key: cord-0826322-cpk9hmum authors: Otieno, Grieven P.; Murunga, Nickson; Agoti, Charles N.; Gallagher, Katherine E.; Awori, Juliet O.; Nokes, D. James title: Surveillance of endemic human coronaviruses (HCoV-NL63, OC43 and 229E) associated with childhood pneumonia in Kilifi, Kenya date: 2020-09-22 journal: Wellcome Open Res DOI: 10.12688/wellcomeopenres.16037.2 sha: 09ad93fba6e06f1e9a1b6b59f0389d431cdad5cc doc_id: 826322 cord_uid: cpk9hmum Introduction: Human coronaviruses (HCoVs) circulate endemically in human populations, often with seasonal variation. We describe the long-term patterns of paediatric disease associated with three of these viruses, HCoV-NL63, OC43 and 229E, in coastal Kenya. Methods: Continuous surveillance of pneumonia admissions was conducted at the Kilifi county hospital (KCH) located in the northern coastal region of Kenya. Children aged <5 years admitted to KCH with clinically defined syndromic severe or very severe pneumonia were recruited. Respiratory samples were taken and tested for 15 virus targets, using real-time polymerase chain reaction. Unadjusted odds ratios were used to estimate the association between demographic and clinical characteristics and HCoV positivity. Results: From 2007 to 2019, we observed 11,445 pneumonia admissions, of which 314 (3.9%) tested positive for at least one of the HCoV types surveyed in the study. There were 129 (41.1%) OC43, 99 (31.5%) 229E, 74 (23.6%) NL63 positive cases and 12 (3.8%) cases of HCoV to HCoV coinfection. Among HCoV positive cases, 47% (n=147) were coinfected with other respiratory virus pathogens. The majority of HCoV cases were among children aged <1 year (66%, n=208), though there was was no change in the proportion infected by age. HCoV-OC43 was predominant of the three HCoV types throughout the surveillance period. Evidence for seasonality was not identified. Conclusions: Overall, 4% of paediatric pneumonia admissions were associated with three endemic HCoVs, with a high proportion of cases co-occurring with another respiratory virus, no clear seasonal pattern, and with the age-distribution of cases following that of pneumonia admissions (i.e. highest in infants). These observations suggest, at most, a small severe disease contribution of endemic HCoVs in this tropical setting and offer insight into their potential future burden and epidemiological characteristics. To date, seven human coronaviruses (HCoVs) have been identified, of which four (NL63, HKU1, OC43 and 229E) are known to be endemic among humans [1] [2] [3] [4] . Endemic HCoV types are detected in a small but non-negligible proportion of respiratory tract infections; mild cases occur across a wide age-range and severe disease is predominant in young children and the elderly [5] [6] [7] [8] . A further three HCoVs have emerged in recent years and caused epidemics: SARS-CoV the agent of severe acute respiratory syndrome in China 9 , MERS-CoV the cause of Middle East respiratory syndrome in the Middle-East 10 and most recently SARS-CoV-2, the aetiological agent of the current pandemic of coronavirus disease 2019 (COVID-19) 11 . To date, there are limited preventive options against HCoV infections and no effective anti-viral treatment 12 . Understanding the epidemiology of HCoVs can play a critical role in prediction, prevention and control of HCoV infection. In addition, data on endemic HCoVs may inform expectations for SARS-CoV-2 if it becomes endemic. Our study aims to describe the circulation patterns of three endemic HCoVs (OC43, 229E, and NL63) over time using data from a long-term surveillance programme in a rural coastal setting in Kenya, 3° south of the equator. A prospective study was established in 2007 for long-term continuous respiratory virus surveillance among pneumonia admissions to Kilifi County Hospital (KCH) 6 in order to develop improved epidemiological understanding, estimate disease burden and provide suitable baseline data for future vaccine studies. KCH is the referral hospital within the Kilifi Health and Demographic Surveillance System (KHDSS), in the northern coastal region of Kenya 13 . The location experiences two rainy seasons approximately from April to July and October to December, with median maximum temperature of 33°C (IQR: 31-36), median minimum temperature of 23°C (IQR: [22] [23] [24] , and median relative humidity of 78% (IQR: 71-87) (unpublished weather station data). Children aged 1 day to 59 months admitted to KCH with clinical symptoms of severe or very severe pneumonia were recruited. Written informed consent was sought from parents/guardians of the children prior to sample collection. In this paper we define severe pneumonia as history of cough or difficulty breathing and chest indrawing while very severe pneumonia is defined as history of cough or difficult breathing and at least one of inability to feed, prostration, unconsciousness, or oxygen saturation of <90% by fingertip pulse oximetry. We use the term pneumonia to refer to all cases of clinically severe or very severe pneumonia 14 . The variables extracted from the hospital surveillance database include; Demographic characteristics (sex, KHDSS residency status, age), presence/ absence of clinical features (history of cough, difficulty breathing, cyanosis, nasal flaring, chest indrawing, crackles, wheeze, inability to drink, vomits everything, fever defined as axillary temperature ≥37.5° C, oxygen saturation levels, conscious level: agitated, lethargic, prostration or unconscious, pneumonia status: severe or very severe), laboratory test results, and hospitalisation outcomes (admission to the high dependency unit, discharge outcomes: alive or dead) Specimens collected between January 2007 and December 2019 were processed and screened for three HCoVs (OC43, NL63 and 229E) and at least 12 other respiratory viral pathogens (RSV (A and B), rhinovirus, HCoVs (NL63, OC43, 229E), influenza (A, B and C), parainfluenza virus (1-4), adenovirus, and human metapneumovirus) using real-time polymerase chain reaction (RT-PCR). Sample testing was initially performed in 2007 using the LightCycler Fast Start DNA MasterPLUS HybProbe kit (Roche) 6 , then multiplex RT-PCR using Qiagen Quantifast multiplex RT-PCR kit (Qiagen, United Kingdom) in triplex sets on an ABI 7500 system, from January 2007 until the present day 15, 16 ; additionally, a proportion of samples were tested using a 33-pathogen multiplex quantitative PCR (FTD Resp-33, Fast Track Diagnostics, Sliema, Malta) as part of the multi-country PERCH study 17 , between August 2011 and December 2013. A variety of collection methods was used: nasal wash (2007 to 2009), nasopharyngeal flocked swab (2010 to 2014), or combined nasopharyngeal swab and oropharyngeal swab (2015 onwards). Data analysis was done using STATA version 13.0 (Stata Corp, College Station Texas, USA). Summary statistics (counts, proportions, measures of central tendency and variation) are presented for continuous and categorical data as appropriate. We estimated unadjusted odds ratios to measure the association between demographic and clinical characteristics of the study participants and testing positive for HCoV. Three Poisson regression models, one for each HCoV type, were used to investigate the presence of seasonality. In the models a trend variable was included and residuals plotted against month. Identification of a strong pattern by visual inspection of the residual plots would suggest presence of seasonality. The chi-square test of proportional trends was used to test for a linear trend in the proportions of samples tested or not tested for HCoV over time. To check for an association between categorical variables the chi-square test of association or Fisher's exact test was used as appropriate. The analysis code is provided as Extended data 18 . This study was approved by the Kenya Medical Research Institute Scientific Ethics Review Unit (Approval number: KEMRI/SERU/CGMR-C/027/3178). During the 13 years of surveillance, there were 49,409 paediatric admissions of children aged 0-59 months at KCH. A total of 11,445 (23.2%) admissions were due to severe (n= 7808, 68%) and very severe (n=3637, 32%) pneumonia. Out of the eligible cases, 69.5% (n=7957) were tested for the three HCoVs while the remainder were not tested due to refusal of consent (13.8%), discharge (13%) or death (3.7%) prior to sample collection. Cases untested did not differ from those tested in age distribution or sex ratio, but were more likely to be very severe (40.0% versus 28.3%, Fishers exact P-value <0.001). Of the 7957 children tested, 5312 (66.7%) were aged <1 year, 1454 (18.3%) were aged 12-23 months, 620 (7.8%) were aged 24-35 months and 571 (7.2%) were in the 36-59 months age band. The proportion of tested individuals with fever (axillary temperature ≥37.5°C), cough and difficulty breathing was 58.3%, 83.2%, 92.6%, respectively. A total of 314 (3.9%) tested positive for at least one of the three HCoV targets. Among the HCoV positives, 129 (41.1%) had OC43, 99 (31.5%) had 229E, 74 (23.6%) had NL63 and 12 (3.8%) had coinfections between the three HCoV types. Among all the samples tested, the overall prevalence of NL63 was 1% (n=80), 1.7% for OC43 (n=137) and 1.4% for 229E (n=109). The characteristics of the patients positive for any and for each HCoV type or infection combination are described in Table 1 . HCoV positive cases were predominantly children aged <1 year (66.2%) and those aged 12-23 months (18.2%). The burden of infection with at least one HCoV, among all pneumonia admissions, was highest in infants and decreased with increasing age (2.6% for those under 1 year and 0.7% for 12-23 months). The same pattern was seen for each individual HCoV type (not shown). However, the proportion of samples testing positive for HCoV (3.9%) did not vary with age group (Fisher's exact p-value = 0.753). Among all HCoV positive participants, mean age was 11 months (median 7 months), there were fewer females than males and fewer with very severe compared to severe pneumonia. At least half of the HCoV positives presented with fever (58%) and nasal flaring (53%). Clinical outcomes of HCoV-infected patients Over a quarter of those positive for at least one of the three endemic HCoVs investigated in this study were admitted to the high dependency unit and of those positive for OC43, 13.5% (n=10) died while 7.8% (n=10) and 7.1% (n=7) died of those positive for NL63 and 229E, respectively. A large proportion of these deaths were observed among those with underlying co-morbidities ( Figure 1 ). None of the HCoVs were statistically significantly associated with any of the specific clinical signs or outcomes investigated (p-values>0.05) except death among NL63 cases (Table 2 ); however, we had limited power to detect associations given the small number of HCoV positive cases. About 47% (n=147) of the 314 HCoV cases were co-infected with other viral respiratory pathogens; respiratory syncytial virus (RSV) and human rhinovirus (HRV) jointly accounted for >50% of all HCoV coinfections with other pathogens. A similar coinfection pattern was observed for each HCoV tested ( Figure 2 ). Throughout the surveillance period, there were three cases (one of NL63 and two of OC43) aged <1 year that were readmitted and tested positive for the same HCoV as the first admission. The NL63 readmission occurred 10 days after discharge from the first admission while the OC43 readmissions were at 3 and 21 days after discharge from the first admission. The NL63 case had a discharge diagnosis of neonatal sepsis for the first admission and gastroenteritis plus lower respiratory tract infection (LRTI) for the readmission. One of the OC43 cases had a discharge diagnosis of LRTI for both admissions while the other had immunosuppression plus malnutrition in the first and immunosuppression plus septicaemia for the second admission. Temporal patterns of different HCoVs NL63 and OC43 were observed fairly consistently throughout the surveillance period while fewer cases of HCoV-229E were observed from the middle of 2011 and were not detected subsequent to 2016 ( Figure 3 ). The highest numbers of cases were observed in the periods April to June for NL63, June to September for OC43 and January to March for 229E. Pooling data for all HCoVs, there were more cases in the colder months (May to September) than the hotter months (October to April) ( Figure 4 ), as for OC43, but NL63 was more common in the first half of the year, and 229E in the second half of the year. However, time series models did not indicate a seasonal pattern for any of the HCoVs ( Figure 5 ) over the years. The proportion of samples tested for HCoV did not change over time among those with severe pneumonia ( 2 (1) 3.11; χ = p-value = 0.078) but changed among those with very severe pneumonia 2 (1) 149.11; χ = p-value < 0.001). De-identified raw data for this study are available as Underlying data 18 . We have described the circulation patterns of three endemic HCoVs (NL63, OC43 and 229E) in a long-term surveillance study of childhood pneumonia hospitalisations in coastal Kenya. We observed a small proportion of pneumonia admissions positive for one or more HCoVs (3.9%). While 65% of HCoV infections occurred in children in their first year of life (either cumulatively for all HCoVs or for each individual HCoV type), this reflected the age-distribution of pneumonia admissions to the ward. Hence, contrary to other reports 19 , HCoV did not differ by age and this might reflect no variation in age-specific community incidence of infection in children under five, together with lack of variation in disease severity (likelihood of hospitalisation) across ages, or (ii) variation in age-specific community incidence by age but with a disproportionate probability of hospitalisation. Our reported prevalence is equivalent to that from a long-term hospital surveillance of seasonal coronaviruses in Scotland (4%) 8 7 . This latter study included locations with a wide range of climate conditions that might influence prevalence; however, the study was not big enough to stratify by location. We did not observe seasonal variation of HCoVs compared to some other respiratory viral pathogens like RSV, as previously reported from our site 14 . In addition, neither peak months for pneumonia admissions nor the long rainy periods (April to July) in Kilifi were associated with HCoV peaks. This is in contrast to data from temperate settings where seasonality of HCoVs has been reported 8, [20] [21] [22] , with increased occurrence during the colder winter months. The HCoVs we have studied are known to continuously circulate among humans 1 , although in Kilifi we observed low numbers for all types. Of interest is that pneumonia associated with 229E admissions was not detected in the later years of the surveillance. We attempted to investigate if this was due to primers or probe mismatches. For all the three tested endemic CoVs we did not observe significant mismatches on the primer/probe pairs against data available from GenBank database although this investigation suffered a limitation of few sequences available globally in recent years (2015-2019) and none from East Africa. With the highest numbers and consistent presence compared to NL63 and 229E, our results suggest that OC43 is the predominant HCoV type in the coastal region of Kenya. The present study did not have a control group by which to assess an aetiological association between the HCoVs and pneumonia. In the PERCH multi-country case-control study 17 HCoVs contributed less than 1% of the etiological fraction. In our study the contribution to disease is not known (except for the relatively small set of samples from 2011-13 that were part of the PERCH study), but it is of note that around 50% co-occurred with another respiratory virus (most commonly with RSV), the risk was not age-dependent, there was no clear association between any of the viruses with the any of the specific clinical signs or outcomes investigated and in 26% of deaths with a HCoV detected there was a likely alternative diagnosis to pneumonia. This suggests the presence of incidental HCoV in Kilifi and other clinical groups (hence an under-estimation in this study), though causality of death outcomes was not differentially identified in this study. While we have been able to sequence the virus from a proportion of the positive specimens 23,24 , we cannot assume 100% specificity, and even a modest level of false positivity could account for many of the positive diagnoses and argues for caution in interpreting the prevalence estimates. Of relevance also is that few (~1%) of the 314 children positive for at least one HCoV were subsequently HCoV-positive readmissions. While this is a crude analysis which ignores censoring at the start and end of the surveillance, and alternative hospitals where patients may have been admitted, it might be an indicator of low probability of severe reinfection. Alternatively, these readmissions might be children with a prolonged infection having not fully recovered at their first discharge. In addition, HKU1 was only tested during the 24 month period that PERCH study was conducted hence samples tested for HKU1 were considered unrepresentative of the entire study period and therefore not included in this analysis. Over the surveillance period, we have changed our sample collection and testing methods. This is a limitation; we did not conduct a sensitivity analysis to compare the different PCR methods, and the addition of an OP swab increases the number of viruses found by NP alone (by 14% for HCoVs) 15 . Some of the observed patterns may have been influenced by these changes. It should be noted that fever, either on history or as measured at the time of admission, was not an inclusion criterion for eligibility, which might have influenced the prevalence of HCoV. If the endemic COVs are strongly associated with symptoms of fever, as is SARS CoV-2, then we might be under-estimating the prevalence due to a selection bias. However, interestingly, only 58% of the HCoV positive cases had axillary temperature of >=37.5°C. A further limitation is that only a fraction (70%) of pneumonia cases was tested for HCoV. We have previously shown that those untested tend to be more severely ill and less likely to be virus positive 14 . The proportion tested has not substantially changed over time among individuals with severe pneumonia but changed among those with very severe pneumonia. Similarly, we did not observe a difference in the ages of those tested and those untested for HCoV across time. We employed various collection methods and these are known to differ in the range of viruses detected. For example, the addition of an OP swab to an NP swab has been found to increase virus yield 15 . In conclusion, in this tropical setting we find the three endemic coronaviruses were observe at low prevalence, not dissimilar to influenza and metapneumovirus, but considerably lower that for RSV and human rhinovirus. There was no clear seasonal variation. As the pandemic of COVID-19 takes its course, it is of interest to speculate whether the SARS-CoV-2 virus will become endemic and continuously co-circulate in the human population with the existing HCoVs 7,25 . The epidemiology of endemic HCoVs can be used to inform our expectations of SARS-CoV-2 in childhood, its potential severity and inter-species interactions and competition. I am satisfied that the authors have sufficiently addressed all the concerns raised. One minor comment: reference #8 is available in peer reviewed published form if the authors wish to update their reference list: https://doi.org/10.1093/infdis/jiaa185 1 . (since this can affect probabilty of virus detection and violates statistical assumptions of independent data points). Suggest authors add to Methods a brief outline of the changes in testing procedure over time (as mentioned in the Discussion) to aid interpretation of detection trends, as different specimens are likely associated with different probabilities of virus detection. It is unclear why the laboratory screen omitted HCoV-HKU1. Suggest the authors include a comment on the anticipated influence on the overall detection of HCoV. 3. It is unclear whether exclusion of untested discharged patients (presumably milder cases) have led to an under-estimation of HCoV detection proportions. Suggest authors add a statement to describe any anticipated influence of this exclusion. The % of pneumonia cases with HCoV detected is clearly low. However, it would be helpful if the authors could discuss this result in the context of other common respiratory viruses detected among cases of pneumonia in this setting, such as influenza and RSV. Discussion page 6: "...suggests age is not a risk factor for coronavirus associated pneumonia hospital admission". The role of age as a risk factor for pneumonia cannot be determined here without a non-pneumonia control group. Suggest authors reword this statement and consider whether the lack of variation in age-specific proportions may potentially reflect (i) no variation in age-specific community incidence of infection in children under five, together with lack of variation in severity (likelihood of hospitalisation) across ages, or (ii) variation in age-specific community incidence by age but with a disproportionate probability of hospitalisation. 6. Discussion page 9: "...and in 26% of deaths with a HCoV detected there was a likely alternative diagnosis to pneumonia". This seems to suggest the role of HCoV on overall hospital burden may be under-estimated by pneumonia cases. Although not an aim of the study, I suggest the authors consider adding a brief comment regarding the generalisability of their findings to other clinical groups to place the results into a wider context. Discussion page 9: Can the authors comment on the possibility that readmissions reflect prolonged virus shedding, rather than indicating reinfection? Longest duration between admissions of 21 days possibly bordering an anticipated peak detection within first few weeks (e.g. for SARS-CoV-2 1 ). Suggest authors consider adding a brief statement to include this possibility. 8. Discussion page 10: " fever... was not an inclusion criterion for eligibility, which might have influenced the prevalence of HCoV". Suggest authors make clear the anticipated direction of effect on the prevalence -presumably underestimation? 9. Discussion page 10: "...there was a significant age difference for those tested and those untested for HCoV across time." This statement seems to be at odds with Results page 3 "..cases untested did not differ from those tested in age distribution.." Suggest the authors reword as appropriate. 10. Conclusions page 10: "...little evidence of a substantial aetiological contribution...": The aetiological role of HCoV cannot be established without a control group (as the authors do mention on page 9) i.e. it is not known whether the prevalence of HCoV is lower among cases of ARI without pneumonia. Suggest authors rephrase to put the low HCoV detections within the context of relative contribution of pathogens/other causes to disease aetiology i.e. most pneumonia cases are attributable to other causes. Although presumably outside the scope of this study to analyse, I suggest the authors consider commenting briefly on any potential role of coinfecting respiratory bacteria on HCoV-associated pneumonia in this population; bacterial coinfection may influence the chance of pneumonia/testing for viruses. 12. Are all the source data underlying the results available to ensure full reproducibility? Yes Are the conclusions drawn adequately supported by the results? Partly Discussion page 6: "...suggests age is not a risk factor for coronavirus associated pneumonia 1. hospital admission". The role of age as a risk factor for pneumonia cannot be determined here without a non-pneumonia control group. Suggest authors reword this statement and consider whether the lack of variation in age-specific proportions may potentially reflect (i) no variation in age-specific community incidence of infection in children under five, together with lack of variation in severity (likelihood of hospitalisation) across ages, or (ii) variation in age-specific community incidence by age but with a disproportionate probability of hospitalisation. We have made the change as suggested by the reviewer. Discussion page 9: "...and in 26% of deaths with a HCoV detected there was a likely alternative diagnosis to pneumonia". This seems to suggest the role of HCoV on overall hospital burden may be under-estimated by pneumonia cases. Although not an aim of the study, I suggest the authors consider adding a brief comment regarding the generalisability of their findings to other clinical groups to place the results into a wider context. We have made the change as suggested by the reviewer. Discussion page 9: Can the authors comment on the possibility that readmissions reflect 1. prolonged virus shedding, rather than indicating reinfection? Longest duration between admissions of 21 days possibly bordering an anticipated peak detection within first few weeks (e.g. for SARS-CoV-21). Suggest authors consider adding a brief statement to include this possibility. Response: It is possible these are prolonged infections rather than reinfections and we have added the following to the text in the discussion: "...probability of severe reinfection. Alternatively, these readmissions might be children with a prolonged infection having not fully recovered at their first discharge" Discussion page 10: " fever... was not an inclusion criterion for eligibility, which might have 1. influenced the prevalence of HCoV". Suggest authors make clear the anticipated direction of effect on the prevalence -presumably underestimation? Response: This is possible, but we don't know that these endemic HCoVs behave like SRAS-CoV-2 ie are strongly associated with fever, hence again difficult to speculate as to which direction. We therefore added this statement to the limitations " If the endemic COVs are strongly associated with symptoms of fever, as is SARS=CoV-2, then we might be underestimating the prevalence due to a selection bias". Discussion page 10: "...there was a significant age difference for those tested and those untested for HCoV across time." This statement seems to be at odds with Results page 3 "..cases untested did not differ from those tested in age distribution.." Suggest the authors reword as appropriate. We have made the change as suggested by the reviewer. Conclusions page 10: "...little evidence of a substantial aetiological contribution...": The aetiological role of HCoV cannot be established without a control group (as the authors do mention on page 9) i.e. it is not known whether the prevalence of HCoV is lower among cases of ARI without pneumonia. Suggest authors rephrase to put the low HCoV detections within the context of relative contribution of pathogens/other causes to disease aetiology i.e. most pneumonia cases are attributable to other causes. We have made the change as suggested by the reviewer. Although presumably outside the scope of this study to analyse, I suggest the authors consider commenting briefly on any potential role of coinfecting respiratory bacteria on HCoV-associated pneumonia in this population; bacterial coinfection may influence the chance of pneumonia/testing for viruses. We had very low proportions of bacterial infections among the positive cases: NL63 (2/74=2.7%), OC43 (3/129=2.3%), 229E (2/99=2.02%). We feel there is too little coinfection to allow speculation on this. Right column, second line: "… alive or dead)." ○ There are two mentions of which viruses were tested for on page 3: suggest concatenate into one mention (probably best placed in the "Laboratory methods" paragraph). Reword at the bottom of page 3 on the right hand column to "… or very severe), laboratory test results, and hospitalisation outcomes…" 10. The link to code in Extended data is not currently active in the manuscript: please correct this. At the bottom of page 3, suggest reword as "Untested cases did not differ… more likely to have very severe pneumonia (40.0% versus 28.3%; Χ 2 =152.5, P<0.001)." Why resort to the use of Fisher's exact P-value in the analysis of tested and untested cases (the Chi-square P-value is every bit as "significant")? for (3.9%)." Check the calculation of the comparison between Sipulwa et al and the current study, in the second line on the right hand column on page 9: I get Χ 2 =3.92, p=0.048. In the second sentence of the second paragraph on the right column on page 9, suggest reword to "… nor the long rainy periods (April to July) in Kilifi were associated with HCoV peaks." Suggest reword the fifth sentence in the right hand column on page 9 as "Of interest is that pneumonia associated with 229E was not detected in the later years of surveillance." Please correct the spelling or "axillary" in the footnote to Table 2 . 27. The authors do not consider differences in participant recruitment as being a potential explanation as to why 229E-associated pneumonia was not detected subsequent to 2016: were there systematic differences in participant recruitment strategies that might have impacted on detection of this virus? Suggest reword the third sentence on the right hand column on page 10 as "It should be noted that fever, either on history or as measured at the time of admission, was not an inclusion criterion…" 29. Are all the source data underlying the results available to ensure full reproducibility? Yes Are the conclusions drawn adequately supported by the results? Partly Identification of a new human coronavirus Epidemiology of Seasonal Coronaviruses: Establishing the Context for the Emergence of Coronavirus Disease In the results section of the Abstract, qualify that 3.9% of the pneumonia admissions tested positive for at least one of the three endemic HCoVs surveyed in the study It is unclear what is meant by "no age-dependence in the proportion testing positive" for HCoV in the abstract. Suggest omit this ambiguous phrase. Rather state "… n=208), and there was no clear seasonal pattern of HCoV infection Suggest reword the Abstract conclusions as "… co-occurring with another respiratory virus Suggest omit the speculation as to the impact of SARS-CoV-2 at the end of the last sentence of the Abstract At the end of the Introduction, suggest reword as "Our study aims to describe the circulation patterns of three of the endemic HCoVs (OC43, 229E, and NL63) over time… Suggest omit the definite article in the first sentence of the Methods section, i.e Consider amending slight punctuation errors in page 3, including: Left column, six lines from the bottom Suggest clarify the meaning of the second sentence on page 4 as follows In Table 1, suggest present Age (months) as median and interquartile range only Difficulty breathing" which is more widely used than "Breathing difficulty Suggest reword the first sentence under the heading Suggest reword the first sentence under the heading "Temporal patterns of different HCoVs In Table 2, suggest add in an analysis for all HCoVs combined Suggest reword the first sentence of the Discussion as "… patterns of three endemic HCoVs (NL63, OC43 and 229E) in a… positive for one or more of the HCoVs that were investigated 23 We thank the study participants and their parents/ guardians, clinical and research team members of the Virus Epidemiology and Control group (http://virec-group.org/) who were involved at various stages of this study including sample collection and processing. This paper has been approved for publication by the director of the Kenya Medical Research Institute. We thank the reviewer for pointing this out. We have edited the manuscript as advised by the reviewer. Reviewer Expertise: Temporal and spatial dynamics of infectious diseases; epidemiology of viral respiratory infections I confirm that I have read this submission and believe that I have an appropriate level of expertise to confirm that it is of an acceptable scientific standard. Reviewer Report 21 July 2020 https://doi.org/10.21956/wellcomeopenres.17592.r39427 © 2020 Nickbakhsh S. This is an open access peer review report distributed under the terms of the Creative Commons Attribution License, which permits unrestricted use, distribution, and reproduction in any medium, provided the original work is properly cited. MRC-University of Glasgow Centre for Virus Research, Institute of Infection, Immunity and Inflammation, College of Medical, Veterinary and Life Sciences, University of Glasgow, Glasgow, UK This study describes patterns of endemic human coronavirus detections over a thirteen year period among paediatric cases of pneumonia in coastal Kenya.The authors should be commended for the impressive collation of clinical features, discharge diagnosis, and hospitalisation outcomes alongside multiplex PCR tests which is rarely available for a study spanning this length of time.The manuscript is well written and clearly presented throughout. I do however have some concerns requiring clarification.The authors mention in Methods that a variety of specimen types were collected. Could the authors clarify whether this is at the individual patient level? If relevant, I suggest authors describe how duplication of samples from individual patients was handled in the analyses 1.We wish to thank the reviewer for the detailed reviewer of the manuscript and the suggested changes/edits. Please see below our responses:The authors mention in Methods that a variety of specimen types were collected. Could the authors clarify whether this is at the individual patient level? If relevant, I suggest authors describe how duplication of samples from individual patients was handled in the analyses (since this can affect probabilty of virus detection and violates statistical assumptions of independent data points). Response: We collected one sample type per person, but the type varied over time, and we have indicated this in the Methods text of the manuscript Suggest authors add to Methods a brief outline of the changes in testing procedure over time (as mentioned in the Discussion) to aid interpretation of detection trends, as different specimens are likely associated with different probabilities of virus detection. It is unclear why the laboratory screen omitted HCoV-HKU1. Suggest the authors include a comment on the anticipated influence on the overall detection of HCoV.1. It is unclear whether exclusion of untested discharged patients (presumably milder cases) have led to an under-estimation of HCoV detection proportions. Suggest authors add a statement to describe any anticipated influence of this exclusion. Response: We recognise that eligible but untested individuals represent a possible bias. We state that the untested tended to be the more severe, and these are an important group, whose omission might lead to an under-estimate of the the role of HCoVs in sever disease. Note however, that the prevalence of HCoV infection (any type) was less prevalent amongst those with hypoxemia (a feature of very severe pneumonia).The % of pneumonia cases with HCoV detected is clearly low. However, it would be helpful if 1.the authors could discuss this result in the context of other common respiratory viruses detected among cases of pneumonia in this setting, such as influenza and RSV. We have previously presented in several papers that relative to RSV and Why was HCoV-HKU1 not included in the surveillance of endemic human coronaviruses in this study? Lack of testing for HCoV-HKU1 should be mentioned as a limitation of the study. PERCH samples were included in the analysis, which would have included HCoV-HCoV-HKU1: mention should be made that, as HKU1 was only tested for in the 24month PERCH surveillance period, it was considered to be under-represented over the study time period and was therefore not included in the analysis. Mention is made of a variety of specimen types that were tested for respiratory viruses in the study. Is there evidence to suggest that any one type gives better yields than others? This should be elaborated on briefly in the discussion section, potentially as a limitation of the study. The authors mention that an alternative attribution could be made in 26% of cases that died with a positive detection of HCoV in their study (page 9, left hand column, third sentence); however, this in not explored at all in the Results Section. This should be presented in the Results section, so as to contextualise the assertion made in the Discussion. Suggest change the title to reflect that paediatric pneumonia was the focus of attention in this study. Suggest "Surveillance of endemic human coronaviruses (HCoV-NL63, OC43 and 229E) associated with childhood pneumonia in Kilifi, Kenya". Mention is made of a variety of specimen types that were tested for respiratory viruses in the study. Is there evidence to suggest that any one type gives better yields than others? This should be elaborated on briefly in the discussion section, potentially as a limitation of the study. We thank the reviewer for pointing this out. We have added the following statement to the limitations of the study "We employed various collection methods and these are known to differ in the range of viruses detected. For example, the addition of an OP swab to an NP swab has been found to increase virus yield"The authors mention that an alternative attribution could be made in 26% of cases that died with a 1.positive detection of HCoV in their study (page 9, left hand column, third sentence); however, this in not explored at all in the Results Section. This should be presented in the Results section, so as to contextualise the assertion made in the Discussion. Minor comments:Suggest change the title to reflect that paediatric pneumonia was the focus of attention in this 1.study. Suggest "Surveillance of endemic human coronaviruses (HCoV-NL63, OC43 and 229E) associated with childhood pneumonia in Kilifi, Kenya". We have made the change as suggested by the reviewer.Correct the redundant double comma in affiliation 2 at the top of the title page of the manuscript. We have made the change as suggested by the reviewer.In the results section of the Abstract, qualify that 3.9% of the pneumonia admissions tested positive 1.for at least one of the three endemic HCoVs surveyed in the study. It is unclear what is meant by "no age-dependence in the proportion testing positive" for HCoV in 1.the abstract. Suggest omit this ambiguous phrase. Rather state "… n=208), and there was no clear seasonal pattern of HCoV infection. HCoV-OC43 was predominant…" We have adjusted the statement in the abstract but would wish to retain the rest. Although there were more cases in the younger age groups this simply reflected the more eligible admissions.Suggest reword the Abstract conclusions as "… co-occurring with another respiratory virus, no 1.clear seasonal pattern, and with the age-distribution…" We have made the change as suggested by the reviewer.Suggest omit the speculation as to the impact of SARS-CoV-2 at the end of the last sentence of the 1.Abstract. At the end of the Introduction, suggest reword as "Our study aims to describe the circulation 1.patterns of three of the endemic HCoVs (OC43, 229E, and NL63) over time…" Suggest omit the definite article in the first sentence of the Methods section, i.e. "… in 2007 for 1. We have made the change as suggested by the reviewer.Consider amending slight punctuation errors in page 3, including: 1.Left column, six lines from the bottom: "… ≥37.5°C, oxygen…" Right column, second line: "… alive or dead)." We have made the change as suggested by the reviewer.There are two mentions of which viruses were tested for on page 3: suggest concatenate into one 1.mention (probably best placed in the "Laboratory methods" paragraph). Reword at the bottom of page 3 on the right hand column to "… or very severe), laboratory test results, and hospitalisation outcomes…" We have made the change as suggested by the reviewer.The link to code in Extended data is not currently active in the manuscript: please correct this. At the bottom of page 3, suggest reword as "Untested cases did not differ… more likely to have 1.very severe pneumonia (40.0% versus 28.3%; Χ =152.5, P<0.001)." Why resort to the use of Fisher's exact P-value in the analysis of tested and untested cases (the Chi-square P-value is every bit as "significant")? Children are not "samples": suggest reword the sentence at the top of page 4 as "Of the 7957 1.children tested, 5312 (66.7%) were aged <1 year, 1454…" We have made the change as suggested by the reviewer.Suggest clarify the meaning of the second sentence on page 4 as follows: "The proportion of 1.tested individuals with fever (axillary temperature ≥37.5°C), cough, and difficulty breathing was 58.3%, 83.2% and 92.6%, respectively." We have made the change as suggested by the reviewer.On page 4, suggest reword the third last line on the left hand column as "… testing positive for 1.HCoV (3.9%) did not vary with age group…" We have made the change as suggested by the reviewer.In Table 1 , suggest present Age (months) as median and interquartile range only. 1. We have made the change as suggested by the reviewer.In Table 1 , rather use the term "Difficulty breathing" which is more widely used than "Breathing 1.difficulty", also use "Prostration" rather than "Prostrate/unconscious". Response: We have made the change as suggested by the reviewer.There are typos in the footnote to Table 1 : "tde" should be "the"; "breatding difficulty" should be 1. "difficulty breathing"; "witd" should be "with". Response: We have made the change as suggested by the reviewer.Suggest reword the first sentence under the heading "Clinical outcomes of HCoVinfected patients" 1.on page 5 as: "… positive for at least one of the three endemic HCoVs investigated for in this study were admitted to…" Response: We have made the change as suggested by the reviewer.In Figure 1 , the HCoV-OC43 figure y-axis requires correction of spelling of the word 1. In Table 2 , suggest add in an analysis for all HCoVs combined. 1. Suggest reword the first sentence of the Discussion as "… patterns of three endemic HCoVs 1.(NL63, OC43 and 229E) in a… positive for one or more of the HCoVs that were investigated for (3.9%)." We have made the change as suggested by the reviewer.Check the calculation of the comparison between Sipulwa et al and the current study, in the 1.second line on the right hand column on page 9: I get Χ =3.92, p=0.048. We have made the change as suggested by the reviewer.In the second sentence of the second paragraph on the right column on page 9, suggest reword to 1."… nor the long rainy periods (April to July) in Kilifi were associated with HCoV peaks." Response: We have made the change as suggested by the reviewer.Suggest reword the fifth sentence in the right hand column on page 9 as "Of interest is that 1.pneumonia associated with 229E was not detected in the later years of surveillance." Response: We have made the change as suggested by the reviewer.Please correct the spelling or "axillary" in the footnote to Table 2. 1. We have made the change as suggested by the reviewer.The authors do not consider differences in participant recruitment as being a potential explanation as to why 229E-associated pneumonia was not detected subsequent to 2016: were there systematic differences in participant recruitment strategies that might have impacted on detection of this virus? 1. We have made the change as suggested by the reviewer.Suggest reword the third sentence on the right hand column on page 10 as "It should be noted that fever, either on history or as measured at the time of admission, was not an inclusion criterion…" 1. We have made the change as suggested by the reviewer.