — he would hear the exact truth from him and nothing else. We went afterwards into the dining-room, where Mi-s. Carlyle gave us tea. Her features were not regular, but. I thought I had iievi'r seen a metre interesting-hwtking woman. Her hair was raven •2()i»lack, her <>yes dark, soft, sad, with dang«'rous light, in timm. Carlyle's talk was rich, full, and scornful : hers delicately mocking. She was fond of Spedding, and kept up a »juick, sparkling conver. sation with him, telling stories at her husband's expense, at which lie laugh«Hl hinjself as heartily as we did. /"'roui^p'* " T'/iyma* Carlyle." By ftennitgion n/ the /niblinhers. n 1 PEN-FOHTliAITS. 175 IV — D&nte. — An unimportant, wandering, sorrow-stricken man; not much note was taken of him while he lived, and the most of that has vanished in the long space that now intervenes. It is five centuries since he ceased writinj; and living here. After all the commentaries the Book itself (The Divine Comedy) is mainly 5 what we know of him. The Book ;— and we might add that portrait commonly attributed to Giotto, which, looking on it, you cannot helj) inclining to think genuine, whoever did it. To me it is a most touching face ; perhaps of all faces I know, the lo most so. Blank there, painted as on vacancy, with the simple laurel wound round it ; the; deathless sorrow and pain, the known victory which is also deathless ; — significant of the whole history of Dante ! I think it is the mournfulest face that ever Was painted from reality ; an altogether tragic, heart-affecting face. There is in it, as founda- 15 tion of it, the softne.ss, t«!nderness, gentle affrctiou as of a child ; but .'ill this is as if congealed into sharp contnidiction, into abnegation, isolation, proud hopeless pain. A soft ethei-cal soul looking out so stern, implacable, grim-trenchant, as from imprisonment of thick- ribbed ice • 20 Withal it is a silent pain too, a silent scornful one : the lip is curled in a kind of godlike disdain of the thing that is eating out his heart, — as if it were withal a mean, iusignilicant thing, as if he whom it had j)ower to torture and strangh? were greater than it. The face of one wholly in protest, and life-long unsurrendering battle iigainst tluvifi world. Aflection all converted into indignation ; an iniplaoable indignation ; slow, equable, implacable, silent, like tliiit of a god ! The eye, too, it looks out in a kind of surprise, a kind of inquiry Why the world was of such a sort? This is J)iiute : so lie looks, this "voice of ten sileiit centuries ; ;«» and sings us his mystic, unfathomablr song." Carlni't " Pant ami Prrsvnt." v.— Adam Bede in the Workshop. The afternoon sun was" warm on lie five workmen there, busy upon d(X)rs and window- frames and wainscoting. A scent of pine wooti tVoni a tent-like pile of planks outside the open door mingleil itself with the scent of the 170 DESCRIPTIVE ahMPoai riONS. .; J elder-biisliea which were spreading their summer snow close to the open window opj>o.sito ; the slanting sunboHms shone through the transparent shavings that flew before the steady plane, and lit up the flue grain of the oak paneling which stood propped against the wall. On a heap of those soft shavings a rough gray slieph(!rd 1 dog liad made himself a pleasant bed, and was lying with his nose betw(!en his fore-paws, occji.sionally wrinkling his brows to cast a glance at the tallest of the five workmen, who was carving a shield in the centre of a wooden niiiiitiiliticcc. ]t was to this workman that the strong barytone belon^t-d which was hoard above the sound 15 of plane and hammer, singing : — " Awaki! luy soul, .ind witli the sua The daily stage of duty run ; Shake oflf dull sloth—" Here some measurement was to be taken whicli required more con- 2ocentrated attention, and the sonorous voic(! subsided into a low whistle; Imt it presently broke out again with renewed vigor : — " Ijct all thy converse be sincere. Thy oouscienoe as the noou-ilj^ clear." Such a voice could only come from a broad chest, and the broad !i6 chest belongetl to a largc-l>oned, muscular num. Ji^ii ly six feet high, with a back so flat and a head so well (^tjised that when he «h'ew him- self up to take a more distant survey of h.i« work he had the aiv of a soldier standing at, ease. The slcfvc; rolled up above the elbow showed an arm that wsis likely to win the ))nze for feats of stn-ngth ; oyot the long, supple hand, with its bniad tiiurt-r tips, looked ready for works of skill. In his tall stalwartneHs Adam K«'<ie w;us a Saxon, and justitif d his name ; but the jet-bUck luiir. ni.ide the mor«(» notice- able by its contrast with the light piijMir cap and the kecm glance of tlie dark ey<!S that shone from under strongly iiiark«>d, preminent, ;if>and mobile eyebrows, indicated a mi.xture of (y(»l(ic blood. The f*re was lar^f and roughly hewn, and when in rejM>s<' had no other beauty than such as belongs to an expression of good-lnnnounul, honest intelligence. George Eliot's "Adam Bedt." l!;/ 1'< rmi.ininn of the jmbluhcrs. PEN- PORT RAITS. 177 VI.— The School-master of Sleepy Hollow— The cognomen • of Crano wus not m;i.pplical)lo to tins j)erson. He was tall, but exceedingly lank, with narrow shoulders, long arms and legs, hands that dangled a niilo out of his sleeves, feet that might have served for shovels, and his whole frame most loosely hung together. His " head was small, and flat at top, with huge eai-s, large green, glassy eyes, and a Jong snipe nose, so that it looked like a weathercock perched upon his spindle neck, to tell which way the wind blew. To see him striding along the profile of a hill on a windy day, with his clothes bagging and fluttering about him, one might have mistaken i<- hini for the genius of famine descending upon the earth, or some scarecrow eloped from a cornfield. Irvinsfs " Legend of Sleepy IIollow." VII.— Dinah Morris the Methodist Preacher.— The traveller pushed his horse on to the Green as Dinuli walked rather quickly, and in advance of her companions, toward the cart undtT the maple-tree. While she was near Seth's tall figure she looked short, but wlu^n she mounted the cart^ and was away from all s comparision, she seemed above the n»iddle height of woman, though in reality she did not exceed it— an effect which was due to the slimness of her figure, and the simple line of her black stuff" dre.ss. The stranger was struck with surprise as he saw her api)i'oac;h and mount the cart --surprise, not so much at the feminine deli- lo cacy of hvr appearance as at the total absence of self-coi:sciousness «jf l»«r <leiueari<)r. He liad made up his mind to see her advance with a nvasured scej), and a demure solemnity of countenance ; he had felt sure that hw face would bo mantled with a smile of conscious sainuliij), or else charg(>d with denunciatory bittiu-ness. lo He knew but two tyjtes of Meth()<li.sts — the ecstatic and the bilious. Hut Dinah walked as simply as if she were going to market, and seemed as unconscious of her outward appearance as a little boy ; there was no blush, no trcmulousness, which said, " I know you think nie a jjretty woman, too young to j)reach " ; no casting up or 2(> down of tho eyelids, no compression of the lips, no attitude of tli<! arms, that said, " l)ut you must think of me as a saint." Slie lield no book in licr ungloved hands, but let them hang down lightly ■if Ml 178 DESCRIPTIVE COMPOSITIONS. crossed buforo her, as she stood and turned lier gi'uy eyes on the people, 25 There was no keenness in the eyes ; they seemed rather to be shedding love than making observations ; they had tlie liquid look that tells that the mind is full of what it has to give out, rather than impressed by external objects. She stood with her left hand toward the de- scending sun, and leafy boughs scniened her fi-om its rays j but in 30 this sober light the delicate coloring of her face seemed to gather a calm vividness, like flowera at evening. It was a small oval face, of a uniform transparent whiteness, with an egg like line of cheek and chin ; a full but firm mouth, a delicate nostril, and a low perpen- dicular brow, surmounted by a rising arch of j)arting, between 35 smooth locks of pale reddish hair. The hair was drawn straight back behind the ears and covered, except foi- an inch or two above the brow, by a neat Quaker cap. The eyebrows, of the same color as the hair, were perfectly horizontal, and firmly penciled ; the eyelashes, though no darker, were long and abundant ; nothing was left blurred 40 or unfinished. It was one of those faces that make one think of white flowers with light totiches of color on their pure petals. The eyes had no peculiar beauty beyond that of expression ; they looked so simple, so camlid, so gr.ively loving, that no accusing scowl, no light aueer could help melting away befoi-e their glance. Georye Kliot's " Adam Bede," By pfrmintmn of the jmhlinhfra. i\ EXAMINATION OF MODELS. The order of Pen-portraituro may perhaps lie described as an interent- onhr ; tlie inatorial is frecjuently juTunged in a climax ; it, proceeds from a vague sketcli to a vivid and definite picture ; frcijiieiitly there is some fejiture of the |)icture upon which the autlior lavislies his >:,reatest skill and which may !»e called the centre o/ Interest. In an engvaving representing the figure of a person it will l)e <»bserved that while the eye and the mo\ith are depicted with great delicacy and strength, the parts most remote from tlie face are drawn in coarse lines and wit]i<»ut elaborate finish ; yet tlu; general effect is true to our way of looking at a jierscju. The face is ihiis made the centre of interest. Determine whether in the exampltits of this PEN -POUT RAITB. 170 chapter thero is any (li.sfornil)lo ])rincii>le of order iiccoriliug to wliicli tho description proceeds and whetlier the centi'o of interest in each is chosen naturally, in consideruti«»n of the subject. Before proceeding to prepare the material for any particular sketch it would be wise to make a full list of the points tliat might be mentioned in describing persons— such as age, height, complexion, expression, dress, attitude, hair, carriage ; tlien ti> make some general rules as to which of these points should be selected for specific cases ; as for instance, which points should be emphasised in describing a pt>et, a soldier, an athlete. Wliich points seem to be mentioned in nearly all pen-portraits? When tho material has been selected, much care should be taken to produce the best effect by skilful arrangement. Looking at a picture one gets a ^rd gencnil imprfssi'm of its design and meaning ; then a closer kiunoledije of ihe dffidls ; 1)ut bef )ro turning away one takes a Jindl (jciieral viei(\ differing from the first glance in being m«>re profound and intelligent through the study of the details. A good pen-portrait produces an analogous effect. The openinjj sentence corresponds to tho first general impression, tlio body of the description is a well-ordered study of the special features, tlie coiiclwsion is a reference to the general impression more distinct and convincing than the introduction. Pen-portraits should not, as a rule, bo long ; otherwise they degenerate into mere catalogues of points; the description may be miimte in pro- portion as tlie person describe<l is famous, or interesting to the reader. In literature, where the appearance of an imaginary person is so described as to produce an illusion, elaborate description is usually avoided. Words cannot produce photographic effects, and only suggestion can produce tho effect of truth. Tn The Metr.lmnt of Venice there is a remarkable pen-portrait (Act iii., scene 2), in which a minute description produces a ])owerful and pleasing illusion ; it is noticeable, however, that Bassanio, while speaking of Portia's face, is looking at her jucture. In fiction tho tediousness of detailed description is avoided by mention- ing bit after bit of it at intervals as the story proceeds. If a detailed description in the form of a composition would be too tedious, relate an incident about the person and introduce tho description as an accessory of tho incident. To descrilte tho effect of a person's appearance is often the best means «)f suggesting that appearance. Coleridge uses this device when he nuikes the Ancient Mariner sjiy : — " T iiinvod my lips ; the Pilot shrieked And fill down ill u lit." .;:i IHO DESCRirTIVN CoMl'OSirntNS. Ill ^I'liiiral, tlio unity of ;i ]ii>ii-|Hirlrii'.t is Hecim'd liy mnkiiig all the detiiil» sulxa'dinnto to tliu «vj>^»('.s,si«u o/(7ui/ (((•/(/• in tho fuco ; tliis is best dono by donoting tho expressictii is sonio clour Jind intoresting i>hr)isc. As a study in tho ftrrjingoinent of details in a pen -port rait, niuko a list of tho points mentioned in tho following deHcripti«)n, on tickets, and arrange them in tho most oilectivo order : " Napoleon was at that tiino moderately stout. His stoutness was in- creased later ou by the frequent use of baths, whicli he took to refresh himself after his fatigues. It may bo mentioned that ho had taken the habit of l>athing himself every day at irregular hours, a practice wliich he considerably modified when it was pointed out by his doctor that the fre- <|uent use of hot baths, and the time he spent in them, were weakening, and would predispose to obesity. Napoleon was of mediocre stature (about 6 feet 2 inches), and well built, though tho bust was rather long. His head wiis big and the skull largely developed. His neck was short and his shoulders broad. The size of his chest bes]M)ke a robust consti- tution, less robust however than his mind. His legs were well shaped, his foot was small and well formed. His hand, and ho was rather proud of it, was delicate and plump, with tjvperiiig fingers. His forehead was high and broad, his eyes grey, penetrating, and wonderfully ntobile ; his nose was straightand well shaped. His teeth were fairly good, the mouth jiorfectly modelled, tho upper lip slightly drawn down toward tlie corner of the mouth, and the chin slightly prominent. His skin was smooth and his complexion pale, but of a paUor which denoted a good circulation «tf the Wood His very fine chestnut hair, which, until the time of the expedi- tion to Egypt, he had worn long, cut s(piaro and covering his ears, was clipped short. Tho hair was thin on tho upper part of the head, and left bare his forehead, the seat of such lofty thoughts. The shape of his face and the eiiseialtlo of his features wore remarkably regular. In one word, his head and his bust wore in no way inferior in nobility and dignity to tho most beautiful bust which antiijuity has be(|ueathed to,us. Of this portrait, which in its features underwent little alteration in the last years of his reign, I will add some particulars furnished by my long intimacy with him. When excited by any violent passion his face assumed an even terrible expression. A sort of rotjiry movement very visibly pro- duced itself on his forehe.'id and between his eyebrows ; his eyes flashed fire ; his nostrils dilated, swollen with the inner .stoi'ni. Hut these trans- ient movements, whatever their oiuso may have been, in no way brought disorder to his mind. Ho seemed to be .able to control at will these explosions, which, by tho way, as time went on, became less and less frecpient. His head remained cool. Tho blood never went to it, flowing back to the heart. In ordinary life his expression was calm, meditiitive and gently gi-ave. When in a good humour, or when anxious to please, his expression was sweet and caressing, and his face was lighted up by a most beautiful smile. Amongst funiiliurii his laugh was loud and mocking." PEN-roitTHArrs. 181 1. In describing h limdscnpo it is cuKtoiiiary to Rkctch tlic contour of the scene tirst, and then to chtthe that outline with the appropriate coh^ur and life. In Macaulay'H j)en-portrait of William the Third which lines give the general description the rapid sketch which places tiio picture before us in outline y The second and third sentences give authority to the inscription by dwelling upon the sources of correct information about the king's appearance. It is obvious fr()m the second paragraph that Macaulay had collected a great amount of inforniation concerning this king's appearance ; all good description must be bused upon careful and sufKcient observation ; but the autlior would not have achieved the success he has if ho had mentioned every fact he had learned in his ol»servations. Discuss the wisdom of the sehrtion (in these matters sebrtion, and art are almost synonymous; which presents to us the frame, the forthcdd, the nose, the ej/<!, the brun\ the month, and the cheek of this scholar, soldier, and king. In what sense is the last paragraph a justification of the preceding de- scription ? State briefly the substance of each paragraph, thus constructing a synopsis of the extract. Use this synopsis, making any slight alterations you find necessary, as the outline of a description of any distinguished soldier or stivtesman with whose appearance you are familiar. Strength is one of the predominant qualities of Macaulay's style. Is he fully successful in his endeavor to gain this quality in the first para- graj>h? Tile second j)aragraph is admirable and quite in the author's man- ner. What is the bearing of its second sentence on its first? The swing of the long second sentence following the short quick introductory sentence suggests tli.it the author is well able to make good what ho says. " Sculptors. .. .forgotten" (•'^-8); observe how Macaulay has given force and compactness to this sentence by the deft repetition of "his features" and "such as." The third paragraph gives a multiplicity of details in describing the appearance of William. How has the author avoided the fault of making a mere catalogue of these details ? Note the marked similarity of construction in the successive parts of this sentence. The prose of this sketch has the rhythm of sentence and paragraph usually associated in the mind with oratory. 2. We note in this pen-portrait the first general impression — the details, — the final impression, or summing up. The order of the details is un- usual, owing to the fact that Carlyle had had an erroneous idea of the Duke's appearance ; the most striking and obvious mistake is corrected first. The details of the face are mentioned for the sake of the characLer which they reveal m 13 it ^, IMAGE EVALUATION TEST TARGET (MT-3) 1.0 I.I 11.25 IA&12.8 12.5 1^ 1^ 12.2 2f lag ■" 11° 12.0 Hi ■iS 12 I; I U |l^ Va % ** .»* '/ Photographic Sciences Corporalion \ <v ^ 23 WIST MAIN STRUT WfBSTIR,N.Y. 14SM (716)t73-4S03 *■ 9 % 6^ 182 DESCntPTlVS COMPOSIMONS. 3. In Froude's description of Carlyle we liavo first the general impression of the man seen at a little distance, as it were. Then We are brought closer, and note the minuter points ; the most striking detail, the eyes, conies last, aS a sort of climax. It will be noted that the last sentence in the description of Mrs. Carlyle is an illustration of some of those characteristics which haVe already been mentioned as exhibited in the featureSi 4. Observe the characteristic reference to eternity in the use of "hero "(4). State the bearing of each of the first three paragraphs on the portrait that follows. Macaulay speaks of the figure of William, but Carlyle draws only the bust of Dante ; is there any explanation of the diffeience ? Observe how the lip and the eye, features so expressive of the character and feelings are dwelt upon in this sketch. The autho " appears to attach some significance to the fact that the face is " painted as on vacancy, with the simple laurel wreath around it " ; any background of commonplace accessories would be inappropriate in a portrait of the author of the Dimm Comedy. Why does the author dwell so forcibly u[)on the mournfulness, the tenderness, and the strength of Dante ? Are these parts of his appearance, or of his character? "Like that of a god," what quality of his appearance is brought out by this comparison ? "It looks out," what is suggested by this mode of expression ? What is the relation of the last sentence to the rest of the passage ? Note the construction of the first sentence. The succession of modifiers "unimportant, wandering, sorrow-stricken ;" and "while he lived " and "in the long space that now intervenes" seem to give just the tone of sonorous pathos which the meaning requires. Note throughout the composition the repetition of the words, "face" (10), "faces" (10), "face " (14, 15, and 24), " deathless " (12 and 13), " implacable " (19, 26 and 27), "withal" 21 and 23), "thing" (22 and 23), " a kind of " (28), etc. ; observe the impressiveness of this bald simplicity of diction. "Blank Dante " (12-14) ; the lack of consecutive statement seems to imply that the author is gazing at the picture and muttering his impres- sions. The author has often placed two or more co-ordinate words side by side; as, "unimportant, wandering, sorrow-stricken" (1), "death- less sorrow and pain, and known victory" (12), "an altogether tragic heart-affecting " (16), " softness, tenderness, gentle affection '' (16), " sharp contradiction, into abnegation, isolation, proud, hopeless pain " (17-18), "stern, implacable, grim-trenchant " (19), "slow, ecjuable, implacable, silent " (27) etc. ; these expressions show the enthusiasm of the writer for his subject. Point out in the passage instances of striking or original diction. i PEN-PORTRAITS. 183 6. In till) fifth ])on-pc)rtriiit the chief figure is shown in a workshop, discuss the appropriateness and harnujny oi the back-ground. What is the centre of interest in this picture ? Account for tlie order in which George Eliot arranges her material. The mention of the singing and the interruption suggests the cheerful, even temper of a skilled workman, hajjpy in his work. Why is the arm of the character so carefully described? Mention details in harmony or keeping with the general effect intended, that is, that Adam Bede was a fine, strong character, and an excellent workman. George Eliot in introducing this sketch expresses the intention of vividly reproducing a scene ; consequently the reader may expect a clear and picturesque stylo. Observe that in almost every sentence the desire for picturesqueness has aftected the phraseology. The desire for clearness leads naturally to careful paragraph structure. If the paragraph topic were *' Adam Bede, the workman," would the extract be open to the charge of a lack of unity ? Criticise the opening and concluding sentences as such. Show how the connection is made between each sentence and the one immediately preceding. Remove any lack of clear- ness observable in "but the jet black hair .... Celtic blood" (32-35). Freshness of diction is a supreme merit in descriptive composition. It cannot be attained by the young writer except as the result of careful, thoughtful observation. It is desirable to see things vividly and to express them with truth and fidelity. 6. What is Irving's intention or motive in this sketch ? What means are used to effect that purpose ? Point out all the comparisons stated or implied in the description. The incongruity of using long or unusual words for simple ideas has a humorous effect ; observe the diction of the first sentence. What is the connection of " and his whole frame most loosely hung together " (5). Suggest an improvement. Note the use of hyperbole for a humorous purpose in the second sentence. To what does " it " (7) refer ? Observe the peculiar use of "with'' (3, 6, and 9). Substitute some other con- nective so as to avoid the repetition. Observe the comical effect of "at top » (G), " huge " (6), " snipe " (7), " eloped " (12), and of the com- bination ** for the genius of famine descending upon the earth, or some scarecrow eloped from a cornfield" (11-12)? 7- Where do we get the first general impression of the appearance "f Dinah Morris ? What use of nnjnlire description is made in this extract ? Three comparisons are suggested, to a saint, to a mcrket-wonian, to a Uttle m 184 Dmcn I PTl VE COMPOSITIONS. boy ; what is tlio siynificaiico of eacli? At whicli .soutcuco do we reach the centre of interest ? Is tlicre anything bhirred or unfinished in this pen- portrait? What qualities of character are suggested by the features of Dinah Morris as painted by George Eliot ? Why is " Green " (2) spelt with a capital ? Would you prefer " appear " to "seem" (6). Some authorities sdy ^\Seem is confined to the mind; appear, to the senses.'' What is the purpose of repeating "surprise" in line 10? Note the balanced form of expression in "not so much.... demeanor" (10-12). The logical connection of "He bilious " (16) is with the words "saintship" and "bitterness" above. The use of "I know preach ' " (19-20) and " ' but you siiint ' " is a bold device ; it is a vivid way of showing us a state of mind. Explain the comparison " like flowers at evening " (31). What is the literary merit of "an egg- like line of cheek and chin"? Improve, if possible, the collocation of the phrases in " The hair Quaker cap" (35-37). The last sentence is a fitting conchision ; the author has reached the limit of description in forcing upon us the expression of the eyes ; the sentence sounds like a conclusion. i: PRACTICE. Practice List: 1. A Fellow-student. 2. A Clergyman. 3. An Old Sclioohnaster. 4. A Fruit-vendor. 5. Our Doctor. 6. A Political Leader. 7. Enoch Arden when Old. 8. Roderick Dim. 9. The Policeman on Our Sti-eet. 10. Sir Walter Scott. Flan: The Itinerant Banana Man. 1. His general appearance as he tnuidles his cart. 2. His features and complexion. 3. His winning smile and wheedling voice. 4. His gestures, significant of animation and cheerfulness. 6. A picturesque addition to the neighbourhood. CHARACTER SKETCHES. 185 CHAPTEll XVI. CIIAUACTEU SKETCIIKS. MODELS. I. — Judges Jeffreys. — He was a man of quick and vigorous parts, but constitutionally prone to indolence and to the angry passions. When just emt'rging from boyhood he had risen into practice at the Olil Bailey bar, a bar where advocates have always used a license of tongue unknown in Westminster Hall. 6 Here, during many years, his chief business was to examine the most hardened miscreants of the great capital. Daily conflicts with the vilest criminals called out and exercised his powers so effectually that he became the most consummate bully ever known in his pro- fession. ^^ All tenderness for the feeling of others, all self-respect, all sense of the becoming, were obliterated from his mind. He acquired a boundless command of the rhetoric in which the vulgar express hatred and contempt. The prolusion of malediction and vituperative epithets which composed his vocabulary could hardly have been 16 rivalled in the fish-market or the bear-garden. His countenance and his voice must always have been unamiable. But these natural advantages, — for such he seemed to have thought them, — he had itui)roved to such a degree that there were few who, in his paroxysms of rage, could see or hear him without emotion. Im.20 pudence and ferocity sat upon his brow. The glare of his eye had a fascination for the unhappy victim upon whom they were fixed. Yet his brow and eye were said to be less terrible than the savage lines of his mouth. His yell of fury, as was said by one who had often heard it, sounded like the thunder of the Judgment-day. 86 Macaulay'8 "Hi»tory of England." By permission of (he publithert. II. — ShylOCk. — Shyloc'k is a standing marvel of power and scope in the dramatic art ; at the same time appearing so much a man of Nature's making, that we scarce know how to look upon 186 DESCRIPTIVE COMPOSITIONS. him as tlie Poet's workmansliij). In the delineation Shakespeare 6 had no less a task than to inform with individual life and ])ecu- liarity the broad, stiong outlines of national character in its most fallen and revolting state. Ajcordingly Shylock is a true representative of his nation ; wherein we have a pride which for ages never ceased to provoke hostility, but which no hostility 10 could ever subdue ; a thrift which still invited rapacity, but which no rapacity could ever exhaust ; and a weakness which, while it exposed the subjects to wrong, only deepened their hate, because it left them without the means or the hope of redress. Thus Shylock is a type of national sufferings, sympathies, and antipathies. Himself an ob- is ject of bitter insult and scorn to those about him ; surrounded by enemies whom he is at once too proud to conciliate and too weak to oppose ; he can have no life among them but money; no hold on them but interest ; no feeling towards them but hate ; no indemnity out of them but revenge. Such being the case, what wonder that the 20 elements of national greatness became congealed or petrified into malignity 1 As avarice was the passion in which he mainly lived, of course the Christian virtues that thwarted this were the greatest wrong that could be done him. With these strong national traits are interwoven personal traits 25 equally strong. Thoroughly and intensely Jewish, he is not more a Jew than he is Shylock. In his hard, icy intellectuality, and his " dry, mummy-like tenacity " of purpose, with a dash now and then of biting sarcastic humour, we see the remains of a great and noble nature, out of which all the genial sap of humanity has been pressed 30 by accumulated injuries. With as much elasticity of mind as stiff- ness of neck, every step he takes but the last is as firm as the earth he treads upon. Nothing can daunt, nothing disconcert him ; re- monstrance cannot move, ridicule cannot touch, obloquy cannot exasperate him : when he has not provoked them, he has been forced 36 to bear them ; and now that he does provoke them, he is proof against them. In a word, he may be broken ; he cannot be bent. These several elements of character are so complicated in Shylock, that wo cannot distinguish their respective influence. Ev(!n his avarice has a smack of patriotism. Money is the only defouoe of his CHARACTER SKETCHES. 187 brethren as well as himself, and he craves it for their sake as much 40 as his own ; feels indeed that wrongs are offered to them in him, and to him in them. Antonio has scorned his religion, thwarted him of usurious gains, insulted his })erson: therefore he hates him ' as a Christian, himself a Jew ; as a lender of money gratis, himself a griping usurer ; as Antonio, himself Shylock. Moreover, who but a 46 Christian, one of Antonio's faith and fellowship, has stolen away his daughter's heart, and drawn her into revolt, loaded with his ducats, and his precious, precious jewels) Thus his religion, his patriotism, his avarice, his affection, all concur to stimulate his enmity ; and his personal hate, thus reinforced, for once overcomes his avarice, and he 60 grows generous in the prosecution of his design. The only reason he will vouchsafe for taking the pound of flesh is, "if it will feed nothing else, it will feed my revenge ; " — a reason all the more satis- factory to him, forasmuch as those to whom he gives it can neither allow nor refute it : and until they can rail the seal from off his bond, 56 all their railings are but a foretaste of the revenge he seeks. In his eagerness to taste that morsel sweeter to him than all the luxuries of Italy, his recent afflictions, the loss of his daughter, his ducats, his jewels, and even the precious ring given him by his departed wife, all fade from his mind. In his cool, resolute, unrelenting, imperturb- 60 able hardness at the trial, there is something that makes our blood to tingle. It is the sublimity of malice ! We feel, and tremble as we feel, that the yearnings of revenge have silenced all other cares and all other thoughts. Fearful, however, as is his malignity, he comes not off without moving our pity. In the very act whereby he thinks es to avenge his own and his brethren's wrongs, the national curse over- takes him : in standing up for the law he has but strengthened his enemies' hands, and sharpened their weapons against himself ; and the terrible Jew sinks at last into the poor, pitiable heart-broken Shylock. 70 Hudson't " Life, Art, and Charaetert qf Shakegpeare." 1 1 i m Ku m III. — The Old Angrier. — In a morning's stroll along the banks of the Alun, a beautiful little stream which flows down the Welsh hills and throws itself into the Dee, my attention was attracted to a group seated on the margin, Oq approaching I found it to .188 DESCRIPTIVE COMPOSITIONS. o consist of a veteran angler and two rustic disciples. The former was an old fellow with a wooden leg, with clothes very much but very carefully patched, betokening poverty, honestly come by, and decently maintained. His face bore the marks of former storms, but pi'esent fair weather; its furrows had been worn into an 10 habitual smile ; his iron-gray locks hung about his ears, and he had altogether the good-humored air of a constitutional philoso- j)her who was disposed to take the world as it went. One of his companions was a ragged wight, with the skulking look of an arrant poacher, and I'll warrant could find his way to any gentleman's fish- i5i)ond in the neighborhood in the darkest night. The other was a tall, awkward, country lad, with a lounging gait, and apparently somewhat of a rustic beau. The old man was busy in examining the maw of a trout which he had just killed, to discover by its contents what insects were seasonable for bait ; and was lecturing on the sub- soject to his companions, who appeared to listen with infinite deference. I have a kind feeling toward all " brothers of the angle," ever since I read Izaak Walton. They are men, he afiirms, of a " mild, sweet, and peaceable spirit." I thought that I could perceive in the veteran angler before me an 25 exemplification of what I had read ; and there was a cheerful con- tentedness in his looks that quite drew me toward him. I could not but remark the gallant manner in which he stumped from one part of the brook to another j waving his rod in the air, to keep the line from dragging on the ground or catching among the bushes ; and the 30 adroitness with which he would throw his fly to any particular place ; sometimes skimming it lightly along a little rapid, sometimes casting it into one of those dark holes made by a twisted root or overhanging bank, in which the large trout are apt to lurk. In the meanwhile he was giving instructions to his two disciples ; showing them the 35 manner in which they should handle their rods, fix their flies, and play them along the surface of the stream. I soon fell into conversation with the old angler, and was so much entertained that, under pretext of receiving instructions in his art, I kept company with him almost the whole clay ; wandering along the 40 banks of the stream, and listening to his talk. 1 1 e was very com- CHARACTER SKETCHES. 189 municative, having all the easy gannility of cheerful old age ; and I fancy was a little flattered by having an oi)[)ortunity of displaying his piscatory lore ; for who does nob like now and then to play the sage? He had been much of a rambler in his day, and had passed some <& years of his youth in America, particularly in Savannah, where he had entered into trade, and had been ruined by the indiscretion of a partner. He had afterward experienced many ups and downs in life, until he got into the navy, where his leg was carried away by a cannon-bull, at the battle of Camperdown. This was the only stroke 50 of real good-fortune he had ever ex[)erienced, for it got him a pension, which, together with some small paternal property, brought him in a revenue of neai-ly forty pounds. On this he retired to his native village, where he lived quietly and independently ; and devoted the remainder of his life to the " noble art of angling." ss I found that he had read Izaak Walton attentively, and he seemed to have imbibed all his simple frankness and prevalent good-humor. Though he had been sorely buffeted about the world, he was satisfied that the world, in itself, was good and beautiful. Though he had been as roughly used in different countries as a poor sheep that is 60 fleeced by every hedge and thicket, yet he spoke of every nation with candor and kindness, appearing to look only on the good side of things. On parting with the old angler I inquired after his place of abode ; and happening to be in the neighborhood of the village a few even- 66 ings afterward, I had the curiosity to seek him out. I found him living in a small cottage, containing only one room, but a perfect curi- osity in its method and arrangement. It was on the skirts of the village, on a green bank, a little back from the road, with a small garden in front, stocked with kitchen-herbs, and adorned with a few 70 flowers. The whole front of the cottage was overrun with a honey- suckle. On the top was a ship for a weathercock. The interior was fitted up in a truly nautical style, his ideas of comfort and conveni- ence having been acq\xired on the berthdeck of a man-of-war. A hammock was slung from the ceiling, which, in the day-time, was lashed 76 up so as to take but little room. From the centre of the chamber hung Ui I :U?: : \ 190 DESCRIPTIVE COMPOSITIONS. . ii. a model of a ship, of his own workmanship. Two or tlin3e cliairs, a table, and a large sea-chest, formed the ])rincipal movables. About the wall were stuck up naval ballads, such as " Admiral Hosier's Ghost," 80 " AH in the Downs," and " Tom Bowline," intermingled with pictures of sea-tights, among which the battle of Camperdown held a distin- guished place. The mantel-[)iece was decorated with sea-shells ; over which hung a quadrant, flanked by two wood-cuts of most bitter-look- ing naval commanders. His implements for angling wei'O carefully 86 disposed on nails and hooks about the room. On a shelf was arranged his library, containing a work on angling, much worn, a bible covered with canvas, an odd volume or two of voyages, a nautical almanac, and a book of songs. His family consisted of a large black cat with one eye, and a par- 90 rot which he had caught and tamed and educated himself, in the course of one of his voyages, and which uttered a variety of sea- plu-aaes with the hoai'se rattling tone of a veteran boatswain. The establishment reminded me of that of the renowned Robinson Crusoe ; it was kept in neat order, everything being " stowed away " with the 95 regularity of a ship-of-war ; and he informed me that he " scoured the deck every morning, and swept it between meals." T found him seated on a bench before the door, smoking his pipe in the soft evening sunshine. His cat was purring soberly on the threshold, and his parrot describing some strange evolutions in an 100 iron ring that swung in the centre of his cage. He had been angling all day, and gave me a history of his sport with as much minuteness as a general would talk over a campaign ; being particularly animated in relating the manner in which he had taken a large trout, which had completely tasked all his skill and wariness, and which he had 106 sent as a trophy to mine hostess of the inn. How comforting it is to see a cheerful and contented old age ; and to behold a poor fellow like this, after being tempest-tossed through life, safely moored in a snug and quiet harbor in the evening of his days! His happiness, however, sprung from within himself, and 110 was independent of external circumstances; for he had that inex- haustible good-nature which is the most precious gift of Heaven j CHARACTER HKETCBES. 191 spreading itself like oil over the troubletl sea of thought, and keeping the mind smooth and equable in the roughest weather. On inqiiiiing further about him, I learned that he was a univei-sal favorite in the village, and the oracle of the tap-room, where he ii5 delighted the rustics with his songs, and, like Sinbad, astonished them with his stories of strange lands, and ship-wrecks and sea-fights. He was much noticed, too, by gentlemen sportsmen of the neighbor- hood ; had taught several of them the art of angling, and was a privileged visitor to their kitchens. The whole tenor of his life was 120 quiet and inoffensive, being principally passed about the neighboring streams, when the weather and season were favorable ; and at other times he employed himself at home, preparing his fishing-tackle for the next campaign, or manufacturing rods, nets, and flies, for his patrons and pupils among the gentry. ]25 He was a regular attendant at church on Sundays, though he generally fell asleep during the sermon. He had made it his particular request that when he died he should be buried in a green spot, which he could see from his seat in church, and which he had marked out ever since he was a boy, and had thought of when far from home, on 130 the raging sea, in danger of being food for the fishes ; it was the spot where his father and mother had been buried. Irving't " Sketch-Book." IV. — Wolfe. — James Wolfe was in his thirty-third year. His father was an officer of distinction, Major-General Edward "Wolfe, and he himself, a delicate and sensitive child, but an impetuous and somewhat headstrong youth, had served the King since the age of fifteen. From childhood he had dreamed of the army and 6 the wars. At sixteen he was in Flanders, adjutant of his regi- ment, discharging the duties of his post in a way that gained him early promotion and, along with a painstaking assiduity, showing a precocious faculty for commanding men. He passed with credit through several campaigns, took part in the victory jo of Dettingen, and then went to Scotland to fight at Culloden. Next we find him at Stirling, Perth, and Glasgow, always ardent and always diligent, constant in military duty, and giving his spare hours to mathematics and Latin. He presently fell in love ; and :'„ : m 1. •' 192 DESCRIPTIVE COMPOSITIONS. IB being disappointed, plunged into u variety of dissipations, contrary to his usual habits, which wore far above the standard of that profli- gate time. At twenty-three ho was a lieutenant-colonel, commanding his regiment in the then dirty and barbarous town of Inverness, amid a 20 disaffected and turbulent population whom it was his duty to keep in order : a difficult task, which he accomplished so well as to gain the special commendation of the King, and even the goodwill of the Highlanders themselves. He was five years among these northern hills, battling with ill-health, and restless under the intellectual 25 barrenness of his surroundings. He felt his position to be in no way salutary, and wrote to his mother : " The fear of becoming a mere ruffian and of imbibing the tyrannical principles of an absolute com- mander, or giving way insensibly to the temptations of power till I become proud, insolent, or intolerable, — these considerations will 30 make me wish to leave the regiment before next winter; that by frequenting men above myself I may kr .w my true condition, and by discoui-sing with the other sex may learn some civility and mild- ness of carriage." He got leave of absence, and spent six months in Paris, where he was presented at Court and saw much of the best 36 society. This did not prevent him from working hard to perfect himself in French, as well as in horsemanship, fencing, dancing, and other accomplishments, and from earnestly seeking an opportunity to study the various armies of Europe. In this he was thwarted by the stupidity and prejudice of the commander-in-chief; and he made 40 what amends he could by extensive reading in all that bore on mili- tary matters. His martial instincts were balanced by strong domestic inclina- tions. He was fond of children ; and after his disappointment in love used to say that they were the only true inducement to marriaga 45 He was a most dutiful son, and wrote continually to both his parents. Sometimes he would philosophize on the good and ill of life ; some- times he held questionings with his conscience ; and once he wrote to his mother in a strain of self-accusation not to be expected from a bold and determined soldier. His nature was a compound of tender- 5onoss and fire, which last sometimes showed itself in sharp and CHA RA CTER iS KETCHES. 108 unpleasant flushes. His cxcitublu temper was capable almost of Hei'ceness, and he could now and then be needlessly stern ; but towards his father, mother, and friends he was a model of steady affection. He made friends readily, and kept them, and was usually a pleasant companion, though subject to sallios of imperious irri 5& tability which occasionally broke through iiis strong sense of good breeding. For this his susceptible constitution was largely answer- able, for he was a living barometer, and b's spiriifl rose and fell with every change of weather. In spite of iiiS impatient outbursts, the ollicerd whom he had commanded remained attached to him for lifejW and, in spite of his rigorous discipline, he was beloved by his soldiers, to whose comfort he was always attentive. Frankness, directness, essential good feeling, and a high integrity atoned for all his faults. In his own view, as expressed to his mother, he was a person of very moderate abilities, aided by more than usual diligence ; but this ^ modest judgment of himself by no means deprived him of self-confid- ence, nor, in time of need, of self-assertion. He delighted in every kind of hardihood ; and, in his contempt for effeminacy, once said to his mother : " Better be a savage of some use than a gentle, amorous puppy, obnoxious to all the world." He was far from de- 70 spising fame j but the controlling principles of his life were duty to his country and his profession, loyalty to the King, and fidelity to his own ideal of the perfect soldier. To the parent who was the con- fidant of his must intimate thoughts he said : " All that I wish for myself is that I may at all times be ready and firm to meet that fate 76 we cannot shun, and to die gracefully and properly when the hour comes." Never was wish more signally fulfilled. Again he tells her : ** My utmost desire and ambition is to look steadily upon danger " ; and his desire was accomplished. His intrepidity was complete. No form of death had pow^r to daunt him. Once and so again, when bound on some deadly enterprise of war, he calmly counts the chances whether or not he can compel his feeble body to bear him on till the work is done. A frame so delicately strung could not have been insensible to danger ; but forgetful of self, and the absorption of every faculty in the object before him, shut out the 36 aeitise of fear. He seems always to have been at his best in the ;!■ 'i \ 194 DESCRIPTIVE COMPOSITIONS. 1 thick of battle ; most complete in his mastery over himself and over others. But it is in tlie intimacies of domestic life that one sees him more 90 closely, and especially in his letters to his mother, from whom he in- herited his frail constitution, without the beauty that distinguished her. "The greatest happiness I wish for here is to see you happy." " If you stay much at home I will come and shut myself up with you for three weeks or a month, and play at piquet from morning till d5 night ; and you shall laugh at my short red hair as much as you ph iise." The playing at piquet was a sacrifice to filial attachment ; for the mother loved cards, and the son did not. " Don't trouble yourself about my room or my bedclothes; too much care and deli- cacy at this time would enervate me and complete the destruction of 100 a tottering constitution. Such as it is, it must serve me now, and I'll make the best of it while it holds." At the beginning of the war his father tried to dissuade him from oflTering his services on board the fleet ; and he replies in a letter to Mrs. Wolfe : " It is no time to think of what is convenient or agreeable ; that i;ervice is certainly 106 the best in which we are the most useful. For my part, I am deter- mined never to give myself a moment's concern about the nature of the duty which His Majesty is pleased to order us upon. It will be a sufficient comfort to you two, as far as my peraon is concerned, — at l^ast it will be a reasonable consolation, — to reflect that the 110 Power which has hitherto preserved me may, if it be his pleasure, continue to do so ; if not, that it is but a few days or a few yeara more or less, and that those who perish in their duty and in the ser- vice of their country die honorably." Then he proceeds to give par- ticular directions about his numerous dogs, for the welfare of which 115 in his absence he provides with a. ixious solicitude, especially for " my friend Caesar, who has great merit and much goodhumor." After the unfci'tunate expedition against Rochefort, when the board of genera! officers appointed to enquire into the affiair were passing the highest encomiums upon his conduct, his parents were at 120 Bath, and he took possession of their house at Blackheath, whence he wrote to his mother : " I lie in your chamber, dress in the General's little parlor, and dine where you did. The most percep- GHARACTEB SKE^FCHM. 195 tible difference and change of affairs (exclusive of the bad table I keep) is the number of dogs in the yard ; but by coaxing Ball \his father's dog] and rubbing his back with my stick, 1 have reconciled 186 him with the new ones, and put them in some measure under his protection." When about to sail on the expedition against Louisbourg, he was anxious for his parents, and wrote to his uncle, Major Wolfe, at Dublin : " I trust you will give the best advice to my mother, and iso such assistance, if it should be wanted, as the distance between you will permit. I mention this because the General seems to decline apace, and nairowly escaped being carried off in the spring. She, poor woman, is in a bad state of health, and needs the care of some friendly hand. She has long and painful fits of illness, which by sue- is& cession and inheritance are likely to devolve on me, since I feel the early symptoms of them." Of his friends Guy Carleton, afterwards Lord Dorchester, and George Warde, the companion of his boyhood, he also asks help for his mother in his absence. His part in the taking of Louisbourg greatly increased his reputa- iw tion. After his return he went to Bath to recruit his health ; and it seems to have been here that he wooed and won Miss Katharine Lowther, daughter of an ex-Governor of Barbadoes, and sister of the future Lord Lonsdale. A betrothal took place, and Wolfe wore her portrait till the night before his death. It was a little before this 145 engagement that he wrote to his friend Lieutenant-Colonel Rickson : " I ha\'e this day signified to Mr. Pitt that he may dispose of my slight carcase as he pleases, and that I am ready for any undertaking within the compass of my skill and cunning. T am in a very bad condition both with the gravel and rheumatism ; but I had much 160 rather die than decline any kind of service that offers. If I followed my own taste it would lead me into Geimany. However, it is not our part to choose, but to obey. My opinion is that I shall join the army in America." Pitt chose him to command the expedition then fitting out against 155 Quebec ; made him a major-general, though, to avoid giving offence to older ofiicers, he was to hold that rank in America alone ; and permitted him to choose his own staff. Appointments made for 196 DESCRIPTIVE COMPOSITIONS. merit, an<l not through routine and patronage, shocked the Duke of 160 Newcastle, to whom a man like Wolfe was a hopeless enigma ; and he told George TI. that Pitt's new general was mad. " Mad is he ] " returned the old King ; ** then 1 hope he will bite some others of my generals." Parkman'8 "Montcalm and Wolfe," EXAMINATION OF MODELS. Character-sketches form a large and important feature in histories and in fiction. Two of the greatest forms of literature, the Drama and the Novel, are devoted mainly to the study of character. The ideal method of description is to show the character to the reader by giving the words and acts of the person under consideration, especially those words and acts which accompany such events and situations as call for earnest- ness and energy. This method is followed in the works of Shakespeare and in those novels where we find our greatest delineations of the human mind. In the brief sketches possible in school compositions it would be well to keep the ideal method in view. The dramatist diflers from the novelist in the respect that while the dramatist never speaks except through his characters the novelist speaks both through and about his characters. The method of the novelist is perhaps best when it most nearly approaches that of the dramatist. In school compositions the character must be described by speaking about it, rather than by the dramatic method ; it must be abstract rather than concrete ; but this fault may be redeemed to some extent by relating incidents, and quoting characteristic sayings, of the person. Many character-sketches aim at describing some phase or foible of a person rather than at describing the person completely. A complete character-sketch usually gives some intimation of the appearance, because of the close relation between the mind and the body. The most popular types of character in literature are princes, priests, soldiers, villains, jesters, lovers, eccentric persons, heroes, artists, politicians. It is sometimes important in describing a character to give the reader a distinct idea from the beginning, of the general class or type to which the character belongs: especially is this true in short dramatic sketches. L CHARACTER SKETCHES 191 1. In what sense are the paragraph on the early life of the brutal chief -justice, and that on his disposition and address, parts of the pen- portrait? What is the advantage of the reflected description (that is, description gathered from a statement of the effect of the appearance) of Jeffreys in the latter part of the second sentence of the last paragraph, "few who .... without emotion?" " Impudence and ferocity sat upon his brow," what is the literal meaning of this assertion ? When Macaulay mentions the fascination of the judge's eye, what comparison seems to be in his mind. The sound of the last sentence echoes its sense : the sen- tence not only expresses forcibly the fury of the yell but suggests the doom of the victim. The author makes much of the voice of Jeffreys in order to accentuate the ferocity of his nature ; does the description of his voice give us any help in forming an idea of his appearance. Does the author in this instance give us any general idea of the appearance of the subject of the portrait before entering into detailed description ? The first two sentences are vigorous and telling ; this is owing partly to the fact that these sentences are somewhat similar in formation. What is the point of similarity? Account for the order of the parts of the sub- ject in the first sentence of the second paragraph. " His countenance unamiable ;" Macaulay makes much use of these short, clear, sentences in making assertions, either dogmatic assertions or assertions which he is about to prove. In what parts of the composition are such sentences usually found? Is the parenthesis "for such them" (18-19) justifiable? "Yet his brow mouth;" what is the bearing of this sentence on the two preceding sentences? How is this connection made clear to the reader. 2. Though Shylock is a character in fiction, Hudson constantly speaks of him as a real person. There is a reality, surpassing the reality of fact, in Shakespeare's great characters ; we know them more intimately than we can know most of the persons we meet every day. Observe the method of Hudson's compo.^'ition : in the first sentence he takes a general esti- mate of the subject of the sketch, as a work of dramatic art : he tlicn proceeds to examine him from various points of view, racial, personal, professional, and religious ; he illustrates some of the qualities he has mentioned by giving us the words a.jd acts of Shylock : the sketch con- cludes with a masterly estimate of the Jew as seen in that terrible crisis of his life, the Trial Scene, where nearly every passion of humanity searches and exercises his powerful nature. Make a list of the qualities of Shylock mentioned by Hudson. Mention any pointa of view from which Hudion doey not dturibe him. Shvlooli 1^ DESCRIPTIVE COMPOSITIONS. has many bad qualities but he still possesses something which enlists our sympathies sufficiently to preserve artistic interest. A thoroughly bad character is not a proper subject for art, it would be repulsive to the taste : Milton's Lticiferj Shakespeare's lago^ George Eliot's Tito Melema, have great and noble qualities. What are the good qualities of Shylock ? To what does "wherein" (8) refer? What duty in the paragraph structure is performed by "With these strong national traits" (24), and "These several elements of character" (37)? Comment upon the opening sentence of the second paragraph as an opening sentence. This paragraph affords a good example of forcible writing. Examine each sentence in reference to that qus''.ty. Quoting the words "if it will feed nothing else, it will feed my revenge" has the effect of putting the Jew's case in the strongest light. Where does the paragraph come to a climax? Compare the tone of the concluding sentences with that of the preceding ones. 3. The old Angler is described from a certain point of view ; we see him through the eyes of Geoffrey Crayon, a refined and humorous observer, full of penetration and of human sympathy. Not the least interesting feature of the sketch is the personality of the author, the unobtrusive "J'' of the composition. The composition of the piece is somewhat as follows : The first meeting of the author with the old Angler — the circumstances — the Angler's appearance — what it betokened — his companions — his occupation — Anglers in general — this one a type of the class ; cheerful, adroit, didactic, communicative — his former life as a traveller, trader, soldier — his means of subsistence — the influence of Walton — his abode — his nautical habits of life — his pets— his way of spending the evening — his happy nature — his popularity — his daily life — his simple faith. Indicate which sentences correspond to these minor topics. Is the character developed by the abstract method or by the presentation of the facts of the Angler's life ? What principle governs the order of the topics dealt with? Is the appear- ance as described in harmony with the character ? What social, mental, and moral qualities may we infer from the information given us ? How is the sketch brought to a natural and satisfactory conclusion ? What is the topic of the first paragraph ? Which sentence disobeys the rule of unity in the paragraph ? What sentences introduce the minor topics? The paragraph will be found to be carefully planned. Trace the line of thought. Criticize "to any gentlemen's. .. .night" (14-15). Examine the sentences of the next two paragraphs (37-55) as to their kind. Observe how the loose, easy sentence structure harmonizes with the easy good-fellowship described. It is necessary to repeat CHARACTER SKETCHES. m "he" (56) in order to make the statement co-ordinato with "I found, etc." Why should the sentences "Though beautiful" (58-59) and "Though things" (59-63) be formed alike? "Yet" is used in the second sentence but not in the first. The reason is that the second sentence is longer and the reference consequently must be made more explicit. Explain the force of "but " (67). "It flowers " (68- 71). This sentence is made weak by a long succession of m«)difiers. Improve it. What is the antecedent of "his" (73)? Criticise "A model of a ship of his own workmanship " (77). In the seventh para- graph (89-96) should the clause "The establishment Crusoe" (92- 93) remain where it is or be attached to the previous sentence ? Why did this establishment remind the author of Robinson Crusoe's ? Comment on the appropriateness of " stowed away '' (94) " scoured the deck " (95-96) "purring soberly "(98) "describing some strange evolutions" (99) and "wariness" (104). Improve "with as much minuteness as a general would talk over a campaign" (101-102). Note how in the ninth para- graph (106-113) a certain conception has tinctured the phraseology of the passage. State this conception. Rewrite the paragraph removing the figurative element. Rewrite the last paragraph so as to avoid the too frequent repetition of the word "he." 4. How does this sketch differ from each of the preceding two in re- spect of the material at the disposal of the author? What phase of Wolfe's character is of most interest to Parkman ? How has this fact influenced his selection from the material at his disposal? Parkman might have contented himself with a bare abstract statement of Wolfe's qualities ; he might have said — Wolfe as a child was delicate, sensitive, impetuous, head-strong, ardent, diligent ; as a man he was soldierly, successful, hot-tempered, aflfectionate, filial, frank, good-hearted, intrepid, playful, grimly humourous, and so on ; how does his sketch as it stands differ from such a bald catalogue of qualities? What is the nature of the introduction ? What is the appropriateness of the last paragraph as a conclusion ? Do you discover any principle of order in the arrangement of the body of the sketch ? Study the first paragraph in reference to the time of the events mentioned. Some of the past tenses of this pjiragraph might with advan- tage be written as past perfects. Suggest some other punctuation for the colon after "order" (21). How far does the third pjvragraph (42-63) of thio extract treat of Wolfe's "domestic inclinations"? Which is the topic sentence ? With whom did Wolfe's virtues (mentioned in lines 62 and 63) atone for his faults? "But distinguished her " (88-91) ; ; 200 DESCRIPTIVE COMPOSITIONS. what do you consider to be the chief defect of this sentence? This sketch of Wolfe abounds in quotation, especially the latter part (92-154). To quote with good effect requires a careful exercise of the judgment. Quotations should not overburden the subject. They should be appro- priate. How far is Parkman justifiable in quoting Wolfe so much ? Explain the relevancy of the quoted portions of the fifth, sixth, and seventh paragraphs (89-139). "Of his friends .... in his absence " (136- 138. If this sentence were written without inversion it would be clumsy, as it is it gives undue emphasis to the names of the friends. Criticise the eighth paragraph (139-153) under the following heads : (a) opening sen- tence, (b) unity, (c) relevancy of the quotation. PRACTICE, Practice List : 1. Portia. 2. Gladstone. 3. Caesar. 4. Washington. 5. A Prominent Politician. 6. A Teacher. 7. An Odd Character, 8. A Boy I Know. 9. Doctor Samuel Johnson 10. An Anarchist. Flan for a Character Sketch : The Character of Isabella of Castile. 1. The purity and beauty of her character. 2. Her personal grace and dignity. 3. Her character as seen in her appearance. 4. Her genius and grandeur of soul. 5. Her firmness, piety, mercy as a ruler. 6. Her encouragement of letters and enterprise. 7i Wbnt the world owes to the influence of Isabella, ANIMALS. 201 IS ). t. id > He CHAPTER XVII. ANIMALS. MODELS. I. — Portrait of Z6rO. — Zero, the involuntary cause of this deplorable misunderstanding, did not at first sight appear to deserve the love of the husband nor to justify the apprehensions of the wife. Like many men of our acquaintance he was absolutely devoid of charms. Nature had been sparing of 6 her gifts in his outward adornment. There was nothing brilliant about him. There h.ul fallen to his lot a soft and feeling heart, but certainly it was but poorly housed. He lacked even the distinguishing marks of good breeding : rather long in the body, low on his legs, with a monstrous head set off with a bristling lo moustache and a woolly tuft of hair, which fell down over his eyes, he had at least an original physiognomy, which saved him from being mistaken for any person. His coat was as mixed as his blood, being of pepper and salt like the beard of a man of fifty-five, straight and curly in patches, close on the back and haunches but heaped up 15 on the neck like a sort of tippet, which fell over his shoulders and gave him a somewhat leonine aspect. Altogether his appearance was, perhaps, odd, but not in the least genteel. No one would have thought that such a dog could have been the successful rival of a pretty woman. Emult's "Le Chien du Capitaine." i i pa II. — Portrait of Rab. — I wish you could have seen him. There are no such dogs now. He belonged to a lost tribe. As I have said, he was brindled and gray like Rubislaw granite; his hair short, hard and close, like a lion's ; his body thick-set, like a bull — a sort vf compressed Hercules of a dog. He must have been ninety pounds' weight, at the least ; he had a large, blunt head ; his muzzle black as night, his mouth blacker than any night, DESClilFTIVE COMPOSITIONS. a tooth or two — being all he had — gleaming out of his jaws of dark- ness. His head was scarred witli the record of old wounds, a sort 10 of series of fields of battle all over it ; one eye out, one ear cropped off as close as was Archbishop Leighton's father's ; the remaining eye had the power of two ; and above it, and in constant communi- cation with it, was the tattered rag of an ear, which was forever unfurling itself like an old flag ; and then that bud of a tail, about 15 one inch long, if it could in any sense bo said to be long, being as broad as long — the mobility, the instantaneousness of that bud was very funny and surprising, and its expressive twinklings and winkings, the intercommunication between the eye, the ear and it, were of the oddest and swiftest. 20 Rab had the dignity and simplicity of great size, and having lought his w.iy all along the road to absolute supremacy, he was as mighty in his own line as Julius Caesar or the Duke of Wellington, and had the gravity of all great fighters. You must have often observed the likeness of certain men to 25 certain animals, and of certain dogs to men. Now I never looked at Rab without thinking of the great Baptist preacher, Andrew Fuller. The same large, heavy, menacing, combative, sombre, honest countenance, the same deep, inevitable eye, the same look — as of thunder asleep, but ready ; neither a dog nor a man to be trifled ^Itn. John Broion's "Rab and his Friends." By ptrmisaion of the ptiblishera. I III— Ichabod Crane Riding the Steed Gunpowder.— That he might make his appearance before his mistress in the true style of a cavalier, Ichabod borrowed a horse from the farmer with whom he was domiciliated, a choleric old Dutchman of the name of Hans Van Ripper, and, thus gallantly mounted, 5 issued forth, like a knight-errant in quest of adventures. But it is meet I should, in the true spirit of romantic story, give some account of the looks and equipment of Tny hero and his steed. The animal he bestrode was a broken-down plough-horse, that had outlived almost everything but his viciousness. He was gaunt and 10 shagged, with a ewe neck and a head like a hammer ; his rusty mane and tail were tangled and knotted with burrs ; one eye had lost its ANIMALS. 203 pupil, and was glaring and spectral ; but the other had the gleam of a genuine devil in it. Still he must have had fire and mettle in his day, if we may judge from the name he bore, of Gunpowder. He had, in fact, been a favorite steed of his master's, the choleric Van 15 Ripper, who was a furious rider, and had infused, very probably, some of his own spirit into the animal ; for, old and broken-down as he looked, there was more of the lurking devil in him than in any young filly in the country. Ichabod was a suitable figure for such a steed. He rode with 20 short stirrups, which brought his knees nearly up to the pommel of the saddle ; his sharp elbows stuck out like grasshoppers' ; he carried his whip perpendicularly in his hand, like a sceptre, and, as his horse jogged on, the motion of his arms was not unlike the flapping of a pair of wings. A small wool hat rested on the top of his nose, for 25 so his scanty strip of forehead might be called ; and the skirts of his black coat fluttered out almost to the horse's tail. Such was the appearance of Ichabod and his steed, as they shambled out of the gate of Hans Van Ripper, and it was altogether such an apparition as is seldom to be met with in broad daylight. ining'a "Sketch-Book." ^ IV.— Draught Horses.— And now there is the thunder of the huge covered waggon, coming home with sacks of grain. That honest waggoner is thinking of his dinner, getting sadly A-y in the oven at this late hour ; but he will not touch it till he has fed his horses — the strong, submissive, meek-eyed beasts, who, I fancy, are 6 looking mild reproach at him from between their blinkers, that he should crack his whip at them in that awful manner, as if they needed that hint! See how they stretch their shoulders up the slope toward the bridge, with all the more energy because they are so near home. Look at their grand, shaggy feet, that seem to grasp 10 the firm earth, at the patient strength of their necks bowed under the heavy collar, at the mighty muscles of their struggling haunches ! I should like well to hear them neigh over their hardly-earned feed of corn, and see them, with their moist necks free from the harness, dipping their eager nostrils into the muddy pond. Now they are on 15 the bridge, and down they go again at a swifter pace, and the arch of the covered waggon disappears at the turning behind the trees. Georgf Eliot' $ • ' The Mill on tht Floss, " By permission of the puUiihtrs, I 204 DESCRIPTIVE COMPOSITIONS. EXAMINATION OF MODELS. The simple description of the bodily peculiarities of animals scarcely enters into literature proper ; such mere enumeration of details is mostly confined to scientific writers and agricultural journals. In literature, some element arising in the writer's mind is interfused into the descrip- tion and gives it form ; some character is ascribed to the animal, or some sentiment or feeling associated with it. This is very manifest in each of the four models. 1. Under what aspect does Enault describe Zdro ? Tell now that afifects the phraseology throughout. Compare the points mentioned here with those mentioned in the picture of Rab. Account for the diflerences and for the difierence of arrangement. What is meant to be shown by the descrip- tion — " rather long in the body — leonine aspect " ? Outline as a contrast to this picture a systematic account of some breed of dogs, as The Blood- hound, and note the difference between popular description and scientific description. The one describes individuals, the other describes types. Expectations of a description are aroused, in the reader's mind, by the opening sentence "Appear to deserve. . . .of the wife " (2, 4); this part of the sentence is rhythmical and pleasing ; to what device are these qualities mainly owing? Does "men" (4) mean otliermen, or should it be read with emphasis ? The author's playfulness afiects the style of the second, third, fourth, and fifth sentences, making them humourously short. " Mis coat was as mixed as his blood," (13) ; this incongruous coupling adds to the humour. Point out similitudes in the remainder of tliis sentence, and state their effect. What bearing has the last sentence upon the first, and upon the unity of the paragraph ? Why should " such " in the last sentence be read with emphasis ? 2. How has the author avoided abruptness in introducing this elaborate description of Rab ? The eye, the ear and tail are the most expressive features of a dog, hence they are made much of here. What distinct pur- pose do paragraphs two and three serve ? Show that they combine readily with each other and with the latter part of the first paragraph. What is the tone of the latter part of the description — after " his muzzle," — ? What is the effect of the comparisons to historical personages ? Note the choice made — "Archbishop Leighton's father," "Julius Ceesar," " Duke of Wellington," " Andrew Fuller." The first sentence denotes Doctor Brown's humourous despair of doing Rab justice. The similitudes of this sentence have great harmony with the subject, are they deficient in variety? What do granite, lion, bull, and Her- cules, suggest beyond the ideA9 they primarily illustrate ? Compare it in ANIMALS. 205 point of unity with the following sontonce : *'Our author's father was b(jrn in the island of Jersey, emigrated to America, and reared a large family of children." By what means does the author achieve emphasis in the expression, "his mouth blacker than any night"? "Scarred with the record of old wounds," (9) ; the oddness of this expression is redeem- ed by its novelty, ingenuity, and fanciful playfulness ; but what does it mean? What expressions below explain "old wounds"? Discuss the unity of this sentence. "Like an old flag," (14) ; this denotes that the ear was thin and fluttering, and suggests Rab's battles. Mention other ingenious and humourous expressions in this sentence. Is the author's use of "you" and "I" appropriate? The longer the author continues to describe Rab the more he speaks of him as if he were a great man, by what means does he make the last sentence a fitting culmination of this humourous climax ? 3. What is the purpose of the description given by Irving of Ichabod Crane's steed ? Point out the parts justifying your opinion. Show the suitableness of the first sentence descriptive of the horse — " The animal, etc." Observe the words in the first eight lines that harmonize with Irving's humourous idea of writing in the "spirit of romantic story." The first sentence leads us to expect a continuation of the narrative of which this sketch is a part. On what ground is the sketch divided into two paragraphs. If the first two sentences were taken as an intro- ductory paragraph, would the second and third paragraphs have suitable first sentences ? Mention five similitudes in the fourth sentence ; what is the purpose of this group of figures ? In another place Irving, speak- ing of Ichabod, says, "the cognomen of Crane was not inapplicable to his person;" (see Chapter ix. Model v); how does this fancy influence the similitudes employed? What purpose does hyperbole serve in this paragraph ? 4 This is a good exam-ple of economy in description ; horses are suffi- ciently familiar, a suggestive touch or two serves to bring them vividly before us. Note the author's sympathy with them ; to her they are impersonations of humble but efiicient and genuine work — for which George Eliot everywhere exhibits the deepest respect and admiration. This feeling determines the whole description. " Grand, shaggy feet" is a very adequate and suggestive touch (for those at least familiar with English draught-horses) to bring the particular kind of horse vividly to mind. The passage, however, is not so much descriptive of horses simply as of horses in inotion. Note how admirably in a phrase or two, various movements and aspects of the horse are suggested. 'H Wh DESCRIPTIVE COMPOSITIONS. PRACTICE. Practice List: Write a compos'tion on one of the following subjects :- 1. Frogs by a Pool. 2. Fowls in a Barnyard. 3. Cattle at the Watering Trough. 4. Squirrels. 6. One of My Pets. 6. An Old Horse. 7. A Hill of Ants. 8. A Comical Animal. 9. Our Dog. 10. A Nest of Birds. Plan: A Nest of Birds. Write a series of topic sentences on the following paragraph subjects and then expand each sentence into a paragraph. Be careful to secure a connection between the paragraphs ; so that when they are written, you may have a succinct composition on the foregoing subject :— 1. A garden in springtime. 2. The bird and its mate. 3. The building of the nest. 4. The nest and eggs. 5. The young birds. 6. The feeding and protection of the young ones. 7. Learning to fly, and departure. ASSEMBLAGES. 207 CHAPTER XVIII. ASSEMBLAGES. MODELS. I.— Sunday in Hayslope Church.— i cannot say that the interior of Hayslope church was remarkable for anything except for the gray age ' » its oaken pews — great square pews mostly, ranged on each side of a narrow aisle. It was free, indeed, from the modern blemish of galleries. The choir had two narrow pews to themselves & in the middle of the right-hand row, so that it was a short process for Joshua llann to take his place among them as principal bass, and return to his desk after the singing was over. The pulpit and desk, gray and old as the pews, stood on one side of the arch leading into tlie chancel, which also had its gray square pews for Mr. Donni- lo thorne's family and servants. Yet I assure you those gray pews, with the bufF-washed walls, gave a very pleasing tone to this shabby interior, and agreed extremely well with the ruddy faces and bright waistcoats. And there were liberal touches of crimson toward the chancel, for the pulpit and Mr. Donnitliorne's own pew had hand- is some crimson cloth cushions ; and, to close the vista, there was a crimson altar-cloth, embroidered with golden rays by Miss Lydia's own hand. But even without the crimson c'oth, the eflfect must have been warm and cheering when Mr. Ir^^'ine was in the desk looking 20 benignly round on that simple congregation — on the hardy old men, with bent knees and shoulders perhaps, but with vigor left for much hedge-clipping and thatching; on the tall stalwart frames and roughly-cut bronzed faces of the stone-cutters and carpenters ; on the half-dozen well-to-do farmers, with their apple-cheeked families ; 20 and on the clean old women, mostly farm-laborers' wives, with their bit of snow-white cap-border under their black bonnets, and with their withered arms, bare from the elbow, folded passively over 208 DESCRIPTIVE COMPOSITIONS. their chests. For none of the old people held books — why should 30 they ? not one of them could read. But they knew a few " good words" by heart, and their withered lips now and then moved silently, following the service without any very clear comprehension indeed, but with a simple faith in its efficacy to ward off harm and bring blessing. And now all faces were visible, for all were stand- as ing up — the little f^hildren on the seats, peeping over the edge of the gray pews — while good old Bishop Ken's evening hymn was being sung to one of those lively psalm-tunes which died out with the last generation of rectors and choral parish-clerks. Melodies die out, like the pipe of Pan, with the ears that love them and listen for 40 them. Adam was not in his usual place among the singers to-day, for he sat with his mother and Seth, and he noticed with surprise that Bartle Massey was absent too, all the more agreeable for Mr. Joshua Rann, who gave out his bass notes with unusual complacency, and threw an extra ray of severity into the glances he sent over his 45 spectacles at the recusant Will Maskery. I beseech you to imagine Mr. Irwine looking round on this scene, in his ample white surplice that became him so well, with his powdered hair thrown back, his rich brown complexion, and his finely-cut nostril and upper lip ; for there was a certain virtue in 50 that benignant yet keen countenance, as there is in all human faces from which a generous soul beams out. And over all streamed the delicious June sunshine through the old windows, with their desultory patches of yellow, red, and blue, that threw pleasant touches of color on the opposite wall. George Eliot's " Adam Bede." By permission of the publishers. II.— The Funeral of the Widow's Son.— I am fond of loitering aboivt country churches ; and this was so delightfully situated, that it frequently attracted me. It stood on a knoll, round .>'luch a small stream made a beautiful bend, and then wound its way through a long reach of soft meadow scenery. The church was surrounded by yew trees, which seemed almost coeval with itself. Its tall Gothic spire shot up lightly from among them, with rooks and crows generally wheeling about it. I was seated there one still sunny morning, watching two laborers who were ASSEMBLAGES. 209 digging a grave. They had chosen one of the most remote and ne- lo glected corners of the churchyard, where, by the number of nameless gmves around, it would appear that tlie indigent and friendless were huddled into the earth. I was told that the new-made grave was for the only son of a poor widow. While I was meditating on the dis- tinctions of worldly i-ank, which extend thus down into the very dust, 16 the toll of the bell announced the approach of the funeral. They were the obsequies of poverty, with which pride had nothing to do. A coffin of the plainest materials, without pall or other covering, was borne by some of the villagers. The sexton walked before with an air of cold indiiference. There were no mock mourners in the trap- 20 pings of affected woe, but there was one real mourner who feebly tottered after the corpse. It was the aged mother of the deceased — the poor old woman whom I had seen seated on the steps of the altar. She was supported by an humble friend, who was endeavoring to comfort her. A few of the neighboring poor had joined the train, 26 and some children of the village were running hand in hand, now shouting with unthinking mirth, and now pausing to gaze, with childish curiosity, on the grief of the mourner. As the funeral train approached the grave, the parson issued from the chuich porch, arrayed in the surplice, with prayer-book in hand, 30 and attended by the clerk. The service, however, was a mere act of charity. The deceased had been destitute, and the survivor was pen- niless. It was shuffled through, therefore, in form, but coldly and unfeelingly. The well-fed priest moved but a few steps from the church door ; his voice could scarcely be heard at the grave ; and 36 never did I hear the funeral service, that sublime and touching cere- mony, turned into such a frigid mummery of words. I approached the grave. The coffin was placed on the ground. On it were inscribed the name and the age of the deceased — " George Somers, aged 26 yeai-s." The poor mother had been assisted to kneel *o down at the head of it. Her withered hands Were clasped, as if in prayer ; but I could perceive, by a feeble rocking of the body, and a convulsive motion of the lips, that she was gazing on the last relics of her son with the yearnings of a mother's heart. Preparations were made to deposit the coffin in the earUi. There 45 '■■,i 210 DESCRIPTIVE COMPOSITIONS. was that bustling stir, which breaks so harshly on the feelings of grief and affection : directions given in the cold tones of business ; the strikmg of spades into sand and gravel ; which, at the grave of those we love, is of all sounds the most withering. The bustle around fio seemed to waken the mother from a wretched reverie. She raised her glazed eyes, and looked about with a faint wildnoss. As the men appi'oached with cords to lower the coffin into the grave, she wrung her hands, and broke into an agony of grief. The poor woman who attended her, took her by the arm, endeavoring to raise her from the 56 earth, and to whisper something like consolation — " Nay, now — nay, now — don't take it so sorely to heart." She could only shake her head, and wring her hands, as one not to be comforted. As they lowered the body into the earth, the creaking of the cords seemed to agonize her ; but when, on some accidental obstruction, 60 there was a jostling of the coffin, all the tenderness of tlie mother burst forth ; as if any harm could come to him who was far beyond the reach of worldly suiFering. I could see no more — my heart swelled into my throat — my eyes filled with tears— -I felt as if I were acting a barbarous part in stand- 65 ing by and gazing idly on this scene of maternal anguish. I wandered to another part of the church-yard, where I remained until the funeral train had dispersed. When I saw the mother slowly and pai;ifully quitting the grave, leaving behind her the remains of all that was dear to her on earth, 70 and returning to silence and destitution, ray heart ached for her. What, thought I, are the distresses of the rich ? They have friends to soothe — pleasures to beguile — a world to divert and dissipate their griefs. What are the sorrows of the young 1 Their growing minds soon close above the wound — their elastic spii'its soon rise beneath 75 the pressure — their green and ductile affisctions soon twine around new objects. But the sorrows of the poor, who have no outward appliances to soothe — the soitows of the aged, with whom life at best is but a winti'y day, and who can look for no after-growth of joy — . the sorrows of a widow, aged, solitary, destitute, mourning over an 80 only son, the last solace of hor yoais ; — these are indeed sorrows which make us feel the imjjotency of consolation. irvinfs " Skpteh-Book." I ASSEMBLAGES. 211 III.— The Trial of Warren Hastings.— The place was worthy of such a trial. It was the great hall of William Rufua, the hall which had resounded with acclamations at the inaugura- tion of thirty kings, the hall which had witnessed the just sentence of Bacon and the just absolution of Seniors, the hall e where the eloquence of Strafford ha<l for a moment awed and melted a victorious party inflamed witlx just resentment, the hall where Charles had confronted the High Court of Justice with the placid courage which has half redeemed his fame. Neither military nor civil pomp was wanting. The avenues were lined with grena- lo diers. The streets were kept clear by cavalry. The peers, robed in gold and ermine, were marshalled by the heralds under Garter King-at-arms. The judges in their vestments of state attended to give advice on points of law. Near a hundred and seventy lords, three fourths of the Upper House as the Upper House then was, 15 walked in solemn order from their usual place of assembling to the tribunal. The junior baron present led tho way, George Eliott, Lord Heathfield, recently ennobled for his memorable defence of Gibraltar against the fleets and armies of France and Spain. The long pro- cession was closed by the Duke of Norfolk, Earl Marshal of the 20 realm, by the great dignitaries, and by the brothers and sons of the King. Last of all came the Prince of Wales, conspicuous by his fine person and noble bearing. The grey old walls were hung with scarlet. The long galleries were crowded by an audience such as has rarely excited the feara or the emulation of an orator. There were gathered 26 together, from all parts of a great, free, enlightened, and prosperous empire, grace and female loveliness, wit and learning, the representa- tives of every science and of every art. There were seated round the Queen the fair-haired young daughters of the house of Brunswick. There the Ambassadors of great Kings and Commonwealths gazed 30 with admiration on a spectacle which no other country in the world could present. There Siddons, in the prime of her majestic beauty, looked with emotion on a scene surpassing all the imitations of the stage. There the historian of the Roman Empire thought of the days when Cicero pleaded the cause of Sicily against Venes, and when, 36 before a senate which still retained some show of freedom, Tacitus i j 212 DESCRIPTIVE COMPOSITIONS. thundered against the oppressor of Africa. There were seen, side by side, the greatest painter and the greatest scholar of the age. The spectacle had allured Reynqids from that easel which has preserved 40 to us the thoughtful foreheads of so many writers and statesmen, and the sweet smiles of so many noble matrons. It had induced Parr to suspend his labours in that dark and profound mine from which he had extracted a vast treasure of erudition, a treasure too often buried in the earth, too often paraded with injudicious and inelegant 46 ostentation, but still precious, massive, and splendid. There appeared the voluptuous charms of her to whom the heir of the throne had in secret plighted his faith. There too was she, the beautiful mother of a beautiful race, the Saint Cecilia whose delicate features, lighted up by love and music, art has rescued from the common decay. so There were the members of that brilliant society which quoted, criti- cized, and exchanged repartees, under the rich peacock-hangings of Montague. And there the ladies whose lips, more persuasive than those of Fox himself, had carried the Westminster election against palace and treasury, shone round Georgiana Duchess of 65 Devonshire. The Sergeants made proclamation. Hastings advanced to the bar, and bent his knee. The culprit was indeed not unworthy of that great presence. He had ruled an extensive and populous country, and made laws and treaties, had sent forth armies, had set up and 60 pulled down princes. And in his high place he had so borne himself, that all had feared him, that most had loved him, and that hatred itself could deny him no title to glory, except virtue. He looked like a great man, and not like a bad man. A person small and emaciated, yet deriving dignity from a carriage which, while it 66 indicated deference to the court, indicated also habitual self-possession and self-respect, a high and intellectual forehead, a brow pensive, but not gloomy, a mouth of inflexible decision, a face pale and worn, but serene, on which was written, as legibly as under the picture in the council-chamber at Calcutta, Mens ceqtui in arduis / such was the 70 aspect with which the great proconsul presented himself to his judges. His counsel accompanied him, men all of whom were afterwards ASSEMBLAGES. 213 raised by their talents and learning to the highest posts in their pro- fession, the bold and strong-minded Law, afterwards Chief Justice of the King's Bench ; the more humane and eloquent Dallas, afterwards 75 Chief Justice of the Common Fleas ; and Plomer who, near twenty years later, successfully conducted in the same high court the defence of Lord Melville, and subsequently became Vice-chancellor and Master of the Kolls. But neither the culprit nor his advocates attracted so much notice so as the accusers. In the midst of the blaze of red drapery, a space had been fitted up with green benches, and tables for the Commons. The managers, with Burke at their head, appeared in full dress. The collectors of gossip did not fail to remark that even Fox, generally so regardless of his appearance, had paid to the illustrious tribunal the ss compliment of wearing a bag and sword. Pitt had refused to be one of the conductors of the impeachment ; and his commanding, copious, and sonorous eloquence was wanting to that great muster of various talents. Age and blindness had unfitted Lord North for the duties of a public prosecutor ; and his friends were left without the help so of his excellent sense, his tact, and his urbanity. But, in spite of the absence of these two distinguished members of the Lower House, the box in which the managers stood contained an array of speakers such as perhaps had not appeared together since the great age of Athenian eloquence. There were Fox and Sheridan, the English 95 Demosthenes and the English Hyperides. There was Burke, ignor- ant, indeed, or negligent of the art of adapting his reasonings and his style to the capacity and taste of his hearers, but in amplitude of comprehension and richness of imagination superior to every orator, ancient or modern. There, with eyes reverentially fixed on Burke, loo appeared the finest gentleman of the age, his form developed by every manly exercise, his face beaming with intelligence and spirit, the in- genious, the chivalrous, the high-souled Windham. Nor, though surrounded by such men, did the youngest manager pass unnoticed. At an age when most of those who distinguished themselves in life 105 are still contending for prizes and fellowships at college, he had won for himself a conspicuous place in parliament. No advantage of for- tune or connection was wanting that could set off to the height his ill n 1 ( 214 DESCRIPTIVE COMPOSITIONS. I I' . splendid talents and his unblemished honour. At twenty-three he 110 had been thought worthy to be ranked with the vetemn statesmen who apjjeared as the delegates of the British Commons, at the bar ot the British nobility. All who stood at that bar, save him alone, are gone, culprit, advocates, accusers. To the generation which is now in the vigour of life, he is the sole representative of a great age which 115 has passed away. But those who, within the last ten years, have listened with delight, till the morning sun shone on the tapestries of the House of Lords, to the lofty and animated eloquence of Charles Earl Grey, are able to form some estimate of the powers oi u, race of men amon£; whom he was not the foremost. Maeaulay'a " Warren Hcutingt." IV.— Christmas Eve at Bracebridge Hall.~So intent were the servants upon their sfx^rts, that we had to ring repeatedly before we could make oui'selves heard. On our arrival being announced, the 'Squii-e came out to receive us, accompanied by 6 his two other sons ; one, a young officer, in the army, home on leave of absence; the other an Oxonian, just from the university. The 'Squire was a fine healthy-looking old gentleman, with silver hair curling lightly round an open florid countenance; in which a physiognomist, with the advantage, like myself, of a previous hint 10 or two, might discover a singular mixture of whim and benevolence. The family meeting was warm and affectionate; as the evening was far advanced, the 'Squire would not permit us to change our travelling dresses, but ushered us at once to the company, which was assembled in a large old-fashioned hall. Ifj was composed of different 16 branches of a numerous family connection, where there were the usual proportion of old uncles and aunts, comfortable married dames, superannuated spinsters, blooming country cousins, half-fledged striplings, and bright-eyed boarding-school hoydens. They were variously occupied ; some at a round game of cards ; others conversing 90 round the firaplace ; at one end of the hall w^as a group of the young folks, some nearly grown up, others of a moi-e tender and budding age, fully engrossed by a merry game ; and a profusion of wooden horses, penny trumpets, and tattered dolls about the floor, showed ASSEMBLAGES. 215 s traces of a troop of little fairy beings, who, having frolicked thi'ough a happy day, had been carried off to slumber through a peaceful 25 night. While the mutual greetings were going on between young Brace- bridge and his relatives, I had time to scan the apartment. I have called it a hall, for so it had certainly been in olden times, and the 'Squire had evidently endeavored to restore it to something of its 30 primitive state. Over the heavy projecting fireplace was suspended a picture of a warrior in armor, standing by a white horae, and on the opposite wall hung a helmet, buckler, and lance. At one end an enormous pair of antlers were inserted in the wall, the branches serving as hooks on which to suspend hats, whips, and spurs ; and in 35 the corners of the apartment were fowling-pieces, fishing-rods, and other sporting implements. The furniture was of the cumbrous workmanship of former days, though some articles of modern conven- ience had been added, and the oaken floor had been carpeted j so that the whole presented an odd mixture uf parlor and hall. 40 The grate had been removed from the wide overwhelming fireplace, to make way for a fire of wood, in the midst of which was an enor- mous log, glowing and blazing, and sending forth a vast volume of light and heat ; this I undei-stood was the yule clog, which the 'Squire was particular in having brought in and illumined on a Christmas 45 eve, according to ancient custom. It was really delightful to see the old 'Squire, seated in his heredit- ary elbow-chair, by the hospitable fireside of his ancestors, and look- ing around him like the sun of a system, beaming warmth and glad- ness to every heart Even the very dog that lay stretched at his so feet, as he lazily shifted his position and yawned, would look fondly up in his master's face, wag his tail against the floor, and stretch him- self again to sleep, confident of kindness and protection. There is an emanation from the heart in genuine hospitality, which cannot be tlescribed, but is immediately felt, and puts the stranger at once at 66 his ease. I had not been seated many minutes by the comfortable hearth of the worthy old cavalier, before I found myself as much at home as if I had been one of the family. Supper was announced shortly after our arrival. It was served up i > - :.. 1 1 216 DESCRIPTIVE COMPOSITIONS. 60 in a spacious oaken chamber, the panels of which shone with wax, and around which were several family portraits decorated with holly and ivy. Besides the accustomed lights, two great wax tapers, called Christmas candles, wreathed with greens, were placed on a highly polished buffet among the family plate. The table was abundantly 65 spread with substantial fare ; but the 'Squire made his supper of frumenty, a dish made of wheat cakes boiled in milk with rich spices, being a standing dish in old times for Christmas eve. I was happy to find my old friend, minced pie, in the retinue of the feast ; and find- ing him to be perfec*,iy orthodox, and that I need not be ashamed of ray predilection, I greeted him with all the warmth wherewith we usually greet an old and very genteel acquaintance. The mirth of the company was greatly promoted by the huuAOrs of an eccentric personage, whom. Mr. Bracebridge always addressed with the quaint appellation of Master Simon. He was a tight, brisk little 76 man, with the air of an arrant old bachelor. His nose was shaped like the bill of a parrot, his face slightly pitted with the small-pox, with a dry perpetual bloom on it, like a frost-bitten leaf in autumn. He had an eye of great quickness and vivacity, with a drollery and lurking M.ggery of expression that was irresistible. He was evi- sodently the wit of the family, dealing very much in sly jokes and innuendoes with the ladies, and making infinite merriment by harp- ings upon old themes ; which, unfortunately, my ignorance of the family chronicles did not permit me to enjoy. It seemed to be his great delight, during supper, to keep a young girl next to him in a 85 continual agony of stifled laughter, in spite of Tier awe of the re- proving looks of her mother, who sat opposite. Indeed, he was the idol of the younger part of the company, who laughed at everything he said or did, and at every turn of his countenance. I could not wonder at it ; for he must have been a miracle of accomplishments in go their eyes. He could imitate Punch and Judy ; make an old woman of his hand, with the assistance of a burnt cork and pocket handker- chief ; and cut an orange into such a ludicrous caricature, that the young folks were ready to die with laughing. I was let briefly into his history by Frank Bracebridge. He was tiaa old bachelor, of a small independent income, which, by careful ASSEMBLAGES. 217 management, was sufficient for all his wants. He revolved through the family system like a vagrant comet in its orbit ; pometimes visit- ing one branch, and sometimes another quite remote, as is often the case with gentlemen of extensive connections and small fortunes in England. He had a chirping, buoyant disposition, always enjoying loo the present moment ; and his frequent change of scene and company prevented his acquiring those rusty, unaccommodating habits, with which old bachelors are so uncharitably charged. He was a complete family chronicle, being versed in the genealogy, history, and inter- marriages of the whole house of Bracebridge, which made him a great 106 favorite with the old folks ; he wag a beau of all the elder ladies and superannuated spinsters, among whom he was habitually considered rather a young fellow, and he was master of the revels among the the children ; so that there was not a more popular being in t^e sphere in which he moved than Mr. Simon Bracebridge. Of is^teiio years, he had resided almost entirely with the 'Squire, to whom he had become a factotum, and whom he particularly delighted by jump- ing with his humor in respect to old times, and by having a scrap of an old song to suit every occasion. We had presently a specimen of his last-mentioned talent ; for no sooner was supper removed, and 115 spiced wines and other beverages peculiar to the season introduced, than Master Simon was called on for a good old Christmas song. He bethought himself for a moment, and then, with a sparkle of the eye, and a voice that was by no means bad, excepting that it ran occasion- ally into a falsetto, like the notes of a split reed, he quavered forth a 120 quaint old ditty : Now Christmas is come, Let us beat up the drum, And call all our neighbors together ; And when they appear, 126 Let us make such a cheer, As will keep out the wind and the weather, etc The supper had disi>osed every one to gayety, and an old harper was summoned fi-om the servants' hull, where he had been strumming all the evening, and to all appearance couiforting himself with some 130 of the 'Squire's home-brewed. He was a kind of hanger-on, I was iii'i m 218 DESCRIPTIVE COMPOSITIONS. told, of tho cstablishinent, and though ostensibly a resident of the village, was oftener to be found in the 'Squire's kitchen than his own home ; the old gentleman being fond of the sound of " Harp in hall." 136 The dance, like most dances after supper, was a merry one ; some of the older folks joined in it, and the 'Squire himself figured down several couple with a partner with whom he affirm^^d he had danced at every Christmas for nearly half a century. Ma ter Simon, who seemed to be a kind of connecting link between the old times and the 140 new, and to be withal a little antiquated in the taste of his accom- plishments, evidently piqued himself on his dancing, and was en- deavoring to gain credit by the, heel and toe, rigadoon, and other graces of the ancient school ; but he had unluckily assorted himself with a little romping girl from boarding-school, who, by her wild 146 vivacity, kept him continually on the stretch, and defeated all his sober attempts at elegance : — such are the ill-sorted matches to which antique gentlemen are unfortunately prone I The young Oxonian, on the contrary, had led out one of his maiden aunts, on whom the rogue played a thousand little knaveries with 160 impunity; he was full of practical jokes, and his delight was to tease his aunts and cousins j yet, like all madcap youngsters, he was a universal favorite among the women. The most interesting couple in the dance was the young officer and a ward of the 'Squire's, a beauti- ful blushing girl of seventeen. From several shy glances which I 155 had noticed in the course of the evening, I suspected there was a little kindness growing up between them ; and, indeed, the young soldier was just the hero to captivate a romantic girl. He was tall, slender, and handsome ; and, like most young British officers of late years, had picked up various small accomplishments on the Gon- leotinent — he could talk French and Italian — draw landscapes— sing very tolerably — dance divinely ; but, above all, he had been wounded at Waterloo: what girl of seventeen, well read in poetry and romance, could resist such a mirror of chivalry and perfection? The moment the dance was over, he caught up a guitar, and lolling 165 against the old marble fireplace, in an attitude which I am half in- clined to suspec'u was studied, began the little French air of the Troubadour. The 'Squire, however, exclaimed against having any- ASSEMBLAGES. 219 thing on Christmas eve but good old English ; upon which the young minstrel, casting up his eye for a moment, as if in an effort of mem- ory, struck into another strain, and with a charming air of gallantry, gave Herrick's ** Night- Piece to Julia : " 170 My eyes the glow-worm lend thee, The shooting stars attend thee, And the elves also, Whose little eyes glow Like the sparks of fire, befriend thee. 178 Ko Will-o'-th'-Wisp mislight thee ; Nor snake or slow-wnrm bite thee ; But on, on thy way. Not making a stay, Since ghosts there is none to affright thee. Then let not the dark thee cumber ; What though the moon does slumber, The stars of the night Will lend thee their light. Like tapers dlear without number. Then, Julia, let me woo thee, Thus, thus to come unto me ; And when I shall meet Thy silvery feet. My soul I'll pour into thee. 180 185 190 The song might or might not have been intended in compliment to the fair Julia, for so I found his partner was called ; she, however, was certainly unconscious of any such application; for she never looked at the singer but kept her eyes cast upon the floor ; her face suffused, it is true, with a beautiful blush, and there was a gentle los heaving of the bosom, but all that was doubtless caused by the exercise of the dance : indeed, so great was her indifference, that she was amusing herself with plucking to pieces a choice bouquet of hot- house flowers, and by the time the song was concluded the nosegay lay in ruins on the floor. 2oo The party now broke up for the night, with the kind-hearted old custom of shaking hands. As I passed through the hall on my way to my chamber, the dying embers of the yule dog still i?9!lt forth 9: 220 DESCRIPTIVE COMPOSITIONS. (luaky glow ; and had it not been the seiison when " no spirit dares 2u5Htii' abroad," I should have been half tempted to steal from my room at midnight, and peep whether the fairies might not be at their revels about the hearth. Irving'i "Sketch Book." I } I EXAMINATION OF MODELS. 1. In the description of assemblages, the most frequent, though not invariable order is : occasion, surroundings, etc. ; general aspects of the assemblage proper ; more noticeable individuals composing the assemblage ; the central, or must important personages. (Compare the similar arrange- ment in the description of landscapes, buildings, etc.) This is the order of George Eliot's description of the assemblage in Hayslope Church. The central figure is the clergyman, and by the help of the first two para- graphs, the reader sees the church as Mr. Irwine saw it Bub he, too, is described in the following paragraph, and observe how, by means of the last sentence of all, the writer includes him in the picture, and gathers the whole into a unit for the reader to contemplate. Observe the atten- tion to color throughout this sketch ; Um element gives a sense of picturesque beauty to the scene, and an interest in addition to that which the reader of the novel has in the poMor^ages assembled. But a still more effective and pervading element in the description is the sympathy which George Eliot manifests fur this simple congregation and their old* fashioned ways. In truth, this picture is doubtless a reminiscence of her own childhood, and its unobtrusive tenderness raises the whole passage far above any mere cold reproduction of the scene. 2. The occasion of his presence, the place itself, the persons assembled, the most distinguished or remarkable of these persons, the proceed- ings, and any reflections on what he has observed, are the sub-topics on which Irving has written this life-like description of a village funeral. In this most natural piece of art is discovered the outline of all compositions of the same general subject : yet there are a sympathetic tenderness, and a refined acuteness of observation about this description, which give it both harmony with its special subject and the charm of marked individu- ality of style ; not only is it a model of descriptions of assemblages, and a pleasing and appropriate account of a rural funeral, but it is distinctly ASSEMBLAGES. 221 in Irving's stylo. Tho opening sontencos iiro obviously projMiratory ; obsorvo how tho fii'Ht four luivil goutly up to tho exact locution «)f tho incident, und tho next four to tho exuct notion of tho author's mood. Whub is tho otfeut of tho mention of tho attitude of tho sexton, of tho " humblo friend," of tho neighboring poor, of tho unthinking children ? Observe how tho author doscribes tho pathetic incident by showing its effect upon the bystanders. What is the principle of arrangement govern- ing tho seventh paragraph ? Pope in his E>.'U,y on Criticism says, " True case in writing comes from art, not chance, As those move easiest who have learned to dance. 'Tis not enough no harshness gives offence, The sound must seem an echo to the sense. " Observe the effect of dropping "new-made," "only," and "poor." "They were the obsequies of poverty" (16, 17); to what does "they" refer? AVhat relation do lines 17-28 bear to tho sentence in lines lG-17 i How does the author avoid the fault of making tho details mentioned in lines 17-27 read like a more catalogue ? Tho details follow one another in a certain order, what consideration determines that order? In tiio matter of mentioning details in tho beat possible order Irving shows great genius ; yet he seem.H to arrange his c(jmposition without obvious pains. The order seems natural without conscious effort. "That sublime and touching ceremony " (36, 37) ; this appositive expression seems slightly awkward, but an effort to improve it will result in justifying the author's choice of construction. In tho sentence of lines 40-43 mention the expressions which are in keeping with the fact that the pro- cession was now quite near tho author. "As if .... M'orldly suffering " (61, 62) ; obsorvo how tho tenderness of these lines depends upon the easy unconventional language ; rewrite tho two lines in more formal style for comparison. Show how the construction and punctuation of lines 62-64 accord with the idea they convey. In lines 70-81 observe how the author at first varies the expression of the notion of sorrow by using tho terms "silence and destitution," "distresses," ** griefs,'' but through tho force of his feelinj^s, eventually settles upon the sim})le and heart-affecting English word "sorrows," and repeats it with fine monotony to the end of the passage. Point out the uses of antithesis and parallel construction in the closing paragraph. 3. In its tone and spirit this description is a marked contrast to the preceding. In which sentence, if at all, does Macaulay deal with the i i , 222 DESCRIPTIVE WMPOSITIONS. i: ' sub-topics mentioned in the first sentence of the exercise above ? What are the two main topics of this description ? By what means does the author produce the dominant effect of the picture ? What is the main subject of the first paragraph ? What sentences contain the chief subordinate subjects ? Show how the author observes the princijjles that govern the construction of a paragraph, referring especially to (a) unity, (b) continuity, (c) variety. Account for the introduction of so many historical and biographical details, and for the character of these details. Show how the author applies the principle of contrast in lines 28-55. What is the effect of the device ? Comment generally on the length and the other characteristics of the sentences, and explain the effect thereof upon the style. Point out three marked examples of the repetition of words for different purposes, explaining the purpose in each case. Point out three marked examples of words placed in luiusual positions for different purposes, explaining the pur- pose in each case. Illustrate from the first paragraph Macaulay's fondness for a climax of sound. Justify the order of the particulars in lines 3-9, and compare the order of the particulars in lines 11-23 with that in lines 28-55. What is the main subject of the last paragraph? What are the chief subordinate subjects? Show how, in the above extract, the author observes the principles that govern the construction of a paragraph, with especial reference to its (a) unity, (h) continuity, and (c) variety. Account for the reference to the culprit and his accusers in the first sentence. Obseive l^ow the names of Windham and Earl Grey are withheld for a time on the j rinciple of suspense. Illustrate from the above extract the characteristics of Macaulay's style, (n) which writers should imitate, and (h) which they should avoid. Give in each case the reasons for your opinion. 4. What effect has the first sentence as a preparation for the description that follows ? Observe how well suited the characters chosen are to the description of a happy Christmas Ev^;. The vagueness with which the numbers and the characters of the subordinate persui.o are given us in the second paragraph is well suited to the idea of broad hospitality and general hilarity pervading the whole. What do we learn of the life of the family from the sketch of the hall in the third paragraph ? Why does the fire- place receive the honors of a separate paragraph ? Show the force and the beauty of the principal strokes by which Irving hits off the character of the squire. What considerations save tliis description «)f tlie suppor from being a mere appeal to the palate ? Imagine the paragraph stripped of its humor, elegance and sentiment ; what would then bo the substiiuce 1 ASSEMBLAGES. 223 of the last sentence ? What points are dealt with in (a) the pen-portrait, {h) the character sketch of Master Simon ? His characteristics are made vivid and readily imaginable to us by concrete examples ? What is the author's attitude toward "the young Oxonian " and Julia? Is the song from Herrick in harmony with the scene ? Observe the author's lumiourous naive misinterpretation of the manner of Julia (192). What impression is left upon us by the concluding lines of this charming sketch ? Beneath the anecdotes, ornaments, and humours of this description, it is easy, by means of a synopsis, to discover the simple, solid frame work which gives figure and proportion to all descriptions of assemblages ? In what sense may the first sentence be called the key-note of this description ? The three sentences of the first paragraph simply state three facts observed by the author as he entered the house ; the paragraph lacks unity, but this lack is forgotten in the naturalness with whicli these sentences describe the actual occurrence. Point out the stroke of play- ful cynical humour in the sentence "The Squire. . . .benevolence." Note the rhetorical value of similitudes and of the balanced construction in the last sentence of the second paragraph. Observe the transition sentence at the beginning of the third paragraph. What purpose has influenced the selection of objects mentioned in the description of the hall ? What is the subject of the fifth paragraph ? Show the relation of the second, third, and fourth sentences to the first, and to one another. Observe the order of details in the sixth paragr.iph ; the author does not tell us that he mentions the objects in the order in which they would naturally strike him upon entering th j room, and seating himself at the table: yet that is the concealed art of the arrangement. In the two paragraphs devoted to Master Sinum, observe the authoi-'s minute observation, as displayed m mentioning details ; observe his fondness for humourous description vergijjg on caricature ; his tendency to suit the style to the subject by describing anti()uated subjects in antiquated language. In the ninth ]>aragraph tlie author introduces the music for the dance which follows ; observe in the expressions "strumming,'' "to all appearance,'' "I was told," how he preserves the attitude of a refined and impartial observer. The concluding paragraphs are marked by humour, tender- ness, and sympathy, never approaching coarseness and buffoonery on the one hand, nor sentimentality and mawkishuess on the other ; illustrate the qualities mentioned. Observe the fine climax in the mention of the Hocomplishments of the young British otticer. m m I'd 224 DESCRIPTIVE COMPOSITIONS. PRACTICE. Practice List: Write a description of an assemblage : — 1. Scene at a Church. 2. Scene in a School. 3. Scene at a Village Store. 4. A Military Gathering. 5. A Trial Scene. 6. A Crowded Street. V. A Funeral. 8. A State Ceremony. 9. A Fair. 10. A Bee. Plan A Trial Scene. 1. The accusation. 2. The court room. 3. The crowd. 4. The Bench. 5. The counsel for the defence. f>. The counsel for the prosecution and the first witness. 7. The jury. 8. The prisoner. 9. The reporters. 10. What was afterwards read of the trial and its result. i-^l, WORKS OF ART. 225 CHAPTER XIX. WORKS OF ART. MODELS. 10 I. — Raphael's *' St. Cecilia." — Wo saw, besides, one picture by Raphael — St. Cecilia j this is in another and brighter style ; you forget that it is a picture as you look at it ; and yet it is most unlike any of those things which we call realit}. It is one of the inspired and ideal kind, and seems to have been conceived and executed in a similar state of feeling to that which produced among the ancients those pei*fect specimens of poetry and sculpture which are the baffling models of succeeding generations. There is a unity and a perfection in it of an incommunicable kind. The central figure, St. Cecilia, seems rapt in such inspiration as pro- iniced her image in the painter's mind ; her deep, dark, eloqiient eyes l'"ted up ; her chestnut hair flung back from her forehead — she holds U7-. organ in her hands — her countenance, as it were, calmed by the dleptl' of its passion and rapture, and penetrated throughout with the ".-jm and radiant light of life. She is listening to the music of is heaven, and, as I imagine, has just ceased to sing, for the four figures that surround her evidently point, by their attitudes, towards her ; particularly St. John, who, with a tender yet impassioned gesture, bends his countenance towards her, languid with the depth of his emotion. At her feet lie various instruments of music, broken and 20 unstrung. Of the colouring I do not speak ; it eclipses nature, yet it has all her truth and softness. SheiUy'i Letters. . hi II. — Milton's ** LycidaS." — What he meditated at this time and through his Italian journey was an Epic, but his wings bore him now into the flight of Lycidas. We see in it that vehement love of the beautiful, and I have no doubt that when he began it he wrote it with the close intensity of which he speaks above. It was 6 226 DESCRIPTIVE COMPOSITIONS. IH finished in November, 1637. It could scarcely have been begun till the end of September, for there is no mention either of its subject or itself in his letters to Diodati, the las ■ of which is dated Septem- l)er 23. Edward King, its subject, w *s a college friend of Milton's, 10 a favorite of fortum- uid of all who knew him. Sailing from Chester to Dublin to visit hi!^ 3, the ship struck on a rock in a calm sea, and he was drowns,!. His friends at Cambridge proposed a volume of memorial verses in Greek, Ljitin and English. It saw the light in 1G38, and Milton's Lycidas is the last poem in the book. 15 It is a pastoral, and in the form of other pastorals, with its inti'oduction and its epilogue, and between them the monody of the shepherd who has lost his friend. Under the guise of one shepherd mourning another, all M'lton's relations with Edward King are expressed, and all his thoughts about his character and genius ; and 20 the poem, to be justly judged, must be read with the conditions of the pastoral as a form of verse present to the mind. That is enough to dispose of Johnson's unfavorable criticism, which quarrels with the poem for its want of passion and want of nature, and for its improbability. It is not a poem of passionate sorrow, but of 2ii admiration and regret expressed with careful art and in a special artistic form ; and the classical allusions and shepherd images and the rest are the necessary drapery of the pastoral, the art of which, and the due keeping to form in which, are as important to Milton, and perhaps more so, than his regret. We are made aware of this 30 when we find Milton twice checking himself in the conduct of the poem for having gone beyond the limits of the pastoral. The metrical structure, which is partly borrowed from Italian models, is as carefully wi'ought as the rest, and harmonized to the thoughts. "Milton's ear was a good second to his imagination." 35 Lycidas appeals not only to the imagination, but to the educated imagination. There is no ebb and flow of poetical power as in Comus ; it is an advance on all his previous work, and it fitly closes the poetic labor of his youth. It is needless to analyse it, and all criticism is weaker than the poem itself. Yet we may say that one *0of its strange charms is its solemn undertone rising like a religious chaunt through the elegiac music ; the sense of a stern national crisis in the midst of its pastoral mourning ; the sense of Milton's WORKS OF ART. 227 grave force of character among the flowers and fancies of the poem ; the sense of the Christian rehgion pervading the classical imagery. We might say that these things are ill-fitted to each other. So they 45 would be, were not the art so fine and the poetry so over-mastering ; were they not fused together by genius into a whole so that the unfitness itself becomes fascination. Stvp/ord Brooke's " Milton." By permission of the publishers. III. — The Idylls of the King. — We come at last to Tennyson's master-work, so recently brought to a completion after the labor of twenty years, — during which period the separate Idylls of the King had appeared from time to time. Nave and transept, aisle after aisle, the Gothic minster has extended, until, with the addition 6 of a cloister here and a chapel yonder, the structure stands complete. I hardly think that the poet at first expected to compose an epic. It has grown insensibly, under the hands of one man who has given it the best years of his life, — but somewhat as Wolfe conceived the Homeric poems to have grown, chant by chant, lo until the time came for the whole to be welded together in heroic form. Yet in other great epics the action rarely ceases, the links are connected, and the movement continues from day to day until the end. Here, we have a series of idylls, — like the tapestry- work illus- trations of a romance, scene after scene, with much change of actors i6 and emotions, yet all leading to one solemn and tragic close. It is the ei)ic of chivalry, — the Christian ideal of chivalry which we have deduced fiom a barbaric source, — our conception of what knighthood should be, rather than what it really was ; but so skilfully wrought of high imaginings, faery spells, fantastic legends, and mediaeval 20 splendors, that the whole work, suffiised with the Tennysonian gla- mour of golden mist, seems like a chronicle illuminated b}' saintly hands, and often blazes with light like that which flashed from the holy wizard's book when the covers were unclasped. And, indeed, if this be not the greatest narrative-poem since ** Paradise Lost," 26 what other English production are you to name in its place 1 Never so lofty as the grander portions of Milton's epic, it is more evenly sus- tained and has no long prosaic passages ; while " Paradise Lost " is jtistly declared to be a work of superhuman genius impoverished by dreary wastes of theology. Stedman's " VictoHan Poets." 30 228 DESCRIPTIVE COMPOSITIONS. EXAMINATION OF MODELS. A work of art is nn object which may be described as a similar natural object — a portrait or statue, as the appearance of a real person ; a Isvnd- scape- painting, as a real landscape. But besides what is given in such a description, and behind all that, there is in a work of art, the idea or feeling in the artist's mind — the impression which he wishes to communicate by his work. To bring this out is the most essential thing in the descripticm of an artistic creation, and this is tha point wherein descriptions (»f works (»f art differ from descriptions of natural objects. In description of statues, pictures, beautiful buildings, poems, acting, singing, playing, playing on msical instruments, .t is usual to regard the productions from several points of view. The attitude of the artist to his work, the work itself in its outline and in its details, and the effect of the work on the writer, or on the public, are the considerations of most importance. Photographic reproduction of the effect of the work is not possible, but it is possible to reproduce in words the spirit of that effect, and to iiccomplish this should be the main object. Description should give a conception of the whole work, or some aspect of it, and is thus distinguished from criticism, which need only refer to, and discuss something, not bring the thing ])efore the reader. Doubtless, however, criticism and description run into one another. The description will vary according as the reader is supposed to be familiar with the work under consideration, or totally unaccpiaintcd with it. For young writers, it will probably be found most advantageous to write inider the latter supposition. 1. Observe how Shelley interprets the significance and ^,he poetry of this picture. It is true no definite idea of the picture can be obtained by reading the description — it appears rather to be written for those who are familiar with the wt>rk itself : yet the duscrij)tion is interesting because of the t(me of enthusiasm, and the evident appreciation of the spirit and intention of the painting. Observe the clearness with which the writer explains how unity has been achieved by the painter. Not only the general effect but the details have been studied: for example, "the broken and unstrung instruments " are seen to iDe significant, symbolizing as they do the progress of music under the cire of its patron saint. Throughout the sketch the writer c«mstantly bears in mind the high praise he assigns to this group at the outset— it is perfectly natural, true to the laws of nature, yet it surpasses in power and beauty all that we are accus- ni WORKS OF ART. 229 tomed to see in actual life. Compare "have been " with "are " (8) and "successive" with "succeeding" (8). Do you find the repetition oi the word "kind" (5 and 9) objectionable? Improve, if possible, the collocation in " who. .. .emotion " (18-20). How does the first part of this paragraph (1-9) compare with the second part (9-22) in its use of fresh and forciblt) diction ? How do you account for the difference you find ? Do the short sentences add anything to the style of the paragraph or detract from it ? Mark the sub-divisions of this paragraph. Has the author allotted due space to each sub-topic 1 If not, account for his partiality. 2. This is an example of the usual way of giving an account of a poem. The first two sentences form the transition ; Stopford Brooke has been discussing Milton's other early works. Then come the date, and the occasion. The second paragraph gives the general intention of the poet. (To grasp the writer's aim correctly is a fundamental matter in under- standing and appreciating any work ; it was the misunderstanding of the general intention which led to the erroneous criticism by Doctor Johnson mentioned in this paragraph). Then, there is, in tlie next paragraph, something with regard to the metrical form. An analysis or abstract would naturally follow, but the poem is so well-known that "it is needless." Characteristic merits and peculiarities are mentioned, and the final sentence testifies to the supreme beauty and success of Lycidas as a whole. 3. This description comprises three elaborate similitudes, and a parallel between Milton's great epic and The Idylls of the King. It will be seen that the essay is not a set description, but rather a striking characteriza- tion intended to give the writer's general impressions of the poem to readers already familiar with it. The stateliness, beauty, and earnestness of the work are suggested by the first comparison ; as well as the slow growth of the structure. The second comparison brings out the legendary and romantic character of the narrative, while the third simile reminds us of the brilliance of language and embellishment pervading the Idyll. The comparison of the poem with Paradise Lost is, like most similar comparisons, too brief and arbitrary to satisfy the mind of the reader ; such comparisons sometimes arouse antagonism and debate just when the mind should be most free from those conditions. Examine in this paragraph the connective elements, particularly "but "(9), "yet" (12), "here "(14), "yet "(17), "but "(19), "and'* (24), and "while "(28). Make such changes as you think desirable. A proper use of connectives adds very much to the clearness of a passage. 11 n\ I li 330 i)£lSGtttP!FirE COMPOSiT'IOM. Is the omission of the connective element in the second sentence a merit or a defect? "MedisBval splendors" (20-21), " Tennysonian glamour of golden mist ; " these expressions are somewhat vague but they are suited to the idea, which is purposely left indefinite. Compare " of a cloister here and a chapel yonder " (6) with "of a cloister here and of a chapel there." " Yet in other. . . . end " (12-14). The apparent pleonasm of this sentence is well fitted to impress the idea of continuity. Pl.'ice " rather " so as tu bring out these meanings clearly. What would be the effect of repeating "of" before "what "(19)? Pi cr dt ai ti< ar ar fe PRACTICE. Practice List : Write a tit ascription of some favourite work of art. 1. The Sistine Madonna. The Laocoon. The Banquet Scene from Macbeth. Shelley's Lyric, The Cloud. A Violin Solo. A Short Story. A Great Musical Composition. A Beautiful Building. My Favourite Novel. She Stoops to Conquer. 2. •3. 4. 5. 6. 7. 8. 9. 10. Plan The Ancient Mariner. 1. Coleridge and his age. 2. The subject of the poem. 3. The outline of the story. 4. The verso and form of the poem. 5. The style and manner. 6. Defects. 7. Merits. 8. Summaryr irORKS OF ART. 231 Practical Suggestions: 1. To appreciate a wurk of art justly would bo to realize its power as its creator realized it. Such apj)reciation justifies one in attemjjting to describe even great masterpieces. 2. The aim of this kind of description is to inspire others with the appreciation which gives pleiisure to one's self. 3. There is a tendency, almost pardonable, to exaggerate one's admira- tion in describing famous works, but the simple truth is more eflFective, and conducive to greater real admiratif)n. 4. In describing literary works, representative quotations are graceful and appropriate. 5. Music must be described l.uguly by describing its effects on the feelings and expression of the listeners. u: MOODS. 233 CHAPTER XX. MOODS. MODELS. I.— Walton's Sorrow at the Death of His Mother.— She died calmly ; and her countenance expressed affection even in death. I need not describe the feelings of those whose dearest ties are rent by that most irreparable evil; the void that presents itself to the soul, and the despair that is exhibited on the countenance. It is so long before the mind can persuade itself that she, whom we saw every day, and whose very existence appeared a part of our own, can have departed for ever — that the brightness of a beloved eye can have been extinguished, and the sound of a voice so familiar, and dear to the ear, can be hushed, never more to be heard. These are the reflections of the first days ; lo but when the lapse of time proves the reality of the evil, then the actual bitterness of grief commences. Yet from whom has not that rude hand rent away some dear connexion ; and why should T de- scribe a sorrow which all have felt, and must feel 1 The time at length arrives, when grief is rather an indulgence than a necessity ; is and the smile that plays upon the lips, although it may be deemed a sacrilege, is not banished. My mother was dead, but wc l:id still duties which we ought to perform; we must continue our coui-se with the rest, and learn to think ourselves fortunate, whilst one remains whom the spoiler has not seized. 20 Mn. Shelley't " Frankerutein.', II. — Humorous Vexation. — How the ear of man is tortured in this terrestrial planet ! Go where you will the cock's shrill clarion, the dog's harsh watch-note, not to speak of the melody of jackasses, and on streets of wheelbarrows, wooden clogs, loud-voiced men, per- haps watchmen, break upon the hapless brain ; and as if all was not 6 enough, "the Piety of the Middle Ages" has founded tremendous bells; and the hollow triviality of the present age — far worse — has everywhere instituted the piano! Why are not at least ^11 those .ili i! I *; 234 DESCIilPTI VE COMPOSITIONS. cuuks and cuokerels boiled into soup, into ovorlasting silunce? Or, if 10 the Devil some good night should take his hunnner and smite in shivpra all and every piano of our European world, so that in broad Europe there were not one piano left soundable, would the harm be great? Would not, on the contrary, the relief be considerable] For once that you hear any real music from a piano, do you not five hun- 16 dred times hear mere artistic somersets, distracted jangling, and the hapless pretence of musici Let iiim who has lodged wall-neighbor to an operatic artist of stringed music say. This miseri'.ble young woman that now in the next house to me spends all her young, bright days, not in learning to darn stockings, 20 sew shirts, bake pastry, or any art, mystery, or business that will profit herself or others; not even amusing herself skipping on the giass-plots with laughter of her mates; but simply and solely in ragmg from dawn to dusk, to night and midnight, on a hapless ))iano, which it is evident she will never in this world learn to render 25 more musical than a pair of barn-fanners! The miserable young female i The sound of her through the wall is to me an emblem of the whole distracted misery of this age; and her barn-fanners' rhythm becomes all too significant. Carlyk's Journal quoted in Froude's " ThoirvM Oarlyle." By permission of the publishers. III.— The Mood of Eng-land on hearing: of the death of Nelson. — I'he death of Nelson was felt in England as something more than a public calamity; men started at the intelligence and turned pale, as if they had heard of the loss of a dear fri and. Anobject of our admir- ation and affection, of our pride and of <»ur hopes, was suddenly taken 6 from us; and it seemed as if we had never till then known how deeply we loved and reverenced him. What the country had lost in its great naval hero — the greatest of our own and of all former times — was scarcely taken into the account of grief. So p<!rfectly indeed had he performed his part, that the maritime war after the battle of Trafalgar 10 was considered at an end : the fleets of the enemy were not merely defeated, but destroyed ; new navies must be built, and a new race of seamen reared for them, before the possibility of their invading our shores could again be contemplated. It was not, therefore, from any pel fish reflection upon the magnitude of our loss that we mourned fo^: MOODS. 235 him; the general sorrow was of a higher character. The j)ooi>lo of is England grieved that funeral ceremonies, and public monuments, and posthumous rewards were all which they could now bestow upon him whom the King, the Legislature, and the nation would have alike delighted to honour ; whom every tongue would have blessed ; whose presence in every village through which he might have passed 20 would have awakened the church bells, have given school-boys a holiday, have drawn children from their sports to gaze upon him, and " old men from the chimney corner " to look upon Nelson ere they died. The victory of Trafalgar was celebrated, indeed, with the usual forms of rejoicing, but they were without joy j for such already was 26 the glory of the British navy through Nelson's surpassing genius, that it scarcely seemed to receive any addition from the most signal victory that ever was achieved upon the seas ; and the destruction of this mighty fleet, by which all the maritime schemes of France were totally fi'ustrated, hardly appeared to add to our security or strength, 30 for while Nelson was living to watch the combined squadrons of the enemy we felt ourselves as secure as now, when they wero no longer in existence. There was reason to suppose, from the appearances upon opening the body, that in the course of nature he might have attained, like 35 his father, to good old age. Yet he cannot be said to have fallen prematurely wljose work was done, ner ought he to be lamented who died so full of honours and at the height of human fame. The most triumphant death is that of the martyr ; the most awful is that of the martyred patriot ; the most splendid that of the hero in the hour of 4o victory ; and if the chariot and the horaes of fire had been vouchsafed for Nelson's translation, he could scarcely) have departed in a brighter blaze of glory. He has left us, not indeed his mantle of inspiration, but a name and an example which are at this hour inspiring thou- sands of the youth of England -a n>ime which is our pride, and an 46 example which will continue to be oar shield and our strength. Thus it is that the spirits of the great and the wise continue to live and to act after them, verifying in this sense the language of the old mythologist : Tot ixsv daifLovt^ eiai, Aioq niyaXou did. ^ouXAi; '^ff(fXo\. irrtyOovtotf tpukaxe^ OvrjToiv avOpfontov. ^tKey't "Li/eofNelton. 60 ;i i > ii «■;■ '■X 11 [■: II 23(5 DE^CRimVE COMPOSITIONS. EXAMINATION OF MODELS. In modern literature much space is devoted to the description of moods. A description of a mood is an attempt to convey to the reader a concep- tion of a state of mind of the character. These states of mind are very various — some «|uite simple, others very complex. The subject calls to mind iivmy famous dcscriptiims of moods — Machtli's condition before he murders Duncan ; Lady Macbeth's remorseful mood in the scene where she walks in sleep ; Shylock's mood of protest when he declares that a Jew is a man ; the mood of Nickleby when he chastises S(iueer8 ; the anger of Adam Bede ; the despair of Wolsey ; the repentance of the Ancient Mariner ; the fright of Ichabod Crane ; the grief of David ; the sorrow of Guinevere ; the sublime despair of Arthur ; the moods ot Saul, and a hundred others. Modern fiction is largely made up of descriptions of the states of mind of the characters ; nothing has so strong a hold upon the human heart ; nothing requires so great a genius in the writer. We can scarcely fully conceive the thoughts and feelings of a Newton, when some law of nature breaks upon his mind ; of Hamlet, as he contemplates self-destruction ; of Lancelot at the last tournament. Yet everyone can imagine and portray the moods of others within certain limits, or can write in a seemingly imper^jonal way of his own moods, assigning them to fictitious perbons. We have learned w^hat we know about moods in three ways — by rxperi- ence, observation, reading. Wo shall w'^o best by telling what we have felt and seen, rather tlian what we have merely heard of or read. There are three tolerably distinct methods of describing a mood : First, the dramatic viethod, according to which the mood is described wholly by setting forth what the person says and does ; second, the analytic method, which tells in abstract fashion what the character thought and felt ; and third, the method commonest in modern stories, which is a combination of the former two. In the dramatic method it is customary to exaggerate t.o some extent both tlio words and the acts of the character, because people seldom give ade<[uate expression to their states of mind in their words and deeds. The analytic method is rather scientific than artistic. In the modern novel, which is a compromise between the pure art of the drama and the scientific method of the essay, we get the most ample and satisfying descriptions of moods. The works of George Eliot will abundantly illustrate the modern method. Generally speaking, beginners will do well to describe the mood by telling the thoughts and feelings of the MOODS. 257 ohiinictur, uiid by sotling forth wluit lij did and said in the most real and vivid manner. Tho primary conditions of kucccbs aro strength of imagination, sympathotic observation, and absolute fidelity to truth in setting forth tho results. The words of persons in anger are usually few, bub forcible ; in many other vi(»lent moods this is observable. Many writers weaken tluir descriptions of strong moods by making tho character utter long speecliea. Certain forms of utterance are characteristic of certain moods ; these must be observed carefully. It is in the best writers alone that these considerations are treated conscientiously. It is important that tho cause of the feelings described should be set forth clearly and in such a manner as to give tho impression that it is a cause adecpiato to the feelings that follow. When once the mood is under description avoid weakening the impression by the mention of irrelevant matters. It is occasionally effective to describe the mood first and to state the cause afterwards, but this method is sensational and should be used only for comical t>r very tragical purposes. 1. Observe how, in the composition of this brief sketch of sorrow, the cause is mentioned without euphemism. What principle governs tho order of tlio thought as the sketch proceeds from the cause to the sentence where the mourner can say "my mother v/as dead, but we had still duties, etc ;'" '( ( )bsorve how tho feelings are rei)resented as l)ecoming less poignant from sentence to sentence. " A sorrow which all have felt '' implies that the grief is less poignant and thtt^ the sufferer begins to philosophize. While the words "she died" of the first sentence give rise to expressions of gloom and almost despair ; th' words, "my mother was dead," in the last sentence, aro followed by comparatively calm and philosophical reflec- tions. When simple emotions are described, short, easy words are best : when feelings aro analyzed huiguage should bo i)reciso without nmch reference to length of words. What is the relation in meaning of tho word "con- nection" (i;{) to tho terms "father," "mother," "brother," etc.? What would be tho eftect of substituting some of these for "connection"? "It is so h^ng... .to bo heard" (5-10). In this sentence the same truth is dwelt upon under three different aspects to illustrate the active nature of tho imagination in sorrow. Would the sentence be improved by the rearrangement of the parts? Criticise tho connective "TImjso" (10). III ' \U ti Rii ill 238 DESCRIPTIVE COMPOSITIONS. I : if: Explain the forco of "yet" (12) and "that" (12). Which is preferable in this place ? With what preceding clause does "And the smile. . . .not banished " (16-17) connect ? Make this clearer. AOa< 2. In this passage Carlyle does not tell us how he feels, but his feelings d him to say certiiin things in a certain fashion, and from these we gather his mood much more vividly than from any direct description. Carlyle was peculiarly sensitive to noise. On this particular occasion, ho had been annoyed by piano-playing. His vexation leads him to recall the various noises from which he has suflFered, and from which the world in general suffers. This is the subject of the first paragraph, as announced in the topic sentence at the beginning. The remainder of the paragraph is a development of this sentence by examples. Only in the second paragraph does the writer arrive at the real occasion of his writing. Observe the humorous tone throughout. Carlyle is really vexed, yet per- ceives the absurdity of allowing his eipianimity to be thus ruffled by trivial causes. The cajjacity of seeing things as the persons affected see them, and sympatliizing with their point of view, and yet, at the same time, of seeing the real, absolute iuiportance (or rather lack of importance) of the matter in question, lies at the bottom of the quality which is called humour. A humorous man has a keen eye for incongruities, and while perceiving them is touched both by the sense of sympathy, and by the sense of the ridiculous. In line 2, the phrase ' ' terrestrial planet " gives one side of Carlyle's feeling, elevates the subject ; *' melody of jackasses " (1. 3) gives the other. Note the effect of understatement {litotes the rhetoricians call it) in line 13. Carlyle is fond of this figure. The final sentence gives a touch of serious- ness ; it notes in the trivial occurrence a symbol of the emptiness and lack of true insight which characterize the age. 3. Make out the plan on which this passage is constructed. In what respects is tlie introduction suitable to the composition ? What were the facts about the death of Nelson? How does the author prepare us for the enthusiastic epithet " hero " in the last paragraph 'i Justify by reference to the expressions used in it the stfitement that this passage is simple, dignified, rhythmical, melodious and "almost metrical," artistic, lofty, and figurative. The last paragraph " sings a a prose elegy " on the death of Nelson ; explain the force of this criticism. What device is made use of to lend forco to the third sentenco of the last ^livragraph ? MOODS. 239 PRACTICE. Practice List : 1. A State of Terror. 2. A Storm of Indignation. 3. Feelings at the Re-opening of School. 4. Feelings on a Fine Spring Day. 5. The Eve of Battle. 6. The Joy occasioned by Unexpected Good Fortune. 7. The Mood of England at the Time of the Armada. 8. The Impressions of a Traveller seeing a Wonder of Nature. 9. Mood of a Boy Unjustly Punished. 10. Suspense. Plan A Night of Fear. 1. How I came to pass tlio night at an inn. 2. Tho persons at the inn : a suspicious character. 3. I am waked after inidniyht by a disturbance down tlie hall, and imagine that a murder is in progress. 4. My state of mind : owing to a recent illness I am paralyzed by fear. 5. In doubt and terror until morning. 6. The simple explanation. "I I I H'K'LTJHI'""-^'^ _rrf,T -,?,-■ 7, .-^-■^ .^1' ?,^"^ TTrftf*ir^'^^"'."'»r'i^* -■■■■■»?iw:.* COMPLEX DESCEIPTlom. 241 CHAPTER XXI. COMPLEX DESCRIPTIONS. MODELS. I. — A Cottagfe Yard. — The clothes-line was wound securely around the trunks of four gnarled, crooked old apple-trees, which stood promiscuously about the yard back of the cottage. It was tree-blossoming time, but these were too aged and sapless to blossom freely, and there was only a white bough here and there shaking 6 itself triumphantly from among the rest, which had only their new green leaves. There was a branch occasionally which had not even these, but pierced the tender green and the flossy white in hard, grey nakedness. All over the yard, the grass was young and green and short, and had not yet gotten any feathery heads. Once in a lo while there was a dandelion set closely down among it. The cottage was low, of a dark red color, with white facings around the windows, which had no blinds, only green paper curtains. The back door was in the centre of the house, and opened directly into the green yard, with hardly a pretence of a step, only a flat 15 oval stone before it. Through this door, stepping cautiously on the stone, came presently two tall, lank women in chocolate-colored calico gowns, with a basket of clothes between them. They set the basket under- neath the line on the grass, with a little clothes-pin bag beside it, 20 and then proceeded methodically to hang out the clothes. Every- thing of a kind went together, and the best things on the outside line, which could be seen from the street in front of the cottage. The two women were curiously alike. They were about the same height, and moved in the same way. Even their faces were so 26 similar in feature and expression that it might have been a difficult matter to distinguish between them. All the difference, and that • I i) 'i 242 DESCRIPTIVE COMPOSITIONS. would have been scarcely apparent to an ordinary observer, was a difference of degree, if it might be so tjxpressed. In one face the 30 features were both bolder and sharper in outline, the eyes were a trifle larger and brighter, and the whole expression more animated and decided than in the other. One woman's scanty drab hair was a sluule darker than the other's, and the negative fairness of complexion, which generally 36 accompanies drab hair, was in one relieved by a slight tinge of warm red on the cheeks. This slightly intensified woman had been commonly considered the more attractive of the two, although in reality there was very little to choose between the personal appearance of these twin sisters, 4oPriscilla and Mary Brown. They moved about the clothes-line, pinning the sweet white linen on securely, their thick, white- stockinged ankles showing beneath their limp calicoes as they stepped, and their large feet in cloth slippers flattening down the short, green grass. Their sleeves were rolled up, displaying their 45 long, thin, muscular arms, which were sharply pointed at the elbows. They were homely womcui ; they wcM-e fifty and over now, but they never could have been pretty in their 'teens, their features were too irredeemal)ly irregular for that. No youthful fnvshness of com- plexion or expression could have possi})ly done away with the BO impression that they gave. Their plainness had probably only been enhanced by the contrast, and these women, to people generally, seemed better looking than when they were young. There was an honesty and patience in both ftaces that showed all the plainer for their homeliness. 65 One, the sister with the darker hair, moved a little quicker than the other, and lifted the wet clothes from the basket to the line more frequently. She was the first to speak, too, after they had been hanging out the clothes for some little time in silence. Sne stopped as she did so, with a wet pillow-case in her hand, and looked CO up reflectively at the flowering apple boughs overhead, and the blue sky showing between, while the sweet spring win<l ruffled her scanty hair a little. " I wonder, Mary," said she, ** if it would seem so .very queer to COMPLEX DESCRIPTIONS. 243 die a momin' like this, say. Don't you believe there's apple l)ranches a-hangin' over them walls made t)ut of precious stones, like these, 65 only there ain't any dead limbs among 'em, an' they're all covered thick with flowers? An' I wonder if it would seem such an awful change to go from this siir into the air of the New Jerusalem." Mary K. Wilkinn' "A Far Away Melody." From Douijlan' American Attthom. II. — A Country Scene. — My walk was by the border of a field which some peasants were getting ready for being sown presently. The space to be ploughed was wide, as in Holbein's picture. The landscape was vast also ; the great lines of green which it contained were just touched with russet by the approach of autumn ; on the 6 rich brown soil recent rain had left, in a good many furrows, lines of water, which shone in the sun like silver threads. The day was clear and soft, and the earth gave out a light smoke wlwre it had been freshly laid open by the plough-share. At the tup of the field an old man, whose broad back and severe face were like those ofio the old peasant of Holbein, but whose clothes told no tale of poverty, was gravely driving his plough of an antique shape, drawn by two tran(|uil oxen, with coats of a pale ])ufl', real patriarchs ui the fallow, tall of make, somewhat thin, with long and backward-sloping horns, the kind of old wt)rkmen who by habit have got to be brothns toi5 one another, as throughout our country-side they are called, and who, if one loses the other, refuse to work with a new comrade, and fret themselves to death. People unacquainted with the country will not believe in this affection of the ox for his yoke-fellow. They should come and see one of the poor beasts in a corner of his stable, 20 thin, wasted, lashing with his restless tail, his lean flanks bl()wing uneasily and fastidiously on the provender offered to him, his eyes for ever turned towards thf^ stable door, scratching with his foot the empty place left at his side, snitfing the yokes and bands which his companion has worn, and incessantly calling for him with piteous 26 lowings. The ox-herd will tell you : There is a pair of oxen done for ! his brother is d(iad, and this one will work no more. He 'lught to be fattened for killing ; but we cannot get him to eat, and in a short time he will have starved hirotself to death. Oevnje Sana'n " La Mare au Diable.* 244 DESCRIPTIVE COMPOSITIONS. ill I' III. — The Retreat from Moscow.— On the 6fch of November tlie snow came on, and everythin*^ underwent a total cliange. The consequences were most disastrous. The troops inarched on without knowing where, and without distinguishing any object, and while 6 they strove to force their way through the whirlwinds of sleet, the snow drifted in the cavities where they fell, and the weakest rose no more. The wind drove in their faces not only the falling snow, but that which it raised in furious eddies from the earth. The Muscovite winter attacked them in every part, penetrated through their thin 10 dress and ragged shoes. Their wet clothes froze upon them ; this covering of ice chilled their bodies, and stiffened all their limbs. A cutting and violent wind stopped their breath or seized upon it as it was exhaled, and converted it into icicles, which hung from their beards. The unhappy men crawled on with trembling limbs and 15 chattering teeth till the snow, collecting round their feet in hard lumps, like stones, some scattered fragment, a branch of a tree, or the body of one of tlieir companioiis, made them stagger and fall. Their cries and groans were vain : soon the snow covered them, and small hillocks marked where they lay ! Such was their sepulture. 20 The road was filled with these undulations, like n ])urying-place. The most intrepid or obdurate were taffected : they hurried past with averted eyes. But before them, around them, all was snow ; the horizon seemed one vast winding-sheet, in which nature was envelop- ing the whole army. The only objects which came out from the 25 bleak expanse were a few gloomy pines skirting the plain, and adding to the horror of the scene with their funeral graen and the motion- less erectness of their black trunks ! Even the weapons of the soldiers were p weight almost insupportable to their benumbed limbs. In their frequent falls they slipped out of their hands and 30 were broken or lost in the snow. Mfiny others had their fingers frozen on the musquet they still grasped. Some broke up into parties ; others wandered on alone. If they dispersed themselves in the fields, or by the cross-paths, in search of bread or a shelter for the night, they met nothing but Cossacks and an armed population, 36 who surrounded, wounded and stripped them, and left them with ferocious laughter to expire naked upon the snow. Then came the night uf sixteen hours. But on this universal covering of suow they COMPLEX DESCni PTJONS. 245 km^w not where to stop, whom to sit, where to lie, where to find a few roots for food, or dry sticks to light their fires. At length fatigue, darkness and repeated orders induced a pause, and they tried 40 to ef^tublish themselves for the night; l)ut the storm scattered the preparations for the bivouacs, and the hi'anches of the pines covered with ice and snow only melted away and resisted the attempts of the soldiers to kindle them into a blaze. When at length the fire got the better, officers and soldiers gathered round it to cook their 45 wretched meal of horse-flesh, and a few spoonfuls of rye mixed with snow-water. Next morning circles of stiffened corses marked the situation of the bivouacs, and the carcasses of thousands of hoi-ses were strewed round them. Prom this time disorder and distrust began to prevail. A few resisted the strong contagion of insubordi- r)0 nation and despondency. These were the officers, the subalterns and some of the soldiers, whom nothing could detach from their duty. They k(!pt up each other's spirits by repeating the name of Smolensk, which they were approaching, and looked forward to as the end of their sufferings. 65 UaditVa " Life of Napoleon." EXAMINATION OF MODELS. A passage may be descriptive not of this sort of object or that, but of a number of objects combined ; such a passage cannot be called a descrip- tion of a scene, or building, or person, or mood, but of all, or several of these. Many of the models qiioted in former chapters are not wholly concerned with the object indicated by the heading of the chapter ; and in literature descriptions of this varied character are very common. They are o'.ten made up of a series of brief touches, each of wliich is extremely effective ; for, as a rule, it is not the prolonged and exhaust- ive descriptions that strike us in literature, ard fix themselves in our memories, but those which in a few phrases hit off the salient and KMg- gostive points. Brevity, here as elsewhere, is apt to be productive of force. Examples of descriptions which pass from one object to another are given in the models of this chapter, and subjects suggestive of such 246 DESCRIPTIVE COMPOSITIONS. duscriptiuiiB are set down in the Practice. Such tlKiiios, on account of the wider scope they afford, are often more attractive and ntiniulating to the pupil than narrower ones. 1. This is a good example of the description of e very-day surroundings and every-day personages. Subjects like tliia are within the reach of every young writer, and it will be profitable to ccmsider whence this description wins its charm. In the first place, the charm comes from truth and freshness ; the author is not writing from reminiscences of what she has read in books. She has looked at such a scene with wide-open, observant eyes. It is wonderful how comparatively rare is this power of looking at things through our own eyes, not those of others — of seeing all that is actually before us, not what other people have seen, and taught us to see. But this power is a fundamental necessity for good description. It is a power that ought to be cultivated ; it has a far wider and more important significance in life than its use for literary purposes ; it is the basis of all originality. Composition is an excellent means of training and testing this power. In the second place, the charm of this passage comes from the capacity for seeing and feeling beauty and interest in objects — from the author's not allowing herself to be bli:ided by their every-day character, or the prosaic nature of the surroundings. Thifi is one of the functions of litera- ture — to make us see beauty and elements of interest, where they are apt to be unnoted. This writer opens our eyes to the elements of beauty present in a village back-yard. We note the same realism, the same keen observation in the description of the personages introduced ; and, could we follow the story to which this is the introduction, we should see the same power of finding in these commonplace people interest and poetic charm. The writer begins with the clothes-line, because when the human element enters, this becomes the centre of the scene; \t links * ogether surroundings and actors. Some faulty English will be noted in this passage. 2. George Sand has been thinking of Holbein's engraving of Death and the Labourer^ and this gives a serious tone to her way of regarding the scene — a tone which pervades the description. Matthew Arnol.1, after quoting this passage, exclaims : " How faithful and close it is, this contact of George Sand with country things, with the life of nature in its vast plenitude and pathos ! " COMPLEX DESCRIPTIONS. 247 What is the iirmiij^uiiieiit of this jtieco of tluscription ? Point out one or two ox.'un|»le8 of tho lino observiition of iiaturi!. Note the suggestive and realistic {ticture «)f the ox in lines 20-26. Wliat lends elevation and interest to the description of the oxen '( 3. What is the function of the first sentence of this extract ? — of the second ? This pjiasjige is evidently descriptive, yet the order of detail is imposed by the fact that it is also narrative, it depicts successive stages in the march. Note the brevity and effectiveness of the description of the landscape in lines 26-27 and the way in which it is harmonized with the human figures which form the centre of the picture. ■» f PRACTICE. Practice List : 1. Interior of a Sleeping-car. 2. A Garden Party. 3. Skating on the Lake. 4. The Seliool Play^ground. 5. Tlie Park. C). Tlie Beaeh at a Watering-place. 7. A Sleigh-diive. 8. Children antl Dogs Playing on the Lawn. 9. Driving Homo the Cattle. 10. The Main-street on a Sunday Morning. Plan Description of a Sleeping-car. 1. Occasion of my first travelling in a sleeping-car. 2. Description of its interior, arrangements, etc. 3. The occupants. 4. Growing late. 5. The porter. (». Making up the berths. 7. Passengers go to bed. 8. I also. 9. Sounds and thoughts as I lie in my berth, and gradually fall asleep. NAIiEA TI VE DEStTdPTWJSS. 249 CHAPTER XXI. NARRATIVE DESCRIPTIONS. MODELS. I.— Quarterstaff by Moonlig-ht.— " Nay, by my troth, thou gavest me a round knock," replied the captain ; " do as much for this fellow, and thou shalt pass scot-free ; and if thou dost not — why, by my faith, as thou art such a sturdy knave, I think I must pay thy ransom myself. — Take thy staff, Miller," he added 6 " and keep thy Imad ; and do you others let the fellow go, and give him a staff — there is light enough to lay on load by." The two champions being alike armed with quarter-staves, stepped forward into the centre of the open space, in order to have the full benefit of the moonlight ; the thieves in the meantime laughing, lo and crying to their comrade, *' Miller ! beware thy toll-dish." The Miller, on the other hand, holding his quarterstaff by the middle, and making it flourish round his head after the fashion which the French caWfaire le moulinet, exclaimed boastfully, " Come, on churl, an thou darest : thou shalt feel the strength of a miller's thumb ! " 16 *' If thou be'st a miller," answered Gurth, undauntedly, making his weapon play around his head with et^ual dexterity, '* thou art doubly a thieC, and I, as a true man, bid thee defiance." So saying, the two champions closed together, and for a few minutes they displayed great equality in strength, courage, and skill, 20 intercepting and returning the blows of their adversary with the most rapid dexterity, while, from the continued clatter of their weapons, a person at a distance might have supposed that there were at least six persons engaged on each side. Less obstinate, and even less dangerous combats, have been described in good heroic 26 verse ; but that of Gurth and the Miller must remain unsung, for want of a sacred poet to do justice to its eventful progress. Yet, ■ 1" 260 DESCllIPTIVE COMPOSITIONS. i ! 5; though quartor-stafF play be out of date, what we can in prose we will do for these bold cho.rnpions. 30 Long they fought equally, until the Miller began to lose temper at finding himself so stoutly opposed, and at hearing the laughter of his companions, who, as usual in such cases, enjoyed his vexation. This was not a state of mind favourable to the noble game of quarter- staff, in which, as in ordinary cudgel-playing, the utmost coolness is 35 requisite ; and it gave Gurth, whose tem{)er was steady, though surly, the opportunity of acquiring a decided advantage, in availing himself of which he displayed great mastery. The Miller pressed furiously forward, dealing blows with either end of his weapon .alternately, and striving to come to half-staff 40 distance, while Gurth defended himself against the attack, keeping his hands about a yard asunder, and covering himself by shifting his weapon with great celerity, so as to protect his head and body. Thus did he maintain the defensive, making his eye, foot and hand keep true time, until, observing his antagonist to lose wind, he 45 darted the staff at his face with his left hand; and as the Miller endeavoured to parry the tlirust, he slid his right hand down to his left, and with the full swing of the weapon struck his opponent on the left side of the head, who instantly measured his length upon the green sward. 50 " Well and yeomanly done ! " shouted the robbers ; •' fair play and Old England for ever. The Saxon hath saved both his purse and his hide, and the Miller has met his iuatc'n." Scott'8 " Ivanhne," II.— The Fight between Jan and Robin.— By this time the question of fighting was gone quite out of our own discre- tion : for sundry of the older boys, grave and reverend signors, who had taken no small pleasure in teaching our hand.s to tight, 5 to ward, to parry, to feign and counter, to lunge in the manner of sword-play, and the weaker child to drop on one knee when no cunning of fence mig' t baflUe the onset — these great masters of the art, who woiihi xiir 'iefer .s<!e us little? ont!.s practice it than themselves engage, sii or » jven of them came running down the grounded causeway, h>'viag heard that there had arisen "a snug (ittle i NARRATIVE DESCRIPTIONS. 251 mill " at the gate. Now whether that word hath origin in a Greek term meaning a conflict, as the best-read boys asseverated, or whether it is nothing more than a figure of similitude, from the beating arms of a mill, such as I have seen in countries where are no water-brooks, but folk make bread with wind — it is not for a man devoid of scholar- 15 ship to determine. Enough that they who made the ring, intituled the scene a " mill," while we who must be thumi)ed inside it, tried to I'ejoice in their pleasantry, till it turned upon the stomach. Moreover, I felt upon me now a certain responsibility, a dutiful need to maintain, in the presence of John Fry, the manliness of the 20 Ridd family, and the honor of Exmore. Hitherto none had worsted me, although in the three years of my schooling I had fought more than three score battles, and bedewed with blood every plant of grass towards the middle of the Ironing-box. And this success I owed at fii-st to no skill of my own, until I came to know better ; for 25 up to twenty or thirty fights, I struck as nature guided me, no wiser than a father-long-legs in the heat of a lantern ; but I had conquered, partly through my native strength and the Exmore toughness in me, and still more that I could not see when I had gotten my bellyful. But now I was like to have that and more ; for my heart was down, 30 to begin with ; and then Robert Snell was a bigger boy than I had ever encountered, and as thick in the skull and as hard in the brain as ever I could claim to be. I had never told my mother a word about these frequent strivings, because she was soft-hearted ; neither had I told my father, because 35 he had not seen it. Therefore, bcliolding me still an innocent-looking child, with fair curls on my forehead, and no store of bad language, John Fry thought this was the very first fight that had befallen me ; and so when they let him in the gate, " with a message to the head- master," as one of the monitors told Cop, and Peggy and Smiler were 40 tied to the railings till I should be through my business, John comes up to me with tears in his eyes, and says : " Doon't thee goo for to do it, Jan ; doon't thee do it, for gude now." But I told him that now it was much too late to cry off; so he said : " The Ijord be with thee, Jan, and turn thy thumb knuckle inward." <6 It is not a very large piece of ground in the angle of the cjuse- ir^9. DESCRIPTIVE COMPOSITIONS. ways, but quite big enough to fight upon, especially for Christians, who love to be cheek by jowl at it The great boys stood in a circle around, being gifted with strong privilege, and the little boys had 60 leave to lie flat and look through the legs of the great boys. But while we were yet preparing, and the candles hissed in the fog-cloud, old Phoebe, of more than four-score years, whose room was ovei* the hall-porch, came hobbling out, as she always did, to mar the joy of the conflict. No one ever heeded her, neither did she exjMJct it ; but 55 the evil was that two senior boys must always lose the first round of the fight by having to lead her home again. I marvel how Robin Snell felt. Very likely he thought nothing of it, always having been a boy of a hectoring and unruly sort. But I felt my heart go up and down as the boys came round to strip me ; 60 and greatly fearing to be beaten, I blew hot upon my knuckles. Then I pulled off my little cut jerkin and laid it down on my head ca[), and over that my waistcoat, and a boy was proud to take care of them. Thomas Hooper was his name, and I remember how he looked at me. My mother had made that little cut jerkin in the 65 quiet wint(>r evenings, and taken pride to loop it up in a fashionable way, and I was loath to soil it with blood, and good filberds were in the pocket. Then up to me came Robin Snell (Mayor of Exeter thrice since that), and he stood very square and looked at me, and I lacked not long to look at him. Round his waist he had a kerchief 70 busking up his small-clothes, and on his feet light pumkin shoes, and all his upper raiment off. And he danced about in a way that made my head swim on n»y shoulders, and he stood .some inchiis over me. But I, being muddled with much doubt about John Fry and his errand, was only stripped of my jerkin and waistcoat, and not com- 75 fortable to begin. " Come now, shake hands," cried a big boy, jumping in joy of the spectacle, a third-former nearly six feet high ; " shake hands, you little devils. Keep your pluck up, and show good sport, and Lord love the better man of you." 80 Robin tok mo by the hand, and gazed at me disdainfully, and then smote me painfully in the face, ere I could get my fence up. " Whutt be 'bout, lad ? " cried John Fry ; " hutt un again, Jan, wuU 'e ? Well done, then, our Jan boy." fit I NA liliA TI VE DESCIIIPTIONS. 253 For I luul re[)lied to Robin, now, with all the weight auil cadence of penthemimeral cajsuni (a thing, the name of which I know, but 85 could never make liead or tail of it), an<l the strife began in a serious style, and the boys looking on were not cheated. Although I could not collect their shouts wl:eu the blows were ringing upon me, it was no great loss ; for John Fry told me afterwards that their oaths went up like a furnace fire. But to these we paid no heed or hap, being 90 in the thick of swinging and devoid of judgment. All I know is, I came to my coi-nor when the round was over, with very hard pum[>s in my chest, and a great desire to fall away. '* Time is up," cried head monitor ere ever I got my breath again ; and when I fain wduM have lingered a while on the knee of the boy 9>^' that held mo. Jolin Fry had couie up, and the boys were laughing becaiisti ho want(;d a stable-lantern, and threatencid to tell my mother. " Time is ui>," cried another boy, more headlong than head monitor. " If we count thn;e before the come of thee, thwacked thou art, and umst go to the woiuen." I felt it hard upon me. He began to count : loo "one, two, three" — but before the " three" was out of his mouth I was facing my foe, with both hands up, and my breath going rough and hot, and resolved to wait the turn of it. For I had found seat on the knee of a boy sage and skilled to tutor me, who knew how much the en<l often differs from the beginning. A rare, ripe scholar 105 he was : and now he hath routed up the Oermans in the matter of criticism. Sure the clever boys and men have most love toward the stupid ones. " Finish him off. Bob," cried a big boy, and that I noticed especially, because I thought it unkind of hiui, after eating of my iio toffee as he had done that afternoon ; " finish him off neck and crop ; he deserves it for sticking up to a man like you." But I was not to be finished off, though feeling in my knuckles now as if it were a blueness antl a sense of chilblain. Nothing held except my legs, and they were good to help me. So this bout, or 115 round, if you please, was foughted warily by me, with gentle recol- lection of what my tutor, the clever boy, had told me, and some resolve to earn his praise bcf«)ro I came back to his knee again. And never, I think, in all my life, sounded sweeter words in my ear ii (fl ''^^i? 2H DESGRIPTl VE COMPOSITIONS. ri I : I 120 (except when my love loved me) than when my second and backer, who had made himself part of my doings now, and would have wept to see me beaten, said : — " Famously done, Jack, famously ! Only keep your wind up, Jack, and you'll go right through him ! " 125 Meanwhile, John Fry was prowling about, asking the boys what they thought of it, and whether I was like to be killed, because of my mother's trouble. But finding now that I had foughted three- score fights already, he came up to me woefully, in the quickness of my breathing, while I sat on the knee of my second, with a piece of isospongious coraline to ease me of my bloodshed, and he says in my ears, as if he were clapping spurs into a horse : — " Never thee knack under, Jan, or never coom naigh Hexinoor no more." With that it was all up with me. A simmering buzzed in my 135 heavy brain, and a light came through my eye-places. At once I sot both fists again, and my heart stuck to mo like cobbler's wax. Either Robin Snell should kill me, or I would conquer Robin Snell. So I went in again with my courage up, and Bob came smiling for victory, and I hated him for smiling. He let at me with his left hand, and I 140 gave him my right between his eyes, and he blinked, and was not pleased with it. I feared him not, and spared him not, neither spared myself. My breath came again, and my heart stood cool, and my eyes struck fire no longer. Only I knew that I would die sooner than shame my birth-place. How the rest of it Wiis I know not ; 145 only that I had the end of it, and helped to put Robin in bed. /{. D. Blackmore's " Lorna Dooiu." By jwrminsion of the author. TTI.— The Fight between Kenelm Chillingly and Tom Bowles. — Kenelm made no reply. Tliey both walked on in silcnc(;, and had now reiiched the centre of the village street when Jessie, looking up, uttered an abrupt exclamation, gt;ve an atfrighted start, and then came to a dead stop. 6 Kenelm's eye followed the direction of hers, and sjiw, a few yards distant, at the other side of the way, a small red brick house, with thatched sherds adjoining it, the whole standing in a wide yard, over the gate of which leaned a man smoking a small cutty-pipe. " It is NABRA TI VE DESClilPTlONS. 255 Tom Bowles," whispered Jessie, and instinctively she twined her arm into Ki'iielni's — then, as if on second thought, withdrew it, and said, lo still in a wliispcr, " Go hack now, sir — do." " Not 1. It is Tom Bowles whom I want to know. Hush ! " For hero Tom Bowles had thrown down his pipe and was coming across the road towards them. Kenelm eyed him with attention. A singularly powerful man, is not so tall as Kenelm by some inches, but still above the middle height, herculean shoulders and chest, the lower limbs not in equal proportion — a sort of slouching, shambling gait. As he advanced the moonlight fell on his face, — it was a handsome one. He wore no hat, and his hair, of a light brown, curled close. His face was fresh- 20 coloured, with aquiline features; his age apparently about six or seven-and-twenty. Coming nearer and nearer, whatever favourable impression the first glance at his physiognomy might have made on Kenelm was expelled, for the expression of his face changed and became fierce and lowering. 26 Kenelm was still walking on, Jessie by his side, when Bowles rudely thrust himself between them, and seizing the girl's arm with one hand, he turned his face full on Kenelm, with a menacing wave of the other hand, and said in a deej) burly voice — "Who bo you 1" 80 '* Let go that young woman before I tell you." " If you weren't a stranger," answered Bowles, seeming as if he tried to suppress a rising fit of wnith, " you'd bo iu the kennel for those words. But I s'liose you don't know that I'm Tom Bowles, and I don't choose the girl as I'm after to keep company with any 35 other man. So you be off." " And I don't choose any other man to lay violent hands on any girl walking by my side without tolling him that he's a brute ; and that I only wait till he has both his hands at liberty to let him know that he has not a poor cripple to deal with." 40 Tom Bowles could scarcely believe his eare. Amaze swallowed up for the moment every other sentiment. Mechanically he loosened his hold of Jessie, who fled off like a bird released. But evidently she thought of her new friend's danger more than her own escape ; t«H 256 DESCRIPTIVE COMPOSITIONS. 46 for instoud of sheltering hei-self in her father's cottage, she ran towards a group of labourera, who, near at hand, had stopped loiter- ing beforo the public-house, and returned with those allies towards the spot in which she had left the two men. She was very popular with the vilhigei-s, who, strong in their sense of numbers, overcame 60 their awe of Tom Bowles, and arrived at the place half running, half striding, in time, they hoped, to interpose between his tew'ible arm and the bones of the unoffending stranger. Meanwhile Bowles, having recovered his first astonishment, and scarcely noticing Jessie's escape, still left his right arm extended 55 towards the place she had vacated, and with a quick back-stroke of the left levelled at Kenelm's face, growled contemptuously, "Thou'lt find one hand enough for thee." But quick as w^as his aim, Kenclm caught the lifted arm just above the elbow, aiusing the blow to waste itself on air, and with eua simultaneous advance of his right knee and foot, dexterously tripped up his bulky auta<^onist, and laid him si)rawling on his buck. The movement was so sudden, and the stun it occasioned so utter, morally as well as physically, that a minute or more elapsed before Tom Bowles picked himself up. And he then stood another minute 66 glowering at his antagonist, with a vague sentiment of awe almost like a superstitious panic. For it is noticeable that, however fierce and fearless a man or even a wild beast may be, yet if either has hitherto been only familiar with victory and triumph, never yet having met with a foe that could cope with its force, the fii-st effect 70 of a <lefeat, especially from a d»?spised adversary, uidiinges and half paralyzes the whole nervous system. But as the fighting Tom gradually recovered to the consciousness of his own strength, and the recollection that it had been only foiled by the skilful trick of a wiestlcr, not the hand-to-hand might of a pugilist, the panic vanished, 76 and Tom Bowles wjis himself again. " Oh, that's your sort, is it 1 We don't fight with our heels hereabouts, like Cornishers and donkeys ; we fight with our fists, youngster ; and since you mill have a bout at that, why you must." '• Providence," answered Kenelm. .solemnly, " sent me to this ^ NAttRATIVE DESCRIPflONS. 257 go 95 villiij^e iov the express ]>ui'[iose of licking Tom Howies. It is n uigiial ^^ uiercy vouchsafed to youraelf, as you will one day acknowledge." Again a thrill of awe, something like that which the demagogue in Aristophanes might have felt when hraved by the sausage-maker, shot through the valiant heart of Tom Bowles. He did not like those ominous words, and still leas the lugubrious tone of voice in 85 which they were uttered. But resolved, at least, to proceed to battle with more precaution than he had at fii'st designed, he now deliberately disencumbered himself of his heavy fu.stian jacket and vest, rolled up his shirt-sleeves, and then slowly advanced towards the foe. Kenelm had also, with still greater deliberation, taken off his coat — which he folded up with care, as being both a new and an only one, and dejjosited by the hedge-side — and bared arms, lean indeed, and almost slight as compared with the vast muscles of his adversary, but firm in sinew as the hindleg of a stag. By this time the labourers, led by Jessie, had arrived at the spot, and were about to crowd in between the combatants, when Kenelm waved them back, and said in a calm and impressive voice — " Stand round, ray good friends, make a ring, and see that it is fair play on my side. I am sure it will be fair on Mr. Bowles's, loo He's big enough to scorn what is little. And now, Mr. Bowles, just a word with you in the presence of your neigh boui-s. I ani not going to say anything uncivil. If you are rather rough and hasty, a man is not always master of himself — at least so I am told — when he thinks more than he ought to do about a pretty girl. But I can't 105 look at your face oven by this moonlight, and though its expression at this moment is rather cross, without being sure that you are a fine fellow at bottom. And that if you give a promise as a man to man you will keep it. Is that so 1 " One or two of the bystanders murmured assent ; the others pressed no round in silent wonder. " What's all that soft sawder abouti " said Tom Bowles, somewhat falterin;;,'ly. "Simply this: if in the (iglit lM>tvve>>u us [ I>eat you, I iisk you to 258 DmsCRlPTirM COMPOSITIONS. iif> promise l»efore your iieiglil)ours that you will not by word or deed iuol(\st or interfere ugaiu with Miss Jessie Wiles." " Ell ! " roared Tom. " la it that you are after her? " " Suppose I am, if that pleases you ; and on my side, I promise that, if you beat me, I quit this place as soon as you leave me well 120 enough to do so, and will never visit it again. What ! Do you hesitate to promise ? Are you really afraid I shall lick you 1 " " You ! I'd smash a dozen of you to powder," " In that case, you are safe to promise. Come, 'tis a fair bargain. Isn't it, neighbours]" 126 Won over by Kenelm's easy show of good temper, and by the sense of justice, the bystanders joined in a common exclamation of assent. '* Come, Tom," said an old fellow, " the gentleman can't speak fairer ; and we shall all think you be afeard if you hold back." Tom's face worked ; but at last he growled, " Well, I promise — 130 that is, if he beats me," " All right," said Kenelm. " You hear, neighbours ; and Tom Bowles could not show that handsome face of his among you if he broke his word. Shake hands on it." Fighting Tom sulkily shook hands. 135 *' Well, now, that's what I call English," said Keneira — " all pluck and no malice. Fall back, friends, and leave a clear space for us." The men all receded ; and as Kenelm took his ground, there was a supple ease in his posture which at once brought out into clearer evidence the nervous strength of his build, and, contrasted with Tom's 140 bulk of chest, made the latter look clumsy and top-heavy. The two men faced each other a minute, the eyes of both vigilant and steadfast. Tom's blood began to fire up as he gazed — nor, with all his outward calm, was Kenelm insensible of that proud beat of the heart which is aroused by the fierce joy of combat. Tom 145 struck out first, and a blow was parried, but not returned ; another and another blow — still parried — still unreturned. Kenelm, acting evidently on the defensive, took all the advantages for that stititegy which he derived from superior length of arm and lighter agility of frame. Perhaps he wished to ascertain the extent of his adversary's 160 skill, or to try the endurance of his wind, before he 'entured on the NA RRA TI VE DESCRIPTIONS. 269 iiiiziirds of attack. Tom, galleil to tlio <{uiok that blows that mi<»ht have fcllwl an ox wtsro thus warded oil' from their mark, ami mildly aware that he was encountering some mysterious skill which turned his brute strength into waste force, and might overmaster him in the long-run, came to a rapid conclusion that the sooner he brought that v>r> brute force to bear, the better it would bo for him. Accordingly, after three rounds, in which, without onco breaking the guard of his antagonist, he had received a few playful taps on the nose and mouth, he drew back, and made a bull-like rush at his foe - bull-like, for it butted full at him with the powerful down-bent head, and the two ic fists doing duty as horns. The rush spent, he found himself in the position of a man milled. I take it for granted that evcny English- man who can call himself a man — that is, every man who has been an English boy, and, as such, been compelled to use his fists — knows what a " mill " is. But I sing not only pueris but virginibus. let Ladies, — " a mill " — using, with reluctance and contempt for myself, that slang in which lady writers indulge, and Girls of the Period know much better than they do their Murray — " a mill " — speaking not to lady-writers, not to Girls of the Period, bnt to innocent damsels, and in explanation to those foreigners who only understand 170 the English language as taught by Addison and Macaulay — a " mill," periphrastically, means this ; your adversary, in the noble encounter between fist and fist, has so plunged his head that it gets caught, as in a vice, between the side and doubled left arm of the adversary, exposing that head, unprotected and helpless, to be pounded out of i76 recognisable shape by the right fist of the opponent. It is a situation in which raw superiority of force sometimes finds itself, and is seldom spared by disciplined superiority of skill. Kenelm, his right fist raised, paused for a moment, then, loosening the left arm, releasing the prisoner, and giving him a friendly slap on the shoulder, heiso turned round to the spectators, and said apologetically, — " he has a handsome face — it would be a shame to spoil it." Tom's position of peril was so obvious to all, and that good- humoured abnegation of the advantage which the position gave to the adversary seemed so generous, that the labounu-s actually 186 hurrahed. Tom himself felt as if treated like a child ; and alas, and |i II' II 2m DEi^CmPTfVh: C(H\I POSITIONS. iJiiu for liiiii ! ill wliccliiig hiinsi-li' iuiiikI, uikI gatliciiii*^ liiiiiscif up, li is cyo r(!.st»'(l on Jessie's faco. Her lips wttvn sipart v. Itli bicatliless terror; he fancitnl they wero ujiart with u siiiilo of contempt. And 195 now ho became formidable. If Tom liad never yet fought with a man taught l»y a prize-fighter, so never yet had Kenelm encountered a Rtrengtli which, but for the lack of that teaching, would have conqtiered liis own. He could act no longer on the defensive; lie could no longer play,. lik<i a 200 dexterous fencer, with the sledge-hammers of those mighty arms. They broke through his guard — they soundeil on his chest as on an anvil. He felt that did they alight on liis head lie was a lost man. He felt also that the blows spent on the chest of his adversary were idle as tlie stroke of a cane on the hide of a rhinoceros. But now 205 his nostrils dilated, his eyes flashed fire — Kenelm Chillingly had ceased to be a philosopher. Crash came his blow — how unlike the swinging round-about hits of Tom Bowles ! — straight to its aim as the rifle-ball of a Tyroles(», or a British marksman at Aldershot — all the strength of nerve, sinew, purpose, and mind concentrated in its 210 vigor — crash just at that part of the fi-ont where the eyt^s nuiet, and followed up with the rapidity of lightning, flash upon flash, by a more restrained but more disabling blow with the left hand just where the left ear meets throat and j.iw-V)one, At the first blow Tom Bowles had reeled and s(agg<'i<'d, at the 215 second he threw up his hands, made a jump in tin; air as if shot through the heart, and then heavily fell forwards, an inert mass. The spectators pressed round him in terror. They thought he was dead. Kenelm knelt, passed quickly his hand over Tom's lips, pulse, and heart, and then rising, said humbly and with an air of 220 apology — " If he had been a less magnificent creature, I assure you on my honour that I should never have ventured tliat second blow. The first would have done for any man less splendidly endow(vl by nature. Fiift him gently ; take him home. Tell his mother, with my kind 25 r(!gards, that I'll call and see her and him to-morrow." Bulwer Lytton'a " Kenelm Chillingly." By perrninRion of the jmbliahera. NARRATIVE DESCRTPTIONS. 2«'»1 rv.— The Indignation of Nicholas Nickleby. "Ho is oi\\" 8Jii<l Mrs. Siiiiecrs. " 'I'Ikj cow-lioiise iiiul stalil' aio locked up, s»» ho can't be there ; and lio's not down Ktairs anywhere, for the girl has looked. He must have gone York way, and by a public road, too." " Why must he?" in(|uir(ul Squeei-s. ^' •'Stupid!" said Mr.s, .S^ueers angrily. " lie hadn't any money, had he?" "Never had a penny of his own in his whoh^ life, that I know of," replied S<pieerH. "To be suri!," rejoined Mrs. Sipieers, "and lut didn't take any thing i<> to eat with Itini ; that I'll an.swer for. Ha ! ha ! ha ! " " Ha I ha ! ha ! " laughed S<pieei-s. "Then, of course," said Mr.s. S., "ho must l»(fg his way, and he could do that, nowhere, but on the ])ublic road." "That's true," exclaimed S<pniers, clapping his hands. is "True ! yes; but you would never have thought of it, for all that, if I hadn't said so," replied his wife. " Now, if you take the chai.s(! and go one road, and I borrow Swallow's chaise and go the otli(;r, what with keeping our eyes open, and asking questions, one or other of us is pretty certain to lay liold of him." 20 The worthy lady's plan was adopted and put in execution without a moment's delay. After a liasty breakfast, an<l the prosecution of some inquiries in the village, tlie result of which sf^rined to show that he was on the right track, Squeera started forth in the pony- chaise intent upon discovery and vengeance. Shortly aftiMwards 2.5 Mrs. Squeers, arrayed in the white top-coat and tied n[) in various shawls a.id handkercliiefs, issued forth in another chai.so and another direction, taking with her a good-sized bludgcson, several o(l<l pieces of strong cord and a stout laboring man: all provided and carried upon the ex[>edition, with the sole object of assisting in th(i capture, andso (once caught) insuring the .safe custody of the unfortunate Sinike. Nicholas remained behind, in a tumult of feeling, sensible that whatever might be the upshot of the boy's flight, nothing but i)ainfnl and deplorable consequences were likely to ensue from it. Death, from want and exposure to the weather, was the best that could be ex 35 pected from the protraot«d wandoring of so poor and helpless a 262 tJESCttlPTlVi: COMPOSITIONS. creature, alone and unfriended, through a country of which he was wholly ignorant. There was little, perhaps, to choose between this fate and a return to the tender mercies of the Yorkshire school : hut 40 the unhappy being had established a hold upon his sympathy and com- piiHsion which made his heart ache at the prospect of the suffering he wiis destined to undergo. He lingered on in restless anxiety, picturing a thousand jtossibilities, until the evening of the next day, when Squeers returned alone and unsuccessful. 46 " No news of the scamp ! " said the schoolmaster, who had evidently been stretching his legs, on the old principle, not a few times during the journey. "I'll have consolation for this out of somebody, Nickleby, if Mrs. Squeers don't hunt him down. So I give you warning." " It is not in my power to console you, sir," said Nicholas. " It 60 is nothing to me." " Isn't it 1 " said Squeers, in a threatening manner. " We shall see ! " " We shall," rejoined Nicholas. " Here's the pony run right off his legs, and me obliged to come 66 home with a hack cob, that'll cost fifteen shillings l)esides other ex- penses," said Squeers ; " who's to pay for that, do you hear ? " Nicholas shrugged his shoulders and remained silent. •* I'll have it out of somebody, I tell you," said Squeers, his usual htir.sh, crafty manner changed to o|)en bullying, " None of your 60 whining vaporings here, Mr. Puppy ; but bo off to your kennel, for it's past your bed-time ! Come, get out ! " Nicholas bit his lip and knit his hands involuntarily, for his finger- ends tingled to avenge the insult; but remembering that the man was drunk, and that it could come to little but a noisy brawl, he 65 contented himself with darting a contemptuous look at the tyrant, and walked, as majestically as he could, up staira ; not a little nettled, however, to observe, that Miss Squeers and Master Squeers, and the servant girl were enjoying the scene from a snug corner; the two former indulging in many edifying remarks about the presumption of 70 poor upstarts, which occasioned a vast deal of laughter in which even the most miserable of all miserable servant girls joined; while Nicholas, stung to the quick, drew over his head such bedclothes as NARRATIVE DESCRIPTIONS. 263 lio ]uu\, lUul Htoriily resolved that the ()Ut.st>iiuliii^ accodiit l»etw('(;u himself and Mr. Squeers shouUl be uuttled rather iiiuru ti|iuedily than the latter anticipated. 7S Another day came, and Nicholas was scarcely awake when lie heard the wheels of a chaise approaching the hoiiso. It stopped. The voice of Mrs. Squeers was Inward, and in exultation, onlering a glass of spirits for somebody, which wab in itself a siitticient sign that something extraordinary liad luippo'ied. Nicholas hardly dared so to look out of tlio window ; but lie did so and the very firet object that met his eyes was the wretched Smiko ; so bedabbled with mud and rain, so haggard and worn, and wild, that, but for his garments being such as no scai-ecrow was ever seen to wear, he might have been doubtful, even then, of his identity. 8S ** Lift him ojit," said Squeers, after he had litenilly feasted his eyes in silence upon the culprit. " Bring him in ; bring him in ! " "Take care," cried Mrs. Squeers, jus her husband proffered his assistsmce. " Wo tied his legs under the apron, and made 'em fast to the chaise, to prevent him giving us the slip again." 90 With hands trembling with d«jlight, Squeei-s imloosened the cord ; and Smike, to all ap|>earance more dead than alive, was 1)rought into the house and securely locked up in a cellar, until such time us Mr. Squoera should deem it expedient to operate upon him, in presence of the assembled school. 96 Upon a hsisty consideration of the circumstances it may be matter of surprise to some pei-sons that Mr. and Mrs. Squeera should have taken so much trouble to repossess themselves of an incumbrance of which it was their wont to conq)lain so loudl;y ; but their sui'[)rise will cease when th(!y are informcid that the manifold servicts of the drudge 100 if performed by anybody else, would have cost the t-.sta?>lishnient some ten or twelve shillings per week in the shape of wages; and, furthermore, that all nuuiways were, as a matter of policy, made severe examples of at Dotheboys Hall, inasmuch a.s, in consequence of the limited extent of its attractions, there was but little inducement 105 beyond the powerful inqtulse of fear, for any i)upil, provided with the usual number of legs an<l the power of using them, to remain. The news that Smike had bet;n caught and brought back in tri- 2<t4 DESCRIPTIVE COMPOSITIONS. umph ran like wild-fire tlirorgli the Iningry coninnniity, and expoc- notation wsis on tiptoe sill *'>«> nio/ning. On ti|>t(Mj it was destined to remain however, until afternoon ; when Scpieers, having refreshed himself with his dinner, and fnrther strengthened himself hy an extra libation or so, made his appearance ( accompanied hy his amiable part- ner) with a countenance of portentous import, avid a fearful instrument 116 of flagellation, strong, supple, wax-ended, and new — in short, pur- chased that morning, expressly for the occasion. "Is every boy here?" asked Squeers, in a tvemendons voice. Every boy v/as there, but every boy wsis afraid to speak ; so Squeers glared along the lines tp assure himself; and every eye 120 drooped, and every head cowered down, as he did so. " Each boy keep his place," said Squeei-s, administering his favorite blow to the desk and regarding with gloomy satisfaction the uni- versal start it never failed to occasion. " Nickleby ! to your desk, sir." 125 It was remarked by more than one small observer that there was a very curious and unusual exi)resHyon in the usher's face ; but he took his seat without opening his lips in reply. Squeers, casting a triumphant glance at his as.sist,ant an<l a look of most comprehensive despotism on the l)oys, left the room, and shortly aif't<!rvvanl returned, ISO dragging Smike by the collar — or rather by that fragment of his jacket which was nearest the place where his collar would have been, had he boasted such a decoration. In any other pla'je, the appearance of the wretched, jaded, spirit- less object would have occasioned a murmur of compassion and 1S6 remonstrance. It had some effect even there ; for the lookers-on m^ved uneasily in their seats; and a fmv of the boldest ventured to steal looks at each other, ex})resHiv(5 of indignation and pity. They were lost on Squeers, however, whose gaze was fastened on the luckless Smike, as ho inquinsd, according to custom in such cases, lily whether he had anything to sn,y for hiuiself " Nothing, I suppose 1" said Scpieers, with a diabolical grin. Smike glanced round, and his eye restcMl, for an instant, on Nicholas, as if he had expected him to intercede ■ but his look was riveted on his desk. Til NA RRA TI VK DESCIilPTIONS. 265 " Havo you .luytliiiig to say t " detnaii(l<Ml Sqiieera again ; giving his i46 right arm two or three Hourislies to try its power and suppleress. " Stand a little out of the way, Mi's. Sqiieers, my dear ; I've hardly got room enougli." *' Spare nie, sir ! " cried Sraikr. "Oh ! that's all, is it I " said Scpioers. " Yes, I'll flog you within iso an inch of your lifo, and spai'e you that." " Ha, ha, lia," laughed Mrs. Squeers, " that'« a good un ! " "I was driven to do it," aaid Smike faintly; and casting another imploring look ahout him. " Driven to do it, were you ( " said Squeers. " Oh ! it wasn't your i66 fault; it was mine, I suppose — eh?" " A nasty, ungrat(fful, pig-headed, brutish, obstinate, sneaking dog," exclaimed Mrs. Scpieers, tjikirig Smike's head under her arm, and administering a cuff at every epithet ; '* what does he mean by that 1 " 160 " Htand siside, my dear," replied Squeers. " We'll try and find out." Mrs. SiU'^ers being out of breath witli her exertions, complied. Squeers Ciuigat the boy tirmly in his grip; one desperate cut had fall ii on his l)ody — he was winching from tlie lash and uttering a i6t scream of pain — it was raised again, and again about to fall — when Nicholas Is ickleby, suddenly styrting up, cried "Stop!" in a voice that made the rafters ring. "Who crie<l stop?" said Stjut^r., turning savagely round. " I." said Nicholas, sttspping forward. " This must not go on." 170 " Must not go on ! " cried Squeers, almost in a shriek. " No ! " thundered Nicholas. Aghast and stupi^fied by the boldiiess of the interference, Sqtieers released his hold of Smike, and, falling back a pacj or two, gazed u|»on Nicholas with looks that were positively frightful. 176 " I say must not," repeated Nicholas, nothing daunted ; " shall not. I will prevent it." Squeers continued to gi-ze upon him, with his eyes starting out of his head ; but astonishment had actually for the moment bereft him of speech. v»n 266 DESCIUI'TI VE COM J 'OSITWNS. " You have disrogai'dcd all my quiet interference iu the miserable lad's behalf," said Nicholas ; " you have rcturued no answer to the letter in which I bogged forgiveness for him, and offered to be respon- sibh; that he would remain quietly here. Don't blame me for this 186 public interf(!rence. You have brought it vipon yourself; not I." "Sit down, beggar !" screamed Squeers, almost beside himself with rage, and seizing Sniike as he spoke. " Wretcli," rejoined Nicholas fiercely, " touch him at your peril ! I will not stand by and see it done. My blood is up, and I have the 190 strength of ten such men as yon. Look to yourself, for by Heaven I will not spare you, if you drive me on ! " " Stand back ! " cried Squeers, brandishing his weapon. " I have a long series of insults to avenge," said Nichoh,i, flushed with pjvssion ; " and my indignation is aggravated l»y the dastardly 195 cruelties practised on helpless infancy in this foul den. Have a care ; for if you do raise the devil within me, the consequences shall fall heavily upon your own hea<l ! " He had scarcely spoken, when Squeers in a violent outbreak of wi-ath, and with a cry like the howl of a wild beast, 8j>at upon liim, 200 and struck him a blow across the face with his instrument of torture, which raised up a bar of livid fiesh as it was inflicted. Smarting with the Hgony of the blow, and concentrating into that one moment all his feelings of rage, scorn and indignation, Nicholas sprang ujion him, wrested the weapor from his hand, and pinning him by the 205 throat, beat the ruffian till he roared for mercy. The boys — with the exception of Master Squeers, who, coming to his father's assistance, harassed the enemy in the rear — moved not hand or foot; but Mrs. Squeers, with many shrieks for aid, hung on ♦ o the tail of her partner's coat, and (indeavored to «lrag him from his 210 infuriated advcd-sary ; while Miss Sipu^ers, who had been jKjeping through th(! key-hole in the expecttition of a very difForent scene, darted in at the; very beginning of the attack, and after launching a shower of inkstands at the usher's head, beat Nicholas to her heart's content : animating h'3rs(;lf, at every blow, with the recollection of ?15 his having refusiid her proffered love, and thus impartinjj additional NA Jilt A TI VE DESCRIPTIONS. 267 strength to an arm which (as she took after her mother in this respect) was, at no time, one of the weakest. Nicholas in the full torrent of his violence, felt the blows no more than if they had been dealt with feathera ; but becoming tired of the noise and uproar, and feeling that his arm grew weak besides, he 220 threw all his remaining strength into half a dozen finishing cuts, and Bung SqueerS from him, with all the force he could muster. The violence of his fall precipitated Mrs. Squeers completely over an adjacent form ; Squeers striking his head against it in his descent, lay at his full length on the ground, stunned and motionless. 225 Having brought atfairs to this happy termination, and ascertained, to his thorough satisfaction, that Squeers was only stunned, and not dead (upon wliich point he had some unpleasant doubts at first), Nicholas left his faunly to restore him, and retired to consider what cour.se he had better adojjt. He looked anxiously round for Smike, 230 as he left the room, but he was nowhere to be seen. After a l)rief consideration, he packed up a few clothes in a small leather vali.se, and, finding tliat nobody offered to oppose his progress, marched boldly out by the front door, and, shortly afterward, struck into the road which led to the Greta Bridge. 235 Diekent' " Nuiholas NickUby." v.— The Angler of the Chief Justice.— The chamber was not very large, though lofty to my eyes, and dark, with wooden panels round it. At the further end were some raised seats, such sis I have seen in churches, lin«l with v -vet, and having broad elbows^ and a canopy over the middle seat. There were only three men sitting here, one in the centi-e and on** on each side, and all three were done up wonderfully with fur, and roltj** of state, and curls of thick gray hor.se-hair, crinq>ed and gathered, and plaited down to their shoulders. Kacli man had an oak desk before him, set at a little distance, and spread with pens and pajK^rs. Instead of writing, however, th(^y seemed to be laughing and talking, or rather the one in the middle seemed to be telling .some good story, which the others received with approval. By reason of their great perukes, it was hard to tell how old thev «'ere ; but the oiw vho was sneaHing seeded the voungesv,. 10 \ I 2r.8 DESClilJ'TI IE COMroSlTlONH. Ill f'! ir. iiithougli ]i(! was tho chief of tliein. A thickset, burly, and bulky iiiiin, with a blotchy, broad face, and great square jaws, and fierce eyes full of blazos ; he was one to be dreaded by gentle souls, and to be abhorred hy the noble. ]}otwc(Mi mo ami tho three lord judges, some few lawyers were '^1' guthering up bags ami papers and pens and so forth, from a narrow table in tho middle of the room ; as if a case had been disi>osed of, and no other were called on. But before I had time to look round twice, the stout, fierce man, espied me, and shouted out, with a flash- ing stare : 'ir> " How now, countryman, who art thou?" "May it please your worship," I answered him loudly,"! am John Kidd, of Oai'e ]»arisli^ in the shire of Somerset, brought to this London some two months back by a special messenger, wliose name is Jeremy Stickles ; and then bound over to be at hand and ready, 30 when called u])on tv) give evidence, in a matter unknown to me, but touching the peace of our lord the king, and the well-being of his subjects. Three times I liave met our lord the king, but he hath said nothing about his peace, and only held it toward mo ; and every day save Sunday I have walked up and down the great hall of West- 35 minster, ail the business part of the day, exjR^cting to l>e called xipon; yet no one hiith called upon me. And now T desire to sisk your wor- ship whetli«>r 1 may go home again." " W(!ll done, John," re|)lied his lordship, wJiile I was panting with all this speech. " 1 will go bail for thee, John, thou hast never made 40 such a long speech before ; and thou art a spunky Briton, or thou couldst not have made it now. I remeniber the matter well ; and I myself will attend to it, although it aro.se before my time" — he was but iK^wly chief-justice — " l)ut I cannot take it now, John. There is no fear of losing thee, John, any more than tho Tower of Limdon. ■i'< I giieve for his nuijesty's exchequer, after keeping thee two months or more." " Nay, my lord, I crave your pardon. My mother hath been keep- ing me. Not a groat have I received." "Spank, is it so /" his lordship cried, in a voice that shook the M) cobw(!bs, and the frown on his brow sho'-jk the hearts of men, and NA ItltA TI VE DESCRIPTIONS. 269 iiiino as much as the rest of thorn — "Spunk, is his majesty come to this, that he starves his own approvers ? " " My lord, my h>r<l," whispered Mr. Spank, the chief officer of evidence, " the thing hath been overlooked, my lord, among such grave matters of treason." « "I will overlook thy head, foul Spank, on a spike from Temple Bar, if ever I hear of the like again. Vile varlet, what art thou paid fori Thoti hast swindled the money thyself, foul Spank; I know thee, though thou art new to me. Bitter is the day for thee that ever 1 came across thee. Answer me not — one word more, and6C I will have thee on a hurdle." And he swung himself to and fro on his bench, with both hands on his knees ; and every man waited to let it pass, knowing Ixjtter than to speak to him. "John Ridd," said the lord chief justice, at last recovering a sort of dignity, yet daring Spank from the corners of his eyes to do so 66 much as look at him " thou hast been shamefully used, John Bidd. Answer me not, boy ; not a word ; b»it go to Master Spank, and let mo know how he behaves to thee 1" here he made a glance at Spank which was worth at least ten pounds to me ; "be thou here again to morrow ; and before any other case is taken, I will see justice done t(>7c thee. Now be off, boy ; thy name is Ridd, and we are well rid of thee." I was oidy too glad to go, after all this tempest, as you may well sujipose. For if ever I saw a man's eyes become two holes for the devil to glare from, I saw it that day ; and the eyes were those of the 7J Lord Chief Jvistico Jeffreys. R. D. Blarkmore » " Lnrna IhH^ne." By permisnion of the author. '■ui i 1 EXAMINATION OF MODELS. Description and narnit^^ion are often more (tr luss mingled, as is illus- trated again and again hy the nunlels. Such mingling is found especially in descriptions of contcstw (narratives of contests, they might he called with iMpuil propriety), hut other sulijects demand a similar combination of narrative and descnptivo writing. 'Hi- ,H 270 DESGIUPTIVE COMPOSITIONS. 1. What is the prevailing tone of the description of the Quarterstaff Combat between Gurth and the Miller ? In the story of a combat we are interested in the c»u>se of difterence between the contestants, in their strength, skill, temper, and endurance, in the justice of their respective contentions, in the uprightness of their cliaracters, and of course in the event of the combat. What light do«!8 Scott throw on these [uiints in the present description? This ^.ketch might properly be described as an animated narrative ; mention the features of it which wouM ott'tir striking material for a picture and indicate moments of the combat which miglik offer opportunities for i)ictures. Write a brief description of the scene at the moment th«is selected. Write a simpler account of what is descril)ed in the paragraph " the Miller pressed furiously forward upon the green sward." Point out the merits of the last paragraph as a conclusion of the sketch. The choice of words, the phraseology, and even the sentence-forms, of this sketch are iiiiluenced by a variety of considerations : — (»() the desire to suggest the language of the Norman Period ; {U) a distinction between the colbjijuial English of the characters, and the literary English «if the author; (r) a desire to maintain a characteristic style of expression for each of the leatling persons ; {d) the employment of technicalities appro- priate to the s[inrt described ; (»>tho necessity, entailed by all minute de.scripticm, of enumerating concrete objects; (/') the necessity, entailed by artistic description, i»f using pictures(|ue ('[(ithets. Show specifically how these considerations have iwHuencwl the language al the passage. " Closed together ' (1«») . " rapid dexterity " (2*J) ; criticise. " Continueil clatter "' (22) ; two points niak?e these words an echo of their sense. What is the iintecedent of '• that " in luie 2(1 ? '* Stoutly opjiosed " (.'51 ^ . show the ff»rce by expandintg. " Wht> instantly measurnl his lenw'th \ipoii the green sward," (48, 49') ; imprf^ve the collocation. What is tin; rhet<»r- ical V due of the balanceti structure «rf the closing sentence ? 2. When the author makes one i>f the partici|><M»tH tell the »t</»rjr of the tight he gains in th» vividnesj* of tlie narnit "H, though he UH-iirs the tlangi'r of making a one-sided .story. Th»' pii'Miuc nf .lohn Fry. his id*-* of the innocence '>f .bm, and his subscjuent enthusiasm for his 8Ucc4;k#» make a comical etiect. The cause ol the fray is ignor«"«l ; thiM is to sli<>w tliat English itoys tight in onler t<> hnd their rank. Wlint li^ht is thrown on English character by the ac»>>untgivon of the attitudes <>f the different, boys toward the fight? Point out the humorous touches which relieve the stupid brutality of these little animals:' Point out any other means of redeeming di.sagrceable phases, NARRATIVE DESCRIPTIONS. 271 Tliis is a stylo in which nature and art struggle for the mastery. The excitement, the humuur, often supposably unconscious on Jan's part, the boyish disregard of continuity, conceal the regularity of the plan of the piece, and the perfect proportion in allotting space to its parts. The plan is somewhat as follows : (1, 18) ; the big boys are anxious to see a fight (19, 33) ; Jan must maintain the honour of his family and of his native vil- lage (34, 45) ; .Tan's friends are in ignorance of his great exploits ; (4(>, 5(>) ; all is in readiness for the fight (57, 75) ; Jan enters the ring in a somewhat perj)lexed frame of mind (76, 83) ; Robin strikes Jan (84, 9.*i) ; an exciting round decides nothing (94, 108) ; Jan is called Ijnck to the ring (109, 124) ; in the second round Jan is not finished off (125, 133) ; .John Fry encourages Jan (134, 145) ; victory crowns a stubborn effort. This description being distinctly narrative is arranged in a simple and natural order : are there any points at wliich the sense-c<mnection is not obvious I If so, does the abruptness in the change of subject seem intentional or negligent? In any of the divisions do you find digressions wliieh mar the unity of tlie story? Consider the following expressions, point out any peculiarities you observe in them, and state any conclusions you may reach concerning the style of the passage as shown in, or infiuenced by them : Sundry of the elder boys (3) ; Grave and reverend signors (3) ; to ward, to parry, to feign and counter, to lunge, etc. (5) ; great masters of the art (7) ; a snug little mill (10) ; asseverated (12) ; till it turned upon the stomach (18) ; than a fatlier-long-legs in the heat of a lantern (27) ; I had gotten my bellyful (32) ; no store of bad language (.'i7) ; who love to be cheek by jt»wl at it (5(J) ; Thoiujis Hooper was his name (<>6, 67) ; ft kerchief buskuig up his small-clothes (72) ; get my forire up (81, 82); Hutt un again, Jan, wuU'e? (83, 84); the weight and ja«lence of ponthemimeral oesura (85) ; the boys looking on were not cheated (86, 87) ; like a furnace-fire (IK)) ; in the thick of swinging (91, 92) ; very hard pumps in my chest (97) ; more headlting tlian head monitor (98) ; before the come <>f thee (105) ; feeling in my knuckles as if it were a blueness (114, 115) ; foughted (123) ; go right through him (124) ; a sim- mering buzzed (135) ; like cobbler's wax (139, 140). What may wo infer aV)out .Ian Ilidd, the author, and the readers for whom the author writes, from the phnweology as shown above ? What rhetorical value have the short sharp phrases of the last six linesV 3. The death of Hamlet, the death of Earl Doorm in Teiuiyson's Enid, the death of the (Jrand Master in TVic Tidi.snunt, tliu triumphs of Horatius in Macaulay's L(i>j, these, and hundreds of other similar scenes, are interesting and in an artistic sense pleasing, as litoniry sketdies, while as ' I, i r 272 DEHCUIPTI VE COMPOSITIONS. jictuiil sights they would bu revolting uiul shocking : authors redeem the disgusting sides of murders and buttles by dwelling upon motives, feel- ings, exciting actions ; by suppressing the horrible details or merely suggesting them ; and by sustained beauty of language, often unfitted to a real and truthful idea of the events. How does Lytton redeem the brutal aspects of the contest between Kenelm Chillingly and Tom Bowles ? Supposing the reader to read this sketch as its author would have wished, that is, with the author's own sympathies and strength of feeling, in what mood will he be at the moment when Kenelm trips Tom ? What effect will his mood have upon his judgment of what follows ? Write a short contrast between the characters of the two young men, showing how tho incidents preceding the fight affected each. How does Lytton treat the iiuestions of strength, skill, temper, endur- ance, and justice 1 How does he preserve that equality between the combatants without which (jur interest would flag ? The length of this description harmonizes with the idea of a prolonged battle. About line 210 sympathy with Cliillingly gives place to pity for Tom Bowles ; the author, feeling this, endeavours to retrieve the effect by making Kenelm generous, but ho only succeeds in making him a supercilious prig. At the eighth line Lytton begins using the words of the characters in what is called direct narration. Convert all tho direct conversation of lines 8-110 into the oblique form, taking great care to use correct and appropriate language. Make a brief abstract of this story of the fight between Chillingly and Bowles, similar to the abstract given above of the struggle between Jan and Robin, first dividing the passage into parts according to its sub-topics. Discuss fully the propriety of the digression, lines 62-78,in the long paragraph, 41-82. Point out some of the features of diction and sentence-structure in lines 201-216, that are the result of tho deep interest taken by the author in the success of his hero. The affection and bad taste of this extract are not to be imitated. 4. Indicate the parts of this sketch which deal with (a) the caus«, (6) the course, (c) the consequences, of the indignation of Nicholas. State with reasons what you think of the proportion of space allotted to these divisions. Has the author used any material that seems to you unnatural or improbable? If so, wliat reasons seem to have prompted the use of such details? What is the advantage of giving the very words of the characters in this description ? In what respects does this sketch resemble a scene in a drama? In what respects does it differ from a scene in a drama ? How does Mrs. Squeers' language in the opening coUr quy reflect her shite of mind and her attitude toward Mr. Squeers ? Consider especially NARRATIVE DESCRIPTIONS. 273 her first speech and the quest ion "had he?" (7). What are the oxpros sions that give a tone of vulgarity to "True! yes lay hohl of him ' (16-20)? Mention errors made by Squeers in his conversation with Nicholas (45-61). What are the expressions that give Squeers' speeches a bullying tone? "We shall" (53)— Why not "We will"? What are the chief defects in "Nicholas the latter anticipated " (62-75) ? Con- sider the bearing of the clause introduced by " while" (71). Wljat is the antecedent of " he " (84) ? The sentence " Upon . . . .remain " (06-107) is rather long. Break it up into shorter sentences and express with greater directness the reason for the anxiety to recapture Sniike. Change the sentence "Smike his desk" (142-144) so as to obvii.to the ambiguous pronouns. Examine the speeches of Nicholas (l«i7-197) and show how Dickens has made the language correspond with his hero's state of mind, first, his determination, second, his vehement indignation. To what does "which" (201) refer? Compare wi;h "from "(209) "out of reach of." What does "at no time one of the weakest" (217) imply i The figure of litotes is forcible because it shows both sides of the question : it offers an easy means of comparison and judgment. 5. Make a synopsis or an abstract of this sketch showing its general plan. Compare the method of describing the anger of Jeflfreys with the method of describing the grief of Walton in chapter XX. This account of the anger of the Chief Justice is supposed to be given by one of the participants in the scene, John Ridd, a simple-minded countryman. It is necessary, therefore, that the diction should suggest the language of the end of the seventeenth century, and, except in the speeches of Jeffreys and Mr. Spank, should reflect the naivetd of John Ridd. Go over the extract, noting the instances in which these considera- tions weighed with the author in his choice of phraseology. This extract affords an excellent example of conversational prose (25-72). In this kind of composition such language nmst be used in each case as fits the mouth of the speaker and the situation, and a careful connection must be maintained between the speeches. Show in reference to this passage : (a) that col- loquial speech has been used throughout, (h) that John Ridd's language suits a simple, outspoken countryman answering the questions of one in authority, (c) that the language of Jeffreys reflects his fierceness, imperious- ness and lack of dignity, and a coarse, half -bullying, half -kindly humour in his speeches to John Ridd, (d)that the language of Mr. Spank shows his timidity and subservience, (e ) that the Chief Justice holds his natural place as the leader of the conversiition. Show the bearing of each speech on the one immediately praoeditig by reference to the wording. Mention 274 DiiSCRlPtlV^ COMPOStftOKS. instances in this oxtmcfc where the diction is nffectodhy the lunguago of ihe court .>f law. Does the extract gain anything by .leffreys' name ben.g withheld till the conclusion 'i li PRACTICE. Practice List : Write u composition on one of the following subjects :— 1. 2. 3. 4. 5. 0. 7. 8. 9. 10. A Foot-Ball Match. A Boat Race. A Spelling Match. A Debate. A Political Meeting. A Fight between a Dog an«l a Bull. A Riot. A Wrestling-Match. Rescue at a Fire. The Trapper and the Bear. Pra 1. app 2, ari! :{ con thei by; wh< 4 res nai Plan: A Foot-Ball Match. 1. The circumstances leading to the match. 2. The assemy)ling of the spectjitors. 3. The suspense of the crowd. 4. The arrival of the teams. 5. The contestants stand opp«>sed. G. The game opens. 7. The events of the tir.st half. 8. The interval. 9. The play recommences. 10. An interruption. 11. The closing struggle. 12. Scene at the end of the game. J 3. The crowd departs discussing the result NARRATIVE DESCRIPTIONS. 276 Practical Suggestions: 1. Dinlogue adds greatly to duNcriptioiiH of coutiistH ; hut it must liu appropriate t<» thu characturH and to thu occasion. 2. Tn dcscriliing l)oat-raccs and similar contests, necessary technicalitit's art; |)ennitted, hut a slan<{y use of sporting terms should he avoided. .'{. StriMigth and animation of style are essential to good dttseriptions of contests ; hut these must he got from strength of thinking, feeling, sympa- thetic imagining, putting yourself in thu situations of thu characters, not hy rules of rhutoric. Rhutoric will help you to touch up thu description when you ruvisu it. 4. As a muthod of conveying ideas of scenes, painting is in many respects superior to word-picturing ; hut when description verges on narration words are the natural medium. i IMAGE EVALUATION TEST TARGET (MT-3) 1.0 I.I 11.25 i5Q ^^^ H^^H ta lii 122 ■IMU m U |l.6 ^>' r y Photographic Sciences Corporalion \ ^v •'^ <^ ^'i\^'^ ^ ^*^ ^.V' 23 WIST MAIN STRUT WfBSTn,N.Y. 145M (716)t72-4S03 ^4^0 ^ 6^ : LETTFAiS. 277 CHAPTER XXIII. DESCRIPTIVE LETTERS. MODELS. I.— Description of a Summer-House.— Olney, June S5th^ 1785. My Dear Friend: I write in a nook that I call my houdoir. It is a summer-house, not much bigger than a sedan-chair, the door of which ojiens into the garden, that is now crowded with pinks, roses, and honeysuckles; and 5 the window into my neighbour's orchard. It formerly served an apothecary, now dead, as a smoking-room ; and under my feet is a trap door, which once cover(!d a hole in the ground, where he kept his bottles. At present, however, it is dedicated to sublimer uses. Having lined it with garden-mats, and furnished it with a table and lo two chairs, here I write all that I write in sunmier-time, whether to my friends or to the public. It is secure from all noise, and a refuge from all intrusion ; for intruders soni(>times trouble me in the winter evenings at Olnoy. I5ut (thanks to my houdoir !) I can now hide myself from them. A po(^t's retreat is sacred. They acknowledge 15 the truth of that proposition and never presume to violate it. The last sentence puts me in mind to tell you that I have ordered my volume to your door. My book-seller is the most dilatory of all his fraternity, or you would have received it long since. It is more than a month since I returned him the last proof, and consequently 20 since the printing was finished. I sent him the manuscript at the beginning of November, that he might publish while the town was full, and he will hit the exact moment when it is entirely empty. Patience, you will perceive, is in no situation exempted from the severest trials ; a remaik that may serve to comfort you undei- the 25 numberless trials of your own. W. C. Cowper's Letters, 278 bi<js( uiirrrvE < 'o.urosi rioxs. Ti— Venice.— EsTH, October cV, ISIS. My Dear Peacock : I have not written to you, I think, for six weeks, but I often felt that I had many things to say; hut I liavo not been without 5 events to disturb and distract me, amongst which is the death of my little girl. She died of a disorder peculiar to the climate. We have all had bad si)irits enough, and I, in addition, bad health. I intend to be better soon; thei-e is no malady, bodily or mental, which does not either kill or is killed. 10 We left the baths of Lucca, I think, the day after I wrotci to you, on a visit to VcMiice, pai-tly for the sake of seeing the city. We made a very delightful acquaintance there with a Mr. and Mrs. Hop[)uer, the gentleman an Englishman, and tlie lady a Swissesse, mild and beautiful, and unprejudiced, in the best sense of the word. The kind 15 attentions of these people made our short stay at Viniice very pleas- ant. I saw Lord Byron, and reaUy hardly knew him again: he is changed into the liveliest and happiest-looking man I ever met. He read me the fir.st canto of his *' Don Juan," a thing in the style of " Beppo," but infinitely better, and dedicated to Southey in ten or a 20 dozen stanzas, more like a mi.Kture of wormwood and verdigris than satire. Venice is a wonderfully line city. Tlioaj»proach to it over the Laguna, with its domes and turrets glittering in .i long line over the blue waves, is one of the finest architectural delusions in the world. It seems to have, and literally it has, its foundations in the sea. The 25 silent streets are paved with water, and you hear nothing but the dashing of the oars, and the occasional cries of tlui gondolieri. I heard nothing of Tasso. The gondolas themselves are things of a most romantic and pictures<]ue appcvirance ; I can only comjtare them to moths, of which a cotHn might have bisen the chrysalis. They are 30 hung with black, and painted black, and carpeted with grey; they curl at the prow and stern, and at the former there is a nonde.script beak of shining st<iel, which glittei's at the end of its long black mass. The Doge's palace, with its library, is a fine moiunn<Mit of aristo- cratic power. I saw the dungeotis, where theses scoundrels used to 3,'. torment their victims. They are of rlirct^ kinds, on»? adjoining the LETTERS. 279 place of triiil, wliero tlie prisoners tlestined to immediiite execution were kopt. I could not tlesceud to them, because the day on which I visited it, was festa, Anotlier under the leads of the palace, where the sufferers were roasted to death or madness by the ardours of an Italian sun ; and othei-s, called Jie Pozzi — or wells, deep underneath, 40 and communicating with those on the roof by secret passages — where the prisoners were confined sometimes half up to their middles in stinking water. When the French came here they found only one old man in the dungeons, and he could not speak. But Venice, which was once a tyrant, is now the next worse thing, a slave ; for, in fact, *5 it ceased to be free, or worth our regret as a nation, from the moment that the oligarchy usurped the rights of the jieople ; yet, I do not imagine that it was ever so degraded as it has been since the French, and especially the Austrian yoke. The Austrians take sixty per cent, in taxes, and impose free quarters en the inhabitants. A horde of 60 German soldiers, as vicious and more disgusting than the Venetians themselves, insult these miserable people. I had no conception of the excess to which avarice, cowardice, superstition, ignorance, passionless lust, and all the inexi)ressible brutalities which degrade human nature, could be carried, until T had passed a few days at Venice. 56 We have been living this last month near the little town from which I date this letter, in a very pleasant villa which has been lent to us, and we are now on the point of proceeding to Florence, Rome, and Naples, at which last city we shall spend the winter, and return northwards in the spiing. Behind us here are the Euganean Hills, eo not so beautiful as those of the Bagni di Lucca, near Arqud, where Petrarch's house and tomb are religiously preserved and visited. At the end of o;ir garden is an extensive Gothic castle, now the habita- tion of owls and bats, where the Medici family resided before they came to Florence. We see before us the wide flat plains of Lombardy, 65 in which we see the sun and moon rise and set, and the evening star, and all the golden magnificence of autumnal clouds. But I reserve wonder for Naples. I have })een writing, and indeed have just finished the first act of, a lyric and classical drama, to be called " ProuK^theus Unbound. "7o Will you toll me what there is in Cicero about a drama supposed to have been written l»v ^^schvlus iinder this title? 280 DESCRIPTIVE COMTi fSTTWNS. T ought to say that T luive just \(mu\ Miilthiis in n Fioucl' ti-fcn!-*.* tion. Malthus is a very chivni* man, and LIk; world would bo a great V5 gainer if it would seriousl*'^ tako his lessons into consideration, if it were capable of attending seriously to anything but niisidiicsf — but what on eai'th does he mean by some of his infei-encos ! Yours ever faithfully, P. B. S. Shelli'n's Letters. I III— Nothing" to Say.— Gkldestone Hall, September 9, 1834- Dear Allen : I have really nothing to say, and I am ashamed to be sending this third letter all the way from here to Peml)rokeshire for no 5 earthly purpose; but I hav(^ just receiv(!d yours: and you will know how very welcome all your letters are to me when you see how the perusal of this one has excited me to such an instant reply. It has indeed been a long time ci>ming: but it is all the more delicious. Perhaps you can't imagiiK^ how wistfully T have looked 10 for it; how, after a walk, my eyes have turned to the table, on coming into the room, to see it. Somr1 imes I have been tempted to be angry with you; but then I thought that T was sure you would come a hundred miles to serve me, though you were too lazy to sit down to a letter. I suppose that people who are engaged in 15 serious ways of life, and are of well-tilled minds, don't think much about the interchange of letters with any anxi(!ty ; but I am an idle fellow, of a very ladylike turn of sentimiMit ; and my friendships are more like loves, I think. Your hotter found me reading the " Merry Wives of Windsor," too ; T had been laughing aloud to 20 myself: think of what another coat of happiness came over my former good mood. You are a dear good fellow, and I love you with all ray heart and soul. The truth is, T was anxious about this letter, as I really didn't know wiu^ther y(»u were married or not — or ill — I fancied you might be anything, or anywhere;. . . . 25 As to reading, I have not done nmch. I am going through the Spectator, which people nowadays think a poor book ; but I honor LETTERS. 281 it mucli. Wliat a in»l)l(! kind (»f Jounial it was ! There is certainly a good deal of what may 1k( (.'ailed "])ill," but there is a great deal of wisdont, 1 Ix'lieve, (»nly it is coudied so simi)ly that people can't believe it to b(! real absolute wisdom. The little book you speak of 3o I will order and l»uy. I heard fioni Thackeray, who i.s just upon the point of going to France ; indeed, he may be there by this time. I shall miss him much. . . . Farewell, my (leanest fellow ; you have made me very happy to hear from you, and to know that all is so well with you. Believe 35 me to be your ever allectionate friend, E. Fitzgerald. " Letters and Literary Remains of E. Fitzgerald." By pennission of the jntblishers. EXAMINATION OF MODELS. Tho most obvious divisions of the suhjoct-niatter of letters, are, (a) matters of general or public interest, (h) matters of ii.terest in the circle in which the correspondents have common friends, (c) matters of a private or confidential nature. In descriptive letters the fir.st division would include descriptions of public buildings, and ceremonials ; the second, descriptions of parties, houses, costumes ; the third, descriptions of moods and experi- ences. When a letter is planned upon these divisions it will often be wise to follow the order indicated above. But an examination of the letters of tlie greatest masters of the .art of letter- writing, Cowper, Shelley, Byron, Keats, Macaulay, Carlyle, and others, reveals the truth that no law governs the arrangement of a friendly letter, but the law of the writer's caprice. Some of the most beautiful letters are lacking in coherence, and a great many of them make no pretence of unity. Choice of paper and envelopes, modes of beginning, closing, folding and directing letters, are matters of personal and conventional taste, and should be learned as similar matters of good usage are learned. 1. What is the substance of Cowper's letter about his })oudoir? What features maki; it a pleasing letter'^ What can one learn about letter- writing from a considei-dfioii of it? This descriptio'i of Co^vper's is very easy and leisurely in its tone. What is there in the language to produce this effect 1 It also has a charm- i I H I i u i' !3 9i i.;0 i hi i H .« V > m 282 DliSiJIiri' TIVE COMl'OSl TIONS. ing ffiiniliarifcy. Mont ion p.irticul.ir piirts in which this quality is noticeable. Criticise tlio use of "that'' in lines 2 and 4. Distinguish "big" and "large." Mow do you justify the use of "bigger" {li)'i What is the purjioso t)f the hy[)erbole " not much bigger than a sedan- chair" (2-3)? Compare "flowers" with "pinks, roses, and honey- suckles" (4). Point out the ambiguity of "it" (8). Exphiin the refer- ence of "it" (15). Observe the humorous antithesis in line 23. How d«)e8 "Patience. . . .trials" (23-24) compare in mood with the rest of the l)aragraph ? 2. Shelley in this letter proceeds as follows : first he confesses that he should have written l)efore but gives reasons why he has not ; then he relates in order the matters concerning himself which will interest his correspondent — his meeting tlie Hoppners, his seeing Lord Byron and hearing a canto of his new poem, his impressions of Venice, his present residence, his literary work, his reading. What ideas give unity to this succession of ideas ? In what respects is the letter like friendly ccmver- sation.'' Make a list of the points which impress you as making the letter pleasing. In what respects can you not imitate these points? Mention in this extract forms of expression that would not be in place in more dignified and less fa^niliar composition. Give instances also of sudden deviations from the subject under consideration. Stifihess should especially be avoided in friendly letters. Has Shelley succeeded in shunning this danger ? Remodel the first sentence so as to avoid the frecjuent repetition of the pronoun "I." This is a fault that one is par- ticularly liable to in beginning a letter. Some lay down the rule that letters should never begin with the word " I." Explain and remedy the defect in " which does not either kill or is killed " (9). Improve the collo- cation of the parts of the sentence "We left . . seeing the city" (10-11). "The gondolas .... chrysalis " — this sentence is marked by a lack of correspondence in the numbers of the nouns. Correct this fault. To what does "its'' (32) refer ? What "scoundrels" are meant in line 34? " The Austrians .... inhabitants " — make a clear statement of what is in- tended to be expressed here. Correct " as vicious and more disgusting than " (51). What expression is co-ordinate with " haVe just been writing " (69). Justify this use of language. Give examples in this extract of the author's use of forcible language, and especially of telling descriptive terms. 3. This is a letter written inidor the very fre<|uent condition of 'laving nothing in particular t.>> w riLo about, yet how charming a letter it is. LETTERS. 283 It is i.orh.ai.s nol, specially (Usciptiv.-, yet it places before the reader very clearly, the im.mmI ..f the writer. U is in ti>e truest sense a nuKlel letter-genuine a.,.l restraine.l in its sui.tin.ent, yet full of tenderness, characteristic of the writer, and of his relations to his correspondent. PRACTICE. Practice List: Write a letter to a friend with one of the following as your mam Vhenie. 1. A Visit to .-i Picture Cljiliory. 2. A Dclioliti'ul Hook. 3. A llocciit \'isit to JMy Old Home. 4. A First lloiucsickiioKS. 5. A New Fiieial. G. Niao'ai'ii Fulls. 7. A Suiuiiioj' llosort. 8. A New School. 9. A Party. 10. A Factory. Plan : A Letter Home. 1. My arrival after the journey. 2. Impressions of the tirst hour. 3. My welcome at my cousins. 4. Bight-seeing. 5. Information about the city. (), The kindness of my friends. 7. Messages. 8. Promise of further descriptions. ■" 58 I I , 8. I , . JiY FUriLS, 280 CHAPTEU XXTV. DKSCUIPTIVli COMPOSITIONS IIY PUPILS. !• — The Town I Live in. — Our town is in no wise a noted placo, not even !i county town, Jiltliougli some of its niu.st loyal citizens have been heard to say that, "alun^^ in tliu sixties it ha<l some chance, but then they made Belleville a city on a market day and our prospects were ruined, of course." However, it is just a dull little country town, and 5 will never be anything more, l)ut who knows what might have happened if the other railway had c<jmo half a mile nearer. Standing on the mountain, and looking at the town below, this May day, what a jiretty sight it is ! Everywhere, on the streets, in the gardens, by the roadside, glow patches of lilac and cream from the early trees in lo bloom. Far away to the east lies the purple outline of Indian Island, an enchanted land in our childish eyes, whoso denizens, half-breed Joe and his wife, are the genii. Over to the west are the great mills, with their endless piles of timber and ugly black chimneys, which are darkening the sky with their clouds of smoke. Between the mills and the town glistens 15 the broad blue band of the river, widening at the bridge, where it blends with the darker waters of the Bay of Quinte, whoso beautiful shore is a faint blue streak on the liorizon. Down we go from the mountain, past the long toboggan slide and through the gravel-pit, where we search for swallows' nests, to the school- 20 house. Not an imposing structure to bo sure, with its dingy grey walls and tottering fence, but very dear to us notwithstanding its defects of architecture, for, outside the gate is the very steepest and stoniest hill in all the town. That school-yard ! what part has it not played ! a battle- ground, a race-course, the deck of a man-of-war. Such games has the old 25 ground seen that the very windows seem staring in amazement. On along the shady side street, and there is the tank for the fire-engine. How we children long for it to bo opened that we may see what it hides under that resplendent red cover and brilliant brass padlock ! There is our old house, its familiar white porch half hidden by the rose-bush so clambering over it. Down the steep hill and the Catholic Church comes in view, with its square tow«?r showing darkly red through the screen of pale green maples. ■' s ' 280 JtESCnil'TJl'E ( JiVi/VAS'777oXS. On tlio 8l(»pu is thv oM (I'liu'tcry, tlm iiioss-yiuwii i,'I'hvi'h sliii^'yliiiy tlowii ar. i,u tlu! liiilwiiy track Itcluw. Kvfiy I if iiiid r.iil Minis liia; nn oitl friuiid, fur hiivun't wu wfilkod over it scores of tinius wlitn wc went on picnics t»» tlio ( I rove i Then comes Miiin struct, wliicli we, in onr loyally of spirit, think even e«jual to llelleville's main l»UHiness tlioronghfare, onr hounilary of archi- 4otectural grandeur. Wliere can you see such a mayniticcnt display of watches as at our jewelh-r's / Was our milliner's array of honnets ever etjualledy VViiat matter though the watches never go and no one Imys the lionnets, they are a credit to the town. Why, nearly every store has ])late glass windows, and (hut this is only a rumour) a soda water fountain 45 is to be started. Can human eliorts reach further? Perhaps, in spite of the allurements of the jtans of tally at the baker's, father's shop is our favorite. Vve delight in watching the changing colours of the great red and l>lue bottles in the window ; and then, inside there is such a strange mysterious odour that recalls the Arabian Nights to us, and makes us .w fancy we hear Schehera/ada beginning her ' ghtly task. Here is tho river, clear and sparkling i.i the fresh spring sunlight. Down it winds, now golden, now azure, circling the little island where we play Robinson Crusoe, and beating in tiny rip|)les against the stone i)iers of the bridge. Yonder behind the mills, the grey spire of the old English 55 Church stands clear-cut against tho sky, the weather-vano Hashing like a ball t)f golden tire Following the curve of the narrow street leading from the river, we reach the commons, ground full of tender memories fc»r us, because here tho yearly circus encanii)S. Beyond are the woods, dearest of all. Many CO ji merry picnic do we have luider their sheltering maples and beoclies. Here are the earliest may-tlowers, the Lirgest strawberries, and, if you have good eyes, you may even tind maiden hair fern. Now the sun sinks slowly. It strikes on the jiolished surface of the cann«»n on the mountain, the waters of the bay break into a thcjusand 65 I'ipples, the faint blue shore becomes fainter, and the light fades away. Farewell, little town ! Strange faces may come and go, the familmr crooked streets be straightened, the weather-beaten frame houses replaced by brick ones, but we will always cherish the thought of these golden days of youth, and, in after years, when we are far away from y(jur rest- 7oful calm, the song of tho river and tho scent of lilacs will still bo with us. II. — A Storm on the Lake. — Those who live near the water have good opi)ortunities of seeing nature in some of her angriest moods. Fishermen and others, who foUow the sea as a means of earning a hveli- BY I'UPILS. 287 IkkkI, liJivo es[)ociivlly koon oycs for storms. My f.itlior was the nwiu'r nf ii Kinull lishiiig siiiiick, uml iiiiiintiiiuHl liis family cliiotly Ity iuuhiis of !< Ids rod Jiml not. NVu lived on jin isliind, which is sitii.ited in h l.irjjje liike, neiir the m.'iinlund. A hiichelor unule ke[)t the lighthouse tlmt hnd hcen pliiced as ii j^uido for ninriners on one o.xtreuiity of the iHlund. When my futher could spure nie, I soinetimes wucL to hour my uncle compiiny in his hmely tower. On one of these occi ions I witnessed a lo storm, which uncle Jack said was the wildest he cuuld romember having seen. That day the sun rose in all the splendor of the glorious autumn dawn. Breakfast was hardly over, when, standing in the <1ooiuuy of my father's cottage, 1 saw a few dark clouds gathering in the; west. The sun was 15 still shining brightly, so acconling to an agreement made the evening before, I started out for the lighthons'). The clouds <lrifted acro.ss the sun from time to time, obscuring its light, but still 1 had no thought of a gale, becauso the water was so calm and blue. A few putl's of wind murmured through the blades of grass and rustled the leaves of the trees, ;!o but they seemed only to promise a cooling breeze. When I arrived at my uncle's door, I turned round to look at the sky, as T grasped the handle. Greatly to my surprise, I saw the clouds rolling up in heavy bJ'ick masses, hurrying across the formerly blue dome like a flock of blackbirds. The sun was no longer visible ; the water had 25 lost its beautiful blue color, and the wind threw the door open violently, when I unfastened the catch. Everything in nature seemed to feel the change in the atmosphere. The birds, that had been singing so blithely in the early hours of the day, flew back to their nests, and all began chiri)ing together, as if telling 30 each other the news of the coming hurricane. Uncle Jack's cat, who had been sunning herself on the sandy beach all morning, got up and bent her steps homeward. I saw my relative himself at a little distance, his coat off, and sleeves rolled up, chopping wood. Ho noticed the difference in the aspect of nature, picked up his axe and walked towards the light- 35 house. We stood on the threshh(dd, watchiiig the billows rolling upon the shore, rushing up with proud white crests, and retreated unwillingly at the command "thus far and no farther." The wind rose rapidly, and lashed the waves into such fury that one would have thought some great explosive was at work amidst them. 40 As [ naid before, the lighthouse stood on one end of the island. This piece of land jutted far out into the water, and seemed to be the especial object of the storm's rage. A breakwater had been erected before the exposed side of the island, to keep the water from washing away the ( i V'i n !|:i ! 288 DESClilPTIVE COMPfm TIONS. I t is Hi i-> ))each. Tliu l)rfjikL'rs battorod against tliis fortification, and dashed over it, scattering a heavy spray. A few moments later I noticed rain faUing, and, l)efore hmg, it thi'eatened to submerge the sailors' cottages. While I was observing these things, I heard my uncle calling me. I hurried to the top of the tc^wer, where ho was preparing the lights. He 50 handed me his telescope, and told mo to keep a look out for vessels, while he trimmed the lamps. I stationed myself at the window, and scanned the water to see if any ships wore out in the storm. After a short time I descried a large barque that was trying to enter a harbor on the 11 .linland. It was so dark that the wheelsman must have had great OOdiHiculty in steering her, especially as the waves were running so high that slie would not obey her helm. Occasionally when there Avas a lull in the gale, I heard the heavy boom of the fog-horn, and, more rarely, the tinkle of the bell-buoy. Uncle Jack then took the glasses himself in order to estimate the gravity of the ship's position. A few moments 00 afterwards, according to his wishes, I lit the Luups, and placed them in position, although as he said himself, "I am afraid they will be of little use to those poor fellows out there, because the rain beating against the glass will dim the light." But the tempest had not reached its height. The wind rose until it 65 was a hurricane, and the waves ran higher, thereby increasing the danger to the apparently sinking boat. The rain changed to a biting sleet, which struck the window pane as if it was trying to break the glass and put out the lights. I recalled many talcs of shipwrecked vessels, while wondering what would l)e the banjue's fate if the fury of the storm did not soon 70 abate. One story, that my \incle had told me, presented itself torn)' mind. It was about a ship in the same hike, which had been caught in a storm. One of her crew, while trying to find his pea-jacket, set fire to some of his other clothing. Two or three of the sailors, who had been directed to pour water on the flames, soon were obliged to tell the captain 75 that the fire had got beyond their control. It was then necessary to take to the boats, but then the waves were running so high, it seemed madness to try such a plan. It was their only chance, howeter, so they made up their minds to risk it. The two survivors were the first mate and the captain's little daughter, and the former told uncle the story. I could see 80 in imagination the burning ship, tossing to and fro, and I agreed with tho narrator, that it must have been a magnificent, though terrible spectacle. While thinking of these things, I was intent on the fate of the ship before my eyes. She had ntsared the entrance to the harbor, but it was diflicult to enter it in fair weather, so that it seemed impossible for her 86 to find safety there. Often, in spite of the efforts of her crew, she got BY PtrPILS. 280 into the trough of tho \v;ivu«, and lay rolling hclj)lesaly on hur side. At Last they managed to get her rinining " before it," and carrying "a very large bone in her teeth " she entered her port in safety. A few hours later, when the storm had somewhat decreased, uncle drew my attention to tho different colors in the Avater. A very muddy tinge 0(i near shore, it changed from that to blue, and further still the l)lue sliaded into a dark green. Even then tho waves wore their white caps, which made a pretty contrast tf) tho dark colors oi; all sides. T pressed him for an explanation of these things, but he told me I must wait until I was older, before I cf)uld understand. 95 I remained at the pharos until next morning, and then there was indeed a difference. The sun diffused tlie lovely lights that are peculiar to its rise, and the water was (juiet and peaceful. Quantities of di'iftwood had been cast on the beach, branches of trees had been l)roken ; some of the planks had been ripped off uncle's boat-house, but beyond these I saw no traces of tho previous day's gale. lOO I set out for my father's cottage a few hours later. On my way I met several of our neighbors, who sto])i)ed me to ask if ujy xnicle had seen any boats wrecked in the storm. Tt seemed to be tlieir common verdict that it was the worst storm that had visited our island in the recollection of 105 its oldest inhabitant. III.— A Hot Day in the Country.— The dull, hazy heat of a summer afternoon beat up from the yellow stul).ble7 amid which tho cracked, brown earth gai)ed in the suffocating atmosphere, and f>ver which tho stiffing dust-clouds settled at every passage of carriage or pedestrian. The golden ears in an adjoining ffeld, stirred not l)y tho 5 faintei:;*) whisper, hung heavy and bursting, as if tempted to yield up their fruitful load ere tho sickle might sever tho stalk, or tho thresher separate tho clmft" from tho wheat. And the old elms by the crazy rail fence, which a short month ago sheltered the lambs of springtime, now curled their parched leaves into tiny parchment rolls, as they rustled and 10 shivered in a passing zephyr. The creek that rippled between the green banks in early sunnner, and rushed yellow and turl)id in springtime, at which in all seaso?is tho cattle quenched their thirst, — it had completely vanished from its biiain, and only a hollow trench of red clay, baked and seamed, remained to suggest to tho passer-by tho existence of a stream. 15 The meadow lay sero and brown, except where the shade of tho f( •rest- trees on the hillside parried the beams of the angry August sun, and tho drowsy, large-eyed cattle nmnched and panted till eventide. Sound v;J! m u 2d0 descrtptivjB compositions. itself soemed dead. Tlu; yr.asslu)pj)er sawed his w.ay from blade to blade, 20 but witii this lone exception, and the infretjuent brassy clatter of a cow-bell, not once was the l)urning silence interrupted. To the jaded traveller's nostril, instead of the fresh, inspiriting breath of the country, the peculiar smell of V)urning punk floated up from the fallow lands, and across the valley the smoke hung yellow, and greenish blue where the 25 distant waters of the lake formed a background to the smoky curtain. Mechanically the harvesters pitched their loads, and the steaming horses dropped lather from bit and flank as they stamped and whipped away the horseflies, that seemed to bite with a keener relish the smoking sides of the sturdy draught team. From shock to shock they wended their way, 30 then across the furrowed field up the lane to the great barn with tlie hawk-shajied aperture in the end for the birds, and the grey .stone foundation under which the swine burrowed in the cool, moist straw, and poultry (juacked and clucked as they scattered chaff in search of food for their broods. But evei'ywhere the heat seemed to penetrate and 35 enervate man and beast alike, warping and bendin g rail and plank, and beating up in a feverish haze from every heated surface. IV. — Our Camp-Cook.— The Canadian Pacific Special clattered into C , on the morning of the 20th of July, and Jack, the Doctor and I were met by the remaining canoeists, all tanned and brown from a Sudbury mining cauip. We were to start from C on a canoe trip 5 down the F river to the Georgian Bay. " Where are our ti-aps, fellows ? " asked Will, and just then two or three packs flew out of the baggage car, and rolled ])lump up against a thin, degenerate looking darkey, who with a slight yell and a stagger, immediately collapsed. 10 " T 1 lat's the cook . " The ' ' Poet ' ' explained. " What !" Three of us gasped at once. " Yes, that's the cook. We have engaged him to do the cooking, wash- ing dislies and general camp-work. You know its an awful job, fellows, washing dishes and cooking. Jt takes all the fun out of camp life." Will 15 explained. " What's he cost ? " we found breath to ask. "Nothing." "Nothing!" "No, he says he is out of a job, and wants to leave this place anyhow, 20so is willing to work '" for keep " till we get to Parry Sound. Wo gazed in speechless wonder on our future " cook . " Tojudgebyhis dress he lunl ))een f»ut of work for some time. The "Poet" doubted if he ■VVI".^" BY PUPILS. 291 had ever boon ia work. Tie was a very thin mortal, with a most submis- sive looliing countouance, a pair of great round eyes, which met yours frankly enough, but whose eyes had a peculiar manner of rolling, s<i as to 2r> look just like two small saucers rotating in a pot of coffee. His mouth with its great, red lips was puckered in a continual whistle. His legs were encased in what had been in the remote past a whole pair of trowsers. Now they might have been composed of sections from some seventeen different pairs. 30 A frock coat was bound to his waist by a rope, and a broad-rimmed felt hat completed his attire, for his feet were bare. In the meantime he had picked himself up, and was daintily brushing some dust off one of the brightest patches on his respected pantalocms. " Where did you get it ? " The " Doc " en(pured of Will. 36 "He wandered over to where T was caulking a canoe, and lending a helping hand, soon grew confidential, and to make a long story short he is going down the river with us." Naturally we demurred not, since it cost nothing, and so the " cook," whom the " Poet" christened Julius Ciesar, joined our party. 40 Julius CiT3sar was primarily intended to cook. He said he could cook, but Coesar has a great imagination. Some of his stories exhibit this beautifully. He furnished one meal and then laid aside the badge of oflice for ever, as far as we are concerned How that darkey got it into his head that he could cook mystifies any on whom he may have abused 45 the art. It must be confessed that our culinary utensils were of the most primitive nature, and Jis such apparently unsuited to Csesar's professicmal tastes. But when fish came to five famishing canoeists in a state suggest- ing a toss-np between a cinder and a poorly tanned hide — we looked inquiringly at our "cook." And when toast curled itself hito the form 5U of badly burnt cocoanut, we suggested something ; but as a climax, when in place of a savory dessert we got a counuon place insipidity, and the " Poet " the handle of Csusar's pocket-knife, then we arose in our wrath and deposed CiusJir. He still stays with us, washes dishes, lights fires and whistles, but we 55 have relieved him from cooking. However, it is at night Ciesar enjoys himself, when with our camp pitched on the banks of the river, with the gloomy old forest behind, we gather round the camp-tire to tell stories and imagine scenes suggested by this same camp-fire in the lan«l of the Hurons, then it is Ciesar with his co whole heart enjoys himself. Or again, bursting into the rollicking chorus of a ct ' ige song <iur voices ring out «»ver the water, and the grinx forest depths behind catching up the notes, from tlieir fastnesses come the i m 'it 5 nS $': 292 DESCRIPTIVE COMPOSITIONS. rolling ochoos of " Swunoo Rivor," or the martial air of "Tho Young (55 llocruit." And as now fiiul is thrown on, tho canip-firo throws its ruddy glow on the merry and sunburned faces of the young "voyagers," and on the rolling eyes and puckered lips of Julius Cjtisar. I ', EXAMINATION OF COMPOSITIONS. 1. There is a well-sustained, quiet and peaceful tone in this composi- tion. The occasional touches of humour add to the eifectivenesa of the description. The work is done faithfully and with good taste. The main defect is the division into paragraphs. An improvement would be made by combining paragraphs 9 and 10, and also 2, 3, 4 and 5 describing the ramble through the town. Some minor defects might be pointed oiit. In line 4 it would be better to read '* made Belleville a city, a city on a market day." In the third line of the second paragraph "cream and lilac " would be clearer. In paragraph 6, lines 2 and 3, "our boundary of architectural grandeur " is not appropriate. One comment remains to be added. According to Scott, "he who does on a disguise must make the sentiments of his heart and the learning of his head accord with the dress which he assumes." The writer of the above composition bet: ays a mind too mature to be curious about what might bo hid beneath the red cover of the water tank. 2. The descripti<m of the storm is a carefully planned piece of work, but it fails to give the reader full satisfaction. The fury of the storm itself is not brought vividly home to the mind. Tlve interest should gradually increase and reach a climax in the seventh paragraph. The reader feels some disappoint nxent at the beginning of the fifth paragraph ; the concluding sentence of the previous section leads one to expect vigorous description rather than the calm "as I ssiid before.'' Again, interest is drawn off to the scene in the light-house in paragraph ; and when in paragraph 7, after the opening sentences, the writer returns to his recollections, the reader feels himself defrauded of a sympathetic picture of the storm itself. As a matter of minuter criticism, it may be noted that the opening pai'agraph is lacking in ease ; the sentences seem abrupt and monotonous. At tlie end of the sixth paragraph the student will find a faulty use of the direct order of narration. BY PUPILS. 293 3. This composition is marked by fulness of detail t it shows an amount of careful observation and an evident effort has been made to accurately express the results of observation. Standing by itself it lacks setting ; the writer plunges at once into the description without giving the reader any definite notion of the whereabouts. This objection would be obviated if the paragraph stood in a book which had already given the situation of affairs. Within the composition the details are carefully grouped, but the first group, consisting of the first five sentences, fails to depict a scene, because the details are not combined into a whole, and their rela- tions to one another are not plainly indicated. This defect is intensified as the paragraph proceeds. Is there any inconsistency in "stirred not by the faintest whisper " (5-6), and "rustled and shivered in a passing zephyr" (10-11) ? Can you reconcile "a short month ago sheltered the lambd of springtime " with the fact that the day described is in the month of August ? 4. The opening paragraph and concluding sentence of this composition are not without merit. The introduction forms a contrast with that of No. 3. The sketch fittingly concludes by recurring to two salient features of the pseudo-cook. The interspersed conversation is not stiff or prim ; any lack of good form that may mark it will perhaps be charged up to the free-and-easy circumstances, and to the terms of familiarity on which the speakers were. The gravest defect in the composition lies in the comic element, which is lacking in good taste and reticence ; there is an inclination to use slang and vulgar and common-place forms of expression. The general sprightllness of the description is a redeeming feature. m 3:1 PART III. EXPOSITORY COMPOSITIONS. CHAPTER XXV. m EXPOSITION. Narration and description seek to bring before the reader's mental vision individual things, — individual actions, individual objects. In as far as possible the reader is put in the same state of mind as a bystander. The attempt is made to supply the place of his five senses, — to make him see or hear an incident or conversation, to enable him to look at a scene or building, — to put him in somewhat the same position with regard to a poem as if ho himself liad read it, or of a mood us if he himself had felt it. In addition, however, to objects, events, and feelings, other things are present in the mind of which we do not become cognizant through the senses, and which have no existence outside the mind, namely : notions or general terms, and judgments or propositions. If we point out the differences, not between this man and that monkey, but between men and monkeys in general, wo are not dealing with con- crete objects, but with things that exist in the mind merely, — the notion man, the notion monkey. The individual man is of some definite age, has skin of some definite colour, but when we use the general term man, we do not mean a young man, or an old man, a white man, or a black man. A triangle in Enclid is a plane figure enclosed by three straight lines and that is all. If wo draw a triangle it must either be acute, obtuse, or right-angled, and in so far it is unlike the general conception, which is not necessarily any one of these. The figure we draw corresponds to our general concei^tion, it is true ; but it inevitably has many charac- teristics wh'ch do not belong to the general conception. Now, we may describe an indivirlaal triangle, or an individual man, but when we perform the similar operation for the general conception or notion of a triangle or man, we are said in the technical language of rhetoric to expound it. It will be noted that when we describe an object, the details which are most effootive, and most likely to be mentioned, are details belonging to r295] 296 EXPOSITORY COMPOSITIONS. tho object as nn individual, not as a member uf a class. If wo aro de- scribing a friend «>f ours, wo do not say that ho is a bipod with two hands provided with thumbs. If we aro expounding tho general term man — such particulars aro tho very ones wo give. In exposition on the other hand, we do not mention any of those things which belong only to one individual, but those which belong to all the individuals of the class. The word description is, of course, often loosely used for exposition ; in this volume we have spoken of scientific description, which is really exposition. Exposition, then, is a process which may be applied to general terms, or notions, — the name or the conception of a class of things, such as man, triangle, poetry, law. It may also be applied to general propositions. We cannot expound tho proposition : "Our horse ran away yesterday," because that is a particular proposition, refers to a particular case ; wo may iiarrate that event. But we may expound, or in other words explain tho meaning of, general propositions, such as "The area of a triangle is equal to half tho product of the base and perpendicu- lar"; "Natural phenomena aro uniform"; " Honesty is the best policy." Exposition deals, then, with thought proper, as distinguished from external things, — with what the mind shapes for itself as distinguished from what it derives immediately from sensation. Now, it is the experience of every one that such abstract and general notions are more difficult to grasp, and to retain clearly in mind, than ideas of doHnite individual things. To tho young especially, abstract thought is apt to be distaste- ful and difficult. In order to deal successfully with it, a certain amount of maturity is required. Besides, the minds of the young aro not pro- vided with any large store of abstract notions and propositions. All experience is experience of tho concrete, of individual things. The young have not had time to gather their experience into general propositions, or even to accumulate very largely the general conceptions of others. But their senses are keen and active. It is no unfair task to bid them look at some object, or recall some experience, and put these into words. Hence the large place that narration and description occupy in composition train- ing at school. In practical life, however, what the ordinary man requires is skill in exposition rather than in description or narration. The two last, indeed, occupy a largo space in literature, especially in imaginative literature — poetry and fiction ; but the man of business, the clergyman, the lawyer, the teacher, require power of exposition ; other sorts of com- position are subsidiary to this. Exposition is the most practical side of composition ; it demands clearness and accuracy even more than narra- tion and description demand them, and literary and artistic power less. EXPOSITION. 297 Let us consider then, first of nil, the exposition, of a Notion^ or General Term. A general term is one that applies to a number of individuals, and one way of explaining or expounding it is to enumerate all or some of these individuals. The fuller our acquaintance with the members of the class, the more accurate will our conception of the term be. An ignorant person who has met one or two Frenchmen is apt to have very absurd notions about Frenchmen in general. A young child's conception of the term "animal" is very faulty; often based merely on the four-footed creatures with which he happens to be familiar. His conception becomes more correct when he learns that he, too, is an animal. Older people may have very inadequate notions in regard to the same term, as compared at least with the specialist; their ideas on the subject would probably be much improved by familiarity with some of the microscopic forms of animal life. This method of exposition by reference to individual cases is known as Exposition by Particulars. As it is usually neither desirable nor possible to enumerate all the members of a class, a good exposition of this character will contain examples that are typical of many others, — that is, adequately suggest the peculiarities of these others ; and these examples will be varied, so as to represent the various aspects of the class. The second method of exposition is by Definition. A general term has a two-fold aspect : it is the name of a number of individuals and denotes these individuals; and it is applied to these individualsbecausethey resemble one another in certain respects. The statement of these common quali- ties in which all members of a class share, is the Definition of the term, and the term is said to connote these qualities. We may become acquainted with a class by becoming acquainted either with the individuals that compose, or with the qualities that belong to it ; in the latter case we have the means of determining whether any particular individual is, or is not, a member of the class. When we state these character- istic qualities we explain or expound the term by definition. In what is called Logical Definition, only those qualities are named which are needful to mark off the individuals of a class from all other classes. A logical definition should be such as to include all members of the class, and to exclude all individuals which do not belong to the class. It should also be expressed in terms which may be easily understood. But exposition may go further than logical definition. We have a sufficient criterion of plane triangles in Euclid's definition ; it fulfils the three conditions just named. But many qualities are common to all triangles which are not mentioned in this definition ; as, for example, all the angles of a triangle 9re equal to two right angles. By exposition of some or all of these quaUties^ 298 EXPOSITORY COMPOSITIONS. we get a far more adequate idea of a triangle. In expounding a term it is well to begin or end with a concise and accurate definition, but this very conciseness is apt to lead to the conception being imperfectly grasped, and hence the brief statement should be expanded by explanation of the terms employed in it, and by the citation of particular examples. It should bo borne in mind that while definition is the most accurate and concise way of expounding a term, it is not the easiest method, nor the way in which mankind has actually arrived at its general conceptions. Children hear a general term {e.g. the term animal) applied to one object, then to another, and gradually by comparison — by noting those points in which the various objects resemble one another, and eliminating those which are not common to all — arrive at the definition of the term. This is a somewhat vague and slow process, but it is easily perceived that the con- ception of a triangle is more likely to be satisfactorily grasped in this way than through an abstract definition. The best plan is to mingle the two methods ; the definition will give accuracy, the examples will stimulate and give vividness. A third method of exposition is by Antithesis or Contrast. Here a notion is taken which resembles the notion under consideration, and attention is drawn to the differences between the two ; as, for instance, the conception of 'poetry' might be made clearer by contrasting it with * prose,' the conception of 'pride* by contrasting it with 'vanity.' Or individual cases may be taken which resemble the members of the class, yet do not fall under the term ; as, for example, the conception ' animal ' might be made clearer by contrasting certain forms of vegetable life with those forms of animal life which they most resemble. So much for the exposition of terms. General Propositions may also be expounded in various ways. First, by Iteration or Eepetitio^i, that is, say- ing the same thing in different words. This method leads the mind to dwell on the assertion, and, if the different forms in which the proposition is repeated are well chosen, suggests different aspects of that proposition. This suggestiveness is an important matter, for the proposition being a general one, covers a multitude of particulars, some of which are apt to be overlooked. Second, by Obverse Iteration or a denial of the counter-proposition ; we thus give a statement not merely of what the thing is, but also of what it b not. This method is especially necessary to obviate the vagueness of language. Words have many senses ; to state the negative is one of the simplest way* of indicating in what particular sense words are to be taken : e.g., natural may be used in a sense opposed to artificial, or, in a very different sense, opposed to supematuraly or, again, opposed to unusual. EXPOSITION. 209 The third method of expounding propositions is by Particidars. For example, tlio propositi«ni "Heat expands bodies" might bo expounded by referring to the mercury in the thermometer, the put- ting of tires on wheels, the effect of fire on the iron girders of buildings, etc. Adam Smith's familiar exposition of the division of labour by the particular case of the manufacture of a pin is another example. The fourth method is by Tlhistration or Analogy. This must not be confounded with exposition by particulars. The cases cited under Illustration or Analogy are not actual cases of the truth illustrated, but cases which have a certain similarity. In the case to be expound- ed there is a relation between two things ; in the illustration there is a similar relation between two things, but the things themselves are quite different. * Youth is the time when character is most easily influenced' may bo illustrated by the ease with which a yoimg sapling is made to take a certain course. This method is especially useful in the case of abstruse and dry subjects ; the mind of the reader is relieved by excursions into more familiar or interesting provinces. We have seen how by exposition that which is signified by a general term, or by a proposition, is unfolded and made clear. We may further proceed to expound or unfold what lies in two or more propositions taken together; this species of exposition is usually not included under that name, but placed by itself and called Deduction. Propositions may be thus taken together when one term is common. For example, "natural phenomena take place in accordance with fixed laws," "storms are natural phenom- ena," are two assertions containing a common term " natural phenom- ena"; and from them we conclude by omitting this common term that " storms take place in accordance with fixed laws." In this sense of exposition the whole of Euclid is an exposition or unfolding of what is implicit in the definitions and axioms taken together. Of this sort of exposition we shall have more to say in the chapter devoted to argumenta- tive exposition. The necessity for clearness, and effective arrangement has been em- phasized in treating of narration and description. It is even more impera- tive in dealing with general and abstract thought; just because the mind finds general ideas more difficult to apprehend and retain than concrete impressions. But while in narratit)n and description the subject itself imposes, or, at least, pretty clearly indicates, the order of treatment, — especially in narration when the clironological order is usually to be followed, — this is not the case in exposition. In no other species of writing is a good arrangement more necessary ; in no species of writing can so few definite rules for arr.ingenient be given. Of tliis, afc luiist, the student r, 300 EXPOSITORY C0MFOSITI0N8. maybt cortnin; his uloaB must not bu sot down at random; thoro must bo a floarly conceived plan. Again, though thuro is a plan in the mind of tho narrator or uoscribor,it would, as a rule, bo needless and clumsy to state the plan to tho reader ; in exposition, on tho contrary, if tho siibject bo at all complex or diflicult, it is best to sketch tho plan somewhere near tho beginning of the composi- tion ; and as tho exposition passes from head to head to the discourse, it is well to indicate this fact clearly by numerals, by naming the topics, and so forth. This necessarily involves careful paragraphing. In following tho courso of general and abstract thought the mind wearies much mure quickly tl' >n in following narrations or descriiitions, as is clearly shown by the rel.i ve popularity of these three species of writing. It is important, therefore, that there should bo halting- places — points indicated where tho reader may feel that some ono portion of tho discourse is finished, where he may take breath before passing on to another. Hence judicious paragraphing is a largo element in successful exi)08iti«jn. Whereas in narration and descrip- tion tho paragraph is more or less a matter of choice and taste, in exposition tho paragraph is imposed by the thought. The persons for whom the composition is intended should not be less con- sidered here than in description. Especially do readers fall into two great classes ; and according as tho composition is addressed to ono or tho other, it will bo scientific, formal, precise ; or jjopular, and free in its structure. Scientific or formal exposition is addressed to cultivated intellects, capable of following long and difiicult trains of thought, and presumably unprejudiced, and eager f«jr truth. Such exposition or argumentation will make clearness and conciseness its first object, and address itself wholly to the reason. Popular exposition must often be diftuso ; it strives by suitable and interesting illustrations to attract and relieve the mind ; in arrangement and expression it does not solely consider clearness, but at- tempts to adapt itself to the tastes of tho audience ; it does not prematurely or unnecessarily awaken their prejudices, or collide with their beliefs. It aims at pleasing as well as instructing. Tho first sort of exposition requires clearness of thought, and accuracy and propriety in expression. The second sort requires the more literary and artistic qualities to give charm to tho thought and beauty to tho form. Young writers themselves require severe mental discipline, — requira to have their own perceptions made clear in regard to sophistries, 'clap-trap,' extraneous matter; hence it is useful to impose on them the task of writing expositions addressed to tho open and candid intellect. The popular form, however, is more stimulating to those students who lack fluency of language and ideas. JNTEBPBETA TION. am CHAPTER XXVI. INTERPRETATION. FAIUPilEAIBB, ABSTRACTS, MPAM8I0N. MODELS. I. — Moloch's ArgfUment. — {Paraphrase of Paradise Lost, Book II., II. 82—105*) — It may be objected that our adversary is stronger than wo, and, if we again provoke him, may find means for our destruc- tion worse than those by which we have already suffered. But, I answ€ r, it is absurd that we, already in Hell as we are, should entertain any such fear. We cannot conceivably be in a worse con- * Should we again provoke Our stronger, some worse way his wrath may find To our destruction, if there be in Hell Fear to be worse destroyed ! What can be worse Than to dwell here, driven out from bliss, condemned In this abhorred deep to utter woe ; Where pain of unextinguishable fire Must exercise us without hope of end. The vassals of his anger, when the scourge Inexorably, and the torturing hour, Calls us to penance ? More destroyed than thus, We should be quite abolished, t nd expire. What fear we then ? what doubt we to incense His utmost ire ? which, to the liighth enraged. Will either quite consume us, and reduce To nothing this essential — happier far Than miserable to have eternal being ! — Or, if our substance be indeed divine^ And cannot cease to be, we are at worst On this side nothing; and by proof we feel Our power sufficient to disturb his Heaven, And with perpetual inr(»ads to alarm, Though JT^accessible, his fatal throne : Which if not victory, is yet revenge." 302 EXPOSITORY COMPOSITIONS. dition than our present one, — excluded from bliss and condemned to utter misery in this hateful pit, enduring the pain of inextinguish- able fire without any hope of relief, completely in our adversary's 10 power whenever, in his anger, he chooses to inflict his tortures. Greater sufferings than these would inevitably annihilate us. What, then, do we fear? Why do we hesitate to incense him to the utmost] The furthest conceivaoie extent of his power is to inflict complete destruction upon us, and that would be a much happier fate than to 16 continue forever enduring our present misery. If, on the other hand, our nature is indeed divine, and, therefore, incapable of annihilation, we are already, as I said before, in the worst possible condition compatible with continued existence. Moreover, experience has shown that we have power enough to disturb Heaven, and at 20 least to alarm our enemy by parpetual attacks, although, supported as he is by fate, we cannot overthrow him. Thus, though we are precluded from victory, revenge is within our reach. II.— Impression produced upon Keats by Chapman's Translation of Kome.V.—{Parai>hr,isc <>/ Iveats' sonnet.*)~I had always found great delight in works of the imagination, and, of course, was acquainted with much of the poetic literature of western Europe. But of one very important contribution to literature, — 6 the Homeric poems — I only knew by hearsay. It was not until I read the bola and striking translation of Chapman, that I really felt I had attained some insight into the calm and lofty spirit of these *Much have I travell'd in the iciihiis of gold And many goodly states and kingdoms seen ; Roimd many western islands have I been Which bards in fealty to Aik)11o hold. Oft of one wide expanse had I been told That deep-brow'd Homer ruled as his demesne; Y t did I never breathe its pure serene Till I heard Chapman siwak out loud and bold : — Tlien felt I like gome watcher of the skies When a new planet swims into his ken ; Or like stout Cortez, when vith eagle eyes He stared at the Pacific — and all his men Look'd at each other with a wild surmise — Silent, upon a {leak in Darian. INTERPRETATION. 303 works. This translation seemed to reveal to mo something altogether novel; my feelings may be best compared with those of an astronomer when he unexpectedly discovers a new planet, or with those of lo Cortez when in silent astonishment he gazed with keen and eager eye, for the first time, on the Pacific Ocean — a sight which offered so wide a field for hopes and conjectures to him and his companions. III.— Abstract of Gray's Elegy.— it is evening; all things are seeking repose, and with the gathering darkness a solemn stillness settles upon the scene, broken only by the humming of insects, the tinkling of sheep-bells in the distance, and the hootings of the owl in the church-tower close at hand, (stanzas 1-3). In perfect keep- 6 ing with this solemnity and repose, is the church-yard about me, filled with the graves of the simple villagers, who have found here their last resting-place. Once they, too, were full of life, busied with its toils and pleasures, but now, for them, all activity is forever past (4-6). Never again will they go forth to their labour in the morn- lo ing, or at evening return to the welcome and delights of home. The work of tlicir life was useful, they performed it with vigour and skill. If it was alwo humble and obscure, I know not why, on that account, those mor... distinguished should deem it a subject beneath the dignity of poetry. Here, at least, in the presence of death, the is leveller of all distinctions, the advantages of wealth and position seem of little account (7-9). Against death, fame and splendid memorials are of no avail; nor can the lack of these be held a proor of any innate inferiority in the unknown and forgotten dead who lie buried below. It is quite likely that among them were men 20 endowed with powers which might have won renown, — men who might have been great statesmen or poets (10-12). But external circumstances, poverty and lack of culture, checked their develop- ment. Nature is prodigal and bestows splendid gifts which can never be used ; just as she lavishes her beauty on scenes upon 26 which human eyes never gaze (10-15). Yet these undeveloped and unregarded heroes had compensating advantages. It is true, they were shut out from fame, and from using their powers to confer great benefits on mankind ; but not less were they prevented from inflicting vast evils upon the race by their ambition, and from 30 degrading their own nature by the unscrupulous pursuit of success, m SOi EXPOSITORY COMPOSITIONS. I Q: Far removed from the struggles of the great world, their aims were modest, and their lives peaceful (19-19). But I was wrong in saying that these humble dead have no 85 memorials to keep their memory green. Around me I see monu- ments, frail and rude indeed, which testify to the universal desire of the human heart for remembrance and regret, — a desire so strong that men seem to imagine, as the tombstones themselves show, that after death they will still feel the need of human sympathy (20-22). 40 And I, too, shall one day be numbered with these, and perhaps some kindred spirit, interested like me in the obscure dead, may inquire about my history. Some old peasant will perhaps answer: "I remember him well, I have often seen him out before dawn to watch the sunrise, or, at noontide lying with eyes fixed upon the 46 brook, or walking beside the wood muttering to himself as if driven wild by grief or misfortune. One day I missed him from his favorite walks, and not long after he was borne to his grave. I can not read, but you may see his epitaph graven on the stone at the foot of yonder thorn" (24-29). IV.— The Excellence of Burns' Poetical Worlas.— (Abstract of the extract quoted pp. 333-34^ of this volume.) — The works of Burns do not adequately represent his genius. They are rendered incomplete and insufficient expressions of his power not merely by the shortness of his life, but by his lack of cuhure, leisure and effort. 6 Fragments they ai-e, but we must not lightly dismiss them as such ; for their persistent and increasing popularity among all classes of readers after fifty years of great vicissitudes in poetical taste, implies real and great excellence. What is this excellence ? The first merit of Burns* poetry is its sincerity. What he 10 writes has the indisputable air of tiiith, and is evidently the result, not of hearsay, but of actual experience. This is the great secret of literary power; he who would move and convince, should first of all himself be moved and convinced. Men are strangely and closely bound together, so that the genuine utterance of any one heart 18 inevitably reaches the hearts of others. But, it may be objected, sincerity is so manifest a principle of good writing, so simple and easy of application us to afiord no claim to INTERPRETATION, 306 distinction. On the contrary, though the principle is sufficiently evident, its exiiibition in practice is both rare and difficult. A clear intellect is required to grasp things as they are ; a strong love of 20 truth, to enable a writer to cling to reality in spite of every temptation ; otherwise the desire of distinction, the ambition to appear original, are certain to lead to insincerity and affectation. Too often even the works of the greatest poets exhibit this vice. How difficult it is to escape from it, is illustrated in the case of Byron. It was one avowed 26 purpose of his works to make war on insincerity ; nor can it be doubted that he really hated this fault. Yet the personages and sentiments of his poems are almost without exception theatrical and grandiose, conceived for the purpose rather of producing a striking effect, than of presenting a picture of reality. We reckon sincerity, so therefore, a great virtue, and a great source of power in the poetry of Burns. We find in his works another merit closely akin to sincerity, — hia power of making all subjects interesting. The ordinary poet, as the ordinary man, cannot discern the poetical in what is familiar and 35 near at Land ; he therefore betakes himself to the representation of some distant or unreal world. But surely the main source of attraction in all great poetry is not that it treats of what is unlike our own experience, but that it gives expression to the permanent elements in human nature, which exist no less in the present than in 40 the past. The poet does not requii'e, as some suppose, to be born at some special era, or to be surrounded by special social advantages. The true poet is ho whose eyes are open so that he can see the elements of the great, the permanent and the infinite as they actually exist in ordinary life about him. 46 This is a power which Bums possesses in a high degree. He saw, what no one had before imagined, that in the rude and sordid life of the Scotch peasantry lay materials for poetry, and in such works as The Holy Fair and The Cotter's Saturday Night at once proved this to the world, and exhibited his own high poetic endowment. so Besides this insight into the poetical, Burns* works exhibit every- where a rugged sterling worth ; they are full of natural vigor. He is both strong and graceful, tender and vehement. He can stiike every 306 EXPOSITORY COMPOSITIONS. chord of feeling. He always seizes the essence of the matter in hand. 65 This is esijecially apparent in his descriptions ; he catches tiie characteristic features of an object. For an exemplification of this we may refer, for instance, to the two opening stanzas of A Winter Night, or the description of the thaw in The Brigs of Ayr. These passages are full of touches so faithful and forcible as to bring the very 60 scene before our eyes. This power of seeing things as they are, may not in itself be a very high excellence, but it is the indisputable foundation of all talent, and is found in writers as different as Homer, Hichardson and Defoe. Burns shares this power with these writers, but surpasses them all in the laconic force and pith with which he 65 gives expression to the tiling that he perceives. v.— Abstract of Cardinal Newman's Lecture on Litera- ture.* — A suitable subject for my lecture to you, gentlemen of the University, at the opening of your session, is suggested by the name of the faculty to which you belong, — the Faculty of Philo- sophy and Letters. I propose to inquire what is the meaning of 5 Letters, or Literature, for the term is applied vaguely, and is used in different senses by different persons. There are some who take a depreciatory view of literature, as if it were a mere art or trick of words. In Sterne's Sermon XLii. you will find an eloquent passage which represents this view. It really 10 maintains three positions : (1st) that- fine writing as exemplified in the classics is a matter of mere ornament and prettiness ; (2nd) that this is shown by the fact that the classics will not bear translation ; (3rd) that the Scriptures are in remarkable contrast on this very point, for they easily admit of translation, although the most 16 Ijeautif ul of all writings. I can best bring out my own ideas of the meaning of literature by examining these statements (§§1-2). The derivation of the word shows that Literature is properly applied to written, not to spoken, language ; but this arises from the fact that what is spoken is necessarily transitory, and can only reach 20 a small circle. Apart from this, there is no essential difference be- tween written and spoken discourse. I lay emphasis on this point * To be tound In J. U. Newman's " Idea of a Univernty." I INTERPRET A TION. 307 to draw attention to the fact that, as spoken language is essentially personal, so also is literature. Literature is the expression of the ideas and feelings of tha writer. These are proper to, and charac- teristic of the writer himself, just as are his countenance and bearing. 25 In short, literature expresses, not objective, but subjective truth ; not things, but thoughts. Science, on the other hand, uses words to symbolize objective truth, — facts which exist outside and inde- pendent of any individual. Works which relate to such object- ive facts only, e.(/., Euclid's Elements, are not considered to be 30 literature. As soon, however, as facts are coloured by the thoughts and feelings of the writer, their expression becomes literary. In history, the bare record of events is a chronicle, which is non-literary. But when these events are interpreted and coloured by the views and feelings of the writer, we have literary history. The literar}^ man 35 moulds language to express the varied complex of his own thoughts and feelings ; he attempts to reflect these exactly in words. His style, then, is an image of himself, — as personal and characteristic of the writer, as the thoughts to which it gives expression (§ 3). Thought and language are inseparable. They are really one. 40 This shows the unsoundness of the view which regards style as something superinduced on the thought, — a luxury to be dispensed with at pleasure. Such a view virtually implies that one person might furnish the thought, another the style — an experiment which has sometimes been made, without success. But when we think of 46 the greatest writers, we feel at once that these men were not aiming at diction for its own sake, — that thoughts and language were not conceived separately ; but that their thoughts and feelings embodied themselves naturally in such form and diction as would image them most perfectly (§ 4). 50 A full and rich style, then, is merely the natural expression of certain ideas, and of a certain type of mind ; just as dignity of bearing and manner is natural to certain types of character. Shakespeare is admittedly a simple and natural writer, yet on certain occasions his styh; is extremely luxuriant. This is not affectation in 65 Shakespeare ; neither is it affectation that Cicero is always grand and flowing in his style. This manner of expression was natural to 308 HXPOBtTOnr COMPOSITIONS. the man, suitable to the circumstances, and the outcome of the grandeur and dignity stamped upon the national character of the 60 Roman (§ 5). It may be said that the style of Cicero is studied, not spon- taneous, and that it is therefore objectionable ; for elaboration is the mark of mere artifice. The latter statement I deny. There have been writers, indeed, whose elaboration aimed at the production 65 of fine sentences for their own sake ; these I do not defend. But elaboration is no defect, provided its aim be the more adequate expression of the writer's thought. No one thinks of objecting because sculptors and painters make preparatory studies for their works, — improve upon the original design in order to embody their con- 70 ceptions more satisfactorily. Neither ought we to object to a similar procedure on the part of the literary artist. We know, as a fact, that some of the best literature has been produced in this way ; and that even the simplicity and naturalness which chr vm in certain authors, are the outcome of much labour and much elaboration (§ 6). 76 Thus far, by showing the intimate connection between thought and language, I have attempted to combat the first of the three statements enumerated at the opening of this lecture, — that literary language is a mere artifice, a pretty ornament which may be dis- pensed with. I proceed now to the second statement, which implies 80 that the test of excellence in a composition is its capability of being easily translated into another language. I believe the truth to be almost the exact reverse of this. The other view if followed out would lead to such absurdities as the following : that Shakespeare's works must be great because they are easily translated into German 85 and at the same time poor, because they cannot well be reproduced in French ; that the multiplication table is of the highest order of literature because capable of perfect translation; and that all languages — Hottentot as well as Greek, — are equally adapted to all purposes. It is evident, on the contrary, that the greatest literary 90 artist will make the fullest and best use of all the peculiarities of his own language, and hence afiford the greatest obstacles to exact reproduction in another language (§ 7). We thus naturally arrive at the third statement, with regard to the INTERPRETATION. 309 suitability of the Scriptures for translation, and the implication that they do not possess those artifices of style which make it so difficult 95 to render the classics. Both statement and implication are refuted by manifest facts : — the statement, by the existence of a large num- ber of unsuccessful translations, and the inadequacy in parts of the best translations ; — the implication, by those portions of Scripture which are plainly very elaborate in style, and ornamental in diction lOO and form. In truth, we find in the Bible, the same variety as in other writings. Some portions, like those last alluded to, are diffi- cult to translate ; other portions are of a scientific character, without personal colouring of the writers — the statement of objective verities, these lend themselves to translation (§ 8). los To sum up, by Literature is meant the expression of thought in language, * thought ' being used in the narrower sense of the ideas; feelings, views, reasonings, and other operations of the human mind. A great writer is therefore not merely one who has easy command of a fine and swelling phraseology. He is one who has something no to say, and who knows how to say it. His aim is to give forth what is within him. Whether that be great or small, it is perfectly ex- pressed, reflecting the idea exactly as he sees and feels it. Our view of literature, which regards it as no mere matter of words, but as a revelation of the secrets of the heart, the utterance of the spokesmen ii6 and prophets of the human family, emphasizes the importance and seriousness of this branch of your studies (§§ 9-10). VI.— Paul's Glad Tilings.— (First Corinthians, Chap.XV ) " I now call to your remem- 1. Moreover, brethren, I de- brance, in conclusion, the sub- clare unto you the gospel which stance of the glad tidings which I preached unto you, which also I announced to you, and the ye have received, and wherein mode in which I told it ; glad ye stand ; 5 tidings indeed of which you hardly need to be reminded, since you not only received it from me, but have made it the foundation of your lives ever 10 >■: : '.1 :i di6 EXPOSITORY COMPOSITIONS. since ; and not only have made it the foundation of your lives, but are to be saved by it now and hereafter, if only you hold 16 it fast in your recollection, if your conversion was anything more than a mere transitory impulse. Yes, you must remember it ; for it was amongst the very 20 first things which I told to you, as it was among the very first which I learned myself. It was : That Christ died for our sins, fulfilling in His death the pro- 25 phecies concerning One who was to be wounded for our transgres- sions and bruised for our iniqui- ties, and whose soul was to be an oflfering for sin. That He 30 was laid in the sepulchre, and that out of that sepulchre He has been raised up and lives to die no more, again fulfilling the words in the Psalms, which de- 35 dare that His soul should not be left in the grave, and that the Holy One should not see corruption. I told you also, as a proof of this, that He appeared to 40 Kephas, chief of the Apostles, and then to the Apostles collectively. Next came the great appear- ance to more than five hundred believers together, the majority 46 of whom are still living to testify to it, though some few have car- 2. By which also ye are saved, if ye keep in memory what I preached unto you, unless ye have believed in vain. 3. For I delivered unto you first of all that which I also re- ceived. how that Christ died for our sins accord- ing to the scriptures ; 4. And that he was buried, and that he rose again the third day according to the scriptures ; 5. And that he was seen of Cephas, then of the twelve : 6. After that, he was seen of above five hundred brethren at once ; of whom the greater part remain unto this present, but some are fallen asleep. INTERPRET A TION. 311 ried their testimony with them to the gi'cave. Then again camo a two-fold appearance j this time not to Kaphas, but to his great 7. After that, he was seen of «> colleague, James, and afterwards, James, then of all the Apostles, as before, to the Apostles collec- tively. Last of all, when the 8. And last of all he was seen roll of Apostles seemed to be of me also, as of one born out of complete, was the sudden ap- due time. 65 pearance to me ; a just delay, a 9. For I am the least of the just humiliation for one whose apostles, that am not meet to be persecution of the congregation called an apostle, because I per- o£ God's people did indeed sink secuted the church of God. me below the level of the Apos- tles, and rendered me unworthy even of the name, and makes me feel that I owe all to the unde- served favor of God. A favor indeed which was not bestowed in vain, which has issued in a life of exertion far exceeding that of all the Apostles, from whose number some would wish to ex- clude me ; but yet, after all, an exertion not the result of my own strength, but of this same Favor toiling with nie as my constant companion. It is not, however, on any distinction be- tween myself and the other Apostles, that I would now dwell. I confine myself to the one great fact of which we all alike are the heralds, and which was alike to all of you the found- ation of your faith." Dean Stanky'a " Commentary on Corinthians." By permission of the puhlithert. 60 10. But by the grace of God I am what I am : and his grace which was bestowed upon me not in vain ; but I labored more 66 abundantly than they all : 70 of yet God not I, but the grace which was with me. 11. Therefore, whether it were I or they, 75 so we preach, and so ye believed. I' u, i' '■ 312 EXPOSITORY COMPOSITIONS. EXAMINATION OF MODELS. Exposition, as explained in the previous chapter, is concerned with the unfolding of ideas whicli exist only in the mind, as distinguished from those forms of composition which bring external things before the mental vision. Among the ideas which are capable of exposition, are ideas which we derive from others, which we may, or may not, adopt as our own. These we may desire to explain, not as we adoj)t them, but as some one else has conceived and adopted them. Such exposition is called Interpretation, We take the thoughts of others as given in their writings, attempt to grasp them as their authors grasped them ; and then we reproduce them, not altering them to suit our notion of the truth, but giving them with the utmost accuracy as they are in the original. The ground for such pro- cedure is the belief that we can put the author's ideas for some particular purpose, or for some particular audience, more clearly than he has put them himself. A necessity for doing this arises when the author writes in an obscure style, or in an antique form, or at greater length, or with more brevity than suits our purposes, or in some other way ill adapted to the readers whom we have in view. Interpretation is especially necessary in poetry, which is frequently obscure, at least to certain classes of readers. It is impossible to reproduce in prose all that poetry conveys to a competent reader. The very form and diction of poetry have a certain effect on the mind, — give a certain stimulus to the feelings. In prose such effects must necessarily be discard- ed. A large part of the power of poetry often lies in its vagueness and suggestiveness ; whereas a prime quality of good standard prose is the expression of thought with the utmost deiiniteness and clearness. Per- feet reproduction of poetry in prose is, therefore, impossible. But at the basis of all poetic utterance, there is a substantial idea, — some intel. lectual proposition, and this may always be expressed in prose. In order to translate poetry into prose, the student should notice certain general differences between the style of these two forms of utterance. The beginner is apt to change the order of words merely. That gets rid of the most obvious characteristic of poetry, its metre ; it may also rid us of those unusual collocations of words common in poetry ; but such pro- cedure is not sufficient to produce good prose. The following points of difference should be noted : 1. The order of words. 2. The use of words and forms not admissible in ordinary prose, and the use of words in senses which are exclusively poetical. A" TEIiFEETA TION. 313 3. The omissitin of links of connection between thoughts ; so, in real life links are omitted by spoiikcrs under the influence of strong feeling. In prose it may bo necessary to indicate the connection by the introduc- tion either of a phrase, or, not infro(iuently, of a complete thought. 4. In other respects also, poetry is very often more condensed than prose, and epithets and other single words must often be expanded into clauses or sentences. 5. The language of poetry is more picturesque and concrete than that of prose ; hence often specific terms must be turned into general terms ; par- ticular assertions, into general assertions. 6. The picturesqueness of poetry often leads to the expanding of, and dwelling upon, sides of the subject, which would receive briefer treatment in prose. It must, however, be remembered that prose and poetry have common elements, and, therefore, in reproducing poetry, not all words and phrases are necessarily changed. Any part of the original which is unobjec- tionable as prose, and in keeping with the style of the rest of the repro- duction, should be retained. Tlie reproduction of an original, whether prose or poetry, may be more or less full, and the character of the exercise varies in consequence. First, we have Paraphrase. In paraphase the thought of the original is changed in form without addition or diminution except in so far as the change of form necessitates one or the other (see 3, 5, and 6 above). It is well for the student in paraphrasing poetry to make use of the most simple and unadorned style of prose. This affords better practice in composition and is a severer test of the accuracy of his comprehension of the original, than the rendering of poetry into poetic prose. The comprehension thus exhibited is, however, merely intellectual ; literary appreciation is shown by a paraphrase which preserves some of the spirit of the original ; such a paraphrase demands greater latitude in style and diction. If the reproduction does not embrace every detail of the original, but merely the main thoughts, it is called an Abstract. Tliis form of interpre- tation is of wider application than the other ; for we can with advantage make abstracts even of the best modern prose, where paraphrasing would be an absurdity. The exercise is useful not merely for the discipline which it affords, but for other purposes : it fixes the original on the memory, and ensures our utiderstanding of it. Besides this, an abstract is a great help in following a long and complicated discourse, and is con- venient for reference. The necessary condensation is attained (a) by the substitution of general, for particular statements ; (h) by the omission of '^. 314 EXPOSITORY COMPOSITIONS. 1 iterationfl, particulnrn, illuHtrations ; (c) ami by tho use of 8Uggostivo and pointed words for dot4iiled oxi>ressi()ns. Tho things to bo guarded against in making abstracts aro the omission of essential ideas ; obscurity or abruptness in stylo arising from neglect of explicit references between sentences; insertion of needless details; lack of proportion, e.g., th reproduction of one part more fully than another, not on grounds of relative importance, but through inadvertence, or haste to get to the close. It is manifest that abstracts may be of varying degrees of fulness — on the one hand verging on a paraphrase ; on tlio oth(jr hand not extending beyond a single sentence. An abstract, however brief, is always a continuous piece of composition in literary form ; wlioroas a Synopsis is a series of disconnected heads of discf)urse, such as is to bo found in tho 'Plans' of this volume and often in tables of contents. TIio making of synopses is scarcely composition, but often a useful preliminary to composition. The advantages to be derived from this exercise aro increased if the relation of the topics to each other is indicated by means of brackets, numbering, etc. The examples of abstracts given in this chapter aro based on passages of an expository nature. An admirable model of an abstract of a story is to be found in Friar Lawrence's history of tho ill-fated Romeo and Juliet contained in the last scene of Shakospearo's play.* The passage being in verse is not included in the iTodels, but should be carefully studied by the student, and compared wicl the same story as unfolded in the play itself. As we have abstracts on one side of Paraphrase, so we have Expansion on the other. Expansion is a means of interpretation when the writing is very condensed, or when the persons for whom the interpretation is intended require much help. The extent to which the expansion may be carried varies indefinitely. The term might be applied to paraphrases in which needful links of thought aro introduced ; and, on the other hand all original composition is ultimately the expansion of a certain number of thoughts. 1. The original passage is condensed in style, and somewhat obscure. The paraphrase attempts merely to bring out the meaning in simple and prosaic language. Note the expansion of tlio following condensed phrases of the original: "our stronger" (1. 83), "to be worse destroyed" (85), '* more destroyed than thus " (92), "happier far " (97), " we are at worst on * The attention of the Eklitors was drawn to this passage through the Idndness of Professor Goldwin Snx'th. 1 INTKltriiErA TION. 315 this Bido nothing" (100-101), "by proof" (101), " faUil " (104). Note the change of the following poetic cxpresHions : — "abhorred deep,'' "woe" (87), "ire" (95) ; exclusion of words used in poetic sense : — "exercise" (89), "abolished" (92), "essential" (97). The concrete imagery is made more general : — "vassals of his anger" (90), "torturing hour" (91), "throne" (104). 2. Keats' sonnet is of a different character from the passage para- phrased in I. ; it is not obscure except in so far as the use of poetic imagery may make it so. A comi)ari8()n of the original and the prose rendering drawn attention mainly to the picturesque and suggestive character of jjoetry. Tlie phrase, " realms of gold," is an example of this ; it suggests various ideas — beauty, the ideal life (cf. *age of gold'), works of the highest genius, etc. In prose something definite must be given, the idea expressed in the paraphrase is, perhaps, somewhat arbitrarily selected. " Deep-brow'd " is not reproduced in the prose rendering, inasmuch as it seems to be a purely poetic epithet introduced to bring Homer more vividly and concretely before the mind. The rich but vague suggestiveness of the comparisons (11. 9-14) is narrowed down to one or two of the chief elements of similarity — a gain in definiteness, with the sacrifice of breadth and imaginative stimulus. The same remarks apply to "upon a peak in Darien" as to "deep-brow'd." 3. This is a somewhat full abstract, approaching paraphrase. It aims at three things : to give the main ideas of the original ; to bring out clearly the connection, — how the mind of the poet is led from one thought to another ; to preserve a little of the spirit of the original. The epitaph at the close of the Elegy is not reproduced. In the opening lines of the abstract, note the general instead of par- ticular and detailed statements ; and in line 5 the insertion of the con- necting link. The student will note repeated examples of these peculiar- ities throughout the abstract. Note use of general terms for specific in 11. 8, 9, 11, 12, 17, etc. A comparison which is inserted without any sort of introduction in poetry, is, in the prose rendering (1. 24) brought into organic connection with the main thoughts. Stanza 15 of the Elegy is omitted in the abstract, because it contains nothing but particular illustrations of the statmiients in stanza 12. The figurative language of stanza 18 is replaced by matter-of-fact prose equivalent. Note the insertion of tlie connecting link in 1. 34. The last two lines of stanza 23, somewhat obscure in the original, are plainly interpreted in 11. 37-39 of the abstract. 4. This is a much more condensed abstract than the former. It was made with the book before the writer, and many sehtences and phrasei? 316 EXPOSITORY COMPOSITIONS. of the original are exactly reproduced. In making abstracts of prose essays as an exercise in composition, it is well that the student should dispense with the book, after having thoroughly grasped the original, and should write from memory, not, however, avoiding the phraseology of the original when he can recall it, and when it is in keeping with the general style of his abstract. If exercise in composition is not the main object, but an accurate representation of the original, the book should be used. It is advisable that the writer of the abstract should identify himself completely with the author, and write in the same person as he. To depart from this rule, and use such phrases as " The author says," "The essay goes on to maintain," etc., makes a clumsier and less accurate reproduction, and is a less severe test of the student's power. This abstract gives abundant illustration of the methods of condensation indicated on p. 313; e.g., the omission of the iteration, and the substitu- tion of generalized statements for the particulars of lines 1-12 of the original, the omission of the particulars in lines 118-124, and in lines 146-155 of the original ; the brevity of the abstract of the latter part of the original passage as compared with the earlier because the latter p.-.rt (11. 248-end) is mainly occupied with illustrations. 6. This is a very condensed abstract. A main reason for inserting it, is the value and suggestiveness, for students of Literature and Composition, of the views enunciated by Cardinal Newman in the original lecture. 6. This is an example of tho use of expansion for the purpose of interpret- ing the thoughts of another. Genung in commenting on this passage, which he quotes in his lilietoric, tays that two main objects seem to be kept in view: "to bring out more closely the shades of meaning, as suggested in the involvements of the original words ; and to bridge over abruptnesses in connection of the thought, so as to make the narrative more continuous." PRACTICE. Paraphrases : Poetry aflFords endless passages for paraphrase, but care should be exer- cised in selecting them. All passages do not lend themselves equally to reproduction in prose. In the iirst place, pass^vges should bo avoided INTERPRETATION. 317 where the meaning is plain and the expression approaches closely to the forms of prose, e.g.j Pope's Prologue to Oie Satires; again, where the ideas are simple and owe their whole value to the beauty and suggestiveness of the poetic expression, e.g., Milton's Hymn on the Nativity, and large parts of L' Allegro and II Penseroso ; or, again, where the positive ideas are few, and the passage is almost wholly an expression of, and stimulus to feeling, e.g., Keat's Ode to a Nightingale, Shelley's Skylark, and Ode to the West Wind, Wordsworth's Daffodils. The following passages on the other hand may be paraphrased with advantage : Shakespeare's HanUet, I, 4, 16-38 ; III, 4, 43-64; Paradise Lost, 1, 105-124; II, 11-42; 187-225; Johnson's Vanity of Human Wishes, 1-20 ; 73-90 ; 255-282 ; Goldsmith's Traveler, 81-98; 123-144; 255-266. Abstracts : Make abstracts of the following: TJie Squire's Tale (see chap, v.); Macaulay on (Jopyrvfht (see chap, xxviii.), on Education (see chap, xxxi.) ; The Trial Scene tn the Merchant of Venice ; Gray's Bard ; Byron's Ides of Greece. Make an abstract (preserving some of the spirit of the original) of the following: Two Old Lovers (see chap, v.); Tennyson's -BaWcwi o/ tJie Revenge ; Longfellow's Resignation ; Scott's Lady of tlte Lake, Fifth Canto, xii-xvi ; Goldsmith's Deserted Village. Expansion : Bacon's Essays, the later play of Shakespeare, the poems of Browning, atTord materials for uiterpretation by expansion ; but this is an exercise wdich can scarcely be successfully and advantageously practised by junior studenl-'s. TEEMS AND rJiOFOSITlONS. 319 CHAPTER XXVII. TERMS AND PROPOSITIONS EXPOUNDED. MODELS. 1.— The Laws of Nature.— 8. The Order of Nature : Nothing happens hy Accident, and there is no such thing as Chance. — The first thin^f that men learned, as soon as they began to study nature carefully, was that some events take place in regular order and that some causes always give rise to the same effects. The sun always rises on one side and R sets on the other side of the sky ; the changes of the moon follow one another in the same order and with similar intervals ; some stars never sink below the horizon of the place in which we live ; the seasons are more or less regular ; water always flows down-hill ; fire always burns ; plants grow up from seed and yield seed, from which lo like plants grow up again ; animals are bom, grow, reach maturity, and die, age after age, in the same way. Thus the notion of an order of nature and of a fixity in the relation of cause and effect between things gradually entered the minds of men. So far as such order prevailed it was felt that things were explained ; while the 16 things that could not be explained were said to have come about by chance, or to happen by accident. But the more carefully nature has been studied, the more widely has order been found to prevail, while what seemed disorder has proved to be nothing but complexity ; until, at present, no one is so 20 r'oolish as to believe that anything happens by chance, or that there are any real accidents, in tne sense of events which have no cause. And if we say that a thing happens by chance, everybody admits that all we really mean is, that we do not know its cause or the reason why that particular thing happens. Chance and accident are 28 only aliases of ignorance. 320 EXrOSlTOli Y COMPOSITIONS. At this present moment, as I look out of my window, it is raining and blowing hard, and the branches of the trees are waving wildly to and fro. It may be that a man has taker ;J"elter under one of 30 these trees ; perhaps, if a stronger gust thf u usual comes, a branch will break, fall upon tlio man, and seriously hurt him. If that happens it will be called . '' ccident," and the man will perhaps say that by " chance " he wt out, and then *' chanced " to take refuge under the tree, and so the " accident " happened. But there 35 is neither chance nor accident in the matter. The storm is the effect of causes operating upon the atmosphere, perhaps hundreds of miles away ; every vibration of a leaf is the consequence of the mechanical force of the wind acting on the surface exposed to it ; if the bough breaks, it will do so in consequence of the relation between 40 its strength and the force of the wind ; if it falls upon the man it will do so in consequence of the action of other definite natural causes ; and the position of the man under it is only the last term in a series of causes and effects, which have followed one another in natural order, from that cause, the effect of which was his setting 4(> out, to that the effect of which Avas his stepping under tlie tree. But, inasmuch as we are not wise enough to be able to unravel all these long and complicated series of causes and effects which lead to the falling of the branch upon the man, we call such an event an accident. 60 9. Laws of Nature ; Laws are not Causes. — When we have made out by careful and repeated observation that something is always the cause of a certain effect, or that certain events always take place in the same order, we speak of the truth thus discovered as a law of nature. Thus it is a law of nature that anything heavy falls to 65 the ground if it is unsupported ; it is a law of nature that, under ordinary conditions, lead is soft and heavy, while flint is hard and brittle ; because experience shows us that heavy things always do fall if they are unsupported, that, under ordinary conditions, lead is always soft and that flint is always hard. 60 In fact, everything that wo know about the powers and properties of natural objects and about the order of nature may properly be termed a law of nature. But it is desirable to remember that which 1^ TERMS AND PEOPOSITIONS. 321 is very often forgotten, that the law.s of nature are not the causes of the order of nature, but only our wny of stating as much as we have made out of that order. St(jnes do not fall to the ground in conse- 66 quence of the law just stated, as people sometimes carelessly say ; but the law is a way of asserting that which invariably happens when heavy bodies at the surface of the earth, stones among the rest, are free to move. The laws of nature are, in fact, in this respect, similar to the laws 70 which men make for the guidance of their conduct towards one another. There are laws alxiut the payment of taxes, and there are laws against stealing or murder. But the law is not the cause of a man's paying his taxes, nor is it the cause of his abstaining from theft and murder. The law is simply a statement of what will 76 happen to a man if he does not pay his taxes, and if he commits theft or murder ; and the cause of his paying his taxes, or abstaining from crime (in the absence of any better motive) is the fear of con- sequences which is the effect of his belief in that statement. A law of man tells what we may expect society will do under certain cir- 8c cumstances ; and a law of nature tells us what we may expect natural objects will do under cei-tain circumstances. Each contains information addressed to our intelligence, and except so far as it in- fluences our intelligence, it is merely so much sound or writing. While there is this much analogy between human and natural 86 laws, however, certain essential differences between the two must not be overlooked. Human law consists of commands addressed to voluntary agents, which they may obey or disobey ; and the law is not rendered null and void by being broken. Natural laws, on the other hand, are not commands but assertions respecting the invari- 90 able order of nature ; and they remain laws only so long as they can be shown to express that order. To speak of the violation, or the suspension, of a law of nature is an absurdity. All that the phrase can really mean is that, under certain circumstances the assertion contained in the law is not true ; and the just conclusion is, not that 0£ the order of nature is interrupted, but that we have made a mistake in stating that order. A true natural law is an universal rulc> and, as such, admits of no exceptions. 322 BXPOStTORT COMPOSITIONS. i >: Again, human laws have no meaning apart from the existence of 100 human society. Natural laws express the general course of nature, of which human society forms only an insignificant fraction. 10. Knowledge of Nature is the Guide of Practical Conduct.^ If nothing happens by chance, but everything in nature follows a definite order, and if the laws of nature embody that which we have 106 been able to learn about the order of nature in accurate language, then it becomes very important for us to know as many as we can of these laws of nature, in order that we may guide our conduct by them. Any man who should attempt to live in a country without refer- no ence to the laws of that country would very soon find himself in trouble ; and if he were fined, imprisoned, or even hanged, sensible people would probably consider that he had earned his fate by his folly. In like manner, any one who tries to live upon the face o£ this 116 earth without attention to the laws of nature will live there for but a very short time, most of which will be passed in exceeding dis- comfort ; a peculiarity of natural laws, as distinguished from those of human enactment, being that they take effect without summons or prosecution. In fact, nobody could live for half a day unless he 120 attended to some of the laws of nature ; and thousands of us are djring daily, or living miserably, because men have not yet been sufficiently zealous to learn the code of nature. It has already been seen that the practice ot all our arts and in- dustries depends upon our knowing the properties of nr.tural objects 126 which we can get hold of and put together ; and though we may be able to exert no direct control over the greater natural objects and the general succession of causes and effects in nature, yet, if we know the properties and powers of these objects, and the customary order of events, we may elude that which is injurious to us, and 130 profit by that which is favourable. Thus, though men can nov/ise alter the seasons or change the process of growth in plants, yet having learned the order of nature in these matters, they make arrangements for sowing and reaping accordingly ; they cannot make the wind blow, but when it does IT^ ftJRMS AND PH0P0SITI0N8. 323 blow they take advantage of its known powers and probable direc- 186 tion to sail ships and turn windmills; they cannot arrest the lightning, but they can make it harmless by means of conductors, the construction of which implies a knowledge of some of the laws of that electricity, of which lightning is one of the manifestations. Forewarned is forearmed, says the proverb ; and knowledge of the 140 laws of nature is forewarning of that which we may expect to happen, when we have to deal with natural objects. Huxley's " Introductory Science Primer." By permission qf the publithen. II. — Cheerfulness. — I have always preferred cheerfulness to mirth. The latter I consider as an act, the former as a habit of the mind. Mirth is short and transient, cheerfulness fixed and perma- nent. Those are often raised into the greatest transports of mirth who are subject to the greatest depressions of melancholy : on the fi contrary, cheerfulness, though it does not give the mind such an exquisite gladness, prevents us from falling into any depths of sor- row. Mirth is like a flash of lightning, that breaks through a gloom of clouds, and glitters for a moment ; cheerfulness keeps up a kind of day-light in the mind, and fills it with a steady and perpetual lo serenity. Men o " austere principles look upon mirth as too wanton and dis- solute for a state of probation, and as filled with a certain triumph and insolence of heart, that is inconsistent with a life which is every moment obnoxious to the greatest dangers. Writers of this com- is plexion have observed, that the sacred person who was the great pattern of perfection was never seen to laugh. Cheerfulness of mind is not liable to any of these exceptions : it is of a serious and composed nature ; it does not throw the mind into a condition improper for the present state of humanity, and is very ao conspicuous in the characters of those who are looked upon as the greatest philosophers among the heathens, as well as among those who have been deservedly esteemed as saints and holy men among Christians, If we consider cheerfulness in three lights, with regard to our- • selves, to those we converse with, and to the great Author of our 324 EXPOSITORY COMPOSITIONS. ^\ being, it will not a little recommend itself on each of these accounts. The man who is possessed of this excellent frame of mind is not only easy in his thoughts, but a perfect master of all the powers and 30 faculties of his soul : his imagination is always clear, and his judg- ment undisturbed : his temper is even and unruffled, whether in action or in solitude. He comes with a relish to all those goods which nature has provided for him, tastes all the pleasures of the creation which are poured about him, and does not feel the full 36 weight of those accidental evils which may befall him. If we consider him in relation to the persons whom he converses with, it naturally produces love and good-will towards him. A cheerful mind is not only disposed to be affable and obliging, but raises the same good humour in those who come within its influence. *<* A man finds himself pleased, he does not know why, with the cheer- fulness of his companion : it is like a sudden sun-shine that awakens a secret deligl t in the mind, without her attending to it : the heart rejoices of its own accord, and naturally flows out into friendship and benevolence towards the person who has so kindly an effect 45 upon it. When I consider this cheerful state of mind in its third relation, I cannot but look upon it as a constant habitual gratitude to the great Author of nature. An inward cheerfulness is an implicit praise and thanksgiving to Providence under all its dispensations : 50 it is a kind of acquiescence in the state wherein we are placed, and a secret approbation of the divine will in his conduct towards men. There are but two things, which, in my opinion, can reasonably deprive us of this cheerfulness of heart. The first of these is the sense of guilt. A man who lives in a state of vice and impenitence 55 can have no title to that evenness and tranquility of mind which is the health of the soul, and the natural effect of virtue and innocence. Cheerfulness in an ill man deserves a harder name than language can furnish us with, and is many degrees beyond what we commonly call folly or madness. 60 Atheism, by which I mean a disbelief of a Supreme Beim*, and consequently of a future state, under whatsoever titles it shelters itself, may likewise very reasonably deprive a man of this cl ^v'rful- 1 TERMS AND PROPOSITIONS. 326 hCiis of temper, There is .somethin,^ .so particularly gloomy and ofFenaive to human nature in the prospect of non-existence, that I cannot but wonder, with many excellent writers, how it is possible 66 for a man to outlive the expectation of it. For my own part, I think the being of a God is so little to be doubted, that it is almost the only truth we are sure of, and such a truth Jis we moot with in every object, in every occurrence, and in every thought. If we look into the characters of this tribe of infidels, we generally find they 70 arc made up of pride, spleen, and cavil : it is indeed no wonder that men who are uneasy to themselves should be so to the rest of the world : and how is it possible for a man to be otherwise than uneasy in himself, who is in danger every moment of losing his entire exist- ence, and dropping into nothing ? 76 The vicious man and atheist have therefore no pretence to cheer- fulness, and would act very unreasonably should they endeavour after it. It is impossible for any one to live in good-humour, and enjoy his present existence, who is apprehensive either of torment or of annihilation ; of being miserable, or of not being at all. go After having mentioned these two great principles, which are destructive of cheerfulness in their own nature, as well as in right reason, I cannot think of any other that ought to banish this happy temper from a virtuous mind. Pain and sickness, shame and re- proach, poverty and old age, nay, death itself, considering the short • 85 ness of their duration, and the advantage we may reap from them, do not deserve the name of evils : a good mind may bear up under them with fortitude, with indolence, and Vv-ith cheerfulness of heart. The tossing of a tempest does not discompose him, which he is sure will bring him to a joyful harbour. 90 A man who uses his best endeavours to live according to the dic- tates of virtue and right reason, has two perpetual sources of cheerfulness, in the consideration of his own nature, and of that Being on whom he has a dependence. If he looks into himself, he cannot but rejoice in that existence which is so lately bestowed upon 95 him, and which, after millions of ages, will be still new, and still in its beginning. How many self-congratulations naturally arise in the mind, when it reflects on this its entrance into eternity, when it m I 326 EXPOSITORY COMPOSITIONS. takes a view of those improveable faculties, which in a few years, 100 and even at his first setting out, have made so considerable a pro- gress, and which will be still receiving an increase of perfection, and consequently an increase of happiness 1 The consciousness of such a being spreads a perpetual diffusion of joy through the soul of a virtuous man, and makes him look upon himself every moment as 106 more happy than he knows how to conceive. The second source of cheerfulness to a good mind, is its considera- tion of that Being on whom we have our dependence, and in whom, though we behold him as yet but in the first faint discoveries of his perfections, we see every thing that we can imagine as great- no glorious, or amiable. We find ourselves everywhere upheld by his goodness, and surrounded with an immensity of love and mercy. In short, we depend upon a Being, whose power qualifies him to make us happy by an infinity of means, whose goodness and truth engage him to make those happy who desire it of him, and whose unchange- 115 ableness will secure us in this happiness to all eternity. Such considerations, which every one should perpetually cherish in his thoughts, will banish from us all t'lat secret heaviness of heart which unthinking men are subject to when they lie under no real affliction, all that anguish which we may feel from any evil that 120 actually oppresses us, to which I may likewise add those little crack- lings of mirth and folly, that are apter to betray virtue? than support it ; and establish in us such an even and cheerful temper, as makes us pleasing to ourselves, to those with whom we converse, and to him whom we were made to please. Addison in •• The Spectator." III. — Party. — But the most important point of all in the case of Canada, as in that of every other Parliamentary country, is one to which scarcely an allusion was made in the debate on Confeder- ation, and of which the only formal recognition is the division of 5 the seats in the Halls of Parliament. Regulate the details of your Constitution as you will, the real government now is Party ; politics are a continual struggle between the parties for power ; no measure of importance can be carried except through a party ; the public issues of the day are thowi whieh the party managers for the TERMS AND PItOPOSITIONS. 327 purposes c»f Iho party war make up ; no one who does not profess lo allegiance to a j>arty has any chance of admission to public life. Let a candidate come forward with the highest reputation for ability and worth, but avowing himself independent of party and determined to vote only at the bidding of his reason and conscience for the good of the whole people, he would run but a poor race in is any Canadian constituency. If independence ever presumes to show its face in the political field the managers and organizers of both parties take their hands for a moment from each other's throats and combine to crush the intruder, as two gamblers might spring up from the table and draw their revolvers 20 on any one who threatened to touch the stakes. They do this usually by tacit consent, but they have been known to do it by actual agreement. What then is Party? We all know Burke's definition,* though it should be remembered that Burke on this, as on other occasions not a few, fits his philosophy to the circumstances, 26 which were those of a member of a political connection struggling for power against a set of men who called themselves the King's friends and wished to put all connections under the feet of the King. But Burke's definition implies the existence of some organic question or question of principle, with regard to which the members so of the party agree among themselves and differ from their opponents. Such agreement and difference alone can reconcile party allegiance with patriotism, or submission to party discipline with loyalty to reason and conscience. Organic questions or questions r principle are not of everyday occurrence. When they are exhausted, as in a 36 country with a written constitution they are likely soon to be, what bond is there, of a moral and rational kind, to hold a party together and save it from becoming a mere faction ? The theory that every community is divided by nature, or as the language of some would almost seem to imply, by divine ordinance, into two parties, and 40 that every man belongs from his birth to one party or the other, if it were not a ludicrously patent example of philosophy manufac- * Party is a body of men unitefJ, for promotintr by their joint endeavours the national in- terest, upon some particular principle in which they are all a(;reed.— " Thottghta on the Present tHicontenti." 326 EXPOSITOR Y COMPOSITIONS. turpd for the occasion, would bo belied by tlio history of Cmadian parties wii!; their kaleidoscopic shift iiigs and of Caiiailian }H)liticiaiis '«'■, w)io have been found by turns in every camp. Loid Klgin, coining to the governorship when the sti-ugglo for responsible government was over, and a lull in organic controversy had ensued, found, as liis biographer tells us, that parties formed themselves nf)t on broad issues of principle, but with reference to petty local and personti^ 60 interests. On what could they form themsehes if there was no broad issue before the country? Elgin himself complaiiied, as we have seen, that his ministers were impicjssed with the belief that the object of the Opposition was to defeat their measures, right or wrong, that the malcontents of thoir own side would combim 56 against them, and th.at they must appeal to personal and sordia motives if tbi;y wished to hold their own. That is the game ■which is played in Canada, as it is in the United States, as it is in every coimtry under party government, by the two organized fnctions — macaines, as they are aptly called, the prize being the Gov(;rnment 60 with its patronage, and the motive poweis being those common more or less to all factions — persoruil ambition, bi'ibery of various kinds, open or disguised, and as regards the mass of the people, a pug- nacious and sporting spirit, like that v'hich animated the Blues and Greens of the Byzantine Circus. This last influence is not by any 65 means the least powerful. It is astonishing with what tenacity a Canadian farmer adheres to his party Shibboleth when to him, as well as to the community at large, it is a Shibboleth and nothing more. Questions of principle, about which public feeling has been greatly excited, questions even of interest which appeal most 70 directly to the pocket, pass out of sight when once the word to start is given, and the race between Blue and Green begins. Questions as to the character of candidates are unhappily also set aside. It is commonly said that Canada pnjduces more politics to the acre than any other country. The more of politics there is the less unfortu- Tsnately there is of genuine public spirit and manly readiness to stand up for public right, the more men fear to be in a minority, even in what they know to be a good cause. People flock to any standard which they believe is Jittracting votes ; if they find that it TERMS ANn rnoi'OSfTIONS. 329 is not, they are sciittorod lik(5 .sheep. Political a.spirants hwirii from their youth the arts of the voto-hiuiter ; they learn to treat all 80 questions a.s political cji{)ital, and to play false with their own understanding and consciciiec! at the bidding of the wirepullers of their party. The oiiinitiec! to jmhlic life is not through the gate of truth or honour. Tlii^se are nob peculiarities of Canada; they are things coiniiion to all countric^s where the party .system prevails, 85 and peculiar only in tluiir intensity t(j those countries in which party is inordinatirly strong. Qoldwin Smith's " Canada and the Canadian Qucgtion," lUj permission of the author. h ::;[ IV— Standing" before God.— "And I saw the dead, small and great, stand before Ood." — Rev. xx. 12. "T saw the dvtul, small and great, stand before God." What is meant by "standing before God?" We are apt to picture to our- selves a great dramatic sc<Mie. Host beyond host, rank behind rank, the miilions who have lived upon the earth, all standing crowded together in the indescribable presence of One who looks not 6 merely at the mass but at the individual, and sees through the whole life and character of every single soul. The picture is sublime, and it is what the words of St. John are intended to suggest. But we must get behind the picture to its meaning. The picture must describe ncjt one scene only, but the whole nature and condition of lo the everlasting life. The souls of men in the etern.al world are always " standing before God." And what docs that mean? We understand at once, if Ave consider that that before which a man stands is the standard, or test, or source of judgment for his life. Every man stands before something which is his judge. The child 15 stands before the father. Not in a single act, making report of what he has been doing on a special day, but in the whole posture of his life, almost as if the father was a, mi.ror in whom he saw himself reflected, and from whose reflection of himself he got at once a judg- ment as to what he was, and suggestions as to what he ought to be. 20 The poet stands before nature. She is his judge. A certain felt harmony or discord between his nature and lier ideal is the test and directing powcjr of his life. The philosopher stands before the 330 EXPOSITOR Y ( 'OMPOSITIONS unseen and majestic presence of the abstract truth. The philan- 25 thropist star is before humanity. The artist stands before beauty. The legislat r stands before justice. The politiciMn stands before that vague but awful embodiment of average character, the people, the demos. The fop, in miserable servility, stands before fashion, the feeblest and ficklest of tyrants. The scholar stands before knowledge, 3Jaiid gets the satisfactions or disaj)pointment8 of his life frjm the approvals or disapprovals of her serene and gracious lips. You see what the words mean. Every soul that counts itself capable of judgment and responsibility, stands in some presence by which the nature of its judgment is decreed. The higher the 35 presence, the loftier and greater, though often the more oppressed and anxious, i,- the life. A weak man, who wants to shirk the seriousness and anxiety of life, goes down into some lower chamber, and stands before some baser judge whose standard will be least exacting. A strong, ambitious man presses up from judgment 40 room to judgment room, and is not satisfied with meeting any standard p(M'fectly .so long as there is^ any higher standard which he has not faced. Greater than anything else in education, vastly greater than any question about how many facts and .ciences, a teacher may have taught his pupil, there must always be this other 45 question, into what presence he has intri>duced him; before what sti.ndard ho has made his pupil stand : for in the answer to that question are involved all the deepest issues of the pupil's character and life. And now St. John aeclares that when he passed behind the veil, 60 he saw the dead, small and great, stand before God. Do you not see now what that means ? Out of all the lower presences with which they have made themselves contented; out of all the chambers where the little easy judges sit with their compromising codes of conduct, with their ideas worked over and worked down to suit the 65 conditions of this earthly life; out of all these partial and imperfect judgment chambers, when men die they are all carried up into the presence of the perfect righteousness, and are judged by that. All previous judgments go for nothing unless they find their confirma- tion there. Men who have been the pets and favorites of society, TERMS AND PBOPOSITIONA 331 r )re fie, Ihe ?e, the and of the populace, and of their own self-esteem, the change that death «o has made to them is that they have been compelled to face another standard and to feel its unfamiliar awfulness. Just think of it. A man who, all his life on earth since he was a child, has never once asked himself about any acti')n, about any plan of his, is this right? Suddenly, when he is dead, behold, he finds himself in a new world, 65 where that is the only question about everything. His old questions as to whether a thing was comfortable, or was popular, or was profit- able, are all gone. The very atmosphere of this new world kills them. And upon the amazed soul, from every side there pours this new, strange, searching question : "Is it right?" Out of the ground 70 he walks on, out of the walls which shelter and restrain him, out of the canopy of glory overhead, out of strange, unexplored recesses of his own newly -awakened life, from every side comes pressing in upon him that one question, "Is it right?" That is what it is for that dead man to " stand before God." 76 And then there is another soul which, before it passed through death, while it was in this world, had always been struggling after hi'^her presences. Refusing to ask whether acts were popular or profitable, refusing even to care much whether they were comfort- able or beautiful, it 'luid insisted uptm asking whether each act was sc rig it. It had always struggled to keep its moral vision clear. It ha'i climbed to heights of self-sacrifice that it might get above the miasma of low standards which lay upon the earth. In every darkness about what was right, it had been true to the best light it could see. It had grown into a greater a. id greater incapacity toss live in any other presence, as it had suvggled longer and longer for this highest company. Think what it must be for that soul, when for it, too, d(^ath sweeps every other chamber back and lifts the nature into the pure light of the unclouded righteousness. Now for it, too, the question, " Is it right?" rings from every side ; butoo in that question this soul hears the echo of its own best-loved standard. Not in mockery, but in invitation ; not tauntingly, but temptingly ; the everlasting gotxlness seems to look in upon the soul from fdl that touches it. That is what it is for that soul to " stand before God." God opens his own heart to that soul and is both or. 332 EXFOSITOBY COMPOSITION,^ i^ Judgment and Love. They are not separate. He is Love because He is Judgment; for to be judged by Him, to meet His judgment is what the soul has been long and ardently desiring. Tell me, when two such souls as these stand together " before God," are they not 100 judged by their very standing there? Are not the deep content of one, fliid the perplexed distress of the other, ah-eady their heaven and I'leir hell? Do you need a pit of fire, and a city of gold, to em- phasize tlieir difference ? When the dead, small and great, stand before God, is not the book already opened, and are not the dead 106 already judged? " The dead, small and great," St. John says that he saw standing before God. In that great judgment-day, another truth is that the difference of sizes among human lives, of which we make so much, passes away, and all human beings, in simple virtue of their human 110 quality, are called to face the everlasting righteousness. The child and the greybeard, the scholar and the boor, however their lives may have been separated here, they come together there. See how this falls in with what 1 s.iid before. It is upon the moral ground that the most separated souls must always meet. Upon the child and the 116 philosopher alike rests the common obligation not to lie, but to tell the truth. The scholar and the plough-br)y both are bound to be pure and to bo merciful. Differently as they may have to fulfil their duties, the duties are the same for both. Intellectual sympathies are limited. The more men study, the more they separate themselves 120 into groups with special interests. But moral sympathies are univer- sal. The more men tiy to do right, the more they come into com- munion with all other men who are engaged in the same struggle all through the universe. Therefore it is that before the moral judg- ment seat of God all souls, the small and great, are met together. 125 All may be good — all may be bad; therefore, before Him, whose nature is the decisive touchstone of goodnc^ss and badness in every nature which is laid upon it, all souls of all the generations of man- kind may bo assend)led. Think what a truth that is. We try to find son.o meeting ground 130 for all humanity, and what we find is always proving itself too narrow or too weak. The one only place where all can meet, and TERMS AND PROPOSITIONS. 333 every s<tul claim its relationship with every other soul, is before the throne of God. The Father's presence alone furnishes the meeting-place for all the children, regardless of differences of age or wisdom. Tlie grave and learned of this earth shall come up there 136 before God, and find, standing in His presence, that all which they have truly Icarneil has not taken them out of the sympathy of the youngest and simplest of their Father's children. On the other hand, the simple child, who has timidly gazed afar off upon the great minds of his race, when he comes to stand with them before wo Go<l, will find that he is m^t shut out from them. He has a key which will urdock their doors and let him enter into their lives. Because they are obeying the same God whom he obeys, therefore He has s(mie part in the eternal life of Abraham, and Moses, and Paul. Not directly, but through the God before whom both of 146 them stand, the small and great come together. The humility of the highest and the s(.'lf- respect of the lowest are both perfectly attained. The children, who have nnt been able to understand or hold conmiunion with each other dii'<'tly, meet p(!rfectly together in the Father's house, and the dead, small and greul., stand in com- iso plete sympathy am' oneness before God. Phillips Brooke " Twenty Semu<ns." v.— The Excellence of fiurns' Poetical Works.- ^Vll that remains of Burns, the Writings he has left, seem to us, as we hinted above, no more than a poor mutilated fraction of what was in him ; brief, broken glimpses of a genius that could never show itself com- plete ; that wanted all things for completeness; culture, 1'isure, 6 true effort, nay, even length of life. His poems are, with scarcely any exception, mere occasional effusions; poured forth with little premeditation ; expressing, by such means as offered, the passion, opinion, or humour of the hour. Never in one instance was it per- mitted him to grapple with any subject with the full collection of lo his strength, to fuse and mould it in the concentrated fire of his genius. To try by the strict rules of Art such imperfect fragments^ would be at once unprofitable and unfair. Nevertheless, there is something in these poems, marred and defective as they are, which V' \ 334 EXPOSITORY COMPOSITIONS. ifi forbids the most fastidious student of poetry to pass them by. Some sort of enduring quality tlioy must have : for after fifty years of the wildest vicissitudes in poetic taste, they still continue to be read ; nay, are read more and more eagerly, more and more extensively ; and this not only by literary virtuosos, and that class upon whom 20 transitory causes operate most strongly, but by all classes, down to the most hard, unlettered and truly natural class, who read little, and especially no poetry, except because they find pleasure in it. The grounds of so singular and wide a popularity, which extends, in a literal sense, from the palace to the hut, and over all regions where 26 the English tongue is spoken, are well worth inquiring into. After every just deduction, it seems to imply some rare excellence in these works. What is that excellence? To answer this question will not lead us far. The excellence of Burns is, indeed, among the rarest, whether in poetry or prose ; but, 30 at the same time, it is plain and easily recognised : his Sincerity, his indisputable air of Truth. Here are no fabulous woes or joys ; no hollow fantastic sentimentalities ; no wiredrawn refiniugs, either in thought or feeling : the passion that is traced before us has glowed in a living heart ; the opinion he utters has risen in his own under- 35 standing, and been a light to his own steps. He does not write from hearsay, but from sight and experieiice ; it is the scenes that he has lived and laboured amidst, tliat he describes : tiiose scenes, rude and humble as they are, have kindled beautiful emotions in his soul, noble thoughts, and definite resolves; and he speaks forth what 40 is in him, not from any outward call of vanity or interest, but be" cause his heart is too full to Ije silent. He speaks it with such melody and modulation as he can ; ' in homely rustic jingle ; ' but it is his own, and genuine. This is the grand secret for finding read- ers and n^taining them : let him who would move and convince 40 others, be first moved and convinced himself. Horace's rule, SI vis me Jlcrey is applicable in a wider sense than the liUn-al one. To every poet, to every writer, we might say : Be true, if you would be believed. Let a man but speak forth with genuine earnestness the thought, the emotion, the actual condition of his own heart ; and soother men, so strangf^lj' are we all knit together by the tie of sym- TEEMS AND PROPOSITIONS. 335 pathy, must and will give heed to him. In culture, in extent of view, we may stand above the speaker, or below him ; but in either case, his words, if they are earnest and sincere, will find some response within us ; for in spite of all casual varieties in outward rank or inward, as face answers to face, so does the heart of man to 65 man. This may appear a very simple principle, and one which Burns had very little merit in discovering. True, the discovery is easy enough : but the practical appliance is not easy ; is indeed the fundamental difficulty which all poets have to strive with, andeo which scarcely one in the hundred ever faii-ly surmounts. A head too dull to discriminate the true from the false ; a heart too dull to love the one at all risks, and to hate the other in spite of all tempta- tions, are alike fatal to a writer. With either, or as more commonly* happens, with both of these deficiencies combine a love of distinction, 65 a wish to be original, which is seldom wanting, and we have Affecta- tion, the bane of literature, as Cant, its elder brother, is of morals. How often does the one and the other front us, in poetry, as in life ! Great poets themselves are not always free of this vice ; nay, it is precisely on a certain sort and degree of greatness that it is most 7o commonly ingrafted. A strong effort after excellence will some- times solace itself with a mere shadow of success ; he who has much to unfold, will sometimes unfold it imperfectly. Byron, for instance, was no common man : yet if we examine his poetry with this view, we shall find it far enough from faultless. Generally speaking, we 75 should say that it is not true. He refreshes us, not with the divine fountain, but too often with vulgar strong waters, stimulating in- deed to the taste, but soon ending in dislike or even nausea. Are his Harolds and Giaours, we would ask, real men ; we mean, poeti- cally consistent and conceivable men 1 Do not these characters, does so not the character of their author, which more or less shines through them all, rather appear a thing put on for the occasion ; no natural or possible mode of being, but something intended to look much grander than nature? Surely, all these stormful agonies, this volcanic heroism, superhuman contempt and mocxly desperation, as with so much scowling, and teeth-gnashing, and other sulphurous i 336 EXPOSITORY COMPOSITIONS. iiumour, is more like the brawling of a player in some paltry tragedy, which is to last three hours, than the bearing of a man in the busi- ness of life, which is to last threescore and ten years. To our minds 90 there is a taint of this sort, something which we should call theatri- cal, false, affected, in every one of these otherwise so powerful pieces. Perhaps Don Juan, especially the latter parts of it, is the only thing iiDproaching to a sincere work he ever wrote ; the only work where he showed himself, in any measure, as he was ; and seemed so intent 95 on his subject as, for moments, to forget himself. Yet Byron hated this vice ; we believe, heartily detested it : nay he had declared formal war against it in words. So difficult is it even for the strongest to make this primary attainment, which might seem the simplest of all : to read its otvn consciousness without mistakes, with- 100 out errors involuntary or wilful ! We recollect no pf)et of BurnsV susceptibility who comes before us from the first, and abid(?s w ith us to the last, with such a total want of affectation. He is an honest man, and an honest writer. In his successes and his failurcjs, in his greatness and his littleness, he is ever clear, simple, true, and glitters 105 with no lustre but his own. We reckon this to be a great virtue ; to be, in fact, the root of most other virtues, literary as well as moral. In addition to its Sincerity, his poetry has another peculiar merit, which indeed is but a mode, or perhaps a means, of the foregoing ; this 110 displays itself in his choice of subjects ; or rather in his indifference as to subjects, and the power he has of making all subjects inter- esting. The ordinary poet, like the ordinary man, is forever seeking in external circumstances the help which can be found only in him- self. In what is familiar and near at hand, he discerns no form or 116 comeliness : home is not poetical but prosaic ; it is in some past, distant, conventional heroic world, that poetry resides ; were he there and not heve, were he thus and not so, it would be well with him. Hence our innumerable host of rose-coloured Novels and iron- mailed Epics, with their locality not on the Earth, but somewhere 120 nearer to the Moon. Hence our Virgins of the Sun, and our Knights of the Cross, malicious Saracens in turbans, and copper- coloured Chiefs in wampum, and so many other truculent figures VERMS AND PROPOSITIONS. 337 £rom tho heroic times or the heroic climates, who on all hands swarm in our poetry. Peace be with them ! liut yet, as a great moralist proposed preaching to the men of this century, so would we fain 125 preach to the poets, 'a sermon on the duty of staying at home.' Let them lie sure that heroic ages and heroic climates can do little for them. That form of life has attraction for us, less because it is better or nobler than our own, than simply because it is different ; and even this attraction must be of the most transient sort. For 130 will not our own age, one day, be an ancient one ; and have as quaint a costume as the rest ; not contrasted with the rest, there- fore, but ranked along with them, in respect of quaintness 1 Does Homer interest us now, because he wrote of what passed beyond his native Greece, and two centuries before he was born ; or because he 135 wrote what passed in God's world, and in the heart of man, which is the same after thirty centuries ? Let our poets look to this : is their feeling really finer, truer, and their vision deeper than that of other men, — they have nothing to fear, even from the humblest subject ; is it not so, — they have nothing to hope, but an ephemeral favour, 140 even from the highest. The poet, we imagine, can never have far to seek for a subject ; the elements of his art are in him, and around him on every hand : for him the Ideal world is not remote from the Actual, but under it and within it : nay, he is a poet, precisely because he can discern it 145 there. Wherever there is a sky above him, and a world around him, the poet is in his place ; for here too is man's existence, with its infinite longings and small acquirings ; its ever-thwarted, ever- renewed endeavoui's ; its unspeakable aspirations, its fears and hopes that wander through Eternity ; and all the mystery of liriglitness 150 and of gloom that it was ever made of, in any age or climate, since man first began to live. la thcrn not the fifth act of a Tragedy in every death-bed, though it were a peasant's, and a btul of heath ! And are wooings and weddings obsolete, that there can be Comedy no longer 1 Or are men suddenly grown wise, that Laughter must 155 no longer shako his sides, but be cheated of his Farce ? Man's life and nature is, as it was, and as it will ever be. But the poet must have an eye to read these things, and a heart to understand tiiem ; < 1 I 338 EXPosiTonr compositions. He is a vates, a Has life no meanings for or they come and pass away before him in vain, 160 seer ; a gift of vision has Ijeen given him, him, which another cannot equally decipher ; then he is no poet, and Delphi itself will not make him one. In this respect, Burns, though not perhaps absolutely a great poet, better manifests his capability, better proves the truth of his genius, IOC than if he had by his own strength kept the whole Minerva Press going to the end of his literary course. He shows himself at least a poet of Nature's own making ; and Nature, after all, is still the grand agent in making poets. We often hear of this and the other external condition being requisite for the existence of a poet. Some- 170 times it is a certain sort of training ; he must have studied certain things, studied for instance * the elder dramatists,' and so learned a poetic language ; as if poetry lay in the tongue, not in the heart. At other times we are told he must be bred in a certain rank, and must be on a confidential footing with the higher classes ; because, 175 above all things, he must see the world. As to seeing the world, we apprehend this will cause him little difficulty, if he have but eyesight to see it with. Without eyesight, indeed, the task might be hard. The blind or the purblind man ' travels from Dan to J3eersheba, and finds it all barren.' But happily every poet is born in the world ; 180 and sees it, with or against his will, every day and every hour he lives. The mysterious wc>rkmanship of man's heart, the true light and the inscrutable darkness of man's destiny, reveal themselves not only in capital cities and crowded saloons, but in eAery hut and hamlet where men have their abode. Nay, do not the elements of 185 all human virtues and all human vices ; the passions at once of a Borgia and of a Luther, lie written, in strojiger or fainter lines, in the consciousness of every individual bosom, that has practised honest self-oxamination ? Truly, this .same world may be seen in Mossgiel and Tarl)olton, if we look well, as clearly as it ever came to 190 light in Crockford's, or the Tuileries itself. But sometimes still harder requisitions are laid on the poor aspirant to poetry ; for it is hinted that he should have been bom two centuries ago ; inasmuch as poetry, about that date, vanished from the earth, and became no longer attainable by men ! ^ch TERMS AND PHOPOSITIONS. 339 cjobweb spoculations havo, now an<l tlicn, overliunj? tlici fiold of litera-iOB tui'o ; l)ut tliey obstruct not the growth of any plant tht-ro : the Shakespeare or the Burns, unconsciously and merely as he walks onward, silently brushes them away. Is not every genius an impos- sibility till he appear ? Why do we call him new and original, if we saw where his marble was lying, and what fabric he could rear from 200 it ? It is not the material but the workman that is wanting. It is liot the dark ^>»/«fe that hinders, but the dim eye. A Scottish peasant's life was the meanest and rudest of all lives, till Bui-ns be- came a po(?t in it, and a poet of it ; found it a man's life, and there- fore significant to men. A thousand battle-fieldin remain unsung ; 206 but the Wounded Hare has not perished without its memorial ; a balm of mercy yet breathes on us from its dumb agonies, because a poet was there. Our llallov^een had passed and repassed, in rude awe and laughter, since the era of the Druids ; but no Theocritus, till Burns, discerned in it the materials of a Scottish Idyll : neither 210 was the Holy Fair any Council of Trent or Roman Jubilee ; but nevertheless, Su2)erstition and Hypocrisy and Fun having been pro- pitious to him, in this man's hand it became a ]x>em, instinct with satire and genuine comic life. Let but the true poetlie given us, we repeat it, place him where and how you will, p.nd true poetry will 215 not be wanting. Independently of the essential gift of poetic feeling, as we have now attempted to describe it, a certain rugged sterling worth per- vades whatever Burns has written ; a virtue, as of green fields and mountain breezes, dwells in his poetry ; it is redolent of natural life 220 and hardy natural men. There is a decisive strength in him, and yet a sweet native gracefulness ; he is tender, he is vehement, yet, without constraint or too visible effort; he melts the hearfc, or in- flames it, with a. power which seems habitual and familiar fcw him. We see that in this man there was the gentleness, the trembling 226 pity of a woman, witli the deep earnestness, the force and passionate ardour of a hero. Tears lie in him, and consuming fire ; as light- ning lurks in the drops of the summer cloud. He has a resonance in his bosom for every note of human feeling ; the high and the low the sad, the ludicrous, the joyful, are welcome in their turno to his 230 !■■! 340 ^XPOBlTOltY COMPOSITIONS. )\' i !l U! * lij?}itly-moved and uIl-coiicoivin<,' spirit.' And observe with what A fierce prompt force h<! ^lasps his subject, be it what it may! How he fixes, as it were, the full image of the matter in his eye ; full and clear in every lineament ; and catches the real type and essence of 236 it, amid a thousand accidents and superficial circumstances, no one of which misleads him ! Is it of reason ; some truth to be discov- ered 1 No sophistry, no vain-surface logic detains him ; quick, resolute, unerring, he pierces through into the marrow of the ques- tion ; and speaks his v(!i'dict with an emphasis that cannot be 2i0 forgotten. Is it of description ; some visual object to be repre- sented 1 No poet of any age or nation is more graphic than Burns : the characteristic features disclose themselves to him at a glance ; three lines from his hand, and we have a likeness. And, in that rough dialect, in that rude, often awkward metre, so clear and 24b definite a likeness! It seems a draughtsman working with a burnt stick : and yet the burin of a Ketzsch is not more expressive or exact. Of this last excellence, the pl.iinest cand most comprehensive of all, being indeed the root and foundation of everi/ .sort of talent, poetical 250 or intellectual, we could produce innumerable instances from the writings of Burns. Take these glimpses of a saovz-storm from his Winter N'ujht (the italics are ours) : tVhen l)iting Boreas, fell and doure, Shai'i} tih'uwH thro' the le.'iHuss bow'r, And I'iKehus f/tVvs a nhort-lic'd ylow'r Far south the lift. Dim-dark' iiiiig thro' the Jlaky show'r Or vihirlhiij drift : 255 260 'Ae iiiti'ht tJie storm the steeples rock'd. Poor labour aweet in sleep was lock'd, While l)urns ivV siuninj wreeUiH ujtchok'd Wild-cddybm sirh Irl, Or thro' the mining outlet bock'd Down headlong hurl. 266 Are there not * descriptive touches ' here 1 The describei* saw this thing ; the essential feature and true likeness of every circumstance TERMS AND PliOl'OSfTlONS. 341 in it ; saw, and n<»t witli tluj eyo «»nly. 'Poor labour locked in sweet sleep;' the dead stillness of man, unconscious, vaniiuislied, yet not unprot«ict(Ml, whihi such strifcj of the material elemcMits rages, and seems to reign supn^nui in loneliness : this is ot the heart as well as 270 of the eye ! — Look also .at his image of a thaw, and prophesied fall of the Auld Brig : When heavy, dark, continued, a'-day rains Wi' deepening deluges o'erHow the plains ; When from the hills where springs the brawling Coil, 276 Or stately Lugar's mousy fountains boil. Or where the (ireenock winds his //tooWttH*/ course, Or haunted (Jarpal* draws his fee])le source, Arous'd hy l)lust'ring winds and spottiiuj thowes, In 1110111/ a tornmt doion kin siutiU-broo rowes ; 280 While crashing ice, burnt on the roaring speat, SwetjiH dams and mills and brigs a' to the gate ; And from (Jlenbuck down to the Ilottonkey, Auld Ayr is just one lengthen'd tumbling sea ; Then down yo'U hurl, Deil nor ye never rise ! 286 And dash the gnm/ic jaitps tip to the pouring skies. The last line is in itself a Poussin-picture of that Deluge ! The welkin has, as it we're, Ixnit down with its weight; the 'gumlie jaups' and the 'poui-ing skies' are mingled together; it is a world of rain and ruin. — Tn respect of mere clearness and minute fidelity, 290 the Fanners connnendation of his Auld Mare, in phtugli or in cart, may vie with Homer's Smithy of the Cyclops, or y(»king of Priam's Chariot. Nor havi; w(! forgotten stout Jinrn-the-witid and his brawny custojners, inspired by Scotch Drink; but it is needless to multiply examples. One other trait of a much finer sort we select 296 from multitudes of such among his Songs. It gives, in a single line, to the saddest feeilinjj the saddest environment and local habitation : The pale moon is setting beyond the ivhite loave, A nd Time is setting wi' mr, O ; Farewell, false friends ! false lover, farewell ! I'll nae mair trouble them nor thee, (>. This clearness of sight we have called the foundation of all talent; 800 ■ Fabulosus Hj'daspes ! [Carlylc's note. 342 EXPOSITORY COMFOSITIONS. for in fact, unless wc tifti our ohjoct, how slwill w(5 know how to placti or pri/e it, in our undt-rsUinding, our iiimgination, our aflections 'f son Yet it is not in itself, perhaps, a very high excellence ; but capable of l)eing united imlifferertly with the strongest, or with ordinary power. Homer surpasses all men in this quality : but strangely enough, at no great distance below him are Richardson and Defoe. Tt belongs, in truth, to what is called a lively mind ; and gives no 310 sure indication of the higher endowments that may exist along with it. In all the three cases we have mentioned, it is combined with great garrulity ; thoir descriptions are detail('<l, ample, and lovingly exact ; Homer's five bursts through, from time to time, as if by acci- dent ; but Defoe and Richardson have no fire. Rurns, again, is not 815 more distinguished by the clearness than by the impetuous force of his conceptions. Of the strength, the piercing emphasis with which he thought, his emphasis of expression may give a humble but the readiest proof. Who ever uttered sharper sayings than his ; words moi'e memorable, now by their burning vehemence, n<»w by their 320 cool vigour and laconic pith 1 A single phrase depicts a whole sub- ject, a whole scene. We hear of 'a gentleman that derived his patent of nobility direct from Almighty God.* Our Scottish fore- fathers in the battle-field struggled forward ^red-wat-shod:* in this one w(n-d, a full vision of horror and carnage, perhaps too frightfully 325 accurate for Art ! Carlyle'a "Miscellaneous Essays." Dy permission of the. publishers. EXAMINATION OF MODELS. 1. This passage affords an 3xample of scientific exposition of a very simple kind. Note the synopses at the beginning of each section ; in writing of an expository nature, it is a great help to the reader to know from the outset the purport of the discourse. In the first paragraph of section 8, Huxley draws attention to the fact that there is a certain amount of order in the universe. The first sentence contains exp«jsition by iteration; the following sentences, by particulars. Here, as often, exposition by particulars does not differ from inductive proof. Having TERMS AND PROPOSITIONS. 343 hIiowii that order exists, the writer takes np lli<> oilier side, apitarent (lisordor — in other words, chance or aecidi'i it. IIeexi»oiniil:: tlie nieanin;j;of accident in the second paragrai>h. In the third, he exenipliiies accident, and in some measure proves tlio truth of his exposition by showing that what is called accident, is really the result of complex phenomena, each ot which (as all would admit) is a i)art of the regular order of nature. At the end of the section Huxley would doubtless have placed a sunnnary, had not the synopsis at the beginning rendered this needless. The first sentence of section 9 expounds 'law of natiir- ' by definition; the rest of the paragraph is exposition by example. In the second para- graph the term, "law of nature," is made clearer by negative exposition ; in the third paragraph, by illustration or analogy; in the fourth, by analogy and antithesis combined. Section 10 is an exposition of the ])roposition contained in lines 102-104. Here analogy is employed, then iteration (11. 110-118), then example. 2. Hero we have popular expositicm. As usually happens in this sort of exposition, the author has a purpose ])eyond explaining the meaning of the term, — in this case, ho wishes to commend the cultivation of cheer- fulness. Addison begins tho exposition by antithesis, taking mirth which closely approaches cheerfulness, and making tho exact meaning of the latter clearer by drawing attention to points of difierence. Antithesis in thought is often emphasized, as here, by balanced sentence-structure, the opposed ideas being expressed in similarly constructed phrases. In paragraphs 3-6 the exposition is continued by an enumeration of particular instances of cheerfulness. To give order and coherence to these, Addison arranges them under three heads. A judicious partition of the subject is one of the most helpful devices in exposition. So far the exposition has been confined to the term cheerfulness; the meaning of this having been made clear, the subject broadens out into an exposition of how cheerfulness may bo cultivated. The orderly arrangement is maintained ; we have first things destructive of cheer- fulness, then things conducive to it, and finally, in the last paragraph, a conclusion. Tho latter is aptly constructed ; it is at once a summary and an exhortation. The very manifest orderliness of this essay makes it an excellent model for beginners. The student should exemplify for himself "in this ])assago the characteristics of Addison's style mentioned by Johnson (see page 358 of this volume). n,l .( !l - m n 'S' I I ;^44 EXPOSITORY COMF':srfIONS. 3. What words contain tlio stateuiciit of the siilijoct oxpounded in this extract? What relation docs oach of tlirfnlhiwiitg ])assaycs bear to this subject? lines 12-23 ; lines 2:3-3S ; lines 38 r>«) ; lines (55-71. 4. In scientific exposition, the aim is to enable the reader to under- stand something, to apprehend exactly its meaning and limitations. But a writer may also expound a term or proposition, not with the desire of clearing up intellectual difficulties but rather to freshen our perceptions of what we alrejidy understjind, to make us feel the truth we already admit, in order that wo may act upon it. Such exposition is called Persuasion. It is a fact of human nature that mere intellectual convic- tion does not produce action. If we are to act uj)ou our convictit>ns they nmst be vivid and fresh : we must feel them. Persuasion emphasizes tlie importance of a truth (the convincing <tf the intellect by argument may be a preliminary step), and kindles our emotiims in regard to it. Such an aim gives wide literary scope ; the plain style suited to science no longer suffices: clearness is no hmger the one thing needful. Every device that will arrest attention, allure, give vividness, stimulate feeling, is now in order ; but the fundamental element in persuasive power is beyond the reach of art — intense conviction and earnestness on the part of the persuader. Poetry and iiersuasive prose both appeal to the emotions, and hence have certain (puilities in comm<»n — especially amrreleness. Persuasion translates goneial statomonts into particidar ones, uses concrete imagery, deals much in illustration, tries to bring its truths home to the hearer, i.e., to express them as individual facts within the range of the hearer's personal experiences. Sermons are the most familiar form of this sort <)f discourse. The preacli'.'r is usually employed in telling people what they know already, or explaining what they tlioroi ^hly understand. He addresses, therefore, the feelings rather than the interoct. Ho attempts to quicken the perception of great trtiths, to revive the sense of their beauty and importance. These peculiarities are illustrated in the particular piece of exposition before u.s. We note, furthtr, n pnrtit'toit, of the subject. Phillips Brooks takes in succession two phrases of his text and explains them— Hrat, the last phrase "stand before God " in 11. 1-105; second, "the dead, small and great," in 11. 10»>-151. There is no in'^ollectual difficult'' in imtlerstanding the superficial nu'an- ing of the words " sttmd before '^tod " the idea they convey to the mind is given in 11. 1-8. But there is ;■ «•• >at deal implied in them, and it is this inqdication — the 'meaning of tlus picture,' as the writer calls it. TEEMS AND riiOPOSITlON'^. 345 which he proceeds to expound. " You see what tuo words mean," 1. 32 ; by wliat method •;£ exposition has the meaning been made plain '( What relation does the paragraph thus introduced bear to the concluding part of the preceding paragraph (11. 12-32 )? In the next paragraph the writer gives jiarticular examples. What is the basis of the division of these two paragniphs ? At line 106, we pass to the second head ; how is this expounded 1 Th'j next paragraph enlarges on the importance of this fact. 6. The divisions of rhetoric are useful, but it is often diilicult to classify a particular passage ; in reality tlie forms of literature shade into one another. There are some grounds for regarding this passage as an argument, or as a description of Iturus as a poet, but it is rather an exposition, becjiuse Carlyle seems to assume that his reader is familiar with, and feels the excellence of Burns' poetry. His object is to expound the sources of this feeling. Such analysis is one of the chief functions of criticism, — to afford an account and reason of what we think and feel in regard to literature. Some subjects are simple and delinite in their nature, and can be expounded in a clear and formal manner. Others are full of meaning, complex, vague, and do not admit of scientific definiteness ; these require, and give scope to literary power. Of this character is the subject of the fifth model. Note the plan. The subject is introduced and stated in the first para- graph. It is further defined by pointing out the excellences which Burns' poetry does not possess. Burns' merits are then expounded in detail, — in other words by par- ticulars. There are three heads ; lines 30-107 anj devoted to the first ; lines 108-21(> to the second ; lines 217-235 to the third. The second paragraph takes up the lir head, siuceritij, and by obverse iteration makes the existence of this »[uality in Burns more apparent. It is not suHicient that Burns should possess 'sincerity'; 'sincerity' must be shown, to be not trivial, but important (11. 45-50). Again, supposinji' its importance admitted, if it is a mark of distinction, sincerity must be shown to be rare. This is stated in general terms, and then illusti-ated by example in the third paragraph (57-107). The second head is less easily expressed than the first, and in the opening sentence (11. 10'.)- 112) it is stated in two difierent forms. It is then made clearer by contrast. Towards the close of the paragraph (11. 124-141) Carlyle is naturally led to assert the essentially poetical charac- ter of reality, — the actual. This is so important that he devotes the :i tmmtmmmmmmmmmm 346 K::i'OiHTOliY COMPOSITIONS. \m following parivgraph to developing this idea. Point out the methods adopted. In tliis paragraph we do not have stjitements merely for the sake of clearness. What other element is present '( Stsite the subjects of each of the two following paragraphs and indicate their connection with what has gone before. Make an examination of the rhetorical struc- ture of the paragraph begiiming line 191. At line 217 Oarlyle passes over to the third of Burns' merits. He is imable to give this a name ; in truth, he seems to refer not to any one <[uality, but a complex of qualities which produce a sense of genuineness and worth. Accordingly, an enumeration of details follows. *'Of this last excellence" (1. 248), what excellence is referred to? Carlyle proceeds to illustrate by concrete examples. PRACTICE. It may be observed that the titles of expository essays in literature are often much broader than the subject actually discussed ; the essay is on some limited aspect of the theme, but the brevity desirable in titles does not permit this limitation being indicated. The beginner will do well to imitate the masters of the craft in this narrowing of his theme. It is a fundamental mistiike in the essays read at students' societies, to take some theme so extensive that it cannot be mastered by the student, and, were it mastered, could not be effectively treated in the limited time. A student who writes on a single poem of Tennyson is far more likely to benetit himself and interest his hearers than one who writes on Tennyson in general. Practice List: 1. Wisdom and Knowledge. 2. Respective Advantages of City and Country Life for Children. 3. The Greatness of the Anjxlo-S.axon. 4. "The Child is Father of the Man." 11 TERMS AND FliOFUSlTIONH. 347 5. Habit. 6. Dress. 7. The Formation of Dew. 8. Sound. 9. Amusement. 10. Novels. Plan: The Insignificance of the Earth. 1. Man naturally prone to magnify what concerns himself. 2. In the case of the earth, this tendency increased by superficial appearances. 3. Old ideas of the earth in its relations with the rest of the universe. 4. The discovery of Copernicus. 6. The earth as compared with the other planets. 6. The insignificance of the solar system in the universe revealed by modern astronomy. 7. Sense of depression at the result. 8. Man's true greatnesa not material, but moral and intellectual. I It AUG UME^TA TIVE EXFOSITlUNiS. 349 CHAPTER XXVTII. ARGUMENTATIVK EXPOSITIONS. ■ 'i - MODELS. I. — Literature and Science. — Some of you may possibly remem- ber a i»hrjiso of niino whicb has been the object of a good deal of comment ; an observation to the eflfect that in our culture, the aim being to know ourselves and the world, we have, as the means to this end, to know the best which has been thought and said in the world. 6 A man of science, who is also an excellent writer and the very prince of debaters. Professor Huxley, in a discourse at the opening of Sir Josiah Mason's college at Birmingham, laying hold of this phrase, expanded it by quoting some more words of mine, which are these: 'The civilised world is to be regarded as now being, for intellectual lo and spiritual purposes, one great confederation, bound to a joint action and working to a common result; and whose members have for their proper outfit a knowledge of Greek, Roman, and Eastern antiquity, and of one another. Special local and temporary advan- tages being put out of account, that modern nation will in the Intel- is lectual and spiritual sphere make most progress, which most thor- oughly cj'.rries out this progranune.' Now on my phrase, thus enlaigcd, Professor Huxley remarks that when I speak of the above-mentioned knowledge as enabling U'i to know ourselves and the world. I assert literature to contain the 20 materials which suffice for thus making us know ourselves ar d the world. But it is not by any means clear, says he, that after having learnt all which ancient and modem literatures have to tell us, we have laid a sufficiently broad and deep foundation for that criticism of life, that knowledge of ourselves and the world, which constitutes 25 culture. On the contrary. Professor Huxley declares that he finds himself * wholly unable to admit that either nations or individuals will really advance, if their outfit draws nothing from the stores of W 350 EXPOSITORY COMPOSITIONS. physical science. An army without weapons of precision, and with aono particul.ar base of operations, might more ho{)ofully enter upon a campaign on the llhine, than a man, devoid of a knowledge of what physical science has done in the last century, upon a criticism of lif(!.' This shows how needful it is for those who are to discuss any matter together, to have a common understanding ,as to the sense of 35 the terms they employ, — how needful, and how difficult. What Professor Huxley says, implies just the reproach which is so often brought against the study of belles litres, as they are called : that the study is an elegant one, but slight and ineffectual ; si smattering of Gr(?ek and Latin and other ornamental things, of little use ior any 40 one whose object is to gtitat truth, and to be a practical man. So, too, M. Kenan talks of the 'superficial humanism' of a school-course which treats us as if we wertj all g<»ing to be poets, writers, preachers, orators, and he opposes this humanism to positive science;, or the critical search after truth. And there is always a tendency in those 45 who .are remonstrating against the predominance of letters in educa- tion, to understand by letters belles lettres and by belles lettres a superficial humanism, the opposite of science or true knowledge. But when we talk of knowing Greek and Roman antiquity, for instance, which is the knowledge people have called the humanities, 50 I for my part mean a knowledge which is something more than a superficial humanism, mainly decorative. *I call all teaching scien- tific,* says Wolf, the critic of Homer, ' which is systematically laid out and followed up to its original sources. For examph^: a knowledge of classical antiquity is scientific when the remains of classical 55 antiquity are correctly studied in the original languages.' There can be no doubt that Wolf is perfectly right; that all learning is scientific which is systematically laid out and followed up to its original sources, and that a genuine humanism is scientific. When I speak of knowing Greek and Roman antiquity, therefore, (was a help to knowing ourselves and the world, I mean more than a knowledge of so much vocabulary, so much graimnar, so many por- tions of authors in tlie Greek and Latin languages, 1 mean knowing the Greeks and Romans, and tluiir life and genius, and what they were and did in the world; what we get from them, and what is its ARGUMENTATIVE EXPOSITIONS. 351 value. That, at least, is the ideal ; and when we talk of endeavour- 65 ing to know Greek and Roman antiquity, as a help to knowing our- selves and the world, we mean endeavouring so to know them as to satisfy this ideal, however much we may still fall short of it. The same also as to knowing our own and other modern nations, with the like aim of getting to understand ourselves and the world. ?« To know the best that has been thought and said by the modern nations, is to know, says Professor Huxley, *only what modern literatures have to tell us; it is the criticism of life contained in modem literature.' And yet 'the distinctive character of our times,' he urges, Mies in the vast and constantly increasing part which is 75 played by natural knowledge.* And how, therefore, can a man, devoid of knowledge of what physical science has done in the last century, enter hopefully upon a criticism of motlern life? Let us, I say, be agreed about the meaning of the terms we are using. I talk of knowing the best which has been thought and so uttered in the world ; Professor Huxley says this means knowing literature. Literature is a large word ; it may mean everything written with letters or printed in a book. Euclid's Elements and Newton's Principia are thus literature. All knowledge that reaches us through books is literature. But by literature Professor Huxley 85 means belles lettres. He means to make me say, that knowing the best which has been thought and said by the modern nations is knowing their belles lettres and no more. And this is no sufficient equipment, he argues, for a criticism of modern life. But as I do not mean, by knowing ancient Rome, knowing merely more or less of oo Latin belles lettres^ and taking no account of Rome's niilitary, and political, and legal, and administrative work in the world; and as, by knowing ancient Greece, I understand knowing her as the giver of Greek art, and the guide to a free and right use of reason and to scientific method, and the founder of our mathematics and physics 95 and astronomy and biology, — I understand knowing her as all this, and not merely knowing certain Greek poems, and histories, and treatises, and speeches, — so as to the knowledge of modern nations also. By knowing mixlern nations, I mean not merely knowing their belles lettres^ but knowing also what has been done by such men loo 352 EXPOSITORY COMPOSITIONS. ■I ! as Copernicus, Galileo, Newton, Darwin. 'Our ancestors learned,' says Professor Huxley, * that the earth is the centre of the visible universe, and that man is the cynosure of things terrestrial, and more especially was it inculcated that the course of nature had no fixed 105 order, but that it could be, and constantly was, altered.' 'But for us now,' continues Professor Huxley, 'the notions of the beginning and the end of the W(jrld entertained by our forefathers are no longer credible. It is very certain that the earth is not the chief bofly in the material universe, and that the woi-ld is not sulxjrdinated to man's House. It is even more certain that nature is the expression of a definite order, with which nothing inttirferes.' 'And yet,' he cries, 'the purely classical education advocated by the representatives of the humanists in our day gives no inkling of all this ! ' In due place and time I will just touch upon that vexed question 115 of classical education; Imt at present the question is as to what is meant by kn«>wiug the best which modern nations have thought and said. It is not knowing their belles leltres merely which is meant. To know Italian belles lettres is not to know Italy, and to know English belles lettres is not to know England. Into knowing Italy 120 and England there comes a great deal more, Galileo and Newton amongst it. The reproach of being a superficial humanism, a tinc- ture of belles lettres, may attach rightly enough to some other disciplines; but to the particular discipline recommended when I proposed knowing the best that has been thought and said in the 125 world, it does not apply. In that best I certainly include what in modern times has been thought and said by the great observers and knowers of nature. There is, therefore, really no question between Professor Huxley and me as to whether knowing the great results of the m(Klern 130 scientific study of *iature is not required as a part of our culture, as well as knowing the products of literature and art. But to follow the processes by which those results are readied, ought, say the friends of physical science, to be made the staple of education for the bulk of mankind. And heni there does arise a question between 135 those whom Professor Huxley calls with playful sarcasm 'the Levites of culture,* and those whom the poor humanist is sometimes apt to regard as its Nebuchadnezzars. A Hii UMEN TA TI VE EXPOSl TI< fNS. 353 The great results of the Hcieutifiu investigation of nature we are agreed upon knowing, l)ut how much of our study are we hound to give to the processes by wliich those results are reached 1 The no results have their visible bearing on hunuin life. But all the processes, too, all the items of fact, by which those results are reached and established, are interesting. All knowledge is interest- ing to a wise man, and the knowledge of nature is interesting to all men. It is very interesting to know, that, from the albuminous 145 white of the egg, the chick in the egg gets the materials for its flesh, bones, blood, and feathers; while, from the fatty yolk of the egg, it gets the heat and energy which enal)le it at length to break its shell and begin the world. It is less interesting, perhaps, but still it is interesting, to know that when a taper burns, the wax is converted i5o into carbonic acid and water. Moreover, it is quite true that the habit of dealing with facts, which is given by the study of nature, is, as the friends of physical science praise it for being, an excellent discipline. The appeal, in the study of nature, is constantly to observation and experiment; not only is it said that the thing is so, 155 but we can be made to see that it is so. Not t)nly (lo<!s a man tell us that when a taper burns the wax is converted into carbonic aci<l and water, as a man may tell us, if he likes, that Charon is punting his ferry-lioat on the river Styx, or that Victor Hugo is a sublime poet, or Mr. Gladstone the most admirable of statesmen; but weieo are made to s(^e that the conversion into carbonic acid and water does actually happen. This reality of natural knowledge it is, which makes the friends of physical science contrast it, as a knowledge of things, with the humanist's knowledge, which is, say they, a know- ledge of words. And hence Professor Huxley is moved to lay it 165 down that, 'for the purpose of attaining real culture, an exclusively scientific education is at least as effectual as an exclusively literary education.' And a certain President of the Section for Mechanical Science in the British Association is, in Scripture phrase, 'very bold,' and declares that if a man, in his mental training, 'has sub- 170 stituted literature and history for natural science, he has chosen the less useful alternative.' But whether we go these lengths or not, we nmst all admit that in natural science the habit gained of dealing 354 EXFoaiTORY COMFOISlfloNS. with facts is a most valuable discipline, and that every unt; sliould 176 have some experience of it. More than this, however, is demanded by the reformers. It is proposed to make the training in natural science the main part of education, for the great majority of mankind at any rate. And here, I confess, I part company with the friends of physical science, 180 with whom up to this point I have been agreeing. Matthew Arnold's " DucoumeH in America" By permisgion of the publisheri. II.— A Popular Fallacy: that Home is Home be it never so Homely. — Homes tiiere are, we are sure, that are no homes: the home of the very poor man, and another which we shall speak to presently. Crowded places of cheap entertainment, and the benches of alehouses if they c(mld speak, might bear mournful testimony to 6 the first. To them the very poor man resorts for an image of the home which he cannot find at home. For a starved grate, and a scanty firing that is not enough to keep alive the natural heat in the fingers of so many shivering children with their mother, he finds in the depth of winter always a blazing hearth, and a hob to warm his 10 pittance of beer by. Instead of the clamours of a wife, made gaunt by famishing, he meets with a cheerful attendance beyond the merits of the trifle which he can afford to spend. He has companions which his home denies him, for the very poor man has no visitors. He can look into the goings on of the world and .speak a little to 16 politics. At home there are no politics stirring, but the domestic. All interests, real or imaginary, all topics that should expand the mind of man, and connect him to a sympathy with general existence, are crushed in the absorbing consideration of f(M)d to be obtain(Hl for the family. Beyond the price of bread, news is senseless and imperti- '20 nent. At home there is no larder. Here there is at least a show of plenty; and while he cooks his lean scrap of butcher's meat before the common bars, or munches his humbler cold viands, his relishing bread and cheese with an onion, in a corner, where no one reflects upon hi.", poverty, lie h.as a sight of the substantial joint providing for the land- •>r, lord and his family. Ho takes an interest in the dressing of it; and while he assists in removing the trivet from the fire, ho feels that there is such a thing as beef and cabbage, which he was beginning A Uli UMENTA TIVE DXI'OSITIONS. 86ft to furj^ct ut. liomo. All this timo lio'dcst^rts his wifo and chihh-en. liut what witV, jukI what (tiiildrcn? ]*r«i,sjK>r«)U.s un'ii who ohjt'ct to tliis desertion, inuige to themselves some clean contented family 3o like tliat which they go home to. But l(K)k at the countenance of the jMM)r wives who follow and persecute their go<Kl-man to the door of the puhlic-house which lie is ahout to enter, when something like shame would restrain him, if stronger misery did not induce him to pass the threshold. That face, ground hy want, in which every ari cheerful, every conversable lineament has lieen long effaced )>y misery, — is that a face to stay at home with ? is it more a woman or a wild cat? alas! it is the face of the wife of his youth, that once smiled upon him. It can smile no longer. What comforts can it share? what burthens can it lighten? Oh, 'tis a fine thing to talk of 4o the humble meal shared together! But what if thtsre be no bread in the cupboard ? The innocent prattle of his children takes out the sting of a man's poverty. But the children of the very poor d> not prattle. It is none of the least frightful features in that condition, that there is no childishness in its dwellings. Poor people, said a 45 sensil)le old nurse to us once, do not })ring up tlunr children: they drag them up. The little careless darling of the wealthier nurseiy, in their ln>vel is transformed betinuis into a premature reflecting pers<m. No one has time to dandle it, no one thinks it worth while to coax it, to soothe it, to toss it up and down, to humour it. There 5o is none to kiss away its tears. If it cries, it can only l)e l)eaten. It has ])een pnittily said that "a babe is fed with milk and praise." But the aliment of this poor babe was thin, unnourishing; the return to its little bal)y-tricks, and efforts to engage attenticjn, ])itter, cease- less objurgati(m. It never had a toy or knew what a coral meant. 65 It grew up without the lullaby of nurses, it was a stranger to the patient fondle, the hushing caress, the attracting novelty, the costlier plaything, or the cheaper off-hand contrivance to divert the child; the prattled nonsense (best sense to it), the wise impertinences, the wholesome lies, the apt story interposed, that puts a stop to presentee) sufferings, and awakens the passions of young wonder. It was never sung to — no one awr told to it a tale of the nursery. It was dragged up, to live or to die as it happened. It had no young dreams. It V am E.\ P(fSITOIi Y COM POSITIONS. broke at oiico into tho iron rt-iilitJrs of life. A iliiM «'xist.s not. for (isthu very poor as any ohjrclot' (liilliaiirr; it is only aiiollinr mouth to be fed, a pair of little liands to lie bctinu's inured to labour. It is the rival, till it can bo th(j co-operator, f(>r food with the jmrent. It is never his mirth, his diversion, liis solace; it nc^ver makes him young again, with recalling his young tinn's. The children of the 70 very poor have no young times. It makes the very heart to bleed to ov«'rhear the casual street-talk Ix'tween a j)oor woman and her little girl, a woman of the Iw^tter sort of p<M>r, in a condition rather al)ove the sfjualid beings which we have been c<»ntemj>lating. It is not of toys, of nursery Ixxtks, of summer liolidays (fitting that age); 75 of the promised sight, or play; ttf praisc^d sullieieney at school. It is of mangling and clear-starching, of the price of coals, or of potatoes. The questions of the child, that should be the very outpourings of curiosity in idleness, are marked with forecast and melancholy pro- vidence. It has come to be a woman, before it was a child. It has a) learned to go to market; it chaffei-s, it haggles, it envies, it murmurs ; it is knowing, acute, sharpen<Ml ; it never pi-attles. Had we not reason to say, that the home of the very juM»r is no honu;? There is yet another home, which we are constrained todeny to])e one. It has a lardcir, which th(5 home of th(5 poor man wants; its 85 fireside C()nveniences, of which tin? poor dream not. But with all this, it is no home. It is — the; house of the* man that is infested with miiny visitors. May we be branded for tlu^ veriest churl, if we deny our lu^art to the many noble-h(^arted fi-iends that at times (exchange their dwelling for our poor ro(»f! It is not of gu«"sts that we com- 90 plain, but of endless, purposelcvss visitants; dropp(^rs-in, as they are called. We sometimes won(l<!r from what sky they fall. It is the very error of the position of our lodging ; its horoscopy was ill-calcu- lated, being just situate in a medium — a plaguy suburban mid- space — fitted to catch idlers from town or country. \V«} are older 95 than we were;, and age is easily put out of its way. We have fewer sands in our glass to reckon upon, and we cannot brook to see tluini drop in endlessly succeeding impertinences. At our time of life to be alone sometimes is ,*is needful as sleep. It is the refi-eshiiig sleep of the day. The growing infirmities of age manif<'st theniselves in ABGUMENTATIVE EXPOSITIONS. 367 I nothing more strongly tlmn in an invpterato dislike of interruption, loo The thing ■which we are tl<»ing, we wish to he permitted to do. We have neither nuich kn<»wledge nor devices ; but there are fewer in the jdace to which we hasten. We are not willingly j>ut out of our way, even at a gain«i of nine-pins. While youth was, we had vast rever- sions in time? futun* ; we are reduced to a })res«'nt pittanc«', and 105 obliged to econonii/.e in that articile. We bleed away our nutnients now as hardly as our ducats. We cannot bear to have our thin wanlrobe eaten and fretted into by moths. W(( are willing to barU^r our good time with a friend, who gives us in exchange his own. Herein is the distinction between the genuine guest and the visitant, no This latter takes your good time, and gives }'ou his bad in exchange. The guest is domestic to you as your gcMKl cat, or household bird; the visitant is your fly, that flaps in at your window and out again, leaving nothing Imt a sense of disturbance and victuals spoiled. The inferior functions of life begin to move heavily. We cannot concoct 116 our food with interruptions. Our chief meal, to be nutritive, must be s<ditary. With difliculty we can eat before a guest; and never understand what the relish of public feasting meant. Meats have no sajxtr, nor <lig«'stion fair })lay in a crowd. The unexpected coming- in of a visitant stops the machine. There is a punctual generation lao who time their calls to the precise commencement of your dining- hour — not to eat — but to see you eat. Our knife and fork drop instinctively, and we feel that we have swallowed our latest morsel. Others again show their genius, as we have said, in knocking the moment you have just sat down to a book. They have a peculiar 126 compassionating sneer, with which they "hope that they do not interrupt your studies." Though they flutter otf the next moment, to carry thcnr impertinences to the nearest student that they can call their friend, the tone of the book is spoiled ; we shut the leaves, and, with Dant(\'s hiver.s, read no more that day. It were well if 130 the effect of intrusion were simply co-extensive with its presence ; but it mars all the good hours afterwards. These scratches in appear- ance leave an orifice that closes not hastily. "It is a prostitution of the bravery of friendship," says worthy Bishop Taylor, "to spend it upon impertinent people, who are, it may be, loads to their families, 186 ' 358 EXPOSITORY COMPOSITIONS. but can never ease my lojwls." This i.s the secret of their jTj.'icIdin^'fi, their visits, and morninj» calls. Vhey too liave homes, which are — no homes. Charles Lamb's " Essays of EUa." III. — Addison as a Prose Writer. — Addison is now to be con- sidered as a critic; a name which tli«i present generation is scarcely wilHng to allow him. His criticism is condernntul as tentative or experimental, rather than scientific ; and ?ie is considered as decid- 6 ing by taste rather than l)y principles. It is not uncommon, for those who have grown wise by the labour of others, to add a little of their own, and overlook tlieir masters. Addison is now despised by some who, perhaps, would never have seen his defects, but by the lights which he afforded them. That he 10 always wrote as he would think it necessary to write now, cannot be affirmed ; his instructions were such as the character of his readers made proper. That gener«l knowledge which now circulates in com- mon talk, was in his tvno rarely to be found. Men not professing learning were not ashamed of ignora,nco ; and, in the female world, 15 any acquaintance with books was distinguished only to be censured. His purpose was to infuse literary curiosity, by gentle and unsus- pected conveyance, into the gay, the idle, and the wealthy ; he therefore presented knowledge in the most alluring form, not lofty and auritere, but accessible and familiar. When ho showed them 20 their defects, he showed them, likewise, that they might easily be supplied. His attempt succeeded ; infjuiry was awakened, and com- prehension expanded. An emulation of intellectual elegance was excit(»d, and, from his time to our own, life has been gradually ex.i'ted, and conversation purified and enlarged. zr, Dryden had, not many years before, scattered criticism over his prefaces with very little parsimony; but, though he sometimes c(m- descHMided to be familiar, his manntu- was in g«meral too schola.stic for those who had yet their ruf'iments to l«>arn, and found it not easy to understand their master. His observations w«>re framed rather so for those that were learning to write than for those that read only to talk. An mstniotor like Addison was nc wanting, whose remarks being ■ ARGUMENTATIVE EXPOSITIONS. m superficial, mifjiifc ])G easily un(l(irstood, and V)eing just, might prepaie the mind for nun-e attaiunuuits. Had he presented Paradise Lo'>t to the public with all the pomp of system and severity of sciencje, 36 the criticism would, perhaps, have heeji admired, and the poem still have been neglected ; l)ut, by th • blandishments of gentleness and facility, he has made Milton an universal favourite, with whom readers of every class think it necessary to ])e pleased. He descended, now and then, to lower disquisitions; and, by a 40 serious display of the beauties of Chevy-Chase exposed himself to the ridicule of WagstaflFe, who bestowed a like j .ompous character on Tom Thumb, and to the contempt of Dennis, who, considering the fundamental position of his criticism, that Chevy-Chase pleases, and ought to please, becau.se it is natural, observ^es, "that there is a way 45 of deviating from nature, by bombast or tumour, which soars above nature, and enlarges images beyond their real bulk ; by affectation, which forsakes nature in quest of something unsuitable; and by imbecility, which degrades na.ture by faintness and diminution, by obscuring its appearances, and v^eakening its effects." In Chevy- 60 Chase there is not much of either ])()mbast or affectation ; but there is chill and lii>'less imbecility. The story cannot possibly be told in a manner tha.t ohall in.ake loss impression on the mind. Bef.jre the profound observers of the present race repose too securely on the consciousness of their superiority to Addison, let 65 them coasider his Remarks on Ovid, in which may be found speci- mens of criticism sufficiently subtle and refined; let them peruse, likewise, his essa3's on Wit, and on I'le Pleasures of Imagination, in which he founds art on the base of nature, and draws the principles of invention from dispositions inherent in the mind of man with 60 skill and elegance, such as his contemners will not easily attain. As a describer of life and manners, he must be allowed to stand, perhaps, the first of the first rank. His humour whi<;li, a« Steele observes, is peculiar to himself, is so happily diffused as to give the grace of novelty to domestic scenes and daily occurrences. He never 66 "outsteps the modesty of nature," nor raises merriment or w(«ider by the violation of truth. His figures neither divert by distortion, nor amaze by aggravation. He copies life with so much fidel- m ! rr 360 EXPOSITORY COMPOSITIONS. ity, that he can be hardly said to invent ; yot liis exhibitions have 70 an air so much original, that it is dilUcult to supj)ose them not merely the product of imagination. As a teacher of wisdom, he may be confidently followed. His religion has nothing in it enthusiastic or superstitious ; he appears neither weakly credulous, n()r wantonly sceptical ; his morality is 76 mother dangerously lax, nor impracticably rigid. All the enchant- ment of fancy, and all the cogency of argument, are employed to recommend to the reader his real interest, the care of pleasing the Author of his being. Truth is shown sometimes as the phantom of a vision; sometimes appears half- veiled in an allegory; sometimes 80 attracts regard in the robes of fancy, and sometimes stej)s forth in the confidence of reason. She wears a thousand dresses, and in all is pleasing. " Mille habet ornatus, mille decenter habet." His prose is the model of the middle style ; on grave subjects not 86 formal, on light occasions not grovelling, pure without scrupulosity, and exact without apparent elaboration; always equable, and always easy, without glowing words or pointed sent(mc<?s. Addison never deviates from his track to snatch a grace; lie se(^ks no ambitious ornaments, and tries no hazardous innovations. His page is always 00 luminous, but never blazes in unexpected splendour. It was, apparently, his principal endeavour to avoid all harshness and severity of diction; he is, therefore, sometimes verbose in his transitions and connexions, nd sometimes descends too much to the language of conversation; yet if his language had been less idioma- dstical, it might have lost somewhat of its genuine Anglicism. What he attempted, he performed ; he is never feeble and he di<l not wish to be energetic ; he is never rapid, and he never stagnates. His sentences have neither studied amplitude, nor afr(;cted brevity ; his perifxls, though not diligently round(;d, are voluble and easy. Who- 100 ever wishes to attain an English style, familiar but not coarse, and elegant but not ostentatious, must give his days and nights to the volumes of Addison. Juhmon'8 "Lives of the. Poett." A EG UMENTA TIVE EXPOSITIONS. 361 IV.— The Best Method of Dealing: with the Americans.— Sir, if I were Cc-ipable oi engaging you to an equal attention, I would state, that, as far as T am capable of discerning, there are but three ways of proceeding relative t<> this stubl)orn Spirit, which prevails in your Colonics, and disturbs your Government. These are — To change that Si)ifit, .is inconvenient, by removing the Causes. To 6 prosecute it as criminal. Or, to comply witli it as necessary. I would not be guilty of an imperfect enumeration; I can think of but these three. Another has indeed In'en .started, that of giving up the Colonies; but it met so slight a reception, that I do not think my- self obliged to dwell a great while upon it. It is nothing but a little lo sally of anger; like the forwardness of peevish children; who, when they cannot get all they would have, are resolved to take nothing. The first of these plans, to change the Spirit as inconvenient, by removing the causes, I think is the most like a systematic proceeding. It is radical in its principle; but it is attended with great difficulties, 15 some of them little short, as I c(»nceive, of impossibilities. This will appear by examining into the Plans which have been proposed. As the growing population in the Colonies is evidently one cause of their resistance, it was last session mentioned in both Houses, by men of weight, and received not without applause, that in order to 20 check this evil, it would be proper f(tr the Crown to make no further grants <»f land. But to this scheme there are two objections. The first, ihnt there is already so much un.settled land in private hands, as to afford r >om f(tr an immense future population, although the Crown not oTily withheld its grants, but annihilated its soil. If this 26 be tlu^ case, then the only efifect v.-r this avarice of desolation, this hoarding of a royal wilderne.ss, would V)e to raise the value of the possessions in the hands of the j^reat private monopolists, without any adeijuate check to the growing a<*d alarming mischief of popu- lation. IP But if you stopped your grants, what would be the consequence? Tlie people would occupy without grants. They have already so occupied in many places. You cannot .''.t.ation garrisons in every part of these deserts. If you drive the people from one place, they will carry on their annual tillajfe, and remove with their flocks andac Hi- I i 362 EXPOSITOR Y COMPOSITIONS. herds to iuiuttior. Many of tlio jmople in th(3 back settlements are already little attached to particular situations. Already they have topped the Appalachian mountains. From thence t\wy behold before them an immense ])lain, one vjist, rich, level m(;ado\v ; a square of 40 five hundred miles. Over this they would wander without a possi- bility of restraint ; they would change their manners with the habits of their life ; would soon forget a government by which they were disowned; would become Hordes of English Tartars; and pouring down upon your unfortified fronti m*s a fierceand irresistiblecavalry, l)e- 46 come masters of your Governors and your Counsellors, your collectors, and c<jmptrollers, and of all the Slaves that adhered to them. Such would, and, in no long time, must be, the effect of attempting to forbid as a crime, and to suppress as an evil, the Command and Blessing of Providence, Encrease and Multiply. Such would l)e the 60 happy result of the endeavour to keep as a lair of wild beasts, that earth, which (Jod, by an express Charter, has given to the children of men. Far different, and surely, nmch wiser, has been our policy hitherto. Hitherto we have invited our people, by every kind of bounty, to fixed establishments. We have invited the husbandman 55 to look to authority for his title. Wo have taught him piously to believe in thj mysterious virtue of wax and parchment. We have thrown each tract of land, as it was peopled, into districts ; that the ruling power should never be wholly out of sight. We have settled all we c<^uld ; and we have carefully attended every settlement with 60 government. Adhering, Sir, as I do, to this policy, as well as for the reasons I have just given, I think this new project of hedging-in population to })e neither prudent nor practicable. To impt)verish the Colonies in general, and in particular to arrest ssthe noble course of tlieir marine enterprises, would be a -nore easy task. I freely c<mfess it. We have shown a dispositi<m to a system of this kind ; a disposition even to continue the riistraint after the oflTence ; looking on ourselves as rivals to our Colonies, and persujwled that of course we must gain all that they shall lose. Much mischief 70 we may certainly do. The power inadequate to all other things is often more than surtici(!nt for this. T do not Jook on the direct and in I A R( / U ME NT A Tl VE EXPOSITIONS. 363 •e •e iinmediato power of tlio Colonies to resist our violence as very 'or- midable. In this, 1iow(!V(M', I may bo mistaken. But when I con- sider, that wo havo Odonies for no purpose but to be serviceable to us, it seems to my poor iinderstandiiig a little preposterous, to make "^5 them unserviceable, in ord(!r to keep them obedient. It is, in truth, nothing more than the old, and, as I thought, exploded problem of tyranny, which proposes to b»!ggar its subjects into submission. But reraembijr, when yim havo completed your system of impoverishment, that nature still proceeds in her ordinary course ; that discontent so will increase with misery ; and that there are critical moments in the fortune of all states, when they who are too weak to contribute to your pr<»sperity, may be strong enough to complete your ruin. Spol'uilis anna super svnt. The temper and character which prevail in our Colonies, are, I am 86 afraid, unalterable by any human art. We cannot, I fear, falsify the })edigree of this fierce people, and persuade them that they are not sprung from a nation in whose veins the blood of freedom circu- lates. The language in which they would hear you tell them this tale would detect the imposition ; your speech would betray you. oo An Englishman is the unfittest person on earth, to argue another Englishman into slavery. T think it is nearly as little in our power to change their republican Religion, as their free descent; or to substitute the Roman Catholic, as a penalty ; or the Church of England, as an improvement. The 95 mode of in(|uisition and dragooning is going out of fashion in the Old World; and T should not C(»nfi(le much in their etKca(!y in the New. The education of the Americans is also on the same unalterable bottom with their religion. You cannot persuade them to burn their books of curious science ; to banish their lawyers frou. their courts loo of laws; or to quench the lights of their assendilies, by refusing to choose those persons who are best read in their })rivilegt's. It would be no less in)practical)lo to think of wholly annihilating tho popular assembliiis, in which these lawyers sit. The army, by which wf must govern in their place, would be far more chargeable to us ; not (juite io5 so effectual ; and perhaps, in the i^xd, full as diUicult to bo kept in ol)e(.lience. Iff # if ill IP 1 i ■*"■'' 1 3 1: Ihi w S64 EXPOSITOR Y COMPiH^JTIONS. With regard to the high aristocratic spirit of Virginia and the Southern Colonies, it has been proposed, I know, to reduce it, by 110 declaring a general enfranchisement of their slaves. This project has had its advocates and panegyrists ; yet T nev(!r could argue my- self into any opinion 0/ it. Slaves ari^ often much attached to their masters. A general wild oflTer of librcty wouhl not always be accepted. History furnishes few instances of it. It is sometimes as 116 hard to persucado slaves to be free, as it is to compel freemen to be slaves; and in this auspicious scheme, we should have both these pleasing tasks on our hands at once. But when wo talk of enfran- chisement, do we not perceive that the American master may enfran- chise too; and arm servile hands in defence of freedom 1 A measure 120 to wliich other people have had recourse luuro than once, and not without success, in a desj»((rate situaticjn of their affairs. Slaves as these unfortunate black people are, and dull as all men are from slavery, must th«y not a little suspect the ofier of freedom from that very nation which has s<»ld them to their })resent masters? 136 from tliat nation, o)ie of whose causes t»f (juarrel with those masters is tiieir refusal to d(Nal any more in that inhuman traflic? An offer of fnsedom from Eii;,'laiid wouhl oomo rather oddly, shipped to them in an African vessel, which is refust^d an entry into the ports of Virj^inia or Carolina, witli a carijo of three hundred Antjola negroes. 130 It would be curious to st»e the Guiiw^a captain attempt iug at the same instant to publish his pn>cl»matioii ni liljcrty, and to advertise his sale of slaves. But let us suppose all t^efw mitral difficulties got over. The Ocean remains. You cannot pump this dry; and ;is ioiiij as it. continues in 135 its present bed, so long all tine causes which weaken authority by distan«!e will continue. ' Yetjods, anmhi'ato, hut xftacr. timl time, And make two lovi-VH hapjty!^ — was a pious and ]>assiunate prayer; J»ut just as reasoiial)le as mmiy of the serious wislus of wry grave and solenm politicians. 140 If then, Sir, it seems almost desperate to tliink of any alterative course, for chan,;j;ing the moral causes, and not tjuite easy t.o remove the natural, which produce prejudices irroc<mcila))le to the late exercise of our authority; but that the spirit infallibly will continue; 1 ARG VMENTA TIVE EXPOSITIONS. 365 and, continuing, will pnHluce such effects as now emliarniss us ; the second mode under consideration is, to prosecute that spirit in its i« overt acts, as criminal. At this proposition 1 must pause a moment. The thing seems a great deal too big for my ideas of jurisprudence. It should seem to my way of conceiving such matters, that there is a very wide differ- ence in reason and policy, between the nuMle of proceeding on the 150 irregular conduct of scattered individuals, or even of bands of men, who disturb order within the state, and the civil dissensions which may, from time to time, on great (juestions, .agitate the several com- munities which compose a great Empire. It looks U\ me to be narrow and pedantic, to apply the ortlinary ideas of criminal justice to this 156 great public contest. I do not know the method of drawing up an indictment against a whole p(M)ple. I cannot insult and ridicule the feeling of millions of my fellow-creatures, as Sir Edward Coke insulted one excellent individual (Sir Walter Rawleigh) at the bar. I hope I am not ripe to pass sentence on the gravest public Inxlies, intrusted 160 with magistracies of gr(^at authority and dignity, and charged with the safety of their fellow-citizens upon the very same title that I am. I really think, that for wise men, this is not judicious ; for sober men, not decent; for minds tinctured with humanity, not mild and merciful. 165 Perhaps, Sir, I am mistaken in my idea of an Empire, as distin- guished from a single State or Kingdom. But my idea of it is this; tliHt an Empire is the aggregate of many States under one common hejul ; whether this head be a monarch, or a presiding republic. It d(M'M, in Mueh constitutions, frequently happen (and nothing but theiTo dismal, cold, dead uniformity of servitude can prevent its happen- ing) that the subordinate parts have many local privileges and im- munities. B<'twe«'n these privilegcvs and the supi-enie eoniin(m authority the linc^ nuiy be extrenuOy nice. Of course; disputes, often, too, V(M"y bitt(?r disputes, and nmch ill bloctd, will arxse. But though 176 every privilege is an exemption (in the cas(') from the ordinary exer- cise; of the supreme authority, it is no denial of it. The claim of a privilege seems rather, ex vi termini, to imply a superior power. For to talk of the privileges of a State, or of a person, who has no supe- II I .: i* i i; I 366 EXPOSITORY COMPOSITIONS. 180 rior, is hardly any better than speaking nonsense. Now, in such unfortunate quarrels ani<.tng the cumponent parts of a great political union of communities, I can scarcely conceive anything more com- pletely imprudent, than f(jr the Head of the Empire to insist, that, if any privilege is pleaded against his will, or his Jicts, his whole 185 authority is denied ; instantly to proclaim rebellion, to beat to arras, and ti^ put the offending provinces under the ban. Will not this. Sir, very soon teach the provinces to make no distinctions on their part ? Will it not teach them that the Government, against which a claim of Liberty is tantamount to high-treason, is a Government 190 to which submission is equivalent to slavery 1 It may not always be quite convenient to impress dependent communities with such an idea. We are, indeed, in all disputes with the Colonies, by the necessity of things, the judge. It is true. Sir. B'lt I conf(\ss that the diar- ies acter of judge in my own cause is a thing that frightens me. Instead of filling me with pride, I am exceedingly humbled by it. I cannot proceed with a stern, assured, judicial confidence, until I find myself in something more like a judicial character. I must have these hesitations as long as I am compelled to recollect, that, in my little 200 reading upon such contests as these, the sense of mankind litis, at least, as often decided against the superior as the subordinate power. Sir, let me add too, that the opinion of my having some abstract right in my favour, would not put me much at my ease in passing sentence ; unless I could be sure that there were no rights which, in 206 their exercise under certain circumstances, were not the most odious of all wrongs, and the most vexatious of all injustice. Sir, these considerations have great weight with me, when I find things so circumstanced, that I see the same party, at once a civil litigant against me in point of right ; and a culprit before me, while I sit as 210 a criminal judge, on acts of his, whose moral quality is to be decided upon the merits of that very litigation. Men are every now and then put, by the complexity of human affairs, into strange situa- tions ; but Justice is the same, let the Judge be in what situation he will. 216 There is. Sir, also a circumstance which convinces rae, that this ARGUMENTATIVE EXPOSITIONS. 367 ? mode of criminal proceeding is not (at letist in tlie present stage of our contest) altogether expedient ; which is nothing less than the conduct of those very persons who have seemed to adopt that mode, by lately declaring a rebellion in Massachusetts Bay, as they had formerly addressed to have Traitors brought hither, under an Act of 220 Henry the Eighth, for Trial. For though rebellion is declared, it is not proceeded against as such ; nor have any steps been taken towards the apprehension or conviction of any individual offender, either on our lute or our former address ; but modes of public coer- cion have been adopted, and such as have much more resemblance to 225 a sort of qualified hostility towards an independent power than the punishment of rebellious subjects. All this seems rather inconsist- ent; but it shows how difficult it is to apply these juridical ideas to our present case. In this situation, let us seriously and coolly ponder. What is it 230 we have got by all our menaces, which have been many and fero- cious 1 What advantage have we derived from the penal laws we have passed, and which, for the time, have been severe and numer- ous? What advances have we made towards our object, by the sending of a force, which, by land and sea, is no contemptible 235 strength 1 Has the disorder abated 1 Nothing less. — When I see things in this situation, after such confident hopes, bold promises, and active exertions, I cannot, for my life, avoid a suspicion, that the plan itself is not correctly right. If, then, the removal of the causes of this Spirit of American 240 Liberty be, for the greater part, or rather entirely, impracticable ; if the ideas of Criminal Process be inapplicable, or if applicable, are in the highest degree inexpedient ; what way yet remains ? No way is open, but the third and last — to comply with the American Spirit as necessary ; or, if you please, to submit to it as a necessary Evil. 245 If we adopt this mode ; if we mean to conciliate and concede ; let us see of what nature the concession ought to be : to ascertain the nature of our concession we must look at their complaint. The Colonies complain that they have not the characteristic Mark and Seal of British Freedom. They complain that they are taxed in a 250 Parliament in which they are not represented. If you mean to mm.-'' 'IV :}(J8 EXPOSITORY COMPOSITIONS. satisfy them at all, you must satisfy them with regard to this complaint. If you mean to please any people, you must give them the boon which they ask ; not what you may think better for them, but of a 255 kind totally different. Such an act may be a wise regulation, but it is no concession : whereas our present theme is the motle of giving satisfaction. Sir, I think you must perceive that I am resolved this day to have nothing at all to do with the (jucistion of the right of taxation. 2C<> Some gentlemen startle —but it is true ; I put it totally out of the question. It is less than nothing in my consideration. I do not indeed wonder, nor will you, Sir, that gentlemen of profound learn- ing are fond of displaying it on this profound subject. But my consideration is narrow, confined, and wholly limited to the policy of 265 the question. I do not examine, whether the giving away a man's money be a power excepted and reserved out of the general trust of government ; and how far all mankind, in all forms of Polity, are entitled to an exercise of that Right by the Charter of Nature. Or whether, on the contrary, a Right of Taxation is necessarily involved 270 in the general principle of Legislation, and inseparable from the ordinary Supreme Power. These are deep questions, where great names militate against each other ; where reason is perplexed ; and an appeal to authorities only thickens the confusion. For high and reverend authorities lift up their heads on both sides ; and there is 275 no sure footing in the middle. This point is the gi'eai Scrbonian bog, Bettvixt Damiata and Mount Casius old, Where armies whole have sunk. I do not intend to be overwhelmed in that lx)g, though in such respectable company. The questitm with me is, not whether you have a right to render your people miserable ; but whether it is 230 not your interest to make them happy. It is not what a lawyer tells me I inai/ do; but what humanity, reason, and justice tells me I ought to do. Is a politic act the worse for being a generous one ? Is no concession proper but that which is made from your want of right to keep what you gn ' ' 1 Or does it lessen the grace •JS5 or dignity of relaxing in the exercise of an odious claim, because you have your evidence-room full of Titles, and your magazines stuffed with arms to enforce them 1 What signify all those titles, and all AM VMENTA TIVE EXPOSITIONS. 3C9 those arms? Of wluit avail aro tliey, whon the reas«tn of the tiling tells me that the assertion of iny title is the loss of my suit ; and that I could do nothing but wound myself by the use of my own 29« weapons 1 Such is stedfastly my opinion of the absolute necessity of k('oj)ing up the concord of this Empire by an unity of spirit, though in a diversity of operations, that, if I were sure the colonists had, at their leaving this country, sealed a regular compact of servitude ; that 'ior. they had solemnly abjured all the rights of citizens ; that they had made a vow to renounce all Ideas of Liberty for them and their pos- terity to all generations ; yet I should hold myself obliged to conform to the temper I found universally prevalent in my own day, and to govern two million of men, impatient of Servitude, on the principles 300 of Freedcm. I am n(>t determining a point of law; T am restoring tranquility ; and the general character and situation of a people must determine what sort of government is fitted for them. That ptjint nothing else can or ought to determine. My idea, therefore, without considering whether we yield as 305 matter of right, or grant as matter of favour, is to admit the people of our Colonies into an interest in the Constitution ; and, by recording that admission in the Journals of Parliament, to give them as strong an assurance as the nature of the thing will admit, that we mean for ever to adhere to that solemn declaration of systematic indul- 3io gence. Burke's Speech on Conciliation with America. V. — On Copyrigrht. — The question of copyright. Sir, like most questions of civil prudence, is neither black nor white, but grey. The system of copyright has great advantages and great dis- advantages ; find it is our business to ascertain what these are, and then to make an arrangement under which the Jidvantages may be as far as possible secured, and the disadvantages as far as possible excluded. The charge which T bring against my honourable and learned friend's bill is this, that it leaves the advantages nearly what they are at present, and increases the disadvantages at least fourfold. The advantages arising from a system of copyright are obvious. 10 \u< i IMAGE EVALUATION TEST TARGET (MT-3) 1.0 I.I 11.25 I^|2j8 |2^ 1^ ^B mii Ui M |2.2 Photographic Sdences Corporation 23 WBT MAIN STRKT WIftSTIR.N.Y. MSM (716)t72-4S03 1 'Hi; : 1 i ] ■ii^ '. ■ 111 1 ' -..I i ■ '1 ; :i! } U' 370 EXPOSITORY COMPOSITIONS. It is desirable that we should have a supply of good books : w© cannot have such a supply unless men of letters are liberally remunerated; and the least objectionable way of remunerating 15 them is by means of copyright. You cannot depend for literary instruction and amusement on the leisure of men occupied in the pursuits of active life. Such men may occasionally produce com- positions of great merit. But you must not look to such men for works which require deep meditation and long research. Works of 20 that kind you can expect only from persons who make literature the business of their lives. Of these persons few will be found among the rich and the noble. The rich and the noble are not impelled to intellectual exertion by necessity. They may be impelle; I to intellectual exertion by the desire of distinguishing themselves, or 25 by the desire of benefiting the community. But it is generally within these walls that they seek to signalize themselves and to serve +heir fellow-creatures. Both their ambition and their public spirit, in a country like this, naturally take a political turn. It is then on men whose profession is literature, and whose private means 30 are not ample, that you must rely for a supply of valuable books. Such men must be remunerated for their literary labour. And there are only two ways in which they can be remunerated. One of those ways is patronage ; the other is copyright. There have been times in which men of letters looked, not to the 35 public, but to the government, or to a few great men, for the reward of their exertions. It was thus in the time of Maecenas and PoUio at Rome, of the Medici at Florence, of Louis the Fourteenth in France, of Lord Halifax and Lord Oxford in this country. Now, Sir, I well know that there are cases in which it is fit and graceful, 40 nay, in which it is a sacred duty to reward the merits or to relieve the distresses of men of genius by the exercise of this species of liberality. But these cases are exceptions. I can conceive no system more fatal to the integrity and independence of literary men than one under which they should be taught to look for their daily 46 bread to the favour of ministers and nobles. I can conceive no system more certain to turn those minds which are formed by nature to be the blessings and ornaments of our species into public scandals and pests. ARG UMENTA TIVE EXPOSITIONS. 371 76 or of re We have, then, only one resource left. We must betake our- selves to copyright, be the inconveniences of copyright what they may. Those inconveniences, in truth, are neither few nor small. 50 Copyright is monopoly, and produces all the effects which the general voice of mankind attributes to monopoly. My honourable and learned friend talks very contemptuously of those who are led away by the theory that monopoly makes things dear. That monopoly makes things dear is certainly a theory, as all the great 55 truths which have been established by the experience of all ages and nations, and which are taken for granted in all reasonings, may be said to be theories. It is a theory in the same sense in which it is a theory that day and night follow each other, that lead is heavier than water, that bread nourishes, that arsenic poisons, that alcohol co intoxicates. If, as my honourable and learned friend seems to think, the whole world is in the wrong on this point, if the real eflfect of monopoly is to make articles good and cheap, why does he stop short in his career of change ? Why does he limit the opera- tion of so salutary a principle to sixty years 1 Why does he consent 65 to anything short of a perpetuity ? He told us that in consenting to anything short of a perpetuity he was making a compromise between extreme right and expediency. But if his opinion about monopoly be correct, extreme right and expediency would coincide. Or rather, why should we not restore the monopoly of the East 70 India trade to the East India Company? Why should we not revive all those old monopolies which, in Elizabeth's reign, galled our fathers so severely that, maddened by intolerable wrong, they opposed to their sovereign a resistance before which her haughty spirit quailed for the first and for the last time ? Was it the cheap- 75 ness and excellence of commodities that then so violently stirred the indignation of the English people ? I believe. Sir, that I may safely take it for granted that the effect of monopoly generally is to make articles scarce, to make them dear, and to make them bad. And I may with equal safety challenge my honourable friend to find out so any distinction between copyright and other privileges of the same kind ; any reason why a monopoly of books should produce an effect directly the reverse of that which was produced by the East Tndia . ¥ • '1'' 372 EXPOSITORY COMPOSITIONS. Company's monopoly of tea, or by Lord Essex's monopoly of sweet 85 wines. Thus, then, stands the case. It is good that authors should be remunerated ; and the least exceptionable way of remunerating them is by a monopoly. Yet monopoly is an evil. For the sake of the good we must submit to the evil ; but the evil ought not to last a day longer than is necessary for the purpose of securing the good. 90 Now, I will not affirm that the existing law is perfect, that it exactly hits the point at which the monopoly ought to cease ; but this I confidently say, that the existing law is very much nearer that point than the law proposed by my honourable and learned friend. For consider this : the evil effects of the monopoly are pro- 95 portioned to the length of its duration. But the good eiFects for the sake of which we bear with the evil effects are by no means proportioned to the length of its duration. A monopoly of sixty years produces twice as much evil as a monopoly of thirty years, and thrice as much evil as a monopoly of twenty years. But it is by no 100 means the fact that a posthumous monopoly of sixty years gives to an author thrice as much pleasure and thrice as strong a motive as a posthumous monopoly of twenty years. On the contrary, the difference is so small as to bo hardly perceptible. We all know how faintly we are affected by the prospect of very distant advantages, 105 even when they are advantages which we may reasonably hope that we shall ourselves enjoy. But an advantage that is to be enjoyed more than half a century after we are dead, by somebody, we know not by whom, perhaps by somebody unborn, Ijy somebody utterly unconnected with us, is really no motive at all to action. It is 110 very prol)able that in the course of some generations land in the unexplored and unmapped heart of the Australasian continent will be very valuable. But there is none of us who would lay down five pounds for a whole province in the heart of the Australasian continent. We know, that neither we, nor anybody for whom we 115 care, will ever receive a farthing of rent from such a province. And a man is very little moved by the thought that in the year 2000 or 2100, somebody who claims through him will employ more shepherds than Prince Esterhazy, and will have the finest house and gallery of pictures at Victoi ia or Sydney. Now, this ia the AHG UMENTA TIVE TJATOSITIONS. 373 sort of boon wliidi my hon()ura])le and hviriicHl friend ludds out to 120 jiutliors. Considered as a boctn to them, it is a mere nullity; but, considered as an impost on the public, it la no nullity, but a very serious and pernicious reality. I will take an example. Dr. Johnson died fifty-six years ago. If the law were what my honour- able and learned friend wishes to make it, somebody would now 125 have the monopoly of Dr. Johnson's works. Who that somebody would be it is impossible to say ; but we may venture to guess. I guess, then, that it would have been some bookseller, who was the assign of another bookseller, who was the grandson of a third bookseller, who had bought the copyright from Black Frank, thei30 doctor's servant and residuary legatee, in 1785 or 1786. Now, would the knowledge that this copyright would exist in 1841 have been a source of gratification to Johnson 1 Would it have stimu- lated his exertions 1 Would it have once drawn him out of his bed before noon? Would it have once cheered him under a fit of the 135 spleen? Would it have induced him to give us one more allegory, one more life of a poet, one more imitation of Juvenal ? I firmly believe not. I tinnly believe that a hundred years ago, when he was writing our debates for the Gentleman's Magazine, he would very much rather have had twopence to buy ai4o plate of shin of beef at a cook's shop underground. Con- sidered as a reward to him, the difference between a twenty years* and sixty years' term of posthumous copyright would have been nothing or next to nothing. But is the difference nothing to us ? I can buy Rasselas for sixpence ; I might have had 14d to give five shillings for it, I can buy the Dictionary, the entire genuine Dictionary, for two guineas, perhaps for less ; I might have had to give five or six guineas for it. Do I grudge this to a man like Dr. Johnson ? Not at all. Show me that the prospect of this boon roused him to any vigorous effort, or sustained his spirits under 150 depressing circumstances, and I am quite willing to pay the price of such an object, heavy as that price is. But what I do complain of is that my circumstances are to be worse, and Johnson's none the better; that T am to give five pounds for what to him was not worth a farthing. 155 i). i ii hi 374 EXPOSITORY COMPOSITIONS. Th _ rinciple of copyright is this. It is a tax on readers for the purpose of giving a bounty to writers. The tax is an exceedingly bad one ; it is a tax on one of the most innocent and most salutary of human pleasures ; and never let us foiget that a tax on innocent ICO pleasures is a premium on vicious pleasures. I admit, however, the necessity of giving a bounty to genius and learning. In order to give such a bounty, I willingly submit even to this severe and burdensome tax. Nay, I am ready to increase the tax, if it can be shown that by so doing I should proportionally increase the 165 bounty. My complaint is, that my honouralile and learned friend doubles, triples, quadruples, the tax, and makes scarcely any per- ceptible addition to the bounty. Why, Sir, what is the additional amount of taxation which would have been levied on the public for Dr. Johnson's works alone, if my honourable and learned friend's 170 bill had been the law of the land 1 I have not data sufficient to form an opinion ; but I am confident that the taxation on his Dictionary alone would have amounted to many thousands of pounds. In reckoning the whole additional sum which the holders of his copyrights would have taken out of the pockets of the public 175 during the last half century at twenty thousand pounds, I feel satisfied that I very greatly underrate it. Now, I again say that I think it but fair that we should pay twenty thousand pounds in consideration of twenty thousand pounds' worth of pleasure and encouragement received by Dr. Johnson. But I think it very hard 180 that we should pay twenty thousand pounds for what he would not have valued at five shillings. My honourable and learned friend dwells on the claims of the posterity of great writers. Undoubtedly, sir, it would be very pleasing to see a descendant of Shakespeare living in opulence on the 185 fruits of his great ancestor's genius. A house maintained in splen- dour by such a patrimony would be a more interesting and striking object than Blenheim is to us, or than Strathfieldsaye will be to our children. But, unhappily, it is scarcely possible that, under any system, such a thing can come to pass. My honourable and learned 190 friend does not propose that copyright shall descend to the eldest son, or shall be bound up by irrevocable entail. It is to be merely ARGXTMENTATtVE EXPOSITIONS. Zlh personal property. It is therefore highly iinprobablo that it will descend during sixty years or half that term from parent to child. The chance is that more people than one will have an interest in it. They will in all probability sell ;t and divide the proceeds. The 195 price which a bookseller will give for it will beai no proportion to the sum which he will afterwards draw from the public, if his specu- lation proves successful. He will give little, if anything, more for a term of sixty years than for a term of thirty or five-and-twenty. The present value of a distant advantage is always small ; but when 200 there is great room to doubt whether a distant advantage will be any advantage at all, the present value sinks to almost nothing. Such is the inconstancy of the public taste that no sensible man will venture to pronounce, with confidence, what the sale of any book published in our days will be in the years between 1890 and 1900. 205 The whole fashion of thinking and writing has often undergone a change in a much shorter period than that to which my honourable and learned friend would extend posthumous copyright. What would have been considered the best literary property in the earlier part of Charles the Second's reign ? I imagine Cowley's Poems. 210 Overleap sixty years, and you are in the generation of which Pope asked, "Who now reads Cowley?" Wliat works were ever expected with more impatience by the public than those of Lord Bolingbroke, which appeared, I think, in 1754? In 1814, no book- seller would have thanked you for the copyright of them all, if you 215 had offered it to him for nothing. What would Paternoster Row give now for the copyright of Hayley's Triumphs of Temper, so much admired within the memory of many people still living ? I say, therefore, that, from the very nature of literary property, it will almost always pass away from an author's family ; and I say that 220 the price given for it to the family will bear a very small proportion to the tax which the purchaser, if his speculation turns out well, will in the course of a long series of years levy on the public. If, Sir, I wished to find a strong and perfect illustration of the effects which I anticipate from long copyright, I should select, — my 226 honourable and learned friend will be surprised, — I should select the case of Milton's granddaughter. As often as this bill has been ) 37C MXPOSl TOR Y COMPOSITIONS. under discussion, tho f;it(! of Milt(»u's <^rau(l(liiughter has been brought forward by the advocates of monopoly. My lionourable and 230 learned friend has repeatedly told the story with great eloquence and effect. He has dilated on the suiFerings, on the abject poverty of this ill-fated woman, the last of an illustrious race. He tells us that, in the extremity of her distress, Garrick gave her a benefit, that Johnson wrote a prologue, and that the public contributed 235 some hundreds of pounds. Was it fit, he asks, that she should receive in this eleemosynary form, a small portion of what was in truth a debt ? Why, he asks, instead of obtaining a pittance from charity, did she not live in comfort and luxury on the proceeds of the sale of her ancestor's works ? But, sir, will my honourable and 240 learned friend tell me that this event, which he has so often and so pathetically described, was caused by the shortness of the term of copyright? Why, at that time, the duration of copyright was longer than even he, at present, proposes to make it. The monopoly lasted, not sixty years, but for ever. At the time at which Milton's 245 grand-daughter asked charity, Milton's works were the exclusive pro- perty of a bookseller. Within a few months of the day on which the benefit was given at Garrick's theatre, the holder of the copyright of Paradise Lost — I think it was Tonson, — applied to the Court of Chancery for an injunction against a bookseller who had published 250 a cheap edition of the great epic poem, and obtained the injunction. The representation of Comus was, if I remember rightly, in 1750 ; the injunction in 1 752. Here, then, is a perfect illustration of the eflFect of long copyright. Milton's works are the property of a single publisher. Everybody who wants them must buy them at 255 Tonson's shop and at Tonson's price. Whoever attempts to under- sell Tonson is harrassed with legal proceedings. Thousands who would gladly possess a copy of Paradise Lost, must forego that great enjoyment. And what, in the meantime, is the situation of the only person for whom we can suppose that the author, protected 260 at such a cost to the public, was at all interested 1 She is reduced to utter destitution. Milton's works are under a monopoly. Milton's granddaughter is starving. The reader is pillaged ; but the writer's family is not enriched. Society is taxed doubly. It has to •ty us AUG UMENTA TIVE EXPOSITIONS. 377 give an exorbitant pi-it-e for the j>o(>nis ; and it lias at the same time to give alms to the only surviving ih'scendaiit of th(! poet. 8W But this is not all, I think it right, Hir, to call the attention of the House to an evil, which is jx-rlutpsmore to he apprehended when an author's copyright remains in the hands of his family, than when it is transferred to l)ooksel](>rs. I S(!riously fear that, if such a measure as this should be adoj)te(l, many valuable works will be 270 either totally suppressed or gi-ievously mutilated. I can prove that this danger is not chiniei-ical ; and I am quite certain that, if the danger bo real, the safeguards which my honourable and learned friend lias devised are altogether nugatory. That the danger is not chimerical may easily be shown. Most of us, I am sun;, have 276 known persons who, very eri'oiKjously as I think, but from the best motives, would not choose to rejjrint Ficilding's novels, or Gibbon's History of the Decline and Fall of the Roman Empire. Some gentlemen may perhaps be of opinion that it would be as well if Tom Jones and Gibbon's History were never reprinted. I will not, 28O then, dwell on these or similar cases. I will take cases respecting which it is not likely that there will be any difference of opinion here ; cases, too, in which the danger of which I now speak is not matter of supposition, but matter of fact. Take Richardson's novels. Whatever I may. on the present occasion, think of my 285 honourable and learned friend's judgment as a legislator, I must always respect his judgment as a critic. He will, I am sure, say that Richardson's novels are among the most valuable, among the most original works in our language. No writings have done more to raise the fame oi English genius in foreign countries. No writings 290 are more deeply pathetic. No writings, those of Shakspeare excepted, show more profound knowledge of the human heart. As to their moral tendency, I can cite the most respectable testimony. Dr. Johnson describes Richardson as one who had taught the passions to move at the command of virtue. My dear and honoured 296 friend, Mr. Wilberforce, in his celebrated religious treatise, when speaking of the unchristijiii tendency of the fashicmable novels of the eighteenth century, distinctly excepts Richardson from the censure. Another excellent person, whom T can never mention li I .t\ 378 EXPOSITORY COMPOSITIONS. 300 without respect and kindness, Mrs. Hannah More, often declared in conversation, and has declared in one of her published poems, that she first leanuid from the writings of Richardson those principles of piety by which her life was guided. I may safely say that books celebrated as works of art through the whole 305 civilized world, and praised for their moral tendency by Dr. Johnson, by Mr. Wilberforce, by Mrs. Hannah More, ought not to be suppressed. Sir, it is my firm belief, that if the law had been what my honourable and learned friend proposes to make it, they would have been suppressed. I remember Richardson's grandson 310 well ; he was a cler-gyinan in the city of London ; he was a most upright and excellent man ; but he had conceived a strong prejudice against works of fiction. He thought all novel-reading not only frivolous but sinful. He said, — this I state on the authority of one of his clerical brethren who is now a bishop, — he said that he had 315 never thought it right to read one of his grandfather's books. Sup- pose, Sir, that the law had been what my honourable and learned friend would make it. Suppose that the copyright of Richardson's novels had descended, as might well have been the case, to this gentleman. I firmly believe, that he would have thought it sinful 320 to give them a wide circulation. I firmly believe, that he would not for a hundred thousand pounds have delilierately done what he thought sinful. He would not have reprinted them. And what protection does my honourable and learned friend give to the public in such a case 1 Why, Sir, what he proposes is this : if a book is not 325 reprinted during five years, any person who wishes to reprint it may give notice in the London Gazette : the advertisement must be rep(!ated three times : a year must elapse ; and then, if the proprietor of the copyright does not put forth a new edition, he loses his exclusive privilege. Now, what protection is this to the 330 public ? "What is a new edition 1 Does the law define the number of copies that makes an edition ? Does it limit the price of a copy 1 Are twelve copies on large paper, charged at thirty guineas each, an edition ? It has been usual, when monopolies have been granted, to prescribe numbers and to limit prices. But I do not find that my 335 honourable and learned friend proposes to do so in the present case. ARGUMENTATIVE EXPOSITIONS. 379 And, without some such provision, the security which ho offers is manifestly illusory. It is my conviction that, under such a system as that which he recommends to us, a copy of Clarissa would have been as rare as an Aldus or a Caxton. I will give another instance. One of the most instructive, inter- 34o esting, and delightful hooks in our language is Poswell's Life of Johnson. Now it is well known that Bosweli's eldest son considered this book, considered the whole relation of Boswell to Johnson, as a blot on the escutcheon of the family. He thought, not perhaps altogether without reason, that his father luid exhibited himself in a 345 ludicroiis and degrading light. And thus he became so sore and irritable that at last he coidd not bear to hear the Life of Johnson mentioned. Suppose that the law had been what my honorable and learned friend wishes to make it. Suppose that the copyright of Bosweli's Life of Johnson had belonged, as it well might, during 350 sixty years, to Boswcill's eldest son. What would have been the consequence? An unadulterated copy of the finest biographical work in the world would have been as scarce as the first edition of Camden's Britannia. These are strong cases. I have shown you that, if the law had 366 been what you aie now going to make it, the finest prose woi'k of fiction in the language, the finest biographical work in the language, would very probably have been suppressed. But I have stated my case weakly. The books which I have mentioned are singularly inoffensive books, books not touching on any of those questions 360 which drive even wise men beyond the bounds of wisdom. There are books of a very different kind, books which are the rallying points of great political and religious parties. What is likely to happen if the copyright of one of these books should by descent or transfer come into the possession of some hostile zealot? I will take a single sgo instance. It is only fifty years since John Wesley died ; and all his works, if the law had been what my honourable and learned friend wishes to make it, would now have been the property of some person or other. The sect founded by Wesley is the most numerous, the wealthiest, the most powerful, the most zealous of sects. In 370 every parliamentary election it is a matter of the greatest importance 380 EXrOSITOliY COMVOSITIONS. to obtain tho support of the Wesleyan IMcithotlists. Their numerical strength is reckoned by huiuhcils of thousands. Tliey liold the memory of their founder in tho greatest reverence ; and not without reason, for ho was unquestionably a great and good man. To his 376 authority they constantly appeal. His works are in their eyes of the highest value. His doctrinal writings they regard as containing the best system of theology ever deduced from Scripture. His journals, interesting even to tho common reader, are peculiarly interesting to the Methodist : for they contain tho whole liistory of that singular 380 polity which, weak and dosi)ised in its beginning, is now, after the lapse of a century, so strong, so flourishing, and so formidable. The hymns to which he gave his imprimatur aro a most important part of the ])ublic worship of his followers. Now, suppose that the copy- right of these works shouid belong to some person who holds the 885 memory of Wesley and the doctrines and discipline of the Methodists in abhorrence. There are many such persons. The Ecclesiastical Courts are at this very time sittin^ on tho case of a clergyman of the Established Chuich who refused Christian burial to a child baj)tised by a Methodist preacher. I took up the other day a work which is 300 considered as among the most respectalde organs of a large and growing party in the Church of England, and there I saw John Wesley designated as a forsworn priest. Suppose that the works of Wesley were suppressed. Why, Sir, such a grievance would be enough to shake the foundations of Government. Let gentlemen 305 who are attached to the Church reflect for a moment what their feelings would be if the Book of Conmion Pra^'er were not to be reprinted for thirty or forty years, if the price of a Book of Common Prayer were run up to five or ten guineas. And then let them determine whether they will pass a law under which it is possible, 400 imder which it is proljable, that so intolerable a wi-ong may be done to some sect consisting perhaps of half a million of persons. I am so sensible, Sir, of the kindness with which the House has listened to me, that I will not detain you longer. I will only say this, that if the measure before us should ])ass, and should produce 406 one-tenth part of the evil which it is calculated to produce, and which I fully expect it to produce, there will soon be a remedy, i'i Alia UMENTA TIVl'J EAI'OSITIONS. 381 though of a very objectionable kiml. Just as the absurd acta which proliibited the sale of game wore virtually repealed by the poacher, just as many absurd revenue acts have been virtually rei)ealed by the smuggler, so will this law bo virtually repealed by piratical book- 410 sellers. At present the holder of copyright has the public feeling on his side. Those who invade copyright are regarded as knaves who take the bread out of the mouths of desei \ ing men. Everybody is well pleased to see them restrained by tho law, and compelled to refund their ill-gotten gains. No trade- -men of good repute will have4i6 anything to do with such disgraceful cransactions. Pass this law : ami that feeling is at an end. Men very difierent from the i)re8ent race of piratical booksellers will soou infringe this intolerable monopoly. Great masses of capital will be constantly employed in the violation of the law. Eve»'y art will be employed to evade legal 420 pursuit ; and the whole nation will be in the plot. On which side indeed should the public sympathy be when the question is whether some book as popular as Hobinson Crusoe, or the Pilgrim's Progress, shall \te in every cottage, or whether it shall be confined to the libraries of the rich for the advantage of the great-grandson of a 425 bookseller who, a hundred years before, drove a hard bargain for the copyright with the author when in great distress 1 Remember too, that, when once it ceases to be considered as wrong and discreditable to invade literary property, no person can say where the invasion will stop. The public seldom make nice distinctions. The wholesome 430 copyright which now exists will share in the disgrace and danger of the new coj)yright which you are about to create. And you will find that, in attempting to impose unreasonable restraints on the reprint- ing of the works of the dead, you have, to a great extent, annulled those living. If I saw, Sir. any probability that this bill could be so 436 amended in the Committt j that my objections might be removed, I would not divide the House in this stage. But I am so fully con- vinced that no alteration which would not seem insupportable to my honourable and learned friend, could render his measure supportable to me, that I must move, though with regret, that this bill be read a 440 second time this day six months. Macaulay'a Speeches. By permission 0/ tSe publishers. 131 382 EXPOSITORY COMPOSITIONS. EXAMINATION OF MODELS. Exposition proper simply unfolds the meaning of terms and proposi- tions ; the question of truth is not considered. We may explain an assertion, whether it is true or false. We may give any meaning we please to a term. It often happens that a writer says : "I will use such and such a term in such and such a sense, although I am aware people in general do not employ it with this meaning." He is at liberty to do this provided he abides consistently by his definition. Thus it may be said that the question of truth does not properly enter into exposition. Yet, as a fact, considerations of truth are nearly always involved in exjjosition. If a writer is to be understood he must, usually at least, emjjloy terms in their ordinary sense ; in other words, his expositicju must not merely be clear, it must be in accordance with usage. If he applies a term to a number of objects, he must be careful that the ijUalities contained in his definition actually belong to the objects. So that in exposition we are not merely concerned with explaining what we mean by a term, we almost inevitably go further and show that our explanation is in accordance with usage or with facts. This involves argument. So, in the first model of the last chapter, Huxley, while expounding the uniformity of nature, really adduces proof of the existence of such uniformity. In Addison's exposition of cheerfulness there is implicit the intention of proving cheerfulness a quality which ought to be cultivated. Carlyle attempts to prove the importance and rarity of sin- cerity in poetry ; it may also bo said that he is engaged in proving that Bums' poetry exhibits certain qualities. If exposition is apt to be, implicitly or explicitly, argumentative, so also is argument often expository. A clear explanation of a proposition is often sufficient to establish it ; when wo understand it, we admit its truth. In the refutation of assertions, exposition is even more helpful ; a clear statement of a false position often suffices to show self-contra- diction or absurdity. Exposition and argument are not only often involved in one another, they are further linked to one another, and separated from narration and description by their non-concrete character. It is true that, argu- mentation, unlike exposition, may deal with particular propositions. We may prove by argument that A killed B, as well as prove that "freedom of discussion is advantageous to society." But it is not the concrete aspect of the proposition with which we are concerned, but with the establish- ment of a certain relation between two things in the mind, — the relation of subject and predicate. ARGUMENTATIVE EXPOSITIONS. 383 [)OSI- n an we such e in this said Yet, ion. 18 in be to a ti his are most with Argumentation is that form of composition which has to do with the establishment of truth ; the process by which truth is established is called Proof. There are two main species of argument, Deduction and Induction In Deduction the proposition proved is deduced from two others called the Premisses, as in the example given in chapter xxv. : Natural Phenomena take place in accordance with fixed laws ; storms are natural phenomena ; therefore, storms take place in accordance with fixed laws. This sort of argument is familiar in Euclid. It will be noted that the truth thus attained is truth of consistency, that is, the conclusion is true, provided the premisses are true. Jn Induction, on the other hand, the truth of a proposition is established directly from facts, without the intervention of other propositions. Scientific men by observation and experiment con- clude that bodies fall to the earth at a certain fixed rate of speed. The conditions which must be fulfilled before we are warranted in drawing a conclusion from premisses or from facts, are treated in Logic, and cannot be dealt with here. (Composition presupposes the material ; it has merely to do with the expression and arrangement of it.) An acquaintance with the science of logic is not necessary, though it is advantageous, in order to follow and compose arguments. It should be observed that it is not usual in literature to follow the exact forms of logic. For example, the conclusion with regard to storms would not in literature be deduced in the formal way exemplified above, but in a more condensed shape. We would either say 'storms are natural phenomena, and, therefore, take place in accordance with fixed laws' (where the first or Major Premiss is taken for granted) ; or ' Since all natural phenomena take place in accordance with fixed laws, so also must storms ' (where the second or Mimtr Premiss is omitted). In literature inductive argument differs little from exposition by particulars ; in the latter case we start with the proposition, and make it clear by examples ; in the former we start with the particular statements, and show that they leai( up to the general proposition. 1. This is an example of the way in which exposition is used to clear the ground for argument. Matthew Arnold, before combating certain views of Professor Huxley on the respective importance of science and literature in education, unfolds the extent to which he and Professor Huxley are at one. Professor Huxley has misunderstood what Arnold means by literature. Hie latter means written thought, Huxley belles lettres (taking ' literature ' in the same sense as Newman on pp. 306-9). The first three paragraphs introduce and state the subject, the fourth expounds Arnold's meaning by a specific example. The definition of ! I I ! m i hi- m i,i. ii ' 384 EXPOSITORY COMPOSITIONS. J literature thus arrived statementa do not tell tion in the matter of beginning at line 138, the matter of science point of divergence, enters upon it in the model. at, is then employed to show that certain of Huxley's against Arnold's position. Having defined his posi* literature, the writer proceeds, in the paragraph to show how far he is in agreement with Huxley on in education. At length (105) he arrives at the Here, then, is the place for argument, and Arnold succeeding portion of the essay — not quoted in the 2. This is an example of the simplest sort of argumentative exposi- tion. In the opening words the writer stiiteu his thesis ; to make it the more striking he states it paradoxically, using the word ' home ' in two different senses. He then proves his case in an informal way ; if we describe his method we may say that ho virtually makes an analysis of the qualities connoted by ' home,' and denies the existence of these in the homes of the very poor. By the comparison with the bar-room, he shows that there is a place for the very poor, superior to home. The earlier part of the first paragraph is occupied with material comforts ; the later, with higher attractions of home. It will be noted that while the essay is not properly speaking descrip- tive, but argumentative, the main efi'ect produced really belongs to the province of description. The chief merit of the first paragraph is not that it proves a proposition, — makes it clear to the intellect ; but rather that the writer makes vivid to the imagination and feelings the misery of poverty. At the opening of the third paragraph, Lamb takes up another sort of 'home that is no home.' Hitherto the essay has been pathetic, it now becomes delightfully humorous ; the argumentative purpose falls further into the background. The reader's fancy is tickled by the fertility in odd comparisons and metaphors, and by the vivid perception of humorous vexation to which the paragraph gives expression. 3. Here we have mingled exposition and argument, but the argument is informal and veiled as it is apt to be in literature proper. The first paragraph contains certain views with regard to Addison as a critic. The five paragraphs following partly confirm the unfavourable view of Addi- son, partly deny it, and partly refute it by showing the circumstances under which Addison wrote and his purpose in writing. This is a fine example of Johnson's style at its best, — pregnant and effective. Modern criticism would agree with Addison, and not with Johnson, on the subject of Chevy Clime, A HG UMEN TA TIVE EXPOSITIONS. 3d5 ley's Jjosi- paph on the lold the osi- the two We the the ows •Her ter, 4. This extract from Burke's speech in tlie House of Conunons in favour of conciliation with America is an e\ani[)le of formal argument. The method Btnke adopts is to make an enumeration of all possible courses, and to show that, with the exception of the course he advo- cates, each of these is impracticable. This is called the method of residues^ and is only effective when the enumeration of possible courses is exhaustive. The passage is a good example of Burke's clear and varied style. Of the paragraph beginning line 253, Mr. Payne says in his notes in the Clarendon Press edition : "It ia difficult to select any passage in this oration for special notice in point of style : but no one can fail to be struck with fresh admiration at the method of this paragraph, in which the ' right of Taxation ' is excluded fr«)m the discussion. The delicate irony with which the tlieorists are passed over gives place, by way of a surprising antitheses ('right to render your people' miserable' — 'interest to make them happy') to the earnest remonstrance with which the passage concludes. The con- tinuous irony of the first part of the paragraph seems to contribute to rather than to detract from the general elevation of the treatment." 5. Macaulay delivered this speech in the House of Commons in 1841. The law with regard to copyright at that time in force, provided that the author should possess the copyright for a term of twenty-eight years ; and should he live for more than twenty-eight years after the publication of a work, he should further retain the copyright until his death. Mr. Serjeant Talfourd introduced a bill to extend the term of copyright to sixty years, reckoned from the death of the author. Against this and in favor of the then existing law, Macaulay successfully argued in the speech quoted. Macaulay's argument is briefly this. Copyright is accompanied by certain evils, but these are counterbalanced by advantages. The pro- posed bill greatly increases the amount of evil, and scarcely, if at all, the amount of good of which copyright is productive. This general basis of his argument is stated in the first paragraph quoted. State formally the two syllogisms implied in 11. 12-15. Which of the statements contained in 11. 12-25 does Macaulay take for granted and not attempt to prove? Point out tiio paragrapns devoted to the proof of each of the other statements. In the fourth paragraph the following syllogism is implied : Monopoly is an evil ; c<jpyriglit is a monopoly ; copyright is an evil. But Talfourd has denied the major premiss, and Macaulay proceeds to refute him by mr^^'i than one redxictw ad absurdum. This paragraph closes with a sum- H ii H 386 EXPOSITORY COMPOSITIONS. maryof results obtained. Macaulay has proven his first position, that there is both good and evil in copyright. He now takes his second step : the evils will be greatly increased ; the good scarcely at all by the proposed change in the law. Into what two divisions does this paragraph (90-156) fall? The advantage of copyright is the stimulus it aifords to authors ; Macaulay attempts to show that the stimulus will scarcely be increased by the proposed law. What methods of proof does he employ? Note in the remainder of the speech Macaulay's fertility in interesting examples. This is one of the great charms of Macaulay's style ; his astoundi..g memory and wide reading enabled him to illustrate or exem- plify all his points. When another writer would state a truth in general terms, Macaulay is apt to state it in concrete language. What is the subject of the sixth paragraph (156-181)? The seventh paragraph is a refutation. State the argument refuted. How does Macaulay refute it ? What relation does the eighth paragraph bear to the seventh? "My honorable and learned friend will be surprised" (226) because this was an actual case of the descendants of a very great writer suffering from poverty within the period of sixty years — apparently just the case in which the proposed law would bo desirable. Hitherto, Macaulay has been showing that the proposed law will not attain the end intended, now (266) he begins to show that it may be the cause of positive evils. Note in the close of this paragraph he refutes an objection which might be made against the argument of the earlier part of the paragraph. The argument contained in the final paragraph is properly placed last, because it is effective only if Macaulay's previous contentions hold. Observe throughout Macaulay's clear style, admirable arrangement and the interest he lends to abstract argument by interesting concrete illustra- tions. This speech caused the defeat of the proposed measure. le it; |he Is ARGUMENTATIVE EXPOSITIONS. PRACTICE. Practice List : , 1. Honesty is the Best Policy. 2. Heat is a Mode of Motion. 3. The Character of Cromwell. 4. Total Prohibition. 5. Tennyson, one of the Great English Poets. 6. The Study of the Classics in Schools. 7. Nothing can he Destroyed. 8. Education of Women. 9. Happiness Little Increased by Wealth. 10. The Political Destiny of Canada. 387 ' 1 \i ■'i Arrangement of Material : , The normal arrangement of a formal argument is Introduction, Thesis, Proof, Conclusion. The Introduction explains the circumstances which have led the writer's undertaking the subject. The Tliesis or subject should next be stated, — first, in some terse form ; it may then, if neces- sary, be developed and explained. Before entering on the Proof, it is often helpful to the reader to give an outline of the plan to be followed. The normal arrj^ngement for the Proof itself is that of a climax. Those arguments are put first whiclx would incline the reader to accept the posi- tion, — which make the thesis probable. Thus prepared, he is likely to be in the best state for giving their full weight to the main arguments. The Conclusion will usually begin with a summary of the points made ; the character of the remainder of the conclusion will depend upon circum- stiinces. If the aim of the argument bo to produce action, it is best to conclude with an appeal to the feelings. Such is the regular arrangement, but a variety of considerations may lead to its being changed. For example, if the readers or hearers are pre- judiced against the conclusion, it is often better not to state at the outset the writer's or speaker's views, but gradually to lead up to them. Kven in this case, some definite idea of the aim of the argument should bo given, and this may be done, without committing the writer, by putting the thesis in the forui of a question. •m EXPOSITORY COMPOSITIONS. I I When objections are to V)o met, tlio rufiitation Blionkl usually precede the direct proof, if the objection is one a<^ainst the general j)ositioii ; but if the objection be only partial, — to some portion of the thesis merely — it will properly be taken up when that part of the thesis is treated in the proof. Before writing an argumentative composition, the student should always draw up a synopsis, or what is technically called a Brief. A Brief should consist of three parts : Introduction, Brief Proper, and Conclu- sion. In the Brief rroper the Proof should he very clearly and concisely stated in a series of headings and sub-headings, carefully correlated by numbers and letters. All these headings should read as reasons for the conclusion.* A good example of normal arrangement is to be found in Milton's Areopagitica. The Long Parliament, after it had assumed all the functions of government, passed an oi'dinance providing that no book should be published until it had been examined and approved by official licensers. Milton, though a strong adherent of the pai-liamentary side, objected to this measure, and maintjiined these objections in a pamphlet entitled Areopcujitica, addressed to the members of the Long Parliament. He argued against the licensing system proposed, and in behalf of the complete freedom of the press. The following account indicates the plan. *• AREOPAGITICA." Introduction. — Milton attempts to win a favourable hearing by speak- ing in very flattering terms of the body whom he ih addressing. He ingeniously maintains that his high opinion of I'arliament is manifest in the very act of writing the protest, for he shows in so doing, his belief that they had attained that highest stage of human wisdom when it is ready to recognize its own fallibility, and to change its conclusions on good grounds. TJiesix. — He then briefly states his objection to the ordinance, and lays down the plan of his argument. It is to consist of four parts : Ist. An historical survey of licensing, by which he proposes to show that the system of their ordinance originated with persons of whom the Parliament most strenuously disapproves. 2nd. An exhibition of the importance of reading all sort . of l)ooks, good and bad. 3rd. The licens- ing system will not attain its intended aim. 4th. On the contrary, it will be productive of the greatest evils. *See Sjifcimeti Bn'f/ii compiled by Professor Bfikcr, of Harvard, and published by the "Harvard Co-o|>erative Society." II AmUMENTATIVE EXPOSITIONS. 38d i he he Digrestion. — Before entering on this plan, Milton introduces a short digression on the importance of books. This digression is quite justi- fiable ; it ia intended to gain the close attention of his readers, who might otherwise regard the matter in hand as of small account. He then enters on the First Head. — His historical survey professes to show that the wisest governments, ancient and modern, gave freedom to books, and that the Roman Catholic Church and the Inquisition (who were of course hateful to the Puritans addressed) were the inventors of book-licensing. The object of this first part is, therefore, to predispose his readers to regard the ordinance with suspicion. Second Head. — He shows the importance of reading all sorts of books, good and bad (a) by the authority of Aijostles, Fathers, etc., (b) by the consideration that it is the general constitution of the world that good and bad should exist side by side, and that this is needful for the develop- ment of the highest virtue. Then he meets objections wliich might be urged to the reading bad books. Third Head. The ordinance will not attain the end proposed — the exclusion of bad literature — because of the practical difficulties in enforc- ing it, the impossibility of finding proper licensers, etc. Fourth Head (the climax of the argument). The most serious evils will result from the licensing system. It is an insult and discouragement to the nation, especially to the learned ; it will be unfavourable to the main- tenance of existing truth which is always most adequately understood, and firmly believed when exposed to attack ; it will prevent the attain- ment of new truth, etc. (kmclusion. The Areopagitica closes with an eloquent panegyric of the present state of the nation, its spiritual and intellectual activity, which Milton ascribes largely to the Long Parliament and the freedom they have conferred ; but, he points out, this ordinance is inconsistent with what has hitherto been accomplished, and will certainly check this unpre- cedented development. Professedly formal and complete argumentative treatment of a subject is commonest in speeches, forensic and political, but is comparatively rare in literature proper. In literary essays the structure of the argument is apt to be loose, the chain broken by a variety of digressions, and the links scattered. There are reasons for this. Strictly argumei;tative writing requires close attention, and puts a certain strain on the mind ; ii IP 5 1*1 P 390 MPOSIitORY COMPOSITIONS. the predominant need of consecutive connection is unfavourable to literary charm and ornament. But there is a further and more weighty consideration : a great many subjects, — social, political, historic, and literary — are so complex that it is impossible by an unbroken chain of argument to force the reader to a conclusion. In treating such a subject, the writer rather intermingles with occasional argument, suggestive re- marks and conjectures, which perhaps cannot be bound together into syllogisms, which he knows very well do not prove anything, but merely tend to make his conclusion probable. He does nut expect every reader to agree with every remark ; instead of forcing by argument, he allures by hints and suggestions ; he tries to predispose to a conclusion, to drop some seed which may fructify : having done this, he leaves the reader to his own reflections. Such a method of treating the subject is less pretentious on the part of the writer, puts less strain on the mind of the reader, admits variety, is more stimulating, lends itself more easily to distinctively literary treatment than formal argument. An analysis of an essay of this kind may prove more useful to the student than general rules. It must be remembered, however, that an analysis will inevitably give an impression of greater formality than the unabridged original. The essay selected is one by Matthew Arnold entitled Democracy (con- tained in the volume of Mixed Essays), in which the author advocates the widening of the sphere of government in England, its taking under its control matters which had hitherto been left to individual enterprise. A very strong feeling was developed in England about the middle of the present century against government interference — partly the result of Adam Smith's economic theory, partly of the natural independence and self-sufficiency of the English character. Arnold knows, then, that he is in this essay running counter to tlie cherished convictions of the majority of his readers. With this explanation, let us follow the structure of the essay. "democracy." Introduction. The introduction is an attempt to gain the favourable attention of the reader. Arnold confesses that in advocating increased action on the part of the state, he is at variance with the cherished con- victions of most of his countrymen. He does not deny that these convictions were correct ; but is it not possible that changes have taken place which render this position no longer tenable ? He, at least, pro- poses to show some reasons for believing that such changes have taken place. [On referring to the original, it will be noticed that here, as else- where, Arnold rather understates than overstates his case, puts his argu- m( to re to pr lai hi ARGUMENTATIVE BXP0STTI0N8 391 ment in tho most unassuming and informal fashion. He does not claim to convince anybody, only to throw out souio suggestions. It does not require much literary insight to feel that this modesty is assumed — a cloak to cover intense self-confidence, but the point to be noticed is that the procedure is just the opposite of the writer of a formal argument. The latter, in virtue of his method, naturally assumes complete certainty of his point and of his power to convince others]. Thesis (not formally expressed in the original, but indicated with some circumlocution) contains two propositions : I. Certain changes have taken place in England. II. In view of this, increased state-action advisable. I. Proof. His argument in support of the first assertion falls into two parts. 1. He shows that the government was formerly aristocratic. DigresHion on the great services rendered by this aristocratic gov- eminent to the nation. 2. He points out the fact that this aristocratic government is van- ishing owing to the growth of democracy. Digression. — Arnold knows that this growth of democracy is very unpalatable to many of his readers. He, therefore, attempts to reconcile them to it by showing — 1. That it is natural. 2. That it is inevitable. Hence ought to be accepted and made the best of, as France has accepted it. 3. That there are certain advantages in democracy which aristocratic government cannot give. He expounds at some length the growth of democracy and decay of aristoor^y in England. . He then briefly sums up the result of the argument so far : Aris- tocracy ia inevitably decaying and democracy growing. II. Thesis. — The result of the conclusion just arrived at is that some- thing must take the place of the aristocracy, and Arnold argues that this something should be the state. (This is a repetition of Thesis II., already enunciated). 392 EXFOSITOHY COMPOSITIONS. I I « I; Proof.— 1. Refutation of objection based on evil results of state interfer- ence in France. This is met by pointing out that owing to difference in the conditions of the two countries the analogy does not hold. 2. Arnold supports his opinion by autlwrity, — that of Washing- ton, etc. * 3. On account of the peculiar character and history of the Middle Class in England, there is no danger of state interference being carried too far. He enlarges on the character of the Middle Class. 4. Advantages of state interference shown. (a) By example of the good secondary education established in France by the state. (6) By the bad state of secondary education in England owing to lack of state interference. (c) Refutation of objection that the Middle Class will supply the defect. Character of the Middle Class expounded, and their incapacity for this work thereby shown. Having thus argued his point, he proceeds to stimulate his readers to action by pointing out the vast importance uf sbvte interference in educa« tion and in other matters, and the dangers of delay. Arnold imagines some one to ask : " But what is the state?" He de- fines the state, and professes to show from the definition that state action must be superior to individual action. Conclusion. — He admits many and serious difficulties in the course he advocates, but urges the nation not to stand still, but to attempt to adapt itself to the inevitable changes which are taking place. It so happens that there is an essay of a more formal type written by Pro- fessor Huxley on almost the same subject, and advocating a similar course. It is interesting to compare these two essays. Professor Huxley's essay has the wider basis, is more exhaustive, complete, and convincing. At the same time every reader of literary taste will feel that Matthew Arnold'q is the pleasanter and easier reading — is more lucid, more charming, has, to a higher degree, that personal note which Newman finds so distinctive of literature. Professor Huxley's essay, entitled Administrative Nihilism, and to be found in Critiques and Addresses, was occasioned by the establishment of a state system of education in England ; it defends thi me ms ed mi m 5 Sk !| ARGUMENTATIVE EXPOSITIONS. 393 I this step, and goes on to maintain the wide scupe of legitimate govern- ment inturfurence. " ADMINISTRATIVE NIHILISM." Hie Introduction exprcHses satisfaction, which the author shares with the majority of the nation, at the attempt which the state is making to educate the people of England, recognizes, however, that there is a minority who regard this step as false in principle. First Part. (Refutation). The iirst part of the essay is a refutation of the objections made by this minority to state education. The arguments adduced by this minority are of two kinds : I. — Education will make the poor discontented and upset society. This is met by three considerations : — 1. The people who assert this are inconsistent, for they themselves are striving to rise above their present position (argumerUum ad hominem), 2. Education does not unfit men for laborious and disagreeable employ* ments as is shown by particular examples {argumentum a pos- teriori). 3. (a) Universal education brings the best men to the top. (6) This is necessary for the stability of society. (c) The higher classes not innately or essentially superior to the lower. % Summary. — Argument I. has been refuted as inconsistent with the practice of those who employ it, as not justifiable in theory, as mischievous in its consequences. II. — The state should not interfere with education : 1. Because the only function of the state is to protect its subjects from aggres- sion. 2. Because, when the state goes beyond this limit, it does the work worse than private individuals. 1. He refutes the first argument, (a) Because it does not apply against education, for education does protect the subject. Objection : ' If the government goes thus far, there is no limit to government interference ' met by the con- sideration that this objection applies to all Umitations (Reductio ad absurdum). (6) By the authority of Hobbes, Locke, etc., who give much wider functions to government. 'I n ■Ml Ml I: t ii !l H I'i 1; ! :i ii L ' i. 394 EXPOSITORY COMPOSITIONS. Th« narrower limits are the reBult of the dominant poli* tical economy, and the sceptioiam of the time. (e) By answering Herbert Spencer's argument [for this limita* tion of the governmentj based on the analogy between the mind and animal body on the one hand, and government and the nation on the other. (») The mind does more than merely protect the members of the body, (u) The analogy between the indi\'idual animal and the state is defective in essential points, and hence no conclusion may validly be drawn. 2. He first denies this second argument as not sufficiently based on experience. [It will be observed that Huxley beginning with the questi \ of educa- tion, has been led up to the consideration of a much wider (^ ;stion, that of the general functions of government. He has shown somu reasons for doubting the theory upheld by his opponents, but he has not attempted to overthrow it. It is indeed one of those far-reaching questions which can scarcely be summarily disposed of one way or another. What Huxley how proceeds to do is, by exposition, to unfold his own conception of the functions of government, which evidently, if accepted, negatives the other theory ; he then by a series of deductions from his own theory shows that education falls within the functions of government, and thus comes back to the original subject of contention.] Second Part. {Direct Argunmni). L — Exposition of the nature of society as based on two opposing tend- encies, the individualistic and the social. The function of government is to mediate between these. The principle of mediation, the end of government is the good of mankind. 1. Hence there is no such arbitrary limitation in the function of government as that combated above {A deductive or a priori argument from a general principle). 2. His theory supported by actual cases of government interference which no one thinks of objecting to (Argument a posteriori, i.e., from the facts to tJie general principle). 3. His theory supported by Plato, More, Owen, etc. (Argument from authority). II. — ^Accepting his theory as true, Huxley investigates what in detail are the functions of government — in other words expounds * the good of mankind.' He enumerates these — the promotion of peace, the intel- lectual and moral development of its subjects, etc. But education promotes all these things. Therefore education is within the function of government. (Syllogism). H ABO UMENTA TIVE EXPOSITIONS. 396 Plan: " Whatsoever a Man Soweth, that shall ho also Reap." Introduction. 1. Pooplu diHposed to diHputo thia asBortion in its metaphorical sense, and to find chance and unfairness in the distribution of results. Thesis. 2. The assertion is true in the sense in which all laws of the universe are true, — i.e., either actually realized, or realized as a tendency. 3. Exposition of moaning of last phrase by analogy of physical forces. 4. Exposi' Ion of thesis by particular example from student life, busi- ness life, etc. Proof. 5. This principle in harmony with all we know of the universe. 6. Practically, men in general have always acted upon it ; without it, life would be reduced to confusion. 7. Its truth shown by particular examples. 8. Examples of apparent exceptions examined and shown to be no exceptions. 9. Striking exemplification of the principle in the serious works of Shakespeare, the greatest of all observers of life. 10. The most plausible exception indicated in the common idea that merit does not receive adequate reward. 11. But merit really rewarded, not, indeed, adequately by external recompense, which is never the main aim of the best work, but Ly inner satisfaction, good accomplished, etc., for which the true workman * sows.' 12. The assertion of last paragraph illustrated by concrete example : comparison of the unscrupulous business-man, and the business- man with other aims than mere money-getting, etc. Conchision. 13. Tonic effect of thorough belief in the principle, importance of it for the young especially, etc. Li '.m :n.i,-i I; SPEECHES, 807 CHAPTER XXIX. SPEECHES. MODELS. I. — ^The Age of Chivalry. — It is now sixteen or seventeen yeara since I saw the Queen of France, then the Dauphiness, at Versailles ; and surely never lighted on this orb, which she hardly seemed to touch, a more delightful vision. I saw her just above the horizon, decorating and cheering the elevated sphere she just began 6 to move in — ^glittering like the morning star, full of life, and splen- dor, and joy. Oh ! what a revolution ! and what a heart must I have to contemplate without emotion that elevation and that fall 1 Little did I dream, when she added titles of veneration to those of enthusiastic, distant, respectful love, that she should ever be obliged lo to carry the sharp antidote against disgrace concealed in that bosom; little did I dream that I should have lived to see such disasters fallen upon hor in a nation of gallant men, in a nation of men of honour and of cavaliers. I thought ten thousand swords must have leaped from their scabbards to avenge even a look that threatened her with is insult. But the age of chivalry is gone. That of sophisters, economists, and calculators has succeeded ; and the glory of Eiiro|)e is extinguished for ever. Never, never more shuU wo behold that generous loyalty to rank and sex, that proud submisuion, that dignified obedience, that subordination of the heart, which kept alive, 20 even in servitude itself, the spirit of an exalted fixiedora. The unbought grace of life, the cheap defence of nations, the nurse of manly sentiment and heroic enterprise is gone ! It is gone, that sensibility of principle, that chastity of honour, which felt a stain like a wound, which inspired courage whilst it mitigat<%d ferocity, which ennobled 25 whatever it touched, and under which vice itself lost half its evil by loeing all its grossness. Jiurk^$ " Be/teetiont on the French Revolwtion," W 398 EXPOSITORY COMPOSITIONS. If II. — The Gettysburg^ Speech. — Fourscore and seven years ago, our fathers brought forth on this continent a new nation, conceived in liberty, and dedicated to the proposition that all men are created equal. Now we are engaged in a great civil war, testing whether 6 that nation, or any nation so conceived and so dedicated can long endure. We are met on a great battlefield of that war. We have come to dedicate a portion of that field as a final resting-place for those who here gave their lives that that nation might live. It is altogether fitting and proper that we should do this. But in a 10 larger sense we cannot dedicate, we cannot consecrate, we cannot hallow this ground. The brave men, living and dead, who struggled here, have consecrated it far above our poor power to add or detract. The world will little note, nor long remember, what we say here, but it can never forget what they did here. It is for us, the 16 living, rather to be dedicated here to the unfinished work which they who fought here have thus far so nobly advanced. It is rather for us to be here dedicated to the groat task remaining before us, — that from these honored dead we take increased devotion to that cause for which they gave the last full measure of devotion, 20 — that we here highly resolve that these dead shall not have died in vain, — that this nation, under God, shall have a new birth of free- dom, — and that government of the people, by the people, for the people, shall not perish from the earth. Lineoln't Speechet. Ill— The Liverpool Speech in Defence of the Northern States. — For more than twenty-five years I have been made per- fectly familiar with popular assemblies in all parts of my country except the extreme South. There has not for the whole of that time been a single day of my life when it would have been safe for me to go 6 South of Mason's and Dixon's line in my own country, and all for one reason: my solemn, earnest, persistent testimony against that which I consider the most atrocious thing under the sun — the system of American slavery in a great free republic. [Cheers.] I have passed through that early period when right of free speech was denied me. 10 Again and again I have attempted to address audiences that, for no other crime than that of free speech, visited me with all manner of i! SPEECHES. 399 contumelious epithets; and now since I have been in England, although I have met with greater kindness and courtesy on the part of most than I deserved, yet, on the other hand, I perceive that the Southern influence prevails to some extent in England. [Applause 15 and uproar.] It is my old acquaintance ; I understand it perfectly [laughter] — and I have always held it to be an unfailing truth that where a man had a cause that would bear examination he was per- fectly willing to have it spoken about. [Applause.] And when in Manchester I saw those huge placards: "Who is Henry Wardao Beecher?" — [laughter, cries of "Quite right," and applause] — and when in Liverpool I was told that there were those blood-red placards, purporting to say what Henry Ward Beecher had said, and calling upon Englishmen to suppress free speech — I tell you what I thought. I thought simply this: " I am glad of it." [Laughter.] 26 Why ? Because if they had felt perfectly secure, that you are the minions of the South and the slaves of slavery, they would have been perfectly still. [Applause and uproar.] And, therefore, when I saw so much nervous apprehension that, if I were permitted to speak — [hisses and applause] — when I found they were afraid to so have me speak — [hisses, laughter, and " No, no ! "] — when I found that they considered my speaking damaging to their cause — [applause] when I found that they appealed from facts and reasonings to mob law [applause and uproar] — I said, no man need tell me what the heart and secret counsel of these men are. They tremble and are 35 afraid. [Applause, laughter, hisses, " No, no ! " and a voice: "New York mob."] Now, personally, it is a matter of very little conse- quence to me whether I speak here tonight or not. [Laughter and cheers.] But, one thing is very certain, if you do permit me to speak here to-night you will hear very plain talking. [Applause and 40 hisses.] You will not find a man — [interruption] — you will not find me to be a man that dared to speak about Great Britain three thousand miles o£F, and then is afraid to speak to Great Britain when he stands on her shores. [Immense applause and hisses.] And if I do not mistake the tone and temper of Englishmen, they had 46 rather have a man who opposes them in a manly way — [applause from all parts of the hall] — than a sneak that agrees with them in ?:: 1^ i^i; 5111 400 EXPOSITORY COMPOSITIONS. i ,1 ! I ii ' an unmanly way. [Applause and ♦* Bravo ! "] Now, if I can carry you with me by sound convictions, I shall be immensely glad — [applause]; 60 but if I cannot carry you with me by facts and sound arguments, I do not wish you to go with me at all ; and all that I ask is simply PAIR PLAY. [Applause, and a voice: " You shall have it too."] Those of you who are kind enough to wish to favor my speaking — and you will observe that my voice is slightly husky, from having 56 spoken almost every night in succession for some time past, — those who wish to hear me will do me the kindness simply to sit still, and to keep still ; and I and my friends the Secessionists will make all the noise. [Laughter.] There are two dominant races in modern history — the Germanic 60 and the Romanic races. The Germanic races tend to personal liberty, to a sturdy individualism, to civil and political liberty. The Rom- anic race tends to absolutism in government ; it is clannish ; it loves chieftains ; it develops a people that crave strong and showy govern- ments to support and plan for them. The Anglo-Saxon race belongs 66 to the great German family, and is a fair exponent of its peculiari- ties. The Anglo-Saxon carries self-government and self -development with him wherever he goes. He has popular GOVERNMENT and popular INDUSTRY; for the effects of a generous civil liberty are not seen a whit more plain in the good order, in the intelligence, 70 and in the virtue of a self-governing people, than in their amazing enterprise and the scope and power of their creative industry. The power to create riches is just as much a part of the Anglo-Saxon virtues as the power to create good order and social safety. The things required for prosperous labor, prosperous manufactures, and 75 prosperous commerce are three. First, liberty ; second, liberty ; third, liberty. [Hear, hear!] Though these are not merely the same liberty, as I shall show you. First, there must be liberty to follow those laws of business which experience has developed, without imposts or restrictions or governmental intrusions. Business simply 80 wants to be let alone. [Hear, hear!] Then, secondly, there must be liberty to distribute and exchange products of industry in any market without burdensome tariffs, without imposts, and without vexatious regulations. There must be these two liberties — lil)erty to a SPEECHES. 401 create wealth as the makers of it think best, according to the light and experience which business has given them; and then liberty to 88 distribute what they have created without unnecessary vexatious burdens. The comprehensive law of the ideal industrial condition of the world is free manufacture and free trade. [Hear, hear! A voice; "The Morrill tariff." Another voice: "Monroe."] I have said there were three elements of liberty. The third is the necessity of an oo intelligent and free race of customers. There must be freedom among the producers; there must be freedom among distributors; there must be freedom among the customers. It may not have occurred to you that it makes any difference what one's customers are, but it does in all regular and prolonged business. The con- 06 dition of the customer determines how much he will buy, deter- mines of what sort he will buy. Poor and ignorant people buy little and that of the poorest kind. The richest and the intelligent, having the more means to buy, buy the most, and always buy the best. Here, then, are the three liberties : liberty of the producer, loo liberty of the distributor, and liberty of the consumer. The first two need no discussion ; they have been long thoroughly and bril- liantly illustrated by the political economists of Great Britain and by her eminent statesmen ; but it seems to me that enough attention has not been directed to the third ; and, with your patience, I will 106 dwell upon that for a moment, before proceeding to other topics. It is a necessity of every manufacturing and commercial people that their customers should be very wealthy and intelligent. Let us put the subject before you in the familiar light of your own local experience. To whom do the tradesmen of Liverpool sell the most no goods at the highest profit? To the ignorant and poor, or to the educated and prosperous? [A voice: "To the Southerners." Laughter.] The poor man buys simply for his body ; he buys food, he buys clothing, he buys fuel, he buys lodging. His rule ia to buy the least and the cheapest that he can. He goes to the store as ii6 seldom as he can ; he brings away as little as he can ; and he buys for the least he can. [Much laughter.] Poverty is not a misfortune to the poor only who suffer it, but it is more or less a misfortune to all with whom he deals. On the other hand, a man well off — how !!:,!! 1 . I m EXfOHlTonr COMPOSITIONS. 120 is it with him? He buys in far greater quantity. He can afford to do it; he has the money to pay for it. He buys in far greater variety, because he seeks to gratify not merely physical wants, but also mental wants. He buys for the satisfaction of sentiment and taste, as well as of sense. He buys silk, wool, flax, cotton; 12B he buys all metals — iron, silver, gold, platinum ; in short, he buys for all necessities, and all substances. But that is not all. He buys a better quality of goods. He buys richer silks, finer cottons, higher grade wools. Now a rich silk means so much skill and care of somebody's that has been expended upon it to make ISO it finer and richer; and so of cotton and so of w ol. That is, the price of the finer goods runs back to the very beginning, and remunerates the workman as well as the merchant. Now, the whole laboring community is as much interested and profited as the mere merchant, in this buying and selling of the higher grades in the 136 greater varieties and quantities. The law of price is the skill ; and the amount of skill expended in the work is as much for the market as are the goods. A man comes to market and csays: " I have a pair of hands," and he obtains the lowest wages. Another man comes and says : " I have something more than a pair of hands ; I have 140 truth and fidelity." He gets a higher price. Another man comes and says : "I have something more ; I have hands, and strength, and fidelity, and skill." He gets more than either of the others. The next man comes and says : "I have got hands, and strength, and skill, and fidelity ; but my hands work more than that. They 146 know how to create things for the fancy, for the affections, for the moral sentiments "; and he gets more than either of the others. The last man comes and says : "I have all these qualities, and have them so highly that it is a peculiar genius "; and genius carries the whole market and gets the highest price. [Loud applause.] So that both 160 the workman and the merchant are profited by having purchasers that demand quality, variety, and quantity. Now, if this be so in the town or the city, it can only be so because it is a law. This is the specific development of a general or universal law, and there- fore we should expect to find it as true of a nation as of a city like 166 Liverpool. I know that it is so, and you know that it is true of all I 8PBE0BES. 403 IS the world; and it is just as important to have customers educated, intelligent, moral, and rich out of Liverpool as it is in Liverpool. [Applause,] They are able to buy ; they want variety, they want the very best ; and those are the customers you want. That nation is the best customer that is freest, because freedom works prosperity, loo industry, and wealth. Great Britain, then, aside from moral con- siderations, has a direct commercial and pecuniary interest in the ■ liberty, civilization, and wealth of every nation on the globe. [Loud applause.] You also have an interest in this, because you are a moral and religious people. [" Oh, oh ! " Laughter and applause], les You desire it from the highest motives ; and godliness is profitable in all things, having the promise of the life that now is, as well as of that which is to come ; but if there were no hereafter, and if man had no progress in this life, and if there were no question of civiliza- tion at all, it would be worth your while to protect civilization and 170 liberty, merely as a commercial speculation. To evangelize has more than a moral and religious import — it comes back to temporal relations. Wherever a nation that is crushed, cramped, degraded under despotism in struggling to be free, you — Leeds, Sheffield, Manchester, Paisley — all have an interest that that nation should be 176 free. When depressed and backward people demand that they may have a chance to rise — Hungary, Italy, Poland — it is a duty for humanity's sake, it is a duty for the highest moral motives, to sym- pathize with them ; but besides all these there is a material and an interested reason why you should sympathize with them. Pounds 180 and pence join with conscience and with honor in this design. Now, Great Britain's chief want is — what 1 They have said that your chief want is cotton. I deny it. Your chief want is consumers. [Applause and hisses.] You have got skill, you have got capital, and you have got machinery enough to iss manufacture goods for the whole population of the globe. You could turn out fourfold as much as you do if you only had the market to sell in. It is not so much the want, therefore, of fabric, though there may be a temporary obstruction of it ; but the principal and increasing want — increasing from year to year — is, where shall 190 we find men to buy what we can manufacture so fast? [Interrup- A i 4'' i' m 404 EXPOSITORY COMPOSITIONS. ; 11 ifi;! tion, and a voice, "The Morrill tariff," and applause.] Before the American war broke out, your warehouses were loaded with goods that you could not sell. [Applause and hisses.] You had over- 196 manufactured ; what is the meaning of over-manufacturing but this; that you had skill, capital, machinery, to create faster than you had customers to take goods off your hands ? And you know that rich as Great Britain is, vast as are her manufactures, if she could have fourfold the present demand, she could make fourfold riches to-mor- 800 row; and every political economist will tell you that your want is not cotton primarily, but customers. Therefore, the doctrine, how to make customers, is a great deal more imi)ortant to Great Britain than the doctrine how to raise cotton. It is to that doctrine I ask from you, business men, practical men, men of fact, sagacious 205 Englishmen — to that point I ask a moment's attention. [Shouts of " Oh, oh ! " hisses, and applause.] There are no more continents to be discovered. [Hear, hear !] The market of the future must be found — how ? There is very little hope of any more demand being created by new fields. If you are to have a better market there 210 must be some kind of process invented to make the old fields better. [A voice, " Tell ua something new," shouts of " Order," and inter- ruption.] Let us look at it, then. You must civilize the world in ordez' to make a better class of purchasers. [Interruption.] If you were to press Italy down again under the feet of despotism, Italy, 216 discouraged, could draw but very few supplies from you. But give her liberty, kindle schools throughout her valleys, spur her industry, make treaties with her by which she can exchange her wine, and her oil, and her silk, for your manufactured goods ; and for every eflfort that you make in that direction there will come back profit to you 220 by increased traffic w^ith her. [Loud applause.] If Hungary asks to be an unshackled nation — if by freedom she will rise in virtue and intelligence, then by freedom she will acquire a more multifarious industry, which she will be willing to exchange for your manufac tures. Her liberty is to be found — where 1 You will find it in the 226 Word of God, you will find it in the code of history ; but you will also find it in the Price Current [Hear, hear !] ; and every free nation, every civilized people — every people that rises from barbar- ism to industry and intelligence, becomes a better customer. ■'] SPEECHES. 405 A savage is a man of one story, and that one story a cellar. When a man begins to be civilized he raises another story. When you 230 Christianize and civilize the man, you put story upon story, for you develop faculty after faculty ; and you have to supply every story with your productions. The savage is a man one story deep ; the civilized man is thirty stories deep. [Ajiplause.] Now, if you go to a lodging-house, where there are three or four men, your sales to 235 them may, no doubt, be worth something ; but if you go to a lodging- house like some of those which I saw in Edinburgh, which seemed to contain about twenty stories [" Oh, oh! " and interruption], every story of which is full, and all who occupy buy of you — which is the better customer, the man who is drawn out, or tlie man who is pinched 240 up? [Laughter.] Now, there is in this a great and sound principle of economy. ["Yah, yah!" from the passage outside the hall and loud laughter.] If the South should be rendered independent [at this junc- ture mingled cheering and hissing became immense ; half the audiv ace rose to their feet, waving hats and handkerchiefs, and in every part of 245 the hall there was the greatest commotion and uproar.] You have had your turn now ; now let me have mine again. [Loud applause and laughter.] It is a little inconvenient to talk against the wind ; but after all, if you will just keep good-natured — I am not going to lose my temper; will you watch yours? [Applause.] Besides all that, 250 it rests me, and gives me a chance, you know, to get my breath. [Applause and hisses.] And I think that the bark of those men is worse than their bite. They do not mean any harm — they don't know any better. [Loud laughter, applause, hisses, and continued uproar.] I was saying, when these responses broke in, that it was 256 worth our while to consider both alternatives. What will be the result if this present struggle shall eventuate in the separation of America, and making the South — [loud applause, hisses, hooting and crys of *' Bravo I "] — a slave territory exclusively — [cries of " No, no ! " and laughter] — and the North a free territory, — what will be 2co the final result ? You will lay the foundation for carrying the slave population clear through to the Pacific Ocean. This is the first step. There is not a man that has been a leader of the South any time within these twenty years that has not had this for a plan. It f' 15 ; hi :, .mil S*; ii; II I m ^XPOSiTOBY COMPOSITIOm. 266 was for this that Texas was invaded, first by colonists, next by marauders, until it was wrested from Mexico. It was for this that they engaged in the Mexican War itself, by which the vast territory reaching to the Pacific was added to the Union. Never for a mo- ment have they given up the plan of spreading the American insti- 270 tutions, as they call them, straight through toward the West, until the slave, who has washed his feet in the Atlantic, shall be carried to wash them in the Pacific. [Cries of '* Question," and uproar.] There ! I have got that statement out, and you cannot put it back. [Laughter and applause.] Now, let us consider the prospect. If 276 the South becomes a slave empire, what relation will it have to you as a customer ? [A voice : " Or any other man." Laughter.] It would be an empire of twelve millions of people. Now, of these, eight millions are white, and four millions black. [A voice : " How many have you got 1 " Applause and laughter. Another voice : 280 ** Free your own slaves ! "] Consider that one-third of the whole are the miserably poor, un-buying blacks. [Cries of " No, no ! " " Yes, yes ! " and interruption.] You do not manufacture much for them. [Hisses, " Oh ! " " No ! "] You have not got machinery coarse enough. [Laughter, and " No."] Your labour is too skilled 286 by far to manufacture bagging and linsey-woolsey. [A Southerner : " We are going to free them, every one."] Then you and I agree *5xactly. [Laughter.] One other third consists of a poor, unskilled, degraded white population ; and the remaining one-third, which is a large allowance, we will say, intelligent and rich. 290 Now here are twelve millions of people, and only one-third of them are customers that can afibrd to buy the kind of goods that you bring to market. [Interruption and uproar.] My friends, I saw a man once, who was a little late at a railway station, chase an express train. He did not catch it. [Laughter.] If you are going to stop 296 this meeting, you have got to stop it before I speak ; for after I have got the things out, you may chase as long as you please — you would not catch them. [Laughter and interruption.] But there is luck in leisure ; I'm going to take it easy. [Laughter.] Two-thirds of the population of the Southern States to-day are non-purchasers 800 of English goods. [A voice : " No, they are not ; " ** No, no ! " and 1 by SPEECHES. 4fff uproar.] Now you must recollect another fact — namely, that this is going on clear through to the Pacific Ocean ; and if by sympathy or help you establish a slave empire, you sagacious Britons — [*' Oh, oh ! " and hooting] — if you like it better, then, I will leave the ad- jective out — [laughter, Hear ! and applause] — are busy in favouring aos the establishment of an empire from ocean to ocean that should have fewest customers and the largest non-buying population. [Applause, " No, no ! " A voice : "I thought it was the happy people that populated fastest."] Now, what can England make for the poor white population of sio such a future empire, and for her slave population 1 What carpets, what linens, what cottons can you sell them 1 What machines, what looking-glasses, what combs, what leather, what books, what pictures, what engravings 1 [A voice : " We'll sell them ships."] You may sell ships to a few, but what ships can you sell to two- 816 thirds of the population of poor whites and blacks 1 [Applause.] A little bagging and a little linsey-woolsey, a few whips and manacles, are all that you can sell for the slave. [Great applause and uproar.] This very day, in the slave States of America there are eight millions out of twelve millions that are not, and cannot be your customers 320 from the very laws of trade. [A voice : " Then how are they clothed 1 " and interruption.]. . . But I know that you say, you cannot help sympathizing with a gallant people. [Hear, hear !] They are the weaker people, the minority; and you cannot help going with the minority who ares26 struggling for their rights against the majority. Nothing could be more generous, when a weak party stands for its own legitimate rights against imperious pride and power, than to sympathize with the weak. But who ever sympathized with a weak thief, because three constables had got hold of him ) [Hear, hear !] And yet the 830 one thief in three policemen's hands is the weaker party. I suppose you would sympathize with him 1 [Hear, hear ! laughter, and ap- plause.] Why, when that infamous king of Naples — Bomba, was driven into Gaeta by Garibaldi with his immortal band of patriots, and Cavour sent against him the army of Northern Italy, who was ssfi the weaker party then 1 The tyrant and his minions ; and the * ii Mi i i 1 ! w. 'I I 408 EXPOSITORY COMPOSITIONS. majority was with tho nol^lo Italian patriots, struggling for liberty. I never hoard that Old England sent deputations to King Bomba, and yet his troops resisted bravely there. [Laughter and interrup- 840 tion.] To-day tho majority of tho people of Rome is with Italy Nothing but French bayonets keeps her from going back to t' • kingdom of Italy, to which she belongs. Do you sympathize Yith the minority in Rome or the majority in Italy 1 [A voice : " "With Italy."] To-day the South is the minority in America, and they are 845 fighting for independetice / For what ? [Uproar. A voice : •* Three cheers for independence ! " and hisses.] I could wish so much bravery had a better cause, and that so much self-denial had been less deluded ; that the poisonous and venomous doctrine of state rights might have been kept aloof ; that so many gallant spirits, such 860 as Jackson, might still have lived. [Great applause and loud cheers, again and again renewed.] The force of these facts, historical and incontrovertible, cannot bo broken, except by diverting attention by an attack upon the North. It is said that the North is fighting for Union, and not for emancipation. The North is fighting for 866 Union, for that ensures emancipation. [Loud cheers, " Oh, oh ! " " No, no ! " and cheers.] A great many men sjiy to ministers of the Gospel : " You pretend to be preaching and working for the love of the people. Why, you are all ilie time preaching for the sake of the Church." What does the minister say ? " It is by means of •60 the Church that we help the pirple," and when men say that we are fighting for the Union, I too say we are fighting for the Union. [Hear, hear ! and a voice : " That's right."] But the motive deter- mines the value ; and why are we fighting for the Union 1 Because we never shall forget the testimony of our enemies. They have gone 865 off declaring that the Union in the hands of the North was fatal to slavery. [Loud applause.] There is testimony in court for you. [A voice : " See that," and laughter.]. . In the first place I am ashamed to confess that such was the thoughtlessness — [interruption] — such was the stupor of the North — 870 [renewed interruption] — you will get a word at a time ; to-morrow will let folks see what it is you don't want to hear — that for a period of twenty-five years she went to sleep, and permitted herself to be BPEEGHES. 400 )a. drugged and poisoned with the Southern prejudice against black men. [Applause and uproar.] The evil was made worse, because, when any object whatever has caused anger between political parties, 87S a political animosity arises against that object, no matter how inno- cent in itself ; no matter what were the original influences which ex- cited the quarrel. Thus the colored man has been the football be- tween the two parties in the North, and has suffered accordingly. I confess it to my shame. But I am speaking now on my own sso ground, for I began twenty-five years ago, with a small party, to combat the unjust dislike of the coloured man. [Loud applause, dissension, and uproar. The interruption at this point became so violent that the friends of Mr. Beecher throughout the hall rose to their feet, waving hats and handkerchiefs, and renewing their shouts 886 and applause. The interruption lasted some minutes.] "Well, I have lived to see a total revolution in the Northorn feeling — I stand here to bear solemn witness of that. It is not my opinion ; it is my knowledge. [Great uproar.] Those men who undertook to stand up for the rights of all men — black as well as white — have increased soo in number ; and now what party in the North represents those men that resist the evil prejudices of past years 1 The Republicans are that party. [Loud Applause.] And who are those men in the North that have oppressed the negro ? They are the Peace Demo- crats'f and the prejudice for which in England you are attempting to 896 punish me, ia a prejudice raised by the vien who have opposed me all my life. These pro-slavery Democrats abuse the negro. I defended him, and they mobbed me for doing it. Oh, justice ! [Loud laughter, applause, and hisses.] This is as if a man should commit an assault, maim and wound a neighbor, and a surgeon being called <w in should begin to dress his wounds, and by and by a policeman should come and collar the surgeon and haul him off to prison on account of the wounds he was healing. Now, I told you I would not flinDh from anything. I am going to read you some questions that were sent after me from Glasgow, 406 purporting to be from a workingman. [Great interruption.] If those pro-slavery interrupters think they will tire me out, they will do more than eight millions in America could. [Applause and m I' ' f ^1 a.': 'J 410 EXPOSITORY COMPOSITIONS. i. i I' .•i 1 1 m M ti' renewed interruption.] I was reading of a question on your side 410 too. " Is it not a fact that in most of the Northern States laws exist precluding negroes from equal civil and political rights with the whites ? That in the State of New York the negro has to be the possessor of at least $250 worth of property to entitle him to the privileges of a white citizen ? That in some of the Northern States 416 the colored man, whether bond or free, is by law excluded altogether, and not suflFered to enter the State limits, under severe penalties'! and is not Mr. Lincoln's own State one of them 1 and in view of the fact that the twenty million dollars compensation which was promised to Missouri in aid of emancipation was defeated in the last Congress 420 (the strongest Republican Congress that ever assembled), what has the North done toward emancipation 1 " Now, then, there's a dose for you. [A voice : ** Answer it."] And I will address myself to the answering of it. And first, the bill for emancipation in Missouri, to which this money was denied, was a bill which was 426 drawn by what we call "log-rollers," who insjrted in it an enor- mously disproportioned price for the slaves. The Republicans offered to give them ten million dollars for the slaves in Missouri, and they out- voted it because they t ould not get twelve million dollars. Already half the slave populatiOiX have been "run" down South, and yet they 430 came up to Congress to jjet twelve million dollars for what was not worth ten millions, nor even eight millions. Now as to those States that had passed " black " laws, as we call them ; they are filled with Southern emigrants. The southern parts of Ohio, the southern part of Indiana, where I myself lived for years, and which I knew like a 436 book, the southern part of Illinois, where Mr. Lincoln lives — [great uproar] — these parts are largely settled by emigrants from Kentucky, Tennessee, Georgia, Virginia, :.nd North Carolina, and it was their vote, or the Northern votes pandering for j^olitical reasons to theirs, that passed in those States the infamous " black " laws ; and the 440 Republicans in these States have a record, clean and white, as having opposed these laws in every instance as "infamous." Now as to the State of New York ; it is asked whether a negro is not obliged to have a certain freehold property, or a certain amount of property, before he can vote. It is so still in North Carolina and Rhode 1 SPEECHES. 411 Island for white folks — it is so in New York State. [Mr. Beecher's 446 voice slightly failed him here, and he was interrupted by a person who tried to imitate him. Cries of "Shame!" and "Turn him out ! "] I am not undertaking to say that these faults of the North, which were brought upon them by the bad example and influence of the South, are all cured ; but I do say that they are in process of 450 cure which promises, if unimpeded by foreign influence, to make all such odious distinctions vanish. There is another fact that I wish to allude to — not for the sake of reproach or blame, but by way of claiming your more lenient con- sideration — and that is, that slavery was entailed upon us by your 455 action. [Hear, hear!] Against the earnest protests of the colonists the then £tovernment of Great Britain — I will concede not knowing what were the mischiefs — ignorantly, but in point of fact, forced slave traffic on the unwilling colonists. [Great uproar, in the midst of which one individual was lifted up and carried out of the room 46o amid cheers and hisses.] The Chairman : If you would only sit down no disturbance would take place. The disturbance having subsided, Mr. Beecher said: l was going to ask you, suppose a child i8 4«6 boi-n with liereditary disease; suppose this disease was entailed upon him by p-rents who had contracted it by their own misconduct, would it be fair that those parents that had brought into the world the diseased child, should rail at the child because it was diseased? [" No, no ! "] Would not the child have a right to turn round and 478 say : " Father, it wi»,s your fault that I had it, and you ought to be pleased to be patient with my deficiencies." [Applause and hisses* anc. cries of "Order!" Great interruption and great disturbance hero took place on the right of the platform ; and the chairman said that if the persons around the unfortunate individual who had caused 476 the disturbance would allow him to speak alone, but not assist him in making the disturbance, it might soon be put an end to. The interruption continued until aaother person was carried out of the hall.] Mr. Beecher continued: I do not ask that you should justify slavery in us, because it was wrong in you two hundred years ago ; 480 Mi ■-4- ml 1 i In '. r i !i:,'i 412 EXPOSITOliY CVMFOSITlONi^. but having ignorantly been the means of fixing it upon us, now that we are struggling with» mortal struggles to free ourselves from it, we have a right to your tolerance, your patience, and charitable con- structions. *85 No man can unveil the future ; no man can tell what revolutions are about to break upon the world ; no man can tell what destiny belongs to France, nor to any of the European powers; but one thing is certain, that in the exigencies of the future there will be combinations and recombinations, and that those ntvtioi 490 that are of the same faith, the same blood, and the "irae substantial interests, ought not to be alienated from each other, but ought to stand together. [Immense cheering and hisses.] I do not sfiy that you ought not to be in the most friendly alliance with France or with Germany ; but I do say that your own children, the 495 oflfspring of England, ought to be nearer to you than any people of strange tongue. [A voice : " Degenerate sons," applause and hisses ; another voice : '* What about the Trent f "] If there had been any feelings of bitterness in America, let me tell you that they had been excited, rightly or wrongly, under the impression that 500 Great Britain was going to intervene between us and our own lawful struggle, [A voice : " No ! " and applause.] With the evidence that there is no such intention all bitter feelings will pass away. [Applause.] We do not agree with the recent doctrine of neutral- ity as a question of law. But it is past, and we are not disposed to 505 raise that question. We accept it now as a fact, and we say that the utterance of Lord llussel at Blairgowrie — [Applause, hisses, and a voice : " What about Lord Brougham?"] — together with the de- claration of the government in stopping war-steamers here — [great uproar and applause] — has gone far toward quieting every fear and 610 removing every apprehension from our minds. [Uproa»* and shouts of applause.] And now in the future it is the work of every good man and patriot not to create divisions, but to do the things that will make for peace. ['* Oh, oh ! " and laughter 1 On our part it shall be done. [Applause and hisses, and *' j^ Oj no ! " j On your 615 part it ought to be done ; and when in any of vhe convv> .vms that come upon the world. Great Britain finds herself struggling single- SPEECHES. 413 handed against the gigantic powers that spread oppression and dark- ness — [Applause, hisses, and uproar] — there ought to be such cor- diality that she can turn and Jiy to her first-born and most illus- trious child, " Come ! " [Hea,r, hear ! applause, tremendous cheers, 62o and uproar.] I will not say that England cannot again, as hitherto, single-handed manage any power — [applause and uproar] — but 1 will say that England and America together for religion and liberty — [A voice : " Soap, soap," uproar, and great applause] — are a match for the world. [Applause; a voice: "They don't want any more 525 soft soap."] Now, gentlemen and ladies — [A voice : "Sam Slick" ; and another voice : " Ladies and gentlemen, if you please "] — when I came I was asked whether I would answer questions, and I very readily consented to do so, as I had in othe- places ; but I will tell you it was because I expected to have the opportunity of speaking 630 with some sort of ease and quiet. [A voice : " So you have."] I have for an hour and a half spoken against a storm — [Hear, hear !] — and you yourselves are witnesses that, by the interruption, I have been obliged to strive with my voice, so that I no longer have the power to control this assembly. [Applause.] And although I am 640 in spirit perfectly willing to answer any question, and more than glad of the chance, yet I am by this very unnecessary opposition to- night incapacitated physically from doing it. Ladies and gentlemen, I bid you good-evening. Biography of n. W. Beecher. EXAMINATION OF MODELS. Most speeches, even great speeches, make rather indifferent reading. There are several reasons why this is true, a chief reason being that if orators spoke as concisely and coherently as essayists write, no popular audience could follow their meaning. Some very great sf eakers have failed to achieve really eflfective oratory through ignoring this funda- mental difference. Yet a speech needs a plan or method just as an essay does, and if a speech is to be really effective it must be thoroughly prepared, even to the sentence-structure. SI m- ^ » 5 mj^f ''T '• mt'ii I I i 414 EXPOSITORY COMPOSITIONS. The besfc way to prepare a speech is to write it out from a plan. The danger of this method is that the style will be unsuited to delivery ; only experience can tell one what he may write for delivery, because experi- ence only can tell him how much an audience can understand through the ear. Even in an essay illustrati iis and diffuse explanations are often necessary to simplify a subject lor popular reading, how much more are these aids ncosary in speeches where the listener cannot take time to illustrate and r ' to himself. Yet a speech must not be too diffuse : it must be fittea :e hearers, and if the audience is very mixed as to capacity and knowledge, it is extremely difficult to make a speech of any literary merit to suit all the auditors. These and the following remarks apply to serious addresses, such as lectures, sermons, political orations, lawyers' arguments, rather than to mere conventional speeches at banquets, receptions, and other similar gatherings. If a speaker wou)-'. be successful he must consider above all the require- ments of logic, reasoning his views closely and simply, though avoiding the appearance of formal logic. But he must also weigh carefully the age, knowledge, sentiments and prejudices of his hearers ; and his own manners, that he may adapt them to the situation in which he may find himself. The beginning of a speech is a stumbling-block to many ; hence it is well to have a distinct introduction prepared before. To mention the occasion of the assemblage is perhaps the most general mode, and it is an easy and graceful method of establishing relations with an audience. By a skilful transition the speaker may next turn the attention to the subject of which he is to speak, dwelling upon it in a broad and liberal manner so as to familiarize his hearers with the contemplation of it. This makes it easy to strike the key-note of what he would impress concerning that subject, and ho may proceed to state the propositions which he desires to establish : though it may be wise in cases to state these propositions seriatim^ following each with its own proof. The most important part of any speech which is addressed to the intellect is the proof, au'l upon the facts and syllogisms of the proofs of the propositions must depend the effect of the speech upon all educated and reasonable minds. When the speaker has concluded his proofs he proceeds to his perora- tion, in which he makes a brief rdsutnd of what he has stated and established, and attempts to move the fefjlings of his hearers through the force of the arguments he has adduced. In the peroration he may use SPEECHES. 415 every right aid to conviction and persuasion, and in perorations are some* times found examples of wonderfully eloijuent sentences in which we meet logic, feeling, and imagination in the closest union. Pronunciation should be conventional, gesticulation moderate, articula- tion definite, and care should be taken that the voice may be managed to the best advantage. Sentences should neither be so short as to be flat and disappointing nor so long as to be involved, tedious, or unintelligible. Young speakers may without impropriety use numerous similitudes, but a florid or hyperbolic style always defeats itself. Animation, cheerfulness, earnestness, breadth of view, go far to win a sympathetic hearing ; while accuracy of fact, and clearness of reasoning influence the judgment. Thorough knowledge of the subject spoken of is not only the best foundation for accuracy and clearness, but will, when combined with enthusiasm, usually produce a sincere eloquence. 1. This is but a fragment of a speech. (Though Burke's Reflections is not literally a speech, it is regarded as oratory.) It serves to illustrate three of the qualities of successful speaking — strength and liberality of thought, elevation and warmth of feeling, ■poetical beauty and sublimity of imagery. The language is such as to be both intelligible and moving, no matter what audience may listen. These great qualities of oratory may be observed in the following passages also : — (a). On this question of principle, while actual suffering was yet afar off, they (the Colonies) raised their flag against a power, to which, for purposes of foreign conquest and subjugation, Rome, in the height of her glory, is not to be compared, — a power which has dotted over the surface of the whole globe with her possessions and her military posts, whose morning-drum beat, following the sun, and keeping company with the hours, circles the earth with one continuous and unbroken strain of the martial airs of England. Daniel Wehiter. (6). The poorest man may in his cottage bid defiance to all the force of the crown. It may be frail ; its roof may shako ; the wind may blow through it ; the storms may enter, the rain may enter, — but the King of England cannot enter ! All his foes dare not cross the threshold of the ruined tenement. Chatham's " Speech on the Excise Bill." 2. This speech was said by Emerson in his essay on Eloquence to be one of the "two best specimens of eloquence we have had in this country." The tone of the oration is solemn, fair-minded, and sublime ; its language is simple, humble, sincere. It is, though famous, remarkably brief ; but r '* 416 EXPOSITORY COMPOSITIONS. the facts of which it is the application or peroration nv^ro in vli^ minds of all, were so plainly told by the place itself that the second and third sentences amply fill the place of pages of statement. Indeed it is through the instinctive grasping of this truth that the orator succeeds in producing this marvel of conciseness. He felt that talking would be not only nnnecessary, but quite out of place in those awful times. Men hearing this speech must have felt that it was fitting in thought, sentiment, and words. It is therefore in its way a perfect work of art. After the first sentence the language has the dignity and purity of the greatest masterpieces of the most accomplished and cultured orators. The piece should be memorized as a model of grandeur and simplicity. 3. This speech is offered less as an example of eloquent language than as an example of courage, temper, alertness, and tact, qualities of the highest value to many classes of speakers. Many speakers make the mistake of assuming that their audiences will sympathize with them ; when disappointed in this assumption they lose their tempers, and effect no good purpose. Beecher had undertaken to speak on behalf of the North in some of the cities of England and Scotland where sympathy for the Secession States was extreme. It is related that he had spoken at Manchester and Glasgow with decided success "in the face of great and organized opposition, and at Edinburgh with little disturbance." Sympathy with the South, however, reached its highest pitch at Liver- pool and it was thought that if Beecher succeeded in delivering a strong speech there he would have achieved a great victory for his cause. An account of the preparations for a hostile reception and of the reception itself may be found in the Biography of H. W. Beecher^ by W. 0. Beecher and Rev. S. Scoville. The speech has a plan which the student will do well to analyse. The analysis will reveal the extent to which the plan was followed and the extent of the extemporary parts. The speaker struggles through opposition to the point he had set before him and one hardly knows which to admire most, the coolness, shrewdness and tenacity with which he succeeds in establishing his main argument (i.e., that a free South will be a better market for Liverpool than a slave South) or the adroitness, firmness and good-humour with which ho makes his side-strokes and retorts. m SPEECHES. 417 PRACTICE. The following are suggested as types of subjects for speechea and addresses in Debating Clubs and Literary Societies :— 1. Oration on Agassiz. 2. What the World owes to so-called Unpractical Men. 3. Inaugural Address of the President of a Literary Society. 4. Valedictory of a Pupil on Leaving an Academy. 5. The Benefits and Cost of Education. 6. A Question of National Interest. 7. Lincoln and Gladstone, a Comparison. 8. Mental and Physical Labour. 9. Self-dependence. 10. Capital Punishment. '« !f- I - ■ and Plan : Unpractical Men. 1. The diflference between immediate and remote utility. 2. What practical properly means. 3. The seeming uselessness of astronomy. 4. The experience of Columbus. 5. The search for the North Pole. 6. Some results of seemingly useless studies. 7. Moat practical good is made possible by the work of so-called un- practical men. 11 its ■1l m^i. '•i ' ill \n IP % DJBBATES. 419 CHAPTER XXX. DEBATES. MODEL OF DEBATING SPEECH. Macaulay's Speech on Education.— You will not wonder, Sir, that I am desirous to catch your eye this evening. The first duty which I performed, as a Member of the Committee of Council which is charged with the superintendence of public instruction, was to give my hearty assent to the plan which the honourable Member 6 for Finsbury calls on the House to condemn. I am one of those who have been accused in every part of the kingdom, and who are now accused in Parliament, of aiming, under specious pretences, a blow at the civil and religious liberties of the people. It is natural therefore that I should seize the earliest opportunity of vindicating myself from lo so grave a charga The honourable Member for Finsbury must excui e me if, in the remarks which I have to offer to the House, I should not follow very closely the order of his speech. The truth is that a mere answer to his speech would be no defence of myself or my colleagues. I am is surprised, I own, that a man of his acuteness and ability should, on such an occasion, have made such a speech. The country is excited from one end to the other by a great question of principle. On that question the Government had taken one side. The honourable Mem- ber stands forth as the chosen and trusted champion of a great party 20 which takes the other side. We expected to hear from him a full exposition of the views of those in whose name he speaks. But to our astonishment, he has scarcely even alluded to the controversy which has divided the whole nation. He has entertained us with sarcasms and personal anecdotes; he has talked much about matters of 25 mere detail : but I must say that, after listening with close attention to all that he has said, I am quite unable to discover whether, on the only ■PT" 11 i' l\ 420 EXPOSITORY COMPOSITIONS. important point which is in issun, he agrees with us or with that large and active body of Nonconformists which is diametrically 30 opposed to us. He has sate down without dro))ping one woi'd from which it is possible to discover whether he thinks that education is or that it is not a matter with which the State ought to interfere. Yet that is the question about which the whole nation has, during several weeks, been writing, reading, speaking, hearing, thinking, petitioning, 35 and on which it is now the duty of Parliament to pronounce a decision. That question once settled, there will be, I believe, very little room for dispute. If it be not competent to the State to interfere yirith the education of the people, the mode of interference recommended by the Committee of Council must of course be condemned. If it be 40 the right and the duty of the State to make provision for the educa- tion of the people, the objections made to our plan will, in a very few words, be shown to be frivolous. I shall take a course very different from that which has been taken by the honourable gentleman. I shall in the clearest manner profess 4S my opinion on that great question of principle which he has studiously evaded; and for my opinion I shall give what seem to me to be un- answerable reasons. I believe, Sir, that it is the right and the duty of the State to pro. vide means of education for the common people. This proposition 50 seems to me to be implied in every definition that has ever yet been given of the functions of a government. About the extent of those functions there has been much difference of opinion among ingenious men. There are some who hold that it is the business of a govern- ment to meddle with every part of the system of human life, to 65 regulate trade by bounties and prohibitions, to regulate expenditure by sumptuary laws, to regulate literature by a censorship, to regulatQ religion by an inquisition. Others go to the opposite extreme, and assign to government a very narrow sphere of action. But the very narrowest sphere that ever was assigned to governments by any school eo of political philosophy is quite wide enough for my purpose. On one point all the disputants are agreed. They unanimously acknowledge that it is the duty of every government to take order for giving security to the persons and j)roperty of the members of the community. bEBATEl^. 421 This being admitted, can it Ik) denied that the education of the com- mon people is a most effectual means of securing our persons and our 65 property] Let Adam Smith answer tliat question for me. His authority, always high, is, on this subject, entitled to peculiar respect, because he extremely disliked busy, prying, interfering governments. He was for leaving literature, arts, sci<mces, to take caro of them- selves. He was not friendly to ecclesiastical establishments. He was 70 of oinnion, that the State ought not to meddle with the education of the rich. But he has expressly told us that a distinction is to be made, particularly in a commercial and highly civilized society, between the education of the rich and the education of the poor. The education of the poor, he says, is a matter which deeply concerns 76 the commonwealth. Just as the magistrate ought to interfere for the purpose of preventing the leprosy from spreading among tlio people, he ought to interfere for the purpose of stopi)ing the progress of the moral distempers which slvq inseparable from ignorance. Nor can this duty be neglected without danger to the public peace. If you so leave the multitude uninstructed, there is serious risk that religious animosities may produce the most dreadful disordei'S. The most dreadful disordei-s ! Those are Adam Smith's own words; and pro- phetic words they were. Scarcely had he given this warning to our rulers when his prediction was fulfilled in a manner never to be for- 86 gotten. I speak of the No Popery riots of 1780. I do not know that I could find in all history a stronger proof of the proposition, that the ignorance of the common people make« the property, the limbs, the lives of all classes insecure. Witho>p L'.ie shadow of a grievance, at the summons of a madman, a hundred thousand peoi)le 90 rise in insurrection. During a whole week, there is anarchy in the greatest and wealthiest of European cities. The parliament is besieged. Your predecessor sits trembling in his chair, and expects every moment to see the door beaten in by the rufiians whose roar he heai^s all round the house. The peers are pulled out of their 95 coaches. The bishops in their lawn are forced to fly over the tiles. The chapels of foreign ambassadors, buildings made sacred by the law of nations, are destroyed. Tlie house of the Chief Justice is demol. ished. The little children of the Prime Minister arQ taken out of lilf.'. ■' fffi' :^!^ I i r 422 MXPOSITOltY COMPOSITIONS. 100 their beds and laid in their night clothes on the table of the Horse Guards, the only safe asylum from the fury of the rabble. The prisons ar? opened. Highwaymen, housebreakers, murderers, come forth to swell the mob by which they have been set free. Thirty-six fires an? burning at once in London. Then comes the retribution. Count up 105 all the wretches who wore shot, who were hanged, who were crushe<l, who drank themselves to death at the rivers of gin which ran down Holborn Hill; and you will find that battles have been lost '>.nd won with a smaller sacrifice of life. And what was the cause of this calamity, a calamity which, in the history of London, ranks with the 110 great plague and the great fire) The cause was the ignorance of n population which had been suflered, in the neighbourhood of y ''^.ces, theatres, temples, to grow up as rude and stupid as any of tattoed cannibals in New Zealand, 1 might say as any drove ui ..easts in Smithfield Market. 115 Tlie instance is striking: but it is not solitary. To the same cause are to be ascribed the riots of Nottingham, the sack of Bristol, all the outiages of Ludd, and Swing, and Rebecca, beautiful and costly machinery broken to pieces in Yorkshire, barns and haystacks blazing in Kent, fences and buildings pulled down in Wales. Could such 120 things have been done in a couritry in which the mind of the laliouror had b(;en opened by education, in wliich he had been taught to find pleasure in the exercise of his iatellect, taught to revere his Maker, taught to respect legitimate aut.hority, and taught at the same time to seek the redress of real wrongs by peaceful and constitutional means'? 125 This then is my argument, it is the duty of €k)vemment to pro- tect our persons and property irora danger. The gross ignorance of the common people is a principal cause of danger to our persons and property. Therefore, it is the duty of the Government to take care that the common people shall not be grossly ignorant. 130 And what is the alternative? It is universally allowed that, by some means. Government must protect our persons and property. If you take away education, what means do you leave? You leave means such as only necessity can justify, means which inflict a fearful amount of pain, not only on the guilty, but on the innocent who are 135 connected with the guilty. You leave guns and bayonets, stocks and rrr DEBATES. 423 whipping-posts, ireadn)iilR, solitary cells, penal colonies, gibbets. See then how the case stands. Here is an end which, as we all agree, govern- ments are bound to attain. There are only two ways of attaining it- One of those ways is by making men better, and wiser and happier. The other way is by making them infamous and miserable. Can it be 140 doubted which way we ought to prefer? Is it not sti'unge, is it not almost incredible, that pious and benevolent men should gravely pro- pound the doctrine that the magistrate is bound to punish and at the same time bound not to teach 1 To me it seems quite clear that who- ever has a right to hang has a right to educate. Can we think with- 146 out shame and remorse that more than half of those wretches who have been tied up at Newgate in our time might have been living happily, that more than half of those who are now in ouv gaols might have been enjoying liberty and using that liberty well, and such a hell on earth as Norfolk Island, need never have existed, if we had iso expended in training honest men but a small part of what we have expended in hunting and torturing rogues. I would earnestly entreat every gentleman to look at a report which is contained in the appendix to the First Volume of the Min- utes of the Committee of Council. I speak of the report made by i66 Mr. Seymour Tremenhearo on the state of that part of Monmouth- shire which is inhabited by a ])0[)ulation chiefly employed in mining. He found that, in this district, towards the close of 1839, out of eleven thousand children who were of an age to attend school, eight thousand never went to any school at all, and that most of the remaining three 160 thousand might almost as well have gone to no school as to the squalid hovels in which men who ought themselves to have been learners pretended to teach. In general these men had only one qualification for their employment; vxid that was their utter unfitness for every other employment. They were disabled miners, or broken 166 hucksters. In their schools all was stench, and noise, and confusion. Now and then the clamour of che boys was silenced for two minutes by the furious menaces of the master ; but it soon broke out again. The instruction given was of the lowest kind. Not one school in ten was provided with a single map. This is the way in which you no Buffered the minds of a great population to be formed. And now for •i" r\ ' it it 1 3 424 LXPOSITORY COMPOSITIONS. region the effects of negligence. The barbarijin inhabitants of this rise in an insane rebellion against the (jrovonuiiout. They come pour- ing down their valleys to Newport. They tire on the Qiieen'e troops. 176 They wound a magistrate. The soldiers fire in return; and too many of these wretched men pay with their lives the penalty of their crime. But is the crime theirs alone? Is it strange that they should listen to the only teaching that thoy had 1 How can yon, who took no pains to instruct them, blame them for giving ear to the demagogue who took 180 pains to delude them ] Wo put them down of coi. -se. We punished them. We had no choice. Order must be maintained; property must be protected; and, since we had omitted to take the best way of keeping these people quiet, we were under the necessity of keeping them quiet by the dread of the sword and the halter. But could any 186 necesdty be more cruel 1 And wliich of us would run the risk of being placed under such necessity a second time? I say, therefore, that the education of the people is not only a means, but the best means, of attaining tliat. which all allow to be a chiet end of government; and, if this bo so, it passes my faculties to 190 understand how any man can gravely contend that Government has nothing to do with the education of the people. My confidence in ray opinion is strengthened when I recollect that I hold that opinion in common with all the greatest lawgivers, states- men and political philosophers of ;Jl nations and ages, with all the 196 most illustrious champions of civil and spiritual freedom, and especi- ally with those men whoso names were once hehl in the highest ven- eration by the Protestant Dissentei'S in England. I might cite msiny of the most venerable names of the old world ; but T would rather cite the example of that country which the supporters of tlie Voluntary 200 system here are always recommending to us as a pattern. Go back to the days when the little society which has expanded into the opu- lent and enlightened commonwealth of Massachussetts began to exist. Our modern Dissenters will scarcely, I think, venture to speak con- tumeliously of those Puritans whose spirit Ly.ud and his High Com- ao6 mission Court could not subdue, of those Puritans who were willing to leave home and kindred, and all the comforts and refinements of oivilized life, to oross the ocean, to fix their abode in forests among DEBATES. 425 wild beasts and wild men, rather than commit the sin of performing, in the House of God, one gesture which thoy believed to be displeas- ing to Him. Did those brave exiles think it inconsistent with civil 210 or religious freedom tha c the State should take charge of the education of the people? No, Sir ; one of the earliest laws enacted by the Puri- tan colonists was that every township, as soon as the Lord had in- creased it to tlio number of fifty houses, should appoint one to teach all children to write and read, and that every township of a hundred 8I6 houses should sot uj) a grammar school. Nor have the descendants of those who made this law ever ceased to hold that the public author- ities were bound to pj'ovide tha means of public instruction. Nor is this doctrine confined to New England. " Educate the people " was the first admonition addressed by Penn to the colony which he 220 founded. "Educate the people " was the legacy of Washington to the nation which he had saved. "Educate the people " was the unceasing exhortation of Jefferson; and I qviote Jefferson with peculiar pleas- uro, because of all the eminent men that have ever lived, Adam Smith himself not excepted, Jefferson was the one who most abhorred 226 everything like meddling on the part of governments. Yet the chief business of his later years was to establish a good system of State education in Virginia. And, against such authority as this, what have you who take the other side to show? Can j'^ou mention a single great philosopher, a 230 single man distinguished by his zeal for liberty, humanity, and truth, who, from the beginning of the world down to the time of this present Parliament, ever held your doctrines? You can oppose to the unani- mous voice of all the wise and good , of all ages, and of both hemi- spheres, nothing but a clamour which was first heard a few months 286 ago, a clamour in which you cannot join without condemning, not only all whose memory you profess to hold in reverence, but even your former selves. This new theory of politics has at least the merit of originality. It may be fairly stated thus. All men have hitherto been utterly in the 240 wrong as to the nature and objects of civil government. The great truth, hidden from every preceiling generation, and at length revealed, in the year 1846, to some highly respectable ministers and elders of I i ^fil it m Wf I I •4ii--f(r*"* llL""»"il!, H'JPi'^"P^", ">' i j;i,i ■'.'■y« 426 EXPOSITORY COMPOSITIONS. ;'0 :l/!l 1 Jill. w it! dissenting congregations, is this. Government is simply a great hang- 246 man. Govemiuent ought to do nothing except by hai'sh and degrad- ing means. The one business of Government is to handcuff, and lock up, and scourge, and shoot, and stab, and strangle. It is odious tyranny in a government to attempt to pi event crime by informing the undei-standing and elevating the moral feeling of a people. A 250 statesman may see hamlets turned, in the couree of one generation, into great scajjort towns and manufacturing towns. He may know that on the character of the vast population which is collected in those wonderful towns, depends the prosperity, the peace, the very exist- ence of society. But he must not think of forming that character. 255 He is an enemy of public liberty if he attempts to prevent those hundreds of thousands of his countrymen from becoming mere Yahoos. He may, indeed, build barrack after barrack to overawe them. If they break out into insurrection, he may send cavalry to sabre them : he may mow them down with grape shot: he may hang them, draw 260 them, quarter them, anything but teach them. He may see, and may shudder as he sees, throughout large rui*al districts, millions of infants growing up from infancy to manhood as ignomnt, as mere slaves of sensual appetite, as the beasts that perish. No matter. He is a traitor to the cause of civil and religious freedom if he does not look 266 on with folded arms, while absurd hopes and t .'il passions ripen in that rank soil. He must wait for the day of his harvest. He must wait till the Jacquerie comes, till farm houses are burning, till threshing machines are broken in pieces ; and then begins his business, which is simply to s«'nd one poor ignorant savage to the county gaol, and 270 another to the antipodes, and a third to the gallows. Such, Sir, is the new theory of government which was first pro- pounded, in the year 184G, by some men of high note among the Nonconformists of England. It is difficult to understand how men of excellent abilities and excellent intentions — and there are, I readily 276 admit, such men among those who hold this theory — can have fallen into so absurd and pernicious an error. One explanation only occurs to me. This is, I am inclined to believe, an instance of the operation of the great law of reaction. We have juot come victorious out of a loncf and fierce contest for the liberty of trade. While that contest DEBATES. 427 lang- jrad- lock lious was undecided, much was said and written about the advantages ot'sso free competition, and about the danger of suffering the State to regu- late matters which .should be left to individuals. There has conse- quently arisen in the niiniis of persons who are led by words, and who are little in the habit of making distinctions, a disposition to apply to political questions ai'.d moral questions principles which are sound 285 only when applied to conmiercial questions. These people, not content with having forced the Government to surrender a province wrong- fully usurped, now wish to wrest from the Government a domain held by a right which was never before questioned, and which caimot be questioned with the smallest show of reason. '* If," they say, " free 290 competition is a good thing in trade, it must surely bo a good thing in education. The supi)ly of other commodities, of sugar, for example, is left to adjust itself to the demand; and the consequence is, that wo are better supplied with sugar than if the Government undertook to supply us. Why then should we doubt that the supply of instruction 296 will, without the intervention of the Government, be found equal to the demand? Never was there a more false analogy. Whether a man is well supplied with sugar is a matter which concerns himself alone. But whether he is well supplied with instruction is a matter which con-300 cerns his neighbours and the State. If he cannot afford to pay for sugar, he must go without sugar. But it is by no means fit that, because he cannot afford to pay for education, he should go without education. Between the rich and their instructors there may, as Adam Smith says, be free trade. The eupply of music masters and 305 Italian masters may be left to adjust itself to the demand. Rut what is to become of the millions who are too poor to pTociue without assistance the services of a decent schoolmaster] We have indeed heard it mu\ that even these millions will be supplied with teachers by the free competition of benevolent individuals who will vie with 310 each other in rendering this service to mankind. No doubt there are many benevolent individuals who spend their time and money most laudably in setting up and supporting schools; and you may say, if you please, that there is, among these respectable persons, a com- petition to do good. But do not be imjxjsed upon by words. Do not 315 11 !■! f il :»f? m i ' 1 I 428 EXPOSITOR Y COMPOSITIONS. beliove that this competition, resembles tlie competition which ^s pro- duced by the desire of wealth and by the fear of ruin. There is a great difference, be assured, between the rivalry of philanthropists and the rivalry of grocers. The grocer knows that, if his wares are worse 320 than those of otlier grocers, he shall soon go before the Bankrupt Court, and his wile and children will have no refuge but the workhouse : ho knows that, if his shop obtains an honourable celebrity, he shall be abh) to set up a carriage and buy a villa: and this knowledge imi>els him to exertions compared with which the exertions of even very 325 charitable people to serve the poor are but languid. It would be strange infatuation indeed to legislate on the supposition that a maa cares for his fellow creatures as much as ho cares for himself. Unless, Sir, I gieatly deceive myself, those arguments, which show tliat the Government ought not to leave to private jjeojtle the task of 330 providing for the national defence, will equally show that the Govern- ment ought not to leave to private people the task of providing for national education. On this subject, Mr. Hume has laid down the general law with admirable good sense and ptn\spicuity. I mean David Hume, not the Meml)er for Montrose, though that honourable 385 gentleman will, I am confident, assent to the doctrine propounded by his illustrious namesake. David Hume, Sir, justly says that most of the arts and trades which exist in the world produce so much advantage and pleasure to individuals, that the magistrate may safely leave it to individuals to encourage tho^e arts and trades. But he adds that 340 there are callings which, though they are highly useful, nay, absolutely necessary to society, yet do not administer to the peculiar [ileasure or profit of any individual. The military calling is an instance. Here, says Hume, the Government must interfere. It must take on itself to regulate these callings, and to stimulate the industry of the persons 345 who follow these callings by pecuniary and honorary rewards. Now, Sir, it seems to me that, on the same princii)l6 on which Government ought to superintend and to reward the soldier. Govern- ment ought to superintend and to reward the schoolmaster. I mean, of courae, the schoolmaster of the common people. That his calling is 350 useful, that his calling is necessary, will hardly be denied. Yet it is clear that his services will not be adequately remuneratet^ if he i^ ^ ii DEBATES. 429 left to be remunerated by those whora ho teaches, or by the voluntary contributions of the charitable. Is this disputed ? Look at the faots. You tell us that schools will multiply and flourish exceedingly, if the Government will only abstain from interfering with them. 866 Has not the Government long abstained from interfering with them 1 lias not everything been \vSt, through many yeai*s, to individual exer- tion ? If it were true that education, like tra<le, thrives most where the magistrate meddles least, the common people of England would now be the best educated in the world. Our schools would be model 860 schools. Every one would have a well chosen little library, excellent maps, a small but neat apparatus for experimenting in natural phil- osophy. A grown person unable to read or write would be pointed at like Giant O'Brien or the Polish Count. Our schoolmasters would be as eminently expert in all that relates to teaching as our cutlers, 865 our cotton-spinners, our engineers are allowed to be in their respective callings. They would, as a class, be held in high consideration ; and their gains would be such that it would be easy to find men of respect- able character and attainments to fill up vaciincies. Now, is this the case? Look at the charges of the judges, at the 370 resolutions of the grand juries, at the reports of public officers, at the reports of voluntary associations. All tell the same sad and igno- minious story. Take the rejiorts of the Insjjectors of Prisons. In the House of Correction at Hertford, of seven hundi-ed prisoners one half could not read at all ; only eight could read and write well. Of 375 eight thousand prisoners who had pjissed through Maidstone Gaol only fifty could read and write well. In Coldbath Fields Prison, the pro- portion that could read and write well seems to have been still smaller. Turn from the registers of prisoners to the registers of marriages. You will find that about a hundred and thirty thousand 380 couples were married in the year 1844. More than forty thousand of the bridegrooms and more than sixty thousand of the brides did not sign their namevS, but made their marks. Nearly ou(!-third of the men and nearly one-half of the women, who are in the prime of life, who are to be the parents of the Englishmen of the next generation, 385 who are to bear a chief part in forming the minds of the Englishmen of the next generation, cannot write their own names. Remember, •i n m ■■ ill tjii I 430 EXPOSITORY COMPOSITIONS. t ":i too, that, though people who cannot write their own names must be grossly ignorant, people may write their own names and yet have very 890 little knowledge. Tens of thousands who were ablo to write their names had in all probability received only the wretched education of a common day school. We know what such a school too often is ; a room crusted with filth, without light, without air, with a heap of fuel in one corner and a brood of chickens in anotluT; the only 396 machinery of instruction a dog-eared spoiling book and a broken slate ; the masters the refuse of all other callings, discarded footmen, ruined pedlars, men who cannot work a sum in the rule of three, men who cannot write a common letter without blunders, men who do not know whether the earth is a sphere or a cube, men who do not know 400 whether Jerusalem is in Asia or America. And to such men, men to whom none of us would entrust the key of his cellar, we have en- trusted the mind of the rising generation, and, with the mind of the rising generation the freedom, the happiness, the glory of our country. 405 Do you question the accuracy of this description ? I will produce evidence to which I am sure you will not venture to take an excep- tion. Every gentleman here knows, I suppose, how important a place the Congregational Union holds among the Nonconformists, and how prominent a part Mr. Edward Baines has taken in opposition to State 410 education. A committee of the Congregational Union drew up last year a report on the subject of education. That report was received by the Union ; and the peraon who moved that it should be received was Mr. Edward Baines. That report contains the following pas- sage : " If it were necessary to disclose facts to such an assembly as 416 this, as to the ignorance and debasement of the neglected portions of our population in towns and rural districts, both adult and juvenile, it could easily be done. Private information communicated to the Board, personal observation and investigation of the various localities, with the published documents of the Registrar-General, and the 420 reports of the state of Prisons in England and Wales, published by order of the House of Commons, would furnish enough to make us modest in speaking of what has been done for the humbler classes, and inake us ashamed that the sons of the soil of England should DEBATES. 431 a have been so long neglected, and should present to the enlightened traveller from other shores such a sad spectacle of neglected cultiva- 426 tion, lost mental power, and spiritual degradation." Nothing can be more just. All the information which I have been able to obtain beai-s out the statements of the Congregational Union. I do believe that the ignorance and degradation of a large part of the community to which we belong ought to make us ashamed of ourselves. I do430 believe that an enlightened traveller from New York, from Geneva, or from Berlin, would be shocked to see so much barbarism in the close neighbourhood of so much wealth and civiliziition. But is it not strange that the very gentlemen who tell us in such emphatic language that the people are shamefully ill-educated, should yet per- 43s sist in telling us that under a system of free competition the people are certain to be excellently educated 1 Only this morning the oppo- nents of our plan circulated a paper in which they confidently predict that free competition will do all that is necessary, if we will only wait with patience. Wait with patience I Why, we have been waiting 44o ever since the Heptarchy. How much longer are we to wait ? Till the year 2847 1 Or till the year 3847 1 That the experiment has as yet failed you do not deny. And why should it have failed? Has it been tried in unfavourable circumstances f Not so : it has been tried in the richest and in the freest, and in the most charitable country in 445 all Europe. Has it been tried on too small a scale? Not so: millions have been subjected to it. Has it been tried during too short a time 1 Not so : it has been going on during ages. The cause of the failure then is plain. Our whole principle has been unsound. We have applied the principle of free competition to a case to 450 which that principle in not applicable. But, Sir, if the state of the southern part of our island has fur- nished me with one strong argument, the state of the northern part furnishes me with another argument, which is, if possible, still more decisive. A hundred and fifty years ago England was one of the best 456 governed and most prosperous countries in the world : Scotland was perhaps the rudest and poorest country that could lay any claim to civilization. The name of Scotchman was then uttered in this part of the island with contempt. The ablest Scotch statosman contem- < ^J )pll; ik.l :i| 432 EXPOSITORY COMPOSITIONJ. 460 plated the degraded state of their poorer country with a feeling approaching to despair. It is well known that Fletcher of Saltoun, a brave and acconii)lished man, a man who had drawn his sword for liberty, who had suflfered proscriptica and exile for liberty, was so much disgusted and dismayed by the misery, the ignorance, the idle- 465 ness, the lawlessness of the common people, tluit he proposed to make many thousands of them slaves. Nothing, he thought, but the dis- cipline which kept order and enforced exertion among the Negroes of a sugar colony, nothing but the lash and the stocks, could reclaim the vagabonds who infested every part of Scotland from their indolent 470 and predatory habits, and compel them to support themselves by steady labour. He therefore, soon after the Revolution, published a pamphlet, in which he earnestly, and, as I believe, from the mere im- pulse of humanity and patriotism, recommended to the Estates of the Realm this sharp remedy, which alone, as he conceived, could remove i76 the evil. Within a few month.: after the publication of that pamphlet a very different remedy was app'ied. The Parliament which sate at Edinburgh passed an act for the establishment of parochial schools. What followed ? An improvement cnch as the world had never seen took place in the moral and intellect .^al character of the people. 480 Soon, in spite of the rigour of the climate, in spite of the sterility of the earth, Scotland became a country which had no reason to envy the fairest portions of the globe. Wherever the Scotchman went, — and there were few parts of the world to which he did not go, — he carried his superiority with him. If he was admitted into a public 486 office, he worked his way up to the highest post. If he got employ- ment in a brewery or a factory, he was soon the foreman. If he took a shop, his trade was the best in the street. If he enlisted in the army, he became a colour-sergeant. If he went to a colony, he was the most thriving planter thera The Scotchman of the seventeenth 490 century had been s[)oken of in London as we speak of the Esquimaux. The Scotchman of the eighteenth century was an object, not of scorn, but of envy. The cry was that, wherever he came, he got more than his share ; that, mixed with Englishmen or mixed with Irishmen, he rose to the top as surely as oil rises to the top of water. And what 490 had produced this great revolution ) The Scotqh air was stiU a^ cold> DEBATES. 433 i!iJ the Scotch rocks were still as bare as ever. All the natural qualities of the Scotchman were still wliut they had been when learned and benevolent men advised that he should be flogged, like a beast of bur- den, to his daily task. But the State had given him an education. That education was not, it is true, in all respects what it should haveeoo been. But such as it was, it hsid done more for the bleak and dreary shores of the Forth and the Clyde than the richest of soils and the most genial of climates had done for Capua and Tarentum. Is there one member of this House, however strongly he may hold the doctrine that the Government ought not to interfere with the education of the 506 people, who will stand up and say that, in his ojnnion, the Scotch would now have been a happier and a more enlightened people if they had been left, during the last five generations, to find instruction for themselves? I say then. Sir, that, if the science of Government be an experi-6io mental science, this question is decided. We are in a condition to perform the inductive process according to the rules laid down in the Novum Organum. We have two nations closely connected, inhabit- ing the same island, sprung from the same blood, speaking the same language, governed by the same Sovereign, and the same Legishiture, 615 holding essentially the same religious fait)., having the same allies and the same enemies. Of these two nations oiift was a hundred and fifty years ago, as respects opulence and civilization, in the highest rank among European communities, the other in the lowest rank. The opulent and highly civilized nation leaves the education of the people 620 to free competition. In the poor and half barbarous nation the education of the people is undertaken by the State. The result is that the first are last and the last first. The common people of Scot- land, — it is vain to disguise the truth, — have passed the common people of England. Free competition, tried with evevy advantage, 625 has produced effects of which, as the Congregational Union tells us, we ouglit to be ashamed, and which must lower us in the opinion of every intelligent foreigner. State education, tried under every dis- advantage, has produced an improvement to which it would be difii- cult to find a parallel in any age or country. Such an experiment as 63o this would be regarded as conclusive in surgery or chemistry, and ought, I think, to be regarded aa equally conclusive in politics. ml m ir^ 434 EXPOSITORY COMPOSITIONS. i 1' These, Sir, are the reasons which have satisfied me that it it is the duty of the State to educate tlie people. Being firmly convinced of 636 that truth, I shall not shrink from proclaiming it here and elsewhere, in defiance of the loudest clamour that agitators can raise. The remainder of my task is easy. For, if the great principle for which I have been contending is admitted, the objections which have been made to the details of our plan will vanish fust. I will deal with 540 those objections in the order in which they stand in the amendment moved by the honourable Member for Finsbury. First among his objections he places the cost. Surely, Sir, no per- son who admits that it is our duty to train the minds of the rising generation can think a hundred thousand pounds too large a sum for 645 that purpose. If we look at the matter in the lowest point of view, if we consider human beings merely as producer of wealth, the difference between an intelligent and a stupid population, estimated in pounds, shillings, and pence, exceeds a hundredfold the proposed outlay. Nor is this all. For every |K)und that you save in education, 550 you will spend five in prosecutions, in prisons, in penal settlements. I cannot believe that the House, having never grudged anything that was asked for the purpose of maintaining order and protecting property by means of pain and fear, «vill begin to be niggardly as soon as it is proposed to effect the same objects by making the people wiser 665 and better. The next objection made by the honourable Member to our plan is that it will increase the influence of the Crown. This sum of a hun- dred thousand i)ounds may, he apprehends, be employed in corruption and jobbing. Those schoolmasters who vote for ministerial candidates seo will obtain a share of the grant : those schoolmasters who vote for opponents of the ministry will apply for assistiince in vain. Sir, the honourable Member never would have made this objection if he had taken the trouble to understand the minutes which he i as condemned. We propose to place this part of the public expenditure under checks 566 which must make such abuses as the honourable Memlxir anticipates morally impossible. Not only will there be those ordinary checks which are thought sufficient to prevent the misapplication of the many millions annually granted for the army, the navy, the ordnance, the DEBATES. 435 civil government : not only must the Ministers of the Crown come every year to this House for a vote, and be prepared to render an 670 account of the manner in which they have laid out what had been voted in the preceding year, but, when they have satisfied the House, when they have got their vote, they will still be unable to distribute the money at their discretion. Whatever they may do for any schoolniastor must be done in concert with those pei-sons who, in the 675 district whore the schoolmaster lives, take an interest in education, and contribute out of their private means to the expense of educa- tion. When the honourable gentleman is afraid that we shall corrupt the schoolmasters, he forgets, first, that we do not appoint the school- masters ; secondly, that we cannot dismiss the schoolmasters ; thirdly, 680 that managers who are altogether inde{>endent of us can, without our consent, dismiss the schoolmasters; and fourthly, that without the recommendation of those managei-s we can give nothing to the school- masters. Observe, too, that such a recommendation will not be one of thoso recommendations which good-natured, easy people are too apt 686 to give to everybody who asks ; nor will it at all resemble those recommendations which the Secretary of the Treasury is in the habit of receiving. For every pound which we pay on the recommendation of the managers, the managers themselves must pay two pounds. They must also provide the schoolmaster with a house out of their 690 own funds before they can obtain for him a grant from the public funds. What chance of jobbing is there here? It is common enough, no doubt, for a Member of Parliament who votes with Government to ask that one of those who zealously supported him at the last election may have a place in the Excise or in the Customs. But such a mem- 696 ber would soon cease to solicit if the answer were, "Your friend shall have a place of fifty pounds a year, if you will give him a house and settle on him an income of a hundred a year." What chance, then, I again ask, is there of jobbing? What, say some of the dissenters of Leeds, is to prevent a Tory Government, a High Church Govern- eoo ment, from using this parliamentary grant to corrupt the schoolmasters of our borough, and to induce them to use all their influence in favour of a Tory and High Church candidate ? Why, Sir, the dissenters of Leeds themselves have the power to prevent it. Let them subscribe ft iff. lit fit- !■ 1 430 tJXPOSITOKY aJMPOSITIONS. I <W5 to the schools : \o,t them tako a sliuro in the management of the schools : let them lofiise to rocoiniueiid to the Committee of Council any schoolmaster whom they suspect of having voted at any election from corrupt motives : and the thing is done. Our plan, in truth, is made up of checks. My only douht is whether the chocks may not bo 010 found too numerous and too stringent. On our general conduct there is the ordinary check, the parliamentary check. And, as respects those minute details which it is impossible that this House can investi- gate, we shall be checked, in every town, and in every rural district, by boards consisting of independent men zealous in the cause of «15 education. The truth is, Sir, that tliose who clamour most loudly against our plan, have never thought of ascertaining what it is. I see that a gentleman, who ought to have known better, has not been ashamed publicly to tell the world that our plan will cost the nation two 020 millions a yeai*, and will paralyse all the exertions of individuals to educate the people. These two assertions are \ittered in one breath- And yet, if he who made them had read our minutes before he railed at them, he would have seen that his predictions are contradictory ; that they cannot l)oth bo fulfiljetl ; that, if individuals do not exert 625 themselves, the country will liave to pay nothing ; and that, if the country has to pay two millions, it will bo because individuals have exerted themselves with such wonderful, such incredible vigour, as to raise four millions by voluntary contributions. The next objection made by the honourable Member for Finsbury 630 is that we have acted unconstitutionally, and have encroached on the functions of Parliament. The Committee of Council he seems to con- sider as an unlawful assembly. He calls it sometimes a self-elected body and sometimes a self-appointed body. Sir, these are words without meaning. Tiie Committee is no more a self-elected body 635 than the Board of Trade. It is a body appointed by the Queen; and in appointing it Her Majesty has exercised, under the advice of her responsible ministers, a prerogative as old as the monarchy. But, says the honourable Member, tlie constitutional course would have been to apply for an Act of Parliament. On what ground? MO Nothing but an Act of Parliament can legalise that which is DEBATES. 437 ; 1: illegal. But whoovor houi-d of nn Act of P.'irli.'imcnt to legalise what was already boyoiid all (.lisputo legal ? Of course, if wo wished to send aliens out of the country, or to retain disaffected persons in custody without bringing tluiui to ti-ial, wo must obtain an Act of Parliament enipoworing us to do so. But why should w(^ ask 045 for an Act of Parliament to empower us to do what anybody may do. What the honourable Member for Finsbury may do? Is there any douVjt that he or anybody else may subscribe to a school, give a stipend to a monitor, or settle a n^tiring pension on a picecptor who has done good service? What any of the Queen's subjects may do the Queen *50 may do. Suppose that her pi'i\ y purse w(!re so large that Hha could afford to employ a hundred thousand pounds in this beneficent man- ner, would an Act of Parliament be ncscessary to enable Ik^- to do so? Every part of our i)lan nuiy lawfully be carried into execution by any person, Sovereign or subject, who hiis the inclination and the money, ess We have not the money ; and for the moufsy we come, in a strictly constitutional manner, to the House of Commons. The course which we have taken is in conformity with all pniocjdent, as well as with all principle. There are military schools. No Act of Parliament was necessary to authorise the establishing of such .schools. All that was 660 necessary was a grant of money to defray the charge. When I was Secretary at War it was my duty to bring under Her Majesty's notice the situation of the female children of her soldiers. Many such children accompanied every reginient, and their education was griev- ously neglected. Her Majesty was graciously pleased to sign a66S warrant by which a girls' school was attached to each corps. No Act of Parliament was necessary. For to set up a school where girls might be taught to read, and writ(% and sew, and cook, was perfectly legal already. I might have s<!t it uj) myself, if I had been rich enough. All that I had to ask from Parliament was the money. But 670 I ought to beg pardon for arguing a point so clear. The next objection to our ])lans is that they interfere with the religious convictions of Her Majesty's subjects. It has been some- times insinuated, but it has never been ])roved, that the Committee of Council has shown undue favour to the Established Church. Sir, 676 I have carefully road and considered the minutes; and I wish that Kiji 'II' ■ ml a ■ 1' m 438 EXPOSITORS CCMPOSITIONS. f eveiy man who has exertet' iiis eloquence against them had done the same. I say that I have oarefully read and considered them, and that they seem to me to have been drawn, up with exemplary impartiality. 680 The benefits which we offer, we offer to people of all religious persua- sions alike. The dissenting managers of the schools will have equal authority with the managers who belong to the Church. A boy who goes to meeting will be just as eligible to bo a monitor, and will receive just as large a stipend as if he went to the cathedral. The school- 685 master who is a noncomformist and the schoolmaster who is a con- formist will enjoy the same emoluments, and will, after the same term of service, obtain, on the same conditions, the same retiring pension. I wish that some gentleman would, instead of using vague phrases about religious liberty and the rights of conscience, answer 690 this plain question Suppose that m one oi oar large towns there are four schools, a school connected with the Church, a school connected with the Independents, a Baptist school, and a Wesleyan school; what encouragement, pecuniary or honorary, will by our plan, be given to the school connected with the Church, and withheld from any of the 696 other three schools ? Is it not indeed plain that, if by neglect or maladministration the Church school should get into a bad stjite, while the dissenting schools flourish, the dissenting schools will receive public money and the Church school will receive nonel It is true, 1 admit, that in rural districts which are too poor to 700 support more than one school, the religious community to which the majority belongs will have an advantage over other i-eligious communi- ties. But this iiot our fault. If we are as impartial as it is possible to be, you surely do not expect more. If there should be a parish containing nine hundred churchmen and a hundred dissenters, if there 705 should, in that parish, be a school connected with the Church, if the dissenters in that parish should be too poor to set up another school, undoubtedly the school connected with the Church will, in that parish, fxctt all that we give, and the dissenters will get nothing. But observe that there is no partiality to the Church, as the Church, in this vu) arrangement. The churchmen get public money, not because they are olmroi.men, but becaupe th.iy are the majority. The dissenters get nothing, not because '^hoy are dissenters, but because they arc u small : ;!iii' 3 DEBATES. 439 minority. There are districts where the case will be revei-sed, where tli(!ro will bo dissenting schools, and no Churcli schools'? In such cases the dissenters will get what we have to give, and the churchmen 716 will get nothing. But) Sir, 1 ought not so say that a churchman gets nothing by a system which gives a good education to dissenters, or that a dissenter gets nothing by a system which gives a good education to churchmen. We are not, I hope, so much conformists, or so much nonconformists, 720 as to forget that we are Englishmen and Christians. We all. Church- men, Presbyterians, Independents, Baptists, Methodists, have an interest in this, that the great body of the |)eople should be rescued from ignorance and barbarism. I mentioned Lord George Gordon's mob. That mob began, it is true, with the Roman Catholics ; but, 725 long before the tumults were over, there was not a respectable Protestant in London who was not in fear for his house, for his limbs, for his life, for the lives of those who were dearest to him. The honourable Member for Finsbury says that we call on men to pay for an education from which they derive no benefit. 1 deny that 730 there is one honest and industrious man in the country who derives no benefit from living among honest and industrious neighbours rather than among rioters and vagabonds. This matter is as much a matter of common concern as the defence of our coast. Suppose that I were to say, "Why do you tax me to fortify Portsmouth? If 736 the people of Poiiamouth think tha^ they cannot be safe withotit bastions and ravelins, let the people of Portsmouth pay the engineera and masons. Why am I to bear the charge of works from which I derive no advantage ? " Yoii would answer, and most justly, that there is no man in the island who does not derive advantage from these 740 works, whether he resides within them or not. And, as every man, in whatever part of the island lie may live, is bound to contribute to the support of those arsenals which are necessary for our common security, so is every man, to whatever sect he may l)elong, bound to contribute to the suj)))ort of those schools on which, not less than on 746 our arsenals, our common security depends. I now come to the last words of the amendment. The honourable Member for Finsbury is apprehensive that our pl-in may interfere 440 EXPOSITORY COMPOSITIONS. with tlio civil rights of Her Majesty's subjects. How a man's civil 750 rights can be prejiuUced by his leaniiug to vend and write, to multiply and divide, or even by his ol)taining some knowledge of history and geography I do not very well apprehend. One thing is clear, that pereons sunk in that ignorance in which, as we are assured by the Congregational Union, great numbers of our countiymen are sunk, 165 can be free only in name. It is hardly necessary for us to appoint a Select Committee for the purpose of inquiring whether knowledge be the ally or the enemy of liberty. He is, I must say, but a short- sighted friend of the common people who is eager to bestow on them a franchise which would make them all-powerful, and yet would 760 withhold from them that instruction without which their power must be a curse to themselves and to the State. This, Sir, is my defence. From the clamour of our accusers I appeal with confidence to the country to which we must, in no long time, render an account of our stewai'dship. I appeal with still more 765 confidence to future generations, which, while enjoying all the bless- ings of an impartial and efficient system of public instruction, will find it difficult to believe that the authors of that system should have had to struggle with a vehement and pertinacious o[)position, and still more difficult to believe that such an opposition was ofifered in the name of civil and religious freedom. Macaulaij'K Speecheit. liy permitxion of the pnhlitherg. I EXAMINATION OF MODELS. A debate is a aeries of arguments and counter-arguments concerning the truth of some resoluticjn. Tlio work of business meetings of all kinds is carried on mainly in the form of debating resolutions. Facility in debating is acquired by practice, but a knowledge of the best methods should direct the ett'orts. Though dol»ating is a term of wide extension, we shall use it here as it is conunonly used in collegiate dobiiting societies. In every debate it is essential that the subject shall bo a statement, con- cerning the truth of which the two sides diller. When a subject has been [flil DEBATES. 441 if agreed upon tlie debaters should meet privately and agree as to the pre- cise meaning of the terms of the resolution in order to save the audience from listening to a (piarrel about merely preliminary questions. When the subject has been thus chosen the debaters ought to do all they can to keep to the point ; nothing is so common in debating clubs as to hear whole speeches in which the real question of the resolution is barely alluded to. As wo have sjvid, the subject should be distinctly a statement. We should not ask, *' Was Napoleon or Wellington the greater general ? " be- cause such a form admits of no division of sides into afhrnmtive and negative ; but we should say, " Resolved that, Wellington was a greater general than Napoleon;" or "Resolved that, Napoleon was a greater general than Wellington," according to whether we desire the supporters of the one or of the other to speak first, or affirmatively. This consideration is of far greater importance than is commonly sup- posed, because upon it turns the whole questi<jn of the onus prohmuli: and that is the most important (question in the theory of debating. So meaningless are the words affirmative and negative in most debating societies that they are ecjuivalent merely to Jirst and secmul, third and fourth. Now properly speaking the affirmative side is the side which makes the assertion, and hence is prepared to ])r()vo it, to accept the omw probandi, the labour of establishing a new truth ; it is the reform side, the radical side, the side t)f change, pi'ogress, advance. The negative side is the conservative side, it opposes the new idea as an innovation, it calls upon the affirmative for reasons for the new idea, it proves nothing, it merely opposes tlio new idea by defending the old. The affirmative side says, " accept my new resolution, I will prove it to be true" ; the negative says "proceed with your pr(K)f, we are ready to hear, to sift, to accept or reject your argui.ients ; if you do not make out your case we shall have to reject your resolution." And it is generally thought that a new idea should be amply proved since it involves change and disturbance of ideas, hence it is that the task of the affirmative side, the tjisk of beginning the debate, of setting forth a now idea opposed to the accepted ways of thinking, and of proving it amply against critics who need do nothing but criticise their arguments, is considered the more difficult task, and out of this consideration has arisen the wise practice of allowing the leader of the affirmative five minutes in which to reply to the negative after the four regular speeches have been made. >J I 1 1!" Pm nut 4; II 442 EXPOSITORY COMPOSITIONS. lit' I It follows from what wo hfivo wild that the subject of debate should be so worded, when possililt;, as to make the resolution represent the less generally accepted truth, and in every case the burden of proof should bo thrown upon the afPrmative by tho negative, and accepted by ♦^^he afhrmative as their duty and privilege. It by no means follows that the negative shall remain on tho defensive. It is true that the affirmative side is tho aggressive side in a contest, but the negative side besides defending their strongholds and making sallies against the aggressors, should, when able, carry tho war into Africa, that is, accept with spirit the onus pruhmvdl of tho contrary resolution and thereby rout the enemy completely. When a debater has a definite idea of tho question to be debated he must set to work to prepare his speech. In all the speeches except that of tho loader of tho affirmative there is a good deal of extemporary work but good extemporary speaking is largely the result of wide and accurate knowledge of tho subject. The principal elements of a debating speech aro facts, argtiments about the significance of the facts, and opinions of autJiorities. Facts should be got from works of eminent authority such as standard encyclopajdias, government reports, approved statistical works, trustworthy histories. In arguing, it is very important to refer every point to undisputed axioms and principles of logic, and to argue simply and coherently. When opinions are used to lend authority to statements they should be opinions of persons eminently capable of giving their judgments without prejudice and with ample knowledge. It is desirable that a debater should do his utmost after mastering his own side of the question to imagine himself in the position of his antagonist : and it will assist him even to endeavour to outline the arguments of tho opposition in order that ho may tho better be able to meet them. In some instances it is wisso to present the arguments of an opponent with some degree of fcjrco before proceeding to demolish them ; but most frutpiently it is more modest to trust one's opponent to do full justice to his own case. When tho debater has thoroughly prepared himself by reading and thinking, ho should proceed to arrange his speech for delivery. Probably it is impossible to say definitely as a rvile whether a speech should 1)0 written «)ut in full and committed to memory or merely out- linifd. But there seoma no doubt tluit tlio greatest debaters have generally spoken either without a scrap of paper before tliem or with a mere summary of tlie chief points of their speeches : in no case should a debating society tolerate the reading of an essay in place of the delivery of a speech, It is DEBATES. 443 certain that some great debaters have committed their speeches to memory ; but the general usfige appears to have been to speak from headings, either read from slips of paper or remembered, trusting to the inspiration and influence of the audience for fitting language ; though it is not imnsual to memorize the concluding or any peculiarly impressive passages. Whether the speech is to be written in full or not, a plan should always bo made ; and as most speeches in debates are certain to include extemporary arguments, some provision for these should be made in the jjlan. A speaker may wish to correct an impression already made upon the audience as soon as he begins to speak. He may prefer to finish his own speech according to its original design and to make extemporary replies afterwards. But it most frecjuently haytpens that the extemporary arguments have a bearing upon certain points already entered in his own plan and it adds much to tlie style of a speech if he can introduce these arguments easily and naturally just where they properly belong according to that plan. There is no form of composition more elastic than a debating speech except a fr'cndly letter. This arises from the fact that after the first speech in a debate the contest is often too hot to permit of much regularity of procedure. Nevertheless, there are a few points which a well-disciplined debater will not forget even in the confusion of battle. First, he will in the early part of his speech give a clear idea of the ground he means to covpr ; second, he will follow this by establishing a solid and incontrovertible body of facts. Nothing can do more to win the respect of the judges, nothing will convince his audience so well of his right to argue on the subject, nothing can form so sound a basis for eloquent argunient as solid body of fods. And finally, he will give his audience a brief summary showing tliat ho has demonstrated what he set out to demonstrate. A warm impassioned speech nearly always pleases or entertains an audience, but tho judges will require more than excited language. After the speech has been prepared the debater must think of his manner of delivering it. Now often the best students are poor debaters . in knowledge and reason they may be superior, yet in delivering their speeches they may appear inferior to their opponents. In a democratic country, public speaking seems to be a universal necessity, yet how few speakers speak well, and how much the public might be spared if those whom they must listen to would study the precepts of good speaking. Nature has much to do with the making of a great speaker, but a civ reful study of the art may make the average student a fairly eflFective ant) not too tedious or distasteful a speaker. m I ■ 1. Tilil) ■.11 I ! 1 |ii { 4JUL EXPOSITOR Y COMPOSITIONS. A modest, yt't manly lioaring ; a strong, cloar, and natural enmiciation ; an absonco (tf Ixtoiislinuss in coiiiiny forward and in retiring ; theae and similar points liave nmch to do with success in debating. How ludicrous it is to see a student tugL,niigat his gown, shifting from one foot to the other c( )ntinually, using a wk ward gestures, and so on. When a speaker has concluded his peroration, let him either sit down at <mce, or thank the audience for their indulgence in listening to him. Ho should let them know in some way that lie means to sit down ; a successful peroration gives him an opportunity to retire gracefully, hut if ho feels that ho has not achieved such an opportunity he will do well to thank them for a hoivring. The two worst ways of concluding are, to sit down unexpectedly, leaving the audience to speculate why the speaker has suddenly collapsed, and, to mutter some absurdity such jis, " with these few words — I — shall — take my seat ! " 1. This speech was delivered by Macaulay in the House of Commons in the year IS-IT. " In the year 1847 the Government asked from the House of Commons a Grant of one hundred thousand j)ounds for the edticatifm of the people. On the nineteenth of April, Lord John Russell, having explained the reasons for this application, moved the order of the day for a Committee of Supply. Mr. Thomas Buncombe, Mend)er for Finsbury, moved the following amendment : ' That previous to any grant of public money be- ing assented to by this House, for the purpose of carrying out the scheme of ni'itioncil education, as developed in the Minutes of the Committee of Council on Jjducatiou in August and December List, which minutes have been presented to l)orh Houses of Parliament l)y conmumd of her Majesty, a select Conmiittee bo appointe<l to incpiire into tlie justice and expediency of such a scheme, and its [)robable annual cost; also to inquire whether the regulations attached thereto <lo not miduly increase the influence of the Crown, invade the constitutional functions oi T'arliament, and inter- fere with the religious convictions and civil rights of Her Majesty's subjects.' "In opposition to this amendment, the following Speech was made. After a debate of three nights, Mr. Thomas Duncombe obtained permis- sion to withdraw the latter ]»art of his amendment. The first part was put, and negatived by 372 votes to 47." A careful analysis of Macaulay 's spei-ch will reveal much regarding the methods of a skilful and successful debater. DEBATES. 445 Whatever may bo thought of the stylo of Macaulay as a model for literary finish, it will lianlly l)o cidcstioiied that ho is clear and business- like. Those who desire clear, strong, business-liko methods of arguing, should study this speech industriously. i Ml PRACTICE. The following are suggested as types of resolutions suitable for debates: 1. Resolved, that poetry declines as civilization advances. 2. Resolved, that trial by jury should be abolished. 3. Resolved, that the republican form of government is superior to the monarchical. 4. Resolved, that the English are superior in endowments to any other people in history. 5. Resolved, that the cost of High School Education should not be defrayed by the people at large. 6. Resolved, that a university education unfits men for business life. 7. Resolved, that government bj^^ party should be abolished. 8. Resolved, that in a perfect civilization all men would have equal incomes. 9. Resolved, that the daily paper does more harm than good. 10. Resolved, that capital punishment should be abolished. Ill i pa wi wl no sh mi be ol fo m y< w tl b h u p n I LETTERS. 447 CHAPTER XXXI. EXPOSITORY LETTERS. MODELS. I.— Johnson's Letter to Chesterfield.— My Lord,— I have been lately informed, by the proj)rit!t(jr of the World, that two papers, in which my dictionary is recommended to the public, were written by your lordship. To be so distinguished, is an h(»nour, which, IxMng very little accustomed to favours from the great, I know 6 not well how to receive, or in what terms to acknowledge. When, upon some slight encouragement, I first visited your lord- ship, I was overpowered, like the rest of mankind, by the enchant- ment of your address, and could not forbear to wish that I might boast myself Le vainqueur du valnqueur de la terre ; that I might lo obtain that regard for which I saw the world contending ; but I found my attendance so little encouraged that neither pride nor modesty would suffer me to continue it. When I had once addressed your lordship in pu))lic, I had exhausted all the art of pleasing which a retired and uncourtly scholar can possess. I had done all 15 that I could ; and no man is well pleased to have his all neglected, be it ever so little. Seven years, my lord, have now passed since I waited in your out- ward rooms, or was repulsed from your door ; during which time I have been pushing on my work through difficulties, of which it is 20 useless to complain, and have brought it, at last, to the verge of publication, without one act of assistance, one word of encourage- ment, or one smile of favour. Such treatment I did not expect, for I never had a patron before. The shepherd in Virgil grew at last acquainted with Love, and 26 found him a native of the rocks. Is not a patron, my lord, one who looks with unconcern on a man struggling €or life in the water, and when he has reached the ground, ill m <■ < III I': ^lii ■ii ^||S i^ 448 EXPOSITORY COMPOSITIONS. I : encumbors him with lu^lp? The notice wliich you have been pleased 30 to t!ik<! of my luboui's, had it been early, had been kind ; but it has been delayed till 1 am indiflei-ent, and cannot enjt)y it ; till I am solitaiy, and cannot impart it ; till I am known, and do not want it. I hope it is no veiy cynical asperity not to confess obligations where no benefit has been received, or to be unwilling that the public 86 sht)uld consider me as owing that to a patron, which Providence has enabled me to do for myself. Having carried on my work thus far with so little obligation to any favourer of learning, I shall not be disappointed, though I should conclude it, if less be possible, with less; for I have been long 40 wakened from that dream of hope, in which I once b(jasted myself with so much exultation, My Lord, Your Ijordship's most humble, Most obedient servant, 46 Sam. Johnson. BosweU's " Life of Johnson." II.— Cowper to Lady Hesketh.— My Dearest Cousin — . . . . Now for Homer, and the matters to Homer appertaining. Sephus and I are of opinions perfectly diiFerent on the subject of such an advertisement as ho recommends. The only proper part for me is not to know that such a man as Pope has ever 6 existed. I am so nice upon this subject that in that note in the speci- men, in which 1 have accounted for the anger of Achilles (which, I believe, I may pay myself the compliment to say was never accounted for before), I have not even so much as hinted at the perplexity in which Pope was entangled when he endeavoured to explain it, nor at 10 the preposterous and lilundering work that he has made with it. No, my dear, as I told you once before, my attempt has itself a loud voice, and speaks a more intelligible language. Had Pope's transla- tion been good, or had I thought it such, or had T not known that it is admitted by all whom a knowledge of tlie original qualifies to judge 16 of it, to be a very defective one, I had never translated myself one line of Homer. Dr. Johnson is the only modern writer who has LETTERS. 449 spoken (»f it in tcrius of apj)r«»l)!iti()n, at Ifjist tlu) on\y oiio that I have met with. And his praise of it is siu-h as convinces hk^, inti- mately acquainted as I am with Pope's per*" )rmance, tliat he talked at random, that either he had never examined it by Homer's, or 20 never since he was a boy. For I would undertake to produce num- berless passages from it, if need were, not only ill-translated, but meanly written. It is not therefore for me, convinced as I am of the truth of all I say, to go forth into the woi'ld holding up Pope's translation with one hand as a work to be extolled, and my own 26 with the other as a work still wanted. It is plain to me that I be- have with sufficient liberality on the occasion if, neither pi'aising nor blaming my predecessor, I go right forward, and leave the world to decide between us. Now, to come nearer to myself. Poets, my dear (it is a secret 1 30 have lately discovered), are born to trouble ; and of all poets, trans- lators of Homer to the most. Our dear friend, the Geii i-al, whom I truly love, in his last letter mortified me not a little. I di > not mean by suggesting lines that the thought might be amended, for I hardly ever wrote fifty lines together that I conld not afterwards liavo im- 35 proved, but by what appeared to me an implied censure on the whole, or nearly the whole quire, that I sent to you. It was a great work, he said ; — it should be kept long in hand; — years, if it were possible; that it stood in need of much amenduKjnt, that it ought to be made worthy of me, that ho could not think of showing it to 40 Maty, that he could not even think of laying it before Johnson and his friend in its present condition. Now, my dear, understand thou this : if there lives a man who stands clear of the charge of careless writing, I am that man. I might prudently, perhaps, but I could not honestly, admit tliat charge : it would account in a way favour- 46 able to my own ability for many defects of which I am guilty, but it would be disingenuous and untrue. The copy which I sent to you was almost a new, I mean a second, translation, as far as it went. With the first I had taken pains, but with the second I took more. I weighed many expressions, exacted from myself the utmost fidelity 50 to my author, and tried all the numbers upon my own ear again and again. If, therefore, after all this oare, tha execution be such as in 1 J ':F llil' 460 EXPOSITORY COMPOSITIONS. tho (rifiuM'ars Hccoimt it seems to be, T appear to have mmlo ship- wreck of my liopes ut once. Ho .said, iiidutMl, that the similes de- G5light(Ml him, atul the catalogue of the ships surpassed his expecta- tions : but his commemhition of so small a portion of the whole af- fected me rather painfully, as it seemed to amount to an implied condemnation of the rest. I have Ijeen the more unea.sy because I know his taste to be good, and by the selection that he made of lines 60 that he thought should be altered, he proved it such. I altered them all, and thankijd him, as I could very sincerely, for his friendly at- tention. Now what is the present state of my mind on this sub- ject? It is this. T do not myself think ill of what I have done, nor at the same time so foolishly well as to suppose that it has no 66 blemishes. But I am sadly afraid that the General's anxiety will make him extremely difficult to be pleased : I fear that he will re- quire of me more than any other man would require, or than he himself would require of any other writer. What I can do to give him satisfaction I am perfectly ready to do ; but it is possible for an 70 anxious friend to demand more than my ability could perform. Not a syllable of all this, my dear, to him, or to any other creature. — Mum ! Cowpei'a Letter*. III.— Byron to -The man who is exiled by a faction has the consolation of thinking that he is a martyr ; he is upheld by hope and the dignity of his cause, real or imaginary : he who withdraws from the pressure of debt may indulge in the thought 6 that time and prudence will retrieve his circumstances: ho who is condemned by the law has a term to his banishment, or a dream of its abbreviation ; or, it may be, the knowledge or the belief of some injustice of the law, or of its administration in his own particular; but he who is outlawed by general opinion, without the interven- lotion of hostile politics, illegal judgment, or embarrassed circum- stances, whether he be innocent or guilty, must undergo all the bit- terness of exile, without hope, without pride, without alleviation. This case was mine. Upon what grounds the public founded their opinion I am not aware ; but it was general, and it was decisive. 15 Of me or of mine they knew little, except that I had written what w LETTERS. 461 is calh^d pmitry, was a nobloman, had niarriod, became a father, and wjis iiivolv»'d ill difforcMices with my wife and her relatives, no one know why, because the persons complaining refused to state their grievances. The fashionable world was divided into parties, mine consisting of a very small minority : the reasonable world was natu-a I'ally on the stronger side, which happened to be the lady's, as was must proper and polite. The press was active and scurrilous ; and such was the rage of the day, that the unfortunate publication of two copies of verses, rather complimentary than otherwise to the subjects of })oth, was tortured into a species of crime, or constructive 26 petty treason. I was accused of every monstrous vice by public rumour and private rancour: my name, which had been a knightly or a noble one since my fathers helped to conquer the kingdom for William the Norman, was tainted. I felt that, if what was whis- pered, and nmttered, and murmured was true, I was unfit for Eng- so land ; if false, England was unfit for me. I withdrew ; but this was not enough. In other countries, in Switzerland, in the shadow of the Alps, and by the blue depths of the lakes, I was pursued and breathed uj)on by the same blight. I crossed the mountains, but it was the same ; so I went a httle farther, and settled myself by the 3fi waves of the Adriatic, like the stag at bay, who betakes himself to the waters. Quoted in Moore's " Life and Letters of Lord Byron." IV. -Lincoln to Greeley.— Executive Mansion, Washington, August 22, 1862. Hon. Horace Greeley, Dear Sir, — I have just read yours of the 19th, addressed to myself through the New York Tribune. If there be in it any state- 6 ments or assumptions of fact which I may know to be erroneous, I do not now and here controvert them. If there be in it any inferences which I may believe to be falsely drawn, I do not now and here argue against them. If there be perceptible in it an impatient and dictatorial tone, I waive it in deference to an old lo friend, whose heart I have always supposed to be right. in kiii , 'ft 452 SXroSlTOR Y COMPOSITIONS. As to the policy I " ; ocm to \h) pursuing," as you say, T have not meant to leave any one ai doubt. I wculd save the Union. I would save it in the shortest way 15 under the Constitution. The sooner the National authority can be restored, the nearer the Unit)n will l)o '• The Union as it was." If there be those who would not save the Union unless they could at the same time destroy Slavery, I do not agree with them. My paramount object in this struggle is to save the Union and is not 20 either to save or destroy Slavery. If I could save the Union without freeing any slave, I would do it; and if T could save it by fre»'ing all the slaves I would do it ; and if I could do it by freeing some and leaving others alone, I would also do that. What I do about Slavery and the colored race, I do because I believe it helps 26 to save this Union ; and what I forbear, I forbear because I do not believe it would help to save the Union. I shall do leas, whenever I shall believe what I am doing hurts the c-tuse ; and I shall do may:., whenever I shall believe doing more will help the cause. I shall try to correct errors when shown to be errors ; and 30 1 shall adopt new views so fast as they shall appear to be true views. I have here stated ni}* purpose according to my view of official duty, and I intend no modification of my oft expressed personal wish that all men, everywhere, oould be free. Yours, A. Lincoln. Lincoin'it Letters. V. — fChesterfleld to His Son. — My Dear Fhiend,— I mentioned to you, some time ago, a sentence, which I would most earnestly wish you always to retain in your thoughts, and observe in j'our con<luct. It is suaviter in modo, fortitvr ia re. I do not 6 know any one rule so unexceptionably useful and necessary in every part of life. I shall therefore take it for my text to-day ; and as old men love preach'ng, and I have some right to preach to you, I here present y<iu with my sermon upon these words. To proceed then regularly and pnlpit.icnlhj ; I will fii'st show you, my })eloved, 10 the necessary connection of the two members of my text suavifer in modo, fortiter in re. In tlu; next })lace, I shall set forth the !^ i LETTERS. 453 II iulvantagos ami utility resulting irom a strict observance of the precept coiitaiiuid iu my text ; ajul concluih; with an 'ipplieation t>£ thei wlioie. The suaviter in viodo alone would degenerate and sink into a mean, 15 timid complaisance, and p'-ssiveness, if not supported and dignified hy i\\Q fm'titer in re; which would also run into impetuosity and brutality, if not tcniipered and softencMl by the suaviter in modo : however, they are si^doin united. The warm, choleric man, with stn>ng animal spirits, despises the suaviter in viodo, and thinks to 20 carry all before him l)y i\\fi fortith in re. Jle may possibly, by great accident, now and then »ucc(!(!d, when he has only weak and timid people to d<!al with ; but his general f ite will be, to shock, offend, be hated, and fail. On the other hand, the cunning, crafty man, thinks to gain all his ends by the suaviter in modo m\\y : he becomes 2D all things to all men ; he seems to have no ttpinion of his own, and servilely adopts the pres(;nt opinion of th(i})resent p(irson ; he insinu- ates himself only into the esteem of fools, l)ut is soon detected, .and surely despised by everybody (slse. The wise man (who differs as much from the cunning, as from the cholei-ic man) alone joins thoao auavlt"^ in modo with the Jor titer in re. Now to the advantages arising from a strict observance of the precept. If you are in authority, and have a right 10 command, yt.ur commands delivered suaviter in modo will be willingly, cheerfully, and '•onseijuently well obey»Ml j whereas, if given only fortiter, that is, 35 brutally, they will ratluir, as Tacitus says, be interpreted than ex- ecuted. For my own part, if I bade ray footman bring me a glass of wine, in a rough insulting manner, I should expect that, in obey- ing me, he would contrive to spill .soinci of it uj)on me ; and T am sure I should deservt; it. A cool, steady resolution slumld show, that40 where you have a right to conunand, you will be obeyed ; but, at the same time, a gentleness in the manner of enforcing that obedience, should make it a cheerful one, and soften, as much as possible, the mortifying consciousness of inferiority. If yf)u are to ask a favour, or even solicit your due, you inust do it suaviter in modo, or yi»u will 40 give those who have mind 10 refuse you (uther, a prc^tence to do :'\iU i). 454 aXPOSITOBY COMPOSITIONS. ifc, by resenting the manner ; but, on the other hand, you must by a steady perseverance and decent tenaciousness, show tho fortiter in re. ♦ ♦♦*** I^ now, to apply what has been said, and so conclude, you BO find that you have a hastiness in your temper, which un- guardedly breaks out into indiscreet sallies or rough expressions, to either your superiors, your equals, or your inferiors, watch it narrowly, check it carefully, and call the suavithr in modo to your assistance ; at the first impulse of passion bo silent till you 55 can be soft. Labour even to get the command of your countenance so well, that those emotions may not be read in it : a most unspeaV able advantage in business ! On the other hand, let no complaisanc ■, DO gentleness of temper, no weak desire of pleasing on your part, no wheedling, coaxing, nor flattery on other people's, make you recede 60 one jot from any point that reason and prudence have bid you pursue; but return to the charge, persist, persevere, and you will find most things attainable that are possible. A 3rielding, timid meekness is always abused and insulted by the unjust and unfeeling: but meekness, when sustained by the /ortiter in re, is always respected, 65 commonly successful. In your friendships and connections, as well as. in your enmities, this rule is particularly useful ; let your firmness and vigor preserve and invite attachments to you ; but, at the same time, let your manner hinder the enemies of your f ritmds and depend- ents from becoming yours : let your enemies be disarmed by the 70 gentleness of your manner, but let them feel at the same time, the steadiness of your resentment ; for there is a great difference between bearing malice, which is always ungenerous, and a resolute self- defence, which is always prudent and justifiable. I conclude with this observation, that gentleness of manners, with 76 firmness of mind, is a short but full description of human perfection, on this side of religious and moral duties; tliiit you may be seriously convinced of this truth, and show it in your life and conversation, is the most sincere and ardant wish of yours. ChestrrMd's " Letters to his Soil." LETTERS. 455 EXAMINATION OF MODELS. Incidents and descriptions make up a very largo part of most friendly letters. Parents sometimes write letters of advice, such as that of Lord Chesterfield to his sou ; and letters of exposition, argument, persuasion, are not uncommon in private correspondence. But in addition to these really private letters theve are letters of literary men written with more or leas certainty of ultimate publication ; and beyond these again are the " open letters '' of controversialists and politicians. With these last, as letters, we have little to do beyond mentioning them, in as much as they have the compositional qualities of speeches and essays rather than of letters proper. Yet even in the most public letter there is usually a quality which makes it different from any other form of comj/osition, a personal and direct tone such as differentiates conversation fr jm public speaking, and it is of some importance that models should be studied of letters which, though personal, argumentative, trenchant, and even bitter, yet preserv© the dignity and decency demanded by the amenities of life. 1. This is an historical letter. It marks the revolt against patronage of the eighteenth century. It is interesting, too, as illustrating the atti- tude of a "retired and uncoiirtly scholar " toward one whose assumed superiority has no foundation in mind or character. Johnson had solicited the assisbince uf Lord Chesterfield, and, it would seem, had been merci- lessly BnuWl>ed. The temptation, now that his book is a success, to casti- gate the noble lord proves too much for the indignant scholar ; but the temptation to coarse invective or abuse is sot aside, and wo have in this letter a masterpiece of righteous roHuntmunt, marked not loss by noble restraint than by vigour of thought and fueling. This \vtt*}T, admired by the critic as well as the general reader, is a testinumy to the superiority ^f the digiiifie<l and decorous stylo over gross vituperation even in letters in which the writer may bo sure of the sym* pathy of the reader, Johnson is charged with unoijf long words to excess, but in this letter the force of feeling chastens the diction, and we cannot but feel the power of the scholarly words in convincing us of the discriminating and rational quality of the resentment expressed. 2. A student could hardly entertain a higher ambition in letter-writing than to write letters like Cowjut's. A dovoted study of his letters will be of real assistance to the studtnt, not so much because it Avill teach him 11 !: 456 EXPOSITORY COMPOSITIONS. the forms .iml dovicrs used by Cowpoi* as because it will i)ut him in a position to realixc the character of which those letters are the truest expression wo have. It is true of all writing that it is the result of culture rather than of rhetoric, but in tliesc letters we feel that rhetoric is nothing, and that the style is rclinetl, pleasant, sincere, because the writer was full of sensibility, delicate humour, beauty of character. In this letter to Lady Ilesketh, Cowper is writing of a matter very inti- mately touching his pride and the serious business of his life : he has been mortified by criticism which he cannot ignore ; he confesses that he has been affected painfully liy the faint praise accorded his translation by a competent critic. Yet not a word of l)itterness has even suggested itself to him, if there is any fault it is in his own ability ; he will not even charge it to his carelessness. This simplicity and sincere humility are rare and affecting, and contemplating them we comprehend that this great man had eoU(pU'red himself, and was peaceful in his self-respect and the sympathy he cimiidently expects from a true friend, in spite of the threatened shipwreck of his hopes. Truly the style here is the man. Yet a knowledge of literary methods is everywhei'e observable in this letter — thei'e it in it, in some degree, the same carefulness of expres- sion which the writer justly claims as his characteristic. Even Cowper could not have written such letters without study and practice. 3. This letter in which Byron sets forth his relations to the British publir is an elaborate piece of work. The style, though sustained, is not, however, wanting in liexibility. The sentence forms ai'e varied and should be carefully studied. The opening .sentence is constructed on a carefully conceived plan ; but the three parallel sections with which it begins are not monotonously similar, and even the adverse statement with which it concludes, although studiously precise, is not without variety. The second sentence in its simple, fctrcible directness forms a striking contrast with the first. The ))eginning of the letter may be takjn as representative of the style of the whole. Byron's ardent, vig«;r»>v.s mind outruns the forms of a classical rhetoric. The mental states of the author vary with the language that reflects them; discrimination, cynicism, pride, follow in rapid succession. The two closing .sentences are marked by a somewhat poetical tone which the reader will tind justified if he is in sympathy with the poet's mood. 4. This letter written in answer to an open letter in the newspa[)er is of the nature of a pul)lic utterance. Consequently the address is formal, the sentences are marked l)y antithesis and parallel construction, the whole composition is severely nuitliodical. Lincoln's re{ily was written LETTEIl^. 457 irnniedi.'itely aftor ]io had roatl Grouloy's U'ttcr. Tlio Proskiont was roused by tho attack upon him, particidarly by that part which threw doubt on the definiteness of his policy. Naturally, therefore, what ho says is characterized by an incisive, almost passionate, directness. Tho opening sentence states plainly the occasit >n of tho letter antl tho remain- der of the first section is devoted to clearing the ground for the main theme. The three parallel Rcntences of course imply some severe censures on Greeley's letter, but at the same time have an air of forbearance, and the closing words are in a tone of almost kindly consideration. The sen- tence "As to the ])()lic3'," etc., forms a distinct paragraph, because Lincoln wished to keep by itself the clear enunciation of policy the occasion called for. The opening sentence of tho third paragraph epito- mizes the meaning and spirit of the clear vigorous statement that follows. Note the many repetitions of save and unimi which servo to keep the refer- ence definite. Tho closing sentences of the letter are intended as a guard against other charges of vacillation. 5. Lord Chesterfield's epistle to his son is intended to suggest a line of conduct ; it is in fact a piece of parental advice, given under the form of instruction. Good-breeding is described as something natural, and easily acquired by an ordinarily woU-cndowod person. The lesson is further made palatable by tho insinuating and somewhat modest introduction of tho subject. Tho last sentence of tho letter, moreover, instead of pointing out the young man's duty, ingcniou.sly records Chesterfield's earnest concern for his son's good-breeding. To most readers this epistle will sound rather stiff and formal, and to a degree sententious, although marked by t>logance and tact. Tt must bo remembered that these letters were avowedly written for tho giiidaiit-o and instruction of tho yotnig man addressed, and that tho usual attitude of an Knglish nobleman of tho eighteenth contuiy toward his mm was not of a very familiar character. However, some of the reserve of the style may bo sot down to the per- sonality of this model gontleman of his tiiue, who i\ Ljardod luuglitor as little short of crime. i 468 EXPOSITORY COMPOSITIONS. PRACTICE. Write a letter on one of the following themes : — 1. The Relation of National Literature and National Life. 2. Cheap Books. 3. Magnanimity as a Charm in Character. 4. Aphorisms. 5. The Relative Importance of Method and Knowledge. 6. The Uses of Work. 7. Social Progress and Acts of Parliament. 8. The DiflSculty of being Unprejudiced. 9. Boorishness in Public Servants. 10. A Local Improvement. Plan: Cheap Books. 1. What leads me to write on the subject to you. 2. Facts about the natitre of cheap books. 8. The amouD't^ one should read. 4. Reverence for bo(»k8. 5. The books onxe should buy. r APPENDIX. >>j A.— Punctuation.— 1. Do not use too many commas. 2. It is better to leave a space at the end of a written line than to make a syllabic division of a word. 3. Dashes, marks of exclamation, interi'ogation, and quotation, lend liveliness to a composition ; they may be used to excess. 4. A critical consideration of the following rules will stimulate care in pointing, but the best punctuation is individiicd, like diction. i. Periods should be used after declarative and imperative sentences, after abbreviated words, after headings, after signatures. ii. Interrogation-points should be used after direct questions. When there are several questions in one period use an interrogation-point after each, if each requires a separate answer ; if one answer suffices for all use only a point at the end. An interrogation-point in parentheses may be used to denote incredulity. iii. Exclamation-points should be used after strongly exclamative sen- tences even when such sentences are declarative in form : also, after exclamative words and pijrases, especially when the writer would denote strong feelings, such as scorn, passionate grief, joy. Enclitic interjections are not followed by this point, though the expressions in which they occur may be. iv. The colon is used between sentences containing semicolons, if the period would be too great a pause for the sense : also, before long quotations. The colon is used instead of the period to denote a slightly closer logical connection than a period would denote. The colon is used before a series of statements or phrases formally introduced. v. The semicolon is used between sentences when the colon or the period would make too groat a break in the sense. It is used between members of a compound sentence wlien the members contain commas. It is used before a series of statements or phrases informally introduced. It is used between clauses in a series having a common dependence. It is used be- [ 459 ] ill 460 APPENDIX. foro a list of particulars formally introduced. It is used before a clause of reason or explanation fippended to a statement. vi. The dash is used to denote an abrupt break in a sentence, to denote faltering speech or hesitation, to denote intentional anacoluthon, to denote a repetition for explicit reference. As marks of parenthesis, dashes stand midway between commas and brackets. vii. The comma: 1. A simple sentence in the natural order needs no comma. 2. A comma is used after a long or difficult logical subject. 3. When two "w«»rds of the same class are joined by and or (/r use no comma after the first, unless the first is qualified by a word not qualifying the second. 4. When or connects two expressions, the second being merely another term for the fiVst, use commas around tlie second. 5. Use commas between words in the same construction unless con- junctions are used between them. 6. But when the first of two adjectives qualifies the noun and the second adjective combined, use no conuna. 7. When tlireo or more words of the same construction occur in a series, put a comma after each one exceijt the last. Some omit the comma before the conjunction, but it is better to use it. 8. When in such a list the conjunction is omitted, use a comma after each word, the last word included. 9. An appositive phrase, unless very brief or very intimately joined to its principal, is placed in commas. 10. In lists, the Christian name and the surname are sometimes inverted; they should then be separated l)y a comma. 11. Before adding a title or a university degree to a name, use a comma. 12. In cases of epizeuxis use conmias. 13. When pairs of words follow each other, separate the pairs by commas. 14. In a compound sentence comprising several simple statements, use commas after the simple elements. 15. Exj)lanatory phrases and clauses (such as may bo omitted without destroying the sense) are placed in commas ; but restrictive phrases and clauses must not be separated from their principals. 16. If a comma should for any reason follow a restrictive relative pro- noun, use another connua before the pronoun to restore symmetry to the sentence. PUNCTUATION. 461 \ 17. When a restrictive pronoun refers to more than one antecedent, use a comma before it. 18. Participial and absolute phrases are usually marked off by commas. 19. Interjected adverbs and phrases such as alao, likeunse, in /act, on the other hand^ are set off by commas. 20. Subordinate noun clauses are rarely separated from their principals by commas. 21. Subordinate adverb clauses seldom take comifias before them when they follow the predicate in the natural order of such adjuncts ; but, when they are out of the natural order, they are cut off by commas. In any case, when such clauses are meant to bo impressive, commas are used to introduce them formally. 22. In the expression "6ut if" use a comn;.a before "if" if you wish to be impressive or deliberate. 23. A short quotation, a maxim, or an important remark, is separated by a comma from the words introducing it, unlrss it is very briefly introduced. 24. Vocative expressions, whether nouns, or interjections, or responsives, are regularly followed by commas unless followed by interjections. 25. As a general rule the absence of words in elliptical and contracted sentences is indicated by the comma. 26. As a general rule inversions of the natural order of the English sentence are indicated by the comma. 27. If two or more portions of a sentence bear the same grammatical relation to a succeeding word or clause they are followed by commas. 28. Antithesis in a sentence is often accentuated by the comma. 29. A word or phrase added to a sentence as an afterthought, is separ- ated from it by a comma. 30. Use commas in directing envelopes, after the name, the title, the street, the city, indeed after each part except the last word, which is followed by a period. Note — Most rules of punctuation are subject to the judgment of the writer. Exercises ; 1. Give a reason for the use of each punctuation mark in any one of the extracts. 2. State with examples, collected through your own observation, the main purposes tar which commas are used by the authors of the selec- tions in this book. 402 APPENDIX. 3. Discuss the purposes of the punctuntion marks in the following sentences with a view to making rules for your own use : — 1. Blow, wind, and crack your cheeks ! rago ! blow ! 2. Whence is that knocking ? How is't with mo, when every noise appals mo ? 3. Every gift of Heaven is sometimes abused ; but good sense and fine talent; by a natural law, gravitate towards virtue. 4. "No one is aware of your imprisonment but Sir William, and he is " " Here ! " interrupted a deep voiue, as the door flew open. 5. "Art thou not — " — "what?" — "a traitorl" — " Yes."— — "a villain!" — "Granted." 6. There is one feeling, and only one, that seems to pervade the breasts of all men alike, — the love of life. 7. The heart doth recognize thee, Alone, alone 1 The heart doth smell thee sweet. Doth view thee fair, doth judge thee most complete — Though seeing now those changes that disguise thee. 8. Then off there flung in smiling joy, And held himself erect By just his horse's mane, a boy : You hardly could suspect — (So tight ho kept his lips compressed. Scarce any blood came through) You looked twice ere yi>u saw his breast Was all but shot in two. 9. Self -reverence, self-kno\ dedge, self-control. These three alone lead life vO sovereign power. 10. Dear mother Ida, hearken ere I die. 11. Again she said : "I woo thee not with gifts." 12. O blest Retirement, friend to life's decline ! 13. At evening too, how pleasant was our walk t 14. She sits, inclininG; forward, as to speak. 15. Thou, too, sail on, O ship of state ! Sail on, O Union, strong and great ! 16. Slow sinks, more l«)vely ere his race bo run, Along Morea's hills, the setting sun. lu PUNCTUATION. 403 17. Man novor is, but always U> bo, blost. 18. Wasted and weary on the mountain's side, His way unknown, the helpless pilgrim lioa 19. Give mo a cottage on some Cambrian wild. Where far from cities, I may spend my days. 20. Sweet are the uses of adversity. Which, like the toad, ugly and venomous. Wears yet a precious jewel in his hoad. 21. The boast of Heraldry, the pomp of Power, And all that Beauty, all that Wealth o'er gave, Await alike the inevitable hour. The paths of glory lead but to the grave. 22. And your affections are A sick man's appetite, who desires most that. Which would increase his evil. 4. Insert in the following extracts such marks as will best show the meaning : — 1. The Contempt op Coriolanus for the Mob. Cor. You common cry of curs whose breath I hate As reek o the rotten fens whose loves I prize As the dead carcases of unburied men That do corrupt my air I banish you And here remain with your uncertainty Let every feeble rumour shake your hearts Tour enemies with nodding of their plumes Fan you into despair Have the power still To banish y«>ur defenders till at length Your ignrvanco which finds not till it feels Mn':lnjj but reservation of yourselves Still your own foes deliver you as most Abated captives to some nation That won you without blows Despising For you the city thus I turn my back There is a world elsewhere. 2. Shvlock's Remonstrance. Shy. Signior Antonio many a time and oft In the Rialto you have rated mo About my moneys and my usanges m IMAGE EVALUATION TEST TARGET (MT-3) ,% % 1.0 I.I ■^ liLi 12.2 IS I4£ 12.0 IX 11.25 III 1.4 I s% <^ y] '/ Sdences Corporalion 23 WIST MAIN STRUT WIISTIR.N.Y. 145M (7I6)«72-4S03 '^ 4. .\ 1^ c^ 464 APPENDIX. Still have I borne it with a patient shrug For sufferance is the badge of all our tribe You call me misbeliever cut-throat dog And Ppet upon my Jewish gaberdine And all for use of that which is my own Well then it now appears you need my help Go to then you come to me and you say Shylock we would have moneys you say so You that did void your rheum upon my beard And foot me as you spurn a stranger cur Over your threshold moneys is your suit What should I say to you Should I not say Hath a dog money Is it possible A cur should lend three thousand ducats Or Shall I bend low and in a bondman's key With bated breath and whispering humbleness Say this Fair sir you spet on me on Wednesday last You spurn 'd me such a day another thne You called me dog and for these courtesies I'll lend you thus much moneys. 5. Correct or improve the punctuation of the following : — 1. Care to our coflSn adds a nail no doubt And every grin so merry draws one out. 2. Self-conceit presumption and obstinacy hurt the career of many a boy. 3. He said that ** he was a professional reciter." 4. Am I not a man and a brother. 5. The tongue can no man tame, it is an unruly evil. 6. Some affirm that we say let us do evil that good may come. 7. What is writ is writ, Would it were worthier. B» Hark to the hurried question of Despair Where is my child ! An echo answers Where ? 0* Here's a sigh to those that fove me And a smile to those who hate And whatever sky's above me Here's a heart for every fate. w^. 10. QUAMMAE. Oft in the stilly night Ere slumber's chain has bound me Fond memory brings the light Of other days around me. The smiles the tears Of Boyhood's years The words of love then spoken The eyes that shone Now dimm'd and gone The cheerful hearts now broken. 465 B.— Grammar.— * Exercises : 1. State from an examination of any one of the foregoing Models which parts of speech are inflected in English. In which parts of speech is there the greatest danger of using wrong forms ? 2. Discuss in each of the following sentences any doubtful use of grammatical forms, and state clearly in each case the principle involved :— 1. Whom do the boys say he is. 2. This hunter, him whom I showed you, told the story. 3. Somebody said so yesterday, I forget whom. 4. Who would you like to be ? 5. Let you and I go at once. 6. I do not know who to send. 7. Chaucer indeed enters into sympathy whith his characters, but without being they for the moment. 3. I little thought it was him. 9. He was angry at me asking him. 10. She is older than him. 11. Neither of them is better than they ought to be. 12. Here stood the man whom we had proved was a villain. 13. Every limb and feature had theur appropriate expression. 14. I never saw such a man as him. 15. Between you and I he is mistaken. 16. Who can this have been done by ? 17. The story was told by the hunter, he whom I showed you. • Not kU the sentences in the exercises o( this appendix are believed to be incorrect. m m 1! M 4f 1 i lit 466 APPENDIX. 18. Let each esteem other better than themselves. 19. He told John and I to go with him. 20. Whom do you think came with us ? 21. He was neither expert in this or that. 22. He isn't here I don't think. 23. We wont hardly succeed in our effort. 24. Nor can I not believe but that hereby great gains are mine. 25. All of you cant come. 26. We do not want bread or milk. 27. Its of no importance. 28. Her's is the best of the two. 29. Three spoonsful are enough. 30. He dont lay down till midnight. 31. My favourite poets are those which are most original. 32. Has the last bell rang yet ? 33. John has gotten a new hat. 34. Divide the apple in three parts. 35. He told him to get off of the fence. 3. Discuss the use of articles in the following : 1. He wrote a historical account. 2. They came to an unanimous decision. 3. She was mated with an husband. 4. We had a horse and a carriage. 6. A white and a black horse drew the load. 6. The street is a long and a beautiful one. 7. The horse and cow stood on the road. 8. The saint, the father and the husband prays. 9. We walked away with the secretary and treasurer of the association. 10. The chairs and tables were broken. 11. The idle and industrious boys fare alike. 12. This boy is the smallest and the bravest. 13. The black and white horse won the race. 14. The Third and Fourth Regiments marched past. GBAMMAlt. 467 15. He put tho brass and copper coins in one bag and the gold and silver coina in another. 16. I dont like that sort of a man. 17. I asked him for the fourth of it. 18. They gave him the name of a scoundrel. 19. A lion is the king of beasts. 20. No taller and more powerful a man than he had ever been seen there. 4. Correct or justify the following sentences : — 1. I feel deep sympathy for you. 2. He is a different man to what he was. 3. He compares life with a ship. 4. He was averse to our plan. 5. The Germans have a diflferent idea of what a good novel is than the English. 6. Under tho circumstances he did his best. 7. He hesitated between every word and looked around. 8. I inquired about what he was speaking. 9. Refuse to obey tyrants and reverence them. 10. They accused him with being unjust. 11. We prefer him rather than her. 12. He died with inflammatory rheumatism. 13. It treats on the whole subject. 14. He assimilated his plan with that of his predecesaor. 15. His speech was characterized with eloquence. 16. The teacher inculcated his pupils with these view& 17. There let him lay. 18. He is an example of what a man is capable. 19 1 must request you to see to it and do so at once. 20. You are sure to profit from your studies. 5. Point out examples of grammatical agreement in any of the Models of this volume. 51' 1: I I: i If it; 6. What rules of agreement are often violated ? 468 APPENDIX. 7. Correct the following where necessary and explain any difficulties : — I. — 1. His father was one of the best men that has ever lived. 2. He was the first man who landed in this country. 3. These words are Socrates, the wisest of men's. 4. Nor heaven nor earth have been at peace. 6. Have any of you a knife ? 6. Have none of you a knife ? 7. I was surprised at him blushing. 8. He don't like those kind of pens. 9. I have no doubt but what we will go. 10. This event, though it was sudden, yet was not altogether unexpected. 11. Homer as well as Vergil were studied. 12. He speaks better than any man I ever heard. 13. You said that you should go home. 14. The ebb and flow of the tides have been explained. 15. It was a book read by many and which all appreciated. 16. Nodding their heads before her goes the merry minstrelsy. 17. Directly he came we set out. 18. Can I leave the room ? No, you cannot. 19. Thou loved and lovely one, who did for me what none beside have done. 20. There was less than a hundred people there. n. — 1. Thus much is certain. 2. I have nothing further to say. 3. Consider everyone's circumstances, healths and abilities. 4. Mr. Brown and myself were present. 5. He was afraid that he would miss the train. 6. These animalculte belong to different genuses. 7. The jury find the prisoner guilty. 8. This is a picture of Sir Joshua Reynolds. 9. No civil broils have since his death arose. 10. What's the last news from town ? 11. There were very few passengers who escaped. 12. Take them books off of the table. GRAMMAR. 469 BS: — cted. have 13. Tomatoes are said to be healthy food. 14. Your going away to-morrow I 15. Ho is a boy of nine years old. 16. He ia an universal favourite. 17. The knights were armed with a sword and dagger. 18. I thought that they should do it. 19. Nobody in their senses would do that. 20. All admired the noble Arab bestrode by the knight. ni. — 1. Thou hast protected us and we will honor you. 2. He was near getting his leg broke. 3. He wrote a moderately sized volume. 4. What principles underlaid such practice ? 5. He is not worthy the name of a gentleman . 6. He couldn't have drank two cupsf ul. 7. Such an one will succeed. 8. The bugle sounded very harshly. 9. That is the more universal opinion. 10. They were illy supplied with clothing. 11. A nation has no right to violate their treaties. 12. I dont know as I can do it now. 13. I will go and lay down. 14. Why don't he like me ? 15. You have weakened instead of strengthened your case. 16. I doubt if he shall come. 17. Men are put in the plural because they are many. 18. This is the easiest learned of the two. 19. I can and have cured this disease. 20. He stood firmer than before. IV.— 1. He was said at that time to have been the only man present capable of the task. 2. Try and do it as soon as possible. 3. I think I will go to-morrow. 4. Will I find you at home this evening ? 5. John has determined that he should do it at once m iiii I m APPENDIX. 6. I should do it for you if I could. 7. The minister was very pleased to see them. 8. If in the firing it his hand should slip all would be lost. 9. The master was angry at him being so often late. 10. The sailor tightened instead of untied the rope. 11. He enters the room, walks behind the table and seats himself, but never for one moment did he cease stroking his moustache. 12. He said he should like to have seen them first. 13. You said you should go as soon as possible. 14. Were he in the wrong and we should know it he could never forgive us. 16. He saw them as he walked on the road as most of us had. 16. He dove from a steep bank into the river. 17. Calling his attention to the state of the boat he said he would put it in order. 18. In spite of his boast he dares not go there. 19. He never had gone there but he said he was going to. 20. The judge don't often make a mistake. — 1. The captain with his crew were soon landed on the French coast. 2. Of all the figures of speech none come so near painting as the Metaphor. 3. The good old man continued to take life easily. 4. The smith said he didn't know as he could do it at orce. 6. Scarcely had day dawned than the people began to throng into the village. 6. There is no doubt but what the bridge was swept away. 7. He stood by him like a father by his son. 8. He tended them carefully so as they would be ready in time. 9. It won't without he looks after it constantly. 10> They were that tired that they had to be carried into the house. 11. Professor is undoubtly as learned if not more learned than his predecessor. 12. Each vassal placed his hand between those of the liege-lord and swore their allegiance. 13. To his own indolence, indeed, was owing most of his difficulties. GRAMMAK. 471 14. The jury had not rendered their verdict at ten o'clock. 15. Of all the boys he is the strongest built. 16. His assistance has done more towards bringing about this result than any other gentleman. 17. He went from one house to the other making enquiries. 18. Their orders were to cut to pieces whomsoever should venture to gaze on the ladies as they passed. 19. He showed us a picture of Sir Joshua Eeynold's. 20. It is easy for us to fall into error if one allows himself to be guided by others. VI.— Distinguish between the present reading and the one suggested. 1. If the prisoner is (be) guilty he should be punished. 2. If he goes (go) I go (shall go). 3. I may (might) go if it prove (proved) satisfactory. 4. He saw them before me (I). 6. I'll show you difterent (diflferently). 6. The train leaves (will leave) in the morning at nine o'clock. 7. He stood firmer (more firmly) than ever. 8. The captain treated his men better than us (we). 9. The man answered that he saw (had seen) his friend. 10. He showed me a painting of his sister (sister's). 11. The committee gives (give) its (their) opinion (opinions) on this question. 12. (a) I saw him getting from his horse. (b) I saw him get from his horse. 13. (a) I should think he was wrong. (b) I think he's wrong. 14. The teacher sent for William's (William) and Mary's book. 15. The ambassador is (has) just arrived from France. 16. The friends stood by each other (one another). 17. The plan should (ought to) be carried out at once. 18. I doubt that (whether) this will serve our purpose. 19. (a) A book was given him. (b) Ho was given a book. 20. Here stood the brother I spoke of (of whom I spoke). 1- If] 11 472 APPENDIX. C— Diction.— Exercises: I. — Criticise tho choice of words in tlio following sentences : — 1. Tom was greatly aggravated by her conduct. 2. They had to expatiate their crimes on the scaffold. 3. They preferred to go home than to stay with us. 4. They felt themselves condoned by his example. 5. Being veiy dry, I asked for a drink. 6. He was for a moment in great imminence. 7. There are surely other alternatives than these. 8. They say they never saw him before, a fact which I can dis- prove. 9. It is funny that you made such a mistake. 10. The case is the precise converse of what he states. 11. He went away unconvicted «>f his mistake. 12. Charles I. then ascended the throne of Britain, a name famous in the history of tho world. 13. No avocation is more worthy of reverence than that of the teacher. 14. As a fictitious writer Dickens is unsurpassed. 15. He expressed implicit confidence in him. 16. The plans they advanced were synonymous. 17. He preached a sermon on the observation of Sunday. 18. He was a very exquisite individual. 19. From this standpoint the question has been thoroughly ven- tilated. 20. His present action will lead to this infallible result. II. — 1. This fierce onslaught decimated the army. 2. As a preventative it was highly appreciated. 3. We have never before experienced such a heavy rain. 4. Potatoes do not grow originally in Europe. 5. His efforts were calculated to assist me in my attempt. 6. I found him blackening his shoes. 7. They had no wish to deprecate the picture. m DICTION. 473 8. He refused to demean hiiasolf by such conduct. 9. I saw a capacious rout in the side t)f lii.s coat. 10. Their conversation was of the finest description. 11. Such a mistake is the climax of ignorance. 12. I did not expect such an amount of depravity in him. 13. This does not, in the least, deteriorate from his merit. 14. Their abilities are due to this institution. 15. His means are said to be very limited. 16. You want to be very accurate about this copying. 17. It was the outcome of the puny jealousy of this man. 18. He is ill, but not dangerous. 19. His conduct did not merit such condign pimishment. 20. For a lengthened period she appeared to be a confirmed invalid. III.— 1. He asked to be made captain or mate or purser, for either of which places he considered himself adapted. 2. They treated him very reverendly. 3. They talked over their mutual enmities. 4. I propose to carry out this plan secretly. 5. Do you mind what we agreed to do ? 6. I would not persuade you to do it now. 7. He administered the man a most severe blow. 8. He had no call to interfere with you. 9. His defects, as well as his qualities, were tinctured by this spirit. 10. In the future Columbus had little difficulty. 11. He put it in writing, a verbal answer not being considered sufficient. 12. He vowed that he had made a great mistake. 13. They told the reporters what had transpired at the meeting. 14. He said that, in spite of everything, he was bound to carry out his plan. 15. Wanted— A female teacher for school-section No. 6. 16. They took him apart and prepared him for the emergency. 17. He bore their persecutions with bravery. .:? •;i^-!'M 1 Jit 474 APPENDIX. 18. Where will I be apt to find him ? 19. Directly ho reached the city he drove to the house. 20. He always blames it on me. IV. — 1. John hollered across the field to his brother. 2. I guess his scheme is not a very practical one. 3. The library comprised a great quantity of books. 4. There were less people there yesterday than to-day. 5. I shall not go except he wants me to. 6. The king was a poet and likewise a sportsman. 7. He was exciting the tribes to revolt against their chiefa 8. What hotel are they stopping at ? 9. I imagine you are not likely to find him there. 10. Under this caption he composed an excellent article. 11. I never knew b. more sarcastic, contemptible roan. 12. Scott was an enthusiastic antiquarian. 13. He stood in our midst, a giant among pigmies. 14. The Ottawa empties into the St. Lawrence. 15. They had their shoes fixed before starting. 16. I would lend you a book but I haven't got ona 17. I have got to do it before four o'clock. 18. I doubt if this will ever reach you. 19. My idea is that his attempt will prove successful. 20. Do leave me alone for a while. V. — Criticise the choice of words in the following sentences : — 1. They had lit the lamps before we came. 2. Eh ? What's that ? I don't understand yoti, mister. 3. I never remember seeing him before. 4. The judge observed that the circumstances somewhat palliated his offence. 5. Brown made us a proposal which we weren't prepared to accept. 6. The building will be partially up by September. 7. The members had certain rights not accorded to outsiders. 8. It was at this period that the difficulty took place. DICTION. 475 9. Thoy brought with them boats, fishing-tackle, ptovisions and etc. 10. He could scarcely carry out his attempt. 11. He is not as tall as she. 12. As a politician he is one of 'm; r most superior men. 13. I had never seen such an old man before. 14. Ho looked in the basV.' and bighed deeply. 15. Ho laid there fur a long time waiting quietly. 16. His remarks seemed to m^isr that they were mistaken. 17. I hope, sir, that will learn you a lesson. 18. He was burning a pile of rubbish in the garden. 19. Charles, fetch me the book you have in your hand. 20. It was only out of consideration for his character in the tx)wn that he restrained himself. VI.— 1. They told him to hurry up as they wanted to go down town. 2. It seems to be growing smaller and smaller. 3. The men looked round searching for it. 4. I beg to acknowledge the receipt of your letter. ^ 5. By this means their advantages were made equal. 6. I recollect your being here that evening. 7. He faithfully promised to see to it. 8. The justice of his remark was apparent. 9. We anticipate that he will be very successful. 10. All of them were there ready for work. 11. It was the centennial anniversary of the birth of Shelley. 12. Both were alike in sneering at his vehemence. 13. The guests then part-^ok of a bountiful repast. 14. The officer was instantly killed by a sword stroke. 15. The gifted artist then continued his process along the rope. 16. I expect he was altogether wrong in that matter. 17. Man should treat the animal creation with considerate kindness. 18. This medal was donated by the Prince of Wales. 19. This was the infallible result of his conduct. 20. He acted in a very underhanded way about it, li !:'ii E 'I 476 APPENDIX. VII. — 1. When do you propose to leave? 2. This intended improvement is well calculated to bring disaster upon our parliamentary system. 3. Since going West he has made money rapidly. 4. These productions are not of a very high calibre. 5. The president convened Congress in August. 6. The people have every confidence in the government. 7. They are nothing like so good as he. 8. Did you read the book I gave you? No, I never, I quite forgot it. 9. There were only three people at the meeting. 10. A carriage was waiting at the depot when the train arrived. 11. This was the most splendid prayer ever addressed to a Boston congregation. 12. You have a right to help me up the hill with this load. 13. On Christmas Eve he sent a ton of coal to a poor widow woman. 14. The scenery along the Niagara River is the most gorgeous I ever witnessed. 15. He recommended the man to sow double rowed barley on the ten-acre field. 16. It was discovered that the lady had broken her left limb. 17. He requested his banker to send him an immediate remittance. 18. Every female in the village was excited by the approach of the troops. 19. Being fatigued by their journey they retired shortly after ten o'clock. 20. The gent in the checked pants called us in to lunch. VIII. — 1. Let us now try some experiments with oxygen. 2. He is liable to meet with a good deal of opposition for the mayor- ality. 3. There have been a great many casualities in the city this month. 4. Every once in a while we got the report from a fresh con- stituency. 5. It was necessitated by the circumstances of the case. 6. There were eleven instances of false orthography in the com- position. DICTION. 477 7. A man was arrested for making bogus money. 8. He wired me that he had sold my shares. 9. He called him up by phone and asked if the photos were finished. 10. This oflFence was not proven against him. 11. Our folks have not yet returned from your place. 12. You people better start right away if you don't want to be late. 13. I didn't think he would have the boldness to go that far. 14. You can get all the satisfaction you want right here. 15. His mother is strongly of the opinion that he is a smart boy. 16. How long does the train stop for refreshments. 17. The States now sends an embassador to England. 18. These, Mr. Speaker, are the charges which I hurl against that monster monopoly, the Canada Pacific. 19. Some think there is a political coalition on the tapis. 20. Ere the doctor arrived the man was dead. 21. No change of policy need be looked for whilst the present admin- istration lasts. 22. A millionaire in New York suicided in a fit of depression. 23. He informed the magistrate that his residence had been burglar- ized shortly after midnight. 24. The guests thought the decorations of the ball-room very tasty. 25. After a hard climb they found themselves on the summit. 26. He's a pretty cute fellow and it's pretty hard to get ahead of him. 27. I've just received a postal from an old chum. IX.— Write correct synonymous expressions for any words misused in the following : — 1. The judges doubted the veracity of his statement. 2. It is further to Montreal than to Toronto. 3. The farmer was unconscious of what had taken place in his absence. 4. The city council were considering how to dispose of the sewerage. 5. The will made a very equable division of the estate. 6. Nothing could exceed the enormity of his pretences. 7. Oonsiderable time had transpired before we got under way. 1 in '1' 478 APPENDIX. 8. It is to be deducted from that that he is in the wrong. 9. I scarcely think that this is very healthy food. 10. Did he esteem himself worthy of such an honor ? 11. No matter what they did, they could never give him sufficient. 12. He was perpetually calling when he was least expected. 13. The discovery of the telescope efifected the study of astronomy considerably. 14. He courteously conveyed the ladies through the field. 15. It was due to his lawyer's exertions that the prisoner escaped. 16. The mother sat on a low stool, the infant weeping in her arms. 17. When I asked him the question he replied in the negative. 18. They found the community in a fomentation. 19. They were without the bare necessities of life. 20. When they had entered the house he presented to the young man his mother and father. 21. Corporeal punishment had long been forsaken in that school. 22. There was plenty of food in the camp not yet touched. 23. These deadly enemies he succeeded in conciliating except the leaders, who refused his mediation. 24. The last news from the city is of a startling description. 25. His conduct was an example of what such fellows do. 26. At this news a deadly pallor overspread his face. 27. The president's action seemed a piece of boyish weakness. 28. He then alluded briefly to the political question before them. 29. Only the merest amateur could have made such a blunder. 30. It was this decided manoeuvre that determined the fate of the day. 31. His very first speech in parliament rendered him renowned and illustrations. 32. This book requires to bo carefully read in order to be appreciated. 33. The evidence was not sufficient for the identity of the prisoner- 34. I am unable to deny you admittance to the building. 35. After a brief discussion the House prorogued till evening. 36. The boy was industrious only so long as the teacher's eye wu» upon him. DICTION. 479 37. He always commenced the day with a bath in the river. 38. The girl sat by the window patiently paring an orange. 39. The children were warned against confusing the two names. 40. The prince was unwearied in bestowing honor on the knight. X. — Discuss the propriety and the effect of making the changes suggested in the following : — 1. Virtue only (alone) can make us happy. 2. He spoke no further (farther) on that subject. 3. I never saw so old a (such an old) man. 4. It was his custom (habit) to lie on the grass by the hour. 5. Tidings (news) had just been received of the ship that was sup- posed to have been lost. 6. He confessed (acknowledged) the mistake they accused him of. 7. It rained continuously (continually) from morning till evening. 8. The boy stood for a moment tottering upon (on) this frail support. 9. Putting his hand in (into) his pocket, the doctor drew forth a sovereign. 10. This seems to be a genuine (authentic) account of the battle of Marathon. 11. The delegates expressed divers (diverse) opinions in reference to prohibition. 12. He was an ingenious (ingenuous) youth of whom a parent's heart might well be proud. 13. It was owing to their negligence (neglect) that the disaster occurred. 14. He lost his position through his friend's falseness (falsehood). 15. All the testimony (evidence) failed to convict the prisoner. 16. The sick man fought desperately under the delusion (illusion) that his antagonist was a maniac. 17. He said h^ would set out to-morrow (on the morrow). 18. He was undoubtly sensitive to (sensible of) their harsh criticism. 19. His idleness (laziness) was a great annoyance to his family. 20. Without a family and engrossed in study, the professor was a lonely (solitary) wan. ' i ■J 480 APPENDIX. D.~Aprangrement. Exercises: I. — Study the arrangement of : — 1. When Thebes Epaminondas rears again, then may'st thou be restored ; but not till then. 2. The master heard of his going there before yesterday. 3. He told the man he thought his course erroneous because he was asked for his opinion. 4. All that glitters is not gold. 6. John only owed the grocer five dollars. 6. I didn't go there and I never intend to. 7. The president neither saw Charles nor his friend. 8. He not only looked after the interests of the community but also those of his family. 9. The duke was almost expected to be present at every festivity. 10. The general withdrew his forces rapidly plainiing a new line of attack. 11. Trying to escape notice I beheld my friend run from one tree to another. 12. The English not only respected Wellington's qualities as a general but also as a statesman. 13. Jones always seemed rather an odd sort of man. 14. Charles wanted to go very much. 15. The council rejected the proposal to decrease the salaries of the officers with contempt. 16. The measure did not please us because he brought it forward. 17. He sent word of his having secured these articles to his father and mother. 18. The visitor exclaimed that he did not come to see me but her, 19. He now applied himself to this branch for which he had a great liking to make a name for himself. 20. I intended to make her acquaintance frequently but never did. n. — 1. He now became an object of cc^ntcmpt in consequence of his late disasters to his own subjects. I be as 30 3f ARRANGEMENT. 481 2. She re-ad the letter which he had written twice. 3. Hostile armies now entered the British possessions in France whose rapid progress was aided by the disaffection of the natives. 4. They gained at Wakefield a signal victory against the Duke of York who lost his life in the conflict with many of his followers. 5. Not long since two learned travellers, to a high degree of cer- tainty proved this truth in the first volume of the history of Kamtschatka. 6. Francis now resolved in order to repair his losses to take upon himself the conduct of the war. 7. France and Spain continued to be engaged in war against each other under the new sovereigns. 8. He died after a reign of forty-two years on the thirteenth of September, 1598. 9. These successive changes of government were adopted by the numerous settlements which England already possessed in America without much difficulty. 10. We shall now, after a long interruption, revert to the affairs of the Turks. 11 . It was not till 1845 that it was carried into effect on account of new difficulties. 12. These were achieved by Captain Fremont an officer equally dis- tinguished for bold enterprise and scientific attainments. 13. But the storm was hardly over when the battle recommenced at all points with the same fury. 14. I was left an orphan to the care of my worthy undo when a mere child. 15. He took everything that was sent him with an air of indifference. 16. Imogen thus left alone wanders about till she comes to a cave which, hungry and worn out, she enters in quest of food. 17. Octavius himself was at first involved in great difficulty with Sextus Pompey notwithstanding his success. 18. His conduct at first had rendered him an object of mistrust and terror but gained for him many friends afterwards. 19. Hence agriculture was highly valued and carefully practised from the beginning. *■ ! In 482 APPENDIX. 20. He who neglected his duty in that respect in subsequent times drew upon himself the animadversions of the censorian tribunal. III. — 1. The consul notified the people to be ready to bear arms before proceeding to the levy of soldiers. 2. The devotion of the soldiers sent to Caesar was very noteworthy. 3. The general still looked for support to those followers of the king whom he could trust. 4. The men on the road looked like small birds from the bridge. 5. We always hope to be prepared for their attacks. 6. We could not see the bear at once coming so suddenly from light into darkness. 7. He was still doing some work at his farm on the new road. 8. We brought forward many samples rare and beautiful for their inspection. 9. His parents might have done much better for him surrounded by such affluence. 10. He recommended the fruit that had been sent him oi> account of its exquisite flavour. 11. The martyr was once more led into the square and biuned by order of the governor. 12. The prince ia said to have resembled his royal mother as well as the princess. 13. He depicted to a highly interested audience in glowing colors the adventures of this wonderful man at the institute last evening. 14. Such punishments may be quite properly employed in extreme cases. 15. Inventors have turned their attention to the use of electricity as a locomotive power obtaining good results. 16. He said he couldn't for a moment consider an insult to such a man of .;o importance. 17. He weakly allowed them to bring forward a force that command- ed the situation without opposition. 18. He was trying at the time of his death to settle the difficulty that was pressed on his attention by some new means. PAitAQRAPBlNG. 483 I 19. Spencer has touched upon the subject of literary style in the small treatise now under review. 20. He listened to opinions which he himself had previously advanc- ed with the greatest deference. E.— Paragrraphing.— Upon his arrival in England Nelson was given an enthusiastic welcome. At Yarmouth the naval, the military and the civil authorities received him with every mark of joyous devotion. At Ipswich the people came out to meet him, and, detaching the horses from his carriage, drew him in triumph to the town. In London the reception given him was even warmer. The enthusiasm of the populace knew no bounds. He was borne to the Guildhall, where the common council presented him with a golden-hilted sword in acknowledgment of his great services. The Parlia- ment and court vied with each other in showering honours upon him. In all England was no prouder name than that of Nelson. 1. What is the topic of this paragraph ? Is there any part of the para- graph that does not touch upon this subject ? Show what each sentence contributes to the development of the topic. 2. Where is the topic most plainly enunciated ? Which other sentence strikes you as most general in its character? Would you consider the paragraph defective if it began : "Thereupon Nelson sailed for England. At his arrival, etc.? " 3. Account for the order in which the events are mentioned. Could you with good effect change the position of any of the sentences ? 4. In each of the sentences, 2, 3, 4, 5, 6, 7, 8, pick out a word that connects it with the preceding context. If in any case such a word is lacking, make up the deficiency and note the effect. Suggest a concluding sentence for a paragraph to go before this one, and an opening sentence for a paragraph to come after. The former paragraph might be in refer- ence to Nelson's journey through Europe from the Mediterranean, and the ktler in reference to his unhappy domestic relations about this time. 5. What similarity is there in the materials of sentences 2, 3 and 4 ? How has this similarity been marked by the form of the sentences? 6. Point out the sub-topics of the paragraph. Justify the amount of space given to each sub-topic. What is the object of dividing a composi- tion into paragraphs ? 1 I!;: 484 APPENDIX. 7. What is the general rhetorical effect of all the devices brought out in questions 1, 2, 3, 4, 5 and 6? This is the object of careful paragraph construction. 8. On the supposition that all paragraphs are or ought to be constructed on the same principles as the foregoing, the following laws or rules have been formulated : — i. Unity. — Unity in a paragraph implies a sustained purpose and for- bids digressions and irrelevant matter. ii. Topic Sentence. — The opening sentence, unless obviously prepara- tory, is expected to indicate the scope of the paragraph. lit Continuity. — ^The materials of the paragraph should be arranged in a natural and progressive order. iv. Explicit Reference. — The bearing of each sentence of the para- graph on the sentences preceding needs to be explicit. V. Parallel Construction. — Wlien several consecutive sentences iterate or illustrate the same idea, they should, as far as possible, be formed alike. vi. Du'E Proportion. — As in the sentence, so in the paragraph, principal and subordinate statements should have their relative import- ance clearly indicated. Do you consider these statements laws or rules ? Why ? 9. When and to what extent are these directions binding on the young writer ? A direction given in Rhetoric is merely a suggestion of how to obtain a certain effect ; it follows that these directions are binding only when the rhetorical effect brought out in question 7 is desired, and only in so far as these directions tend to this effect. 10. What limits the number of these directions ? Why could we not add — the language of the paragraph should be as simple as possible, etc.? *' A pari^aph should be free from monotony " has sometimes been stated as a rule. Make the references in the following groups of sentences more explicit : I. — 1. Nelson made a signal to annul the treaty, declaring that he would grant rebels no other terms than those of unconditional submission. The Cardinal objected. 2. The doctors had already warned him of his great danger. It was a piece of folly to set out. PARAGRAPHING. 486 3. He expired at thirty ininutes after four — three hours and a quarter after ho had received Ins wound. Above fifty of the Victory's men fell by the enemy's musketry. 4. The opinions which he has expressed respecting the nature of the Deity, the eternity of matter and the observance of the Sabbath, might, we think, have caused more just s,arprise. We will not go into the discussiim. 5. In a rude state of society men are children with a greater variety of ideas. We may expect to find the poetical temperament in its highest perfection. 6. Infinite toil would not enable you to sweep away a mist, but, by ascending a little, you may often look over it altogether. We wrestle fiercely with a vicious habit, which would have no hold upon us if we ascended into a higher moral atmos- phere. 7. The public mind of Italy had long contained the seeds of free opinions, which were now rapidly developed by the genial influence of free institutions. The people had observed the whole machinery of the church too long and too closely to be duped. 8. Th^ same experiment had been recently tried with the same result at the battle of Ravenna. The infantry of Arragon hewed a passage through the thickest of the imperial pikes and effected an unbroken retreat. 9. Many enemies of public liberty have been distinguished by these private virtues. Strafibrd was the same throughout. 10. Many persons persuade themselves that the life and well-being of a State are something like their own fleeting health and brief prosperity. Portentous things are seen in every sub- ject of political dispute. Much is added to the intolerance of party spirit. The State will bear much killing. Many generations of political prophets have been outlived — and the present ones may be. 11. A peculiar austerity marks almost all Mr. Southey's judgments of men and actions. We are far from blaming him. Rigor ought to be accompanied by discernment, and of discernment Mr. Southey seems to be utterly destitute. 12. The matter has already been very fully treated. We shall be very concise. 486 APPHNMX. In. Evefy royalist felt hiinsulf bound t«) ohoy the king. The right to govorn without tho control of parliament had been put forward. Tho cavalier party supported his claim. 14. But Byron tho critic and Byron tlie poet were two very different men. The effects of a theory may, indeed, often bo traced in his practice. His disposition led him to accommodate himself to the literary taste of the ago in which he lived. 15 Boswell had, indeed, (]uick observation and a retentive memory. One is scarcely justified in calling him a great man. 16. Charles was gay, affable and compliant. James was gloomy, arrogant and stubborn. 17. The share of the tax which fell to Hampden was very small. The sum demanded was a trifle. The principle involved was fearfully important. 18. From tho political agitation of tho eighteenth century sprang the Jacobins. Tho Anabaptists date their history from the reli- gious perturbation of the sixteenth century. 19. The great object of the king of Spain, and of all his counsellors was to avert the dismemberment of the monarchy. Charles determined to name a successor. A will was framed by which tho crown was bequeathed to the Bavarian. prince. 20. He framed measures for the relief of tho English poor. Poverty in England did not cease to exist. I. — Rewrite each of the following in good literary form, omitting or supplying whatever may be necessary to form a properly constructed paragraph : — 1. According to the statement of tho public analyst, the water supply in Montreal, as a rule, is wholesome. The beer and ale made there are unimpeachable and of fair quality. He never found strychnine in any sample. The milk was usually good, but ten years ago Wiis badly diluted with water and adulterated by the removal of cream. Plentiful ]irosecu- tions had prevented this. He had examined specimens of bread, and found alum in extremely few cases — say less than one per cent. He did not consider potatoes necessary to the making of . bread. They gave a brighter color to the bread. He thought potatoes improved the bread, supplying the want of fresh vegetables. Alum would be injurious to the health of the consumer if used in large (pianticies. He had examined . PAttAORAPHINO. 487 many specinieiiH of pepper and spice and fuund the majority impure. Mustard was usually adultorated. Coffee and tea, m usually sold here, were deficient in the strengthening portions. Tea often had exhausted tea-leaves and stalks in it. Some samples wore adulterated with sandy, worthless matter in the form of tea-dust. Ho considered the coloring matter added to tea injurious to health. Coffee was usually largely adulterated. People oould not be sure of getting piire ground coffee. The adulterations usually were chicory, peas, corn and wheat (damaged). He never found any substance in coffee injurious to health. The sugar sold here was within a reasonable degree of purity. Sugar refined here was as pure as that imported. Very little raw sugar went on the market for family use. Sugar made from beets was n<jt as sweet as that made from cane. He had not found any muriate of tin in any sugars of late years. 2. The camp of the Normans being seven miles from Beverley, a report was promulgated in the said camp that Beverley Church was the refuge of the rich inhabitants and the depository of the riches of the country ; and several adventurers (one Toustain commanding) hastened to be the first to inaugurate the pillage. Entering Beverley without resistance, marching direct to the cemetery where the terrified crowd had sought shelter, and leapins; the walls, without heeding the Anglo-Saxon saint any more than those who invoked him, Toustain, the leader of the band, running his eye over the groups of English, descried an old man richly attired and wearing gold bracelets, according to the custom of his nation, and galloped towards him, sword in hand. Upon this the terrified old man sought refuge in the church, but Toustain followed him into the church. He had however scarcely passed the doors when (his horse slipping on the pavement) the animal fell dead and crushed him in its fall. At this sight (their captain half dead), the other Normans turning their horses' heads (their imaginations being deeply struck by what had happened) hastened in terror to the Norman camp to relate the terrible example of the power of St. John of Beverley. When then the army proceeded on its march, no soldier dared expose himself to the terrible wrath of the saint ; and the territory of this church, if we are to believe the legend, was the only spot which remained covered with build- ings and cultivation amidst the general destruction of the country. 3. It is an acknowledged and generally admitted fact that the sparrow is both insectivorous and graminivorous. That I might have full opportuni- ties to watch them and see for myself, I had several houses raised on poles, these poles having wires strung on them, on which I trained my ! 488 APPENDIX. vines. I may mention that on two such rows of poles I grow on an average over half a ton of grapes every year, of Concord, Eumelan, Rebecca, Delaware, Creveling and many others. The Iiouhoh were made of boxes about 14 inches long, 7 higli and 8 in breadth, divided in the middle and a door on each end. This box wau fastened on a broad board for a floor, and formed a full nest house on each side, and could serve for two couple. I have shot many at the other end of the village, but never near my own residence. I carefully protect them. I coincide with the statement that they eat both wheat and oats, as also many varieties of grain and seed. In the winter they can get little el' than refuse wheat and other grains, and what bits of cooked (lotatoot- iread crumbs, etc., their quick eyes can pick up. This food is varied as liie snow disappears with early flies and other insects. I have seen sparrows, bluebirds and robins chase and catch an early water-fly often on the snows in April, termed by trout fishers in England ' March browns.' I have seen them chase them on the wing and on the ground, and then fly directly to their nests to feed the young. 4. The treasures of the subdued provinces began to flow incessantly into Rome, and filled the coffers of private individuals as well as those of the State. To the private citizens, the increase of territory and the con* quests made by the commonwealth became the source of ruinous corrup' tion. The Roman population, recruited in a great measure from emancipated captives or slaves, became almost ungovernable, indolent and eager, as it were, for nothing but gratuitous distribution of com and the games of the circus. On the sands of t)ie arena many brave men lost their lives, who, if they had been allowed to remain in their own lands, might have spent many happy years in patriotic service. Affection was lavished upon those persons who gratified the people by liberal gifts and by the frequency of popular exhibitions, such as that of gladiators or combatants fighting for their barbarous diversion. The former feuds between the patricians and plebeians, which had been suspended by the importance of foreign events, were renewed with increased animosity, and there needed but a spark to produce a dreadful conflagration in the very centre of the republic. 5. He had used every possible means — nay, sometimes base expedients — to arrest the course of his mighty rival, but had constantly failed ; in particular he had tried the chances of war and was inevitably beaten. He fled as far as Ecbatana, the capital of Media. The regal splendour and oriental magnificence of the palaces and public buildings were unsurpass- able. He was not safe ; the approach of Alexander compelled him to quit PARAORAPHING. 489 the city and retire to a greater dintance. He was still followed by a respectable body of trcMips ; but, during their further march, Besaus, one of their generalH, having bribed most of them, made himself master of the person of the king, whom ho loaded with chains. This traitor learned that the Macedonians were fast approaching, and both he and his accom- plices pierced Darius with their arrows, and left him covered with wounds, though still alive, at a short distance from the road. Polystrates, of whom he asked a drink of water, found the unfortunate monarch in a sad condi- tion. Having received and taken it, he expressed his lively gratitude for t\j boon, and, pressing the soldier's hand in his own, requested him to thank Alexander in his name for the great kindness he had shown to his family, and to recommend to the justice of that prince the punishment of a monster of injustice and cruelty, who, by putting his king and bene- factor to death, had outraged all sovereigns in his person. He then breathed his last. Alexander arrived in a few moments, and, weeping over him, caused his funeral obsequies to be performed with royal magni- ficence and his body to be buried in the sepulchre of the kings, his predecessors. No misfortune, no distress, can be imagined more deplor- abl<4 than that of Darius on this occasion. n >— Write paragraphs using each of the following as an opening sen- tence : — 1. After many attempts and in face of great difficulties Wolfe defeated the French under Montcalm. 2. Marlborough's appearance and address were no less remarkable than his talent. 3. The scene in the court-room was such as to awe the innocent and strike terro) into the heart of the guilty. 4. From our present situation we have a fine view of one of the most striking sections of these mountains. 6. The wedding had evidently attracted to the little church over half the population of the village. 6. Macaulay had gained considerable fame as a legislator, essayist and historian. 7. As the moving mist rolled away the little town spread itself before him. 8. Among the other great men of the time, Wentworth stands out a dark and not unimpressive figure. 9. The vojrage from the source of the river to its mouth was ended by thirty-six hours continuous paddling, ■,P«l»iJ^UU.l^"~|tl'^», ■■»ll«(H,IJ(lpU«,.IJI>WW"imilJl 490 APPENDIX. 10. The artist slowly withdrew the curtain and displayed to his visi- tors his newly- finished work — his master-piece. 11. His favorite dog Carlo was a massive St. Bernard of great intelligence. 12. Inside, the house was as neat and cosy as one could imagine. 13. We found her Grace's flower garden a pleasant retreat in the early afternoon. 14. As he struck into the depths of the forest our traveller was filled with new and unexpected emotions. 15. The old log school-house stood a short distance from the road partly shaded from view by two immense elms. 16. To fully undersfamd the battle of Waterloo we must first get a clear conception of the ground and the disposition of the French and the English forces. 17. Cautiously concealed in the gloom of the tree we behold the un- couth creature arise from its lair. 18. Everything in nature seemed to herald the coming of a fearful storm. 19. Th.j heat was intense ; in the white square the air was breath- less, and seemed to pulsate with its own fervency. 20. Seen from this point the fall is wonderfully impressive. III. — 1. True liberty is found only in following the dictates of duty. 2. The pursuit of an unlawful ambition leads to failure and remorse. 3. Great virtues carried to excess become faults. 4. It has been said that those studies that ai-e the most pleasing to us will be of the greatest value in educating us. 5. In a poem we require finish in proportion to brevity. 6. Poetry can confer upon each period of life its appropriate blessing. 7. "Plate sin with gold, and the strong lance of justice hurtless breaks." 8. We become happy only when we give ourselves up to the service of others. 9. That man does the best for others who does the best for himself. 10. A man may learn great virtues by the contemplation of the lower animals. 11. True love of country is not inconsistent with the love of humanity. ».J..I.^1IWP,I *Jin^^^. PARAGRAPHING. m. 12. " Books, we know, are a substantial world both pure and good." 13. "Genius is an immense capacity for taking trouble." 14. The genuine philosopher's stone is content, 15. " Every man's tsisk is his life-preserver." 16. Continual aspiration is prayer that assures its own answer. 17. No man has a right to claim all his rights. 18. Ruskin teachcf. ihat we have no right to hold opinions except coiicerni'ig the work under oUr hands. 19. Juvenal thought the greatest blessing the gods could bestow was the possession of a sound mind in a sound body. 20. The greatest courage is the fear of wrong. IV.— 1. Napoleon's invasion of Russia was one of the most disastrous steps in his career. 2. The boys si)ent the afternoon rambling about the farm. 3. It was not until six o'clock in the evening that the fate of the battle became apparent. 4. It was only after considerable discussion that the meeting passed a vote of confidence in the leader. 5. Cromwell succeeded in forming a body of troops capable of com- peting with and overthrowing the royaUst cavalry. 6. It had been arranged that the cricket match was to take place Friday morning. 7. When the general saw that an attack was imminent he drew up his forces in the form of a hollow square and prepared for resistance. 8. We took our places on the top of the stJige-coach in the early morning and set off for school. 9. The baskets, rods and lines, and other retjuisites were placed in the boats and an early start was made for our favorite Ssh- ing ground. 10. A light breeze sprang up in the evening and weighing our anchor we dropped silently down the river. 11. The visitors spent their first day looking about the city 12. There is a moment of suspense ; the word is given ; the horses dash into full career. 13. In October 1805 the English fleet under Lord Nelson fought a fleet of the allies at Trafalgar. i' i i 'I I 492 APPENDIX. 14. We drove all day through a stretch of country characteristically western. 15. The debate lasted with considerable acrimony for several hours. 16. The horses were so frightened at the screeching engine that the driver lost all control of them. 17. This election was held on the fifth of April and caused consider- able excitement in the town. 18. The workmen soon arrived and began the construction of another building. 19. The public career of the Earl of Chatham is one of the chief features of thi.s period of English history. 20. Champlain was untiring in his endeavours to open up the country. v. — Make a literary paragraph of the following : — Lord Durham arrived in Canada. He landed at Quebec. It was at the end of May, 1838. He issued a proclamation. Its style was like that of a dictator. It was not in any way unworthy of the occasion. The occasion called for the intervention of a brave and enlightened man acting as a dictator. He declared that he would unsparingly punish any persons if they violated the laws. He frankly invited the colonies to co-operate with him. He wished to form a new system of government. This was to be really suited to their wants. It was to be suited to the altering con- ditions of civilization. He was unfortunate. He barely began his work as dictator. He lost his dictatorship. The Canada Bill passed through Parliament. Certain powers were to be conferred upon him. He expected these. They were seriously curtailed. He went to work. He acted as if he were still invested with absolute authority over all the laws and conditions of the colony. A very Caesar could hardly have been more boldly arbitrary, if he had been laying down the lines for the future government of a province. His arbitrariness was healthy in effect. It was just in spirit. Let this be s^iid. His enemies at home and the enemies of the Government wore given an immense opportunity of attack on him. They had an immense opportunity of attack on the Government. He hardly began his work. He was reconstructing the colonial system 6f government. Vehement voices in Parliament clamored for his recall. V INDEX. (▲ITTRORS FROM WHOSE WORKS EXTRACTS ARE TAKEN.) Paoi. Addison, Joseph ; 1672-1719 323 Arnold, Matthew ; 1822-1888 349 Beecher, Henry Ward ; 1813-1887 398 Blackmore, Richard Doddridge ; 1825- 250. 267 Brooke, Stopford A. ; 1832- 225 Brooks, Phillips ; 1835-1893 329 Bronte, Charlotte ; 1816-1865 25 Brown, John (Doctor) ; 1810-1882 201 Burke, Edmund ; 1729-1797 361, 397 Byron, George Gordon (Lord) ; 1788-1824 450 Cable, George Washington ; 1844- 137 Carlyle, Jane Welsh ; 1801-1866 98 Carlyle, Thomas ; 1765-1881... .21, 101, 103,123, 168, 173, 175, 233, 333 Chateaubriand ; 1768-1848 129 Chesterfield (Philip Dormer Stjvnhope) Karl of; 1694-1773 452 Cowper, William ; 1731-1800 97, 277, 448 Dickens, Charles ; 1812-1870 121, 168, 261 Duncan, Sara Jeanette (Mrs. Cotes) ; 18 - 138 Eliot, George (Mary Ann Evans) ; 1820-1881 ^31, 175, 177, 203, 207 Enault, 1822- 201 Fitzgerald, Edward ; 1809-1883 280 Froude, James Anthony ; 1818- 174 Gaskell, Elizabeth ; 1810-1866 45 Goldsmith, Oliver ; 1728-1774 73 Gray, Thomas ; 1716-1771 127, 130 Green, John Richard; 1837-1883 126 Httliburton, Thomas C. (Judge) ; 1796-1865. 149 Hamerton, Philip Gilbert ; 1834- 129, 131, 137 Hazlitt, William ; 1778-1830 244 Howells, William Dean ; 1837- 165 494 INDEX, Paqe. Hudson, Henry N. ; 1814-1886 ]85 Huxley, Thomas H. ; 1825- ! ! ! . ! 319 Irving, Washington ; 1783-1869. . . .86, 130, 159, 177, 187, 202, 208, 214 Johnson, Samuel; 1709-1784 358 447 Kipling, Budyard ; 1865- 70 Lamb, Charles ; 1775-1834 ! ! . 364 Lincoln, Abraham ; 1809-1865 393 45^ Lockhart, John Gibson ; 1794-1864 21 Lytfcon, Edward Bulwer (Lord) ; 1805-1873 166, 254 Macaulay, Thomas Babington (Lord) ; 1800-1859 .. 173, 185, 211, 369,' 419 Parkman, Francis ; 1823-1893 37^ 125 191 Robertson, William ; 1721-1793 ' 33 Ruskin, John ; 1819- ]47^ 148^ ^57 Sand, George (Madame Dudevant) ; 1804-1876 243 Scott, Sir Walter ; 1771-1832 22, 24, 35, 157, 249 Shakespeare, William ; 1564-1616 85 Shelley, Percy Bysshe ; 1792-1822 225, 278 Shelley, Mary W. ; 1797-1851 '233 Sheridan, Richard Brinsley ; 1751-1816 89 Smith, Goldwin ; 1823- 326 Southey, Robert ; 1774-1843. '. 38, 234 Stanley, Arthur Penrhyn (Dean) ; 1815-1881 309 Stedman. Edmund Clarence ; 1833- 227 Wilkins, Mary E. ; 18 - 61, 241 [